1. Hard (3.13 stars, 382 notes)
2. Insane (4.59 stars, 590 notes)
3. Normal (1.88 stars, 100 notes)

Smug- wrote:

15:53 Smug-: personally I think you should start at 00:17:869 - If other people suggest this as well I may do this
15:58 Smug-: I would change to CS4 because it's a drag to play on CS 5 Done
16:00 Smug-: so with these empty spaces, 00:55:276 - and 00:56:758 -
16:00 Smug-: maybe try three circles in a triangle
16:00 Smug-: like this http://puu.sh/9yEk5/84ec54549f.jpg
16:01 Smug-: keep rhythm going, and ends on the snare Done
16:01 Smug-: also I would changed to tiny grid size, and bump up your distance snap to 1.0x Done
16:02 Smug-: 00:58:239 (8) - this should be a tick longer I had it mapped wrong, but a tick longer doesn't work either. Fixed though, now it matches the beat correctly.
16:04 Smug-: 01:01:017 - again, fill the gaps, you can get creative with some cool patterns here Done
16:05 Smug-: okay so with this part 01:05:462 (1,2,3) -
16:05 Smug-: That little blip sound holds the same note for 6 circles
16:05 Smug-: but I think you should make the first 3 stack on each other, and then start the jumps on the 4th I don't like how it plays with a stack, but I changed the pattern and it flows much better now.
16:08 Smug-: I can see what you're trying to go for with these 01:07:684 (10,11,12,13) -
16:08 Smug-: but I think they look better if cleaned up a bit http://puu.sh/9yEFK/50393da080.jpg I changed all of them in the first 3 min, though not all to stacks. The remaining ones are in sections I'm planning on remapping anyway.
16:11 Smug-: 01:24:721 (8) - I would put a new combo here to prevent the combo numbers from getting too high
16:11 Smug-: I have ocd with high combo numbers ;w;
16:11 idodgebull3ts: done
16:11 Smug-: 01:29:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these squares are cool, but
16:11 Smug-: maybe when you're returning to the same spot, you should put it in a slightly different position
16:11 Smug-: so it doesn't seem like you're playing a square Done. Also changed up the pattern a bit.

warfu2000 wrote:

First: I think your beatmap will be more readable with the Approach Rate in 9.2 - I think 9.0 it's a little slow.
I'll let this to you: choose 9.0 or 9.1 AR I tried 9.2 and honestly can't notice a difference between that and 9. If other modders suggest the same or similar I'll consider changing it.

And Second: some of the sliders and hitcircles are out of the screen (not the mapping area) Is off the grid considered off screen? When playing the map all the hitobjects are entirely visible on screen with room to spare. If this is just because of my resolution/screen setup and isn't consistent to all players I'll change it. Done

Enju-chan wrote:

01:10 Enju-chan: the map has a very repetetive pattern use
01:11 Enju-chan: if you could be abit more creative when it comes to patterns it would make the map alot more "enjoyable" to play
Remapped several sections to reduce repetition, 2 left to go.

01:15 idodgebull3ts: ok, thanks. I'll try changing up the patterns a bit. Would you mind checking at 01:24:721 - and letting me know if those hitcricles are off screen? Another modder had mentioned that, but it wasn't showing off screen to me
01:16 Enju-chan: i have not noticed any off screen circles
01:16 Enju-chan: oh
01:16 Enju-chan: it is
01:17 Enju-chan: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1738939 just barely off
01:17 Enju-chan: look
Fixed

imoutosan wrote:

Sorry for delay

From queue

[General]
Good song.

[Hard]

00:58:610 - the stress is on the white line. It's not recommended to put stresses on slider ends. Got it, I'll change it up here.
00:58:424 (1,3,5) - distance should be same here Oops, yeah you're right
01:01:017 - add a reverse to 01:00:647 (3) - Makes sense
01:03:980 (2,3) - not good rhythm here imo. Hmm, I kinda see what you're saying. I'll experiment with this a bit.

try

01:12:499 (7,8,9) - keep the distance same as 7 to 8, hard to read now, like 01:16:202 (6,7) - Done
01:25:462 (3,4,5) - 01:26:202 (6,7) - 01:26:943 (8,9) - 01:27:684 (1,2,3) - these jump is too big in Hard. and same to the followings Alright, I'll scale down the jump difficulty a bit.

[Insane]

00:56:017 (1) - two reverses feel not good imo. I sort of liked the double reverse But I see what you're saying and changed it to something similar to your suggestion

try

01:01:758 (7) - delete to fit the music better Done
01:04:906 - add a note Done
01:06:017 (4,5,6,7) - it doesn't need such big jumps here Ah yeah, these were from when I didn't know you could check distance without having distance snap on... Scaled down to 3.0 DS
01:17:313 (13) - nc Done
01:27:684 (1,2,3) - narrow this a bit down. Done
02:20:091 (4) - move to x336 y300 for better flow I like it. Done
02:56:388 (8,9) - too close Hmm, I'll experiment with this a bit
03:18:795 (13) - nc Done
03:19:165 (14,15) - strange flow here, I don't understand Yeah don't know what I was thinking, I'll change it up
03:23:239 (1) - nc like this Done
03:52:869 (8) - move to x368 y288 and rotate 90° Done but not 90 degrees
03:53:795 (11) - move to x168 y328 I like it. Done
04:10:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Great. but with move nc will be better imo. Done
04:13:610 (1,2) - ctrl+g for better flow Done. Also swapped 2 and 3 after so as to keep the flow reversed like before.

chaee wrote:

From:
chaee's queue [NM 2/2] [M4M 2/3] Status: OPEN

[Hard]

01:01:017 (4) - Add a note here and blanket with 01:00:647 (3) - Done. This plays better than the previous suggestion of adding a reverse to the slider.
00:55:647 (3) - Add a note here and stack with 00:56:017 (4) - Done
00:57:128 (5) - Add a note here and stack with 00:57:499 (6) - Done
01:01:573 (5,6) - Fix blanket Done
01:05:091 (4) - Right here is confusing. Distance snap then move other notes Yeah I'll remap this part
01:06:943 (1,2) - New combo Maybe... That would make the combo only 3 long, though I guess that's OK for a hard. I'll experiment with combo lengths and see what works.

[Insane]
I don't mod insanes

Good luck ^^'

CodeS wrote:

Because You Modded my Love Live map < UPS I GOT CONFUSED, Because you modded my Idom@ster Map xD

GENERAL

Are you Planning on this Having an Storyboard? You could take off Widescreen Support. Nope no storyboard plans, I didn't realize that's what that checkbox was for
I feel the Combo Colors should be a bit lighter ones, not so bright, to fit the beautiful and Calm background and Song, Google can do wonderful things http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/04/1 ... de=2350320. Hmm good idea, I hadn't thought of changing the colors

HARD

01:11:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - oh uh, with this AR this kind of patterns can be very, VERY confusing for players that are looking to play an Hard diff, I would do a similar pattern to what you've been doing on zones with similar rhythm on the song. Like 01:08:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , if you check, it's the only pattern that it's kinda different to what you did on similar areas, so might as well keep it constant. Makes sense, I'll change it.

01:52:684 (1) - I would end this spinner on 01:59:721 Hmm you suggested different times in the insane I'll try them out and see which works best.


INSANE

00:57:499 (6) - New Combo here
00:58:239 (1) - Delete this New Combo.
00:58:795 (1) - New Combo Here

All these part from 00:53:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Have really similar rhythm structure, so it will end in 5 combo sections.

01:06:942 (1) - rhythm Change Here, I Would Put new combo.
01:09:906 (1) - ^
01:12:869 (1) - ^
01:15:462 (1) - ^
01:18:424 (1) - ^ (or the next note)
01:21:757 (1) - ^

There are many places on your map where a New Combo could fit based on New rhythm changed (going from fast to Slow ) so you could use those as a guideline, Unless yo want the entire pattern to be in the same color, I understand that, I also like that. but can trick the player, specially in such a Jumpy Map. Try doing that so you could avoid large combos and make a nice visual experience. I'll be trying out all your combo suggestions, might end up bringing up the HP though if having them so short makes it impossible to fail

01:29:350 (2,4) - I Would stack these, Your Map looks clean when it comes to patterns, and these notes like kinda look.. out of place, thought I understand why you Didn't stacked, as it can be a bit confusing if the notes are stacked
01:30:647 (8) - Stack with 01:29:165 (1) - also new combo could fit here. I'll give these a try, though I kinda like the pattern as it is so I may end up leaving it.

01:52:684 (1) - I Would End this spinner Here. 01:55:647 or 02:00:091 I'll try them out

02:25:647 (5) - stack with 02:24:536 (1) - Oh, good catch. That was off from when I switched it from CS5 to CS4.

02:28:239 (1,1) - These spinners feels way too lazy, I would leave the first one and Map what the other covers, as these long sliders can be tiring for those who can't spin fast (even more with 7 OD) Hmm I'll think about it. I see what you're saying about them being lazy, but are they really that tiring though? Both of them can be cleared with only like 250 RPM which (I think?) is pretty slow.

02:28:239 (1,1) - Why the break here?, it had such a nice constant rhythm and then the stop here, You should map this. Yeah my problem with this section was that it was hard to map at a difficulty reasonably close to the rest of the map... So I took any easy out and put spinners in until it picked up again. I'll consider mapping this portion.

04:04:721 (5) - Stack with 04:03:610 (2) - , same with 04:05:462 (7) - Done


Overall I liked the Map, it's a bit over the top with the jumps, but they make perfect sense at what you're trying to make with the mapset, I would wait for more experience modders for mapset changes.


Good Luck!

1. music sounds fine ,you handled the rhythm pretty good.but..why i cant find your kiai mode in your map?
2. 01:08:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe you like jump jump jump....but most of the players or bat dont think so.
3. always circles'jump is my first impression about your map..too few sliders.
4. 02:28:239 (1,1,1) - i guess you love the spinner,but i just think the spinners'time are too long.
   
   in general , i like your insane, hope your map ranked as soon!

pandorawindy wrote:

[insane]

1. music sounds fine ,you handled the rhythm pretty good.but..why i cant find your kiai mode in your map? Ah, yeah. Forgot about kiai, I'll be adding that in now, thanks.
2. 01:08:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe you like jump jump jump....but most of the players or bat dont think so. Heh, I'm suprised these are the jumps you singled out. Anyway the first version of the map was significantly jumpier and got a few complaints so I toned everything down and you're the first to mention the jumps as a problem this iteration. If more people suggest the same, however, I'll definitely change it.
3. always circles'jump is my first impression about your map..too few sliders. Yeah I agree with you that there are too few sliders, I'll experiment with adding some more and see how it works out.
   So I took another look at these and realized they weren't distance snapped consistently, so I'm remapping this pattern. I'm gonna keep the later portions of the map jumpy, but I'll tone it down at the beginning and have it gradually build up to it.
4. 02:28:239 (1,1,1) - i guess you love the spinner,but i just think the spinners'time are too long. I'll probably be mapping this part so spinners will be gone
   
   in general , i like your insane, hope your map ranked as soon! Thanks

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, Dodge! From my queue.

[> Insane <]

1. 01:05:462 (1,2,3,4) - What kind of flow is this? The (2) circle is not stacked well with 01:04:906 (4) - , At least make a star formation. Done.
2. 01:19:906 (5) - This circle is under the healthbar, which is unrankable. Change it's placement. Done.
3. 01:20:831 (4,5) - I don't feel right with this jump. It doesn't make sense with the song track at all.
4. 01:34:906 (6,1) - ^ Changed both.
5. 02:20:462 (5) - Add NC Done.
6. 02:28:980 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle formation, The stacks here is uncomfortable.
7. 02:30:832 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 02:33:795 (7,3) - Overlapped, or on purpose? Didn't even notice, I'll probably remap some of this section + the two you mentioned above.
9. 02:56:758 (9) - Add NC, another pattern. Done.
10. 03:02:313 (8) - ^, but new track of song. Done.
11. 03:08:054 (7,3,4) - Are you trying to stack them? It doesn't stack well.Changed.
12. 03:51:387 (1,2,3,4) - Stacking like this might bore players, Make a formation at least. Eh, this comes immediately after the hardest jumps in the map. I stacked it so that coming off those jumps there's an easy pattern which I then build off of to gradually increase the difficulty in the following sections. If others mention this as a problem I'll change it.
13. 04:15:091 (1,2,3) - Same as 02:28:980 (1,2,3) - I'll think about it.
14. - There are definitely a lot(but not much) of jumps that i didn't mention in this diff, which make no sense at all(Of course it is cool to give the map a bit more exciting stuff with putting jumps, but it's quite overused like this). And it's almost a lack of spacing, just try to consist the DS for the rhythm. If i'm abusing this diff, I'm sorry, This is just my suggestion. I definitely see what you're getting at here, especially with the jumps in the last 40 sec or so. I think I fixed all the problem jumps in the first half of the map and I'll probably end up remapping the sections with the rest. Haha, maybe you are abusing the diff, but I need as much criticism as I can get. I have a feeling that if a BAT were to mod my map at this point I'd be drowning in mapping errors that haven't been pointed out yet.

Good Luck anyway~

-Famous- wrote:

Mod request from my Queue

Really calm and awesome song. I like it!

[Hard]

- HP = 5? Hmm. I think I'll leave it as it is for now and get more opinions before changing it.

00:53:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try that. v Ah, yeah. That fits the music a lot better.

Picture

01:15:462 (4,5,6,7) - Looks very confusing. Changed.

01:26:202 (1,2,3,4) - Looks confusing too, but I guess that's okay. Yeah I'm gonna keep it like this unless more people take issue with it.

02:16:387 (1,2) - Space it a little bit more. Done

02:21:943 (6,1,2) - I think you should move them closer. Eh, I don't like how it feels with 1.0 DS and the jump comes immediately after a slider which makes it a lot easier to hit. I'm gonna leave it like this unless others take issue with it.

02:53:424 (4,1,2) - A little bit more space? Done

02:55:091 (3,4) - ^ Done

02:58:239 (2,3) - More space. Done

[Insane]

00:56:573 (2,3) - Ctrl + g? Done. Also switched 4 and 5 so it flows better.

01:05:462 (1,2,3,4) - Looks a weird. Maybe like this? Had already changed this from the last mod, but hadn't uploaded.

Picture

02:51:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - It's better readable like this.

Picture

02:57:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The same as above.

03:23:980 (4) - The same as above. Add a NC there.

03:25:462 (4) - ^ Changed all the combo stuff

Your mapset is pretty good that far. I like the jumps in Insane. Thanks

Good luck~ :3

Rush_FTK wrote:

I'm sorry for my poor English at first.

Modding

[General]
-The songs may no Kiai time,Since it have same rhythm.(Insane have kiai time) Hmm, that makes sense. I had added it in because someone earlier had commented on the lack thereof. I think I'll leave it in for now though until I get more opinions.

[Hard]

My Opinion:
-01:26:202 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think Shelter them from each other is a good idea. Yeah someone else had mentioned this before as well, I'll change it


[Insane]
Suggestion:
- 01:03:795 add a note Done Actually changed my mind, there's some percussion hitting there, but that's not the beat I'm following
- 01:06:387 (6) Move to x=256 y=24.It's not necessary to let it covered by 01:06:017 (4). Hmm, I can't decide if I like this or the original better. I may end up changing it. I'm keeping it as it is
- 02:56:758 (9) NC. let player know it's a diffierent note arrangement. Ah yeah I haven't uploaded as I'm still applying some earlier mods, this is actually already fixed
- 03:02:313 (8) ^ ^
- 03:02:313 the break started at 03:30:462 is better. Done

My Opinion:
-02:51:943 ~ 02:56:387 I like it! Thanks

When the map is pending,I will see it again:P
good luck*

neonat wrote:

Hard

00:56:758 (6,8) - distance them apart like 00:54:536 (2,3) - so basically make it slightly further apart
01:13:239 (9) - curve the end so it stacks nicely with 01:12:128 (5)
01:32:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - reversing the direction of 01:32:499 (3,4) would make the flow better

Insane

01:25:091 (2,4,6,8) - those finishes don't really fit to the song
04:06:387 (2,3) - blanket

The fixed patterns sometimes just seems weird, seems to force the map to be rigid at some parts where more flow might have been nicer.
Other than that rhythm still seems fine, though this songs requires more out of the box and patterns that you don't actually hear inside because it's quite repetitive and slightly dull. Good Luck