pandorawindy wrote:

Hi,At your request,i come here for m4m.Your suggestions in my map is very helpful,thank you so much!

I am a new mapper and modder with inexperience.So i usually can find just a little issues in other mappers' map.I wanna say sorry about this point. But i ll try my best to mod yours. It's okay.

[In general]

1. No big issues in your diffs is my first impression since i played your all diffs.Nice work ! man,i have to admit you are a so great mapper with experience.

[Easy]

1. nice diff for beginners.

[Normal]

1. pretty good diff.I cant check out some issues in it;

[Insane]

1. 00:49:060 (2) - slider ll be fitter or add one circle in 00:49:310 ;If you slow down this song,you ll hear this rhythm more clearly. 00:49:310 - doesn't have a beat, but I added a circle here.
2. 02:11:310 - why not add one circle,i feel empty in here. There's no beat here. And it doesn't fit well.
3. why not add some triplets into your kiai time?such as add one circle in 01:03:185 ; Why? That's so random. There's no beat on the blue ticks. Adding notes to place with no beats makes the map overmap (t/125409)
   If i were you i ll make my kiai harder. 01:06:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - ll become:
   img

   
   I think it s very important to make the kiai higher than rest time.

that s all. good luck man, you r the best mapper i ve ever seen.

Angelin Dash wrote:

Hi from #modreqs. My 2# modding
Okay here is my suggestion, more like my opnion.

HARD:
00:15:810 (1) - Move this circle here. 256,300 Moved it, but it needs a reason.
00:17:060 (2) - ^ 124,192 It'll be ruined.
00:17:310 (3) - Move this slider here. 284,192 I changed the placement of 00:17:060 (2,3) to another value.
00:20:060 (4) - Move this circle here. 104,312 No.
00:20:310 (1) - ^ 224,312 ^
00:20:560 (2) - ^ 344,312 (A tiny jump) ^
00:37:560 (3) - Move slider here. 340,140 It'll ruined the distance.
00:38:310 (1) - ^ 288,64 (A tiny jump) ^
01:15:310 (3) - ^ 260,172 No
01:17:810 (3) - Move circle here. 60,272 (A tiny jump) ^
01:18:060 (4) - ^ 107,192 Still ruins the distance.

Lovely beatmap, hope this get ranked someday. Good luck ;u;

-Famous- wrote:

Mod request from my Queue

Easy

1. 00:42:810 (4) - Make the slider more like this? I want to make it "smooth", so no changes has been done.
   
   Picutre

   
2. 01:18:310 (1) - Move that slider to x:184 ; y:320. The distance won't be same.

Normal

1. 01:16:310 (3,4,5) - More like this? Curved to the other way.
   
   Picture

   
2. Copy and paste 01:26:310 (1), ctrl + G and replace 01:27:310 (2) with the copied one. Meh. The one used has a better look.

Yea that's it... It's a very good mapset. Too hard to find something to change. I hope my mod could help you somehow. Good luck!

Kritikally wrote:

Returning the favor from your detailed mod on my thread ♥

[Easy]

00:44:310 (1)- Slider seems to be a bit unnecessarily complex. If you don't feel it needs the bend at the first tick, remove it. I slightly edit the slider, though I didn't remove it.
01:22:310 (1,2,3,4)- LOVE the waving slider effect here. You did this in the other difficulties, too. DON'T EVER CHANGE IT! (Who says modding needs to be purely negative?) Ah, okay. Maybe this pattern might give ideas in your future maps.
02:42:310 (3)- Might want to replace that slider with a spinner. I don't want to.

[Normal]
02:53:185 (1)- Spin the slider the other way (leave first point, second point @ 392 x 132, last point @ 392 x 56) and it can blanket (2) in the same manner that (3) does. Blanketed with 02:53:810 (2) .
03:13:310 (4)- Nitpicking, but slightly bend slider to keep the same pattern the adjoining sliders on each side are using (add a point @ 210 x 90). I don't like when it's bend on the up.

[Hard]
00:39:810 (4)- Not sure if intentional, but if that slider is supposed to be longer, move second point to 112 x 32. If you were following the bass line, ignore this. There's no beat on the red tick (maybe). Plus, it fits better when it ends on the blue tick.
01:23:560 (4)- Check jumps to and from this point -- not sure if ~2.1x jump is intentional. I'll see what other modders think. I'm not sure.
03:01:310 (3)- 2.25x jump -- this does look intentional though. Same here. We can add jumps in hard difficulties.

[Summary]
The flow in your beatmaps are outstanding, and you were quite creative in all difficulties with your choice and placement of sliders. Maps on all difficulties are at a very refined state considering the number of modders -- this goes to your expertise and the modders' abilities to influence your beatmap (or your ability to see improvements, or both). 9.5/10! Good luck getting approved!

1. 00:29:310 (2,3,4) - I think a curved line had better
   00:29:810 (3) - x:296 y:60
   00:30:310 (4) - x:200 y:91
   
   I think beautiful blanket diff

1. 00:40:310 (1,2) - blanket 00:39:810 (5) - ?
   00:41:060 (2) - move at x:233 y:25
2. 00:57:810 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:57:810 (2) - selected move at 00:55:810 (5) - stack note.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:25:810 (4) - I think move at center is better.
   following next spinner

1. 00:23:810 (3) - add clap
2. 01:45:310 (7,8,9) - change Rhythm?
   
3. 02:00:060 (4) - move at x:270 y:120 01:59:310 (3,4,1) - a curved line
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:08:310 (6) - NC
5. 02:20:310 (6) - ^

litoluna wrote:

for m4m
[Easy]

1. 00:29:310 (2,3,4) - I think a curved line had better
   00:29:810 (3) - x:296 y:60
   00:30:310 (4) - x:200 y:91
   Fixed
   I think beautiful blanket diff

[Normal]

1. 00:40:310 (1,2) - blanket 00:39:810 (5) - ?
   00:41:060 (2) - move at x:233 y:25 Fixed
2. 00:57:810 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:57:810 (2) - selected move at 00:55:810 (5) - stack note. I don't understand this one.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:25:810 (4) - I think move at center is better. Mmm... I'll keep the way it was.
   following next spinner

[Hard]

1. 00:23:810 (3) - add clap Added
2. 01:45:310 (7,8,9) - change Rhythm? Changed the rhythm.
   
3. 02:00:060 (4) - move at x:270 y:120 01:59:310 (3,4,1) - a curved line Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:08:310 (6) - NC Fixed
5. 02:20:310 (6) - ^ Fixed

I think beautiful mapset and song
gl

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Hi ! Mod request from my Modding queue

[General]

- I know someone already told you this, but since the AIMod pointed it out you should put the epilepsy warning. Does it really is such a bother? It's not like it affects your map in any way.... Hmm... I'm not sure about this, though the storyboard doesn't have really quick change elements.
- I usually prefer Japanese lyrics, or at least in their mother language...but it's a personal opinion I think I'll add it.

[Hard]

01:48:810 (2,4) - Stack them properly Nazi, but okay.
02:17:935 (4) - Stack this note properly ^
02:40:310 (1,4) - Stack them properly ^

[Normal]

00:43:810 (3,2) - Aren't stacked properly Still nazi, but fixed.
00:55:810 (5,2) - Same ^ ^

[Easy]

00:23:810 (4,2) - Aren't stacked properly Same here, but fixed.
01:05:810 (4,3) - Same ^ (maybe they're too far away, though) ^

Alright, that's all
Good Luck with your map

1. okay first thing i noticed right off the bat is you missed alot of the instrument sounds like 00:17:560 - 00:18:060 -
   which honestly, i guess its okay if you really love vocals or something but uhgg srsly it bothers me t-t i'd rather map those over vocals since the harmony line is more interesting to follow. 00:44:810 (2) - oh nvm i guess you don't love vocals that much
   i'm not gunna suggest you go and fix everything you've undermapped (well u can if you want, it would make me happy ) but please for next time don't miss any strong sounds like this
2. 00:24:310 (1,3) - hm why not make a better blanket here Oo
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:04:310 (5) - needs nc? are you doing nc ever 1 downbeat or 2 downbeats? you should stick with one, don't switch back and forth
4. 00:31:810 (3) - do something similar as 00:39:810 (4) - ? maybe you can add a repeat to get the vocal
   02:05:810 (4) - ^
5. 01:14:810 (2) - super optional but this looks better imo owo
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:19:560 (4,5) - i think a more appropriate place for a jump is 01:19:810 (5,1) - instead due to the downbeat. so space 01:19:810 (5) - with 1.3 and space 01:20:310 (1) - with 1.4 also it might be nicer if you can stack 01:18:810 (2,1) -
7. 01:25:060 (3) - angle this to the right a bit more atm it looks too similar with 01:24:560 (2) -
8. 02:56:060 (9,1) - nazi but, blanket
   
   more rants.
   the rhythm just doesn't feel too consistent imo, like some places you decide to map out the guitar or base and some places you decide to skip it :/
   but i guess thats just me

• 
  im just gunna give a general rant, for this you should choose a set of strong sounds and only map that. fak i cant explain
  so for example
  00:17:060 - the vocal here isnt any weaker than 00:16:810 - but you decided to skip it.
  00:18:560 - same issue here, it makes it really hard to read if people play on hidden cuz they have no idea which vocals you would have skipped and which ones you actually decided to map out.
  
  this is why i like mapping the harmony lines cuz the harmony lines usually have simpler rhythms that can support things such as a normal or easy diff.

-Chata- wrote:

Hi. From -Chata- & K.P's Modding Queue

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

1. Clear

[Easy]

1. 01:24:310 (3,4) - I these slider are too close to the HP bar
   img

   
2. Clear

[Normal]

1. AR+1
2. 01:25:310 (4) - Nazi. below under 1 gird. it more make blanket according to your previous
3. 01:42:310 (2) - New combo. same as 00:15:810 (1,1) - and other difficulty
4. 03:10:310 (1,3) - swap new combo. 03:10:310 (1,3) - and remove new combo here. in order to unify with Insane
5. 03:16:810 (1) - It's a strange, why not? It should start here 03:17:060 A beat starts here.

[Hard]

1. HP-1, OD-1.
2. 01:04:310 (5) - 01:12:310 (5) - add new combo. 01:08:310 (1,1,1,1,1) - refer to this
3. 02:07:810 (5) - Unrankable. reverse arrow is out of playground
   img

   
   This is correct
4. 02:59:060 (1) - Remove new combo

it's over. Good luck!

Kibbleru wrote:

ok so m4m i guess

[Hard]

1. okay first thing i noticed right off the bat is you missed alot of the instrument sounds like 00:17:560 - 00:18:060 -
   which honestly, i guess its okay if you really love vocals or something but uhgg srsly it bothers me t-t i'd rather map those over vocals since the harmony line is more interesting to follow. 00:44:810 (2) - oh nvm i guess you don't love vocals that much
   i'm not gunna suggest you go and fix everything you've undermapped (well u can if you want, it would make me happy ) but please for next time don't miss any strong sounds like this
2. 00:24:310 (1,3) - hm why not make a better blanket here Oo
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:04:310 (5) - needs nc? are you doing nc ever 1 downbeat or 2 downbeats? you should stick with one, don't switch back and forth
4. 00:31:810 (3) - do something similar as 00:39:810 (4) - ? maybe you can add a repeat to get the vocal
   02:05:810 (4) - ^
5. 01:14:810 (2) - super optional but this looks better imo owo
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:19:560 (4,5) - i think a more appropriate place for a jump is 01:19:810 (5,1) - instead due to the downbeat. so space 01:19:810 (5) - with 1.3 and space 01:20:310 (1) - with 1.4 also it might be nicer if you can stack 01:18:810 (2,1) -
7. 01:25:060 (3) - angle this to the right a bit more atm it looks too similar with 01:24:560 (2) -
8. 02:56:060 (9,1) - nazi but, blanket
   
   more rants.
   the rhythm just doesn't feel too consistent imo, like some places you decide to map out the guitar or base and some places you decide to skip it :/
   but i guess thats just me

[Normal]

• 
  im just gunna give a general rant, for this you should choose a set of strong sounds and only map that. fak i cant explain
  so for example
  00:17:060 - the vocal here isnt any weaker than 00:16:810 - but you decided to skip it.
  00:18:560 - same issue here, it makes it really hard to read if people play on hidden cuz they have no idea which vocals you would have skipped and which ones you actually decided to map out.
  
  this is why i like mapping the harmony lines cuz the harmony lines usually have simpler rhythms that can support things such as a normal or easy diff.

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! mod from my queue

EASY

00:34:310 (3) - what do you think of making this with the same shape of 00:32:310 (1) - just for a formal question Hmm... I like the way it is.
01:00:310 (1,1) - to be an easy the time between these 2 is too short. I pretty sure every BAT would say it.. the only thing I can think of is reducing the length of the spinner to 01:01:560 - or maybe deleting it and put some sliders in replace... Replaced the spinner by notes.
very good easy, nothing more to say.

NORMAL

Nothing to say in normal, very good!

HARD

00:24:310 (1) - move the third point of this slider to x:152 y:76 just to be precise with the blancket too :3 Fixed the blanket.
01:25:060 (3) - shouldn't this be reversed? I reversed it, but what about 01:25:560 (4) ?
00:27:310 (1) - what do you say of something like this? it's more symmetric and I think it's good looking also I use this suggestion, but I change the sliders by a curve. The last one was a bit weird and ugly.

SPOILER

00:58:310 (1,2) - I think reversing these will help the flow a bit. like this: Reversed the heads.

SPOILER

01:59:310 (3) - maybe this should be moved like 2 or 3 grids left? just for a better blancket with 01:58:810 (2) - Fixed the blanket.
02:44:060 (2,1) - blancket can be improved a bit Fixed the blanket.
03:06:810 (6) - reverse this and also reverse this one 03:07:310 (7) - just because is a good pattern and more consistent imo. Reversed the sliders.

Very good map!! take a star!
Yey

xLoupGarou wrote:

Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue



*Mp3 --> OK


*BG --> OK

Nyan~MOD

[Easy]
01:05:310 Move ( x:same y:296 ) You didn't tell me if it's the tail of the slider, though the tail lands here. Actually, you point out the slider. The 01:05:310 confused me. You do know that you can select a note, copy and paste on the post, like 01:04:310 (3) .
For this suggestion, the blanket combo 01:03:810 (2,3) will be ruined a bit.
02:06:810 Move ( x:same y:211 ) Moved.
02:09:310 Move ( x:same y:252 ) But the distance will change, so I didn't change that one.
02:09:810 Move ( x:184 y:same ) Nazi, but okay.
02:26:310 Extend? --> 02:28:310 I have to say no. The vocal starts there.

[Normal]
01:14:810 Move ( x:256 y:48 ) No change.
02:26:310 Extend? --> 02:28:310 - ( there's still a drum beat on the break part so I suggest you end it where the vocal starts ) I feel that the spinner should end at 02:27:810 . It sounds better.

[Hard]
00:34:060 Move ( x:206 y:147 ) Stacked with the slider's head.
00:36:060 Apply NC
00:36:310 Remove NC It doesn't sound right. Same with the suggestion above. Normally, new combos starts on a white tick.
01:41:810 Apply NC Added.
02:42:310 Lower to 0,52 . . or 0,62 . Apply it to the 3 timing points in the pic. I don't want to.


03:16:310 Fix Made another slider pattern. It a little same as the previous one.

That's All, Nice Map
Good Luck~

1. 00:27:810 (4) - You shouldn't use 1/2 beat length sliders in Easy. Hard to read...
2. 00:37:310 (2) - Get a better flow by curving this a little more:
   
   Like this

   
3. 00:58:310 (3) - Curve it like this:
   
   SPOILER

   https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1863487
4. 01:53:810 (3) - The slider thing again.

1. The area starting around 00:08:310 seems like a nice place to start mapping (if you want)
2. AiMod's bugged, 'cause it complains about 00:41:810 (3) position.
3. 03:20:310 (4) - Add whistle hitsound (sounds good e.e)

1. Same start suggestion as Normal.
2. 03:00:310 (1) - Curve this to the opposite direction to make the pattern nicer:
   
   SPOILER

   

LixRei wrote:

Came from mod queue (looks like I modded first, after all)
Whew, a nice and relaxing map, with a song of those same characteristics. /me feels calm...

[General]

-For some reason, AiMod says to enable the epilepsy warning. I don't see the problem, through. I know.

[Easy (my favorite xD)]

1. 00:27:810 (4) - You shouldn't use 1/2 beat length sliders in Easy. Hard to read... Okay
2. 00:37:310 (2) - Get a better flow by curving this a little more: Okay
   
   Like this

   
3. 00:58:310 (3) - Curve it like this: I don't like when it's curve in the other way.
   
   SPOILER

   https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1863487
4. 01:53:810 (3) - The slider thing again. Okay

[Normal]

1. The area starting around 00:08:310 seems like a nice place to start mapping (if you want) Too lazy. -3-
2. AiMod's bugged, 'cause it complains about 00:41:810 (3) position. Well, the distance is okay.
3. 03:20:310 (4) - Add whistle hitsound (sounds good e.e) It doesn't have a beat here, so no whistle.

[Hard]

1. Same start suggestion as Normal. Nope.
2. 03:00:310 (1) - Curve this to the opposite direction to make the pattern nicer: Okay.
   
   SPOILER

   

That's it. Will be waiting for your mod, but I may delay in answering it.

KokoroStudiox3 wrote:

[normal]
00:33:060 - whistle souns good Added
01:05:310 - http://puu.sh/axtxM/a9de9b1947.png better Okay
00:41:810 (3) - spacing Not really noticeable, but fixed.
nice mapcet

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

Hard

1. 00:20:810 (3,4) - blanket this perfect, watch out keeping ds Fixed?
2. 00:31:060 (2,3) - ^ (sry for maybe nazi, but i think stuffs like this should be mentioned) and there're some more. i think some of them r ok to ignore this nazi composing thing, but some of them can be fixed a bit to keep organizition clean imo. u can check them urself, i just leave them here. :3 Fixed
3. 02:16:310 (1,2) - try two 3/4 sliders here with composing changing to follow the vocal here? it's an unique part in this song imo Okay. Added a note.
4. add a spinner in the end? There's no music at the end; only vocals. So I don't want to add a spinner.
5. sry for didn't find much things but all stuff r just good to me and the style is some kind of my taste. take a star lol No biggie.

Normal

1. 00:53:310 (2,3,4) - change 4's shape to a curve for making them in an arc in composing? Tried my best. I don't know which way, so I curved it to the right.
2. spinner in the end as well? Same reason in the Hard section.

Easy

1. 00:32:310 (1) - lol, why not curve one here to blanket as 00:34:310 (3) - did w I want a various pattern, but replaced it by a curve.
2. 01:47:310 (2,3) - i think blanket here's a bit of really necessary Tried my best.
3. 01:56:310 (3) - curve this? Nah

ur style is just remind my newbie time lol, and it's really good to me in flow and obj settings Lol.

an extra star for the storyboard, few people mapping with love now, it's a pleasure to see this w Thanks~

good luck

This map may need an epilepsy warning, as it contains frequently toggled storyboards.
More than 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this.

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hi, random mod here~
These are only suggestions, and don't mind my English, I know it's poor
NO WAY I LOVE THE SONG, THE STORYBOARD, THE MAP, EVERYTHING ARGHH >u< Heh~

[General]
AiMod says:

This map may need an epilepsy warning, as it contains frequently toggled storyboards.
More than 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this.

Yeah, you need to check the AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) The AiMod lies. There's nothing with the mapset.

My Mod

[Easy]
00:30:310 (4) - Try moving the point x:115 y:148 to x:120 y:144 Moved
00:37:310 (2,3) - Why not making them blankets (?) like this (idk what my puush is doing so I use photo capture) I don't want to. The blanket makes it ugly.
00:44:310 (1) - Move point x:150 y:328 to x:140 y:328 and together with point x:118 y:356 to x:104 y:356 Okay
01:10:310 (1) - Move point x:100 y:54 to x:100 y:52 It's a nazi stuff, so no need to change.
01:12:310 (3) - Move point x:237 y:200 to x:232 y:200 Nazi stuff again
01:28:310 (3) - Just make it a natural curve will do I like the way it is.
01:34:310 (5) - NC No. This ends the combo.
01:44:310 (1) - No NC Removed the new combo
01:52:810 (1) - ^ This one no
01:54:310 (1) - Make it curve by adding a variable turning point at x:68 y:128 (if you want to make it curve) I don't want to
02:12:310 (1) - No NC Removed the new combo
02:26:310 (1) - I don't find the point placing a spinner here The spinner sounds fine here.
02:55:810 (4) - Place the circle at x:388 y:220 (if you want) It'll ruin the pattern, so no change.
03:19:810 (4,5) - Make them both at the centre of the grid? I want to let the flow better.
03:20:310 (5) - NC This ends the combo.

[Normal]
00:18:310 (1) - No NC (?) I'm keeping this one.
00:20:310 (1) - Why place a fixed turning point there? I think it'll make a pretty slider shape.
00:21:310 (2) - Maybe flip vertically is better ( so that they will not all accumulate at above) The flip isn't good, but I rotate it.
00:25:310 (3) - Make it more curve I want to symmetric with 00:26:310 (1) . And more curve makes the slider ugly.
00:27:310 (3) - Suggest making it a curve or clone from 00:26:310 (1) Cloned the next slider.
00:34:560 (2) - Place at x:332 y:116 seems better The flow will break.
00:46:310 (3) - Make it more curve No.
00:59:810 (6) - Place at x:232 y:144 to make the pattern nicer 00:57:810 (2,3,4,5,6) makes a star pattern. If I moved it, it'll ruin the pattern.
01:06:310 (6) - NC Okay
01:06:810 (1) - No NC Okay
01:29:310 (1) - ^ Okay
01:30:310 (3) - NC Okay
01:32:310 (1) - No NC This one, no.
01:44:310 (1) - ^ No
01:48:810 (1) - ^, and also make it more curve Both no.
01:52:310 (1) - No NC No.
01:56:310 (1) - ^ No.
02:08:310 (1) - No NC No.
02:12:810 (1,2) - ^, and make them overlap Removed the NC, but didn't stack them.
02:16:310 (1) - ^ No.
02:20:310 (1) - ^ No.
02:24:310 (1) - ^ No.
02:26:310 (1) - Same as Easy diff Same reason in the Easy section
02:42:310 (3) - But I think here having potential to place a spinner The slider makes it better.
02:46:310 (1) - No NC No
02:52:060 (6) - Place at x:296 y:208 I like the way it is.
03:14:310 (1) - No NC The beats are getting lower here.
03:19:810 (3,4) - Place them at center looks better for me 03:16:810 (1,2) is the cause.
03:20:310 (4) - NC No

So, that's all of my mod OMG I LOVE THE SONG SO MUCH
Hope your mapset gets ranked soon c:
Oh yeah, I gave you a star, anyway

Miramono wrote:

Hi! from modding queue...

Mod

[Easy]
No comment

[Normal]
00:17:310 (3) - lessen so it would be in time with the beat or drum: from 00:17:310 to 00:17:810 Okay
00:18:060 - add a note or circle here Okay

[Hard]
01:08:310 (1) - ctrl + G ? It would break the flow, so no change.
03:04:310 (1) - ctrl + G It breaks the flow, so no.
03:17:810 (2) - move x:428 y:292 Hmm... I want to keep the distance longer.

That's all, I hope I was helpful

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue
sry for the delay

01:02:310 - in fact in this part.there is no snare drums(clap sound).so I think it's better to add whistle to follow vocal than add clap automatically Replaced the claps by whistles. Same thing in the 2nd chorus.
03:19:810 - I'd like to stop the music here since inst is already over Okay

[Easy]
00:19:810 (4,3) - stack Okay
00:32:310 (1) - forgot clap? Okay
00:48:310 (1) - add finish Okay
01:01:810 (2) - clap Okay
good enough

[Normal]
maybe 2 downbeat 1 NC?..your present combo is a little short Okay
00:17:310 (3) - clap? Okay
00:17:310 (3,4,1,2,3) - hmm.a little untidy and too many 1/2 notes in one roll.I think it's better to delete one Deleted the 00:18:060
00:48:310 - 01:00:310 why not 1/2 in this parts..a little strange Added two notes
01:06:310 (1,2,3,4) - a little ugly Moved 01:07:310 (3) to somewhere below the previous and next note.
02:12:810 (4) - clap Okay
02:23:310 (3,1,2,3,4) - make a star? I don't want to repeat the same pattern. And I think it's pretty the way it is.
02:36:310 (1,2,3) - you can make it better I think it's better now.
03:18:310 (2) - whistle Okay
not as neat as easy but still ok

[Hard]
1 downbeat 1 NC maybe But it's already done.
00:23:060 (2) - sth like this may be good for flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1883650 Okay
00:26:310 (1,3) - clap? I forgot.
00:31:060 (2) - ctrl+g is better imo Okay
00:31:810 (3) - ^ Okay
00:48:310 (1,2,3,4) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1883624 Sure
00:48:310 (1) - finish Okay
01:51:560 (4,5,1) - same distance? Okay
02:35:560 (7,8) - switch clap What do you mean by "switch clap"?

-Nya- wrote:

Hey! M4M from your modding queue.
Well, here's my mod:

Easy:
1) Check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A)~ The letterbox that conflicts. [b]There's nothing wrong.
2) 01:31:310~ Blanket this slider again with this slider: 01:32:310. Hmm... I'll keep it the way it is. It flows well.

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3) 01:55:310~ Maybe do this? Hmm... I don't want too.

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4) 01:58:310 and 01:59:310~ Curve these two sliders more? Good idea.

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5) 02:07:310~ This slider isn't in-line so the blanket is a bit poor. It must then look something like this: In your picture, it made the blanket worse. A perfect blanket something like: http://puu.sh/aEx3E/04c95cf0a9.jpg

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Just lower this slider's: 02:07:310 tail a bit and move the 1 hitcircle a bit to the right to blanket it perfectly.
6) 02:50:310~ Also make this slider in-line. Like this: Rotating a bit is okay.

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7) Your preview point must be snapped.[/b]
Nice diff.

Normal:
1) Check AiMod again. [b]Still nothing.
2) 01:10:310~ Maybe do this? It'll mess up 01:06:810 (2,3,4,5) . And in the picture, the blanket isn't perfect.

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3) 01:28:060~ Make this slider in-line. Like this: Okay

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4) 02:00:810~ Move this slider upward to X:220 Y:296, and then change this slider: 02:02:310 a bit, to blanket this slider: 02:00:810. I'll keep the way it is.
5) 02:14:060~ Add hitcircle here? Okay. It match with the previous part.
6) 02:46:310~ Change this slider to blanket this slider: 02:45:310. I think it's okay.

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[/b]
Also great diff.

Hard:
1) 00:20:810~ Rather change this slider to this? A repetitive slider. [b]I stopped the slider at 00:21:060 , since 00:21:310 doesn't have a beat.

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I think it fits in better with the vocals.
2) 01:19:060 and 01:19:810~ Mirror these two sliders? Cool.

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3) 01:47:810~ This short slider doesn't sound right here. Make it longer to this point: 01:48:060. It sounds okay. It fits with the drum.

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4) 02:01:310~ Make this slider more similar to this slider: 02:00:310, so they're mirroring each other. Nah. I want to make a little blanket for 02:01:310 (4,1)
5) 02:37:310~ Stack this slider on this hitcircle: 02:35:935. The distance will be high, so no change.[/b]
Great diff!

Overall, awesome mapset!
Good Luck!

Kihhou wrote:

sssssssssM4M, friend~

[Easy]

1. i think itd have a cool effect if you had the break start at 01:36:310 - ~ i would actually prefer it at 01:38:310 - but it doesnt show the break.. pass message thing.. your choice. ending it at 01:34:310 - just feels a bit off since 01:33:810 (6) - is buildup for that part I like the idea.
2. 02:36:310 - add timing point here and make it 20% volume? like what you have in the hard diff. i think it's too loud for this section Added. A lower volume sounds better.

[Normal]

1. 01:36:310 - same as easy. move break point to 01:36:310 - ? or 01:38:310 - ? Moved this to 01:38:310 . The other is a little weird.
2. 02:36:310 - add timing point here and make it 20% volume? like what you have in the hard diff. i think it's too loud for this section Added.
3. 03:17:310 (1) - i can see what youre doing here with the blanket but i dont really like how the rhythm doesnt fit too well with the music since theres nothing important at 03:16:810 - i think it would be better to have a 1/2 slider at 03:17:310 - but i really like that blanketing setup so i tried to do what i could. heres what i did. ill give you the code for it and you can adjust it however youd like (if you make this change) I was a little worried about this one. I thought it'll a little too hard. But thanks for the suggestion and code. It's actually a lot better.
   
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   311,207,195810,2,0,P|312:159|305:124,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   301,87,196310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   235,313,197310,6,0,P|292:338|350:331,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   430,244,198310,2,0,P|424:157|295:87,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   311,207,199810,1,0,0:0:0:0:

[Hard]

1. ar+1? imo ar6 is too low for 120 bpm and a hard diff Okay.
2. 00:21:310 - im not sure if this pause is intentional or not but you should add something here. the pause doesnt really fit well into the music. there is a pause in the instrumentals but theres still a strong vocal. you even mapped it at 00:17:310 - and 00:19:310 - , which are pretty much the same~ should add a hitcircle at 00:21:310 - , maybe at 344,176 o3o Okay.
3. 00:36:810 (2) - i think this could be changed to fit the music better. theres a vocal at 00:37:060 - and the tail of the slider is pretty strong for a tail.. maybe remove and try this rhythm? Replaced the rhythm by your suggestion.
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4. 00:48:310 (1,2,3) - i think this rhythm could be done better o3o theres a vocal at 00:49:185 - so you might want to add a triplet there. i dont think just having 3 hitcircles there would be very fitting either so i think you should use the tail of the slider for the triplet by removing 00:48:310 (1,2) - and adding 2 1/2 sliders. it also helps differentiate itself from 00:47:060 (3) - 1/1 slider where the vocals are more held and drawn out where 00:48:310 (1) - have a bit more vocals.. so something like this? Replace the rhythm by yours. It sounds better.
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5. 00:53:060 (3) - same here. the head of the slider isnt on anything important. that "sfffft" sound happens everywhere o3o i think itd be better to follow the vocal here. and since 00:52:810 (2) - is a held vocal throughout, maybe try this rhythm by removing 00:52:810 (2,3) - ? Okay. Sounds better.
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6. 01:11:310 (3) - just placement bugging me alittle ~ try blanketing more with 01:10:310 (1) - ? it looks nicer that way imo. will need to move some things around though~ Okay.
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7. 01:37:810 (5) - replace with 1/2 slider, like what you did at 01:33:810 (9) - for consistency and following the vocal? Okay.
8. 02:49:310 (3,4,1) - im not a big fan of this pattern.. like i dont like the angles on this. its like im trying to make 2 boxes but i stop halfway for each.. does that make sense? ._." idk maybe its just me but i think it flows really awkwardly as a mouse player. i think itd be a lot better if you moved 02:50:060 (4) - to have something like this True. The flow is broken.
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9. 03:00:310 (1) - the vocals have a pause after 03:00:310 - and there isnt anything significant at the tail at 03:00:560 - so i think it would fit the music better if you replaced it with a hitcircle at 03:00:310 - Okay.
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10. 03:19:310 (5) - uhhh okay this slider tail ends on the second vocal but i think the second vocal is pretty weak.. it isnt very important either so i think you have 3 better options. you can end it at the first vocal at 03:19:810 - and have it the same as your easy and normal diff, you can end it at the strongest vocal and large white tick at 03:20:310 - , or you can end it at 03:20:185 - when all the music suddenly stops there. if you choose the third option following the instrumentals stopping, you might want to silence the tail with a green line at 5% volume. if you chose the 2nd option with the strongest vocal, maybe whistle at tail? if you didnt make the change, sad day. imo all 3 of these are better than where it ends now o3o I'll choose the third option. I actually want to end the slider at the point where the music stops, so I thought if I end it on the red tick, I thought about having a fade out at the tail.
11. 00:20:810 (3) - missing clap at head? I forgot. Added.
12. 01:36:310 (3) - remove whistle at tail? Okay.
13. 01:39:060 (2) - remove whistle and add to the head of 01:38:310 (1) - to sort of follow the strong start of the section hitsounding? like at 01:34:310 (1) - with the finish except with a whistle Sounds better.
14. 01:45:310 (7) - misplaced clap remove? Oops. Removed.
15. 01:45:810 (8) - clap Forgot this one.
16. 02:33:560 (3) - clap at tail?

weheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i love the bg~

sheela901 wrote:

You should be a BAT.

NoHitter wrote:

I apologize for the wait.

[Hard]
- 00:26:310 (1,2,3) - Using oval flow here makes it play better IMO. http://puu.sh/aJMam/7f4e94ff1f.jpg Okay.
- 00:36:810 (2,3,4) - Is the inconsistent spacing here intended? I actually want to make the note and the first slider in the combo a blanket pattern, but I moved next to the slider's tail.
- 00:44:810 (2) - Not that good of a slider IMO. Maybe make it a bit more symmetrical? I like the actual shape, but did some tiny tweaking, so it's not symmetric.
- 00:50:810 (3) - Move right a bit to make the notes behind it form a straight line. http://puu.sh/aJMfx/fd6f8cafd4.jpg Okay.
- 00:51:935 (5,6) - Same here. The curve you made with the notes looks odd. http://puu.sh/aJMgY/0a8dd21cb6.jpg It follows the curve, so no changes have been done.
- 00:58:810 (2,3) - The flow to this slider is odd. If you followed your circular flow, the next object should be on the upper left. http://puu.sh/aJMpH/6b20eeb20c.jpg Okay. It actually flows better.
- 01:02:310 (1) - Move this a bit to the left more so the end points to (2)'s start. http://puu.sh/aJMsv/1bc30c4dbf.jpg Okay.
- 01:27:060 (2) - Lower this a bit for better oval flow. http://puu.sh/aJMvi/af43a66288.jpg Okay.
- 01:49:810 (4) - The curve is pretty ugly considering this is a very short slider. Make it straight. Okay.
- 01:54:810 (2,3,4,5) - Better flow with this pattern? http://puu.sh/aJMCi/dd4004b279.jpg Okay/
- 01:59:310 (3) - Not placed in the center of (2)'s arc. http://puu.sh/aJMEF/5dafc4774e.jpg There's no problem? I don't understand this one.
- 03:20:310 () - End it here? [b]I want to end to where the music stops, which is blue tick.[/b]
- You probably need to nazi move some of the notes for better flow. I say nazi because they're small minute changes, but they can make your map play better.

[Normal]
- Same with Hard, some minor changes can be done with the combos for better flow. 00:22:060 (3) - for example -> http://puu.sh/aJMRb/6e19632669.jpg
- There are others in the map like 00:34:560 (5) - , 00:53:060 (2,3) - . 01:03:310 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/aJMW1/4dcf20bac7.jpg, etc. Okay, I'll check them. Same in Hard.
- 00:18:310 (4,5,6) - Make this mirror the direction of the previous combo. http://puu.sh/aJMPC/7d8d53b519.jpg Okay.
- 01:07:810 (4,5) - I don't recommend a stack here. It kills the flow of the combo. Okay.
- 03:20:310 () - End here? Same reason in the hard section.

[Easy]
- Great diff here.
- 03:20:310 () - End here? Still the same.

OscaR CUBE wrote:

Hii..
For m4m from your queque..

EASY

02:09:310 (5,6) - convert this to a slider? It doesn't fit with the rhythm.
02:59:810 (6,1) - make these blanket?? Okay.
03:20:310 - how about add a spinner here until 03:23:310 - ?? This has been in a lot of mods. The music ends at 03:19:810 , so I don't want to add a spinner for the vocal.

NORMAL

00:27:310 (6,1) - make these two paralel They are already.(is this how to write it?? Parallel is the correct word.)
01:26:310 (1,2) - ^ In this one, I like it the way it was. Parallel seems a little ugly.
00:44:060 - add a circle?? Not adding a circle due to 00:40:310 (1,2,3) , which means that I want to keep the same rhythm.
02:58:810 (4) - make this a little more curved?? maybe like this http://puu.sh/aLorv/028cdc012e.jpg 02:58:310 (2,3) follows a curve. And there's 03:00:810 (1) that is stack.
03:08:310 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/aLoyY/44d4537c43.jpg I want to make a mirror pattern with 03:06:310 (3) .
03:18:310 (2,3) - make the blanket better.. Nazi, but okay.
03:19:810 - 03:23:310 - i think u should map this part.. Same here. There's no music except the vocal, but I don't want to map the vocal.

HARD

00:21:310 (4,5) - how about place it like this?? http://puu.sh/aLoRI/4edf6daff2.jpg Okay. The flow is better now.
00:57:060 (2,3) - make the blanket better.. I think it's okay.
01:24:060 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + G, each of them..?? If I flip the head and tail for the first slider, 01:23:560 (4) will shoot to the tail, but not the head, which breaks the flow.
How about a spinner start from 01:40:435 - until 01:41:310 - ?? The pause is better.
01:53:310 (3,4) - paralel them.. They are already.
02:10:810 (2) - make this slider longer until the white tick?? There's no beat on the white tick, so the red tick should be okay.
02:35:060 - add a circle?? Still, there's no beat.
02:44:060 (2) - delete this?? I want to keep it.
Same as the easy and normal diff., i think u should map until 03:23:310 - Same reason as in the others; there's no music.

That's all i can find..
Sorry if my mods don't help you so much.. It's okay.

Moo-Chan wrote:

M4M~
I can't mod normals or easys :c Don't worry, it's okay.

[Hard]

1. 00:16:060 - Maybe add a note here? There's no beat in the music, though there's a vocal, but normally, the music should be map.
2. 00:28:310 (1,3) - Make these 2 the same shape? Okay. Should be prettier.
3. 01:34:310 (1) - Can you make this prettier? :3 Can't think of something, so I might made it ugly again. lol
4. 01:45:810 (8,9,10) - Turn these into a reverse slider? Hmm... It needs an explanation.
5. 02:11:310 - Add a note here? Like in the previous post. There's no beat, though there's the vocal. But I want to map the music.
6. 02:23:810 (4) - This could be straight like the other 3 Okay. He has been forever alone.
7. 02:53:310 (3,4) - Make the same shape? Okay. Replace the third slider by a curve similar to the next one.
8. 03:16:310 (1) - Again, maybe prettier? Okay. Maybe a bird shape fits.
9. 03:19:310 (5) - I would make this end at the white tick instead of the blue tick I'll keep it on the blue tick. The music doesn't end on the white tick but on the blue. I also think it's sounds weird, but again, I want to map the music.

Other than that, its good c: [b]Cool.[/b]
P.S : I like the SB >< Thanks~

Ylinestra44 wrote:

Hi there. I am not really used to modding, and I mod more nazi-stuff than General things, but here we go! It's okay.

Easy

• 00:24:310 (1) - If you move the waypont to x:308; y: 56 the slider lines up with the previous and following cirlce Okay. It can also go on the same line.
  During the Kiai, I would increase the volume a bit. With 10% more you can hear the finishes way better and it's still not too loud. Okay.
  01:06:310 (1) - Add a finish maybe? It doesn't fit here. It fits with the vocal, but I'm only putting hitsounds on beats.
  01:14:310 (1) - ^ Same reason as above.
  01:34:310 (5) - Increase volume by 5% I increased to 50%, the fact that the note is part of the chorus.
  01:42:310 (1) - Add a finish here with 30% volume to emphatize the beginning of the next stanza Okay.Actually, it sounds weird when you put one. I didn't put one to 00:16:310 (1) , so I'll keep the hitounds consistent.
  01:53:810 (3) - forgot the clap here? Yeah (why do I keep forgetting stuff)
  02:36:310 (1) - Add a finish on the start maybe? Hmm.. It doesn't fit.
  02:39:810 (5) - is not exactly at the same Position as the (2) Move it 1 to the left I think you mean to the right. Fixed.
  02:48:310 (1) - Finish at the start Same reason for 01:06:310 (1) .
  02:56:310 (1) - ^ Again, same reason.
  03:19:810 (4) - This feels weird. I didn't suspect it to end at that Moment. I'd suggest you to either simply delete that single note or map further to 03:23:310 - A lot of people said the same thing to me. I want to map the music, not the vocals (some may be), and there's no music there. So there's no point to map it to the final end of the music.
  
  That's all, it's a pretty nice easy =)

Normal

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  00:20:060 (8) - Either put the NC here already or delete this note and add one at 00:21:060 - . That plays also good and the NC then fits more for me. I want to follow the rhythm as 00:18:310 (4,5,6) . And the new combo usually takes place the white long tick, so I'm following it.
  00:29:310 (3) - Make this a 1/1 slider and replace 00:29:810 (4) - by a 1/2 slider beginning at 00:30:060 - I didn't completely follow your suggestion, but instead of adding a slider at 00:30:060 , I put a note at 00:30:310 . I thought it fits well.
  00:42:310 (4) - If you Ctrl + G this slider the flow seems nicer to me. Then you have to adjust the following notes. I understand what you mean, but the current flow will be okay.
  The same with the volume during Kiai here, too Okay.
  01:06:310 (1) - finish? Same reason. Look in the easy section to find it.
  01:13:810 (6,1,2) - Changing the Patterns into this rhythm fits better for me and keeps the NC on downbeat. I only tweak 01:13:810 (6) .
  01:14:310 - finish? It doesn't have the same beat as 01:10:310 .
  02:36:310 (1) - finish on start? Sounds a little weird.
  02:48:310 (1) - finish (I think it's clear which downbeats I mean, since they are all the same) There's no beat that sounds like 02:48:310 (1)
  03:16:310 (6) - A finish here would sound great. I think I forgot to put one. Added.
  The same Thing with the end here, too There's no music at the end.
  
  Also, a well made diff. Can't find anything about the flow.

Hard

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  00:29:560 (3) - The clap at the end sounds missplaced Oops. Forgot to remove it.
  01:42:060 - I miss a note here There's no beat.
  01:47:810 (4) - Sounds too short, I would make it a 1/2 slider I prefer the way it is. In my opinion, it fits with the clap.
  02:17:185 - Also missing a note her In my opinion, adding a note here will make the difficulty a little more harder.
  02:31:060 - and 02:33:310 - what are these Inherits for? There were objects before. I removed them because I want the rhythm to follow only the music.
  
  I am unable to find more here, sorry.

Good luck with your map =)