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Delis

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-23T12:25:59+00:00

Loneight wrote:
Hi o/
Request from My googledoc.

Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue
[general]
add 1000~1500 ms to lead-in , though it will increase automatically when the map rank, the first-note still too suddenly appear for me ;w; 0 was enough I guess but it's probably better, done :>
[Hard]
Useless green line:
green line
03:04:858 -
03:29:044 -
~~some 1/2 jump is easier to misread to 1/1 rhythm, for example: 01:29:742 (5,1) - , how about increase the AR to 7.5?~~ alright, seems other modder had pointed this lol haha yeah... I totally suppose 7.5 is fast for this.. also I'm not sure for players who play hard diffs, but at least some 1/2 jumps are not that hard to read for me with the current AR.
00:29:044 - same as Normal's 00:28:579 (2) - yea
00:44:160 (4) - add a whistle? I think there is same as 00:29:277 (6) - 's start same as Insane diff, ><;
00:53:928 (5,6) - try ctrl+G? flow would be better IMO. And 02:08:346 (6,7) - same as here hmm it will be awkward for the straight slider, I made a zigzag flow 00:53:230 (3,4,5,6) - here. I dunno but it flows worse for me ;w; and 02:08:346 (6,7) - I don't wanna hide under 02:07:649 (4) - head, it would be much harder to read on HD >.< sorry and I think the flow for the straight 1/1 slider is not that bad...
02:19:974 (1) - the flow makes me feel uncomfortable, try to change the slider's direction or use other method? tried to fix! I'm not sure I did though..
explain
great diff :3 XD I thought this was bad, thank you!

[Insane]
Useless green line:
green line
03:04:858 - oops, 02:51:835 - decreased the volume by 10 to make a difference with the green line (and actually it fits), and added 20% for the spinner
00:28:579 (1) - same as Normal's 00:28:579 (2) - sure
00:44:160 (4) - same as Hard's 00:44:160 (4) - I think it doesn't fit because of bass-drum at 00:44:393 - I'm not sure but somehow awkward to listen..
03:10:439 (3) -try ctrl+G, make it curve down would be more suitable for vocal, also better for flow uh sorry I prefer current flow orz
03:44:160 (4,5) - I feel a little weird, seems there should have a jump to emphasize the vocal's change, so 03:44:160 (4) - try ctrl+G, also would make flow better I didn't like the ctrl+g pattern made a jump between (4) and (5) + rearranged some patterns instead.
nothing to say, anyway, great job!
that's all!
good luck and star for you (run

thanks lone for modding and the star! (don't run ww

@captin: update before look through Loneight's mods, changed audio lead-in for your diff too. (it's okay if you applied before update, it doesn't take long to change)

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-08-23T14:41:28+00:00

star

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-23T14:45:55+00:00

thank you! \:D/

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-08-24T14:27:47+00:00

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

01:30:207 this vocal beat should be followed
02:08:346 (6,1) - blanket
generally fine lol, can't find much issues

Hard

02:24:625 (3,1) - blanket
03:29:742 (3,1) - ^

captin's Normal

00:32:067 (3,4) - blanket?
01:27:416 (4,6) - ^
02:46:951 (6,1) - blanket perfect
03:55:556 (5,6) - ^

sry for poor mod orz

a star to u, good song and map

good luck

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-24T20:40:31+00:00

fixed those all from Loneight, HW I think the blankets are all fine enough as is.

thanks!

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Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-24T20:58:49+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane
01:30:207 this vocal beat should be followed indeed, added
02:08:346 (6,1) - blanket t-tried
generally fine lol, can't find much issues
Hard
02:24:625 (3,1) - blanket no idea you meant 02:25:788 (1) - , tried
03:29:742 (3,1) - ^ mmmmm how to, did anyway

a star to u, good song and map

good luck

thank you for modding and the star HW! --/
you should have better if put code or axis for blanket in your mod, mappers who made a lot of weird blanket can't fix the blanket problems properly, it should be helpful

also updated captin diff

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-08-25T12:07:21+00:00

ohooo nagi nagiii <3 star ~★

btw Delis, the romanised title is unrankable actually :c melophia told me on my map to change Nagi-nagi- to be Nagi, and it was unranked because of it. actually we map a same song, but i mapped the short one and you map the full ver hehee

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-08-25T13:15:40+00:00

Delis wrote:
thank you for modding and the star HW! --/
you should have better if put code or axis for blanket in your mod, mappers who made a lot of weird blanket can't fix the blanket problems properly, it should be helpful ok, i see, maybe i'll try, thx for that tip :3

also updated captin diff

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-08-26T10:18:26+00:00

hi hi i i

twitter kara

[Insane]

00:54:393 (1) - ここCtrl+Gしたほうが僕の好みだったり。一つ前の00:50:672 (1,2) - ともspacing合うんじゃないかなと思いました。
今の下にAIMしていく形も好きなので提案として受け取ってくれると
01:59:742 (1,1) - voに合わせたほうが終わりがわかりやすい気がしました。
01:59:742 (1) - end at 02:01:137 -
02:01:602 - spinner end at 02:02:998 - or 02:03:463 -
02:02:998 - で終わらせた場合02:03:463 - に1/2sliderが合うかも。
02:08:346 (6) - 終端にclapあったほうが良さそうo.o
03:28:811 (1) - 03:28:811 - の緑線でBPMx0.8になってて03:29:044 - の緑線でBPMx1.00になってるのってミス？
03:29:044 - の緑線消して大丈夫だと思う。
Hardはx1.00で2つ引いてあったから03:29:044 - 消してokだと思う。

[Normal]

03:04:858 - and 03:29:044 - unnecessary green line?

低BPM作るのうますぎ
rank まってまっす

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-26T13:58:47+00:00

りとるなたそ～～

litoluna wrote:
hi hi i i

twitter kara wwwwww

[Insane]
00:54:393 (1) - ここCtrl+Gしたほうが僕の好みだったり。一つ前の00:50:672 (1,2) - ともspacing合うんじゃないかなと思いました。
今の下にAIMしていく形も好きなので提案として受け取ってくれると CTRL+Gそのままじゃないですがそんな感じに変えてみました！
01:59:742 (1,1) - voに合わせたほうが終わりがわかりやすい気がしました。ここは確か元々それで、指摘されて変えた部分な（はず）なのでこのままで様子見したいです＞＜。
01:59:742 (1) - end at 02:01:137 -
02:01:602 - spinner end at 02:02:998 - or 02:03:463 -
02:02:998 - で終わらせた場合02:03:463 - に1/2sliderが合うかも。って書いてから続いてるのに気づいてこれええな～だったんで1/2スライダーは入れないでいじってみました！
02:08:346 (6) - 終端にclapあったほうが良さそうo.o このスライダー作ったときに消えましたx.xb
03:28:811 (1) - 03:28:811 - の緑線でBPMx0.8になってて03:29:044 - の緑線でBPMx1.00になってるのってミス？
03:29:044 - の緑線消して大丈夫だと思う。yes
Hardはx1.00で2つ引いてあったから03:29:044 - 消してokだと思う。ok~~
[Normal]
03:04:858 - and 03:29:044 - unnecessary green line? 片方ムリヤリunnecessaryじゃなくさせました！！
低BPM作るのうますぎ
rank まってまっす

modありです！！本当にしてくれると思わなかった。。。（今度違う譜面頼もうと思ってたｗｗ）

@mingmichael I will ask some BATs later to confirm that, thank you for pointing out there!　(EDIT) oops, forgot to write thanks for the star too! (EDIT2) changed!

@Hollow Wings no blanket mods in harder diffs = best way though

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Yasora 2014-08-29T14:21:23+00:00

long song omg

Normal

00:39:974 (3,4) - how about make it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1979483 ? slider (4) for following long vocal
00:53:695 (3,4) - honestly I don't really think overlap like this is good. it's like (4) forced place in there 8(
01:16:718 (3,4) - similar with 00:39:974 (3,4) - or if you don't want change, at last give whistle in here.. feels circle (4) is empty lol
01:28:346 (5) - add whistle like 02:46:486 (5) -
01:34:160 - circle with clap?
02:17:416 (4) - whistle on reverse
02:36:253 (5,1) - similar think with 00:53:695 (3,4) - why don't try to make slider (5) tail direction toward (1)? the flow more better imo
03:13:230 (4) - whistle
03:15:091 (2,3) - whistle at beginning. why the whistle suddenly stop in here lol
03:41:370 (5,1) - same as 02:36:253 (5,1) -
03:56:602 - change volume into 30~40% ? finish in spinner end sounds too loud

Hard

00:02:067 - 00:05:788 - 00:09:509 - add note for piano? the current is nice too, but following the piano more be accurate owo like in 00:12:532 (2) -
00:49:509 (4) - move 4 grid left? just make it same spacing between (3) and (5) huehueuhe
00:50:672 (1) - it seems better to just blanket (3)? http://puu.sh/bcIqv/b2c33bff7e.jpg
00:52:532 (1,2) - swap nc. you added nc almost in long white tick right?
00:57:416 (5) - why you skipped cymbal sound in red tick ;w;
01:02:532 (2) - is it for jump purpose? but I guess it's better have spacing like between 01:02:881 (4) - and 01:03:695 (1) - lol I mean move it to 168|172
01:10:439 (4) - stack this more better? or it's just me...
02:15:556 (5) - same as 00:57:416 (5) -
02:19:625 (5) - ctrl + g more be cool o3o
03:15:788 (4) - add whistle at start. feels weird since you added one in (2) and (3) orz
03:25:323 - can you just remove this break... it seems not really needed and weird in gameplay or start break from here
03:40:672 (2) - move 1 grid right hueuheu
04:04:393 - lower volume into 30 ~ 40%?

Insane

00:44:160 (4) - nc here? I just don't expect it's a jump at first lol also that nc make 1-2-3 combo colour uuuwuuwuw
00:50:439 (5) - stack this more better? or it's just me again?
00:58:114 (9) - add finish. it feels connected with finish in 00:57:184 (5) - and 00:58:811 (3) -
01:31:835 (5,1) - swap nc based on your pattern and long white tick hue
02:06:253 (3) - ctrl+g?
02:15:788 - add note with finish.. the cymbal obviously can heard
02:19:277 (1,2,3,4) - um ye flow is nice but imo it's can more interesting if like this -> http://puu.sh/bcJY8/981c62e9c6.jpg
02:24:625 (3) - move 6 grid right? looks better if 02:23:695 (1) - 02:24:160 (2) - and here have similar spacing
03:22:300 (5) - maybe add finish at end with lower volume is nice imo
03:23:463 (1) - ^ but at start
03:25:323 - same as in hard
04:04:393 - lower volume into 30 ~ 40%?

nice map

Melophobia

osu! Alumni

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Melophobia 2014-08-31T04:20:43+00:00

mingmichael wrote:
melophia

*okay*

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-31T04:50:14+00:00

"Yasora"

long song omg

Normal

00:39:974 (3,4) - how about make it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1979483 ? slider (4) for following long vocal nice
00:53:695 (3,4) - honestly I don't really think overlap like this is good. it's like (4) forced place in there 8( idk i like it
01:16:718 (3,4) - similar with 00:39:974 (3,4) - or if you don't want change, at last give whistle in here.. feels circle (4) is empty lol yeah added some whistles throughout
01:28:346 (5) - add whistle like 02:46:486 (5) -
01:34:160 - circle with clap? mm no thanks
02:17:416 (4) - whistle on reverse
02:36:253 (5,1) - similar think with 00:53:695 (3,4) - why don't try to make slider (5) tail direction toward (1)? the flow more better imo I like this, think it looks nice
03:13:230 (4) - whistle
03:15:091 (2,3) - whistle at beginning. why the whistle suddenly stop in here lol idk ww
03:41:370 (5,1) - same as 02:36:253 (5,1) - as before
03:56:602 - change volume into 30~40% ? finish in spinner end sounds too loud

nice map

thanks!

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Nagi
TitleUnicode:凪-nagi-
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Delis
Version:captin's Normal
Source:凪のあすから
Tags:Nagi no asukara captin1
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-09-03T17:33:17+00:00

Yasora wrote:
long song omg

Hard
00:02:067 - 00:05:788 - 00:09:509 - add note for piano? the current is nice too, but following the piano more be accurate owo like in 00:12:532 (2) - they're able to ignore orz
00:49:509 (4) - move 4 grid left? just make it same spacing between (3) and (5) huehueuhe 3 grid looks cute
00:50:672 (1) - it seems better to just blanket (3)? http://puu.sh/bcIqv/b2c33bff7e.jpg somehow I suck at making blanket,,, changed to another pattern
00:52:532 (1,2) - swap nc. you added nc almost in long white tick right? the nc follows the vocals/lyrics ;w; most of nc too!
00:57:416 (5) - why you skipped cymbal sound in red tick ;w; kk
01:02:532 (2) - is it for jump purpose? but I guess it's better have spacing like between 01:02:881 (4) - and 01:03:695 (1) - lol I mean move it to 168|172 okie
01:10:439 (4) - stack this more better? or it's just me... just you...
02:15:556 (5) - same as 00:57:416 (5) - ye
02:19:625 (5) - ctrl + g more be cool o3o this was opposite direction before but this was hard in this diff (some modders say so) I would like to keep as is --;
03:15:788 (4) - add whistle at start. feels weird since you added one in (2) and (3) orz missing san
03:25:323 - can you just remove this break... it seems not really needed and weird in gameplay or start break from here wtf this is best break imo ;w;
03:40:672 (2) - move 1 grid right hueuheu kkkkk
04:04:393 - lower volume into 30 ~ 40%? yea
Insane
00:44:160 (4) - nc here? I just don't expect it's a jump at first lol also that nc make 1-2-3 combo colour uuuwuuwuwit seems over nc but sure
00:50:439 (5) - stack this more better? or it's just me again? sadly, again.
00:58:114 (9) - add finish. it feels connected with finish in 00:57:184 (5) - and 00:58:811 (3) - the sound is too weak to put finish orz
01:31:835 (5,1) - swap nc based on your pattern and long white tick hue afff did nc spam
02:06:253 (3) - ctrl+g? nahh
02:15:788 - add note with finish.. the cymbal obviously can heard pleaseeee let me ignore the sound here ;w; I really don't wanna make a triplet here ._.
02:19:277 (1,2,3,4) - um ye flow is nice but imo it's can more interesting if like this -> http://puu.sh/bcJY8/981c62e9c6.jpg it was fucking weird to play ;w; also doesn't fit since the song is kind of calm
02:24:625 (3) - move 6 grid right? looks better if 02:23:695 (1) - 02:24:160 (2) - and here have similar spacing ububub 02:25:323 (4) - I prefer this flow
03:22:300 (5) - maybe add finish at end with lower volume is nice imo they don't seem to follow any sound so I don't wanna overuse finish this song.
03:23:463 (1) - ^ but at start
03:25:323 - same as in hard sameee
04:04:393 - lower volume into 30 ~ 40%? ye
nice map

thanks for modding Yasora, nice ava btw (best anime

updated normal diff too~~

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-09-03T21:07:55+00:00

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

Recheck! Don't give Kds this post =w=

[General]

looks fine to me.

[captin's Normal]

00:50:672 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:08:811 (4,5) - Same as above.
02:34:858 (3,4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this.
img
03:35:323 (2,3) - Same as above.
img
Nice Normal :3

[Hard]

OD-1 for mapset balance.
00:50:672 (1) - add whistle on slider end. and 00:51:370 (2) - remove whistle. and 00:51:602 (3) - add whistle.
00:53:695 (4) - remove whistle. and 00:53:928 (5) - add whistle.
01:02:532 (2) - and 02:20:672 (2) - remove clap. add finish.
01:06:486 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:07:184 (4) - remove whistle. and 01:07:416 (5) - add whistle.
01:21:370 (4) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:22:067 (5) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
01:27:881 (6) - add whistle on slider end.
01:36:021 (5) - add whistle on slider end. Along back melody.
02:05:091 (1) - add whistle on slider end. and 02:05:788 (2) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
02:08:811 (1,2) - Same as above. (hitsound pattern
02:12:532 (1,2) - Same as above.
02:15:556 (5) - add whistle on slider end.
02:28:346 (2) - add whistle. and 02:28:579 (3) - remove whistle.
02:28:346 (2,3,4) - Why do you use random Distance Snap? I think not much this part. Please use Distance Snap.
02:31:835 (2) - remove whistle. and 02:32:067 (3) - add whistle. and 02:32:300 (4) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
02:35:556 (2) - add whistle on slider reverse.
02:39:509 (3) - add whistle on slider end.
02:40:439 (2) - add whistle.
02:49:277 (6) - add whistle on slider head. and 02:49:742 (7) - add whistle.
03:33:463 (2,3,4,5) - Same as 02:28:346 (2,3,4) -
03:44:625 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 03:45:556 (5) - add whistle.
03:56:718 - add note?
Some hitsound pattern. Please confirm it by yourself =w=

[Insane]

00:26:718 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
00:36:486 (3,4,5,6) - Why do you use random Distance Snap? I think not much this part. Please use Distance Snap.
01:02:532 (2) - and 02:20:672 (7) - Same as Hard diff.
01:09:974 (6) - It is difficult to do Aim.. I think Move X:172 Y:68 better.
01:13:463 (2) - add whistle.
01:14:160 (5) - add whislte on slider end.
01:17:416 (6) - Same as above.
01:32:765 (1) - Remove New Combo. I think not need this place.
01:33:463 (2) - add clap?
01:36:253 - add note.
02:19:277 (1,2,3,4) - Why do you use different patterns? About 01:01:137 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think It's little danger.
02:24:625 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 02:25:556 (5) - add whistle. and 02:25:788 (1) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
02:31:137 (1,2) - Same as Hard diff. (hitsound pattern
02:32:765 (4) - add whistle.
02:34:160 (5) - add New Combo and 02:34:858 (1) - remove New Combo. Please Check 01:16:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
02:35:556 (2) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
02:39:509 (3,5) - slider end and circle. add whistle.
03:36:951 (3) - Move X:344 Y248. Try this. It is mere suggestion.
03:41:835 (4) - Move X:148 Y:312 try this. It is mere suggestion.
03:44:625 (5,2) - Same as 02:39:509 (3,5) - (hitsound pattern
Good job.

Call me Back.

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-09-04T09:36:30+00:00

Satellite wrote:

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

Recheck! Don't give Kds this post =w=

[General]
looks fine to me.
[Hard]
OD-1 for mapset balance. I would rather raise OD + 1 for Insane, free SS for any mods sucks ._.
00:50:672 (1) - add whistle on slider end. and 00:51:370 (2) - remove whistle. and 00:51:602 (3) - add whistle. k
00:53:695 (4) - remove whistle. and 00:53:928 (5) - add whistle. dunno what you meant for but it doesn't that much here imo ._.
01:02:532 (2) - and 02:20:672 (2) - remove clap. add finish. the sound is not that strong to put finishes
01:06:486 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:07:184 (4) - remove whistle. and 01:07:416 (5) - add whistle. k
01:21:370 (4) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:22:067 (5) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end. bb
01:27:881 (6) - add whistle on slider end. sure
01:36:021 (5) - add whistle on slider end. Along back melody. k
02:05:091 (1) - add whistle on slider end. and 02:05:788 (2) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
02:08:811 (1,2) - Same as above. (hitsound pattern
02:12:532 (1,2) - Same as above. these done
02:15:556 (5) - add whistle on slider end. k
02:28:346 (2) - add whistle. and 02:28:579 (3) - remove whistle. the whistle at (3) is for the guitar, also adding a whistle there to make 2 whistles in a row sounds weird for me, so I would like to keep current one.
02:28:346 (2,3,4) - Why do you use random Distance Snap? I think not much this part. Please use Distance Snap. y
02:31:835 (2) - remove whistle. and 02:32:067 (3) - add whistle. and 02:32:300 (4) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end. yes
02:35:556 (2) - add whistle on slider reverse. wao
02:39:509 (3) - add whistle on slider end. kk
02:40:439 (2) - add whistle. I've removed a whistle on purpose to emphasize the bell at 02:40:672
02:49:277 (6) - add whistle on slider head. and 02:49:742 (7) - add whistle. desu
03:33:463 (2,3,4,5) - Same as 02:28:346 (2,3,4) - onaji
03:44:625 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 03:45:556 (5) - add whistle. the reason is same as 02:40:439 (2) -
03:56:718 - add note? nah
Some hitsound pattern. Please confirm it by yourself =w=
[Insane]
00:26:718 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. k
00:36:486 (3,4,5,6) - Why do you use random Distance Snap? I think not much this part. Please use Distance Snap. probably fixed, the spacing was unnoticeable though.
01:02:532 (2) - and 02:20:672 (7) - Same as Hard diff.
01:09:974 (6) - It is difficult to do Aim.. I think Move X:172 Y:68 better. soreha sasugani nai kedo sukosi kaeta
01:13:463 (2) - add whistle. b
01:14:160 (5) - add whislte on slider end. indeed the melody is able to be added a whistle, but the sound also can be ignored to me and 3 whistles in 1/2 are a bit noisy >_>
01:17:416 (6) - Same as above. kokoha yes
01:32:765 (1) - Remove New Combo. I think not need this place. http://puu.sh/bkFOz/f8bbceea21.jpg 1回やったことあるんで通りませんか
01:33:463 (2) - add clap? seems it breaks consistent pattern + for me it doesn't fit here ._.
01:36:253 - add note. dame..
02:19:277 (1,2,3,4) - Why do you use different patterns? About 01:01:137 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think It's little danger. fixed if I understand what you meant properly.
02:24:625 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 02:25:556 (5) - add whistle. and 02:25:788 (1) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
02:31:137 (1,2) - Same as Hard diff. (hitsound pattern ye
02:32:765 (4) - add whistle. oops added
02:34:160 (5) - add New Combo and 02:34:858 (1) - remove New Combo. Please Check 01:16:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the nc in 1st part is following the lyrics (kagayaku) although 2nd part didn't have a lyric which is somehow words to follow. let's see, gonna try it out anyway
02:35:556 (2) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end. yeah
02:39:509 (3,5) - slider end and circle. add whistle. ok_
03:36:951 (3) - Move X:344 Y248. Try this. It is mere suggestion. done
03:41:835 (4) - Move X:148 Y:312 try this. It is mere suggestion. prefer current one ><
03:44:625 (5,2) - Same as 02:39:509 (3,5) - (hitsound pattern oreadded
Good job.
Call me Back.

REALmodありです～～whistleの部分は読みにくすぎたんでちゃんと適用されてなかったりリプと実際違う可能性があります-_-..

edit: changed the timing for correct place --*

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-09-04T14:13:44+00:00

Satellite wrote:
[captin's Normal]
00:50:672 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. don't think it needs to change, this fits fine for me
02:08:811 (4,5) - Same as above.
02:34:858 (3,4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this. cool
img
03:35:323 (2,3) - Same as above. yeah
img
Nice Normal :3

thanks!

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Delis

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Delis 2014-09-04T14:19:00+00:00

updaterino

Satellite

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Satellite 2014-09-04T14:49:11+00:00

irc checked with mapper and change snap to preview time.

Bubbled.

Delis

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Delis 2014-09-05T14:24:15+00:00

Sorry but I popped by self-modding for Insane diff ><

SPOILER

00:28:113 (4,1) - changed rhythm + placement to unstack
00:29:974 (3,1) - replaced nc for no reason
00:33:695 (4,5,1,2) - changed to another pattern for more smooth flow
00:40:207 (6) - moved to the right place of 00:39:509 (5) - for better to look
00:45:091 (1,2,3) - moved to few grid down
00:53:695 (5,6,7) - separated a slider into 2 circles to make a better pattern
01:01:137 (1,2,3,4) - stacked both to make easier to play, also adjusted some patterns after this
01:08:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - for better flow -.-
03:35:091 (5) - sankakku tsukutta

also decreased AR by 0.2 in Hard diff

Satellite

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Satellite 2014-09-05T14:42:52+00:00

Repair Bubbled~

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-09-05T19:15:04+00:00

(*＾▽＾)／

iyasine

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iyasine 2014-09-05T20:15:53+00:00

おめ～！

captin1

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captin1 2014-09-05T20:40:39+00:00

yay

XinCrin

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XinCrin 2014-09-05T22:45:22+00:00

Congrats Delis!

Konei

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Konei 2014-09-05T23:05:03+00:00

Still a somewhat relaxing and cool song, makes me miss Nagi no Asukara ;_;.

Gratz!

litoluna

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litoluna 2014-09-06T00:12:39+00:00

きた！
おめでと～

Satellite

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Satellite 2014-09-06T02:06:46+00:00

おめでとうございます〜！

Lust

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Lust 2014-09-06T02:10:23+00:00

orz im late

congrats!

Umi

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Umi 2014-09-06T15:37:34+00:00

Just pointing something that suprised me

00:06:951 - Is this intentional ? Even if the volum of piano is reduced here, it's not a reason to ignore it. This feel really awkward and empty. You should consider adding a note.

other than this, enjoyable map. :3

Delis

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Delis 2014-09-06T15:44:39+00:00

There was actually a note before, the pattern was more awkward than current one for me ._. that's why I have ignored the piano. Sorry if you are using $1000 headphone, you are right then.

Umi

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Umi 2014-09-06T15:49:09+00:00

U should have keep it though :<

anyways i bought my headphone around $30, not that expensive :p

Yasora

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Yasora 2014-09-07T04:12:51+00:00

Gratsss

mingmichael

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