my bad lolgrumd wrote:
11:48 grumd: Normal
11:49 grumd: 00:47:172 (1,1) - not enough time between spinner and slider
btw fixed \:D/
Thank you so much <3
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btw fixed \:D/
Thank you so much <3
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Ends' Normal Updated
grumd check it out ;D
grumd check it out ;D
oh well
提前Gratz~ XD
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還是沒有Taiko BAT... ;_;
Hi~ 
[General]
Muzukashii]
[
Oni]
call me back while everything is applied ^^
[General]
- offset seems too early , try to use -630(+10ms)
- 00:12:860 - ~ 00:24:860 - try to make the pattern more simple, in order to make good spread with oni
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- 00:06:485 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - though there is 1/6 beat sound, but i suggest you remove 00:06:547 (40,41) - to enhance 00:06:485 (39) - this power also can reflect the song clearly on 00:06:672 (42,43,44,45) -
- 00:46:516 (258) - remove this note? here doesn't have any drum sound or vocal
- 01:15:578 (437) - ^
- 01:01:703 (350) - move to as d? i think it is better with 01:01:047 (345,346,347,348) -
call me back while everything is applied ^^
Thanks for your mod qoot~qoot8123 wrote:
Hi~
[General][
- offset seems too early , try to use -630(+10ms) fixed, and Starfy will fix the remaining diffs.
- 00:12:860 - ~ 00:24:860 - try to make the pattern more simple, in order to make good spread with oni fixed
[Consider using pattern carefully, there is some notes which doesn't have drum or vocal sound
- 00:06:485 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - though there is 1/6 beat sound, but i suggest you remove 00:06:547 (40,41) - to enhance 00:06:485 (39) - this power also can reflect the song clearly on 00:06:672 (42,43,44,45) - It seems that following the 1/6 beats could result in a better flow of notes, so I prefer keeping it.
- 00:46:516 (258) - remove this note? here doesn't have any drum sound or vocal OK.
- 01:15:578 (437) - ^ I could clearly hear a prominent drum sound there, so I would like to keep the note there.
- 01:01:703 (350) - move to as d? i think it is better with 01:01:047 (345,346,347,348) - I think kkd at 01:01:620 (348,349,350) - could fit the vocal better.
call me back while everything is applied ^^
Update: http://puu.sh/b7i19.rar
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Offset changed to -630
And Nardo's taiko diffs updated~~
And Nardo's taiko diffs updated~~
Bubble Congratz
wowwwwwww bubble !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Graaaaaaaaaaaatz moe StarFY
Graaaaaaaaaaaatz moe StarFY
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Thanks~~ <3
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Katz <3
proooooooooooooo
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yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhappy623 wrote:
proooooooooooooo
终于要rank啦！再次恭喜！
QAQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ
虽然由我来说有点不妥，
rank的话可能要找些节奏感比较创新的BAT来看看才行(insane，放着不管可能没人来点..
rank的话可能要找些节奏感比较创新的BAT来看看才行(insane，放着不管可能没人来点..
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我已經盡量在找Sellenite wrote:
虽然由我来说有点不妥，
rank的话可能要找些节奏感比较创新的BAT来看看才行(insane，放着不管可能没人来点..
BAT啥的我們不懂 orz
Popping this bubble, over various unrankable / not acceptable issues~ The main issue is that the difficulty gap between Hard and Insane is too huge. Insane feels like an Extra: I tested it and had problems passing it, while the Hard is just a regular Hard difficulty-wise. You need to map an Insane to fill this gap, sorry.
I'm sorry, but this needs some serious work. The Easy and Normal have spacing issues and generally don't look ready for ranking yet. The Hard seems mostly fine. The Insane is really overmapped and needs some more improvement too.
The mapset definitely needs more mods before it can be ranked. Please search for them after you fixed my mod, and call me back when you have enough mods~
Good luck! Don't be sad now, don't give up - I know you can make it a really great mapset with some more work
Easy
- HP 2 please, more will make newbies die.
- 00:04:620 (3,1) - It makes no sense to have a lower spacing between these objects.
- 00:14:370 (2) - Move to 276|225 to fix the spacing here.
- 00:35:370 (3,4) - Too complex rhythm for an Easy. Also, there is a Polarity Issue between these objects. To fix it, just change the rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/bluqS/62bf0312e5.jpg
- 00:39:870 (3,4) - Ctrl+g them rhythm-wise would follow the song better and is consistent with 00:36:870 (1,2)
- 01:11:370 (3) - Move to 459|127 to fix the spacing
- Hitsounding needs some work too, but we'll do that later if I'm going to recheck this mapset.
End's Normal
- OD 4 please, more is too cruel.
- 00:18:870 (1) - Move the anchor in the middle of the slidertrack, so that the slider looks more clean and fits the song better: http://puu.sh/bluOj/1cc911c38d.jpg
- 00:32:370 (1,2,1) - Good idea, but not good for a Normal difficulty. The movement is extreme and probably not understandable for most Normal players: http://puu.sh/bluXt/c2d85b318e.jpg Please, think of something more staight-forward.
- 00:43:620 (1,2,3) - The stack doesn't really fit in here, why don't you replace it by a reversed slider like 00:42:870 (1) ? Also, get rid of the NC spam around here. Things like that are not appropriate for Normals and they mess up the HP-drain.
- 00:47:182 (1) - This spinner is too short for a Normal. Please, replace it with a slider.
- 01:21:120 (5,1) - Spacing o3o
- 01:23:370 (1,2,3,4) - This cross-movement is not appropriate for Normal, the players don't read after approach circles or numbers, so they won't get this right. Think of something more straight-forward please.
- 01:24:870 (1,2,3,4) - Why do you suddenly switch back to ~1.15 spacing?
- 01:27:120 (4,1) - Spacing again o3o
- 01:28:432 (2) - No. Don't use 1/4-sliders in a Normal. http://puu.sh/blvpC/840caa2ae2.jpg is consistent with Easy
- Hitsounding needs work too.
KwaN's Hard
- 00:19:432 (2,3) - The gap between these notes is a bit too high, it looks almost the same as 00:20:370 (4,5) which is a bit confusing. Just move (3) and (4) a bit downwards, like this: http://puu.sh/blvyU/58d39885bb.jpg
- 00:33:120 (3,4,5,1) - The overlap looks qutie sloppy tbh, are you sure you don't want to stack the slider's tails?
- 01:20:838 (1) - 1/2 is not enough recovery time after a spinner in Hard, please shorten it by 1/2.
- Nice
Deicide
- 00:06:495 (1) - This needs to be 1/6.
- 00:09:870 (1) - This particular overmap sounds really bad, this would be the correct rhythm: http://puu.sh/blwBx/046e03004e.jpg Same applies to 00:10:620 (1,2,3)
- 00:11:932 (4) - Make it a 1/4-slider to get that main instrument's sound at 00:12:026 - http://puu.sh/blwHK/a28810694d.jpg
- 00:13:995 (2,3) - Bad overmap again. Both blue ticks don't exist in the song.
- 00:16:338 (2) - And again. Please remove this circle and add one at 00:16:526 instead.
- 00:17:932 (3,4,1) - This spaced 1/4 seems out of place for such a calm section. Please stack 00:18:776 (4,1) to fix the problem
- 00:20:932 (1) - End it at 00:21:495 and add a circle at 00:21:682 so that you don't ignore the main instrument's sound at 00:21:495
- 00:23:557 (2,3,4,5) - The doubles sound overmapped too. Try this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/blx8I/bce6558c3b.jpg
- 00:30:026 - Here is a sound, but not at 00:28:245 (5,6,1,2) and 00:28:432 (6,1,2,1)
- 00:31:807 (5,6) - The spaced 1/4 plays weird and is overmapped again, try not to map on the blue tick.
- 00:35:370 (1,2,3,4) - Correct rhythm: http://puu.sh/blxoo/e5485dc7bf.jpg
- 00:35:932 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Correct rhythm: http://puu.sh/blxsu/04eea4bf57.jpg
- 00:42:870 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as 00:09:870
- 00:49:151 (4,5) - Overmapped
- 00:50:370 (1,2) - Both overmapped. You could add a 3/4-slider at 00:50:745 to map the sound in the background, but otherwise these should be deleted.
- 00:57:307 (5,6) - Makes more sense if you ctrl+g this rhythm-wise, also because the spaced 1/4 before the slider feels weird.
- 01:07:245 (6,7,8,1) - Quite difficult to read. Also, it would play better if you put 01:07:245 (6) on a different position, for example http://puu.sh/bly1U/333fd4c8b5.jpg
- 01:25:620 (5) - Replace with a circle, the blue tick is overmapped.
- 01:27:120 (1,2,3) - Why do you suddenly use a triplet after the slider instead of a stack?
- I'm sure I didn't get all overmaps / issues, I just checked through it quickly.
I'm sorry, but this needs some serious work. The Easy and Normal have spacing issues and generally don't look ready for ranking yet. The Hard seems mostly fine. The Insane is really overmapped and needs some more improvement too.
The mapset definitely needs more mods before it can be ranked. Please search for them after you fixed my mod, and call me back when you have enough mods~
Good luck! Don't be sad now, don't give up - I know you can make it a really great mapset with some more work
well this insane is surely overmap，but i think it is surely ok for the gap between hard and insane
最高难度ar我觉得有点高低
最高难度ar我觉得有点
All fixed.
@sfy: Don't be sad!
@sfy: Don't be sad!
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388,280,38182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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388,268,43807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,268,44557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,268,44745,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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148,136,48870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,108,49057,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,96,49432,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,84,49807,5,2,0:0:0:0:
364,72,50182,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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416,212,55432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,212,55526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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380,316,55901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,124,58432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,72,59276,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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48,260,60401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,292,60495,2,0,P|104:300|140:292,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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289,132,61807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,184,61995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,270,62183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,56,63495,2,0,L|244:64,3,37.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,36,63870,6,0,P|135:18|64:38,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,108,64432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,108,64526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,108,64620,2,0,L|12:188,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,274,64995,2,0,L|100:200,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,65370,6,0,P|244:124|284:128,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,148,65745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,148,65932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,332,66682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,184,66870,6,0,P|392:140|468:148,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,224,67432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,224,67526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,324,67901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,344,67995,2,0,P|316:352|280:344,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,308,68370,6,0,L|176:196,1,112.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,168,68745,2,0,B|104:152|52:172|52:172|56:144|92:124,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,56,69495,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,84,69682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,60,69870,2,0,L|428:176,2,112.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,328,70995,5,8,0:0:0:0:
184,300,71182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,324,71370,2,0,L|84:208,2,112.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,96,72307,6,0,L|124:92,2,37.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,72682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,72776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,72870,6,0,P|296:112|328:104,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,184,73245,2,0,L|443:172,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,166,73526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,16,73995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,68,74182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,74370,6,0,P|216:108|184:96,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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372,332,75495,5,8,0:0:0:0:
440,272,75682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,184,75870,2,0,L|436:68,2,112.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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317,190,78682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,142,78870,6,0,P|409:218|361:270,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,314,79432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,314,79526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,314,79620,2,0,L|213:330,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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216,173,80651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,173,80745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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304,264,83932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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340,312,87870,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Easy Fixed all
Deicide remapped (3 coffee buff
I don't know which version is better so I need someone to check out my map owo
EDIT: KwaN's Hard Updated
Deicide remapped (3 coffee buff
I don't know which version is better so I need someone to check out my map owo
EDIT: KwaN's Hard Updated
Hello my friend,
As a fan of Campione! I can't pass this song! Anyway, here are my suggestions
As a fan of Campione! I can't pass this song! Anyway, here are my suggestions
[Deicide]
The combo are too short imo, it feels like the song is chopped into smaller pieces, and with the HP of 7, consider reassigning combo? xd for example
00:08:370 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these can be in a combo
00:16:995 (5) - this should be shorter, you missed a drum beat at 00:17:182 - and the vocalist sings that note too xd
00:30:776 - You should add a circle here imo, since you are mapping following the vocal right? And I think it'll be fine for insane if you make the spacing low xD
00:32:182 (5) - With the same idea I guess, you can change this to a 1/4 slider, ending on 00:32:276
00:32:932 (3) - Same as above? xD
00:33:495 (2) - If you decided to follow the vocal, I suggest changing this to a circle only, and add a slider like this
00:36:776 - You missed a drum beat here, you should map this xd
00:36:870 (1,2,3,1) - this part doesn't really make sense at least to me, it did not follow the vocalist, and it missed 2 drum beats on 00:37:432 - and on 00:37:807 - consider remapping this part?
00:38:370 (1,2,3,4,1) - same as above xd
00:40:245 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as above, this part is weird, and feels a bit irritating for me when I play it, I guess it's just me ...
00:50:370 (1,2,3) - this should be deleted and be a small break to emphasize the kiai part in my opinion, since if I turn the sample volume down this part is totally silence too
01:24:401 (4) - this can be a better blanket xd
[KwaN's Hard]
This is actually fun for a hard difficulty, I like!
Normal has some small difficult parts but I guess it's fine, and Easy is ok too I think
That's all I can suggest I guess, good luck with the mapset The combo are too short imo, it feels like the song is chopped into smaller pieces, and with the HP of 7, consider reassigning combo? xd for example
00:08:370 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these can be in a combo
00:16:995 (5) - this should be shorter, you missed a drum beat at 00:17:182 - and the vocalist sings that note too xd
00:30:776 - You should add a circle here imo, since you are mapping following the vocal right? And I think it'll be fine for insane if you make the spacing low xD
00:32:182 (5) - With the same idea I guess, you can change this to a 1/4 slider, ending on 00:32:276
00:32:932 (3) - Same as above? xD
00:33:495 (2) - If you decided to follow the vocal, I suggest changing this to a circle only, and add a slider like this
00:36:776 - You missed a drum beat here, you should map this xd
00:36:870 (1,2,3,1) - this part doesn't really make sense at least to me, it did not follow the vocalist, and it missed 2 drum beats on 00:37:432 - and on 00:37:807 - consider remapping this part?
00:38:370 (1,2,3,4,1) - same as above xd
00:40:245 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as above, this part is weird, and feels a bit irritating for me when I play it, I guess it's just me ...
00:50:370 (1,2,3) - this should be deleted and be a small break to emphasize the kiai part in my opinion, since if I turn the sample volume down this part is totally silence too
01:24:401 (4) - this can be a better blanket xd
[KwaN's Hard]
This is actually fun for a hard difficulty, I like!
Normal has some small difficult parts but I guess it's fine, and Easy is ok too I think
I have glanced through the Normal once and I found several issues.
- Note density between non-kiai and kiai varies too much, try to maintain a certain difficulty level throughout the whole diff.
Non-kiai:
Kiai: - Silent the sliderslide in the prelude, it's quite noisy as sliders ur using are long ones.
- 00:17:557 (2) - The head is following nothing, neither vocal nor instruments.
- 00:23:370 (2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Avoid sudden switching of instruments and vocals. And then you go back to instruments starting from 00:36:870 (1). Map one track only in low difficulties please. Mapping to instruments are recommended as it somehow ruins your hitsound pattern if u follow the vocals.
- I would say mapping in a consistent way would make your diff tidier, for example, 00:42:870 (1,1,2,3,1) - 01:09:495 (6,7,1,2,1) - 01:15:495 (2,1,2,1). I call these music structure as parallel structure, my usual practice is to use same rhythm and only play tricks on the placements. Well, this is just my suggestion.
- 00:47:182 (1,1) - Gap here is definitely too small, as the guideline now is leaving at least 2 beats between spinner and post spinner notes for such high BPM song. That means, you can only start placing notes at 00:48:870.
- 01:28:432 (2) - It's really harsh to use 1/4 sliders in Normal, replace it with a longer one please.
Topic Starter
Thanks :3Shirayuki wrote:
Hello my friend, Hi :3
As a fan of Campione! I can't pass this song! Anyway, here are my suggestions[Deicide]That's all I can suggest I guess, good luck with the mapset
The combo are too short imo, it feels like the song is chopped into smaller pieces, and with the HP of 7, consider reassigning combo? xd for example
00:08:370 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these can be in a combo Fixed :3
00:16:995 (5) - this should be shorter, you missed a drum beat at 00:17:182 - and the vocalist sings that note too xd Fixed :3
00:30:776 - You should add a circle here imo, since you are mapping following the vocal right? And I think it'll be fine for insane if you make the spacing low xD wow good suggestion! Fixed :3
00:32:182 (5) - With the same idea I guess, you can change this to a 1/4 slider, ending on 00:32:276 Hum.. i think there no need a circle :3
00:32:932 (3) - Same as above? xD There no need I think :33
00:33:495 (2) - If you decided to follow the vocal, I suggest changing this to a circle only, and add a slider like this Fixed :3
00:36:776 - You missed a drum beat here, you should map this xd Fixed :3
00:36:870 (1,2,3,1) - this part doesn't really make sense at least to me, it did not follow the vocalist, and it missed 2 drum beats on 00:37:432 - and on 00:37:807 - consider remapping this part?
00:38:370 (1,2,3,4,1) - same as above xd
00:40:245 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as above, this part is weird, and feels a bit irritating for me when I play it, I guess it's just me ...
maybe...I'm considering about this ..
00:50:370 (1,2,3) - this should be deleted and be a small break to emphasize the kiai part in my opinion, since if I turn the sample volume down this part is totally silence too Maybe i decrease the volume of the notes
01:24:401 (4) - this can be a better blanket xd Fixed :3
[KwaN's Hard]
This is actually fun for a hard difficulty, I like!
Normal has some small difficult parts but I guess it's fine, and Easy is ok too I think
Topic Starter
Offset change to -617 and updated
Log with Charles445
15:40 Charles445: does -617 sound better
15:41 StarForYou: i try now :3
15:41 StarForYou: Sounds good
15:41 Charles445: awesome
15:41 StarForYou: i try now :3
15:41 StarForYou: Sounds good
15:41 Charles445: awesome
排版對於新人級別來說算不錯了
但對於hitsound方面我有一個看法
就是clap下得太多 有點濫用 很吵 之類xD
有種感覺就是整張圖都被clap破壞了的感覺orz
但對於hitsound方面我有一個看法
就是clap下得太多 有點濫用 很吵 之類xD
有種感覺就是整張圖都被clap破壞了的感覺orz
Topic Starter
我個人黎講認為ok ge...(?Kawaiwkyik wrote:
排版對於新人級別來說算不錯了
但對於hitsound方面我有一個看法
就是clap下得太多 有點濫用 很吵 之類xD
有種感覺就是整張圖都被clap破壞了的感覺orz
不過我都知自己hitsound用得幾多 orz
睇下點先 >_>
哈囉來摸圖囉 ~
稍微看了一下感覺不太妙 …
我這Kds應該很好拿 ~ <- PLZ PUNCH HIM ~ !
挑不出啥 , 抱歉嚕 =ㄦ= .
Insane 過不了 , 無法給摸 <- 泥怪怪得
Good luck to your map ~ kds 奉上 ~
稍微看了一下感覺不太妙 …
我這Kds應該很好拿 ~ <- PLZ PUNCH HIM ~ !
挑不出啥 , 抱歉嚕 =ㄦ= .
Insane 過不了 , 無法給摸 <- 泥怪怪得
My 摸
[Easy]
我會說出我的建議 , 不喜歡就不要理我 =ㄦ= . ~~
00:04:633 (3) – 頭的 W ( whistle ) 拿掉比較好 .
00:29:383 (1) – 頭加 W , 然後把折返的 W 拿掉 .
00:40:258 (4) – 結束的地方加個C ( clap ).
00:42:883 (1,2) – 在1的頭和2加個音效吧 , N-F 之類的 . 背景音超明顯可是又沒聲音 , 感覺好空 … 2有加鈴聲可是感覺聽不太出來 ( 只有我這樣就不要理我 )
00:46:258 (1) – C .
00:54:883 (1,2) – 把 1 尾巴上的C移到 2 的頭 . 不然2很感覺很空 …
01:06:133 (1) – 把頭的 W 改成 C , 或者加條綠線提高音量 . 不曉得是不是我的問題 , 這鈴聲我覺得不太明顯 … 感覺有人幫你抓癢 , 抓了一點又沒抓完反而又更癢 ( 這甚麼比喻 …… )
01:28:258 (4) – 尾巴在 + W .
[Ends' Normal]
00:56:383 (5) – 這個後面有點空 … 雖然是跟Vocal 的不得已 , 但感覺應該可以加點甚麼 … 像是加短滑條之類的 .
01:07:633 (4,5) – 後面這個加了個 reverse 就比較好 . 總之不要讓它那麼空嘛 .
01:20:008 (3,4) – 這是刻意的嗎 ? 感覺很像沒 Blanket 好 …
… 沒了 = = . 抱歉摸得很爛 .
[KwaN's Hard]
00:18:883 (1,2) – Blanket 歪了 .
01:26:664 (2) – 些微歪 .
01:27:414 (2,3) – 好像有點歪 .
01:28:570 (1) – 尾巴消音好像比較好 ?
…… 其實最歪的是我的 mod .
對不起 , 摸歪了 <- KICK HIM ~~~ !!
我會說出我的建議 , 不喜歡就不要理我 =ㄦ= . ~~
00:04:633 (3) – 頭的 W ( whistle ) 拿掉比較好 .
00:29:383 (1) – 頭加 W , 然後把折返的 W 拿掉 .
00:40:258 (4) – 結束的地方加個C ( clap ).
00:42:883 (1,2) – 在1的頭和2加個音效吧 , N-F 之類的 . 背景音超明顯可是又沒聲音 , 感覺好空 … 2有加鈴聲可是感覺聽不太出來 ( 只有我這樣就不要理我 )
00:46:258 (1) – C .
00:54:883 (1,2) – 把 1 尾巴上的C移到 2 的頭 . 不然2很感覺很空 …
01:06:133 (1) – 把頭的 W 改成 C , 或者加條綠線提高音量 . 不曉得是不是我的問題 , 這鈴聲我覺得不太明顯 … 感覺有人幫你抓癢 , 抓了一點又沒抓完反而又更癢 ( 這甚麼比喻 …… )
01:28:258 (4) – 尾巴在 + W .
[Ends' Normal]
00:56:383 (5) – 這個後面有點空 … 雖然是跟Vocal 的不得已 , 但感覺應該可以加點甚麼 … 像是加短滑條之類的 .
01:07:633 (4,5) – 後面這個加了個 reverse 就比較好 . 總之不要讓它那麼空嘛 .
01:20:008 (3,4) – 這是刻意的嗎 ? 感覺很像沒 Blanket 好 …
… 沒了 = = . 抱歉摸得很爛 .
[KwaN's Hard]
00:18:883 (1,2) – Blanket 歪了 .
01:26:664 (2) – 些微歪 .
01:27:414 (2,3) – 好像有點歪 .
01:28:570 (1) – 尾巴消音好像比較好 ?
…… 其實最歪的是我的 mod .
對不起 , 摸歪了 <- KICK HIM ~~~ !!
Good luck to your map ~ kds 奉上 ~
Topic Starter
fm4a93au04 wrote:
哈囉來摸圖囉 ~
稍微看了一下感覺不太妙 …
我這Kds應該很好拿 ~ <- PLZ PUNCH HIM ~ !
挑不出啥 , 抱歉嚕 =ㄦ= .
Insane 過不了 , 無法給摸 <- 泥怪怪得My 摸[Easy]
我會說出我的建議 , 不喜歡就不要理我 =ㄦ= . ~~
00:04:633 (3) – 頭的 W ( whistle ) 拿掉比較好 .
00:29:383 (1) – 頭加 W , 然後把折返的 W 拿掉 .
00:40:258 (4) – 結束的地方加個C ( clap ).
00:42:883 (1,2) – 在1的頭和2加個音效吧 , N-F 之類的 . 背景音超明顯可是又沒聲音 , 感覺好空 … 2有加鈴聲可是感覺聽不太出來 ( 只有我這樣就不要理我 )
00:46:258 (1) – C .
00:54:883 (1,2) – 把 1 尾巴上的C移到 2 的頭 . 不然2很感覺很空 …
01:06:133 (1) – 把頭的 W 改成 C , 或者加條綠線提高音量 . 不曉得是不是我的問題 , 這鈴聲我覺得不太明顯 … 感覺有人幫你抓癢 , 抓了一點又沒抓完反而又更癢 ( 這甚麼比喻 …… )
01:28:258 (4) – 尾巴在 + W .
對不起 , 摸歪了 <- KICK HIM ~~~ !!
All Fixed 0w0
Good luck to your map ~ kds 奉上 ~ Thank You ;w;
Hey! M4M from your modding queue.
I can’t mod Insanes, but I did mod the rest.
Well, here’s my mod:
Overall great mapset! Just some blankets that have to be fixed.
Hope my mod was helpful.
Good Luck!
I can’t mod Insanes, but I did mod the rest.
Well, here’s my mod:
Easy:
00:10:633 (2,3) – This blanket can be improved. (Use the approach circle)00:31:633 (3,4) - ^00:33:883 (1) – Place this hitcircle here: X:136 Y:172 so it’s perfectly in-line with this circle: 00:33:508 (4) – After you did the above suggestion, also move this slider: 00:35:383 (3) – a bit upward till it’s here: X:344 Y:172.00:40:258 (4,1) – Try to perfect the blanket00:47:758 (3,1) – This has to be blanketed better00:53:758 (2,3) - ^00:59:383 (1) – Curve this slider a bit more like this one: 01:00:508 (2) – to also blanket this hitcircle: 00:59:008 (3) – better01:02:008 (5,1) – Improve the blanket.
You can try to make it look a bit better than the picture above, but I think you get the idea01:06:133 (1) – Make this slider more in-line with this slider: 01:05:383 (4) – by moving it to this spot: X:200 Y:16401:25:258 (2,3) – Blanket?
00:10:633 (2,3) – This blanket can be improved. (Use the approach circle)00:31:633 (3,4) - ^00:33:883 (1) – Place this hitcircle here: X:136 Y:172 so it’s perfectly in-line with this circle: 00:33:508 (4) – After you did the above suggestion, also move this slider: 00:35:383 (3) – a bit upward till it’s here: X:344 Y:172.00:40:258 (4,1) – Try to perfect the blanket00:47:758 (3,1) – This has to be blanketed better00:53:758 (2,3) - ^00:59:383 (1) – Curve this slider a bit more like this one: 01:00:508 (2) – to also blanket this hitcircle: 00:59:008 (3) – better01:02:008 (5,1) – Improve the blanket.
You can try to make it look a bit better than the picture above, but I think you get the idea01:06:133 (1) – Make this slider more in-line with this slider: 01:05:383 (4) – by moving it to this spot: X:200 Y:16401:25:258 (2,3) – Blanket?
Ends' Normal:
00:18:883 (1) – Rather do this?
It looks neater.00:33:133 (2) – Rather place this hitcircle somewhere here: X:248 Y:88 to support the flow the diff00:43:633 (1,2,3) – Try to place these hitcircles on the grid more. Place them somewhere here: X:328 Y:6400:59:945 (2) – Maybe place this hitcircle here: X:344 Y:304, then use this slider: 01:00:133 (3) – to blanket the hitcircle: 00:59:945 (2) – 01:20:008 (3,4) – Rather blanket?01:27:133 (4,1) – Improve this blanket by using the approach circle
00:18:883 (1) – Rather do this?
It looks neater.00:33:133 (2) – Rather place this hitcircle somewhere here: X:248 Y:88 to support the flow the diff00:43:633 (1,2,3) – Try to place these hitcircles on the grid more. Place them somewhere here: X:328 Y:6400:59:945 (2) – Maybe place this hitcircle here: X:344 Y:304, then use this slider: 01:00:133 (3) – to blanket the hitcircle: 00:59:945 (2) – 01:20:008 (3,4) – Rather blanket?01:27:133 (4,1) – Improve this blanket by using the approach circle
KwaN's Hard:
Maybe keep kiai time the same in all diffs00:09:320 (6) – Maybe do this?
Place the added hitcircle on the head of the shortened slider maybe?00:18:883 (1,2) – Try to improve this blanket. It looks messy as it is now01:09:883 (3) – Place this slider here: X:416 Y:112 or here: X:416 Y:56. I just think it has to be placed better01:11:383 (3) – Same with this slider. Place it here: X:96 Y:328 or here: X:96 Y:264That’s all I could find; nice map.
Maybe keep kiai time the same in all diffs00:09:320 (6) – Maybe do this?
Place the added hitcircle on the head of the shortened slider maybe?00:18:883 (1,2) – Try to improve this blanket. It looks messy as it is now01:09:883 (3) – Place this slider here: X:416 Y:112 or here: X:416 Y:56. I just think it has to be placed better01:11:383 (3) – Same with this slider. Place it here: X:96 Y:328 or here: X:96 Y:264That’s all I could find; nice map.
Overall great mapset! Just some blankets that have to be fixed.
Hope my mod was helpful.
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Thanks for your mod!-Nya- wrote:
Hey! M4M from your modding queue.
I can’t mod Insanes, but I did mod the rest.
Well, here’s my mod:Easy:
00:10:633 (2,3) – This blanket can be improved. (Use the approach circle)00:31:633 (3,4) - ^00:33:883 (1) – Place this hitcircle here: X:136 Y:172 so it’s perfectly in-line with this circle: 00:33:508 (4) – After you did the above suggestion, also move this slider: 00:35:383 (3) – a bit upward till it’s here: X:344 Y:172.00:40:258 (4,1) – Try to perfect the blanket00:47:758 (3,1) – This has to be blanketed better00:53:758 (2,3) - ^00:59:383 (1) – Curve this slider a bit more like this one: 01:00:508 (2) – to also blanket this hitcircle: 00:59:008 (3) – better01:02:008 (5,1) – Improve the blanket.
You can try to make it look a bit better than the picture above, but I think you get the idea01:06:133 (1) – Make this slider more in-line with this slider: 01:05:383 (4) – by moving it to this spot: X:200 Y:16401:25:258 (2,3) – Blanket?
All Fixed
Overall great mapset! Just some blankets that have to be fixed.
Hope my mod was helpful.
Good Luck!
Never forgot your request.
[General]
[Easy]
[Ends'Normal]
[KwaN's Hard]
[Deicide]
[Other]
- Red words: Should be fixed.
- Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
- Black words : In my opinion.
[General]
- Widescreen support keep consistent?
- 00:21:883 (3) - Forgot add a NC here?
- 01:06:133 (1) - Do a good blanket better.
- 01:09:883 (1,3) - Feel thess slider head are downbeat , so fit add the finish hitsound , why not add it?
- 01:11:383 (3) - Try to copy (1) make the parallel ?
- 00:24:320 (1,2) - This pattern look like have a bit weird , try to move (87|305) keep the curve?
- 00:36:883 (1) - Missed a finish here? (Downbeat)
- 00:42:883 (1) - Add a finish in slider end?
- 00:44:008 (3) - Seems missed the finish hitsound again.
- 00:47:195 (1,1) - Under the current rules , seems the note have a bit close the spinner end ? Just a suggestion,maybe can consider to add note in 00:47:383 (3) here.
- 01:20:383 (4) - Look the pattern have a bit weird , perhaps can turn a bit angle :
- 01:27:133 (4) - Obviously,the DS need to keep consistent here.
- 01:28:445 (2) - This 1/4 slider end not fit in Normal diff,try to place at 01:28:633 ?
- 00:18:883 (1) - Make blanket better.
- 00:49:445 (1,1,1) - Remove NC , feel still read to easy ,so don't need to do a single NC here (No spam using)
- 00:13:258 (2) - Follow the drum hitsound in slider head will play cool.
- 00:37:258 (2) - DS keep consistent.
- 01:04:445 (4,5,6) - Feel this flow have a bit bad , try to this :
- 01:18:133 (4) - Sounds like have s stream rhythm here , add 1/4 slider or 2 notes?
- 01:28:445 (1) - The slider end place 1/6 and put a spinner feel not fit , suggest change the slider end put the 01:28:539 . (Sounds like at 1/4 placement)
- Looks quality fine,but the Deicide diff just say,the slider jump are not stable, (as like the 01:26:383 (1,2,3) - 1 to 2 and 2 to 3 's DS) , perhaps you can change a bit in your free time.
fm4a93au04 wrote:
00:18:883 (1,2) – Blanket 歪了 . 對 很明顯 lol
01:26:664 (2) – 些微歪 . 嗯
01:27:414 (2,3) – 好像有點歪 . 好像沒有
01:28:570 (1) – 尾巴消音好像比較好 這個whistle是配合結尾的吉他而加的
-Nya- wrote:
- Maybe keep kiai time the same in all diffs ah, my interpretation with other mappers is different, so I would rather keep mine
- 00:09:320 (6) – Maybe do this? hmm? there's no obvious stress on the blue tick..
- 00:18:883 (1,2) – Try to improve this blanket. It looks messy as it is now fixed already in previous mod
- 01:09:883 (3) – Place this slider here: X:416 Y:112 or here: X:416 Y:56. I just think it has to be placed better no, i place it like that as the pitch of the slider head is the highest.
- 01:11:383 (3) – Same with this slider. Place it here: X:96 Y:328 or here: X:96 Y:264 ^
smallboat wrote:
- 00:18:883 (1) - Make blanket better. fixed already in previous mods
- 00:49:445 (1,1,1) - Remove NC , feel still read to easy ,so don't need to do a single NC here (No spam using) no it did really improve readability and indicates players to be aware of the anti-jumps.
Thanks for mods, guys.Koa wrote:
00:20:945 (5) - DS 1.3x should be better k
00:57:508 (3,4,5) - seems crooked not really
01:03:789 - kiai？ huh?
01:28:570 (1) - should at 01:28:539 - ? i listen a lot of times no, it's 1/6 snapped
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400,32,16539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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348,100,27508,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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244,270,62196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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hi ，from your modding queue
General
fine
Easy
01:06:883 (2) - blanket it well
01:08:383 (1,2) - a 2/1 silder will be better
01:09:883 (1) - should be parallel to 01:11:383 (3) -
Ends' Normal
seems lots of place can add finish and whistle
00:18:883 (1) - ugly... try this? http://puu.sh/buq25/96c18b3de2.jpg
00:36:883 (1) - finish
01:00:883 (1) - move right a little bit
KwaN's Hard
00:20:945 (5) - DS 1.3x should be better
00:57:508 (3,4,5) - seems crooked
01:03:789 - kiai？
01:28:570 (1) - should at 01:28:539 - ? i listen a lot of times
Deicide
honestly i must say that clap and finish get a bit noisy especially at the beginning，but....e ,whatever
00:38:008 (4,5) - larger DS because pitch raise here
may try like this http://puu.sh/buogl/1b9262b2ab.png
01:03:883 (1) - that pattern looks strange，try this maybe http://puu.sh/bupdS/a215a8993c.png
01:15:508 (1,2) - i feel weird here,maybe change this into two 1/4 slider like 01:15:133 (4,5) -
01:17:008 (1,2) - large DS ,it‘s too close,i think 3.5x will be cool
01:17:383 (1,2) - ^
01:28:539 - same as hard diff and remove clap
GOOD LUCK!
General
fine
Easy
01:06:883 (2) - blanket it well
01:08:383 (1,2) - a 2/1 silder will be better
01:09:883 (1) - should be parallel to 01:11:383 (3) -
Ends' Normal
seems lots of place can add finish and whistle
00:18:883 (1) - ugly... try this? http://puu.sh/buq25/96c18b3de2.jpg
00:36:883 (1) - finish
01:00:883 (1) - move right a little bit
KwaN's Hard
00:20:945 (5) - DS 1.3x should be better
00:57:508 (3,4,5) - seems crooked
01:03:789 - kiai？
01:28:570 (1) - should at 01:28:539 - ? i listen a lot of times
Deicide
honestly i must say that clap and finish get a bit noisy especially at the beginning，but....e ,whatever
00:38:008 (4,5) - larger DS because pitch raise here
may try like this http://puu.sh/buogl/1b9262b2ab.png
01:03:883 (1) - that pattern looks strange，try this maybe http://puu.sh/bupdS/a215a8993c.png
01:15:508 (1,2) - i feel weird here,maybe change this into two 1/4 slider like 01:15:133 (4,5) -
01:17:008 (1,2) - large DS ,it‘s too close,i think 3.5x will be cool
01:17:383 (1,2) - ^
01:28:539 - same as hard diff and remove clap
GOOD LUCK!