This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 2월 28일 일요일 at 오전 10:22:59

Artist: fripSide
Title: Transitory Orbit
BPM: 138
Filesize: 8079kb
Play Time: 03:35
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.85 stars, 454 notes)
2. Normal (3.94 stars, 276 notes)

Download: fripSide - Transitory Orbit
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th Fripside map~

에라이받아라~
star ~

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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

i think about this map's troubles but idk..

Good map!

+Star!!

normal:
maybe lower the circle size if you dont want to make an easy

hard:
02:10:18 - reinsert this break
02:53:87 (6,7) - the spacing is confusing,or it's a jump? o_O

star

I dont know what happened >_>

I've got nothing for this... Even though there are so many minor changes which seem not needed.

lol lag is so pro!

maybe lower the circle size if you dont want to make an easy-> I'll keep mine
02:10:18 - reinsert this break-> Fix'd
02:53:87 (6,7) - the spacing is confusing,or it's a jump? o_O-> It's a jump!

Thanks for looking, v2b.



Thanks all of you guys <3

nice map and song
star

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~star~

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- Cut the mp3 if you can.

[Normal]

00:20:18 (6) - New combo.
00:20:40 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:49:96 (1) - Little suggestion. Add hitfinish on slider start?
02:40:83 (7) - Too close from (6).

[Hard]

03:25:61 (4,5,6,7) - Placed differently. 6 and 7 seems placed with grid snap OFF.

Fix'd.
Thanks for your modding~

[Normal]

Check your straight sliders. Some are not entirely straight and you might want to polish them~

01:51:092 (2) - I feel that this should be moved to the next blue tick.
02:08:044 (2,3,4,5,6) - I believe you should increase the volume a bit.
03:09:031 (4) - I feel that this should be moved to the next blue tick and take this one: 03:10:18 (6) - back to the white tick.
03:31:070 (2) - Take out the finish hit sound from this slider and instead add it here:03:33:44 (1) - (At the end of the slider)


[Hard]

Check your straight sliders. Some are not entirely straight and you might want to polish them~
Check your timing sections. Some of them start right on top of the beats. You should re add them a couple of ticks before~
(I'm not talking about the kiai timing ones, those are correct)

02:39:053 (5,6,7) - ugly and confusing.
02:56:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Are you leaving these without hitsounds?
03:18:066 (1) - How about replacing clap here for a finish sound and removing the whistle here: 03:19:009 (2) - ?

Nice map, even though I didn't like the bg that much. The song seems to be cheerful and the bg kills that in my opinion.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Offset = 400(it won't hurt, it's just so u have the bpm b4 the notes)

Normal
since this is the easiest diff, maybe mess around with the difficulty settings?
01:44:031 (7) - new combo, combo goes a bit to high compared to most parts in the map
02:40:083 (7) - probably new combo here?
03:19:053 (1) - extend to end on next white tick, i'm not sure if this is a bit too fast

Hard
01:43:000 (9) - Nice
looks great, just fix that offset thingy

miny >w</

nice map and nice song

stared~

and hope this will got ranked soon~ <3

miny gogogo~ \OwO/

Team mod from me and shinxyn.

Source (album name): 2nd Fragment of fripSide

Normal:
Make the offset the same as hard. (The offsets are currently at different places and the offset in this is 1ms off. Look at 00:01:269 (3). That note is 1ms from the offset of 1270, but in hard, 00:01:269 (1) is snapped.)
-3 on overall hitsound volume

Normal mod:
00:49:530 (3) - this note did not fit the slowdown very well, so we suggest removing it or giving it normal spacing
00:55:183 (2) - normally space this slider?
00:59:748 (5,6,7) - This part plays weird since it partially follow the lyrics. We recommend either adding a note at 00:59:965 or turn 4 into a slider that extends to where 6 currently is
02:03:009 (5,6,7) - the fast sliders before these 3 notes cause ppl to hit these notes early, so we recommend turning this section into a slider or increase the spacing
03:09:313 (4,5,6) - same as 00:59:748 (5,6,7)

Combo mod:
We couldn't understand how you added combos to the song.
Most of the time you seemed to be following the lyrics, but did this not prove true sometimes.
For example:
00:11:269 (4,1) - remove 1;s new combo and add a new combo to 4 to follow the lyrics
00:18:661 (3) - new combo for lyrics

The other theory we had was that you added combos every 8 whole notes, but there are quite a few combos that break this rule. We advise you try to change the way you add combos to make it consistent throughout the entire map.

Hard:
The whistle are used a little excessively in this diff

Combo mod:
same scenario as normal

Timing section mod:
00:13:22 - move a quarter note forward
00:49:74 - Unneeded timing section. Please remove.
00:56:70 - ^
01:02:79 - ^
01:23:87 - ^

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Overall, a nice map. Nothing wrong technically, just a few suggestions here and there.
Star.

x3
Sightread map~

anyways, like yoshi said, nothing technical, just nazi~

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Team mod from me and shinxyn.

Source (album name): 2nd Fragment of fripSide added

Normal:
Make the offset the same as hard. (The offsets are currently at different places and the offset in this is 1ms off. Look at 00:01:269 (3). That note is 1ms from the offset of 1270, but in hard, 00:01:269 (1) is snapped.) fixed
-3 on overall hitsound volume fixed(used -2 for kiai parts)

Normal mod: All fixed
00:49:530 (3) - this note did not fit the slowdown very well, so we suggest removing it or giving it normal spacing
00:55:183 (2) - normally space this slider?
00:59:748 (5,6,7) - This part plays weird since it partially follow the lyrics. We recommend either adding a note at 00:59:965 or turn 4 into a slider that extends to where 6 currently is
02:03:009 (5,6,7) - the fast sliders before these 3 notes cause ppl to hit these notes early, so we recommend turning this section into a slider or increase the spacing
03:09:313 (4,5,6) - same as 00:59:748 (5,6,7)

Combo mod: Fixed a few, I guess.......
We couldn't understand how you added combos to the song.
Most of the time you seemed to be following the lyrics, but did this not prove true sometimes.
For example:
00:11:269 (4,1) - remove 1;s new combo and add a new combo to 4 to follow the lyrics
00:18:661 (3) - new combo for lyrics

The other theory we had was that you added combos every 8 whole notes, but there are quite a few combos that break this rule. We advise you try to change the way you add combos to make it consistent throughout the entire map.

Hard:
The whistle are used a little excessively in this diff Hitsound volume has decreased so it will be fine now

Combo mod:
same scenario as normal

Timing section mod: Umm I didn't fix them I use timing section little earlier than notes to prepare offset change......
00:13:22 - move a quarter note forward
00:49:74 - Unneeded timing section. Please remove.
00:56:70 - ^
01:02:79 - ^
01:23:87 - ^

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Overall, a nice map. Nothing wrong technically, just a few suggestions here and there.
Star.

Thanks for modding >_<

ㅎㅇ

[Normal]

• 00:18:660 (3) 뉴 콤보
  00:59:095 (4?) 피니시
  00:59:965 (6) ^
  02:00:617 (6) None
  03:35:182 (x) 노트 추가
  에, 뭔가 Finish 가 많이 쓰인 느낌

[Hard]

• 00:05:399 (2) 히트 사운드를 00:04:747 (1) 같이..
  03:26:052 (6) 휘슬

오랜만에 정상적인 프립사이드 노래네요
(또 소리도 작고..)

This is written while graveyard

10 hours ago fripSide - Transitory Orbit has been revived from eternal slumber by minyeob
10 hours ago fripSide - Transitory Orbit has been revived from eternal slumber by minyeob

Umm?
Can't creator revive his map?

revived 0.0

Star~

It's mostly fine, a couple places where you could remove a circle or two to sound a little bit better, but it's not at all necessary so I won't nazi unless you want it.

It already sounds good without claps. Instead of claps, you can use the normal-hitnormal sample, name it as soft-hitclap and use C1 and make a constant pattern out of that, will be better.

Some places were too heavy on the finishes, cut them down a little.

That's all.

What ^^^^ said. I don't really like those claps how they sound with the song but it's up to you xD

normal
00:29:095 (x) - maybe note here
00:18:660 (3) - new combo?
01:43:008 (6) - strange shape

star! just some nazi stuff i found but everything is already good

killed claps.

Much better without claps, however...

01:50:182 (9,1,2) - Places like here still have a lot of finishes, I don't think you need all of them.

It would sound REALLY good if you used a normal hitsample as soft-hitclap with custom override to create a stable pattern to match those drums, but it's up to you if you want to do that. I'm suggesting the C1 method because this way you don't have to add a lot of green lines to switch.

You can also just edit the sample's volume if it's too loud at default so that takes care of even more green lines.

Might want to up your volume a bit too

I'm too lazy to fix it ;__;
I just want to clear my old pendings orz

offset should be : -468
[Hard]
00:13:660 (2,4) - no finish will be better..

others all good.

edit:bubbled

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

offset should be : -468
[Hard]
00:13:660 (2,4) - no finish will be better..

others all good.

Thanks for modding ~_~

Some little IRC modding... And finally this map can get...

Ranked!~

ahahahah I wasted 5 months

anyway
Thanks all~

gratz miny

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