1. Another (4.96 stars, 707 notes)
2. Beginner (3.17 stars, 219 notes)
3. Hyper (4.87 stars, 534 notes)

xipan wrote:

hi alvisto
lao sai 好了没有啊 （拖出去打
这图我玩了，呜哇 好难
本level3感到压力很大
做得还是不错的
但是alace也有做过呢。

gdeath wrote:

ahh...Alace Sensei has mapped this song.
Expect your version : )
btw...need i map sb for this map?

map sb ? Map storyboard ? storyboard can be mapped ? *晕* xD

Overall :
add beatmaniaIIDX into tags/source. xD 最懒惰做的东西，过后会做。。。;p

[Advanced+]
01:49:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - change to continuous reverse slider pattern in order make it easier than your hardest diff?
01:52:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^
01:55:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^ Yea, but this part is so fun~~~ I will keep a note on that
if you accept my suggestion,then i think you should change the name of this diff to [Advanced]
02:29:630 (x) - add a note? Done. ;p

[Conclusion]
fine to me xD I remap some part at the end of the map. xD But I am concerned about the score

You are pretty done well! Thanks for the compliment...
Better than Alace's version. 我羞了

note:use[Another][Hyper][Beginer] as your dif's name?
coz this song from beatmaniaIIDX.(only suggestion)
you really dont follow this advice. Oh.... I didn't know that coz I never play beatmania. xD Well, I can do that if it suits... ;p

Alace wrote:

<Another>
01:03:230 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - parts like this hmm too soft XD i can`t hear it clearly
IMO huge jumps don`t fit this song well

Nice mapset
100 times better than mine lol

1. 00:08:230 (7) - 这里的normal hitsound听着比较奇怪,本来是打算(7,1) 都是normal hitsound的?

Shinxyn wrote:

boo, remap of a ranked song >: :3 :3 :3 I hope I don't get much pressure over this...
Erm, add at least half a second lead-in time? Unless of course, you're trying to have the countdown not say "Are You Ready?"... -dislikes the countdown- =D =D The truth is, I FORGOT to disable countdown, don't worry, I am not a fan of that countdown as well.... xD

Beginner- seems fairly easy... but the overall diff could easily be lowered 1-2 ticks Done...

SPOILER

00:06:830 (3) - flip of (1) plz (left a tick) Done.
00:14:030 (4) - flip of (1) plz (down a tick) Done as well. ;p
00:37:230 - end the kiai a bit early, I saw flashing on 00:42:030 (1) O.o LOL nice mod ! Thanks ! Remove~
02:02:430 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - (added this after noticing on Hyper)... since Beginner sounds more constant than the other two, I don't really mind this part's volume

Hyper- <3 I love this difficulty the most as well...

SPOILER

00:25:630 (4,5) - blah, left a tick (for flip of other side) Done~
01:34:430 (6) - left a tick, it seems out of line compared to (2,4) Yea, agree, done !
02:02:430 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - .... I say remove the hitsounds here or use a lower volume that gradually increases to those 1/4 sliders (which don't have hitsounds... so if you do do the increase in volume, add hitsound to the start of 2 and 4, those slider sound very empty) I like the ideas of gradually increasing volume more. xD Done.
02:35:630 (1) - flip of (9)? (left a tick, doesn't matter) Have to say a no here because spacing between 1 and 2 would look very close. xD
02:41:930 - ....unused timing panel~? Removed. ;p
Couldn't find a better ending spot, oh well, no matter.

Another- 16 mil... its seems very possible to fc (for the pros, not me xD) xD It was harder before shinxyn... xD
Hmmm it... felt slow.. Overall +1! that's better xD done..

SPOILER

00:40:430 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing equal? even though I do see a lot of accelerating spacing, I don't think its really needed for something this short Actually I thought I make the spacing equal already ? xD Because the slider I used is 0.5x BPM, hence, I use X2 DS for this. xD I think I need to ask people to test play to see whether this spacing is confusing or not. Correct me if I am wrong. ;p
02:03:630 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same thing as normal in terms of volume/hitsound Done same as Hyper...
02:38:630 (10) - lalala, randomly spotted this, which is on purpose or both is, 02:37:030 (10) is a accelerated jump, while this one isn't? LOL what a sharp eye, both are accelerated jumps, hence, fixed. xD
Too much spacing changes, there could easily be a huge "new combo for spacing" nazi, but they generally make sense to me... Glad that they make sense... xD

Not much "errors", since most of the map seems on purpose to me xD Yea, they are on purpose, I just hope a BAT won't fore me for this. xD It's been a while since I map this kind of thing.

Don't mind the hitsound volumes, their fine as they are... the mp3's really loud, your hitsounds just make it through Really ? I think that's what I feel when I was reducing the hitsounds volume for all the difficulty. xD But your comment helps, thanks ! I will keep this in mind. ;p
Only thing I didn't like about the full volume hitsound was... I could hear the default sliderslide easily =/ xD Will get to that later, I promise, since this is also bugging me, but right now don't feel like hitsounding... xD

abalee wrote:

a late star

Breeze wrote:

哦哦,完成了啊~ Ohohohohoho~~
那么我也来提点建议

[General]
slider的声音有些听起来不太好听,建议去掉好了,或者用空白的声音
[attachment=0:46c39]soft-sliderslide.rar[/attachment:46c39]
你说得很对，我会去掉的，可是最近有点懒，可是I promise I will do it... xD


[Another]

1. 00:08:230 (7) - 这里的normal hitsound听着比较奇怪,本来是打算(7,1) 都是normal hitsound的?

You are right... xD Fix~ Good eye !

no kds for this post Why not ? You helped me a lot by test playing a lot and giving comments and mods before I finished this map, hence, you deserve a kudosu. Also, I LOVE　爱爱爱　ｙｏｕｒ　ｓｋｉｎ　ｘＤ　Can I kiss your skin ? :O

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Beginner:
Combo mod:
01:20:430 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 01:17:230 (1) xD Sure. Done~
01:40:430 (6,1) - the combo the 6 is in felt too long, so I suggest adding a new combo to 6 and remove the following 1's new combo to follow your pattern Sorry, have to say a no here... xD
02:08:430 (3) - new combo? Sure~
02:40:430 (3) - new combo? Sure too~

Timing section mod:
00:41:630 - unneeded timing section (I suggest you move this timing section to where the one before it is to stop the kiai too) Remove. ;p
02:19:530 - just wondering whyy this is 0.5x BPM Remove. xD coz I copy paste it from Hyper O.O

Hyper:
Timing section mod:
01:55:430 - make this have the same volume as the kiai section after it Done. ;p
02:38:730 - unneeded timing section Removed.

Another:
Timing section mod:
01:01:230 - move back a quarter note
02:52:430 - move back a quarter note for the soft hitclap2 to play correctly (not too sure on this one)
02:54:030 - ^
All 3 are done. ;p

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Very few errors. I am a little scared about Another's hs, but I will leave that to the judgment of others. Don't be scared~ I am courageous enough to push it for rank ! Yawr !
Great map. Star.

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

careless or something.
why countdown on Another?
fix i'll pubble

NICE map.

EDIT:pubble

James2250 wrote:

not going to pop the pubble but plz add preview points to all the diff's and beginner and hyper both have lead in times while another doesn't.
(I also think hp drain on beginner is slightly high too but meh)

MegaManEXE wrote:

So much funnnnnnnnn

Don't forget to resubmit since it asked me for an update, just a reminder so you don't forget XD

stenut wrote:

S.T.A.R.S

as usual

satosid wrote:

Good.
+Star^^

happy30 wrote:

very nice.

[Hyper]

00:08:430 (1) - Normal hitsound on startpoint?

that's all, really, this is ready to go!

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Remove the .osb file from the folder and full submit.

[Difficulties]

[Begineer]
01:55:630 (1) - Too many kiai fountains here. Unrankable. xD Reduce to only 1 fountain. xD

[Hyper]

01:55:630 (1) - Same as Begineer. Remove all kiai fountains.

[Another]

Score is too high. Lower Overall difficulty or HP Drain. I know the score is too high. But I have already try adjusting HP drain and overall difficulty. Only HP drain set to the lowest with overall difficulty at the 5th tick can lower the score, and with that kind of settings, this another difficulty would be

1. Slow and unfun (because of low overall difficulty).
2. HP drain too low to justify for such a hard map. xD

And I really really don't want to resort to cutting down the length of the map since I already cut down several parts of the map. And also, I think it's because there are too many streams that make the score high, but without those stream, this map loses its fun (I think), and I would be sad. xD

Hope this won't hinder this map from getting ranked... ;_;

01:55:630 (1) - Same as Begineer. Removed all kiai.
02:01:230 (5) - 1 square up? Nazi. Adjusted a bit. xD

Larto wrote:

16 Million shouldn't be too bad. The map is hard enough! =3

James wrote:

Another:
*streams are not insanely spaced out, which is really good Yay, thanks ! ^.^

*rhythm (spacingwise) is good also, even if i really dont know the song that much, and i dont sightread, i can still catch up to the beat =D That's the most common feedback that I receive, seems like rhythm/beats mapping is generally more suitable for my mapping style... xD

*oh, and 00:58:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - god i love this section so much!! /me copies to my clipboard (brain) :3 Glad that you love that section xD

*No problem with the other two diffs. :D

*overall i say that this insane is pretty good, almost perfect for my eyes, the only thing that is bugging me is the timing, i think it needs something like +10ms or something? Ii'm not good in timing anymore so i could be wrong though.

*checked the timing with another player, he said its around 438.. Fix the offset already... :3

if is still have my old playing skill im sure that I will be SH-ing this map. too bad its gone already. Hehe. You just returned, aren't you ? You will sure get it back !

Hehe. You just returned, aren't you ? You will sure get it back !

James wrote:

Hehe. You just returned, aren't you ? You will sure get it back !

I doubt I will.

Bubbled again~

osuplayer111 wrote:

After a little but fatal IRC fix...

Ranked~

Breeze wrote:

o.o Finally it got ranked
congratulations, alvi

DaRRi MIx wrote:

WOW Nice!!!

Al-Azif wrote:

Good job :thumbs up: