My Chemical Romance - Famous Last Words · forum

AlexaBM

Joined March 2013

AlexaBM 2014-08-11T14:15:56+00:00

Secretpipe wrote:
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00:07:765 (3) - I'd put that note a bit further :308 y:64 for follow the line with 00:06:289 (1,2,3) - okay, why not c:
00:21:535 (3,2) - Maybe stack'em ? I can't do that because of the DS. also it's invisible when playing
00:43:680 (3,2) - Same as above ! ^
00:57:924 (1,2) - the blanket can be much better I guess I tried my best to improve it ~
01:01:366 (2) - I'd reduce the curv! for me it'd be better for esthetic stuff Deleted and changed this slider a bit
01:02:841 (2) - Why don't you make a slider like (3) ? I want to leavi it at that for now. will change if someone else will say about that!
01:27:435 (4) - I'd put that note here :364 y:168 ! You'll see why :3 yup, I see C:
01:40:957 (3,1) - Stack please ! why? it's invisible when playing, you can see this only in the editor!
02:01:608 (3) - Dat curv lol ! Not a bad idea but I'm sure you can do better ! If you have some better variants, tell me :3
02:08:738 (1,1) - Same as 01:40:957 (3,1) - same as 01:40:957 (3,1) - \:D/
02:23:488 (4,5,1) - The shape of the triangle can be better ! for example..?
03:51:022 (1,1) - Stack ! it's invisible~

Thank you \o3o/

gde moi pechen'ki? т.т

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304,164,124804,5,0,0:0:0:0:
372,132,125050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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156,44,126771,6,0,P|96:56|56:152,1,167.200005102539,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,224,127508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,328,128492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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480,276,130704,5,0,0:0:0:0:
404,308,130950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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300,60,138080,2,0,B|344:52|344:52|396:76,1,83.6000025512696,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,292,148405,6,0,P|268:308|344:288,2,167.200005102539,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,149635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,140,149881,2,0,P|116:80|140:44,1,83.6000025512696,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,40,150618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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500,324,152093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,356,152339,6,0,B|380:364|380:364|332:356,1,83.6000025512696
268,316,152831,2,0,B|220:312|186:330|186:330|156:312|100:316,2,167.200005102539,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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128,72,156273,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,169430,12,0,172678,0:0:0:0:
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456,272,174534,2,0,L|468:92,1,152,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,44,175230,2,0,P|400:20|296:48,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,84,175926,1,12,0:0:0:0:
196,224,176390,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,176854,12,0,180102,0:0:0:0:
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260,84,183350,1,12,0:0:0:0:
316,224,183814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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322,186,204674,2,0,P|282:166|198:198,1,136.799995825195,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,258,205408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,201,205652,2,0,L|70:75,2,136.799995825195,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,306,207119,2,0,P|274:310|302:298,1,68.3999979125977
346,266,207608,6,0,P|362:194|346:110,2,136.799995825195,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,305,208831,2,0,P|254:312|221:305,1,68.3999979125977
164,265,209320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,265,209564,2,0,P|148:193|164:109,1,136.799995825195,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,40,210542,2,0,P|322:20|385:44,1,136.799995825195,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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384,48,212987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,32,213232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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20,328,215188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,260,215432,6,0,P|76:240|160:272,1,136.799995825195,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,319,216166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,280,216410,2,0,P|259:244|259:204,1,68.3999979125977,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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262,165,225669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,212,227129,5,4,0:0:0:0:
148,252,227372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,216,227616,2,0,P|76:144|136:84,2,159.599995129395,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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334,52,232725,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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428,248,233698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,302,234671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,302,234915,6,0,B|240:258|260:224|260:224|276:188|256:156,2,152,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,228,239313,2,0,P|180:248|256:224,1,152,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,180,240046,2,0,P|356:172|404:184,1,76,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,248,240535,6,0,B|416:140|416:140|396:80,1,152,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,40,241268,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,241512,2,0,P|228:96|132:80,1,152,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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124,160,242734,5,8,0:0:0:0:
84,224,242978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,324,243955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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492,40,245422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,172,246399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,212,246647,6,0,P|200:256|204:292,1,76
260,332,247133,2,0,P|216:312|100:344,2,152,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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416,152,249322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,120,249565,2,0,L|264:100,1,76,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,144,250052,2,0,L|128:124,1,76,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,250553,12,4,254453,0:0:0:0:

riffy

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riffy 2014-08-11T14:57:51+00:00

Secretpipe wrote:
Heya ! I'm here for throw some useless sugggestions ;_;
I had to make a M4M for Alexa but I'll mod the entire mapset <3

[General]
Fine.
[Easy]
00:45:647 (2) - I'd blanket that circle with the two others slider ! but.. but I intended to avoid a blanket here ;_;
00:55:958 (1) - I'd move that note a bit further for follow the previous slider! x:288 y:352 for example ! Sure
01:02:841 (4,1) - That blanket can be much better ! okaaay, let's try to fix that
01:07:267 (5) - I'd move that note here :275 y:252 for make a triangle ! but what about my flow? I wouldn't like to break it, sorry ;_;
01:17:109 (2,3) - I thought that it was weird readable for beginners when playing ! Maybe improve the transition between these sliders ? introducing the kind of drop-off sliders to beginners, the arrows should make it readable, so I want to keep it, sorry
01:36:777 (2,1) - I can notice an easy blanket here ! Make it ? come on, they are not even noticeable and don't affect gameplay at all
01:57:920 (5) - That note is kinda high placed (→lifebar) ! Consider to move it down ? whoops
02:00:379 (3,1) - The blanket can be much better ! ~~I am a magical girl, I need no blankets!~~ fixed
02:07:262 (2,3,4,5) - The flow is kinda boring here ! I'd curv some sliders or make some waves with them ! I'm following G's voice and trying to represent it by making the flow feel kinda broken. I'd keep it, sorry
02:22:505 (1,2) - I'd make a blanket here ! but.. why? What's so wrong with the current pattern? It flows as good as a blanketed sliders would.
02:34:306 (3) - I'd stack that note with 02:31:847 (3) - ! Don't worry , you can move the note without change the spacing Just move that note a bit further then : 02:34:798 (4) - that will mean that (3) will be too close to 02:32:339 (1) - which will result in a tricky flow, which s not an option, imo.
03:23:697 (1) - I'd add a point for curv that slider ! But I really like it straight
03:59:801 (2) - Maybe put the same slider as 03:58:824 (1) - I tried to
[Hard]
00:05:552 (2,3,4,5) - Do a square with these objects ? I'd rather go with somewhat circle-shaped there, sorry
00:10:224 (5,6) - You can do a better blanket by curving (5) okaaay
00:58:170 (5,6,7) - You can do a better triangle here ! but it's not intended to be a triangle, I'm trying to focus on flow, instead of shaping the patterns, so I really, really want to keep it this way. forgive me, please
01:17:601 (7) - I'd add a New Combo here ! Nah, that would break the comboing I have here and confuse players, so, no. Sorry ;_;
01:25:468 (6,9) - Stack can be better lol69 *shoot himself* sure
02:15:621 (3,5) - You can improve the stack ! okay!
03:42:993 (1,2,3,4) - The transitionn is kinda weird between (1) and too imo. But I guess it's fine ! same again, I'm breaking it on purpose, and yeah, I believe that it should be fine.
Sorry for the poor mod ! The mapset is really clean ans solid !
Have a star for your amazing work you and Alexa !~~

Thank you so much for the mod and the star! <3

ya ih zozhral, sorry @SashaBM

xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2014-08-24T07:20:36+00:00

Hi Bakari, modding from my queue. You look like you've had a lot of experience with mapping already, so I'm not sure how much my mod will help

[General]

Check AIMod

[Easy]

03:27:608 (4) - stay with new combo every 2 measures: NC here and remove NC 03:29:564 (1) -
03:31:520 (2) - NC ^
03:35:432 (6) - NC and remove NC 03:37:388 (1) -

[Normal]

CS3 or 3.5 please. 4.5 is smaller than most insanes.
01:20:551 (4) - stick with this kind of slider transition to stay consistent with the others in this diff: http://puu.sh/b5zpS/b39e7f5c9c.png
01:27:435 (4) - new combo to stay consistent with your NC-every-measure
02:38:239 (1) - do a circle before spinner like 01:27:435 (4) -

Great flow here~

[Hard]

Check AIMod for unsnapped object
This is only a hard diff but your difficulty settings are of an insane. Lower everything except circle size by 1-2.
00:49:335 (3) - why not stack with 00:48:352 (1) - to play a little nicer? otherwise check blanket, move to 228, 116
00:52:039 (1,2,3) - the rhythm sounds better if you map all the 1/2 ticks here
00:56:449 (2) - this too, try a 1/2 repeat slider
01:14:651 (7,8) - blanket is too close in the middle http://puu.sh/b5yOV/d8cd4fac26.png
01:17:109 (5,6) - try a jump to emphasize the vocals
01:19:076 (12,1) - check blanket
01:21:043 (5,7) - this too; the slider repeat side is too far
02:08:983 (6,7) - the flow between these two is not very good. You want the slider to continue to the right like http://puu.sh/b5z3e/005b36eddf.png
03:08:066 - lower the volume for this section
03:37:388 (4,5) - blanket is a little too close in the middle, try dragging middle point to 120, 300
03:44:939 (6,7) - make end point closer for blanket
04:00:290 (3,4) - slider edges are too close for blanket.

Good luck!

riffy

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riffy 2014-08-24T08:28:18+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
Hi Bakari, modding from my queue. You look like you've had a lot of experience with mapping already, so I'm not sure how much my mod will help

[General]
Check AIMod
[Easy]

Applied everything here
[Normal]
CS3 or 3.5 please. 4.5 is smaller than most insanes.alexapls
Leaving t up to Alexa, might apply that later if I get her permission to do so
[Hard]
Check AIMod for unsnapped object whoops
This is only a hard diff but your difficulty settings are of an insane. Lower everything except circle size by 1-2. doing that on purpose since thisis the hardest diff, and therefore, I can make it somewhat like Hard+
00:49:335 (3) - why not stack with 00:48:352 (1) - to play a little nicer? otherwise check blanket, move to 228, 116 stack didn't really work for me there, fixed the blanket
00:52:039 (1,2,3) - the rhythm sounds better if you map all the 1/2 ticks here yup
00:56:449 (2) - this too, try a 1/2 repeat slider using two 1/2 sliders from now on, nice catch!
01:14:651 (7,8) - blanket is too close in the middle http://puu.sh/b5yOV/d8cd4fac26.png fixed that a bit
01:17:109 (5,6) - try a jump to emphasize the vocals I thought I've already added that @.@
01:19:076 (12,1) - check blanket mkaaaaay
01:21:043 (5,7) - this too; the slider repeat side is too far I don't really see why all blankets must be perfect since you probably won't even notice this in game, but perfection never killed anyone, so, let's fix that!
02:08:983 (6,7) - the flow between these two is not very good. You want the slider to continue to the right like http://puu.sh/b5z3e/005b36eddf.png I want to keep the flow here, for some reason I like the movement it gives. Blargh, just take a look at this and see how it works here
03:08:066 - lower the volume for this section sure
03:37:388 (4,5) - blanket is a little too close in the middle, try dragging middle point to 120, 300 okay, done
03:44:939 (6,7) - make end point closer for blanket why not?
04:00:290 (3,4) - slider edges are too close for blanket. moved them around a bit
Good luck!

Thanks a lot!

Edit: got Alexa's permission to take care of her diff

[Normal]

CS3 or 3.5 please. 4.5 is smaller than most insanes. alexapls, fixed
01:20:551 (4) - stick with this kind of slider transition to stay consistent with the others in this diff: nah, it's a guest diff and mappers are free to use THEIR style
01:27:435 (4) - new combo to stay consistent with your NC-every-measure it doesn't look necessary to me, sorry. it's a circle, just one circle before the break, so players don't really need extra HP here
02:38:239 (1) - do a circle before spinner like 01:27:435 (4) - nah, the spinner would get off music, then @.@

Great flow here~

AlexaBM

755 posts

Joined March 2013

AlexaBM 2014-08-24T12:35:22+00:00

О ДАА

Nyukai

2,415 posts

Joined July 2012

Nyukai 2014-08-26T13:41:07+00:00

Hi, from #modreqs :3

General:

You could enable LetterboxInBreaks. Title could appear here 01:27:435 - , looks good imo.

Easy:

00:52:039 (1, 2, 3) - Hm, I think this is a bit confusing, (3) is too near of (1). I'd try something different.
01:40:711 (2, 3) - Move (2) to x:248 y:208 and (3) to x:172 y:156, I think it gives a better flow.
02:07:262 (2) - Ctrl+H and move it to x:372 y:320.
02:26:439 (1) - Maybe add finish?
02:32:339 (1) - Remove this NC, add it on 02:34:306 (3).
02:36:273 (1) - I guess this NC is unnecessary.
03:52:968 (1) - ^
CS:2 maybe? I prefer CS:3 for Normal.

BM's Normal:

01:02:350 (1) - Unnecessary NC o3o
01:27:435 (4) - NC.
03:24:674 (2, 3, 4) - Weird pattern, (4) is too near of (2). I'd do something different.
04:08:592 (3) - NC.

Hard:

Oh god, I hate small circles...
I think AR:8 is good enough. I like those jumps because Hard is the last diff, but AR:8,5 is too much, it seems like an Insane D:
00:37:252 (7) - NC~
01:27:435 - What about adding a note here? Don't forget to add NC if you do that :3
03:57:602 - I miss one note here.

Nothing much to say, clean mapset and really well done <3

This song is so good >w<

Here you have a star o3o ~ now you know what you have to do o3o ok jk

riffy

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8,060 posts

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Topic Starter

riffy 2014-08-26T16:29:14+00:00

Inyuschan wrote:
Hi, from #modreqs :3

General:

You could enable LetterboxInBreaks. But they cut off heads of the guys ;_; // Title could appear here 01:27:435 - , looks good imo. nice idea, might ask a QAT to do that for me
Easy:

00:52:039 (1, 2, 3) - Hm, I think this is a bit confusing, (3) is too near of (1). I'd try something different. but the flow is readable here + arrows + numbers, it should not be difficult
01:40:711 (2, 3) - Move (2) to x:248 y:208 and (3) to x:172 y:156, I think it gives a better flow. the flow as it is feels better to me, contact me in-game if you want me to explain it with pictures and details.
02:07:262 (2) - Ctrl+H and move it to x:372 y:320. I'm trying to experiment with kinda broken flow here, will need more opinions on this one. Will keep it in mind, tho
02:26:439 (1) - Maybe add finish? yeah, sure
02:32:339 (1) - Remove this NC, add it on 02:34:306 (3).
02:36:273 (1) - I guess this NC is unnecessary.
03:52:968 (1) - ^ applied all these NC-related things
CS:2 maybe? I prefer CS:3 for Normal. СS2 feels too boring, I want beginners to try harder while playing the diff
BM's Normal:

01:02:350 (1) - Unnecessary NC o3o It fits with her comboing pattern, sorry
01:27:435 (4) - NC. Yes
03:24:674 (2, 3, 4) - Weird pattern, (4) is too near of (2). I'd do something different. A very common pattern, plays nicely, imo. keeping it. at least for now.
04:08:592 (3) - NC. sure
Hard:

Oh god, I hate small circles... Love them. Maybe because I am a huge fan of older maps
I think AR:8 is good enough. I like those jumps because Hard is the last diff, but AR:8,5 is too much, it seems like an Insane D: Okay, dropping it to 8 ;_;
00:37:252 (7) - NC~ doesn't really work here, imo
01:27:435 - What about adding a note here? Don't forget to add NC if you do that :3 Don't wanna do that. At least not now. I feel like the delayed breaks works better, just an opinion, tho
03:57:602 - I miss one note here. yes!
Nothing much to say, clean mapset and really well done <3

This song is so good >w<

Here you have a star o3o ~ now you know what you have to do o3o ok jk don't kill me, no more ;_;

Thanks a lot!

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2014-08-30T09:57:47+00:00

hi

downloaded from #modreqs sometime last week. you gave me a nice mod a while ago so i thought you deserved at least something from me. just as a note, i ignored hitsound stuff later on since i apparently can't comprehend hitsound patterns while tired :/

general

something about letterbox breaks in easy. aimod
consider some audio leadin since there's less than a second before the first object appears
you're gonna hate me, but i'm pretty sure the timing is not correct. in most places, just by listening at 25% playback i can tell that objects are not exactly in sync with the song, most notably at 03:09:289 (4) - . also, majority of the time for variable bpm songs (that i've seen at least), maps have timing points snapped to the previous timing section, but pretty much all of these points are unsnapped. i could do the timing myself if you'd like, or you could get someone with a more established name to do it since you probably have connections with your red name fanciness. there's also some timing issues with places like 00:40:202 - , 02:39:203 - , and 01:11:692 - having to do with taiko barlines, but whenever there's new timing it'll be irrelevant
ringating incoming

hard

tick rate 2 may be a good idea, since the song's got rhythms on 1/2 beats pretty much all the time and alexa's normal even has tick rate 2
00:13:420 (2,5) - usually don't care about stacks, but these two are on the playfield at the same time, so they should probably be stacked a bit cleaner
00:20:551 (1,2) - 00:24:486 (1,2) - i really liked the spacing increase guitar emphasis introduced on 00:16:617 (1,2) - , but in these two places you decided not to do the same kind of spacing. it felt a lot less impactful to have regular spacing during these two parts that seem like they should be spaced apart given what's in the music. so yeah, spacing these like 00:16:617 (1,2) - would be goooood.
00:28:402 (1,2) - if you really didn't want to do the spacing thing, these two should have their spacing checked. the previous section had an inherited point marking .8x SV, but the new timing point starting on (1) reset the SV back to 1, so the spacing on (1,2) is distnace snapped to the wrong SV blahblahblah just do the first thing it's so much better ;-;
01:27:435 - may want to add an object here and the following red tick to be consistent with what you've got at 00:28:402 (1,2) - since they sound pretty similar (and it feels like you cut the kiai short by not mapping the end of the vocal "home")
01:45:136 - of all the places that you include a space, this one doesn't really seem to fit well. sounds like the vocals "jet, black, ho, and tel" all should have the same objects emphasized, which the gap does not really support. having a 1/2 slider starting on the missing beat there would work, ~~but maybe that's just me~~ alexa emphasizes them equally too
02:02:837 (1,3) - same comment about stacks that are visible ingame as 00:13:420 (2,5) -
02:06:771 (1) - kind of confused by your whistle placement throughout this second kiai. there's a lot of times where it seems like there should be a whistle, like 02:13:655 (8) - 02:21:522 (9) - 02:25:455 (7) - , and there's a bunch of places where it sounds like there shouldn't be whistles like 02:14:638 (1) - 02:24:226 (6) - . there's also the instances with circles that i'm not sure if you were planning on having whistles on both objects like 02:31:356 (4,5) - or just one like 02:27:422 (5,6) - .
02:16:605 (5,6) - maybe it's intentional, but the slight non-parallel-ness makes the nazi in me come out ready to exterminate your sliders
02:20:047 (4,5) - i don't really see the reason why there's a flow break right here, especially since it's the only time throughout the song you do something with this miniscule of spacing aside from stuff like 02:05:787 (8,1) - . keeping constant movement here would make more sense to me, but maybe there's a reason i dunno
02:30:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is pretty sexy
02:35:289 (5,6) - shouldn't these two switch positions to follow the thing going on with 02:34:306 (1,2,3,4) - yaknow
02:38:239 (1,2) - seems kind of weird to map 2 beats into this section that you don't plan on mapping. i understnad doing so at 00:28:402 (1,2) - , but here it seems like you went a bit too far into the section where the spinner would be. mapping just the first beat of the section tehn including the spinner on the following red tick works pretty well, since that's essentially what you did by placing the spinner after 02:38:977 (2) - .
02:53:142 (1,2,3) - 03:00:566 (1,2,3) - shape on these is kind of off. for the sake of aesthetics, you may want to make it a perfect triangle or whatever you call that
02:54:534 (3,5) - 03:02:654 (4,5) - blankets seem not-so-blankets
03:23:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - no idea what's going on hitsound-wise here. the stuff after this uses claps on 1 and 3, so i think this stuff should also follow that since it's the same musical stuff
03:36:899 (3) - moving this up/to the left may allow for better empahsis on the lyric stuff. "-sleep" and "or" would both have jumps instead of only "or" (and they're both emphasized the same amount in the song and jump is cooler and please)
03:57:358 (5) - soft sampleset wat why

normal

00:16:617 (1) - for these things, it may be better to use the same hitsounding pattern that bakari does with the normal hitsound set addition things. it fits a lot more with the normal sampleset's hitnormal than soft's.
00:19:568 (2) - seems like you're following the vocals almost exclusively from here to the first break, so this object should be moved forward 1/2 tick. the vocals are on the red ticks, as you mapped with 00:18:338 (1) - so switching suddenly to the white ticks on this one object is not really fitting
00:20:551 (1,2,3) - i think these should be ctrl+g'd (switching rhythm stuff) so there's consistency with 00:24:486 (1,2,3) - and the 1/2 sliders on 00:16:617 (1) - and 00:28:402 (1) -
00:28:402 - pretty sure the soft sampleset should be used here instead of normal. was switched cuz of the new timing point, so i don't think it was intentional. introducing normal when the drums formally come in at 00:40:239 (1) - seems like it would work better idea
00:42:205 (1,2,3) - there's a couple instances of spacing like this which is technically fine, but aesthetically not so great. the distances between objects should be the same, but between 2 and 3 is noticably closer than between 1 and 2. i won't mention specifics but distnace snapping without grid snap may actually benefit with objects that are this close together
00:55:727 (4,1) - gonna sound weird, but these should be moved down/to the right 4 units. because of the stack on these, 00:54:744 (2) - looks really wrong ingame and moving this stuff fixes it. same thing applies to 02:14:392 (4,2,3) - as well
01:27:189 (3,1) - i think spacing between these should be the same as the rest of the stuff throughout the kiai. because of the green line on 01:27:435 (1) - distnace snap says it should be closer but distance snap is stupid. also, because of that green line, the finish on this object is really quiet. may be better just to put the green line after this object for the sake of distance snap and hitsounds
02:10:704 (1,2,3) - nazi thing but having straight flow into a slider that is curved but not facing the straight thing is kinda wierd. either adjusting the curve or moving 2 upwards so it's not straight flow would make things gud. with the latter change, flow would be comparable to 02:30:372 (1,2,3) -
03:44:939 (1,3) - not quite the best overlap/blanket thing you know why
03:52:725 (3,1) - le blanket

easy

00:18:584 (3) - flow in the beginning section (pre-break) is always really smooth, excluding the transition into this object. it's the only time there's a sort of zig-zag thing going on, and i think if you were to ctrl+g this you would be able to keep flow more consistent for the section
01:06:775 (4,5) - exactly horizontal things don't really seem to fit when it's the only time you do it. just changing the y value of (5) at all would be fine. personal thing but i'm just not a fan of djpop object composition
01:13:667 (3,4) - supernazi but i think these two sliders should have blankets the same distance away from (2). right now they're at slightly different distnaces
01:17:109 (2,3,4) - i hvae a feeling these offbeat sliders may be too hard to read for an easy. following the vocals here is probably too hard considering they're all on red ticks and keeping rhythm on an easy on red ticks bad yeahauhsfhduf. you didn't map to the these vocals during the second kiai with 1/2 sliders, so doing it here dunno whats goin on ooookay im tired use a 1.5 beat slider with reverse like 02:12:671 (3) - somethingsomething
02:55:230 - unexpected lack of beat here. there's a grouping of 4 notes here separated by 1.5 beats each, so doing something to support that would work better than a 1.5 beat reverse slider, since that only supports three beats. disthing be good. same rhythm can be found in umi's easy diff of sao2 ignite at 00:37:972 (1,2,3) - so ya know it works

j

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2014-08-30T10:28:11+00:00

I was told to mod this bg so here I am

working off your original image, I did many filters and effects and stuff, also made it 16:9. here is that

uhhh

I also made an entirely different bg using this image, just cause i felt like it. use it if u want, or don't, iunno.

that

I'm tired and i blame pishifat

no kudosu

riffy

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

riffy 2014-08-30T15:41:04+00:00

pishifat wrote:
hi

downloaded from #modreqs sometime last week. you gave me a nice mod a while ago so i thought you deserved at least something from me. just as a note, i ignored hitsound stuff later on since i apparently can't comprehend hitsound patterns while tired :/

general
you're gonna hate me, but i'm pretty sure the timing is not correct. in most places, just by listening at 25% playback i can tell that objects are not exactly in sync with the song, most notably at 03:09:289 (4) - . also, majority of the time for variable bpm songs (that i've seen at least), maps have timing points snapped to the previous timing section, but pretty much all of these points are unsnapped. i could do the timing myself if you'd like I'd be more than just thankful if you'd do that. , or you could get someone with a more established name to do it since you probably have connections with your red name fanciness. lolnope, I don't even.. there's also some timing issues with places like 00:40:202 - , 02:39:203 - , and 01:11:692 - having to do with taiko barlines, but whenever there's new timing it'll be irrelevant
hard
02:06:771 (1) - kind of confused by your whistle placement throughout this second kiai. there's a lot of times where it seems like there should be a whistle, like 02:13:655 (8) - 02:21:522 (9) - 02:25:455 (7) - , and there's a bunch of places where it sounds like there shouldn't be whistles like 02:14:638 (1) - 02:24:226 (6) - . there's also the instances with circles that i'm not sure if you were planning on having whistles on both objects like 02:31:356 (4,5) - or just one like 02:27:422 (5,6) - . I really should work more on hitsounds, will do soon.
02:16:605 (5,6) - maybe it's intentional, but the slight non-parallel-ness makes the nazi in me come out ready to exterminate your sliders nuke them if they're still not fixed
02:20:047 (4,5) - i don't really see the reason why there's a flow break right here, especially since it's the only time throughout the song you do something with this miniscule of spacing aside from stuff like 02:05:787 (8,1) - . keeping constant movement here would make more sense to me, but maybe there's a reason i dunno "nothing you can say can stop me going home", whatever, let's just change that part
02:30:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is pretty sexy ♥
02:35:289 (5,6) - shouldn't these two switch positions to follow the thing going on with 02:34:306 (1,2,3,4) - yaknow i know
02:53:142 (1,2,3) - 03:00:566 (1,2,3) - shape on these is kind of off. for the sake of aesthetics, you may want to make it a perfect triangle or whatever you call that I DIDN'T DO THAT, THEY MOVE ON THEIR OWN EVER MIDNIGHT I SWEAR
02:54:534 (3,5) - 03:02:654 (4,5) - blankets seem not-so-blankets as the suggestion above was fixed blankets got better now
03:23:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - no idea what's going on hitsound-wise here. the stuff after this uses claps on 1 and 3, so i think this stuff should also follow that since it's the same musical stuff asdasdasd, hate me please ;_;
03:57:358 (5) - soft sampleset wat why
easy
01:06:775 (4,5) - exactly horizontal things don't really seem to fit when it's the only time you do it. just changing the y value of (5) at all would be fine. personal thing but i'm just not a fan of djpop object composition personally, I'd rather keep it this way as it looks better to me when the pattern is like this. I just feel like it's the right flow and it's really hard to explain why @.@
02:55:230 - unexpected lack of beat here. there's a grouping of 4 notes here separated by 1.5 beats each, so doing something to support that would work better than a 1.5 beat reverse slider, since that only supports three beats. disthing be good. same rhythm can be found in umi's easy diff of sao2 ignite at 00:37:972 (1,2,3) - so ya know it works
i see your point there but I'd rather not break the polarity. Changed the pattern to somwhat fitting, will look for more opinions/options
j

Hope to summon Alexa to fix her stuff later. not mentioned - fixed/applied. blue/purple - applied with comments / red - disagree for some reason.

Thanks a lot!

great BG, thanks @Ringating

AlexaBM

755 posts

Joined March 2013

AlexaBM 2014-08-31T07:23:03+00:00

Thank you! everything fixed except:

pishifat wrote:
[notice]
normal
00:16:617 (1) - for these things, it may be better to use the same hitsounding pattern that bakari does with the normal hitsound set addition things. it fits a lot more with the normal sampleset's hitnormal than soft's. BAKARI, IT'S UP TO YOU, pls
00:28:402 - pretty sure the soft sampleset should be used here instead of normal. was switched cuz of the new timing point, so i don't think it was intentional. introducing normal when the drums formally come in at 00:40:239 (1) - seems like it would work better idea ^
00:20:551 (1,2,3) - i think these should be ctrl+g'd (switching rhythm stuff) so there's consistency with 00:24:486 (1,2,3) - and the 1/2 sliders on 00:16:617 (1) - and 00:28:402 (1) - no, I want to keep this

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riffy

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riffy 2014-08-31T15:31:33+00:00

Updated, fixed hitsounds. Thank you for your quick response, Alexa o/

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2014-09-01T11:22:38+00:00

Star~

Sieg

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Sieg 2014-09-09T06:33:22+00:00

Привет Няши

General

тайминг надо бы проверить, я бы тебе посмотрел поточнее, но знаешь же, что моего тайминга все равно будет недостаточно

Easy

00:08:748 (1) - я бы тут использовал 00:04:814 (1) - вот этот слйдер, так же флоу на 2 будет получше
SPOILER
00:52:039 (1,3) - 3 бы подальше от 1, ну сам знаешь
01:20:059 (2,3,4) - ^и тут
02:18:571 (1,2,3) - ^сейм, там если будешь это меня сам пробежишься по дифе
01:05:791 (3,4,5) - давай их попробуем дугой?
01:02:841 (4) - 94 ДС, тут аимод ругается
03:34:454 (4) - ^и тут

BM's Normal

ну в общем, в этом ничего такого просто лично мое предпочтение, когда у тебя такие небольшие смены бпм. Если ты держишь дс на котором, 00:41:468 (3) - к примеру, нету оверлапов, то хорошо бы его держать и в подобных 00:23:502 (2,3,1) - местах. Даже если он численно будет чуть-чуть больше, визуально это более приятно и на плейабилити это не влияет.
00:28:174 (3,1) - вот тут бы стак убрать как на 00:24:240 (3,1) -
00:54:744 (2,1) - вот это можно стакнуть
01:25:468 (1) - чуть-чуть бы приподнять
SPOILER
01:49:807 (2,3) - и тут бы более закругленное движение
02:25:455 (3) - если-бы предыдущий паттерн подвинуть и сделать этот слайдер более симметричным он бы круто смотрелся
SPOILER
02:49:430 (1) - надо закончить на 02:52:214 () - t/241019
02:56:854 (1) - ^
03:37:388 (1) - ^ тут тоже надо что-то сделать, убрать 03:39:830 (1,2) - ?
03:42:750 (3,1) - отодвинь его, даже если там 1.05 будет ничего страшного
SPOILER
04:02:978 (2,3) - наци бланкет

Hard

00:02:847 (7) - может поделить его, там лирика сильная посередине, рипит может из него?
00:04:322 (10,1) - как-нибудь получше их забланкетить?
00:24:731 (2,3) - подумай насчет подобных почти стаков с паузой, хотя ничего плохо, если нравятся не трогай
01:02:841 (4,2) - хорошо бы если это были одинаковые слайдеры
01:07:267 (6) - чуть выше ее, зачем в край экрана загонять перед спиннером
все довольно чисто (:

Lovely. Good Luck!

riffy

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riffy 2014-09-09T11:47:05+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Привет Няши

General
тайминг надо бы проверить, я бы тебе посмотрел поточнее, но знаешь же, что моего тайминга все равно будет недостаточно я не могу никого найти уже довольно долго @.@

Easy
00:08:748 (1) - я бы тут использовал 00:04:814 (1) - вот этот слйдер, так же флоу на 2 будет получше конечно
00:52:039 (1,3) - 3 бы подальше от 1, ну сам знаешь тут циферки и стрелочки есть, кажется, читабельно. но если еще раз упомянут - меняю.
01:20:059 (2,3,4) - ^и тут
02:18:571 (1,2,3) - ^сейм, там если будешь это меня сам пробежишься по дифе
01:05:791 (3,4,5) - давай их попробуем дугой? да без проблем, раз ууж всем не нравятся прямые линии \w/
01:02:841 (4) - 94 ДС, тут аимод ругается
03:34:454 (4) - ^и тут и тут и там поправил

BM's Normal
/me summons ~~Satan~~ Sanya

Hard
00:02:847 (7) - может поделить его, там лирика сильная посередине, рипит может из него?
00:04:322 (10,1) - как-нибудь получше их забланкетить?
00:24:731 (2,3) - подумай насчет подобных почти стаков с паузой, хотя ничего плохо, если нравятся не трогай только их и не трогал, все остальное поправил
01:02:841 (4,2) - хорошо бы если это были одинаковые слайдеры
01:07:267 (6) - чуть выше ее, зачем в край экрана загонять перед спиннером
все довольно чисто (:

Lovely. Good Luck!

Thanks a lot! o/

AlexaBM

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AlexaBM 2014-09-09T12:09:46+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Привет Няши
и вам здрасте \:D/
BM's Normal
ну в общем, в этом ничего такого просто лично мое предпочтение, когда у тебя такие небольшие смены бпм. Если ты держишь дс на котором, 00:41:468 (3) - к примеру, нету оверлапов, то хорошо бы его держать и в подобных 00:23:502 (2,3,1) - местах. Даже если он численно будет чуть-чуть больше, визуально это более приятно и на плейабилити это не влияет.
00:28:174 (3,1) - вот тут бы стак убрать как на 00:24:240 (3,1) - ага
00:54:744 (2,1) - вот это можно стакнуть пока оставлю это, потому что:
01:25:468 (1) - чуть-чуть бы приподнять да
SPOILER
01:49:807 (2,3) - и тут бы более закругленное движение не совсем поняла, что ты имел в виду, но этот слайдер мне не понравился и я его немого изменила
02:25:455 (3) - если-бы предыдущий паттерн подвинуть и сделать этот слайдер более симметричным он бы круто смотрелся не очень люблю симметрию, но ладно, пусть живет
SPOILER
02:49:430 (1) - надо закончить на 02:52:214 () - http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019 #гарвен_умри
02:56:854 (1) - ^ ^
03:37:388 (1) - ^ тут тоже надо что-то сделать, убрать 03:39:830 (1,2) - ? ^ и да
03:42:750 (3,1) - отодвинь его, даже если там 1.05 будет ничего страшного окей
SPOILER
04:02:978 (2,3) - наци бланкет исправила, как могла

Lovely. Good Luck!

Спасибо!~

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kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2014-09-09T13:33:09+00:00

see your timing reqs in #modreq
I do not make my own timing because I'm also not good at it.
so just some my own idea on your timing~

the frist red line: you should change offset to 874(-6) and change BPM to 122 (delete 0.002)
00:40:239 (1) - this slider is really slow a lot. it should be started at 00:40:202- and move the red line(00:40:239- this one) to 00:40:730-
you should add a red line at 00:52:520- . because the note here is obviously slower than music. BPM is about 122.2 I'm not sure about this BPM

some drums are really strange in this music. like 00:38:481 (2) - this.....sudden slower than others......this kind of drums make timing really hard to do >.<

riffy

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Topic Starter

riffy 2014-09-09T14:06:45+00:00

Thank you for checking, will get to it soon.

pishifat

osu! Paragon

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Joined August 2013

pishifat 2014-09-11T08:02:47+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Thank you for checking, will get to it soon.

the time has come (pun intended)

stuff has been optimized for the hard diff, so you're not going to have any red lines running through sliders there, but for easy and normal, you're going to have... a lot. you won't be able to snap these ingame, so see the video in the box below for how to fix that. as for any reverse sliders that go through bpm changes, you'll have to create a different rhythm. no other options there really :/ you also may notice that there are a few red lines that repeat the same bpm values and that's for taiko bar lines. those are alright to run reverse sliders through since there won't be any broken snapping. (you'll see a few reverse sliders in teh hard diff that already do that). also also, at the two times before the kiai where vocals begin before drum downbeats, i timed the initial slider to the vocal entrance since it sounds kind of awkward otherwise. if you think it would make more sense to change that to start on the drum entrance do that

gl manually snapping stuff. most fun you'll ever have

only red lines

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snapping sliders

no kudosu

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2014-09-11T12:58:02+00:00

I think it's so many timing :/ (repair my bad old post lol)

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riffy

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riffy 2014-09-11T13:04:54+00:00

thank you VERY much for the timings, man! I did not expect it to be this much complicated.

Everything is snapped, I think that we're ready to go!

Nyukai

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Nyukai 2014-09-12T10:50:11+00:00

That timing is so weird... But if it's ok...

I think I'll check it though, I like this song xD

PD: Oh hi new page c:

Kodora

Kodora 2014-09-13T13:12:12+00:00

Please raise OD at Easy at least by 1-2, having it 0 would be quite unbalanced, considering that Normal have OD4

riffy

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riffy 2014-09-13T13:42:11+00:00

I'll talk to Alexa about changid OD on her diff, I strongly believe thad OD0 is a must for a song with a changeable timing like this.

Sieg

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Sieg 2014-09-13T14:15:43+00:00

Да ладно, ну какой 0. Хотя-бы 1, а лучше 2. Твой тайминг не меняется так экстремально, чтоб была заметна разница между 198мс и 188 или 178 для ОД2, если ты совсем не криво нажал, это все же ритм игра даже на низком уровне.

riffy

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riffy 2014-09-13T14:24:20+00:00

Ну, блин, но тайминг же, тайминг! ;_; Пока что поставлю на 0,5. Попутно пофиксил пару паттернов и киаи на изи.

LVAce

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LVAce 2014-11-25T23:37:52+00:00

Alright, I absolutely love this map. I am a new beat mapper, and felt I should let you know that I like yours.

riffy

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riffy 2014-11-26T03:45:29+00:00

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it

pishifat

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pishifat 2014-11-26T04:40:20+00:00

oh if you ever plan on reviving this, there's things i can do so timing is less retarded (which i wasn't capable of doing when initially timing)

LVAce

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LVAce 2014-12-31T16:10:06+00:00

I forgot to tell you, this beat map made me love this song even more. XD I never thought too much about this song, but this map actually forced me to like it more.

riffy

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riffy 2016-04-30T14:10:02+00:00

It's a been way more than half a year since I asked pishi to do his timing thing, since nothing was done I assume we are good to go.

OD1 Easy, fixed some unsanapped stuff in Easy.

pishifat

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pishifat 2016-04-30T22:45:31+00:00

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Kyouren

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Kyouren 2016-05-01T01:46:26+00:00

I did like Bonsai doing timing in this map ._.

riffy

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riffy 2016-05-01T05:13:03+00:00

Bonsai never did timings for this one, though. Updated with pishi's new timing and mp3, thanks a lot, man!

Also did fix things for Alexa. Might still need minor polishing, but it can be fixed inno time with a single mod.

Kagetsu

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Kagetsu 2016-05-02T02:34:57+00:00

pm request

[General]

check aimod because there are some spinners that aren't snapped (i believe it's because of the timing change

[Hard]

00:03:577 - the pause here feels weird imo, i believe you're intended to follow voice instead of guitar with those 1/1 rhythms (i'm talking about 00:04:807 (1) - 00:07:758 (8) - etc) so wouldn't be bad to add a note, because there's guitar and also voice
00:28:413 (1,2) - space them more maybe? (like you did in 00:20:545 (1,2) - 00:24:479 (1,2) - )
00:43:659 (10) - dunno about this jump, I probably would make it on 00:44:151 (1) - instead, because of the chord change
00:48:086 - are you sure you don't want to map this beat? D: the chord change here is highly noticeable
00:52:512 (2,3,4) - distance isn't consisntent in that pattern, it makes it to look messy in someway
01:27:430 (1,2) - you could add normal sampleset finish to those two
01:50:791 - add a note here maybe, feels weird without it because the music is changing in that part so the drums are really strong
02:39:180 (1) - i think this is spinner is kinda out of place, the drums are going crazy and it's the same with guitar, so why ignore that :'(
03:08:105 - i would decrase the volume here, since it's a calm part

[Easy]

check aimod because there are some ds errors in this diff
00:15:627 (4,1) - not sure if you were intended to make a blanket here, but i'm pointing it anyways
01:23:495 (1) - i'd prefer to don't use this type of slider since it might be confusing... if you really wan't to emphasize that part 2 circles would be a better option imo
02:54:994 (2) - same reasons as above

i have nothing to point out about the normal diff ... sorry for the short mod ><

good luck <3

riffy

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riffy 2016-05-02T05:57:42+00:00

Didn't fix the last suggestion on Easy as the reverse there stands for the clap and mapping it otherwise would make things even more unnatural. Also, I din't fix the spinner as I did not put much emphasis on the guitar, so I think spuinner does quite well there. The rest was applied, thank you!

Kimitakari

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Kimitakari 2016-05-02T17:35:21+00:00

Can I made a guest difficulty?

riffy

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riffy 2016-05-02T18:58:33+00:00