1. Dancehall Rave (4.64 stars, 309 notes)
2. Hardcore Rave!!! (5 stars, 561 notes)
3. Soft Rave (1.06 stars, 94 notes)

AngelHoney wrote:

Hardcore Rave!!!

00:14:427 - add a note ? nah
00:16:403 - ^ or slider or 00:16:261 (4) - move to 00:16:403 ? nah im following the vocals
00:35:598 (1) - BPM*2 ? XD no ty
01:53:791 - add a note ? nah
02:08:753 - ^^
02:09:882 - ^^
02:11:011 - ^^
02:14:398 (9) - new combo ? fixed
02:14:963 (17) - ^ fixed

cool map!!!
star&kudosu

AngelHoney wrote:

Hardcore
HP Drain Rate -1 or -2 ? nah

00:35:598 (1) - end at 00:36:374 and 00:36:445 add a new slider ? nah
01:31:208 (2,3,4) - move 1 grid up ? or 01:30:926 (1) - move 1 grid down ? nah its fine
01:57:038 (3) - normal-finish ? its fine
02:19:621 (8) - new combo ? fixed but in a difff way
02:35:852 (7) - ^ nah
02:38:110 (7) - ^ nah

Dancehall

00:16:332 (1) - end at 00:17:532 and 00:17:673 - add a note ? nah[color=#FF0000]
00:20:213 (2,3) - Not perfectly stacked
01:01:851 (2) - remove whistle nah
01:37:278 (2) - slider ? nah
01:39:959 (6) - whistle sounds not good ...maybe 01:40:100 (7) - whistle ? there fine
01:42:218 (3) - ^^
01:44:476 (4) - ^^

Soft

00:41:808 - add a note ? and whistle nah
01:08:343 (1) - move 1 grid down ? fixed
01:30:926 (1) - move 1 grid right ? fixed
02:41:498 (2,3) - Not perfectly stacked the map dont even exsist at this point

Xgor wrote:

[All difficulties]
I'm pretty sure that having the stacking leniency that low isn't allowed. long as it aint fully down its fine

[Soft]
Just for it being a easy it doesn't mean that you must have super slow sliders.00:48:485 (6) -
I would prefer if you raised the slider velocity it suits the map so i will keep as is

[Dancehall]
02:42:204 (3) - Maybe move this without grid snap so this is straight under the slider? fixed
I kinda dislike some of these 1/2s because they where pretty hard to follow

[Hardcore]
I must say, i kinda hoped that this diff would be more focused on speed that streams..
Nothing mayor found, i suggest you maybe should lower the HP drain but if you want to keep it, don't change it. ya i like it as is

Pretty good.
Just kinda expected that the map would be a bit faster though
*star*

JInxyjem wrote:

[Dancehall]
00:18:661 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just make everything 1/1 apart. making it 3/2 apart sounds weird. no
00:24:307 (1,2,3,4) - ^ no
00:28:823 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - What the hell is with all the weird hopping. Try it with 00:27:694 (1,2) - 2 white ticks away from each other and 00:28:823 (3,4,5) - 1 white tick away. its called a pattern going along to the rythm lol
01:30:926 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not exactly a fan of your weird ass sounding patterns. its fine
01:42:641 (4) - Too close. Either stack it or move it further away. fixed
01:44:899 (5) - ^ fixed

[Hardcore]
01:37:419 (8) - OVERLAPPED BY (6). fixed


Well it is starrable...

ouranhshc wrote:

Dancehall
01:02:839 (5) - this note feels awkward when playing *there are several that are like this* its fine

im not really sure how to really mod the Hardcore diff

Kytoxid wrote:

White notes + kiai...

[Soft Rave]

00:10:757 (2) - Ends 1/4 too soon? fixed
01:48:993 (1) - Hm. Adjust these sliders so that the bends occur when a new word is spoken? It's synced for the first 2 or so, but the 3rd and after aren't. fixed

[Dancehall]

It's okay. My main gripe is that you have notes stacked under slider ends that are 1/2, 1/1, 3/2, or 2/1 after the slider end, so they're hard to predict the timing of, especially if you don't know the song. (like most wouldn't) its kinda what i was after, ppl will kno the song after playing easy diff, and also the approach circles are pretty much easy to read at that part

[Hardcore]

01:43:629 (6) - Not vertical. fixed
02:13:834 (1) - Eh, I'd like it more if the turns weren't so jagged here; the stream'll already kill enough people. thats kinda my stream style

Star~

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

"hymn" on the title should be capitalized, I guess.

Remove file .osb and full submit.

[Difficulties]

[Dancehall Rave]

00:16:332 (1) - Never start spinners on blue tick if not really necessary, please.

[Hardcore Rave!!!]

01:07:214 (8) - New combo.