1. 00:18:959 (4,6) - no hitsound make me feel that I'm hitting the air x.x maybe add whistles at these two?
2. 00:50:135 (4,8,5,4,8) - I think if you add whistles with these objects,that would sound better imo
3. 01:31:116 (3,4,6) - maybe it's not a problem but I think you usually spread the jumps in this map. So I guess no overlay would be better
4. 00:38:567 (1,1,1) - add whistles?

1. 01:14:841 (2) - add whistle?I saw you added in the same sound before
2. 01:27:978 (5) - add finish? there is a stress here
3. 01:44:449 (1,3) - a little overlay,adjust it a little?

1. 00:11:508 (3) - there is also a stress in the reverse,so I guess adding finish would be better?
2. 01:19:351 (1,3) - not stack well
3. 01:55:037 (4) - I think the object in the end should be a circle,that would feel stronger.So make the rhythm like this?
   SPOILER

   

smallboat wrote:

As the Yu-zhi request.

[Awaken's Insane]

• 00:03:665 (5) - Stack 00:04:057 (1) head? (Like 00:02:096 (5,1) - this pattern.( D: I dislike stacking three 1/2 circles
  00:09:155 (3) - Suggest use ctrl+g will be a good flow. maybe current is ok :d
  00:11:900 (1) - Personal feeling this note can make a big jump here. (Move to (24|28)?) good idea btu
  00:20:527 (3,4,5) - Have a stream in this par,perhaps you will consider to add notes in blue line. let me see..
  00:48:370 (2,3) - Add notes in white line? And do a anti- jump with (1)(2),and (3) stack 00:48:959 (4) head,like this :
  SPOILER

  
  yours is ok too but I want to be slient in this part
  
  01:16:018 (6) - Add a note follow the vocal? nope,for the finish behind
  01:53:861 (4) - Change a tune,suggest use a NC here. changed!

thx for mod
Jumps look fine.Good luck your diff.

F D Flourite wrote:

Asked to only mod Awaken's Insane~
I will not make the format of modding, plz don't mind... >w<

[恶俗子]
00:03:861 (6) - 我觉得放在00:02:880 (2) - 头上会好一些 丑
00:15:821 (3,5) - Ctrl+G。锐角跳还是像飞球那种同一个方向的flow打起来比较舒服。 有理
00:17:390 (3,4,5) - 弄成4个circle？ 不妥
00:49:547 (1,2,3,4,1) - 修好五边形
00:52:488 (4,1,2,3) - ^
01:27:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
00:53:272 (4,1,2,3) - 修好六边形（这几句摸都没啥营养，主要是这多边形的确不好看）为何我这么懒
00:50:331 (1) - 00:53:469 (1) - 01:09:155 (1) - 01:10:723 (1) - 其实对于ins来讲，这里不NC没问题的~ 一来难度其实没怎么增加，二来这样有点NC spam 改了点
01:17:194 (2,1) - 不平行啊恶俗大爷 改了点 不过我觉得pattern最重要 nazi没啥必要
01:30:135 (1) - 不平行，而且丑 改了下 不过好像没啥区别hh
01:21:704 (1) - 虽说大跳NC，但是这个NC其实还是没必要 好 我他吗kiai的NC是乱放的啊
01:18:567 (3,4,5,6,1) - 就我的认知来讲这种间距略大的稳定钝角flow打起来略蛋疼，比较容易掉。这个间距已经可以拆了

Edit: Overall:

这图flow特别是点->滑条的anti-jump有点多了~（这是Kiai里的两个，由于非Kiai段速度比较慢就不一一指出。01:25:037 (7,1) - 01:36:410 (3,1) - ） 这BPM还好，DT就估计比较难受了 啥autijump啊 这应该算bigjump antijump是大时间小间距

不用overall隔开看着难受OTZ

iMage-- wrote:

Hi wkyik~. awesome map!
but in my opinion, should add AudioLeadIn 1000~2000.
when I played this map, fell start fast

good luck~

1. 00:18:959 (4,5,6) -
2. 00:20:527 (4,5,6) -
3. 00:21:312 (1,2,3) -
4. 00:22:880 (1,2,3) -
5. 00:25:233 (1,2,3) -
6. 01:48:567 (6,7,8) -
7. 01:50:135 (5,6,7) -
   They should snap on 1/6 not 1/4.
   

nold_1702 wrote:

Popping this due to unrankable issues.
[Insane]

1. 00:18:959 (4,5,6) -
2. 00:20:527 (4,5,6) -
3. 00:21:312 (1,2,3) -
4. 00:22:880 (1,2,3) -
5. 00:25:233 (1,2,3) -
6. 01:48:567 (6,7,8) -
7. 01:50:135 (5,6,7) -
   They should snap on 1/6 not 1/4.
   

I would give you a full mod before next weekend.You should fix the issues above if you want to repair your bubble.

nold_1702 wrote:

Popping this due to unrankable issues.
[Insane]

1. 00:18:959 (4,5,6) -
2. 00:20:527 (4,5,6) -
3. 00:21:312 (1,2,3) -
4. 00:22:880 (1,2,3) -
5. 00:25:233 (1,2,3) -
6. 01:48:567 (6,7,8) -
7. 01:50:135 (5,6,7) -
   They should snap on 1/6 not 1/4.
   

I would give you a full mod before next weekend.You should fix the issues above if you want to repair your bubble.

IamKwaN wrote:

in fact, it's your responsibility to rebubble no matter if u want or not ;_;

[General]

[Insane]

• 
  OD至少加至7.5,OD8為佳,因為這難度實際上比awaken's insane 難,ar,hp都比之高.因此請增加od難度

1. 00:26:606 (2) - 這邊的音樂給人連點2次1/2的感覺，理據是這邊有明顯的重音。你可以考慮一下把節奏換成[url]＝http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2052407這樣[/url]，變成１個1/6 slider加一個折迴外加一個於1/1時間線的note。
   
   好吧,我的中文mod很奇怪
   
2. 00:42:488 (5,6,7,8) - Well,I do not get why you half-spacing this pattern while the music here is quite similar to 00:41:704 (1,2,3,4).If I were you,I would spacing this pattern like this so the spacing becomes more reasonable:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:49:547 (1) - I really dislike this part as there're random jumps everywhere.Eventually,it is just my subjective opinion.

[Awaken's Insane]

1. 00:14:449 (2,3,4) -
   00:18:959 (3) -
   00:21:606 (2,3) -
   00:23:174 (2,3) -
   00:25:233 (4,5,6) -
   01:15:429 (1,2,3,4,5) -
   01:54:841 (2,3,4) -
   They should not be snapped as 1/4 but 1/6.

[Hard]

1. 00:18:959 (3,4,5) - You know snapping, but I do not think you would put 1/6 on hard,so put two 1/2 circles here is fitter.
   
2. 00:20:723 (4,5,6) -
   
3. 00:21:606 (2,3) -
   
4. 00:23:174 (2,3) -
   
5. 01:48:567 (4) -
   
6. 01:50:135 (4) -
   
7. 01:54:841 (2,3,4) -
   
8. 00:25:331 (2,3) - All the same.
   
9. 00:39:351 (3,1) - Spacing too small as a 1/1 spacing because you used bigger spacing at 00:39:155 (2,3) while they are only 1/2.I think you should change either the 1/1 OR the 1/2 spacing.
   
   
   

   [Normal]

   
   
   • 
     
   1. 01:38:567 (1,1) - Normal難度中,spinner後的objects請至小分隔3個1/1線.end spinner at 01:41:312 and remove 01:41:312 (1) this slider therefore.
      
   2. 00:26:606 (4) - distance snap(not unrable but coloured due to bug).

nold_1702 wrote:

[General]

OD and AR of Normal are 2 and 4 respectively while that of Hard are 6 and 7.5.The diffculty setting between them are TOOOOTOTOTOTOTOTOOTOOOOTTOOOOOO BIG!I suppose to change setting of Normal to:AR5.5,OD4 and HP4 to make better diff sperad.

個人以為,此難度音效疏淺,在音樂中毎1/1帶重音,卻只用Soft hitsound輕描淡寫.而全個難度音效沒變化,只有幾個一樣hitsound finish跟clap.

[Insane]

• 
  OD至少加至7.5,OD8為佳,因為這難度實際上比awaken's insane 難,ar,hp都比之高.因此請增加od難度

1. 00:26:606 (2) - 這邊的音樂給人連點2次1/2的感覺，理據是這邊有明顯的重音。你可以考慮一下把節奏換成[url]＝http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2052407這樣[/url]，變成１個1/6 slider加一個折迴外加一個於1/1時間線的note。
   
   好吧,我的中文mod很奇怪
   
2. 00:42:488 (5,6,7,8) - Well,I do not get why you half-spacing this pattern while the music here is quite similar to 00:41:704 (1,2,3,4).If I were you,I would spacing this pattern like this so the spacing becomes more reasonable:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:49:547 (1) - I really dislike this part as there're random jumps everywhere.Eventually,it is just my subjective opinion.

[Hard]

• 
  

1. 00:18:959 (3,4,5) - You know snapping, but I do not think you would put 1/6 on hard,so put two 1/2 circles here is fitter.
   
2. 00:20:723 (4,5,6) -
   
3. 00:21:606 (2,3) -
   
4. 00:23:174 (2,3) -
   
5. 01:48:567 (4) -
   
6. 01:50:135 (4) -
   
7. 01:54:841 (2,3,4) -
   
8. 00:25:331 (2,3) - All the same.
   
9. 00:39:351 (3,1) - Spacing too small as a 1/1 spacing because you used bigger spacing at 00:39:155 (2,3) while they are only 1/2.I think you should change either the 1/1 OR the 1/2 spacing.
   
   
   

   [Normal]

   
   
   • 
     
   1. 01:38:567 (1,1) - Normal難度中,spinner後的objects請至小分隔3個1/1線.end spinner at 01:41:312 and remove 01:41:312 (1) this slider therefore.
      
   2. 00:26:606 (4) - distance snap.

[Awaken's Insane]

1. 
   01:15:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - fixed this
   They should not be snapped as 1/4 but 1/6.

nold_1702 wrote:

Awaken applied nothing,please quote my mod and reply why you rejected all these.
Also:


Please also fix it.

Awaken wrote:

[Awaken's Insane]

1. 
   01:15:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - fixed this
   They should not be snapped as 1/4 but 1/6.

I think using 1/6 snap is really hard for playing and... putting 1/4 here should be okay because I want stream here...

nold_1702 wrote:

Congratulation

Aka wrote:

ew D: