Thank you very much for the helpful mod especially on source and title stuff!! xDAtrue wrote:
Hello~
From your request.
[Notion]This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Leave the Source blank because we cannot consider album title as source.ok! thanks for reminding~
And add LOVER"S"MiLE into tag. done!
Title: ジェットロケット but not sure because I only found it on wiki. See the link below. changed.
Other tags related to the song is 柏原竜二 ,because from Wiki. But not so important on this tag imo. it's not that relevant so i didn't add this
And change the tag: irie miyuki into Irie_Miyuki (also optional)i think i will keep this as i am using "irie miyuki" in tags for my previous map. i'd like to keep them consistent
Not necessary to use widescreen support here. ok ok~
You've fixed a lot what I want to say at first glance and now the map seems a lot better. :3[RUN!!!]That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting. If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.
General
Good job. I love it.
Creative jumps and patterns. many thanks for enjoying my map!!
Placement
00:04:245 (3,1) - As a matter of fact I think the blanket is not suitable here. You sacrificed the parallel structure here which is in a more important position. When playing what I noticed is not the blanket because it's really a short slider, but the 2 slider and gave me a feeling of arbitrary. Example: And some more adjustments if you like. agreed with this, changed.
00:44:931 (4,5) - If you just make it a bit right-downward, the flow would a bit better. Example: yes yes~01:45:774 (4) - Just want to make a discussion with you here~ I think if the circle moves to here? I think your flow here is just restricted in a small place and the note 4 is really limited. I want to set it free. But I don't know if you will like my flow suggested here like this:i tried both but still in favor of my current one. don't really want to have any larger jump than it is now 03:20:830 (1,2,3) - Even I know you set the flow intentionally here, I just want to discuss about it with you. You may want to emphasize the feeling of 1/4s and I have to admit that it's a good idea. But for me, it's not so suitable to use it. Also a little over-emphasized. Feel free to keep your own thought here because it's just a discussion. Here is my thought:i did some change here! Hitsound
03:07:347 - Personally I think the hitsound volume is really weaker than I thought.. Some of your whistles are weakened so that they lost the ability of emphasizing. So maybe just raise the volume for the part, 10% more will be really better. was afraid the whistles get too noisy, 5% up here~
NCs
01:41:055 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think the NCs here are not that necessary here. The song is not really strong here and too many NCs are bit over-emphasized. And the pattern is not so confusing that it needs too many NCs here. Even I know your effort on the hitsound. i will agree with you
EDIT: thank you waxman for support!!!
irie miyuki also gave me the permission to fix her diff due to being silenced.
i fixed everything mentioned for normal diff!
UPDATED.