Desperate-kun wrote:

~ Bubbled ~

EDIT: Shit, it didn't work

Mao wrote:

Mod is going to be here soon /o/

Don't bubble maps before I modded, k? Popped

Mao wrote:

Requested by ingame PM~ Sorry for the delay q_q

1. Unrankable Issue/Highly Suggested
2. Comment/Minor

General

1. Maybe it's just me but Color 3 and 5 look too similiar in my eyes. Please try to diffrence them a bit more.

I don't think so

Relaxing

1. 00:27:800 (4,1,2) - /Minor/ - You may want to adjust your spacing here a bit. Looks really uneven o/ Fixed
2. 01:05:823 (3,4) - Try to move this more left like this to get a smoother flow from the previous objects into it. nah, it's fine for me
3. 02:11:056 (2) - I would rather stack this Circle with 02:07:567 (3) - 's head/tail in order to improve the flow by letting 1 point onto 2. Fixed
4. 02:48:032 (1,2,1) - Well, 2's location breaks the flow of the pattern here due to an unintuitive movement here. It would feel much more natural if you'd place it lower like this. Fixed
5. 02:55:009 (2) - I'd change the rhythm here a bit since I don't think it fits that the slider covers two completely different sections in the Song. I've discussed this with Desperate and we came to the conclusion that the Slider should start at 02:56:404 - to just cover this section. Example Nice catch guys ~
6. Not much to say here. I love your Slidershapes <3 Very clean diff, good job! :3

Tough

1. You have some objects touching and overlapping the HP-Bar. Please check your diff and adjust it a bit.
2. 00:37:567 (3,4,5) - Even if it looks nice that 4 is placed on the y-Axis, it would flow way better if you'd place them like this due to a more intuitive flow already introduced by 3's shape. Fixed
3. 00:56:056 (7,8,1) - Meh, the transition form the curve built by 7 and 8 into 1 feels harsh. IMO, it plays way better if 1 follows this curve which can be achieved by slightly rotating the Slider like this in order to improve the flow. Nah I prefer my current one
4. 01:04:777 (1,2) - Both, the clap and the vocals at 01:05:125 - seem to be rather strong which makes it feel weird to be mapped with a Slidertail. Therefore I suggest you to do it as in the Insane by mapping it with two 1/2 Sliders in order to get these strong vocals/clap clickable. Example Fixed
5. 01:12:277 (6) - Perhaps you can rotate the Slider like this in order to let the Slider's track follow the line built by the previous objects which would improve the flow a lot. ^
6. 01:20:474 (5,6,7) - The rather small distance between 6 and 7 compared to the higher distance between 5 and 6 slows the player down considering that this is part of the same pattern. Maybe you can try thia to make the pattern feel more natural. I did this because I want to keep a line like this
7. 01:36:172 (4,5) - I'm not sure if it's just me but mapping the big white downbeat with the Slider's tail doesn't seem to fit here due to the strong finish-like sound on it. A 1/1 Gap would feel better if you ask me. I'm not sure to change it because I wanna keep my symmetry.
8. 01:49:253 (4,1) - Hm, maybe you could move 4 a bit to even out the spacing and get a cool square shape. Example
   I prefer to keep my diamond, I hope you don't mind
9. 02:42:451 (1) - Probably you could rotate this about -25° (Selection Centre) to 1. make the curve out of the previous objects flow better into the Slider's track and 2. to create a bit of a circular shape with 02:41:928 (5,6) - . ^
10. 02:46:288 (3,4,1) - The triangular pattern here looks really uneven which doesn't really fit the very clean appearance of your map. Therefore I suggest you to either even out the spacing by using 1,40 DS or to relocate 02:45:242 (1) - to get 02:46:463 (4) - 's position right for an equal 1,20 DS. I really like how is it now, sorry
    
11. Clean and well done Diff. As always: Nice usage of symmetry :3

Midnight Memories

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  Note: Everything from the first Kiai goes for the Second one as well due to the Copy/Paste.

1. 00:16:986 (5) - Perhaps you can place this Slider like this to get a diamond with the previous objects. Just an idea so feel free to deny it :3 Fixed
2. 00:33:904 (3,1) - /Highly Suggested/ - Are you sure about this 5,19 DS Jump here? It feels really out of place and surprising in this rahter calm section. Please consider to lower the spacing here to at least 3,5 to fit the rest of the section better and to get rid of this unintuitive giant jump. Fixed
3. 00:41:056 (5) - Why didn't you place a NC here? Missing it here feels inconsistent with your NC pattern so therefore consider to add it. Fixed
4. 00:45:067 (7,1) - Having 7 end on the big white Tick feels kinda weird since the note there is very strong and even emphasized by the finish. Maybe you can CTRL+G this rhythm-wise to get a clickable action on the big white tick in order to make it fit the music much better. (Same applies for 02:19:951 (7,1) - ) I prefer to keep it at this way
5. 00:50:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Maybe it's just me but the pattern felt unnatural while playing it due to the sudden DS increase and especiall that 00:52:218 (1) - comes right after 00:52:044 (8) - which slows the player down since s/he still has the rather fast movement from the jump. That makes the pattern feel unintuitive and therefore I suggest you to do a more consistent spaced thing like 02:25:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - that fits way better. I need more opinions before to change this cuz I like it too
6. 01:07:044 (7,8,1) - Consider to place 8 somehow like this in order to get the flow into 01:07:567 (1) - much smoother by not interrupting the movement by 8's position. Fixed
7. 01:16:288 (3) - It feels like that the movement to the right in order to hit this Slider's head doesn't really work due to the movement between 01:15:591 (4,1) - gives the player the feeling to move in a straight movement. Try to place this somewhere around 377|30 to get it in a line with the previous objects to improve the flow a lot. Fixed
8. 02:31:114 (5,1) - Please consider to lower the Spacing between these to 2,00 to be consistent with the other Jumps in this Kiai. As it is for now it feels really unintuitive and surprising for the player since the jump is just so large >.< (Also the jump is incosnistent with 00:56:056 (4,1) - and the one in the second Kiai) Example Fixed
9. 02:39:486 (5,1) - I guess you want to keep your symmetrical Slider here but the flow from 5 into this could be much better since the transition doesn't really work because 1 is curved so strong. If you don't want to keep the Slider's symmetry I suggest you to try this. Otherwise, if you want to keep the shape, you can try to lower the postion of/rearrange 02:39:311 (4,5) - to make the flow into 1 more fluent. isn't bad imo I prefer my current one
10. 02:45:242 (1,2,3) - /Minor/ - Try to even out the spacing here. Looks a bit untidy like this :V woow my bad, Fixed
11. Very nice and clean diff but some jumps really have to be simplified as they are just too much which makes them feel unnatural, surprising and inconsistent with the rest.

Nice set, go find some BATs /o/ Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3

1. Approach Rate + 0.5, This rate makes all objects appear less cramped.
2. 00:14:893 (1) - Please move this slider right a bit for beginners. It's better to put it near the center.
   
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3. 01:22:567 - missing a clap.
4. 02:42:451 (1,2) - I feel this sudden hidden note would confuse beginners. Consider remaking this part again.
5. 02:50:823 (2) - a bit nazi mod, I'm worry about off screen. (It's enough for playing) So you should consider moving it up for safety.
6. 02:53:614 (1) - ^ Same

1. 00:20:474 (2) - maybe it's better to rotate it 20°clockwise to make a better flow.
2. 00:41:056 (4,5) - Try aligning this parts parallel to each other.
3. 01:22:567 (2) - missing a clap.

1. 00:05:997 (3) - It's better to use more spacing here. So try to put x:96 y:192 (like your mapping style :3)
2. 02:59:020 (3) - ^ Same.

1. Please resnap all notes. This diff has unsnapped objects.
2. 00:45:416 (1) - Try to move this note up about x:256 y:284 to make a better flow.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:58:497 (5,6) - Design suggestion : How about making this pattern ? I feel it would be cool x)
   
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4. 01:35:648 (1) - You should be able to apply my suggestion same as above.
5. 01:48:729 (5,6) - ^
6. 02:11:753 (1,2) - Cool <3

1. Some unsnapped inheriting sections. From what I saw nothing was broken but have a look to make sure everything is working as you intended it to:
   SPOILER

   Relaxing - 00:00:620 , 02:11:724 , 02:56:375
   Bakari's Average - 02:56:375
   Tough & Midnight Memories - 00:00:620 , 00:11:608 , 02:11:724 , 02:56:375.

1. 00:53:615 (1) - Missed a whistle on the tail.
2. 01:39:660 (3) - I would shorten this repeat slider by 1/2 and add a circle on 01:40:707. Having the repeat at 01:40:009 would feel better to play as the vocal at this point is more accented than the vocal heard on the red tick as well as being stressed by a heavy beat. Keeping the rhythm on white ticks here would be consistent with the other kiai sections.
3. 02:19:777 (5) - Missed a clap.
4. 02:29:544 (2) - Here as well.
5. 02:50:823 (2,3,4,1,2) - Not that important, but your distance snap randomly changed for these objects.

1. 00:14:544 (1) - Not enough time for players to recover from this spinner. You could remove this circle for the same approach as Relaxing.
2. 01:23:265 (4) - Hard to notice with the sliderborder colour, but this could curve more nicely around (5). I would just try using a horizontal flip of 01:22:742 (3) to fix this and get nice symmetry as well.
3. 01:37:218 (4) - The beat on on 01:37:567 feels quite significant, I would suggest against skipping over it. How about breaking this into a 1/1 slider and a circle to follow the vocal? It's worth noting this would follow a consistent rhythm with the other kiai sections.
4. 02:48:032 - I'm certain you meant to have this mapped this out.
5. 02:55:009 (5) - NC here to follow the vocal.

1. HP - 0.5? This evens the up the HP spread, also the additional 0.5 doesn't seem necessary.

Trust wrote:

As I owe you one, I'll be checking this shortly!

edit: Mod

[General]

1. Some unsnapped inheriting sections. From what I saw nothing was broken but have a look to make sure everything is working as you intended it to:
   SPOILER

   Relaxing - 00:00:620 , 02:11:724 , 02:56:375
   Bakari's Average - 02:56:375
   Tough & Midnight Memories - 00:00:620 , 00:11:608 , 02:11:724 , 02:56:375.
   Everything is fine here so don't worry about that

[Relaxing]

1. 00:53:615 (1) - Missed a whistle on the tail. Fixed
2. 01:39:660 (3) - I would shorten this repeat slider by 1/2 and add a circle on 01:40:707. Having the repeat at 01:40:009 would feel better to play as the vocal at this point is more accented than the vocal heard on the red tick as well as being stressed by a heavy beat. Keeping the rhythm on white ticks here would be consistent with the other kiai sections. Fixed
3. 02:19:777 (5) - Missed a clap. Fixed
4. 02:29:544 (2) - Here as well. Fixed
5. 02:50:823 (2,3,4,1,2) - Not that important, but your distance snap randomly changed for these objects. Fixed

[Bakari's Average]

1. 00:14:544 (1) - Not enough time for players to recover from this spinner. You could remove this circle for the same approach as Relaxing. Fixed
2. 01:23:265 (4) - Hard to notice with the sliderborder colour, but this could curve more nicely around (5). I would just try using a horizontal flip of 01:22:742 (3) to fix this and get nice symmetry as well. Sorry but I prefer to keep it because isn't hard to read in my opinion
3. 01:37:218 (4) - The beat on on 01:37:567 feels quite significant, I would suggest against skipping over it. How about breaking this into a 1/1 slider and a circle to follow the vocal? It's worth noting this would follow a consistent rhythm with the other kiai sections. Fixed
4. 02:48:032 - I'm certain you meant to have this mapped this out. Fixed
5. 02:55:009 (5) - NC here to follow the vocal. I'm not agree with this cuz I don't wanna to break his consistency of combo

[Tough]

1. HP - 0.5? This evens the up the HP spread, also the additional 0.5 doesn't seem necessary. Fixed

Nice! Let me know.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Ay que horror

Congrats~

Dark Accelerator wrote:

Sabía que algun día ibas a salir del closet :U

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Dark Accelerator wrote:

Sabía que algun día ibas a salir del closet :U

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Dark Accelerator wrote:

Sabía que algun día ibas a salir del closet :U