Afilia Saga - S.M.L (TV size ver.) · forum

PuttyoU

Joined October 2011

PuttyoU 2014-09-16T07:08:45+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
Mod from my queue. I'd like you to respond to each thing I suggest.
[Hard]
Too much new combo spamming overall. You don't need that much NC; I think this song's rhythm is relatively straightforward so NC every 1 or 2 measures is fine. no change
01:25:536 (1,2,3,4) - this looks a little ugly, try making a perfect diamond with them
fix
Otherwise very neat

Good luck!

Thank you for modding!

Update please~

PU's Hard

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: SML (TV size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38661
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:S.M.L (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:Chaoslitz
Version:PU's Hard
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags:Noucome Opening PuttyoU Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru My Mental Choices are Completely Interfering with my School Romantic Comedy
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2014-09-16T08:46:18+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
Mod from my queue. I'd like you to respond to each thing I suggest.

[Easy]
00:04:686 - start a 1/2 slider here and delete the circle to maintain polarity. You mean this? http://puu.sh/bB8sX/6d19765415.jpg
00:21:336 (4) - shorten by 1/2 beat for polarity. also covers vocal better. -fixed
01:24:336 (1) - use same rhythm as 01:21:936 (1,2) - for consistency -fixed
[Normal]
00:14:736 (1) - extend the slider to 00:15:336 to maintain polarity, or if you really want the slider end on that current tick you can put a circle at 00:15:336. just avoid a 3/2 gap -fixed
00:21:936 (1) - ^-fixed
00:24:336 (1) - why repeat there? 00:24:936 is more important. map on the white 1/1 ticks for this part, since all the musically important notes are on those.-fixed
00:58:986 - highly recommend putting a 1/1 slider or 1/2 repeat slider starting here instead of the circle. It will cover the vocal better.[000FF]no change[/color]
Easy and Normal could have better rhythm in some places

[Hard]
Too much new combo spamming overall. You don't need that much NC; I think this song's rhythm is relatively straightforward so NC every 1 or 2 measures is fine.
01:25:536 (1,2,3,4) - this looks a little ugly, try making a perfect diamond with them
Otherwise very neat

[Insane]
00:08:886 (1,2,3) - I feel you could take more risks with this part of the music since all 4 notes are very strong and it seems boring to just stack 2 circles and a slider and even a slider end on the last one. Stacking them would be good in hard but for insane you should have them be 4 circle jumps. no change ;-;
00:11:886 (5,6) - This should at least same spacing or more spacing as previous objects because if you want any jump it should be here according to the vocals. Also the flow is not good because of how the slider is curved. Something like this has jumps that fit the music well: I changed to this one: http://puu.sh/bB8xT/b22f618962.jpg
SPOILER
00:15:936 - don't end slider on a downbeat/vocal -keep
00:25:536 - ^ ^
00:26:736 (1,2,3) - use the same thing for both parts to be consistent -fixed
00:56:736 (1,2,3,4) - you should take more risks here. the music is going at 1/4 so it seems a waste to only put 1/1 notes here. maybe 4 1/4 repeating sliders or some streams or a mix of those two. -keep @@
01:06:936 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - if you listen closely to the music at 25% speed, you will notice this part is 1/3. look at other ranked maps of this song, they have a 1/3 stream here. -a big problem xox, fixed :3
01:08:136 (3,4) - you can have a jump here because of the music -keep(?
01:09:936 (3) - I think this slider should be curved up for better flow from previous object -fixed
Good luck!

fm4a93au04

129 posts

Joined March 2012

fm4a93au04 2014-09-16T10:06:54+00:00

@w@” <- 不請自來的臉

欸 ~ 好歹我也是看了私信才來欸 ~

Kds … 看你吧=..= 我不是很執著一定要 K ( 我目前有20個 … 自己的圖放到快爛還是沒梗 , 這kds也不知道要給誰 … )

好吧我是個懶人 ZZ . XD ~ 自己的圖懶得想 , 幫人 mod 卻特別有勁 . 你說這麵該怎麼辦 ?

XD ~

[Normal]

這些建議也可以套用到其他難度上 ~ 我就一次性說明了 . ( 因為你的排列跟節奏都沒有問題 , 於是本篇主要著重於音效建議 )

00:27:936 (2,3,4,5) – 加 F 好像還不錯 ?

00:33:936 (1,2,3,4) - 這幾個也可以考慮加 F . 但不要全加 ~ 挑你喜歡的幾個地方加 . 個人認為還不錯 . ( 自行嚐試囉 ~ 我覺得喜歡的你不一定也覺得喜歡 )

<- 我是加在 1 的頭尾和 3 的頭 . 僅供參考 .

00:36:336 (1) – F ?

00:38:736 (1) – 如果前面那個不喜歡的話 , 也可以考慮加在這裡喔 ~

00:42:336 (3) – 拿掉結尾的 C . 聽起來很怪 =..= , 或者放 F 都比較好 .

01:04:536 (5) - 所以說 , 尾巴的 C 真的是故意拿掉的阿 ( 記得之前這裡我提過一次 … 還是我腦洞了 = = ? )

01:18:336 (3) - 研判這個滑條身上的拉哨音是出自於失誤 … 因為後面沒再出現過 =ㄦ= . 總之頗刺耳 , 建議拿掉 .

01:26:736 (1) - ~~~~~~ <- 咬到舌頭

以及

至於轉盤建議可以漸減音量

沒有必要一開始就 15% 啦 @W@ 轉起來沒感覺 ...

想想還是 No Kds 吧 ~ XD

GJ ~ 做得超好 der ~

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2014-09-16T16:08:48+00:00

fm4a93au04 wrote:
@w@” <- 不請自來的臉

欸 ~ 好歹我也是看了私信才來欸 ~

Kds … 看你吧=..= 我不是很執著一定要 K ( 我目前有20個 … 自己的圖放到快爛還是沒梗 , 這kds也不知道要給誰 … )

好吧我是個懶人 ZZ . XD ~ 自己的圖懶得想 , 幫人 mod 卻特別有勁 . 你說這麵該怎麼辦 ?

XD ~
[Normal]

這些建議也可以套用到其他難度上 ~ 我就一次性說明了 . ( 因為你的排列跟節奏都沒有問題 , 於是本篇主要著重於音效建議 )

00:27:936 (2,3,4,5) – 加 F 好像還不錯 ? ok~

00:33:936 (1,2,3,4) - 這幾個也可以考慮加 F . 但不要全加 ~ 挑你喜歡的幾個地方加 . 個人認為還不錯 . ( 自行嚐試囉 ~ 我覺得喜歡的你不一定也覺得喜歡 ) 1,2,3,4的頭都加了ww

<- 我是加在 1 的頭尾和 3 的頭 . 僅供參考 .

00:36:336 (1) – F ? ok~

00:38:736 (1) – 如果前面那個不喜歡的話 , 也可以考慮加在這裡喔 ~

00:42:336 (3) – 拿掉結尾的 C . 聽起來很怪 =..= , 或者放 F 都比較好 . ok~

01:04:536 (5) - 所以說 , 尾巴的 C 真的是故意拿掉的阿 ( 記得之前這裡我提過一次 … 還是我腦洞了 = = ? ) 改了但不知為何又改回了D:,再改~

01:18:336 (3) - 研判這個滑條身上的拉哨音是出自於失誤 … 因為後面沒再出現過 =ㄦ= . 總之頗刺耳 , 建議拿掉 . ok~

01:26:736 (1) - ~~~~~~ <- 咬到舌頭

以及

至於轉盤建議可以漸減音量

Easy, Normal, Insane 都改了

沒有必要一開始就 15% 啦 @W@ 轉起來沒感覺 ...
想想還是 No Kds 吧 ~ XD

GJ ~ 做得超好 der ~

自己給自己kds好像沒甚麼意思似的._.
Thanks~

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2014-09-17T12:59:57+00:00

General

thais song Volume is small , → http://kie.nu/2ado
DOWNLOAD plz

SV →　Up to three different types ←best

BG is 4:3 For exmapl 1024× 768 or 1280× 960 ←best

tag add -Yuzuriha-inori-

01:17:136 thais KIAI time delete

Insane

00:01:386 (5,1) near

00:18:336 (1,2,3,4) I confused

00:19:536 this NC
00:19:986 NC cancel

00:38:736 since the beginning Since the beginning NC

00:40:686 NC cancel
00:41:136 this NC

01:00:036 (1,2,3) 　　2delete over map feel
01:02:211 ↑
01:04:761 ↑

01:07:336 (3,1) DS is unnatural ← DS 2.0~ is best !!
01:06:936 (1,2,3) is DS= about 1.9

01:19:086 I confused
01:21:486 ↑

END

PuttyoU

172 posts

Joined October 2011

PuttyoU 2014-09-17T14:28:54+00:00

PuttyoU wrote:

xxdeathx wrote:
Mod from my queue. I'd like you to respond to each thing I suggest.
[Hard]
Too much new combo spamming overall. You don't need that much NC; I think this song's rhythm is relatively straightforward so NC every 1 or 2 measures is fine. no change
01:25:536 (1,2,3,4) - this looks a little ugly, try making a perfect diamond with them
fix
Otherwise very neat

Good luck!

Thank you for modding!

Update please~

PU's Hard

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38661
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

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Title:S.M.L (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:Chaoslitz
Version:PU's Hard
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags:Noucome Opening PuttyoU Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru My Mental Choices are Completely Interfering with my School Romantic Comedy -Yuzuriha-inori-
BeatmapID:0
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my diff update please~

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2014-09-17T15:10:40+00:00

Hi, Litz! From my queue ;D pls, buy me soon /me runs

[> General <]

- Offset: 330? Just my suggestion.

[> Easy <]

- The starting is too loud for beginners, Reduce it's volume.
00:02:736 (1,2,3,4) - Too straightic, curve it's flow?
00:30:936 (3) - Nazi, just move this upgrid by one.
00:38:736 (1,2) - Why not a blanket on slider (2)'s tail? like how you did here > 00:40:536 (3,1) - it'll look symmetric.
00:45:336 (2,3) - Recorrect your blanket here, it's a little of the pattern.
- Very nice diff! but i'm not amazed with the high volume sounds you've made, It'd be too loud and almost unable to hear the song track to beginners. Just my suggestion for this diff.

[> Normal <]

- Same reason for the volume.
00:03:636 (3,4,5) - The flow here looks fine, but the pattern doesn't look nice to me, try making a parallel or a little blanket here, or this? It'd overlap, but would be readable to players > http://puu.sh/bCH1R/e4561b43f7.png
00:10:536 (3,5) - Stack perfectly on slider's tail.
00:15:936 (3,4,1) - Shouldn't you blanket slider (1) on the circle with slider (3)?
00:32:736 (3,2) - Likely an overlap, try stacking head-on-head or split them.
00:40:836 (5,1,2,3) - How about a diamond formation here?
01:03:636 (3,4,5) - Make a Triangle formation here?
01:17:136 (1,2) - Recorrect your blanket here.
01:18:336 (3) - Remove whisle, sounds very awkward when this is the only slider whistles on your track.
- Another good diff! Just reduce the volume and it'll be better.

[> PU's Hard <]

00:00:336 (1,2) - Recorrect your blanket here, or on purpose?
00:02:136 (6) - Curve more like the next slider for a better pattern.
00:03:336 (2,3) - Unstack and make a blanket? it doesn't look comfortable to play on this kind of track here.
00:13:236 (1,2) - Make a double blanket?
00:18:336 (1) - Move the slider's tail downgrid to avoid overlaps like that.
00:21:186 (3,4,5) - IMO, The flow starts breaking here, try curving slider (3).
00:21:936 (1,2) - Unstack, make a triangle here by moving circle (2) on x:48|320.
00:32:736 (1,2,3,4) - Do the same spacing on this pattern same as you did on 00:30:336 (1,2,3,4) -
00:39:636 (5,6) - Ctrl + G? better spacing for the song track.
00:45:336 (1) - Add clap? just suggestion
00:45:936 (2) - ^
00:46:536 (4) - ^
01:00:336 (1,2,3) - Parallel a bit?
01:02:736 (3,5) - A blanket here should fit the flow better.
01:05:136 (4,7) - Is there a good way to stack these both?
- Overall, good diff, but i think it needs work with the pattern issues and some FlowBreakers. But still, good diff.

[> Insane <]

- Same reason for the volume, but this is the most biggest issue that's needed to be fixed, due there are lots of notes that is pressed, the volume should be much mediumic(around 50% or 60%). It'd sound annoying when it's loud for players to play.

00:04:686 (1,2,1) - Fix the spacing here, it differed really much, or you're trying to make a jump here?
00:11:436 (2,3,4,5,6) - Recorrect the Star formation, or it's on purpose?
00:24:036 (4,1,2,3,4) - Fix the spacing... or just a jump?
00:33:936 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Weird retangle formation here, uhhh... Recorrect?
00:38:736 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:04:686 (1,2,1) -
00:42:036 (7) - Ctrl + G, because it's going for the intense and new track, try making a jump here. and It'd be a nice flow and playstyle.
00:45:786 (7) - Try to move this circle to x:216|y:212 for a triangle formation.
00:55:536 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:04:686 (1,2,1) -, And remake your stackings if so.
01:05:136 (1,2,3,1) - I don't understand the flow here, but try to curve a little here.
01:18:336 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- Nothing to say here, just reduce the volume and yay :3

I think that's all i can mod for this map, Great skin and mapset, Litz! o3o/
And... Good Luck!

PuttyoU

172 posts

Joined October 2011

PuttyoU 2014-09-17T16:12:30+00:00

Gray Veyron wrote:
Hi, Litz! From my queue ;D pls, buy me soon /me runs

[notice][> General <]
- Offset: 330? Just my suggestion.
[> PU's Hard <]
00:00:336 (1,2) - Recorrect your blanket here, or on purpose?
00:02:136 (6) - Curve more like the next slider for a better pattern.
00:03:336 (2,3) - Unstack and make a blanket? it doesn't look comfortable to play on this kind of track here.
no change
00:13:236 (1,2) - Make a double blanket?
no change
00:18:336 (1) - Move the slider's tail downgrid to avoid overlaps like that.
00:21:186 (3,4,5) - IMO, The flow starts breaking here, try curving slider (3).
Um... I like this rhythm
00:21:936 (1,2) - Unstack, make a triangle here by moving circle (2) on x:48|320.
I thought this looks so good
00:32:736 (1,2,3,4) - Do the same spacing on this pattern same as you did on 00:30:336 (1,2,3,4) -
00:39:636 (5,6) - Ctrl + G? better spacing for the song track.
it's hard ;D
00:45:336 (1) - Add clap? just suggestion
no change
00:45:936 (2) - ^
^
00:46:536 (4) - ^
^
01:00:336 (1,2,3) - Parallel a bit?
01:02:736 (3,5) - A blanket here should fit the flow better.
little change
01:05:136 (4,7) - Is there a good way to stack these both?
keep now
- Overall, good diff, but i think it needs work with the pattern issues and some FlowBreakers. But still, good diff.
the rest all change

I think that's all i can mod for this map, Great skin and mapset, Litz! o3o/
And... Good Luck!

Thank you for modding~

PU's Hard

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348,80,40536,2,0,L|404:99,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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233,154,41586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,41736,2,0,P|157:274|99:280,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,212,42186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
59,135,42336,6,0,B|165:100|165:100|175:106|175:106|179:105,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,154,42786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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311,299,43986,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,248,44136,2,0,P|231:300|256:358,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,299,44586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,248,44736,2,0,L|200:212,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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376,296,46986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,324,47136,5,8,0:0:0:0:
264,171,47436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
99,259,47736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
411,224,48036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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69,190,52386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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218,241,52836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,168,52986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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456,108,54336,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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104,212,56436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,273,59436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,237,59586,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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320,44,61236,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,44,61386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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426,144,64836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,42,65136,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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261,252,65736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
262,53,66036,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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262,328,66636,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,272,66936,5,0,0:0:0:0:
116,272,67011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,272,67086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,214,67236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,184,67311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
74,155,67386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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162,313,68136,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,294,68436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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413,239,71436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,150,71736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
409,57,72036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,55,72336,6,0,B|185:66|185:66|181:79|181:79|142:107,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,173,72936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,250,73236,2,0,P|92:278|65:333,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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328,130,74586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,148,74736,6,0,P|396:86|351:55,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,130,75186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,52,75336,2,0,P|272:71|249:121,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,130,75786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,199,75936,6,0,L|255:248,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,332,80886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2014-09-18T15:06:52+00:00

Gray Veyron wrote:
Hi, Litz! From my queue ;D pls, buy me soon /me runs

[> General <]
- Offset: 330? Just my suggestion.
[> Easy <]
- The starting is too loud for beginners, Reduce it's volume. fixed
00:02:736 (1,2,3,4) - Too straightic, curve it's flow? changed a bit
00:30:936 (3) - Nazi, just move this upgrid by one. fixed
00:38:736 (1,2) - Why not a blanket on slider (2)'s tail? like how you did here > 00:40:536 (3,1) - it'll look symmetric. Something about DS, so keep it
00:45:336 (2,3) - Recorrect your blanket here, it's a little of the pattern. fixed
- Very nice diff! but i'm not amazed with the high volume sounds you've made, It'd be too loud and almost unable to hear the song track to beginners. Just my suggestion for this diff.
[> Normal <]
- Same reason for the volume. fixed
00:03:636 (3,4,5) - The flow here looks fine, but the pattern doesn't look nice to me, try making a parallel or a little blanket here, or this? It'd overlap, but would be readable to players > http://puu.sh/bCH1R/e4561b43f7.png may be keep(? 0.0
00:10:536 (3,5) - Stack perfectly on slider's tail. fixed
00:15:936 (3,4,1) - Shouldn't you blanket slider (1) on the circle with slider (3)? keep
00:32:736 (3,2) - Likely an overlap, try stacking head-on-head or split them. fixed
00:40:836 (5,1,2,3) - How about a diamond formation here? keep
01:03:636 (3,4,5) - Make a Triangle formation here? fixed
01:17:136 (1,2) - Recorrect your blanket here. ok~
01:18:336 (3) - Remove whisle, sounds very awkward when this is the only slider whistles on your track. ok :3
- Another good diff! Just reduce the volume and it'll be better.
[> PU's Hard <]
00:00:336 (1,2) - Recorrect your blanket here, or on purpose?
00:02:136 (6) - Curve more like the next slider for a better pattern.
00:03:336 (2,3) - Unstack and make a blanket? it doesn't look comfortable to play on this kind of track here.
00:13:236 (1,2) - Make a double blanket?
00:18:336 (1) - Move the slider's tail downgrid to avoid overlaps like that.
00:21:186 (3,4,5) - IMO, The flow starts breaking here, try curving slider (3).
00:21:936 (1,2) - Unstack, make a triangle here by moving circle (2) on x:48|320.
00:32:736 (1,2,3,4) - Do the same spacing on this pattern same as you did on 00:30:336 (1,2,3,4) -
00:39:636 (5,6) - Ctrl + G? better spacing for the song track.
00:45:336 (1) - Add clap? just suggestion
00:45:936 (2) - ^
00:46:536 (4) - ^
01:00:336 (1,2,3) - Parallel a bit?
01:02:736 (3,5) - A blanket here should fit the flow better.
01:05:136 (4,7) - Is there a good way to stack these both?
- Overall, good diff, but i think it needs work with the pattern issues and some FlowBreakers. But still, good diff.
[> Insane <]
- Same reason for the volume, but this is the most biggest issue that's needed to be fixed, due there are lots of notes that is pressed, the volume should be much mediumic(around 50% or 60%). It'd sound annoying when it's loud for players to play. fixed
00:04:686 (1,2,1) - Fix the spacing here, it differed really much, or you're trying to make a jump here? fixed spacing
00:11:436 (2,3,4,5,6) - Recorrect the Star formation, or it's on purpose? well thats not a star formation so just keep :3
00:24:036 (4,1,2,3,4) - Fix the spacing... or just a jump? fixed
00:33:936 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Weird retangle formation here, uhhh... Recorrect? fixed
00:38:736 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:04:686 (1,2,1) -fixed
00:42:036 (7) - Ctrl + G, because it's going for the intense and new track, try making a jump here. and It'd be a nice flow and playstyle. ok~
00:45:786 (7) - Try to move this circle to x:216|y:212 for a triangle formation. ok
00:55:536 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:04:686 (1,2,1) -, And remake your stackings if so. fixed
01:05:136 (1,2,3,1) - I don't understand the flow here, but try to curve a little here. Changed a little bit
01:18:336 (1,2,3,4) - ^ keep o.o
- Nothing to say here, just reduce the volume and yay :3

I think that's all i can mod for this map, Great skin and mapset, Litz! o3o/
And... Good Luck!

Thanks~ ;D Veyron is so expensive you know x.x

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2014-09-18T16:18:52+00:00

Hi, as you requested me to recheck your volumes, so... NO KUDOS for this post.

These are just my personal suggestions, so you can ignore them if you want.

[> Volume Points <]

00:00:336 (Offset) - Likely, Volume should be higher than 50% and lower than 70% here. My suggestion is 55%, 60%, or 65%.
00:09:936 - Add an Inherit Point here, and adjust it 50% EXACTLY, due the song track lowered it's intensity here.
00:29:136 - Add an Inherit Point here, adjust it 65%, The song track grows strong.
00:38:736 (Kiai Point) - Adjust it 70%, Do the same as here > 00:48:336 (Kiai Point) -
00:47:136 - 70%
01:14:736 - 50%, since the song track lowered much 'til the last kiai comes up with the element of surprise, That'll interest players.
01:17:136 - Adjust 70% or 80%, 100% is too loud and almost unrankable.

That's it for me, now... Hoping if it's useful for your Diffs o3o
Good Luck, litz! \(^3^/)
NUUUUU pls be rich and buy me :''<

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-09-19T05:12:05+00:00

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

[General]
:3
Tbh the skin doesn’t fit the song imo ._.

[Background picture]
I wouldn’t go add “(TV Size)” and “Guess diff by…” on the background. Cuz first of all the “TV Size” didn’t fit with the angle of “S . M . L ☆” (not sure if you did it on purpose) and it covered the word “コ” of “コメ” / “kome” / “comedy”
And it’s kinda wasting space

[KIAI points]
The KIAI points for all diffs aren’t united, make sure they have the same

[Volume]
Suggest to decrease 5% - 10% for all timing points
Especially on last KIAI part 01:17:136 - , 100% is too loud, covered the music until you can only hear hits

[Overall Slider Velocity]
In my opinion they are a bit fast, even for Easy or Normal.
Normal and Hard diffs have exactly same SV.
Since you mapped, just keep it, and take as a suggestion next time you map

[Easy]
00:03:636 (2) – Suggest to remove this to make the diff easier
00:04:236 – NC here instead of 00:04:686 (1) – because of the short sliders and rhythm change. And then add NC on 00:05:136 (2) – again for new beat. Example set here 00:08:886 (1,2,3) –
00:14:736 (1) – This slider is a bit off vocal and cover tho, suggest to make it 1/1 but it looks okay to play.
00:22:386 (5) – Might be a little hard for Easy diff to follow spaced red tick. Suggest to make it 1/1 or NC it if you insist to keep
00:24:336 (3) – The vocal here 00:24:936 – is skipped on purpose, would put something there if I were you. For 00:29:136 (1) – and 00:31:536 (1) - it sounds fine because the vocal is like squeezed together
00:38:736 (1) – This one is off flow, and might mislead players to hit the tail of 00:39:936 (2) – . Suggest to make it a shape like this:

Image

00:47:136 (4) – NC here
00:53:136 (3) – NC here for consistency, and here 00:56:736 (6) – as well. I would make Easy more flowy but the pattern of 00:51:936 (2,3) – seems fine, for me.
01:00:336 (3) – NC here instead of 01:01:536 (1) - ^
01:02:736 (3) – NC here too
01:07:536 (3) – Missing NC, make it constant
01:12:336 (3) – NC here and 01:14:736 (5) – too

[Normal]
AR: +1 (5). The note is densed, and it fits better with the SV
00:03:636 (3,4,5) – For this, try to rotate 00:03:636 (3) – for a bit like this (pic), looks better for not pointing the middle of slider 00:03:936 (4) - , imo

Image

00:03:936 (4) – NC here instead of 00:04:686 (1) –

Not much problem for normal, blankets and flow are good

[PUs Hard]
00:19:086 (3,4) – Avoid stacking them with 00:18:336 (1) –
00:37:536 (1) – This slider is off, reduce the reverse by 1 time and make it snapped on 1/6 which looks like:

Image

01:03:636 (5) – For this slider maybe you can add a circle at 01:03:636 – and move the slider to 01:03:786 – which look like this (pic), fits better with vocal:

Image

01:10:986 – Add circle here as well to follow vocal
01:14:736 (1,2,3) – Not sure if this one looks okay (1st pic), maybe you can make a pattern like this (2nd pic):

Image

_

Overall looks okay, but mostly covered by straight sliders hmm…maybe you can make it more interesting with curve sliders and rotates?

[Yuzuriha’s Insane]
00:03:936 – Suggest to add a circle here, it should be like a “4-hits” from 00:03:936 – to 00:04:386 – in the song, which NC will start at where you add new circle
00:09:561 – imo there should be a clap here
00:24:186 – Please add a circle here and make it like this (pic) to make the tap not to stop, example like 00:28:836 (1,2) -

Image

00:30:336 – If possible make the point here a “hittable” note for vocal of “い” in “いっしん一体” . Swapping 00:30:186 (7,8) – and move the circle around could help
01:06:936 (6,7) – Following vocal here is good too, but maybe you can try to follow the 1/3 drum hits. Suggest a stream, tried sliders but looks weird XD

[Insane]
00:00:336 (1) – Start with a straight slider like 00:00:636 (2,3) - ? The placement is a bit strange imo which looks not matching the flow with 00:01:236 (4,5) –
00:11:436 (2) – Hitsounds starting from here sounds noisy which standard normal hits have conflict with your custom hitsound that sounds the same. Make sure you make it either sampleset to soft OR replace the whistle > clap
00:37:536 (1,2) – This part should be 1/6 instead of 1/4 blue ticks, try to change it
00:43:536 (5) – Remove clap for this, I think you didn’t want to put it there
00:47:586 (3) – Remove clap for this and 00:47:886 (5) – too, and then clap here 00:48:036 (1) – to make the hitsounds constant
00:48:336 (5) – NC should be here, suggest to remove NC for 00:48:036 (1) – cuz it’s not necessary even you want to show a “5-hits stream”, I’m sure an Insane players will find no problem reading this
01:10:536 (4) – Don’t like the antijump here tho, feels sudden to stop, but it looks fine when playing
01:25:536 (1) – Ctrl+G for this and 01:25:836 (2) – would fit better with the flow

Not much problem for this map, kinda rankable
Keep up~

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2014-09-19T08:08:54+00:00

Hi, from queue

dem handstands

[General]

there are some places which can be spiced up with finish hitsound. this apply for all diffs (especially easy). it's up to you guys whether you want to apply it or not, i'll just gonna point them out, since finish hitsound is kinda good to use if you want to accent the start of a new verse
00:00:336 -
00:05:136 -
00:09:936 -
00:17:136 -
00:19:536 -
00:24:336 -
00:29:136 -
00:31:536 -
00:33:936 (1,2,3,4) -
00:38:736 -
00:43:536 -
00:48:336 -
00:53:136 -
00:57:936 -
01:02:736 -
01:07:536 -
01:12:336 -

[Easy]

00:04:686 (1,2) - switch nc, new combo should start at downbeat (long white tick)
00:10:836 (2) - clap?
00:17:136 (1,2) - blanket nazi lol ignore if you're lazy http://puu.sh/bF0o6/c522232a86.jpg
00:26:736 (1) - clap at reverse arrow?
00:45:936 (3) - add clap at slider's head, consistent with 00:45:336 (2) -
00:53:136 (3) - nc, kinda fit the vocal if you want to accent it a bit
00:59:136 (2,3) - you should add clap at each slider's head, consistent with 00:57:936 (1) -
01:00:336 (3) - if i were you, i would switch nc 01:00:336 (3,1) - and then nc 01:02:736 (3) - . this combo makes more sense to me
01:07:536 (3) - nc? it's the start of a new verse
01:12:336 (3) - ^
01:24:336 (1) - should be finish

[Normal]

00:03:636 (3) - i think you should delete clap at slider's head and put it on slider's tail, consistent with 00:00:936 (2,3) - 's hitsound pattern
00:03:936 (4) - i really suggest you to nc this, since the rhythm you followed suddenly change. it got me
00:04:686 (1) - if you follow the above, remove nc
00:09:636 (1,2) - switch nc
00:33:636 (4) - clap?
00:42:036 - ^
01:18:336 (3,4) - make them the same hitsound pattern like 01:23:136 (3) - ? you applied them in easy

no major problem with flow, seems good. but there are some inconsistencies in hitsound pattern. you should fix them

[PU's Hard]

00:14:736 (6,1) - switch nc
00:15:936 (3,4) - would be better if you adjust the blanket a bit but yeah it's up to you http://puu.sh/bF3gy/ece13308ff.jpg
00:21:936 (1) - i would suggest to ctrl+G this one since the flow will be better, but you'll have to change the patterns afterwards
00:45:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is there no clap in this pattern. i suggest to add some there, since almost all the other pattern have clap hitsound and this one have none

really fun to play

[Yuzuriha's Insane]

00:28:836 (1,2) - only suggestion. this one is kinda hard to read my sight-reading is kinda horrible lol , so maybe you'd want to make a stream by adding circles at 00:28:911 - 00:29:061 -

[Insane]

01:06:936 (1,2,3) - make the distance farther, more fun to play http://puu.sh/bF4Fr/5a4a666a09.jpg

goodluck~

PuttyoU

172 posts

Joined October 2011

PuttyoU 2014-09-19T10:12:32+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

[General]
:3
Tbh the skin doesn’t fit the song imo ._.

[Background picture]
I wouldn’t go add “(TV Size)” and “Guess diff by…” on the background. Cuz first of all the “TV Size” didn’t fit with the angle of “S . M . L ☆” (not sure if you did it on purpose) and it covered the word “コ” of “コメ” / “kome” / “comedy”
And it’s kinda wasting space

[KIAI points]
The KIAI points for all diffs aren’t united, make sure they have the same

[Volume]
Suggest to decrease 5% - 10% for all timing points
Especially on last KIAI part 01:17:136 - , 100% is too loud, covered the music until you can only hear hits

[Overall Slider Velocity]
In my opinion they are a bit fast, even for Easy or Normal.
Normal and Hard diffs have exactly same SV.
Since you mapped, just keep it, and take as a suggestion next time you map

[PUs Hard]
00:19:086 (3,4) – Avoid stacking them with 00:18:336 (1) –
fix
00:37:536 (1) – This slider is off, reduce the reverse by 1 time and make it snapped on 1/6 which looks like:
Image
good idea!
01:03:636 (5) – For this slider maybe you can add a circle at 01:03:636 – and move the slider to 01:03:786 – which look like this (pic), fits better with vocal:
Image
Um...no change.
01:10:986 – Add circle here as well to follow vocal
add
01:14:736 (1,2,3) – Not sure if this one looks okay (1st pic), maybe you can make a pattern like this (2nd pic):
Image

I like this pattern XD no change
_

Overall looks okay, but mostly covered by straight sliders hmm…maybe you can make it more interesting with curve sliders and rotates?

Not much problem for this map, kinda rankable
Keep up~

[PU's Hard]

00:14:736 (6,1) - switch nc
fix
00:15:936 (3,4) - would be better if you adjust the blanket a bit but yeah it's up to you http://puu.sh/bF3gy/ece13308ff.jpg
fix
00:21:936 (1) - i would suggest to ctrl+G this one since the flow will be better, but you'll have to change the patterns afterwards
no change
00:45:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is there no clap in this pattern. i suggest to add some there, since almost all the other pattern have clap hitsound and this one have none
add hitsound

really fun to play

Thank you modding

PU's Hard

osu file format v13

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PreviewTime: 38661
Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:Chaoslitz
Version:PU's Hard
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
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348,80,40536,2,0,L|404:99,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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233,154,41586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,41736,2,0,P|157:274|99:280,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,212,42186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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233,154,42786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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180,112,48786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,294,68436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2014-09-19T14:43:38+00:00

[Yuzuriha’s Insane]
00:03:936 – Suggest to add a circle here, it should be like a “4-hits” from 00:03:936 – to 00:04:386 – in the song, which NC will start at where you add new circle NO
00:09:561 – imo there should be a clap here OK
00:24:186 – Please add a circle here and make it like this (pic) to make the tap not to stop, example like 00:28:836 (1,2) - OK

Image

00:30:336 – If possible make the point here a “hittable” note for vocal of “い” in “いっしん一体” . Swapping 00:30:186 (7,8) – and move the circle around could help OK
01:06:936 (6,7) – Following vocal here is good too, but maybe you can try to follow the 1/3 drum hits. Suggest a stream, tried sliders but looks weird XD
NO

Not much problem for this map, kinda rankable
Keep up~[/quote]

mod thanks

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2014-09-19T14:47:26+00:00

[[Yuzuriha's Insane]

00:28:836 (1,2) - only suggestion. this one is kinda hard to read my sight-reading is kinda horrible lol , so maybe you'd want to make a stream by adding circles at 00:28:911 - 00:29:061 - OK

mod thanks

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2014-09-19T15:24:03+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

[General]
:3
Tbh the skin doesn’t fit the song imo ._.

Shirobuta from Noucome >w<

[Background picture]
I wouldn’t go add “(TV Size)” and “Guess diff by…” on the background. Cuz first of all the “TV Size” didn’t fit with the angle of “S . M . L ☆” (not sure if you did it on purpose) and it covered the word “コ” of “コメ” / “kome” / “comedy”
And it’s kinda wasting space

Well I have changed it~

[KIAI points]
The KIAI points for all diffs aren’t united, make sure they have the same ok~

[Volume]
Suggest to decrease 5% - 10% for all timing points
Especially on last KIAI part 01:17:136 - , 100% is too loud, covered the music until you can only hear hits fixed

[Overall Slider Velocity]
In my opinion they are a bit fast, even for Easy or Normal.
Normal and Hard diffs have exactly same SV.
Since you mapped, just keep it, and take as a suggestion next time you map

[Easy]
00:03:636 (2) – Suggest to remove this to make the diff easier removed
00:04:236 – NC here instead of 00:04:686 (1) – because of the short sliders and rhythm change. And then add NC on 00:05:136 (2) – again for new beat. Example set here 00:08:886 (1,2,3) –
00:14:736 (1) – This slider is a bit off vocal and cover tho, suggest to make it 1/1 but it looks okay to play. keep 0.0
00:22:386 (5) – Might be a little hard for Easy diff to follow spaced red tick. Suggest to make it 1/1 or NC it if you insist to keep NC
00:24:336 (3) – The vocal here 00:24:936 – is skipped on purpose, would put something there if I were you. For 00:29:136 (1) – and 00:31:536 (1) - it sounds fine because the vocal is like squeezed together I changed like this: http://puu.sh/bFmus/601fec705b.jpg
00:38:736 (1) – This one is off flow, and might mislead players to hit the tail of 00:39:936 (2) – . Suggest to make it a shape like this:
Image
ok~
00:47:136 (4) – NC here
00:53:136 (3) – NC here for consistency, and here 00:56:736 (6) – as well. I would make Easy more flowy but the pattern of 00:51:936 (2,3) – seems fine, for me.
01:00:336 (3) – NC here instead of 01:01:536 (1) - ^
01:02:736 (3) – NC here too
01:07:536 (3) – Missing NC, make it constant
01:12:336 (3) – NC here and 01:14:736 (5) – too

[Normal]
AR: +1 (5). The note is densed, and it fits better with the SV fixed
00:03:636 (3,4,5) – For this, try to rotate 00:03:636 (3) – for a bit like this (pic), looks better for not pointing the middle of slider 00:03:936 (4) - , imo ok~
Image
00:03:936 (4) – NC here instead of 00:04:686 (1) –

Not much problem for normal, blankets and flow are good

[PUs Hard]
00:19:086 (3,4) – Avoid stacking them with 00:18:336 (1) –
00:37:536 (1) – This slider is off, reduce the reverse by 1 time and make it snapped on 1/6 which looks like:
Image
01:03:636 (5) – For this slider maybe you can add a circle at 01:03:636 – and move the slider to 01:03:786 – which look like this (pic), fits better with vocal:
Image
01:10:986 – Add circle here as well to follow vocal
01:14:736 (1,2,3) – Not sure if this one looks okay (1st pic), maybe you can make a pattern like this (2nd pic):
Image

_

Overall looks okay, but mostly covered by straight sliders hmm…maybe you can make it more interesting with curve sliders and rotates?

[Yuzuriha’s Insane]
00:03:936 – Suggest to add a circle here, it should be like a “4-hits” from 00:03:936 – to 00:04:386 – in the song, which NC will start at where you add new circle
00:09:561 – imo there should be a clap here
00:24:186 – Please add a circle here and make it like this (pic) to make the tap not to stop, example like 00:28:836 (1,2) -
Image
00:30:336 – If possible make the point here a “hittable” note for vocal of “い” in “いっしん一体” . Swapping 00:30:186 (7,8) – and move the circle around could help
01:06:936 (6,7) – Following vocal here is good too, but maybe you can try to follow the 1/3 drum hits. Suggest a stream, tried sliders but looks weird XD

[Insane]
00:00:336 (1) – Start with a straight slider like 00:00:636 (2,3) - ? The placement is a bit strange imo which looks not matching the flow with 00:01:236 (4,5) – keep >_>
00:11:436 (2) – Hitsounds starting from here sounds noisy which standard normal hits have conflict with your custom hitsound that sounds the same. Make sure you make it either sampleset to soft OR replace the whistle > clap I decreased the volume
00:37:536 (1,2) – This part should be 1/6 instead of 1/4 blue ticks, try to change it Thanks for telling me that :3
00:43:536 (5) – Remove clap for this, I think you didn’t want to put it there ok
00:47:586 (3) – Remove clap for this and 00:47:886 (5) – too, and then clap here 00:48:036 (1) – to make the hitsounds constant ok
00:48:336 (5) – NC should be here, suggest to remove NC for 00:48:036 (1) – cuz it’s not necessary even you want to show a “5-hits stream”, I’m sure an Insane players will find no problem reading this ok
01:10:536 (4) – Don’t like the antijump here tho, feels sudden to stop, but it looks fine when playing keep
01:25:536 (1) – Ctrl+G for this and 01:25:836 (2) – would fit better with the flow ok

Not much problem for this map, kinda rankable
Keep up~

NC mod fixed mostly~

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
Hi, from queue
dem handstands

[General]

there are some places which can be spiced up with finish hitsound. this apply for all diffs (especially easy). it's up to you guys whether you want to apply it or not, i'll just gonna point them out, since finish hitsound is kinda good to use if you want to accent the start of a new verse
00:00:336 -
00:05:136 -
00:09:936 -
00:17:136 -
00:19:536 -
00:24:336 -
00:29:136 -
00:31:536 -
00:33:936 (1,2,3,4) -
00:38:736 -
00:43:536 -
00:48:336 -
00:53:136 -
00:57:936 -
01:02:736 -
01:07:536 -
01:12:336 - I will try it

[Easy]

00:04:686 (1,2) - switch nc, new combo should start at downbeat (long white tick)
00:10:836 (2) - clap? ok
00:17:136 (1,2) - blanket nazi lol ignore if you're lazy http://puu.sh/bF0o6/c522232a86.jpg fixed
00:26:736 (1) - clap at reverse arrow? ok
00:45:936 (3) - add clap at slider's head, consistent with 00:45:336 (2) - well no change
00:53:136 (3) - nc, kinda fit the vocal if you want to accent it a bit
00:59:136 (2,3) - you should add clap at each slider's head, consistent with 00:57:936 (1) - ok
01:00:336 (3) - if i were you, i would switch nc 01:00:336 (3,1) - and then nc 01:02:736 (3) - . this combo makes more sense to me
01:07:536 (3) - nc? it's the start of a new verse
01:12:336 (3) - ^
01:24:336 (1) - should be finish ok

[Normal]

00:03:636 (3) - i think you should delete clap at slider's head and put it on slider's tail, consistent with 00:00:936 (2,3) - 's hitsound pattern ok
00:03:936 (4) - i really suggest you to nc this, since the rhythm you followed suddenly change. it got me ok
00:04:686 (1) - if you follow the above, remove nc ok
00:09:636 (1,2) - switch nc ok~
00:33:636 (4) - clap? ok :3
00:42:036 - ^
01:18:336 (3,4) - make them the same hitsound pattern like 01:23:136 (3) - ? you applied them in easy yup changed

no major problem with flow, seems good. but there are some inconsistencies in hitsound pattern. you should fix them

[PU's Hard]

00:14:736 (6,1) - switch nc
00:15:936 (3,4) - would be better if you adjust the blanket a bit but yeah it's up to you http://puu.sh/bF3gy/ece13308ff.jpg
00:21:936 (1) - i would suggest to ctrl+G this one since the flow will be better, but you'll have to change the patterns afterwards
00:45:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is there no clap in this pattern. i suggest to add some there, since almost all the other pattern have clap hitsound and this one have none

really fun to play

[Yuzuriha's Insane]

00:28:836 (1,2) - only suggestion. this one is kinda hard to read my sight-reading is kinda horrible lol , so maybe you'd want to make a stream by adding circles at 00:28:911 - 00:29:061 -

[Insane]

01:06:936 (1,2,3) - make the distance farther, more fun to play http://puu.sh/bF4Fr/5a4a666a09.jpg
increased the DS from 1.85 to 1.9

goodluck~

Thanks for the mod ;D

[ Nana ]

121 posts

Joined June 2012

[ Nana ] 2014-09-20T00:09:33+00:00

Haiiiiiiiiii~! Decided to post here.

These are all my personal opinions, so just ignore me if you disagree with what I say.

Also, holy damn, it looks so cheap compared to the other mods *Q* Can't help it since most of the things have already been pointed out.

[Easy]

00:03:936 - maybe a slider?

[Hard]

Nothing to point out except for some sliders can start at a more 'natural position' (on the other end of the slider, I just find it easier to read that way) - some examples:
00:58:986 (5)
01:08:586 (4)
01:14:736 (1)
01:16:236 (2)

PuttyoU

172 posts

Joined October 2011

PuttyoU 2014-09-20T00:48:02+00:00

[ Nana ] wrote:
Haiiiiiiiiii~! Decided to post here. These are all my personal opinions, so just ignore me if you disagree with what I say.
Also, holy damn, it looks so cheap compared to the other mods *Q* Can't help it since most of the things have already been pointed out.

[Hard]
Nothing to point out except for some sliders can start at a more 'natural position' (on the other end of the slider, I just find it easier to read that way) - some examples:
00:58:986 (5)
01:08:586 (4)
01:14:736 (1)
01:16:236 (2)

All no change

Thank you for modding~

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2014-09-20T10:07:00+00:00

[ Nana ] wrote:
Haiiiiiiiiii~! Decided to post here. These are all my personal opinions, so just ignore me if you disagree with what I say.
Also, holy damn, it looks so cheap compared to the other mods *Q* Can't help it since most of the things have already been pointed out.

[Easy]
00:03:936 - maybe a slider?

[Hard]
Nothing to point out except for some sliders can start at a more 'natural position' (on the other end of the slider, I just find it easier to read that way) - some examples:
00:58:986 (5)
01:08:586 (4)
01:14:736 (1)
01:16:236 (2)

I changed to this one

Thanks~

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-09-21T05:39:19+00:00

From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]

General

个人感觉来说音效还是有些弱了;w;建议多找一些擅长音效的人来摸，我这边关于音效的mod都只是建议

Insane

00:03:936 (1,2,3,4) - 00:04:086 (2,3) - 这两个音没有00:03:936 (1) - 那么强，00:04:086 (2) - 用clap，00:04:236 (3) - 删掉whistle
00:04:686 (1) - 头部finish
00:07:236 (4) - 尾巴有个鼓声，所以00:07:386 drum clap
00:09:636 (1) - 头finish 00:09:786 尾巴drum whistle 00:09:861 (2) - drum
00:10:236 和 00:10:836 怎么没有clap/whistle呢？
00:15:936 觉得这里用additions drum finish比较好
00:17:136 (1) - 头whistle finish
00:18:486 (2,3) - delete whistle
00:19:086 (1) - whistle
00:19:536 finish
00:20:436 (4) - ?! 这里不要跟vocal了，在00:20:736 结束就可以了
00:26:736 (1,2) - 感觉中间有点空，建议这样下节奏试试:
00:36:936 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 全用whistle太吵啦……
00:37:536 (1) - 头finish
00:38:736 (1) - 这个头也可以finish
00:47:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以照顾一下vocal:
SPOILER
00:56:736 (1,2,3,4) - 也是有点空，
00:57:936 (1) - 头部finish
01:02:736 (1) - 试试这样
SPOILER

Yuzuriha's Insane

00:00:336 (1) - finish at the start of 00:00:336 (1) -
00:00:936 (3,4) - make a slider instead of them?，cause it's a prolonged beat.
00:17:136 (1,2) - stack better with the start of 00:16:236 (2) - like this:
SPOILER
01:06:936 the volume is too weak to heard obviously ;w; raising on 50%

Hard

00:07:536 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - do you like this shape？ :
SPOILER
00:29:136 (1,2,3) - aha，the triplets played a little boring，move 00:29:286 (2) - to other side，example:
SPOILER
00:31:536 (1,2,3) - ^
00:58:986 (5) - fix the stack
01:05:736 (6,8) - ^
01:10:536 (2) - the shape is odd ;w;

Easy

00:31:536 (1) - 太高碰到血条了，保险一些放下来一点

That's all
good map w
normal diff看了没什么问题【我有点偷懒了

PuttyoU

172 posts

Joined October 2011

PuttyoU 2014-09-21T07:19:22+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]
Hard
00:07:536 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - do you like this shape？ :
SPOILER
sorry, no change
00:29:136 (1,2,3) - aha，the triplets played a little boring，move 00:29:286 (2) - to other side，example:
SPOILER
no change~
00:31:536 (1,2,3) - ^
^
00:58:986 (5) - fix the stack
???
01:05:736 (6,8) - ^
fix
01:10:536 (2) - the shape is odd ;w;
little change

That's all
good map w
normal diff看了没什么问题【我有点偷懒了

Thank you for modding~

PU's Hard

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Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

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Chaoslitz 2014-09-21T13:26:59+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]
General

个人感觉来说音效还是有些弱了;w;建议多找一些擅长音效的人来摸，我这边关于音效的mod都只是建议
Insane
00:03:936 (1,2,3,4) - 00:04:086 (2,3) - 这两个音没有00:03:936 (1) - 那么强，00:04:086 (2) - 用clap，00:04:236 (3) - 删掉whistle
00:04:686 (1) - 头部finish
00:07:236 (4) - 尾巴有个鼓声，所以00:07:386 drum clap
00:09:636 (1) - 头finish 00:09:786 尾巴drum whistle 00:09:861 (2) - drum
00:10:236 和 00:10:836 怎么没有clap/whistle呢？
00:15:936 觉得这里用additions drum finish比较好
00:17:136 (1) - 头whistle finish
00:18:486 (2,3) - delete whistle
00:19:086 (1) - whistle
00:19:536 finish
00:20:436 (4) - ?! 这里不要跟vocal了，在00:20:736 结束就可以了
00:26:736 (1,2) - 感觉中间有点空，建议这样下节奏试试:
00:36:936 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 全用whistle太吵啦……
00:37:536 (1) - 头finish
00:38:736 (1) - 这个头也可以finish
00:47:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以照顾一下vocal:
SPOILER
00:56:736 (1,2,3,4) - 也是有点空，
00:57:936 (1) - 头部finish
01:02:736 (1) - 试试这样
SPOILER
Yuzuriha's Insane
00:00:336 (1) - finish at the start of 00:00:336 (1) -
00:00:936 (3,4) - make a slider instead of them?，cause it's a prolonged beat.
00:17:136 (1,2) - stack better with the start of 00:16:236 (2) - like this:
SPOILER
01:06:936 the volume is too weak to heard obviously ;w; raising on 50%
Hard
00:07:536 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - do you like this shape？ :
SPOILER
00:29:136 (1,2,3) - aha，the triplets played a little boring，move 00:29:286 (2) - to other side，example:
SPOILER
00:31:536 (1,2,3) - ^
00:58:986 (5) - fix the stack
01:05:736 (6,8) - ^
01:10:536 (2) - the shape is odd ;w;
Easy
00:31:536 (1) - 太高碰到血条了，保险一些放下来一点
That's all
good map w
normal diff看了没什么问题【我有点偷懒了

Thanks for modding xDD

NewRulerNA

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NewRulerNA 2014-09-21T14:51:23+00:00

found an unrakable issue.

skinset is incomplete.
Hitcircle set
hitcircle.png

hitcircleoverlay.pngapproachcircle.pngreversearrow.pngyou MUST add approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png (include 2x).
see also : https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning

tag: Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome wo Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
missing "wo".

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

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Chaoslitz 2014-09-21T16:10:08+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
found an unrakable issue.

skinset is incomplete.
Hitcircle set
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.pngapproachcircle.pngreversearrow.png

you MUST add approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png (include 2x).
see also : https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning

tag: Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome wo Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru
missing "wo".Fixed ;D
so far I have made part of the Noucome skin so I just put it in ww

NewRulerNA

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NewRulerNA 2014-09-23T16:24:53+00:00

awwwww sorry my bad, "wo" should be "o" as modified hepburn

t/185922
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hepburn_ro ... manization

sorry for my mistake, slap me

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

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Chaoslitz 2014-09-24T13:37:43+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
awwwww sorry my bad, "wo" should be "o" as modified hepburn

t/185922
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hepburn_ro ... manization

sorry for my mistake, slap me

Fixed :3

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2014-09-25T11:57:06+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]
General

个人感觉来说音效还是有些弱了;w;建议多找一些擅长音效的人来摸，我这边关于音效的mod都只是建议
[notice]
Insane

[notice]
Yuzuriha's Insane
00:00:336 (1) - finish at the start of 00:00:336 (1) - OK
00:00:936 (3,4) - make a slider instead of them?，cause it's a prolonged beat.
00:17:136 (1,2) - stack better with the start of 00:16:236 (2) - like this:
SPOILER
01:06:936 the volume is too weak to heard obviously ;w; raising on 50% OK
[list]
That's all
good map w
normal diff看了没什么问题【我有点偷懒了

mod thanks!

riffy

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

riffy 2014-09-25T12:57:45+00:00

Yo, as requested.

[General]

I find your set of colours too bright. Can you set some less bright colours as your current ones may hurt players' eyes?

[Easy]

As the BPM is really intense, I'd drop OD to 1. So, beginners could survive it.
The kiai part feels easier than the rhythm in the first part of the diff. It makes the diff sorta unbalanced. Consider making the beginning (untill -00:33:636) easier.
Note: having consistent 1/1 rhythm in a 200 BPM Easy is too hard, try to make your rhythm easier.
00:04:236 (1,2) - 1/2 slliders in a 200 BPM Easy is too much. the diff is hard enough and 1/2s make it too hard, in my opinion.
00:25:236 (5) - haven't you missed a new combo here? I feel like you really need one here to make your comboing more consistent and to follow the song better.
00:42:336 (2) - the tail of this slider is too close to the previous hitobject and players may mistakenly hit (2)'s tail. Try to move it somewhere else to prevent the misunderstanding. Rough example
Note: 01:17:136 (1,2) - kinda similar thing. Newbies can hit the reverse-arrow by mistake.

Generally, I'd say that your Easy needs more work on the rhythm (mostly the beginning) and the patterns can get neater. Not bad for a beginner-mapper, but you still have a lot to improve!

[Normal]

I'd increase HP by one tick as the diff is supposed to be quite challenging.
00:04:686 - this is the only SV change in the whole diff. Is it really necessary to have it here? I would rather keep the velocity the same here.
00:09:186 (2,3) - the BPM is too intense, try to replace these two with an 1/2 slider to make the pattern more playable.
00:23:136 (3) - try to add a repeat to this slider? The 3/2 gap before the next hitobject is confusing. Example
00:42:336 (3) - minor - there is a little overlap with the HP Bar on 4:3 displays. The overlap. It is not a big problem, but you can make it look neater.

Quite a decent diff. Not too much to complain about.

[PU's Hard]

00:18:786 (2,3) - the sudden spacing change here feels rather tricky. I highly suggest you to avoid it.
Note: 00:25:386 (2,3) - kinda similar thing here. Try to avoid random jumps and make sure that all antijumps and jumps are reasonable and represent the song.
00:36:336 (1,2) - personally, I find these sliders quite uncomfortable to play. The second-reverse is unexpected and appears quite late, so, these sliders can cnfuse players.
00:39:186 (3,6) - try removing these two circles to stress the vocals on 00:39:336 - and 00:39:936. It will also make the diff a bit easier as it feels too hard for a 200 BPM Hard.
Note: 00:48:786 (3,6) - same.
00:42:336 (1,3) - the shape does not represent anything and looks rather tricky. Why don't you just keep these sliders straight? It would make them more readable and
01:05:436 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the BPM is just too intense, so I'd highly recommend you to avoid any 1/4 patterns in this diff. Moreover, there are two Insane diffs, so 1/4s in Hard seem quite exaggerated and don't fit well.

The diff looks quite untidy and the rhythm gets a bit too intense. I'd recommend you to make the diff a bit easier and to clean it up a bit.

[Yuzuriha's Insane]

00:09:636 (3) - the tail of the slider does not fit with the song as there is a beat being ignored at 00:09:786 - try something like this to follow the drums closer.
Note: I am also quite sure that 00:18:786 (4) - is supposed to be finished at 00:18:936 - since the "echo" sound fades here.
00:28:236 (1,1,1) - these new cmbos are extra. They do not really fit and give players too much extra HP. I highly uggest you to remove the NCs.
Note: 00:37:736 (1,1,1) - same.
00:29:661 (4) - sounds overmapped. Try to remove the circle? It would help you to represent the actual music better and to improve your rhythm.
00:36:336 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - the music gets faster and faster in this part, and to emphasize it, you could gadually increase the difficulty of the pattern. Basically, this.

I do not really agree with your jumps, I feel like most of them are quite random and exaggerated. I also think that your rhythm could use more work, there are a few overmapped patterns and some 3/4s sound unnatural.

[Insane]

Discussed it with the mapper in-game and suggestd to work more on the spacing. Nothing else to say for now, as the jumps make the dif look weird while playing.

Not bad, but you can make it better.

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Best of luck!

PuttyoU

172 posts

Joined October 2011

PuttyoU 2014-09-25T18:58:59+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, as requested.

[General]
I find your set of colours too bright. Can you set some less bright colours as your current ones may hurt players' eyes?
[PU's Hard]
00:18:786 (2,3) - the sudden spacing change here feels rather tricky. I highly suggest you to avoid it.
OK~ fix
Note: 00:25:386 (2,3) - kinda similar thing here. Try to avoid random jumps and make sure that all antijumps and jumps are reasonable and represent the song.
^
00:36:336 (1,2) - personally, I find these sliders quite uncomfortable to play. The second-reverse is unexpected and appears quite late, so, these sliders can cnfuse players.
I think this reverse slider fit this song. so no change it
00:39:186 (3,6) - try removing these two circles to stress the vocals on 00:39:336 - and 00:39:936. It will also make the diff a bit easier as it feels too hard for a 200 BPM Hard.
fix
Note: 00:48:786 (3,6) - same.
fix
00:42:336 (1,3) - the shape does not represent anything and looks rather tricky. Why don't you just keep these sliders straight? It would make them more readable and
OK,change
01:05:436 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the BPM is just too intense, so I'd highly recommend you to avoid any 1/4 patterns in this diff. Moreover, there are two Insane diffs, so 1/4s in Hard seem quite exaggerated and don't fit well.
(4,5,6)change slider

The diff looks quite untidy and the rhythm gets a bit too intense. I'd recommend you to make the diff a bit easier and to clean it up a bit.
OK, I try it.
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Best of luck!

Thank you for modding

update please~

PU's Hard

osu file format v13

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PreviewTime: 38661
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Title:S.M.L (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV Size)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:Chaoslitz
Version:PU's Hard
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags:Noucome Opening PuttyoU -Yuzuriha-inori- Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru My Mental Choices are Completely Interfering with my School Romantic Comedy
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358,117,55536,6,0,B|321:166|321:166|299:193|286:233,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,288,55986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,227,56136,2,0,P|186:206|158:194,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,183,56436,2,0,P|56:167|36:145,1,60
50,67,56736,6,0,L|105:42,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,113,57036,2,0,L|224:88,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,154,57336,2,0,L|348:129,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,57636,2,0,L|471:167,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,90,57936,5,8,0:0:0:0:
400,41,58086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,28,58236,2,0,P|331:81|382:119,1,120
400,273,58836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,192,58986,2,0,P|464:224|481:282,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,273,59436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,237,59586,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,273,59736,2,0,B|196:282|196:282|174:295|174:295|144:279,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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267,154,60936,2,0,L|261:92,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,44,61236,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,44,61386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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460,112,61836,2,0,P|432:132|400:132,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,62136,6,0,L|342:250,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,62436,2,0,L|214:266,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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20,21,63336,1,8,0:0:0:0:
106,150,63636,2,0,B|103:171|103:171|130:215|124:269,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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361,254,64536,2,0,L|411:221,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,144,64836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,42,65136,1,8,0:0:0:0:
99,144,65436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
262,251,65736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
262,42,66036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,131,66186,2,0,L|262:254,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,328,66636,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,272,66936,5,0,0:0:0:0:
116,272,67011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,272,67086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,214,67236,2,0,L|76:149,1,60
90,67,67536,6,0,P|143:98|164:153,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,313,68136,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,294,68436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,374,68586,2,0,P|369:353|394:302,1,120
422,229,69036,2,0,L|445:174,1,60
367,170,69336,2,0,L|342:109,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,36,69636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,34,69936,6,0,B|179:64|194:95|197:131|197:131|184:161,1,120
53,227,70536,2,0,B|40:244|54:264|54:264|102:258|136:287,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,304,70986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,321,71136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,239,71436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,150,71736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
409,57,72036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,55,72336,6,0,B|185:66|185:66|181:79|181:79|142:107,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,173,72936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,250,73236,2,0,P|92:278|65:333,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,245,73986,2,0,L|262:296,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,243,74286,2,0,L|281:192,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,130,74586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,148,74736,6,0,P|396:86|351:55,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,130,75186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,52,75336,2,0,P|272:71|249:121,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,130,75786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,199,75936,6,0,L|255:248,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,323,76236,2,0,L|188:284,1,60
119,255,76536,2,0,B|118:286|118:286|97:323,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,274,76836,2,0,B|35:243|35:243|56:206,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,124,77136,6,0,L|120:96,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,44,77436,2,0,L|260:73,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,117,77736,1,2,0:0:0:0:
406,185,77886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
406,278,78036,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,327,78186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,256,78336,6,0,B|239:279|239:279|219:315,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,78636,2,0,B|214:207|214:207|237:178,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,36,79086,2,0,L|64:93,1,71.9999978027344,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,266,79536,6,0,L|150:333,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,332,79836,2,0,L|269:265,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,172,80136,2,0,L|266:105,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,105,80437,2,0,L|385:172,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,264,80736,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,332,80886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,332,81036,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,268,81186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,78,81486,2,0,L|145:148,1,71.9999978027344,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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296,120,82536,2,0,B|353:130|353:130|365:138,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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376,280,83136,5,2,0:0:0:0:
302,338,83286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,324,83436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,239,83586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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72,271,84336,6,0,B|92:324|92:324|92:348,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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363,209,85536,5,2,0:0:0:0:
438,154,85686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,116,85836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
427,61,85986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,86286,6,0,B|176:80|176:80|164:112|128:128,1,90.0000034332277
256,192,86736,12,0,89136,0:0:0:0:

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-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2014-09-26T08:24:36+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, as requested.

[General]
I find your set of colours too bright. Can you set some less bright colours as your current ones may hurt players' eyes?
[Easy]
As the BPM is really intense, I'd drop OD to 1. So, beginners could survive it.
The kiai part feels easier than the rhythm in the first part of the diff. It makes the diff sorta unbalanced. Consider making the beginning (untill -00:33:636) easier.
Note: having consistent 1/1 rhythm in a 200 BPM Easy is too hard, try to make your rhythm easier.
00:04:236 (1,2) - 1/2 slliders in a 200 BPM Easy is too much. the diff is hard enough and 1/2s make it too hard, in my opinion.
00:25:236 (5) - haven't you missed a new combo here? I feel like you really need one here to make your comboing more consistent and to follow the song better.
00:42:336 (2) - the tail of this slider is too close to the previous hitobject and players may mistakenly hit (2)'s tail. Try to move it somewhere else to prevent the misunderstanding. Rough example
Note: 01:17:136 (1,2) - kinda similar thing. Newbies can hit the reverse-arrow by mistake.

Generally, I'd say that your Easy needs more work on the rhythm (mostly the beginning) and the patterns can get neater. Not bad for a beginner-mapper, but you still have a lot to improve!
[Normal]
I'd increase HP by one tick as the diff is supposed to be quite challenging.
00:04:686 - this is the only SV change in the whole diff. Is it really necessary to have it here? I would rather keep the velocity the same here.
00:09:186 (2,3) - the BPM is too intense, try to replace these two with an 1/2 slider to make the pattern more playable.
00:23:136 (3) - try to add a repeat to this slider? The 3/2 gap before the next hitobject is confusing. Example
00:42:336 (3) - minor - there is a little overlap with the HP Bar on 4:3 displays. The overlap. It is not a big problem, but you can make it look neater.

Quite a decent diff. Not too much to complain about.
[PU's Hard]
00:18:786 (2,3) - the sudden spacing change here feels rather tricky. I highly suggest you to avoid it.
Note: 00:25:386 (2,3) - kinda similar thing here. Try to avoid random jumps and make sure that all antijumps and jumps are reasonable and represent the song.
00:36:336 (1,2) - personally, I find these sliders quite uncomfortable to play. The second-reverse is unexpected and appears quite late, so, these sliders can cnfuse players.
00:39:186 (3,6) - try removing these two circles to stress the vocals on 00:39:336 - and 00:39:936. It will also make the diff a bit easier as it feels too hard for a 200 BPM Hard.
Note: 00:48:786 (3,6) - same.
00:42:336 (1,3) - the shape does not represent anything and looks rather tricky. Why don't you just keep these sliders straight? It would make them more readable and
01:05:436 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the BPM is just too intense, so I'd highly recommend you to avoid any 1/4 patterns in this diff. Moreover, there are two Insane diffs, so 1/4s in Hard seem quite exaggerated and don't fit well.

The diff looks quite untidy and the rhythm gets a bit too intense. I'd recommend you to make the diff a bit easier and to clean it up a bit.
[Yuzuriha's Insane]
00:09:636 (3) - the tail of the slider does not fit with the song as there is a beat being ignored at 00:09:786 - try something like this to follow the drums closer.
Note: I am also quite sure that 00:18:786 (4) - is supposed to be finished at 00:18:936 - since the "echo" sound fades here.
00:28:236 (1,1,1) - these new cmbos are extra. They do not really fit and give players too much extra HP. I highly uggest you to remove the NCs.
Note: 00:37:736 (1,1,1) - same.
00:29:661 (4) - sounds overmapped. Try to remove the circle? It would help you to represent the actual music better and to improve your rhythm.
00:36:336 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - the music gets faster and faster in this part, and to emphasize it, you could gadually increase the difficulty of the pattern. Basically, this.

I do not really agree with your jumps, I feel like most of them are quite random and exaggerated. I also think that your rhythm could use more work, there are a few overmapped patterns and some 3/4s sound unnatural.
↑This is my style

All　chenge ok

mod thanks
[Insane]
Discussed it with the mapper in-game and suggestd to work more on the spacing. Nothing else to say for now, as the jumps make the dif look weird while playing.
Not bad, but you can make it better.

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Best of luck!

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2014-09-27T16:06:15+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, as requested.

[General]
I find your set of colours too bright. Can you set some less bright colours as your current ones may hurt players' eyes?
[Easy]
As the BPM is really intense, I'd drop OD to 1. So, beginners could survive it. fixed
The kiai part feels easier than the rhythm in the first part of the diff. It makes the diff sorta unbalanced. Consider making the beginning (untill -00:33:636) easier. Have changed some rhythm for the first part
Note: having consistent 1/1 rhythm in a 200 BPM Easy is too hard, try to make your rhythm easier.
00:04:236 (1,2) - 1/2 slliders in a 200 BPM Easy is too much. the diff is hard enough and 1/2s make it too hard, in my opinion. ^
00:25:236 (5) - haven't you missed a new combo here? I feel like you really need one here to make your comboing more consistent and to follow the song better. fixed
00:42:336 (2) - the tail of this slider is too close to the previous hitobject and players may mistakenly hit (2)'s tail. Try to move it somewhere else to prevent the misunderstanding. Rough examplechangedNote: 01:17:136 (1,2) - kinda similar thing. Newbies can hit the reverse-arrow by mistake. ^

Generally, I'd say that your Easy needs more work on the rhythm (mostly the beginning) and the patterns can get neater. Not bad for a beginner-mapper, but you still have a lot to improve!
[Normal]
I'd increase HP by one tick as the diff is supposed to be quite challenging. fixed
00:04:686 - this is the only SV change in the whole diff. Is it really necessary to have it here? I would rather keep the velocity the same here. I removed the SV change :3
00:09:186 (2,3) - the BPM is too intense, try to replace these two with an 1/2 slider to make the pattern more playable.
00:23:136 (3) - try to add a repeat to this slider? The 3/2 gap before the next hitobject is confusing. ok ~Example
00:42:336 (3) - minor - there is a little overlap with the HP Bar on 4:3 displays. The overlap. It is not a big problem, but you can make it look neater. done :3

Quite a decent diff. Not too much to complain about.
[PU's Hard]
00:18:786 (2,3) - the sudden spacing change here feels rather tricky. I highly suggest you to avoid it.
Note: 00:25:386 (2,3) - kinda similar thing here. Try to avoid random jumps and make sure that all antijumps and jumps are reasonable and represent the song.
00:36:336 (1,2) - personally, I find these sliders quite uncomfortable to play. The second-reverse is unexpected and appears quite late, so, these sliders can cnfuse players.
00:39:186 (3,6) - try removing these two circles to stress the vocals on 00:39:336 - and 00:39:936. It will also make the diff a bit easier as it feels too hard for a 200 BPM Hard.
Note: 00:48:786 (3,6) - same.
00:42:336 (1,3) - the shape does not represent anything and looks rather tricky. Why don't you just keep these sliders straight? It would make them more readable and
01:05:436 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the BPM is just too intense, so I'd highly recommend you to avoid any 1/4 patterns in this diff. Moreover, there are two Insane diffs, so 1/4s in Hard seem quite exaggerated and don't fit well.

The diff looks quite untidy and the rhythm gets a bit too intense. I'd recommend you to make the diff a bit easier and to clean it up a bit.
[Yuzuriha's Insane]
00:09:636 (3) - the tail of the slider does not fit with the song as there is a beat being ignored at 00:09:786 - try something like this to follow the drums closer.
Note: I am also quite sure that 00:18:786 (4) - is supposed to be finished at 00:18:936 - since the "echo" sound fades here.
00:28:236 (1,1,1) - these new cmbos are extra. They do not really fit and give players too much extra HP. I highly uggest you to remove the NCs.
Note: 00:37:736 (1,1,1) - same.
00:29:661 (4) - sounds overmapped. Try to remove the circle? It would help you to represent the actual music better and to improve your rhythm.
00:36:336 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - the music gets faster and faster in this part, and to emphasize it, you could gadually increase the difficulty of the pattern. Basically, this.

I do not really agree with your jumps, I feel like most of them are quite random and exaggerated. I also think that your rhythm could use more work, there are a few overmapped patterns and some 3/4s sound unnatural.
[Insane]
Discussed it with the mapper in-game and suggestd to work more on the spacing. Nothing else to say for now, as the jumps make the dif look weird while playing.
fixed~

Not bad, but you can make it better.

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Best of luck!

Forgot to response it
Thanks for mod~~~~ ;D

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-10-14T12:17:13+00:00

[General]

Title: S・M・L☆ (TV size ver.)
Romanised Title: S.M.L (TV size ver.)

Here is the reference from official site: http://afiliasaga.jp/page/pageDiscoDetailSml/

[Insane]

00:09:936 (3) –finish on sliderhead to emphasize the cymbal
00:19:236 (2,3,4,5) –the stream feels a little overmapped and forced, I recommend you remove 00:19:311 (3) –
00:25:386 (5) –starting 1/2 slider at red tick is not natual because there is not any beat at 00:25:386 -. Try this: http://puu.sh/cbLjO/cf4a7d140a.jpg
00:28:986 –how about adding a circle? 这里感觉太空了，增加连续感
00:38:436 (3) –I recommend you move this to (164, 368). This is a heavy beat, so you can consider using a jump to emphasize it.
00:38:736 (1) –same as above, add a finish to emphasize the cymbal.
01:04:986 –how about put a triplet here? Like http://puu.sh/cbLzy/85935b44c5.jpg
01:25:536 (1,2) –Too many finishes feel too noisy here, try removing finish from (1)’s tail and (2)’s head.
01:26:736 (1) –switch sampleset into soft on the spinner, normal sounds a noisy.

[Yuzuriha's Insane]

00:05:136 (1) –missing finish on head
00:09:561 (2) –try add clap on this note, this triplet requires a snare-drum hitsound which sounds better.
00:18:261 (6) –same,^
00:31:386 (6,7) –same too, also this can be consistent with 00:33:111 (3,4,5) –
00:31:536 (1) –missing finish on head..
00:36:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –add clap on the streams? It sounds much better imo, if it’s too noisy you can try to reduce the volume. But it can increase the sense of hit.
00:40:461 (5) –missing clap, due to the snare drum in music
00:41:286 –tick hitsound wrongly used. There is not any “kick drum” beat in muic while you use it. just remove the tick hitsound, don’t abuse it, it sounds bad.
00:43:386 (4,5) –add clap. There are “snare-drum beats” in music
00:45:936 (1) –missing finish again.. better to emphasize the cymbal.
00:55:536 (1) -^
00:50:061 –triplet can be set here for the consistent with 00:40:386 (4,5,6) -.
01:06:936 (6,7) –sliderend should be snapped to 1/3 ticks. http://puu.sh/cbMij/86646f769c.jpg
01:08:136 (3) - 01:09:336 (3) –01:10:536 (3) - you miss an important hitsounds on their head. Try add finish then shift+W、ctrl+E on their sliderhead
01:11:436 (5) - 01:11:736 (1,2) ‘s head –need normal sampleset to emphasize the snare drums, just use shift+w and ctrl+e
01:14:736 (1) –missing finish on head again, I am really too tired to point them out
01:18:186 (4) –remove the clap, it sounds really odd and bad
01:19:386 (2) –remove too, don’t abuse hitsounds

[PU's Hard]

00:01:236 (3) –try to remove the reverse like http://puu.sh/cbMOf/3328a611a6.jpg, which fits music more
00:09:936 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) –can you use 2,4 white tick clap please? Your histounds sound very very very bad on the part
00:20:736 (1) –missing clap on reverse arrow
00:29:136 (1,2,3) –can you please don’t abuse hitsouns? Firstly this note 00:29:286 (2) –need be removed,there is nothing in music, it’s overmapped. Secondly, 00:29:136 (1) –I don’t know why you add clap at here, it doesn’t really fit the song well. just remove them.
00:31:536 (1,2) –same.
00:33:936 (1,2,1,3) –remove all the clap on head
about the rest of the diff, please try 2,4 white tick clap hitsound pattern, don’t use any other weird hitsound, I don’t want to point all of them out. If you are not sure, check insane diff for reference.
01:03:636 (5) –inaccurancy rhythm, try http://puu.sh/cbNbq/5af5f424b1.jpg, to follow the vocal better.
01:26:286 (1) –missing finish on tail, just like you did at 01:21:486 (5) –

This diff’s hitsounds need more work.

[Normal]

OD+1 to balance the difficulty spread
00:12:036 (4) –missing clap
00:45:036 - 00:54:636 - ^
00:42:336 (3) –remove clap from tail and add it at 00:43:836 (1) –‘s head
00:51:936 (3,2) -^
01:26:736 (1) –same as insane

[Easy]

OD+1 to balance difficulty.
00:08:886 (1) -1/2 slider is too hard for easy diff, try thishttp://puu.sh/cbND0/cb4101fc4c.jpg
00:21:936 (5,1) –swap nc of them, like 00:11:736 (4,1) –
00:36:336 (1) –the spinner is too short in easy, try change it too a slider and add a circle at 00:38:136 -http://puu.sh/cbNMX/81fa69be4e.jpg
01:26:736 (1) –same as insane

先留个星标，目前来看hard的音效有待加强，等所有diff全reply了再喊我来看看是否能继续进行下去。

PuttyoU

172 posts

Joined October 2011

PuttyoU 2014-10-14T14:35:48+00:00

Fycho wrote:
[General]
Title: S・M・L☆ (TV size ver.)
Romanised Title: S.M.L (TV size ver.)

Here is the reference from official site: http://afiliasaga.jp/page/pageDiscoDetailSml/
[PU's Hard]
00:01:236 (3) –try to remove the reverse like http://puu.sh/cbMOf/3328a611a6.jpg, which fits music more
change it
00:09:936 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) –can you use 2,4 white tick clap please? Your histounds sound very very very bad on the part
change your suggestion
00:20:736 (1) –missing clap on reverse arrow
remove clap
00:29:136 (1,2,3) –can you please don’t abuse hitsouns? Firstly this note 00:29:286 (2) –need be removed,there is nothing in music, it’s overmapped. Secondly, 00:29:136 (1) –I don’t know why you add clap at here, it doesn’t really fit the song well. just remove them.
all change
00:31:536 (1,2) –same.
^
00:33:936 (1,2,1,3) –remove all the clap on head
all remove
about the rest of the diff, please try 2,4 white tick clap hitsound pattern, don’t use any other weird hitsound, I don’t want to point all of them out. If you are not sure, check insane diff for reference.
OK,try it.
01:03:636 (5) –inaccurancy rhythm, try http://puu.sh/cbNbq/5af5f424b1.jpg, to follow the vocal better.
change your suggestion
01:26:286 (1) –missing finish on tail, just like you did at 01:21:486 (5) –
add
This diff’s hitsounds need more work.

先留个星标，目前来看hard的音效有待加强，等所有diff全reply了再喊我来看看是否能继续进行下去。

Thank you for modding!
I work to hitsounds.

Chaoslitz : please change normal-hitwhistle7.wav and diff.
http://puu.sh/cbUiC/fcac40c540.zip

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2014-10-14T15:21:42+00:00

Fycho wrote:
[General]
Title: S・M・L☆ (TV size ver.)
Romanised Title: S.M.L (TV size ver.)

Here is the reference from official site: http://afiliasaga.jp/page/pageDiscoDetailSml/
[Yuzuriha's Insane]
00:05:136 (1) –missing finish on head OK
00:09:561 (2) –try add clap on this note, this triplet requires a snare-drum hitsound which sounds better.
00:18:261 (6) –same,^
00:31:386 (6,7) –same too, also this can be consistent with 00:33:111 (3,4,5) – OK
00:31:536 (1) –missing finish on head.. OK
00:36:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –add clap on the streams? It sounds much better imo, if it’s too noisy you can try to reduce the volume. But it can increase the sense of hit. OK
00:40:461 (5) –missing clap, due to the snare drum in music OK
00:41:286 –tick hitsound wrongly used. There is not any “kick drum” beat in muic while you use it. just remove the tick hitsound, don’t abuse it, it sounds bad. OK
00:43:386 (4,5) –add clap. There are “snare-drum beats” in music
00:45:936 (1) –missing finish again.. better to emphasize the cymbal. OK
00:55:536 (1) -^
00:50:061 –triplet can be set here for the consistent with 00:40:386 (4,5,6) -. OK
01:06:936 (6,7) –sliderend should be snapped to 1/3 ticks. http://puu.sh/cbMij/86646f769c.jpg OK
01:08:136 (3) - 01:09:336 (3) –01:10:536 (3) - you miss an important hitsounds on their head. Try add finish then shift+W、ctrl+E on their sliderhead OK
01:11:436 (5) - 01:11:736 (1,2) ‘s head –need normal sampleset to emphasize the snare drums, just use shift+w and ctrl+e
01:14:736 (1) –missing finish on head again, I am really too tired to point them out OK
01:18:186 (4) –remove the clap, it sounds really odd and bad OK
01:19:386 (2) –remove too, don’t abuse hitsounds
OK

先留个星标，目前来看hard的音效有待加强，等所有diff全reply了再喊我来看看是否能继续进行下去。

mod thanks!

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2014-10-15T11:41:04+00:00

Fycho wrote:
[General]
Title: S・M・L☆ (TV size ver.) fixed~
Romanised Title: S.M.L (TV size ver.) fixed~

Here is the reference from official site: http://afiliasaga.jp/page/pageDiscoDetailSml/
[Insane]
00:09:936 (3) –finish on sliderhead to emphasize the cymbal added
00:19:236 (2,3,4,5) –the stream feels a little overmapped and forced, I recommend you remove 00:19:311 (3) –
00:25:386 (5) –starting 1/2 slider at red tick is not natual because there is not any beat at 00:25:386 -. Try this: http://puu.sh/cbLjO/cf4a7d140a.jpg I used a slider to replace http://puu.sh/cd4uK/b44e539763.jpg
00:28:986 –how about adding a circle? 这里感觉太空了，增加连续感 added~
00:38:436 (3) –I recommend you move this to (164, 368). This is a heavy beat, so you can consider using a jump to emphasize it.
00:38:736 (1) –same as above, add a finish to emphasize the cymbal. 164,368 seems a bit outside from the screen, I placed here instead http://puu.sh/cd4xm/88ada1e983.jpg
01:04:986 –how about put a triplet here? Like http://puu.sh/cbLzy/85935b44c5.jpg added
01:25:536 (1,2) –Too many finishes feel too noisy here, try removing finish from (1)’s tail and (2)’s head. fixed
01:26:736 (1) –switch sampleset into soft on the spinner, normal sounds a noisy. fixed
[Yuzuriha's Insane]
00:05:136 (1) –missing finish on head
00:09:561 (2) –try add clap on this note, this triplet requires a snare-drum hitsound which sounds better.
00:18:261 (6) –same,^
00:31:386 (6,7) –same too, also this can be consistent with 00:33:111 (3,4,5) –
00:31:536 (1) –missing finish on head..
00:36:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –add clap on the streams? It sounds much better imo, if it’s too noisy you can try to reduce the volume. But it can increase the sense of hit.
00:40:461 (5) –missing clap, due to the snare drum in music
00:41:286 –tick hitsound wrongly used. There is not any “kick drum” beat in muic while you use it. just remove the tick hitsound, don’t abuse it, it sounds bad.
00:43:386 (4,5) –add clap. There are “snare-drum beats” in music
00:45:936 (1) –missing finish again.. better to emphasize the cymbal.
00:55:536 (1) -^
00:50:061 –triplet can be set here for the consistent with 00:40:386 (4,5,6) -.
01:06:936 (6,7) –sliderend should be snapped to 1/3 ticks. http://puu.sh/cbMij/86646f769c.jpg
01:08:136 (3) - 01:09:336 (3) –01:10:536 (3) - you miss an important hitsounds on their head. Try add finish then shift+W、ctrl+E on their sliderhead
01:11:436 (5) - 01:11:736 (1,2) ‘s head –need normal sampleset to emphasize the snare drums, just use shift+w and ctrl+e
01:14:736 (1) –missing finish on head again, I am really too tired to point them out
01:18:186 (4) –remove the clap, it sounds really odd and bad
01:19:386 (2) –remove too, don’t abuse hitsounds
[PU's Hard]
00:01:236 (3) –try to remove the reverse like http://puu.sh/cbMOf/3328a611a6.jpg, which fits music more
00:09:936 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) –can you use 2,4 white tick clap please? Your histounds sound very very very bad on the part
00:20:736 (1) –missing clap on reverse arrow
00:29:136 (1,2,3) –can you please don’t abuse hitsouns? Firstly this note 00:29:286 (2) –need be removed,there is nothing in music, it’s overmapped. Secondly, 00:29:136 (1) –I don’t know why you add clap at here, it doesn’t really fit the song well. just remove them.
00:31:536 (1,2) –same.
00:33:936 (1,2,1,3) –remove all the clap on head
about the rest of the diff, please try 2,4 white tick clap hitsound pattern, don’t use any other weird hitsound, I don’t want to point all of them out. If you are not sure, check insane diff for reference.
01:03:636 (5) –inaccurancy rhythm, try http://puu.sh/cbNbq/5af5f424b1.jpg, to follow the vocal better.
01:26:286 (1) –missing finish on tail, just like you did at 01:21:486 (5) –
This diff’s hitsounds need more work.

[Normal]
OD+1 to balance the difficulty spread fixed
00:12:036 (4) –missing clap fixed
00:45:036 - 00:54:636 - ^ fixed
00:42:336 (3) –remove clap from tail and add it at 00:43:836 (1) –‘s head fixed
00:51:936 (3,2) -^ fixed
01:26:736 (1) –same as insane fixed
[Easy]
OD+1 to balance difficulty. fixed
00:08:886 (1) -1/2 slider is too hard for easy diff, try thishttp://puu.sh/cbND0/cb4101fc4c.jpg I changed like this http://puu.sh/cd4Co/b200c8b55c.jpg
00:21:936 (5,1) –swap nc of them, like 00:11:736 (4,1) –
00:36:336 (1) –the spinner is too short in easy, try change it too a slider and add a circle at 00:38:136 -http://puu.sh/cbNMX/81fa69be4e.jpg fixed
01:26:736 (1) –same as insane fixed
先留个星标，目前来看hard的音效有待加强，等所有diff全reply了再喊我来看看是否能继续进行下去。

Thanks for mod :3

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-10-16T03:22:38+00:00

Recheck nokd
[Insane]

00:09:936 (3) –按照统一性，这个应该要加NC，因为是在大白线上
00:20:736 (5) -^
00:21:786 (1,2) –这俩交换NC，同样是NC加在大白线上
00:24:186 (1,2) -^

00:36:936 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) –这个串子摆的有点难看，弧度不要太大，试试这样, http://puu.sh/ce2XF/38b84865fe.jpg

code

385,61,36936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
411,87,37011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
427,120,37086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,156,37161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
435,193,37236,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,230,37311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
425,266,37386,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,299,37461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,318,37536,6,0,P|330:340|279:327,1,89.999997253418,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Yuzuriha's Insane]

00:05:136 (1) –add finish, why did you write “ok” while didn't fix it
00:31:386 (6,7) –add clap
00:36:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –volume from 30% to 50% to 70% is too sharp, try 30% to 40 % to 50%
00:40:461 (5,6) –add clap
00:50:061 (5,6) -^
01:11:436 (5) –why not set sampleset to normal and addition to soft? It’s snare drum same as 01:11:736 –

[PU's Hard]

00:43:536 (5,1) –swap nc of them, 00:43:536 (5) –is at big white tick
00:53:136 (7,1) -^
01:07:236 (4) –missing clap on sliderhead
01:26:736 (1) –set sampleset to soft on the spinner like other diffs.

[Normal]

00:03:636 (3,1) –这些normal whistle不是很合曲，全都去掉，像insane那样？
00:08:286 (3) –^
01:24:936 (3,4,5) –这里的flow有点尖锐，不是很好，试试这种，http://puu.sh/ce41i/f2a0e88f9b.jpg

Call me back when all diffs are replied.

PuttyoU

172 posts

Joined October 2011

PuttyoU 2014-10-16T08:08:47+00:00

Fycho wrote:
Recheck nokd

[PU's Hard]
00:43:536 (5,1) –swap nc of them, 00:43:536 (5) –is at big white tick
OK~ fix
00:53:136 (7,1) -^
^
01:07:236 (4) –missing clap on sliderhead
add Clap
01:26:736 (1) –set sampleset to soft on the spinner like other diffs.
change soft sampleset!
Call me back when all diffs are replied.

Thank you for modding

PU's Hard

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: SML (TV size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38661
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:S.M.L (TV size ver.)
TitleUnicode:S・M・L☆ (TV size ver.)
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:アフィリア・サーガ
Creator:Chaoslitz
Version:PU's Hard
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags:Noucome Opening PuttyoU -Yuzuriha-inori- Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru My Mental Choices are Completely Interfering with my School Romantic Comedy
BeatmapID:500007
BeatmapSetID:209651

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
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444,48,46386,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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376,296,46986,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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159,33,51936,6,0,L|99:49,1,60
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245,168,52986,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,273,53586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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456,108,54336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,31,54486,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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203,112,55236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
358,117,55536,6,0,B|321:166|321:166|299:193|286:233,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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210,227,56136,2,0,P|186:206|158:194,1,60
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400,41,58086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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400,273,58836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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400,273,59436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
330,237,59586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,86736,12,0,89136,0:0:0:0:

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2014-10-16T10:23:54+00:00

[Yuzuriha's Insane]

00:05:136 (1) –add finish, why did you write “ok” while didn't fix it
00:31:386 (6,7) –add clap
00:36:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –volume from 30% to 50% to 70% is too sharp, try 30% to 40 % to 50%
00:40:461 (5,6) –add clap
00:50:061 (5,6) -^
01:11:436 (5) –why not set sampleset to normal and addition to soft? It’s snare drum same as 01:11:736 –
All ok

again thanks!

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2014-10-16T14:27:05+00:00

Fycho wrote:
Recheck nokd
[Insane]
00:09:936 (3) –按照统一性，这个应该要加NC，因为是在大白线上加了
00:20:736 (5) -^ 加了
00:21:786 (1,2) –这俩交换NC，同样是NC加在大白线上換了
00:24:186 (1,2) -^ 也換了
00:36:936 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) –这个串子摆的有点难看，弧度不要太大，试试这样, http://puu.sh/ce2XF/38b84865fe.jpg 改了~
code
385,61,36936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
411,87,37011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
427,120,37086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,156,37161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
435,193,37236,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,230,37311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
425,266,37386,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,299,37461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,318,37536,6,0,P|330:340|279:327,1,89.999997253418,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Yuzuriha's Insane]
00:05:136 (1) –add finish, why did you write “ok” while didn't fix it
00:31:386 (6,7) –add clap
00:36:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –volume from 30% to 50% to 70% is too sharp, try 30% to 40 % to 50%
00:40:461 (5,6) –add clap
00:50:061 (5,6) -^
01:11:436 (5) –why not set sampleset to normal and addition to soft? It’s snare drum same as 01:11:736 –
[PU's Hard]
00:43:536 (5,1) –swap nc of them, 00:43:536 (5) –is at big white tick
00:53:136 (7,1) -^
01:07:236 (4) –missing clap on sliderhead
01:26:736 (1) –set sampleset to soft on the spinner like other diffs.
[Normal]
00:03:636 (3,1) –这些normal whistle不是很合曲，全都去掉，像insane那样？去掉了
00:08:286 (3) –^ 去掉了
01:24:936 (3,4,5) –这里的flow有点尖锐，不是很好，试试这种，http://puu.sh/ce41i/f2a0e88f9b.jpg
我改成這樣:3 http://puu.sh/cevES/590ff915d7.jpg
Call me back when all diffs are replied.

Thanks again~

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

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Fycho 2014-10-16T14:45:35+00:00

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