i think it's alright, but i would like to add a comment
01:38:90 (1,2,3) -
01:41:54 (1,2,3,4) -
when comparing these 2 they sound the same in the song (to me) but they aren't placed the same. my suggestion is
01:38:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - move (1) 1/4 back on the timeline (lands on blue tick) and move (2) 1/8 back on the timeline (will land on yellow) and fix the spacing
or
01:38:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - move them on the timeline like i said earlier and remove (6,7)
but these are just suggestions
Starz*
01:38:90 (1,2,3) -
01:41:54 (1,2,3,4) -
when comparing these 2 they sound the same in the song (to me) but they aren't placed the same. my suggestion is
01:38:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - move (1) 1/4 back on the timeline (lands on blue tick) and move (2) 1/8 back on the timeline (will land on yellow) and fix the spacing
or
01:38:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - move them on the timeline like i said earlier and remove (6,7)
but these are just suggestions
Starz*