1. Awaken's Insane (3.96 stars, 383 notes)
2. Hard (3.17 stars, 281 notes)
3. Insane (4.54 stars, 452 notes)
4. Normal (1.82 stars, 158 notes)

S o a p wrote:

替发一下._.

[General]
把countdown去掉吧

[Normal]
00:49:547 - 多余的绿线
01:52:292 - ^
01:53:861 - ^
00:26:606 - 建议加个圈然后接一个1/2的折返滑条
01:01:508 (5) - normal里用这样的滑条没问题吗
01:11:508 (5,1) - 交换nc然后
01:14:645 (3) - nc

[Hard]
00:49:547 - 多余的绿线
00:44:057 (2) - 是不是可以离上一个滑条远一点同时离下一个滑条近一点?
00:52:684 (1) - 放到234的中间会好看点
01:38:370 (1) - 感觉提前半拍结束就可以了
01:44:449 (1,3) - 这两个没必要遮挡吧 移开点

[Insane]
00:16:606 (1,2) - 试试ctrl+g?
01:09:939 (1,2) - ^
01:15:429 - 这里不放点东西吗感觉放转盘也比空着好啊o.o
01:28:076 - 感觉这里可以加个圈放个连打

美丽

[_Crystal] wrote:

hi! from m4m!

[Insane]
00:06:018 (2,1) - 这个完全重叠有点confusing 好
00:36:606 (5,6) - 404|252? 直线有点难打 好
01:09:547 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 有点太难了诶..
01:33:469 (5) - NC? ok

[Hard]
感觉整体偏难了点,AR+1
00:46:802 (2) - stack在00:47:194 (3) - 头上?
00:52:684 (1,2,3,4) - 这个跳有点难
01:53:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 3连有点难,建议01:53:861 (1,2) - 01:54:253 (3,4) - 分别弄成滑条,3连换成1/4折返 能切吧 應該...

[Normal]
HP+1
00:14:841 加个circle?
00:38:567 (3) - 建议形状ctrl+J (就是改成向下弯的)


其他没啥了 0.0
Good luck!

Miramono wrote:

Hi! from modding queue...

Mod

[Normal]
00:48:959 (5) - move x:116 y:256

[Hard]
00:06:606 (2) - move x:296 y:264
00:27:586 (1) - move x:188 y:244
00:26:606 (1) - maybe change the pattern because its to close fixed
00:57:782 (2) - ctrl + G ? style
01:17:586 (1) - ctrl + G ^

Hope I was helpful

Xellie wrote:

Hi Hi, From my modding queue~
[Hard]
00:10:331 (1) - This could blanket 00:09:743 (2) - better
00:09:939 (3) - so can this
00:26:998 (2,1) - this overlap looks kinda messy
00:54:253 (1) - This is kinda close to the bottom of the screen, I'd probably move it a little bit to make it a little further up
00:57:390 (1) - could blanket 00:57:194 (7) - better
01:00:527 (1,2) - these overlap a little bit
01:17:586 (1) - could blanket 01:17:390 (5) - better
01:17:978 (2) - could blanket 01:17:586 (1) - better
01:20:919 (1) - and 01:19:939 (2) - overlap in a way that looks kinda meh
01:22:096 (3) - I would stack this under 01:21:508 (2) -
01:28:763 (1) - the shape of this is kinda weird and it's kinda close to the bottom of the screen
01:43:272 (2,4) - this overlap kinda looks eh fixed
01:50:723 (1) - this is super close to the health bar, I'd consider moving it
[Insane]
00:20:821 (5,6) - I'd stack this under the slider end
00:21:606 (2,3) - ^
00:23:174 (2,3) - ^
00:31:312 (3,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'd make these evenly spaced
00:51:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is kinda boring ;w; i think so, i will try to fix it ;w;
00:48:959 (2) - from here to 01:15:037 (3) - seems like random jump spam for the sake of making the map harder than it should be (it doesn't really fit the music) I'd consider rewroking it tbh amm....i like map a random jump when there had 1/2 vocal
01:28:763 (1) - This looks super weird cause of the sharp curve
01:38:174 (1) - This looks super weird cause of the sharp curve

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hello, here's the mod from my queue!

[Insane]


00:32:292 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is just not my style, nothing wring with this here, but i think it would look better if you made them jumps in stead of just straight DS
00:36:802 (6) - this feel better if placed at 288, 268
01:22:880 (2) - move this too 512, 100
01:23:076 (3) - move this to 308, 156 fixed

very good map, and nice song, its really fun to play, also <3 the background

GL getting this ranked!

1. 00:07:978 whistle
2. 00:09:547 (1) - whistle
3. 00:11:116 (4,5) - whistle
4. 00:32:684 (3) - clap
5. 00:36:606 (5) - clap
6. 00:36:802 (6) - 休息一下？delete
7. 00:42:096 (3) - clap
8. 01:02:488 (3) - 头加clap
9. 01:08:370 (1) - finish
10. 01:23:272 (4) - ctrl+g？挺喜欢这种排列梗
11. 01:33:076 (3) - 头变finish

1. 00:07:978 whistle
2. 00:09:547 whistle
3. 00:26:606 (1) - 就换成两个circle放在红线和白线上？感觉这个在hard节奏有点不合群
4. 00:28:174 加circle，统一后面节奏
5. 00:36:606 (4) - clap
6. 00:36:802 (5) - 同insane删去
7. 00:37:586 加circle，统一后面节奏
8. 00:55:625 (1,2) - 觉得变成2个circle+1/2滑条节奏会好很多
9. 01:02:488 (3) - 头加clap
10. 01:08:370 (1) - 头加finish
11. 01:11:508 (1) - whistle
12. 01:33:076 (3) - 头改为finish

1. 没什么问题，不过那些和前面雷同的音效还是建议改一下

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

[Normal]

00:05:625 (1) - I think it would be better if you added a whistle here for consistency.

00:10:331 (3) - Add a new combo for consistency. The rest of the section before that pause had combos 1 measure long, so why is this two measures long? ok

00:20:527 (5,2) - I think this overlap looks bad because the two sliderends are only partially overlapping each other. I suggest rearranging the two notes so that they either fully overlap or so that they aren't touching at all.

00:22:880 (3) - I suggest getting rid of the whistle at the end of this slider since it is inconsistent and sounds out of place.

00:23:665 (4) - I suggest that you add a whistle on both ends of the slider here so it is consistent with 00:20:527 (5) -

00:24:449 (1) - If you accepted my previous suggestion, then I suggest you remove the whistle here since it'll sound out of place due to there already being whistles on both ends of 00:23:665 (4) -

00:38:567 (3,2) - Another unsatisfactory overlap. Refer to 00:20:527 (5,2) -

01:01:508 (5) - This is a really bad slider imo, the sliderend is unclear and people will have trouble reading this - especially since it's in a normal diff. ok

[Hard]

00:18:959 (3,4,5) - How about you move this triplet to where 00:17:978 (5) - once was. I know that that note would've passed by the time the triplet shows up, but I think it would improve the beatmap's neatness as a whole. ok

00:28:370 (2) - I recommend you curve this like 00:27:586 (1,1) - so that the sliders are consistent.

00:38:567 (3) - Add a new combo here for consistency, since it is on a downbeat. ok

01:00:527 (1,2) - These two sliders seem to be overlapping verrrrrry slightly. But despite this, I still think you should fix it so that it looks nicer.

[Insane]

01:17:194 (2,3,4,5) - Turn this into a nice, perfect square? I think it would look more refined imo.

01:20:331 (4,1) - I don't like how these two notes overlap each other, it looks ugly imo ._. fixed

This diff was filled with jumps that I found fun to play. Because of this though, I couldn't really spot much for this difficulty.


Overall, I found this mapset fun to play, with great hitsounding and patterns. Good luck on rank!

Sellenite wrote:

[General]
我觉得那两个绿色把其中一个换掉比较好，看起来差不多，NC后有点看不出来

[Insane]

1. 00:07:978 whistle
2. 00:09:547 (1) - whistle ok
3. 00:11:116 (4,5) - whistle ok
4. 00:32:684 (3) - clap
5. 00:36:606 (5) - clap
6. 00:36:802 (6) - 休息一下？delete
7. 00:42:096 (3) - clap
8. 01:02:488 (3) - 头加clap
9. 01:08:370 (1) - finish ok
10. 01:23:272 (4) - ctrl+g？挺喜欢这种排列梗
11. 01:33:076 (3) - 头变finish ok

[Hard]

1. 00:07:978 whistle
2. 00:09:547 whistle
3. 00:26:606 (1) - 就换成两个circle放在红线和白线上？感觉这个在hard节奏有点不合群
4. 00:28:174 加circle，统一后面节奏
5. 00:36:606 (4) - clap
6. 00:36:802 (5) - 同insane删去
7. 00:37:586 加circle，统一后面节奏
8. 00:55:625 (1,2) - 觉得变成2个circle+1/2滑条节奏会好很多
9. 01:02:488 (3) - 头加clap
10. 01:08:370 (1) - 头加finish ok
11. 01:11:508 (1) - whistle
12. 01:33:076 (3) - 头改为finish ok

[Normal]

1. 没什么问题，不过那些和前面雷同的音效还是建议改一下

examination wrote:

骗点kds

[Normal]
00:26:606 (4) - 虽然感觉可以 最好还是保持下DS
00:28:959 - 感觉可以价格note 或者把slider拉长半拍
01:01:508 (5) - 这个滑条弯的不太好 会让人产生下面有个重叠的circle的错觉 01:30:135 (4,5) - 跟这里一样就行 ok
01:38:370 (1) - spin跟的比较紧促 相对Normal diff而言 从下一根白线开始吧 ok

[Hard]
01:28:567 (6) - 这个的DS要调整下

[Insane]
我看到了好多可以抄的梗
00:36:802 (6) - 可以移出来的w 个人感觉移回00:36:214 (3)这个位置比较舒服 ok
Insane做的太好了111

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

1. 00:18:959 (4,5,6) - obviously here's 1/6 stream
2. 00:20:527 (4,5,6) - ^, why miss these interesting rhythms? and lots of them, can be more fun to follow
3. 01:45:625 (6,7) - maybe ctrl+g
4. too much random jumping patterns imo... maybe try some other ones to embellish the whole set next time ?

Hard

1. 00:49:547 (1,4) - stack perfect
2. 00:54:253 (1) - offscreen
3. 01:00:527 (1,2) - avoid this overlap

Normal

1. 00:13:469 (1,2,3) - not recommend stack patterns like this in ur lowest diff... just spread them
2. 01:53:861 (1,2,3) - ^

☆

good luck

NightNine wrote:

很好的一個圖..我mod了1個小時 結果瀏覽器崩潰了TAT..

NightNine wrote:

很好的一個圖..我mod了1個小時 結果瀏覽器崩潰了TAT..

ts8zs wrote:

Random?笑
[Insane]
00:01:508 (6) - 248,152 better flow to 7
00:06:606 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1931898 repeat should like this
00:17:586 (6,7) - swap to have a better flow
00:52:684 (1,2) - swap to have a better ds change
01:01:312 (3) - 380,252 better ds
01:27:390 (2) - del
>01:27:586 (3) - 220,248 this fits more
01:28:370 (5) - 176,332,shouldn't have a stop
01:44:841 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1931919 jump like this is better
01:51:312 (2) - 400,136,flows better and made a blanket
01:52:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1931922 fits music
[Hard]
01:55:233 (5) - how about 232,260?
Good:D
[Normal]

gogo!

1. 00:18:959 (4,6) - no hitsound make me feel that I'm hitting the air x.x maybe add whistles at these two?
2. 00:50:135 (4,8,5,4,8) - I think if you add whistles with these objects,that would sound better imo
3. 01:31:116 (3,4,6) - maybe it's not a problem but I think you usually spread the jumps in this map. So I guess no overlay would be better
4. 00:38:567 (1,1,1) - add whistles?

1. 01:14:841 (2) - add whistle?I saw you added in the same sound before
2. 01:27:978 (5) - add finish? there is a stress here
3. 01:44:449 (1,3) - a little overlay,adjust it a little?

1. 00:11:508 (3) - there is also a stress in the reverse,so I guess adding finish would be better?
2. 01:19:351 (1,3) - not stack well
3. 01:55:037 (4) - I think the object in the end should be a circle,that would feel stronger.So make the rhythm like this?
   SPOILER

   

smallboat wrote:

As the Yu-zhi request.

[Awaken's Insane]

• 00:03:665 (5) - Stack 00:04:057 (1) head? (Like 00:02:096 (5,1) - this pattern.( D: I dislike stacking three 1/2 circles
  00:09:155 (3) - Suggest use ctrl+g will be a good flow. maybe current is ok :d
  00:11:900 (1) - Personal feeling this note can make a big jump here. (Move to (24|28)?) good idea btu
  00:20:527 (3,4,5) - Have a stream in this par,perhaps you will consider to add notes in blue line. let me see..
  00:48:370 (2,3) - Add notes in white line? And do a anti- jump with (1)(2),and (3) stack 00:48:959 (4) head,like this :
  SPOILER

  
  yours is ok too but I want to be slient in this part
  
  01:16:018 (6) - Add a note follow the vocal? nope,for the finish behind
  01:53:861 (4) - Change a tune,suggest use a NC here. changed!

thx for mod
Jumps look fine.Good luck your diff.

F D Flourite wrote:

Asked to only mod Awaken's Insane~
I will not make the format of modding, plz don't mind... >w<

[恶俗子]
00:03:861 (6) - 我觉得放在00:02:880 (2) - 头上会好一些 丑
00:15:821 (3,5) - Ctrl+G。锐角跳还是像飞球那种同一个方向的flow打起来比较舒服。 有理
00:17:390 (3,4,5) - 弄成4个circle？ 不妥
00:49:547 (1,2,3,4,1) - 修好五边形
00:52:488 (4,1,2,3) - ^
01:27:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
00:53:272 (4,1,2,3) - 修好六边形（这几句摸都没啥营养，主要是这多边形的确不好看）为何我这么懒
00:50:331 (1) - 00:53:469 (1) - 01:09:155 (1) - 01:10:723 (1) - 其实对于ins来讲，这里不NC没问题的~ 一来难度其实没怎么增加，二来这样有点NC spam 改了点
01:17:194 (2,1) - 不平行啊恶俗大爷 改了点 不过我觉得pattern最重要 nazi没啥必要
01:30:135 (1) - 不平行，而且丑 改了下 不过好像没啥区别hh
01:21:704 (1) - 虽说大跳NC，但是这个NC其实还是没必要 好 我他吗kiai的NC是乱放的啊
01:18:567 (3,4,5,6,1) - 就我的认知来讲这种间距略大的稳定钝角flow打起来略蛋疼，比较容易掉。这个间距已经可以拆了

Edit: Overall:

这图flow特别是点->滑条的anti-jump有点多了~（这是Kiai里的两个，由于非Kiai段速度比较慢就不一一指出。01:25:037 (7,1) - 01:36:410 (3,1) - ） 这BPM还好，DT就估计比较难受了 啥autijump啊 这应该算bigjump antijump是大时间小间距

不用overall隔开看着难受OTZ

iMage-- wrote:

Hi wkyik~. awesome map!
but in my opinion, should add AudioLeadIn 1000~2000.
when I played this map, fell start fast

good luck~