Duca - marry me ? · forum

Xinely

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Xinely 2014-08-09T11:27:09+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
hi guys, m4m from xinely's queue.

this is the second duca marry me map i've modded today :O lol

[General]
do you need eroge in tags? ok
[Easy]
00:14:963 (2,4) - if you're trying to blanket, the slider head is too far so move the red point further to match the distance
00:44:195 (1,2) - (1) slider head is too close for blanket
01:00:695 (3,4) - you can get them to line with 01:02:195 (1) - like http://puu.sh/aKXp6/7193c9b193.png again wrong picture? lol
01:04:445 (4,2) - stack may be confusing has 1/1 gap unstack placement, should be fine
01:34:445 (4) - drag end point further away for blanket
[Insane]
00:11:775 (2,3) - this is a better blanket http://puu.sh/aKW9K/4b6b063b4b.png oh you really baka, wrong pic again
00:20:570 (3,4) - nazi blanket
00:22:632 (5,1) - end point is a little close
00:38:757 (2) - move middle slider point to 228, 320 and end point to 148, 356 for blanket
00:39:695 (1) - move end point to 284, 172
00:43:820 (6) - ctrl-g for better flow nope, the jump for next slider would be gone
00:59:757 (2) - move to 96, 196
01:02:195 (1) - flow from previous object is awkward. try http://puu.sh/aKWtI/9a5a6cf6cb.png or http://puu.sh/aKWxf/61bf33292c.png finally true pics lol, but i feel the flow is fine and nice for jump so i keep mine
01:03:695 (1) - the way this curves to the left and is positioned higher than the previous object is a bit awkward for flow. try moving it lower and curving less like http://puu.sh/aKWCU/49c7ef7f7e.png the flow is fine too so i keep, just little bit different with my style but i'm trying new too
01:13:445 (3) - move middle slider point further and end point closer for blanket
01:15:507 (1) - move middle point to 236, 120
01:20:945 (5) - middle point to 72, 172 and end point to 128, 368
01:22:820 (6,7) - make these parallel? become sharp flow so i prefer smoother instead altho just a bit
01:27:507 (1) - move middle point closer for blanket
Nothing major, it's almost all nazi neatness things.

[/list]

Eh this entire mapset had great flow and rhythm, so I ended up picking out blankets and stuff to make it neater >.<
Good luck!

handsome wrote:
m4m

[INSANE]

00:24:320 (4) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j then reposition, feels better and suited for the music nope, this slider on purpose to make blanket jump
00:41:570 (2,3,4,5) - follow the piano already
01:02:007 (4,1) - awkward jump meanie, this is natural :<
01:07:820 (5,6) - too far, same for subsequent portions repeating the same thing this is easy too
01:20:570 (4,5) - can improve blanket
01:27:132 (4,1) - ^
01:46:257 (3) - i think its better if it was DS'ed. use normal ds

GL on your mapset!

Rtyzen wrote:
M4M~
They're mostly suggestions, you can choose not to follow them
[Easy]
00:08:963 (4) - Normal whistle sounds really loud for this part this is soft o.o
00:37:445 (4) - Add clap on end whistle instead since the sound is piano
00:49:820 (4) - Idk but is this outside the play area? but you should move it in line with 00:50:195 (1) anyway not offscreen, also i don't like straight flow :<

[Insane]
01:40:257 (5) - Too obvious to skip x-1 y-3, or dont make it overlap at all but i can't see overlap on testplay so fine
IMO you are NCing too often for insane. May be just me but I dont think the player needs the health so often that's normal to NC every stanza on Insane :<

Great mapset! Good luck ^^ (ノ･ω･)ノ

no reply = fixed

updated with tags (added eroge and koreapenguin's name)

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2014-08-09T14:30:00+00:00

Super impressive SB lol

[Easy]
00:08:963 (4) - hmm I don't know but is it really a Noraml whistle 0.0 feel a bit strange here
00:49:070 (3) - rotate a bit to make 2&4 symmetrical ~
01:22:445 (3) - this slider can also be rotated to make 2's tail and 1 symmetrical

[KwaN's Normal]
00:12:713 (1) - 好想看到它和00:12:338 (4)一条线上111 不过这样也没事 ;w;
01:08:570 (2,3) - 其实2和3最好不产生遮挡吧 3可以稍微弯一下画个弯的slider
01:47:195 (1) - ._. nice slider

[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:25:445 (3) - This slider seems not in the flow owo I mean maybe ctrl+H it ?
00:42:320 (5,6) - DS seems a bit large for Hard , keep the DS between 1.5~2.0 maybe?
00:55:257 (3) - This circle not feels so well place them like this may feel better

SPOILER

01:03:320 (5,6) - uhh as what I said above,though 2.5 can be played, I think 2.94 is to large as Hard diff
01:05:945 (3) - Not so goodlooking since it really conflicts with the flow,maybe rotate -120° looks better, also you can stack it on 01:07:070 (5) 's tail

[Insane]
00:09:900 (2,3) - I admit that I feel a bit strange here

(But I don't know how to correct it
01:03:132 (3) - blanket ;w;
01:47:195 (1) - I prefer two circles rather than a slider here ;w; since 01:47:195~01:48:507 this part are all instument solo (I don't know what instrument it is TUT)

[K.Penguin's Insane]
01:10:820 (3,4) - DS seems a bit large

Sorry but I'm not in mood now

Just a few poor suggestions~

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-09T15:56:50+00:00

那就不改了 (• ε •)
遮擋是故意的 (• ε •)

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-08-09T18:55:36+00:00

Hi, modding as you requested.

[General]

Since the instrumental intro isn't mapped in any diffs, the timing sections at the beginning are not needed. Replace the first three timing sections with a single one at 00:05:213 with 160bpm.
lol... Just pointing out that in tags, you didn't make the 'n' in IamKwaN's name uppercase, though it doesn't even matter because search/tags are not case sensitive xD

[Easy]

00:08:963 (4) - Use sampleset on end to auto.
00:11:213 (4) - Maybe whistle on end here?
00:35:195 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like the flow is a bit awkward here because the path of (2,3,4) is too different from the curve of (1). I think it would flow better if you moved (1) up and left a bit, and placed (2,3,4) in more of a curved path: http://puu.sh/aLoQQ/30f7b57b84.jpg
00:47:195 (1) - /nazi Improve the blanket: http://puu.sh/aLoX3/394e257d71.jpg (2nd pt. to x:360|y:164, 3rd pt. to x:332|y:80)

[Normal]

01:13:257 (5,6) - I think stack plays better here, since the angle is so sharp.

[Hard]

00:08:963 (5,1) - It flows kinda weird. I'd prefer to see here a similar figure to the one before it. ie. something like this (if possible): http://puu.sh/aLqHY/0d72c1d3d2.jpg
00:13:463 (3) - It's touching the hp bar, making it a bit unpleasant, visually.
00:33:695 (5) - Drum-hitnormal on end.
00:34:445 (7) - Drum-hitnormal on head?
00:40:820 (8) - Drum sampleset with soft-hitclap.
00:49:445 (7) - Hmm.. since the sound in the music is actually between 00:49:632 and 00:49:820 (I'm assuming that's what this sliderwhistle is for), I suggest either changing the rhythm to have a sliderwhistle there instead, or change the sliderwhistle on (7) into drum-whistle on its end.
01:45:695 (5) - Maybe a whistle on the head.

[Insane]

00:23:007 (7,1) - Distance here feels a bit unnatural since it's small spacing coming out of a jump pattern. I suggest reversing (1) and reversing (2) to achieve better spacing and flow like this: http://puu.sh/aLs5d/cc20e95ed9.jpg
00:24:695 (1,2,3) - Flow here is awkward. I suggest rotating (3) like this: http://puu.sh/aLsgy/a1693aa35a.jpg
01:39:507 (3) - Add new combo?

[K.Penguin]

00:31:070 (3,4) - The way these are spaced out makes it too difficult for the player to tell the beat spacing. It's confusing. I think it will be better if you just stack them or make the spacing smaller.
00:45:132 (3,4) - I feel like spacing here needs to be bigger to emphasize the clap beat.
01:00:320 (3) - Ctrl+G plays better in my opinion.

Nice SB. Good luck!

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2014-08-09T21:20:17+00:00

omg i hate you puush, always giving me wrong pictures. maybe i should check them before i paste into mod

Hinsvar

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Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-08-10T11:55:13+00:00

examination wrote:
[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:25:445 (3) - This slider seems not in the flow owo I mean maybe ctrl+H it ? I feel that it is flowing nicely, so I'll keep it for now.
00:42:320 (5,6) - DS seems a bit large for Hard , keep the DS between 1.5~2.0 maybe? Made it a little smaller.
00:55:257 (3) - This circle not feels so well place them like this may feel better I think it's comfortable to play as is...
SPOILER
01:03:320 (5,6) - uhh as what I said above,though 2.5 can be played, I think 2.94 is to large as Hard diff Made it smaller.
01:05:945 (3) - Not so goodlooking since it really conflicts with the flow,maybe rotate -120° looks better, also you can stack it on 01:07:070 (5) 's tail I think it's nice to play and the position is okay like how it is now.

CloudSplash16 wrote:
[Hard]
00:08:963 (5,1) - It flows kinda weird. I'd prefer to see here a similar figure to the one before it. ie. something like this (if possible): http://puu.sh/aLqHY/0d72c1d3d2.jpg Did stuff by myself.
00:13:463 (3) - It's touching the hp bar, making it a bit unpleasant, visually. Moved.
00:33:695 (5) - Drum-hitnormal on end. Done.
00:34:445 (7) - Drum-hitnormal on head? ^
00:40:820 (8) - Drum sampleset with soft-hitclap. ^
00:49:445 (7) - Hmm.. since the sound in the music is actually between 00:49:632 and 00:49:820 (I'm assuming that's what this sliderwhistle is for), I suggest either changing the rhythm to have a sliderwhistle there instead, or change the sliderwhistle on (7) into drum-whistle on its end. Only removed the whistle.
01:45:695 (5) - Maybe a whistle on the head. Done.

Thanks!

yay

osu file format v13

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Title:marry me ?
TitleUnicode:marry me ?
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:Xinely
Version:Hinsvar's Hard
Source:ゴールデンマリッジ
Tags:Golden Marriage Ensemble visual novel vn opening 2 Hinsvar IamKwan koreapenguin eroge
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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Xinely 2014-08-10T15:18:53+00:00

examination wrote:
Super impressive SB lol

[Easy]
00:08:963 (4) - hmm I don't know but is it really a Noraml whistle 0.0 feel a bit strange here ok fixed
00:49:070 (3) - rotate a bit to make 2&4 symmetrical ~
01:22:445 (3) - this slider can also be rotated to make 2's tail and 1 symmetrical

[Insane]
00:09:900 (2,3) - I admit that I feel a bit strange here (But I don't know how to correct it but i don't understand what make to feel strange here
01:03:132 (3) - blanket ;w;
01:47:195 (1) - I prefer two circles rather than a slider here ;w; since 01:47:195~01:48:507 this part are all instument solo (I don't know what instrument it is TUT)

Sorry but I'm not in mood now Just a few poor suggestions~

CloudSplash16 wrote:
Hi, modding as you requested.

[General]
Since the instrumental intro isn't mapped in any diffs, the timing sections at the beginning are not needed. Replace the first three timing sections with a single one at 00:05:213 with 160bpm. it supposed to make perfect timing for SB since i coded some objects on that times :3
lol... Just pointing out that in tags, you didn't make the 'n' in IamKwaN's name uppercase, though it doesn't even matter because search/tags are not case sensitive xD tags are baka. capital or not doesn't give any effect lol
[Easy]
00:08:963 (4) - Use sampleset on end to auto. already fixed from examination
00:11:213 (4) - Maybe whistle on end here? the music is weak so i prefer to keep use hitnormal here, just a taste, sorry TwT
00:35:195 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like the flow is a bit awkward here because the path of (2,3,4) is too different from the curve of (1). I think it would flow better if you moved (1) up and left a bit, and placed (2,3,4) in more of a curved path: http://puu.sh/aLoQQ/30f7b57b84.jpg i fixed the (3) instead here
00:47:195 (1) - /nazi Improve the blanket: http://puu.sh/aLoX3/394e257d71.jpg (2nd pt. to x:360|y:164, 3rd pt. to x:332|y:80)
[Insane]
00:23:007 (7,1) - Distance here feels a bit unnatural since it's small spacing coming out of a jump pattern. I suggest reversing (1) and reversing (2) to achieve better spacing and flow like this: http://puu.sh/aLs5d/cc20e95ed9.jpg
00:24:695 (1,2,3) - Flow here is awkward. I suggest rotating (3) like this: http://puu.sh/aLsgy/a1693aa35a.jpg rotated -10 degree instead
01:39:507 (3) - Add new combo?
[/list]

Nice SB. Good luck!

thanks 4 mods~

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-10T18:48:45+00:00

@Cloud: I think it's fine while I have testplayed it for several times. So, no fix.

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2014-08-10T23:19:38+00:00

@Cloud: all fixed ;3

code

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: marry me.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 70632
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6767,18749,32249,44249,56249,71249,83249,95249,113249
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:marry me ?
TitleUnicode:marry me ?
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:Xinely
Version:K.Penguin's Insane
Source:ゴールデンマリッジ
Tags:Golden Marriage Ensemble visual novel vn opening 2 Hinsvar IamKwan koreapenguin eroge
BeatmapID:475945
BeatmapSetID:200169

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Laurier

1,785 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2014-08-10T23:55:39+00:00

support ☆

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Mei 2014-08-11T00:01:10+00:00

i will marry you ☆~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Xinely 2014-08-11T00:03:17+00:00

updated penguin's diff

also thanks 4 star sellenite, laurier and mei >w<

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-08-12T11:30:26+00:00

Hey。
You once appeared in m4m queue but disappeared
I think butterfly should change a color
01:10:820 - I dont think need so much strobing here...
01:23:163 - oh...I don't like these color chaging,Your storyboard is so well,don't make it destroyed by this,please
[K.Penguin's Insane]
00:31:070 (3,4,5,6) - um...I think stack is better,slider is the best,change a position
at least....hard to read
01:28:632 (4,5) - swap?
01:49:070 (2) - 448,344
Good map!
[Insane]
00:19:445 (4) - blanket?
00:37:820 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1918444
00:43:820 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1918446
01:13:445 (3) - blanket
01:24:695 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1918449
01:31:070 (2) - Ctrl+G 316,260
01:33:320 (5) - 336,368
01:33:882 (2,3,4) - 320,88
01:43:070 (2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1918457
01:47:195 (1,2,3,4) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1918464
01:49:070 (2) - 488,360
[Hinsvar's Hard]
01:05:945 (3,4,5) - I think uncomfortable here
01:49:257 (1) - remove whistle
[KwaN's Normal]
00:31:445 (2,1) - normal里出现没问题么
01:32:195 (1,2,3) - 这里的衔接看起来不太舒服啊
01:47:195 (1) - 最后应该去掉三折？
[Easy]
00:11:213 (4) - blanket
00:53:945 (2) - blanket
01:48:882 (2) - NC?

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-12T11:37:55+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
00:31:445 (2,1) - normal里出现没问题么沒
01:32:195 (1,2,3) - 这里的衔接看起来不太舒服啊改了點
01:47:195 (1) - 最后应该去掉三折？不是,是想強調後面的音

[_Crystal] wrote:
00:31:445 (2,1) - 有点丑耶;w; 為啥人人都吐槽這,明明很漂亮的說 :'(
00:59:945 (2) - 头在48|144看起来DS更平均一些lol 好
01:20:757 (2) - 加个circle这里? 也好
骏姐姐你的normal好赞噢 ~~骏姐姐你好赞噢~~

Loneight wrote:
00:24:507 - need a note to follow the soft sound, which is from the song is very obvious thus it's weird to make there empty. And 00:32:007 - same as here yeah, but only fix first one
00:32:195 (1) - because you use slider-tick to follow snare, it's weird that rotation has a snare hitsound, try to remove the clap would be better nope, the snare is on the reversed sign.
01:05:007 - add a note to follow the snare, reason same as 00:24:507 - done

謝謝

EDIT (fixed some off-grid sliders and Crystal and Loneight's mods):

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 70632
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
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Title:marry me ?
TitleUnicode:marry me ?
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:Xinely
Version:KwaN's Normal
Source:ゴールデンマリッジ
Tags:Golden Marriage Ensemble visual novel vn opening 2 Hinsvar IamKwan koreapenguin eroge
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Last edited by IamKwaN 2014-08-15T08:16:25+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-08-13T08:40:28+00:00

hi m4m o/

[General]

Why not add GDers into your SB? (which appears at 00:26:570)

[K.Penguin's Insane]

00:30:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - omg weird staff here.. hard to read the pattern
00:45:132 (3) - stack on head of 00:45:320 (4) - ?
01:04:632 (3) - 232|208? it shows 1/4 here better imo
01:13:445 (3) - this one?
SPOILER
nice diff!

[Insane]

00:29:945 (4) - do you mean to blanket with 00:29:382 (2) - ? if so, check it better
01:10:445 (7,1) - the spacing here can be confused, consider ctrl+g 01:10:820 (1,2) - together!
01:24:695 (1,2) - how about this?
SPOILER
01:34:351 (1) - cancel NC here and add NC at 01:34:445 (2) -
i love these clean style maps! XD

[Hinsvar's Hard]

00:32:007 (3) - this DS change is hard for a hard diff imo, consider ruduce DS here
can't point out more, a bit hard but fun to play!

[KwaN's Normal]

00:31:445 (2,1) - 有点丑耶;w;
00:59:945 (2) - 头在48|144看起来DS更平均一些lol
01:20:757 (2) - 加个circle这里?
骏姐姐你的normal好赞噢

[Easy]

clear!

~~oh my gosh why is my mod so short?~~
star and good luck!

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2014-08-15T07:43:17+00:00

Hi o/
Request from My googledoc.

Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue

[general]

seems you have unused SB, please remove it or use it
SB
sb\lyrics\alphabet\a.png
sb\lyrics\alphabet\e.png
sb\lyrics\alphabet\m kecil.png
sb\lyrics\alphabet\m.png
sb\lyrics\alphabet\r.png
sb\lyrics\alphabet\y.png
sb\lyrics\hiragana\ri.png
SB load exceeds 5.00x at some places, though it's fine for suddenly appear, I still suggest try anything to reduce as possible as you can. for example: scale the SB\frame.png size to be same as BG

[Easy]

00:10:838 (3,4) - feel a little uncomfortable about the flow, how about this? though will break the shape, but flow would be smooth IMO
code
```
232,148,11213,2,0,P|144:156|92:196,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:30:695 (1) - how about change to this? flow would be more smooth, and shape would be more obvious, just move the 2nd point to 252|208 or try the code
code
```
320,168,30695,6,0,B|252:208|252:208|224:272|168:268|168:268|132:216|152:152,1,300,0|4,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
```
00:41:195 (1) - move to 28|84 to make flow more comfortable
01:37:445 (4) - nazi suggestion: make a perfect blanket?

nothing to say~

[KwaN's Normal]

00:24:507 - need a note to follow the soft sound, which is from the song is very obvious thus it's weird to make there empty. And 00:32:007 - same as here
00:32:195 (1) - because you use slider-tick to follow snare, it's weird that rotation has a snare hitsound, try to remove the clap would be better
01:05:007 - add a note to follow the snare, reason same as 00:24:507 -

~

[Hinsvar's Hard]

00:10:463 (3,4) - really feel strongly weird about the rhythm, I just can't find what they follows ;w; how about make this rhythm to follow vocal obviously?
00:19:445 (3) - just my opinion, how about ctrl+h and move to 416|304? I think the flow would be more suitable to represent the electronic sounds like 00:20:945 (7,8) -
00:22:445 (3) - a little loud for the slider's start of whistle, how about try 50% volume for it?
01:15:507 (5,6) - follow the vocal to make the rhythm would be better because the vocal is more obvious than other sounds
01:25:257 - why there is empty? it makes me feel a little weird, try to add a note to follow the vocal like 01:13:257 (6) - would be better
01:47:007 (8) - feel a little unnecessary about the whistle, I can't find obvious sound to use it, though there seems has a kick sound, try to remove whistle or reduce the volume like 50%

Hi, Hinsvar (run

[Insane]

00:09:619 - how about add a note to follow the piano?
00:24:320 (4) - feel strongly uncomfortable flow, try to move to 272|140 would be better
01:40:257 (3) - nazi suggestion, stack at 01:39:507 (1) - 's end?
01:48:882 (1) - how about move to 432|304? I think would make more suitable jump

~

[K.Penguin's Insane]

00:31:070 (3) - NC to make there easier to read
01:10:820 (3) - how about move to 320|348 to make a overlap? I think would make easier to read or hit this stream

~

that's all
good luck and cool SB!
~~osu need more Duca!~~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Xinely 2014-08-15T08:36:48+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
Hey。
You once appeared in m4m queue but disappeared
I think butterfly should change a color hmm my friends said that's fine so i keep this
01:10:820 - I dont think need so much strobing here...
01:23:163 - oh...I don't like these color chaging,Your storyboard is so well,don't make it destroyed by this,please

[Insane]
00:19:445 (4) - blanket?
00:37:820 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1918444 nope. too high jump on weak sound, normal spacing to stanza
00:43:820 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1918446
01:13:445 (3) - blanket
01:24:695 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1918449
01:31:070 (2) - Ctrl+G 316,260 this is my style. i kinda don't like that way anymore
01:33:320 (5) - 336,368 the flow feel too sharp imo
01:33:882 (2,3,4) - 320,88
01:43:070 (2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1918457 nah, the flow kinda doesn't suit with my taste
01:47:195 (1,2,3,4) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1918464 nice,fixed
01:49:070 (2) - 488,360 i don't like how the flow work there sorry

[Easy]
00:11:213 (4) - blanket
00:53:945 (2) - blanket
01:48:882 (2) - NC? no need for it

[_Crystal] wrote:
hi m4m o/

[General]
Why not add GDers into your SB? (which appears at 00:26:570)
actually i want but why GD-ers name are long like IamKwan and koreapenguin.. i become so lazy to code it again ;-; orz

[Insane]
00:29:945 (4) - do you mean to blanket with 00:29:382 (2) - ? if so, check it better
01:10:445 (7,1) - the spacing here can be confused, consider ctrl+g 01:10:820 (1,2) - together! they don't since NC helping it read with easily
01:24:695 (1,2) - how about this? lol already fixed from ts8zs
SPOILER
01:34:351 (1) - cancel NC here and add NC at 01:34:445 (2) -
i love these clean style maps! XD

~~oh my gosh why is my mod so short?~~
star and good luck!

Loneight wrote:
Hi o/
Request from My googledoc.

[notice]

Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue
[general]
seems you have unused SB, please remove it or use it
SB
sb\lyrics\alphabet\a.png [/color]
sb\lyrics\alphabet\e.png
sb\lyrics\alphabet\m kecil.png
sb\lyrics\alphabet\m.png
sb\lyrics\alphabet\r.png
sb\lyrics\alphabet\y.png
sb\lyrics\hiragana\ri.png
SB load exceeds 5.00x at some places, though it's fine for suddenly appear, I still suggest try anything to reduce as possible as you can. for example: scale the SB\frame.png size to be same as BG [/color]
[Easy]
00:10:838 (3,4) - feel a little uncomfortable about the flow, how about this? though will break the shape, but flow would be smooth IMO aa yap i wanna keep blanket first. i will consider this first
code
232,148,11213,2,0,P|144:156|92:196,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:30:695 (1) - how about change to this? flow would be more smooth, and shape would be more obvious, just move the 2nd point to 252|208 or try the code
code
320,168,30695,6,0,B|252:208|252:208|224:272|168:268|168:268|132:216|152:152,1,300,0|4,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
00:41:195 (1) - move to 28|84 to make flow more comfortable
01:37:445 (4) - nazi suggestion: make a perfect blanket?
nothing to say~

[Insane]
00:09:619 - how about add a note to follow the piano? aa yap but 1/4 is kinda hard for the calm part imo. i just want to keep the 1/2 so it can easily to play
00:24:320 (4) - feel strongly uncomfortable flow, try to move to 272|140 would be better
01:40:257 (3) - nazi suggestion, stack at 01:39:507 (1) - 's end?
01:48:882 (1) - how about move to 432|304? I think would make more suitable jump
~

good luck and cool SB!
~~osu need more Duca!~~ best duca song

thanks 4 mods at all <3
no reply = fixed

EDIT : updated penguin's diff

Last edited by Xinely 2014-08-15T21:08:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2014-08-15T15:28:04+00:00

thanks mod :3 @[_Crystal] @Loneight

trash

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 70632
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:marry me ?
TitleUnicode:marry me ?
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:Xinely
Version:K.Penguin's Insane
Source:ゴールデンマリッジ
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Serena-

454 posts

Joined December 2012

Serena- 2014-08-17T10:28:49+00:00

star from me for the nice SB~
~~want to help but i can't mod standard maps ;w;~~

good luck!

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2014-08-18T14:06:03+00:00

Lezzgo~

Easy

00:12:713 (1,2,3,4) - The beat placement in general here is kinda weird, in which the notes don't exactly follow beat in BG
00:30:695 (1) - Why not use a spinner (I'm sorry but this slider looks kinda ugly)
00:32:195 (1) - If you are really bent on keeping the slider before, do make this blanket the end of the slider
00:38:195 (1) - I don't suggest weird sliders in Easy, but if you think its fine, its fine
00:45:695 (2,3) - Blanket better?
00:53:945 (2,3) - ^
01:08:945 (3,4,5) - Make 345 more circular in terms of flow
01:11:195 (1,2) - Honestly not suggesting this (and others followed after)
01:14:195 (1) - Make this same as 01:12:695 (3) - but rotated? (Or the other way around, because I realized this was for blanket)
01:24:695 (3) - If you are keeping slider 2, blanket?

Honestly, I thought the front was good. Then cam the introduction of weird sliders and weird flow, which I kinda disliked. Not the best Easy.

KwaN

00:06:338 (1) - Honestly, a note here would be good
00:32:195 (1) - Is this meant to not fit around slider 2? Because it looks kinda weird and lopsided
00:47:570 (1,2) - Angle of next slider is kinda sharp, smooth slider 2 out?
00:50:195 (1,2,3) - Make this more horizontal instead of having it broken
01:02:945 (2,3) - Angle these
01:18:695 (3) - I suggest making this start 1/4 beat earlier, since the voice starts there
01:47:195 (1) - This thing is REALLY cool :3

Overall, nicely flowed Normal, other than the occasional flaws, this should be good to go.

Hinsvar

00:07:463 (2) - Maybe shift this higher to match 1?
00:34:445 (7) - Consider making this the same as 00:35:195 (1) - but rotated
00:35:945 (3,4) - Not suggested (breaks symmetry flow)
00:43:257 (8) - Move this further away from 7 so it flows like a circle
00:49:445 (7,8) - Since these aren't parallel, why not make 00:50:757 (2,3) - not parallel as well?
01:02:945 (3,4,5,6) - Make this go 3546 instead
01:05:945 (3,4) - Angle them slightly
01:15:507 (5,6,7,8) - Looks weird, maybe shift 8 away
01:24:695 (5,6) - A note between here?
01:30:695 (5,6,7,1) - Flow from 5 to 7 is weird, because I don't see a need for jagged sliders there
01:44:945 (3) - Same issue mentioned before

Other than the very occasional flow errors, this map flows very well. Nice beat placements as well. Pretty good Hard as expected from Hinsvar~

Insane

00:08:963 (3) - I suggest Ctrl+G this and shift it below 2
00:11:775 (2,3) - Flow cut here is weird http://puu.sh/aXCN9/6a000d81ad.jpg
00:14:025 (4) - Should be blanketted by 3 better
00:23:195 (1,2,3,4) - Since 1 and 2 are as such, why not make 3 and 4 like that as well, but rotated
00:26:195 (1) - Blanket previous combo 2
00:45:695 (1) - Blanket 3?
00:46:257 (2,3) - Flow's broken here http://puu.sh/aXCYw/3ad1d7c911.jpg
00:47:945 (4,5) - ^
00:55:820 (5,6) - ^
00:56:195 (1,3) - Inconsistent blanket with 00:57:695 (1,2) - (there are more after)
01:05:195 (1,2,4) - I don't think these sliders are rotated properly
01:07:070 (2,5) - The sudden change of angle may be bad
01:07:820 (5,6,1) - Dat jump doe
01:08:757 (2) - Consider blanketting this with 1
01:08:945 (3) - Try not to make this cut to 1
01:09:695 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Awkward flow with the chipping
01:16:070 (2,3,4) - Not well blanketted
01:25:070 (2) - Ctrl+G

Since this map sounds very soothing, I don't suggest such broken flow being placed wildly around the map. Also, not suggesting these: 00:55:820 (5,6) - . Patterns were lopsided as well.

KoreaPenguin

00:06:338 (1,2) - Feels broken and unnatural, make 1 smooth in better
00:26:757 (2,3) - Looks forced, maybe make shorter ledge longer
00:27:695 (1,4) - Go for a blanket on previous combo 4
00:30:695 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - May be confusing
00:42:320 (6,1) - Distance snap
01:04:632 (3) - Shift this out a bit more

Very good map, first off. You can start by making blankets tighter/looser by your choice, because some of them look lopsided. Nice blankets as well. Good job~

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-18T14:17:13+00:00

Estellia- wrote:
[KwaN]00:06:338 (1) - Honestly, a note here would be good no, because we have a consensus we all start mapping at 00:06:713.
00:32:195 (1) - Is this meant to not fit around slider 2? Because it looks kinda weird and lopsided o_o i think it fits quite well.
00:47:570 (1,2) - Angle of next slider is kinda sharp, smooth slider 2 out? alrite
00:50:195 (1,2,3) - Make this more horizontal instead of having it broken I don't understand your point but I try to alter it o_o
01:02:945 (2,3) - Angle these ok
01:18:695 (3) - I suggest making this start 1/4 beat earlier, since the voice starts there generally i don't map to vocals
01:47:195 (1) - This thing is REALLY cool :3 w
Thank you w

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Xinely 2014-08-19T01:03:50+00:00

Estellia- wrote:
Lezzgo~

Easy
00:12:713 (1,2,3,4) - The beat placement in general here is kinda weird, in which the notes don't exactly follow beat in BG actually i don't find a way why look weird here. well moved one circle to make smoother flow instead
00:30:695 (1) - Why not use a spinner (I'm sorry but this slider looks kinda ugly) spinner too short
00:32:195 (1) - If you are really bent on keeping the slider before, do make this blanket the end of the slider i don't plan to make blanket here
00:38:195 (1) - I don't suggest weird sliders in Easy, but if you think its fine, its fine that isn't weird slider ;w;
00:45:695 (2,3) - Blanket better? i can't make blanket for 00:46:445 (3,1) - if i fix the blanket
00:53:945 (2,3) - ^
01:08:945 (3,4,5) - Make 345 more circular in terms of flow
01:11:195 (1,2) - Honestly not suggesting this (and others followed after) [color=#FF0000??? owo[/color]
01:14:195 (1) - Make this same as 01:12:695 (3) - but rotated? (Or the other way around, because I realized this was for blanket)
01:24:695 (3) - If you are keeping slider 2, blanket?

Honestly, I thought the front was good. Then cam the introduction of weird sliders and weird flow, which I kinda disliked. Not the best Easy.

Insane
00:08:963 (3) - I suggest Ctrl+G this and shift it below 2 the flow become bad and forced imo
00:11:775 (2,3) - Flow cut here is weird http://puu.sh/aXCN9/6a000d81ad.jpg that is one of circular flow imo and the flow is nice for me
00:14:025 (4) - Should be blanketted by 3 better
00:23:195 (1,2,3,4) - Since 1 and 2 are as such, why not make 3 and 4 like that as well, but rotated nah, i don't find any idea. also i make the lower spacing for 00:24:320 (4) - because the music
00:26:195 (1) - Blanket previous combo 2 that unnecessary since the circle already dissapear on testplay but i fixed the flow little bit here to make smoother flow
00:45:695 (1) - Blanket 3?
00:46:257 (2,3) - Flow's broken here http://puu.sh/aXCYw/3ad1d7c911.jpg what? it played with nicely here
00:47:945 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:55:820 (5,6) - ^ [/color] perhaps you should learn other variation flows except the circular ones :<
00:56:195 (1,3) - Inconsistent blanket with 00:57:695 (1,2) - (there are more after) that really unnecessary :< well move the slider a little bit further
01:05:195 (1,2,4) - I don't think these sliders are rotated properly imo this is fine altho i don't use rotate system. i just make them to follow the flow here
01:07:070 (2,5) - The sudden change of angle may be bad that symmetrical, if i want to put it leftward, where i must put it :<
01:07:820 (5,6,1) - Dat jump doe that's really easy. newbie player like me still can to catch them
01:08:757 (2) - Consider blanketting this with 1 altho the level curve is too high, impossible to make blanket. ok did one
01:08:945 (3) - Try not to make this cut to 1 ee?
01:09:695 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Awkward flow with the chipping ii desu =3=
01:16:070 (2,3,4) - Not well blanketted
01:25:070 (2) - Ctrl+G too easy to catch

Since this map sounds very soothing, I don't suggest such broken flow being placed wildly around the map. Also, not suggesting these: 00:55:820 (5,6) - . Patterns were lopsided as well.

thanks 4 mod

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-08-20T02:53:11+00:00

Storyboard mods + Insane testplay/mods

SPOILER

11:13 *Xinely is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/474563 Duca - marry me?]
11:13 Xinely: my insane here.. i guess not really hard.. 
11:14 Xinely: since i made a SB here. do you have any suggestion that can make it better? owo
11:14 Lanturn: I loved the SB actually
11:15 Xinely: \hype/
11:15 Lanturn: one thing that was a little strange was the butterflies all flap at the same time
11:15 Lanturn: idk if thats possible to make them flap a little different lol
11:16 Xinely: omg.. this is will need recode lol..
11:16 Xinely: on which time?
11:16 Lanturn: lol it isn't a big deal really
11:16 Xinely: ahahaha xD 
11:16 Lanturn: 00:51:601 - around this area they all flap in harmony.. and it's a little strange XD
11:17 Lanturn: I guess you're just horizontally flipping it though over and over
11:18 Xinely: hmm let me try first
11:18 Xinely: yeah you're right lol
11:18 Xinely: hmm but about the flaps.. i tried use 1/1 and it seems more messy ;w;
11:19 Lanturn: lol
11:20 Lanturn: one more thing I noticed. not sure if this is intentional or not
11:20 Lanturn: the Flowers at around 01:29:007 - when they're falling sometimes just vanish completely before reaching the bottom of the screen
11:21 Xinely: omg, i just forgot to fade out them LOL
11:21 Lanturn: lol
11:23 Xinely: fixed XD, thanks 4 remind them!
11:23 Lanturn: 01:35:382 - maybe fade out the girl completely instead of having reappear for half a second?
11:23 Lanturn: after the white flash
11:25 Xinely: yap done XD
11:31 Lanturn: 00:09:713 (1) - cruel anti-jump lol
11:31 Xinely: XD
11:31 Lanturn: It's exactly half of the previous note
11:31 Lanturn: so it looks like a 1/2 note instead of a 1/1 :P
11:32 Xinely: stacked instead /w/
11:34 Lanturn: In all honesty I'm not much of a fan of 00:31:070 (3,4,5,6) - since it doesn't have anything to play with the music, but its just me
11:35 Xinely: i will wait more opinions about it first, i feel altho not really follow the music but it sounds nicely to play here ><
11:35 Lanturn: yeah for sure :p
11:38 Xinely: anything else?
11:38 Xinely: i forgot i can't spectate you because already changed one of your mention here lol
11:38 Lanturn: lol
11:39 Lanturn: why am I always letting go early on 00:44:195 (1) - ?
11:39 Lanturn: twice now I've done it
11:40 Lanturn: 00:36:882 (2) - 
11:40 Xinely: owo, i feel it with 25% but not when use 100% lol
11:40 Lanturn: maybe stack under the 5
11:40 Lanturn: the distance spacing between 1,2 and 2,3 is unbalanced that it's really noticable
11:41 Lanturn: also on my second play, I had no problem hitting that 1/1 space I was talking about earlier
11:41 Lanturn: didn't even think about it
11:41 Xinely: 00:36:882 (2) - 224,108 would be fine? i just want to make triangle pattern here
11:42 Xinely: tweaked the 00:37:070 (3) - too to make better triangle. since this is piano part. i just want to increasing the spacing XD
11:42 Lanturn: ah ok
11:42 Lanturn: That'll work fine then lol
11:42 Xinely: XD
11:43 Lanturn: Extremely nazi: 00:35:195 (1) - try lowering the tail end a bit so it flows a little better into the (2)
11:43 Lanturn: right now it feels like it kinda flows above it
11:43 Lanturn: might just be me though
11:44 Xinely: the blanket become broke here so 00:35:757 (2) - moved this instead XD
11:44 Lanturn: alright lol
11:46 Lanturn: 01:26:570 (2,5) - maybe try blanketing these a little nicer?
11:47 Xinely:  \ok/ 
11:47 Lanturn: oh. didn't notice 01:26:195 (1) -  was symmetrical with it. Not sure what you'd want to do then :P
11:48 Xinely: hai, but moved the circle to make better blanket www
11:48 Lanturn: hehe alright :P
11:49 Lanturn: a couple more nazi blankets if you want them | 01:11:195 (1) -  could be moved up slightly  (or curved in a little more)
11:50 Xinely: yay fixed lol
11:50 Lanturn: 01:20:945 (5) - move the tail of this in slighly to blanket around the (4)
11:50 Xinely: fixed
11:51 Lanturn: and finally this one 01:33:507 (1) - 
11:51 Lanturn: could be moved down a bit
11:51 Xinely: fixed too \w/
11:51 Lanturn: 01:40:257 (3) - x363 y137 to stack under that tail properly

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2014-08-23T01:24:13+00:00

hey~ i'm here from my queue

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Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
use slider tickrate 2. it'll play nicely and more effectively to the piano during gameplay.
00:08:588 (3) - remove this note. i want you to follow the piano instead of the vocals because this comes up too quickly for the beginning.
00:19:445 (1,2) - delete these notes. these notes comp up too soon for beginners after the spinner, so it'll be easier for them if it's removed during gameplay.
00:21:695 (1,2) - remove (2) and extend this slider from a 3/1 to a 4/1 slider so that it'll show more effect and it'll keep the flow steady when following the piano.
00:26:570 (2,3) - for this one, use a repeat slider. it'll be easier to follow for beginners during gameplay.
00:27:695 (1,2,3) - replace this for a 2/1 repeat slider. same reason as above.
00:32:195 (1) - similar as above, but use a 2/1 slider like you did on 00:34:070 (4) - . same reason.
00:35:195 (1) - i don't like how this flows to the piano, especially when this hits the repeat. it feels too uncomfortable and awkward to follow with these whistles. replace this for a 2/1 slider and a circle. it'll be more comfortable and less awkward to follow during gameplay.
00:41:195 (1,2,3) - for this one, i highly suggest that you use this rhythm. i find it a lot easier than the current rhythm during gameplay.
00:47:195 (1) - same as 00:35:195 - .
00:49:070 (3) - replace this for a circle and a 1/1 slider. this follows 2 separate things. the vocals and the piano.
00:50:195 (1,2) - replace this for a 3/2 repeat slider. it'll emphasize the vocals, and it'll make the transition even smoother during gameplay.
00:57:695 (4) - because this part is calm, this repeat slider comes up too suddenly and ruins the calm feeling of the song. replace this for a 2/1 slider and a circle. it'll play more comfortably since it's more calm during gameplay.
01:00:695 (3,4,1) - use a 2/1 repeat slider. it'll create a nice setup for the next part, and it'll play smoothly to the BGM during gameplay. if you do this, don't forget to make the next note a NC.
01:03:695 (2,3) - same as 00:35:195 - .
01:11:195 (1,2,3) - same as 01:00:695, but it'll emphasize the vocals more effectively and create a smooth transition to the next note during gameplay.
01:13:445 (4,5) - replace this for a 1/1 slider so that it'll emphasize that hold in the vocals.
01:17:195 (1,2) - same as 00:35:195 - but it'll be easier to follow the vocals during gameplay.
01:19:070 (4,5) - same as 00:49:070 -
01:23:195 (1,2,3,4) - use this rhythm instead. if you're wondering why there's no note between these sliders, it's because of the vocals. having no note there would emphasize this part of the song.
01:29:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:44:945 (2,3) - replace this for a 1/1 slider followed by a 2/1 slider. same reason as 01:00:695 - .
the rest you can figure out.

[KwaN's Normal]
same as easy about the tickrate.
00:17:588 (4,5) - this part plays unnecessarily because even if it follows the BGM, it doesn't feel like it'll fit. replace this for a spinner ending at 00:18:695 - , remove that repeat slider and make sure to give a 1/1 gap so that players can recover in time.
00:46:070 (4) - this slider doesn't fit with the song, especially if it's following the vocals. it makes it feel awkward to follow during gameplay. replace this for a 1/1 slider followed by a 1/2 repeat so that it'll follow the music a lot smoother during gameplay.
00:56:288 - since you're using a .75 multiplier, it'll affect the spacing and with the DS you're using, it'll decrease. extend the spacing to 1.20x so that the gap is the same throughout the map. keep doing this until you reach 01:01:820 - .
01:08:570 (2,3) - this feels awkward to follow, especially when it's overlapping like this. instead adjust (3) and move it here for a smooth transition to this part of the song.
01:20:195 (1,2,3) - here as well. this time do something like this. same reason as above.
01:47:195 (1) - i'd replace this for a different rhythm. since this isn't the easiest diff, i don't see why a slider this long should be in a normal diff. if this is the easiest diff, i'd leave it alone. try something like this to make it fun for the ending of the song.
consider on working on your rhythm placement a bit, as well as your transitions. some feel comfortable and others don't.

[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:08:025 - i think you should add a circle here mainly because it'll keep the flow steady when following the vocals.
00:11:963 (5,6) - i highly suggest that you add whistles at the end of (5), and at (6) for better emphasis in the piano during gameplay.
00:33:320 (4,5) - consider doing something like this for an effective and smoother transition to the song during gameplay, as well as it'll look fun to follow for players.
00:39:320 (4,5) - same idea as above, but do this. (5) is on the beginning of (3), so the transition would be more fun like i said before.
00:41:945 (3,4,5,6) - space these out separately. stacks like these make it feel like the flow suddenly stopped and then started back up again during gameplay.
01:02:945 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:12:320 (4,5) - the spacing here is inconsistent and that could be out of reach and play uncomfortably for players. instead you should stack (5) on the end of 01:11:945 (3) - to keep the steady transition throughout this combo during gameplay.
i highly want you to consider keeping your combos consistent. there's some that change during mid-vocals/BGM, and others that keep going till a new line/part is heard.

[Insane]
same as easy about the tickrate.
00:06:713 (2,4) - make one of these sliders look like the other for a symmetric pattern, and a steady transition during gameplay.
00:11:213 (1) - consider stacking this at the beginning of 00:10:650 (4) - and at the beginning of 00:10:275 (3) - like this for neatness and a smoother transition.
00:16:463 (2,3,4) - this transition feels really awkward because of how (3,4) are placed. because it's between (2) like this, it feels uncomfortable to follow. do something like this. same reason as above.
00:24:320 (4) - make this a jump. using the default spacing like this breaks the flow of this combo during gameplay.
00:40:820 (3) - adjust this slider so that the transition is even smoother than before like this.
01:02:195 (1) - consider stacking the end of this slider on 01:01:820 (3) - for neatness during gameplay. should look like this.
01:05:195 - because the music starts to pick up again, the slider multiplier should be at 1.00, so add a timing point for that purpose.
01:08:945 (3,4) - do something like this if you can. same reason as 00:11:213 - .
01:29:195 - use a .75 multiplier because this part becomes calm and as of now, the speed of the multiplier ruins the calmness of this part of the song.
01:32:570 (2) - consider making this slider look like 01:32:570 (2) - for a smooth transition and fun pattern to follow for players.
your hitsounds need work. yes they're consistent, but with the calm parts having hitsounds, it ruins that calm feeling to the song.

[K.Penguin's Insane]
same as easy about the tickrate.
00:07:463 (4,5) - the spacing here is out of reach and it could make players feel uncomfortable while playing. move this so that it can blanket (4), and it'll make the transition more comfortable to follow for players during gameplay.
00:11:775 (2) - consider replacing this for a circle and a 1/2 slider so that it'll follow the BGM and vocals separately, and more effectively during gameplay.
00:12:713 (1,3) - one of the sliders should look the same as the other because it'll be a lot smoother in terms of symmetry.
00:22:445 (4,5,6,7,1) - i highly suggest that you do something like this for a more fluent transition in this part of the song.
00:30:695 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - this transition and placement feels really uncomfortable since it's going in a back and forth motion diagoanlly, and that affects the comfort for the player. use the code i provided in the box so that it'll feel more comfortable and more readable to follow.

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00:37:070 (3) - this 1/1 slider breaks the flow when following the piano in this part of the song. use a 1/2 pattern instead like you did previously to keep that flow going.
00:45:132 (3) - i highly want you to consider spacing this out. it feels like the flow suddenly stops and the jump is sudden during gameplay. spacing it out would make it more smoother during gameplay.
01:36:976 (2,3) - space out this triplet. it's breaking consistency with the other triplets in the diff.
i want you to highly consider using a fair amount of default spacing. in this case 1.00x. it feels like there's not that many setups for a jump and it'll play suddenly for players when they're not expecting it.

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on this map

.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Xinely 2014-08-23T06:25:41+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
hey~ i'm here from my queue .

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
use slider tickrate 2. it'll play nicely and more effectively to the piano during gameplay. personally i hate tick rate 2 which make easier to get miss :3
00:08:588 (3) - remove this note. i want you to follow the piano instead of the vocals because this comes up too quickly for the beginning.
00:19:445 (1,2) - delete these notes. these notes comp up too soon for beginners after the spinner, so it'll be easier for them if it's removed during gameplay. the gap imo too long and i become kinda confuse what the music that i follow after that lol
00:21:695 (1,2) - remove (2) and extend this slider from a 3/1 to a 4/1 slider so that it'll show more effect and it'll keep the flow steady when following the piano.
00:26:570 (2,3) - for this one, use a repeat slider. it'll be easier to follow for beginners during gameplay.
00:27:695 (1,2,3) - replace this for a 2/1 repeat slider. same reason as above. nope because the blanket pattern, and i checked the star dropped to 1,28.. no need easier way anymore
00:32:195 (1) - similar as above, but use a 2/1 slider like you did on 00:34:070 (4) - . same reason. aa imo repeat slider is fine here since it just need 1 click on head of slider
00:35:195 (1) - i don't like how this flows to the piano, especially when this hits the repeat. it feels too uncomfortable and awkward to follow with these whistles. replace this for a 2/1 slider and a circle. it'll be more comfortable and less awkward to follow during gameplay. i'm always following piano music as long it still mapable for easy. i can't to fix this one gomene
00:41:195 (1,2,3) - for this one, i highly suggest that you use this rhythm. i find it a lot easier than the current rhythm during gameplay. nice idea, fixed
00:47:195 (1) - same as 00:35:195 - . same as that one too
00:49:070 (3) - replace this for a circle and a 1/1 slider. this follows 2 separate things. the vocals and the piano.
00:50:195 (1,2) - replace this for a 3/2 repeat slider. it'll emphasize the vocals, and it'll make the transition even smoother during gameplay. i'm tipical mapper who will map the music more as i can do for each diff. gomene this is fine to me :<
00:57:695 (4) - because this part is calm, this repeat slider comes up too suddenly and ruins the calm feeling of the song. replace this for a 2/1 slider and a circle. it'll play more comfortably since it's more calm during gameplay.
01:00:695 (3,4,1) - use a 2/1 repeat slider. it'll create a nice setup for the next part, and it'll play smoothly to the BGM during gameplay. if you do this, don't forget to make the next note a NC. nah string sounds force me to do this
01:03:695 (2,3) - same as 00:35:195 - . musics forcing me lol
01:11:195 (1,2,3) - same as 01:00:695, but it'll emphasize the vocals more effectively and create a smooth transition to the next note during gameplay. hmm i want to emphasize vocal on 3rd whitetick as i can with slider's head because the power of vocals
01:13:445 (4,5) - replace this for a 1/1 slider so that it'll emphasize that hold in the vocals. but i'm emphasizing music D:. too much sliders aren't "health" for players too
01:17:195 (1,2) - same as 00:35:195 - but it'll be easier to follow the vocals during gameplay. hmm i feel both rhythm and flow are fine here. gomene
01:19:070 (4,5) - same as 00:49:070 -
01:23:195 (1,2,3,4) - use this rhythm instead. if you're wondering why there's no note between these sliders, it's because of the vocals. having no note there would emphasize this part of the song. err i always try map the musics and that's why i always mapped drums on 2nd and 4th whitetick here. i'm not tipical of vocal mapper style
01:29:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ 01:29:945 - the music is strong. can't emphasize with repeat only
01:44:945 (2,3) - replace this for a 1/1 slider followed by a 2/1 slider. same reason as 01:00:695 - .
the rest you can figure out.

[Insane]
same as easy about the tickrate. consider first, i will ask penguin too
00:06:713 (2,4) - make one of these sliders look like the other for a symmetric pattern, and a steady transition during gameplay.
00:11:213 (1) - consider stacking this at the beginning of 00:10:650 (4) - and at the beginning of 00:10:275 (3) - like this for neatness and a smoother transition. the symmetrical is broke out :<
00:16:463 (2,3,4) - this transition feels really awkward because of how (3,4) are placed. because it's between (2) like this, it feels uncomfortable to follow. do something like this. same reason as above. consider first since i feel fine here, my mouse likes it
00:24:320 (4) - make this a jump. using the default spacing like this breaks the flow of this combo during gameplay.
00:40:820 (3) - adjust this slider so that the transition is even smoother than before like this.
01:02:195 (1) - consider stacking the end of this slider on 01:01:820 (3) - for neatness during gameplay. should look like this.
01:05:195 - because the music starts to pick up again, the slider multiplier should be at 1.00, so add a timing point for that purpose.
01:08:945 (3,4) - do something like this if you can. same reason as 00:11:213 - . but triangle is fine too here. let me keep first gomene
01:29:195 - use a .75 multiplier because this part becomes calm and as of now, the speed of the multiplier ruins the calmness of this part of the song. aa yeah but the musics aren't really calm too. imo 1,0x still acceptable here
01:32:570 (2) - consider making this slider look like 01:32:570 (2) - for a smooth transition and fun pattern to follow for players. flow or next circle would be bad. i making inconsistent shape here for the flow
your hitsounds need work. yes they're consistent, but with the calm parts having hitsounds, it ruins that calm feeling to the song.

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on this map .

thanks 4 mod >_<
no reply = fixed

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-23T08:14:48+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
[KwaN's Normal]
same as easy about the tickrate. it's quite noisy imo.
00:17:588 (4,5) - this part plays unnecessarily because even if it follows the BGM, it doesn't feel like it'll fit. replace this for a spinner ending at 00:18:695 - , remove that repeat slider and make sure to give a 1/1 gap so that players can recover in time. it's even harder for only a-second-spinner and my rhythm here is also fine.
00:46:070 (4) - this slider doesn't fit with the song, especially if it's following the vocals. it makes it feel awkward to follow during gameplay. replace this for a 1/1 slider followed by a 1/2 repeat so that it'll follow the music a lot smoother during gameplay. I don't map to vocal tbh :/
00:56:288 - since you're using a .75 multiplier, it'll affect the spacing and with the DS you're using, it'll decrease. extend the spacing to 1.20x so that the gap is the same throughout the map. keep doing this until you reach 01:01:820 - . ok
01:08:570 (2,3) - this feels awkward to follow, especially when it's overlapping like this. instead adjust (3) and move it here for a smooth transition to this part of the song. it's intentionally being overlapped and i like this kind of pattern as the Easy is much difficult than my expectation.
01:20:195 (1,2,3) - here as well. this time do something like this. same reason as above. ^
01:47:195 (1) - i'd replace this for a different rhythm. since this isn't the easiest diff, i don't see why a slider this long should be in a normal diff. if this is the easiest diff, i'd leave it alone. try something like this to make it fun for the ending of the song. no, i want to leave a deep impression to players after playing my diff.

Thank you.

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koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2014-08-26T05:27:41+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
hey~ i'm here from my queue .

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[K.Penguin's Insane]
same as easy about the tickrate.
00:07:463 (4,5) - the spacing here is out of reach and it could make players feel uncomfortable while playing. move this so that it can blanket (4), and it'll make the transition more comfortable to follow for players during gameplay.
00:11:775 (2) - consider replacing this for a circle and a 1/2 slider so that it'll follow the BGM and vocals separately, and more effectively during gameplay.
00:12:713 (1,3) - one of the sliders should look the same as the other because it'll be a lot smoother in terms of symmetry.
00:22:445 (4,5,6,7,1) - i highly suggest that you do something like this for a more fluent transition in this part of the song.
00:30:695 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - this transition and placement feels really uncomfortable since it's going in a back and forth motion diagoanlly, and that affects the comfort for the player. use the code i provided in the box so that it'll feel more comfortable and more readable to follow.
SPOILER
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00:37:070 (3) - this 1/1 slider breaks the flow when following the piano in this part of the song. use a 1/2 pattern instead like you did previously to keep that flow going.
00:45:132 (3) - i highly want you to consider spacing this out. it feels like the flow suddenly stops and the jump is sudden during gameplay. spacing it out would make it more smoother during gameplay.
01:36:976 (2,3) - space out this triplet. it's breaking consistency with the other triplets in the diff.
i want you to highly consider using a fair amount of default spacing. in this case 1.00x. it feels like there's not that many setups for a jump and it'll play suddenly for players when they're not expecting it.

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on this map .

Insane

osu file format v13

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Title:marry me?
TitleUnicode:marry me?
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:Xinely
Version:K.Penguin's Insane
Source:ゴールデンマリッジ
Tags:Golden Marriage Ensemble visual novel vn opening 2 Hinsvar IamKwan koreapenguin eroge
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I followed about song fit so, when you are talking about jump eh... anyway consider it, i will fix later

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,607 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-26T21:11:18+00:00

[General]

00:01:088 - on this line, go into Timing>Style and check the "Omit first bar line" box, so that the bar lines are correct in Taiko and Mania
SPOILER
-6 offset feels much better for me, remember to resnap all notes, lines, and the preview point afterwards. Mod is done with your original timing
There are two .osb files on fresh download, make sure to delete the older one

[Easy]

00:17:025 (1,1,2) - not enough recovery time after the spinner especially since 1 is so low, would be best to just start at 00:20:195 -
00:29:195 (3,4) - x432 y40, and x336 y68 respectively, will keep the spacing but also blanket 00:28:445 (2,4) -
00:50:195 (1,2,4) - x124 y248 and then x204 y308 will keep spacing and blanket 00:49:070 (3,1) -
00:55:445 (3) - try x344 y192 instead. could also adjust the curve a bit to better wrap around 2
01:04:445 (4) - lowering the middle point will improve the curve + blanket a lot
SPOILER
01:10:445 (4) - I would either stack this on 2 or place at about x168 y192, current spot just seems random
01:13:820 (5,1,2) - would be nice if you could make this into a clean triangle

[KwaN's Normal]

00:11:213 (2) - x196 y69 would make this a nicer triangle, spacing after is easy to fix
00:54:882 (3,4) - x167 y305 would be better for the blanket here
01:03:320 (3,4) - spacing inconsistency, should move 3 down to fix
01:47:195 (1) - I'm...unsure about this. might be better to space out the zig zag a little bit so it slows down the slider less. Could also improve the curve on the longer part.

[Hinsvar's Hard]

Don't see a need for this to be AR7.5, 7 works just fine and would help spread a bit from the Normal
00:11:213 (4) - I get you want to simplify the rhythm, but missing the important vocal note on 00:11:025 - I don't think is a good idea. Try adding a note stacked on 00:11:963 (6) -
00:20:195 (5) - missed drum sample?
00:23:195 (5) - ^
00:42:695 (7) - I think you did this one as an addition instead of sample lol
00:52:445 (3) - should be on head, not end?
00:55:257 (3) - not sure this is a good idea in a Hard, since the end of 00:54:507 (1) - will cover this up till the last second
00:55:070 (2,4) - stack isn't quite perfect D:
00:57:695 (4) - missed drum sample?
01:05:945 (3,4) - try claps on the start of 3 and 4, and remove the one from the end of 3. from what I hear, it fits better with the drum
01:08:945 (3,4) - same as ^
01:29:195 (1) - don't think the whistle on the end fits, sounds weird with the clap
01:29:195 - hearing the same drum pattern as before here, 01:32:195 - too

[Insane]

I would recommend OD7.5 for this, so it's closer to 1 less than AR
00:37:070 (3) - swap this out for 1/2 slider and then a circle? there's another piano note on 00:37:257 - getting skipped, and then having the vocal start on a circle would feel better imo
00:55:820 (5) - having this point more to the right I think would feel better, since right now it doesn't have the best flow going into 6
01:02:007 (4) - x180 y208 would work better for the triangle here
01:05:945 (3,4,5) - try claps on 3 and 5, and then removing from the end of 4. from what I hear, it fits better with the drum
01:08:945 (3,4,1) - same as ^
01:09:695 (2) - move a bit up for the blanket D:
01:10:632 - this skipped drum note will make things confusing, and will probably cause some people to hit 01:10:820 (1) - early. try mapping it out somehow, at the very least making 01:10:445 (7) - a 1/2 slider. (which btw, x196 y208 works better for the stream curve )
01:22:445 (4) - add a clap?
01:29:195 - hearing the same drum pattern as before here, 01:32:195 - too
01:39:507 (1,3) - oh nooooo stacks
01:47:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like this pattern could be a bit more intuitively designed. the triangle 01:47:195 (1,2,3) - goes opposite from the slider's curve flow before, and then 01:47:757 (4,5,6) - switches the flow direction again. Might be best to just re do this pattern, so it's less of a difficulty spike at the end (especially since it's one of the quietest parts of the song)

[K.Penguin's Insane]

Like with Xinely's, would recommend OD8 so it's 1 less than AR
00:10:838 (6) - change to 2 circles so the strong vocal on 00:11:025 - is mapped to a click?
00:14:963 (1) - don't see a need for this NC, might be better to just remove it
00:20:570 (3,4) - I'm hearing the 1/4 triplet here, not 00:20:945 (5,6,7) - , might be better to adjust the rhythm
00:30:695 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - the stacking here made this rhythm hard to read on my first play, would recommend moving these so it's more clear to read
00:37:070 (3) - Same as Xinely's, swap this out for 1/2 slider and then a circle? there's another piano note on 00:37:257 - getting skipped, and then having the vocal start on a circle would feel better imo
01:48:320 (8) - move the whistle from the start to the end? the sound is stronger on the end of the slider

let me know

Hinsvar

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3,799 posts

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Hinsvar 2014-08-27T03:53:15+00:00

[_Crystal] wrote:
[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:32:007 (3) - this DS change is hard for a hard diff imo, consider ruduce DS here This is to emphasize the increase of the music's power in the song. I think it's still comfortable to play.
can't point out more, a bit hard but fun to play!

Loneight wrote:
[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:10:463 (3,4) - really feel strongly weird about the rhythm, I just can't find what they follows ;w; how about make this rhythm to follow vocal obviously? Changed the rhythm I guess.
00:19:445 (3) - just my opinion, how about ctrl+h and move to 416|304? I think the flow would be more suitable to represent the electronic sounds like 00:20:945 (7,8) - I think it already flows nicer as is.
00:22:445 (3) - a little loud for the slider's start of whistle, how about try 50% volume for it? Hmm idk; I feel comfortable with the current volume.
01:15:507 (5,6) - follow the vocal to make the rhythm would be better because the vocal is more obvious than other sounds It feels nicer to follow the instruments... at least for me.
01:25:257 - why there is empty? it makes me feel a little weird, try to add a note to follow the vocal like 01:13:257 (6) - would be better
I believe there's nothing that really needs to be mapped here for a Hard diff...
01:47:007 (8) - feel a little unnecessary about the whistle, I can't find obvious sound to use it, though there seems has a kick sound, try to remove whistle or reduce the volume like 50% Nope; I think it's already alright like how it is now...
Hi, Hinsvar (run w

Estellia- wrote:
Hinsvar
00:07:463 (2) - Maybe shift this higher to match 1? No; it'll break the flow.
00:34:445 (7) - Consider making this the same as 00:35:195 (1) - but rotated Variations are nice!
00:35:945 (3,4) - Not suggested (breaks symmetry flow) This was never meant to be symmetrical though...
00:43:257 (8) - Move this further away from 7 so it flows like a circle Tried to make a more circular flow.
00:49:445 (7,8) - Since these aren't parallel, why not make 00:50:757 (2,3) - not parallel as well? Again, variations. Can't be consistent all the time!
01:02:945 (3,4,5,6) - Make this go 3546 instead Back-and-forth jumps can be difficult in a Hard diff like this.
01:05:945 (3,4) - Angle them slightly Why? They're comfortable to play as is.
01:15:507 (5,6,7,8) - Looks weird, maybe shift 8 away ^
01:24:695 (5,6) - A note between here? Nope; see my reply to captin's mod.
01:30:695 (5,6,7,1) - Flow from 5 to 7 is weird, because I don't see a need for jagged sliders there Curved softly.
01:44:945 (3) - Same issue mentioned before This one is okay, IMO.

Other than the very occasional flow errors, this map flows very well. Nice beat placements as well. Pretty good Hard as expected from Hinsvar~

Byakugan249 wrote:
[Hinsvar's Hard]
00:08:025 - i think you should add a circle here mainly because it'll keep the flow steady when following the vocals. The problem is: It doesn't really follow anything in the song and it... just feels awkward.
00:11:963 (5,6) - i highly suggest that you add whistles at the end of (5), and at (6) for better emphasis in the piano during gameplay. Done.
00:33:320 (4,5) - consider doing something like this for an effective and smoother transition to the song during gameplay, as well as it'll look fun to follow for players. Done.
00:39:320 (4,5) - same idea as above, but do this. (5) is on the beginning of (3), so the transition would be more fun like i said before. ^
00:41:945 (3,4,5,6) - space these out separately. stacks like these make it feel like the flow suddenly stopped and then started back up again during gameplay. I'm pretty sure they're more comfortable to play this way...
01:02:945 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
01:12:320 (4,5) - the spacing here is inconsistent and that could be out of reach and play uncomfortably for players. instead you should stack (5) on the end of 01:11:945 (3) - to keep the steady transition throughout this combo during gameplay. ...Just made the spacing closer I guess.
i highly want you to consider keeping your combos consistent. there's some that change during mid-vocals/BGM, and others that keep going till a new line/part is heard.

captin1 wrote:
[Hinsvar's Hard]
Don't see a need for this to be AR7.5, 7 works just fine and would help spread a bit from the Normal Done.
00:11:213 (4) - I get you want to simplify the rhythm, but missing the important vocal note on 00:11:025 - I don't think is a good idea. Try adding a note stacked on 00:11:963 (6) - Did... things by my own way.
00:20:195 (5) - missed drum sample? I feel that the piano here is not accompanied with a drum sound, thus the absence of it.
00:23:195 (5) - ^ Fixed this one.
00:42:695 (7) - I think you did this one as an addition instead of sample lol ^
00:52:445 (3) - should be on head, not end? ^
00:55:257 (3) - not sure this is a good idea in a Hard, since the end of 00:54:507 (1) - will cover this up till the last second Stacked between 00:55:070 (2,4). ~~(yay circle sandwich)~~
00:55:070 (2,4) - stack isn't quite perfect D: Fixed D:
00:57:695 (4) - missed drum sample? ^
01:05:945 (3,4) - try claps on the start of 3 and 4, and remove the one from the end of 3. from what I hear, it fits better with the drum Sure.
01:08:945 (3,4) - same as ^ ^
01:29:195 (1) - don't think the whistle on the end fits, sounds weird with the clap Hmm idk; I personally feel that it blends very well with the instruments here.
01:29:195 - hearing the same drum pattern as before here, 01:32:195 - too Drum sampleset/Soft addition'd.

Thank you!

@Xinely: Fix-in yang General kalau setuju ya `-`

kebelet nikah (te em)

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IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-08-27T04:27:43+00:00

captin1 wrote:
[KwaN's Normal]
00:11:213 (2) - x196 y69 would make this a nicer triangle, spacing after is easy to fix k
00:54:882 (3,4) - x167 y305 would be better for the blanket here yea
01:03:320 (3,4) - spacing inconsistency, should move 3 down to fix yep
01:47:195 (1) - I'm...unsure about this. might be better to space out the zig zag a little bit so it slows down the slider less. Could also improve the curve on the longer part. k

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Xinely 2014-08-27T04:56:05+00:00

finally get connection from campus so i can online to check this one
fixed all generals and suggestions from captin

thanks 4 mods, updated and~~waiting koreapenguin now~~ updated with koreapenguin's diff
@penguin : make sure update your diff first! D:

Last edited by Xinely 2014-08-27T08:48:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2014-08-27T08:27:57+00:00

@captin1 - almost fix thanks mod

Insane

osu file format v13

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captin1

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captin1 2014-08-27T20:05:38+00:00

[Easy]

00:19:814 (1) - not sure if this is enough, I'm not the one that unqualifies for this but others may
00:53:939 (2) - guess you did some rearranging, cause this blanket could be improved a bit more moving the tail point
SPOILER
01:35:939 (3) - guess a very minor spacing inconsistency, x184 y320?

[Hinsvar's Hard]

I don't think this got updated took the diff from his post though
00:11:025 - This was the spot I was talking about where you're missing the strong vocal, if you want to keep then that's fine but your response made it sound like you fixed it D:
00:27:882 (2,3,4,5) - looking at it again, this just doesn't seem very neatly placed, I guess just moving 5 to x220 y248 would work though
01:05:195 (1) - surprised there isn't a jump here, it would still be fairly smooth to play due to sliders, so try something out maybe?

[Insane]

01:20:939 (5,1) - clap on head for these two?
01:32:939 (3,5,1) - clap on 3 and head of 1, remove from 5?
01:47:189 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - well I guess reducing distance works, not quite what I was going for though

nokd :V

Xinely

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Xinely 2014-08-28T04:50:03+00:00

hi replied hinsvar's diff since he is on campus and he doesn't bring his laptop bakasvar

captin1 wrote:
[Hinsvar's Hard]
I don't think this got updated took the diff from his post though sorry this is my baka
00:11:025 - This was the spot I was talking about where you're missing the strong vocal, if you want to keep then that's fine but your response made it sound like you fixed it D: he said this is intentional so yeah i keep this as he said
00:27:882 (2,3,4,5) - looking at it again, this just doesn't seem very neatly placed, I guess just moving 5 to x220 y248 would work though
01:05:195 (1) - surprised there isn't a jump here, it would still be fairly smooth to play due to sliders, so try something out maybe?
nokd :V

on my diffs all have been fixed
no reply = fixed

Updated ~

captin1

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captin1 2014-08-28T06:16:06+00:00

alright, should be good to go

Xinely

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Xinely 2014-08-28T08:30:58+00:00