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Amamiya Sora - Skyreach (TV size) [Osu|OsuMania|Taiko|CatchT

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Kin
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Kin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 30 novembre 2014 at 17:29:43

Artist: Amamiya Sora
Title: Skyreach (TV size)
Source: Akame ga Kill!
Tags: Shina Atsuro0 Julie Kihhou FGSky
BPM: 184
Filesize: 22856kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. 117's Insane (4,37 stars, 328 notes)
  2. Atsuro's 4k NM - 4Key (1,82 stars, 472 notes)
  3. Atsuro's Normal (2,2 stars, 182 notes)
  4. FGSky's MX - 4Key (3,5 stars, 873 notes)
  5. Hard (2,1 stars, 21 notes)
  6. HD - 4Key (2,8 stars, 725 notes)
  7. Insane (4,7 stars, 254 notes)
  8. Julie's Muzukashii (3,13 stars, 443 notes)
  9. Kantan (2,02 stars, 161 notes)
  10. Kihhou's Easy (1,71 stars, 124 notes)
  11. Oni (3,92 stars, 539 notes)
  12. Overdose (5,59 stars, 99 notes)
  13. Shina's Futsuu (2,64 stars, 340 notes)
Download: Amamiya Sora - Skyreach (TV size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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please, re-dl after 01/08/2014, new mp3 + again timing
Thanks to xxdeathx for the 1st mp3, but also thanks to smallboat for the new mp3 + video.
Also check smallboat version
And also xxdeathx one

Standard :

Kihhou's Easy (100% done)
Atsuro's Normal (100% done)
Hard (10% WIP)
Insane (60% WIP)
117's Insane (100% done)

Taiko :

Oni (100% done)
Julie's Muzukashii (100% done)
Shina's Futsuu (100% done)
Kantan (100% done)

Catch the Beats :

Overdose (15% WIP)
newtoniorock8's Rain (WIP)

Mania 4K

Atsuro's NM (100% done)
HD (100% done)
FGSky's MX (100% done)

idk how to map mania diff :c
The mapset is almost done, I won't take more GD.
Also, only taiko and mania are ready for mod
Last edited by Kin , edited 23 times in total.
WingSilent
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Joined August 2012
WingSilent
Wow.. ça fait un paquet de diffs ^^
Musique sympa :)/

Bon courage pour la suite. \o/
Arlecchino
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Joined October 2013
Arlecchino
MoeKinMap :3
Nofool
Elite Mapper
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Joined February 2011
Nofool
Yo taiko mod req de Kin, je moderais la futsuu/kantan plus tard ou demain probablement.
Ptin j'écris trop quand je mod en fr...hf

[General]
Bon j’ai pas compris ce que t’as voulu faire avec tout ces changements de bpm, peut-être que c’est pour les autres mods, mais sur les diffs taiko là faut faire quelque chose, ils sont plutôt mal placés parceque la plupart du temps les grandes barres blanches se retrouvent là où y’a rien et, je sais pas si t’as playtest mais, - 00:55:245 changement de bpm en plein stream XD ça fait moche tu verras. Bref c’est presque un prob d’esthétique, si tu veux demandes moi pour que je check comment les placer mieu (taiko diffs seulement) j’ai compris l’idée d’esthétique des barres blanches récemment...
[Oni]
- 00:05:365 (28,30) delete ? pour mettre en valeur les deux K (et la song ofc). C’est différent pour 00:02:756 (14,16) et après parce que la mélodie est différente, du coup jt’aurais conseillé d’aussi enlever les finish pour 00:02:593 (13,15) et 00:07:810 (43,45) pour suivre seulement la mélodie, ça fait moins bizarre imo x_x.

- 00:09:930 (58) delete et swap les couleurs de 00:10:093 (59,60) ? sans le (58) ça met + les deux finish pour la guitare en valeur et (60) est plus aigu que (59). Sinon toujours sans le (58) tu peux même mettre un spinner pour suivre la guitare jusqu’à ton prochain pattern x_x.

- 00:21:343 – 00:31:444 sur cette part t’aurais pu mieux placer les breaks imo, tu verras en écoutant que y’a des endroits où ça manque de note à cause de la mélodie, simple exemple : - 00:21:506 ou 00:23:626 t’as soit la guitare soit les voix (ou les deux) qui s’entend bien à ces endroit là (et même les drums) du coup ça fait bizarre sans rien, mais si tu rajoutes des trucs à chaque fois ça fera pas de pause je sais, du coup tu peux mieux les placer, comme à 00:25:744 par exemple. A check oupas comme tu veux.

- 00:44:824 (253) peut-être delete ? je sais pas pourquoi mais la voix sonne pas en même temps que ce k du coup il suite rien, et sans lui le D d’après/début du kiai est + mis en valeur.

- Sur la deuxième partie du kiai t’aurais pu mieux placer les patterns pour qu’ils collent mieux avec la voix imo, exemple : - 00:57:966 en rajoutant k ici t’aurais eu un pattern qui suit mieux la voix, enfin ça demande un gros check changement, à toi de voir, beaucoup de patterns qui commencent ½ temps trop tôt ou trop tard je pense.

- 01:21:036 (491) là ok pour le d ça suit clairement la batterie et les sons des K autour sont bien plus courts qu’au début.
- 01:22:992 (504,506,507,508) swap les couleurs ? suit plus la mélodie comme ça.
[Julie’s Muzkashii]
- 00:23:299 – 00:33:237 mm maybe try to follow more the vocal or the melody for this part ? there are 2 big amount of notes without any break, that’s too much for a muzu imo. Drums are not high enough to follow them only. For example, something like

would’ve fited way more the melody, cursor is at 00:32:096 -.
- 00:34:067 (104) change to k ? fits more the vocal.
- 00:35:208 (110) ^
- 00:36:675 (119) ^
- 00:41:241 (146,147) swap colors ? ^
- 00:45:558 (3,4,5,6,7) inattention error ? move these 5 notes to ¼ before.
- 00:55:744 – 00:59:346 find something else there x_x that’s really not cool to play imo. Better follow the vocal or idk.
- 01:02:273 – 01:03:413 ^
- 01:19:249 – 01:21:199 just copy past what you did at 00:03:408 – 00:05:528 -, that sounds way better imo.
- 01:25:764 add d or k ? as you did at the beginning of the song.
- 01:27:068 (60) change to k ? fits better the melody.
Kin
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Kin

Nofool wrote:

Yo taiko mod req de Kin, je moderais la futsuu/kantan plus tard ou demain probablement.
Ptin j'écris trop quand je mod en fr...hf

[General]
Bon j’ai pas compris ce que t’as voulu faire avec tout ces changements de bpm, peut-être que c’est pour les autres mods, mais sur les diffs taiko là faut faire quelque chose, ils sont plutôt mal placés parceque la plupart du temps les grandes barres blanches se retrouvent là où y’a rien et, je sais pas si t’as playtest mais, - 00:55:245 changement de bpm en plein stream XD ça fait moche tu verras. Bref c’est presque un prob d’esthétique, si tu veux demandes moi pour que je check comment les placer mieu (taiko diffs seulement) j’ai compris l’idée d’esthétique des barres blanches récemment...
[Oni]
- 00:05:365 (28,30) delete ? pour mettre en valeur les deux K (et la song ofc). C’est différent pour 00:02:756 (14,16) et après parce que la mélodie est différente, du coup jt’aurais conseillé d’aussi enlever les finish pour 00:02:593 (13,15) et 00:07:810 (43,45) pour suivre seulement la mélodie, ça fait moins bizarre imo x_x. le truc, c'est que içi, les K K sont sur la guitare, mais aussi en même temps sur le clap+cymbal drum

- 00:09:930 (58) delete et swap les couleurs de 00:10:093 (59,60) ? sans le (58) ça met + les deux finish pour la guitare en valeur et (60) est plus aigu que (59). Sinon toujours sans le (58) tu peux même mettre un spinner pour suivre la guitare jusqu’à ton prochain pattern x_x. je peux comprendre pourquoi, mais perso j'suis pas du tout un grand fan des drum roll ou encore spinner. Concernant le 58, je préfère le garder, sinon je devrais mieux delete le spam de d pour être consistent

- 00:21:343 – 00:31:444 sur cette part t’aurais pu mieux placer les breaks imo, tu verras en écoutant que y’a des endroits où ça manque de note à cause de la mélodie, simple exemple : - 00:21:506 ou 00:23:626 t’as soit la guitare soit les voix (ou les deux) qui s’entend bien à ces endroit là (et même les drums) du coup ça fait bizarre sans rien, mais si tu rajoutes des trucs à chaque fois ça fera pas de pause je sais, du coup tu peux mieux les placer, comme à 00:25:744 par exemple. A check oupas comme tu veux. perso içi j'entends pas vraiment de strong drum D: 00:24:930 -

- 00:44:824 (253) peut-être delete ? je sais pas pourquoi mais la voix sonne pas en même temps que ce k du coup il suite rien, et sans lui le D d’après/début du kiai est + mis en valeur. il est un peu sur rien, mais c'est surtout que j'aime bien le ressenti juste avant le D :/

- Sur la deuxième partie du kiai t’aurais pu mieux placer les patterns pour qu’ils collent mieux avec la voix imo, exemple : - 00:57:966 en rajoutant k ici t’aurais eu un pattern qui suit mieux la voix, enfin ça demande un gros check changement, à toi de voir, beaucoup de patterns qui commencent ½ temps trop tôt ou trop tard je pense. c'est parce que c'est du full drum et 0 vocal D:

- 01:21:036 (491) là ok pour le d ça suit clairement la batterie et les sons des K autour sont bien plus courts qu’au début.
- 01:22:992 (504,506,507,508) swap les couleurs ? suit plus la mélodie comme ça. j'ai pas vraiment swap exactement pareil, mais ça devrait mieux le faire
merci jtm
Julie
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Joined March 2013
Julie

Nofool wrote:

Yo taiko mod req de Kin, je moderais la futsuu/kantan plus tard ou demain probablement.
Ptin j'écris trop quand je mod en fr...hf <-- t'aurais du modder le mien en français haha


[Julie’s Muzkashii]
- 00:23:299 – 00:33:237 mm maybe try to follow more the vocal or the melody for this part ? there are 2 big amount of notes without any break, that’s too much for a muzu imo. Drums are not high enough to follow them only. For example, something like

would’ve fited way more the melody, cursor is at 00:32:096 -. Fix and thanks for the tips :3
- 00:34:067 (104) change to k ? fits more the vocal.Fix
- 00:35:208 (110) ^Fix
- 00:36:675 (119) ^Fix
- 00:41:241 (146,147) swap colors ? ^ Fix
- 00:45:558 (3,4,5,6,7) inattention error ? move these 5 notes to ¼ before.Hahaha, yeah forgot to resnap after timing change xD
- 00:55:744 – 00:59:346 find something else there x_x that’s really not cool to play imo. Better follow the vocal or idk.Fix
- 01:02:273 – 01:03:413 ^Fix
- 01:19:249 – 01:21:199 just copy past what you did at 00:03:408 – 00:05:528 -, that sounds way better imo.The end doesn't have the same sound, so nop
- 01:25:764 add d or k ? as you did at the beginning of the song.Fix
- 01:27:068 (60) change to k ? fits better the melody.Fix
Merciii ~~
http://puu.sh/awt4Q.osu
Nofool
Elite Mapper
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Nofool
Deuxième partie, no kudosu ofc
Omg Kin t'as oublié de changer les OD et HP noob.
Muzu HP/OD=>4
Et wait ça s'remove pas ça n_n ?

[Shina’s Futsuu]
HP=>3
OD=>3
Un peu dur pour une futsuu mby.

- 00:02:756 (9,10) del et add d à 00:02:919 ? du coup ça suit clairement la basse(je crois) au lieu de suivre à moitié la mélodie de la guitare.
- 00:05:365 (9) del ? pour mettre plus en valeur les deux k pour la basse.
- 00:07:973 (9) del et add d à 00:08:136 ? même raison que pour - 00:02:756 -.
- 00:14:984 (6) déplaces à 00:14:821 ? pour suivre mieux la voix et les drums.
- 00:19:060 (20,21,22) ddk=>kkd ? moins grave que le précédent ddk.
- 00:20:365 (24,25,26) kkd=>ddk ? plus grave ^.
- 00:23:299 – 00:33:237 – Sur cette part on sait pas trop si tu suis l’instru ou la voix, éssaies de changer pour en suivre qu’un seul ?_ ? c’est une futsuu après tout é_è.

Bon pour la suite j’vais supposer que tu suis la voix et non les drums(suivre les drums aurait été plus simple imo x_x) et mod en fonction de ça.

-00:35:534 (83) déplaces à 00:35:697 et changes 00:35:860 (84) en D ?
- 00:37:165 (89,90,91) swap les couleurs pour plus de consistance si tu as appliqué la suggestion précédente.
- 00:41:078 add d et déplaces 00:41:241 (104) à 00:41:404 ?
- 00:54:756 (162) déplaces à 00:54:919 et change 00:55:082 (163) en k, comme t’as fais au début du kiai ?

T’aurais pu un peu mieux suivre la voix sur le kiai imo, d’autres petits changements à faire si tu peux.

- 01:14:825 add d ? drums cette fois.
- 01:15:809 (246) celui là en D aussi, KK dD c’est un peu louche là é_è.

Sur la partie qui suit t’aurais peut-être du faire pratiquement la même chose qu’au début, c’est la même chose niveau musique. Du coup si tu l’fais c’est les même suggestions que j’ai fait pour le début, c’est la meilleurs solution j’pense.
[Kantan]
HP=>2-3
OD=>2-3, 5 t fou toi xd (ouais j'ai check ça pour la première fois d'ma vie)
- 00:03:082 (6) déplaces à 00:02:919 ? suis entièrement cette grosse basse entièrement ou pas du tout, là c’est trop compliqué la transition pour un débutant x_x.
- 00:05:691 (12) ^ même chose + change en k.
- 00:08:299 (18) ^ + change en d.
- 00:10:256 un spinner ici serait bien justifié(même si t’es pas un grand fan hue).
- 00:30:139 mieux vaux add quelque chose ici et del le d suivant, ça reste simple et suit mieux le rythme imo.
- 00:39:610 (83) del ? yes j’vois pas trop l’intérêt des quartes notes d’affilé en 1/1 pour une kantan.

Mm pour le Kiai et la partie qui suit je trouve pas de suggestion simple x_x honnêtement je trouve que t’utilises beaucoup trop les red ticks pour une kantan (même si ça suit quelque chose, ça suit pas vraiment de rythme général j’trouve), c’est franchement pas instinctif à jouer pour un débutant imo. Jt’aurais conseillé de refaire une bonne partie et de mapper simplement en suivant les drums en tick blanc avec quelques red ticks ofc mais là c’est trop é_è. A toi de voir.

Ensuite pour la toute fin comme j’ai dit pour les autres diffs, la musique est presque identique au début donc autant faire pareil x_x ?

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

gl + une étoile... autant que j'les utilise un jour
Kin
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Topic Starter
Kin

Nofool wrote:

Deuxième partie, no kudosu ofc
Omg Kin t'as oublié de changer les OD et HP noob awi
Muzu HP/OD=>4
Et wait ça s'remove pas ça n_n ? ah, ça ne l'était pas ?

[Kantan]
HP=>2-3
OD=>2-3, 5 t fou toi xd (ouais j'ai check ça pour la première fois d'ma vie) awi xd
- 00:03:082 (6) déplaces à 00:02:919 ? suis entièrement cette grosse basse entièrement ou pas du tout, là c’est trop compliqué la transition pour un débutant x_x.
- 00:05:691 (12) ^ même chose + change en k.
- 00:08:299 (18) ^ + change en d.Pour ses 3 patterns la, j'pense que c'est mieux d'avoir le début et la fin du pattern musical mappé
- 00:10:256 un spinner ici serait bien justifié(même si t’es pas un grand fan hue).
- 00:30:139 mieux vaux add quelque chose ici et del le d suivant, ça reste simple et suit mieux le rythme imo.
- 00:39:610 (83) del ? yes j’vois pas trop l’intérêt des quartes notes d’affilé en 1/1 pour une kantan. both fix'd

Mm pour le Kiai et la partie qui suit je trouve pas de suggestion simple x_x honnêtement je trouve que t’utilises beaucoup trop les red ticks pour une kantan (même si ça suit quelque chose, ça suit pas vraiment de rythme général j’trouve), c’est franchement pas instinctif à jouer pour un débutant imo. Jt’aurais conseillé de refaire une bonne partie et de mapper simplement en suivant les drums en tick blanc avec quelques red ticks ofc mais là c’est trop é_è. A toi de voir.Le problème de cette musique, est que les strongs note musical, sont énormément sur les red ticks :/

Ensuite pour la toute fin comme j’ai dit pour les autres diffs, la musique est presque identique au début donc autant faire pareil x_x ?

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gl + une étoile... autant que j'les utilise un jour
merci jtm <3
Fuuyu
856 posts
Joined September 2013
Fuuyu
From . . Miramono's Modding Team


Mod Starts Here
[General]
Change title name to Skyreach (TV Size)
then remove " tv size " in the tags also add " opening " in the tags . . .
Lastly, you don't need to put 7K on this Map since your spreading not only o!m 4K but every mode from STD to o!m . .
d
k
D ( Big d )
K ( Big k )

[Kantan]
00:10:261 (22) - Change to k

00:17:435 (35) - Move 00:17:272

00:54:120 (113) - Change to k instead of D

00:55:913 (115) - Change to d

01:23:794 (170) - Move 01:23:631

[Shina's Futsuu]
00:02:761 (9) - Move 00:02:924

00:05:533 (10) - Move 00:05:696

00:05:370 (9) - Move 00:05:533

00:07:978 (9) - Move 00:08:141

00:08:304 - Add k/d

00:13:848 - Add d

00:14:989 (6) - Move 00:14:826

00:15:804 - Add d

00:17:761 (15,16) - Change to k

00:18:087 (17) - Change to d

00:19:228 (21) - Change to k

00:19:391 (22) - 00:19:391 (22) - Change to d

00:26:891 - Add d

00:38:304 (94) - Change to d

01:14:011 (241) - Remove

01:14:174 (242) - Change to k

01:14:500 (243) - Change to d

01:21:674 (270) - Move 01:21:511

[Julie's Muzukashii]
00:12:544 (1,2) - Change to k

00:12:870 (3) - Change to d

00:20:370 (27,28) - Change to k

00:33:087 - Add d

01:11:076 (27) - Change to d

01:28:196 - How about putting a spinner/slider in this part? then end it here 01:28:848

Nice Taiko Maps :) . . . . Good Luck~
Julie
1,416 posts
Joined March 2013
Julie

xLoupGarou wrote:

From . . Miramono's Modding Team


Mod Starts Here
[Julie's Muzukashii]
00:12:544 (1,2) - Change to k

00:12:870 (3) - Change to d

00:20:370 (27,28) - Change to k

00:33:087 - Add d

01:11:076 (27) - Change to d

01:28:196 - How about putting a spinner/slider in this part? then end it here 01:28:848
Fixed all thanks ^^

http://puu.sh/aD1p0.osu
Effy
506 posts
Joined July 2012
Effy
Fixed some!


Thank you Nofool and xLoupGarou :D
Kihhou
1,040 posts
Joined March 2013
Kihhou
is this dead? :c
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Kin
I was just waiting for a bug fix
It isn't fix'd, but I dodge it
FGSky
535 posts
Joined November 2012
FGSky
voilà j'ai enfin fini la diff
SPOILER
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PatZar
3,079 posts
Joined March 2013
PatZar
dem music

[Oni]
00:12:544 (66,67) - D is better. imo
00:16:946 (83) - K ^

[Julie's Muzukashii]
00:00:805 (1,2) - D
00:02:761 (13,14) - finish
00:57:870 (68) - kat, cuz vocal

[Shina's Futsuuuuuuu]
SV 1.4 :arrow: 1.2

00:11:891 - kat
00:12:218 - kat
00:12:870 - move to 00:12:707 and 00:12:544 - don here
00:26:239 (60,61,62) - waiii it's too hard for Futsuu.imo
00:32:598 - delete
00:57:747 - move to 00:57:707 -
00:57:870 - delete it's better

[Kantan]
de bes :O!

good luck den
i don't like akamegakill tbh >//<
mliencheng
460 posts
Joined November 2010
mliencheng
[ Kantan]

  1. 00:51:511 obviously has a higher vocal than it's previous note, could replace it with k to lay emphasis on it
  2. 00:52:000 has no vocal or sound . Can move to 00:52:326 and then delete 00:52:652 which also has no sound.
    Putting to many notes at places which has no sound is way too much for a Kantan diff.
  3. 01:17:435 k. I don't find it much different with previous note (k)
  4. 01:18:087 - 01:18:413 - 01:19:065 - 01:19:718 - unsnapped notes

    To conclude, I feel too dense in this difficulty. You can try simplify it by removing some unnecessary notes where there's no obvious sounds.
[ Shina's Futsuu]

  1. Well mapped. But for a good difficulty spread, I think this is a bit too hard, almost muzukashii level without 1/4. Try removing some notes and make more reasonable break :)
[ Julie's Muzukashii]

  1. I suggest removing 00:28:033 to have a short break here, stream too long for a muzukashii.
  2. For same reason, remove 00:29:663 - 00:29:989 - 00:30:968 -
  3. For consistency pattern following high and low vocal with 00:36:348 ddd , 00:37:734 add k and also change 00:37:815 to k
  4. For more breaks, remove 00:56:891 - 00:57:218 - 00:57:544
  5. Remove 01:05:777 - 1/4 kkkkk is too over for muzukashii!
  6. Remove 01:08:468
  7. Remove 01:24:038 - 1/4 ddddd is too over for muzukashii!
  8. Remove 01:26:484 - 1/4 ddddd is too over for muzukashii!
This is a little overmapped jamming too many notes whereas some calm places should be easy and few notes. Can still try simplifying!

[ Oni]

  1. 00:10:261 is quite similar to 00:10:098 , they almost share the same sound, better change it to K
  2. 00:30:152 vocal here but no notes ?? :D
  3. 01:04:554 K sounds better with high pitch vocal
  4. From 01:17:924 to 01:20:044 , notes unsnapped
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Kin

mliencheng wrote:

[ Kantan]

  1. 00:51:511 obviously has a higher vocal than it's previous note, could replace it with k to lay emphasis on it fix'd
  2. 00:52:000 has no vocal or sound . Can move to 00:52:326 and then delete 00:52:652 which also has no sound.
    Putting to many notes at places which has no sound is way too much for a Kantan diff. not really fix'd, but changed after self checking
  3. 01:17:435 k. I don't find it much different with previous note (k) guitare is more high pitched on the 1st note
  4. 01:18:087 - 01:18:413 - 01:19:065 - 01:19:718 - unsnapped notes re snapped

    To conclude, I feel too dense in this difficulty. You can try simplify it by removing some unnecessary notes where there's no obvious sounds.
[ Oni]

  1. 00:10:261 is quite similar to 00:10:098 , they almost share the same sound, better change it to K almost =/= same, + I think K D is better than K K for this part
  2. 00:30:152 vocal here but no notes ?? :D because it's following drum >_<
  3. 01:04:554 K sounds better with high pitch vocal I don't like how it goes with the previous k
  4. From 01:17:924 to 01:20:044 , notes unsnapped re snapped
thanks for mod \o
Julie
1,416 posts
Joined March 2013
Julie

Genocide wrote:

[Julie's Muzukashii]
00:00:805 (1,2) - D
00:02:761 (13,14) - finish
00:57:870 (68) - kat, cuz vocal

i don't like akamegakill tbh >//<
Thanks geno, for the finish I might consider it :3! Read the manga :D, ish better then the anime~

mliencheng wrote:

[

[ Julie's Muzukashii]

  1. I suggest removing 00:28:033 to have a short break here, stream too long for a muzukashii.
  2. For same reason, remove 00:29:663 - 00:29:989 - 00:30:968 -
  3. For consistency pattern following high and low vocal with 00:36:348 ddd , 00:37:734 add k and also change 00:37:815 to k
  4. For more breaks, remove 00:56:891 - 00:57:218 - 00:57:544
  5. Remove 01:05:777 - 1/4 kkkkk is too over for muzukashii!
  6. Remove 01:08:468
  7. Remove 01:24:038 - 1/4 ddddd is too over for muzukashii!
  8. Remove 01:26:484 - 1/4 ddddd is too over for muzukashii!
This is a little overmapped jamming too many notes whereas some calm places should be easy and few notes. Can still try simplifying!
This is not futsuu, as a muzukashii player I don't see why there should be having that much break, there is a lots of map with more row then what I had here, remove a few then :<
for the overmapping part, also trying the difficulty spread, I have like nearly 100 more notes then futsuu and nearly 100 less note then oni
kkkkk should be easy if muzukashii player has learned kkk, same for ddddd, and now new muzukashi has ddk, which is harder then kkkkk or ddddd o.o, most muzukashi player I know learned these pattern before ddk, so I don't see the problem much. Might re-consider it, if is an unrankable issue in muzukashii O.o

http://puu.sh/bthQ8.osu
Danielslz9
222 posts
Joined April 2014
Danielslz9
Hi form Modding Queue
Column format |1|2|3|4
I love this Song

[Atsuro0's 4K NM]
The Snap Divisor Change it to 1/4
00:38:631 Move the slider to 1
00:38:794 The circle to 2
00:37:163 Move The silder to 2 and the circle to 4
00:37:489 Move te circle to 3
00:47:761 Move the slider to 1
00:54:120 Move to 2

[FGSky´s MX]
00:20:533 make the same here as in 00:20:370
FGSky
535 posts
Joined November 2012
FGSky

Danielslz9 wrote:

Hi form Modding Queue
Column format |1|2|3|4
I love this Song

[FGSky´s MX]
00:20:533 make the same here as in 00:20:370 Nope, but i modified the pattern because i didn't like it too
thanks for trying to mod !

update
osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 2200
PreviewTime: 44500
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Skyreach (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Skyreach (TV size)
Artist:Amamiya Sora
ArtistUnicode:雨宮天
Creator:Kin
Version:FGSky's MX
Source:Akame ga Kill!
Tags:Shina Atsuro0 Julie Kihhou
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Akihiro
114 posts
Joined January 2010
Akihiro
Ohai. From Modding queue. ;)

Key Columns : [ 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 ]
Black : Standard note, suggestion
Red : Timing or layering error, and things that throw me off
Blue : Really subjective stuff.


[AtsuroO's NM]

HP7 : OK
OD7 : A bit too easy imo.

SV : [quote=Agka]Do NOT use sv changes above 1x for long sections. Ever. [/quote] Honestly I think it is not a good way to emphasize this part of the song, players who are playing with their usual scroll speed will probably have to restart the song over just so they can read this section. Now I know it's only x1.1, and it's somewhat readable, but yet it's something you should avoid. The rest of the SV are very well done though.

Kiai Time : I feel like the 2nd Kiai Time should end at 01:06:022 and the 3rd one at 01:11:239, makes more sense to me musically.

00:00:805 (805|0,805|3,968|3,968|0) - Should alternate chords like you did at 00:03:413 (3413|3,3413|0,3576|1,3576|2) and 00:06:022 (6022|2,6022|1,6185|3,6185|0) for sake of consistency.

00:07:815 (7815|3) - Don't know why this LN is 1/2 longer than the previous ones. The music didn't change yet.
00:07:798 - Also here, don't know why you didn't put a note here.

00:11:973 - A note for the drum roll adds value and won't kill a newbie player. (maybe use 4 3 2 pattern)

00:16:946 (16946|3,17272|0) - LN for crash cymbals feels weird honestly

00:21:348 (21348|0,22000|0) - - These LN don't make much sense to me. I'd rather have them on 00:21:511 (21511|1) and 00:21:837 (21837|2) - for the guitar.

00:22:163 (22163|1,22489|1) - Lacks emphasis on crash cymbal imo

00:22:897 - A note for the drum roll adds value and won't kill a newbie player.

00:25:913 (25913|0) - Not sure what this is for.

00:26:728 (26728|3) - Should be a LN (guitar begoins on this note)

Section is messy, here's my suggestion :
00:28:359 : Add guitar note 2
00:28:848 (28848|1) - move to 3
00:29:337 (29337|2) - make this a LN that stops at 00:29:663
00:29:500 (29500|1) - remove completely
00:29:663 - have a note somewhere
00:29:989 (29989|3,30478|2) - make these LN until next note
00:30:641 (30641|3) - LN until 00:30:398
00:30:804 (30804|1) - remove

You can re-arrange the notes however you like, it's the rhythms that are important here.

00:38:631 (38631|1,39283|1,39935|1) - Are those for vocals ? Me not like >:(

00:47:761 (47761|1) - This short LN is weird, I would have it a bit longer.

00:54:446 - would add a note here

00:55:750 (55750|1,56076|2,56402|3) - etc etc... : These short LN play fine but it's really unconventional for what you highlights. I would have kept just doubles on 1/1 and leave the LNs.

01:07:163 (67163|1) - This note should be guitar LN don't you think ?

Overall thoughts : Your map maps plays well, has ideas, but is globally messy in the pattern structure and LN uses. But if I went on all the tiny little details it would be stupid. Try to ask yourself why you use such pattern or such length of LN each time you place a note, and answer with something directly related to the song.


[HD]

HP7 : a bit easy
OD7 : easy

00:00:805 (805|0,805|3,805|1) - Retire une note pour la passer sur 00:00:968 (968|3,968|0), vu que tu as batterie seulement sur la premiere, et guitare qui s'ajoute sur la deuxième.

00:01:457 (1457|3,1946|3) - Même si je comprend ce que tu veux dire, ajouter un 2e layer juste pour les temps forts d'un seul instrument c'est vraiment borderline.

00:03:087 (3087|1) - Cette LN commence à 00:02:924

00:03:576 (3576|0,3576|3) - Manque la note de la guitare
00:04:065 (4065|3,4554|3) - Même réflexion

00:05:696 (5696|2) - Pas trop compris pourquoi tu ne continue les LN pour la guitare juste avant.

00:06:185 (6185|0,6185|3) - Manque la note de la guitare
00:06:674 (6674|3,7163|3) - Même réflexion

00:09:772 (9772|3,9772|1) - Une seule LN ici vu que tu en avait qu'une seule jusqu'ici et que la guitare n'est pas plus forte ou quoi.
00:10:261 (10261|1,10261|3) - Pas de batterie ici donc deux notes ça fait un peu trop.

00:13:848 (13848|2) - move to 2 : on change de note en même temps qu'on change de mesure.

00:17:435 (17435|0) - LN bizarre, quitte à avoir une LN j'aurai démarré d'une des notes de la triple directement, y'a rien dans la musique qui justifie une pression de touche en plus ici.

00:20:207 (20207|3,20370|3,20533|3,20696|3) - Gaffe aux répétitions dans tes patterns.

00:21:674 (21674|0) - LN en trop imo

00:24:772 (24772|1,25098|1) - Ou qu'elle est passé la guitare d'un coup ?

00:25:261 (25261|3) - LN approximative~~

00:28:114 (28114|1) - Y'a pas de roulement ici, remove

00:29:011 (29011|1) - Need une LN ici pour accompagner 00:28:522 (28522|2)

00:29:989 (29989|2,30315|1) - j'aurais mis des LN là

00:30:641 - manque de la note par là

00:34:799 (34799|0) - note en trop, pas de roulement
00:38:060 (38060|1) - note en trop, pas de roulement

00:38:957 (38957|2,39935|2,40261|3) - wat ? je pige pas ces LN par contre

00:49:391 (49391|1) - ^

00:57:544 (57544|0,57707|1,57870|2,58033|3) - vocals ? ugh....

Bon toute la fin c'est des trucs que j'ai deja dit, y'a rien d'enorme, et si je me mets à commenter chaque note qui va pas j'en ai pour la nuit, donc je vais plutot finir par une commentaire général.

en gros : T'a vraiment du potentiel dans le sens ou ta map passe crème.
Mais par contre, c'est vraiment le bazar. Y'a plein de LN qui trainent on sait pas trop pourquoi. La layering sur la batterie est à peu près correct tout du long, ce qui est un bon point. Fait gaffe à pas mettre des notes quand y'en a pas, et surtout évite les LN approximatives qui sont censés faire ressortir un bout de guitare qui s'entend à moitié parce qu'au final ta LN a 50% de chances de perdre le joueurs, en plus de commencer/finir parfois au mauvais endroit.

Si tu fait vraiment attention aux note que tu met, que ta map soit clean, y'a moyen que tu fasse des très bon trucs, mais à y regarder de plus près, c'est un peu la foire au freestyle.

Pour moi une map clean c'est une map ou rien n'est laissé au hasard ou à l'approximation. Suis une logique de patterns et change-en le moins possible, ou alors change là mais à intervalle régulières (pour le refrain par exemple, ou toutes les X mesures parce que la musique change un peu aussi). Pareil, quand d'un coup tu a 4 LN pour la voix qui sortent de nulle part, ça fait ghetto.
Si tu sais pas trop comment rendre un instrument de fond, il vaut mieux le laisser de côté.

Donc voilà, mon conseil c'est d'éviter les LN à tout prix, pose une base de layering simple guitare batterie, et rajoute des LN que pour marquer vraiment quelque chose. Ou alors si tu veux en mettre plus, assure toi que ça soit fait de manière consistente : si tu as une LN pour la note de guitare n mais que y'a rien pour la n+1, ça fait ghetto aussi.

Bref je te conseille de regarder un peu de plancher sur les endroits ou je t'ai dis que qui allait pas trop, mais d'essayer de reporter ça sur l'ensemble de ta map, pour essayer de rendre les choses un peu plus claires !

Hésite pas si tu as des questions toussa, happy mapping !


[FGSky's MX]

HP7 : a bit easy
OD 8 : ok i guess

00:00:641 (641|0,641|3) - Ces notes sont avant la ligne rouge o/

00:08:712 (8712|0) - bon à ton avis, est-ce que les passages comme ça sont rankables ?
Tu as une guitare qui fait trois pauvres accords, la batterie qui fait trois coup pour marquer les accords, et la tu me fait un omgfuryofthejumpstreamdragonforce5stars. Si y'a un truc qui te disqualifie pour le rank ici, c'est l'overmapping, donc je te suggère très fortement de revoir tout les passages dans le genre !

00:16:375 (16375|1) - Note en trop

00:19:065 (19065|1) - accord de guitare ?

De 00:22:978 (22978|3,22978|0) - à 00:31:457 (31457|0,31457|3) -
C'est dans les passages comme ça que tu peux le justifier ton MX. Tu la guitare qui fait des trucs sympa mais tu te contente de copypasta un squelette de batterie hyper basique :( à revoir donc

Bon pas grand chose à dire, les passages par overmappés sont pas dégueu, juste voilà y'a des endroits tu aurait pu rajouter des trucs, et tout le refrain ou y'a pas grand chose instrumentalement, tu me sors un jumpstream de l'espace.

Faut clairement que tu revoie ta map si tu veux la rank.

Etoffe ton layering par dessus ta batterie, utilise pleinement la song, et tu pourrais faire un truc aussi dur sans overmapper comme tu l'a fait.
FGSky
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FGSky

Akihiro wrote:

Ohai. From Modding queue. ;)

Key Columns : [ 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 ]
Black : Standard note, suggestion
Red : Timing or layering error, and things that throw me off
Blue : Really subjective stuff.


[FGSky's MX]

HP7 : a bit easy fixed to OD8
OD 8 : ok i guess

00:00:641 (641|0,641|3) - Ces notes sont avant la ligne rouge o/ oups

00:08:712 (8712|0) - bon à ton avis, est-ce que les passages comme ça sont rankables ?
Tu as une guitare qui fait trois pauvres accords, la batterie qui fait trois coup pour marquer les accords, et la tu me fait un omgfuryofthejumpstreamdragonforce5stars. Si y'a un truc qui te disqualifie pour le rank ici, c'est l'overmapping, donc je te suggère très fortement de revoir tout les passages dans le genre ! en même temps j'ai pas d'autres choix pour augmenter le star rating, mais bon je l'ai rendu un peu trop facile

00:16:375 (16375|1) - Note en trop euh nope

00:19:065 (19065|1) - accord de guitare ? pas d'idée pour le pattern

De 00:22:978 (22978|3,22978|0) - à 00:31:457 (31457|0,31457|3) -
C'est dans les passages comme ça que tu peux le justifier ton MX. Tu la guitare qui fait des trucs sympa mais tu te contente de copypasta un squelette de batterie hyper basique :( à revoir donc heu, je mets quoi à la place ? tu veux que je mets des LNs qui rendent mes maps encore plus merdiques ?

Bon pas grand chose à dire, les passages par overmappés sont pas dégueu, juste voilà y'a des endroits tu aurait pu rajouter des trucs, et tout le refrain ou y'a pas grand chose instrumentalement, tu me sors un jumpstream de l'espace. comme je l'ai dit j'ai pas d'autre choix pour augmenter le star rating >.>

Faut clairement que tu revoie ta map si tu veux la rank.

Etoffe ton layering par dessus ta batterie, utilise pleinement la song, et tu pourrais faire un truc aussi dur sans overmapper comme tu l'a fait. si je fais comme tu viens de dire ça changera pas grand chose.
Merci pour le mod quand même !

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Kin
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Kin

Akihiro wrote:

Ohai. From Modding queue. ;)

Key Columns : [ 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 ]
Black : Standard note, suggestion
Red : Timing or layering error, and things that throw me off
Blue : Really subjective stuff.

[HD]

HP7 : a bit easy
OD7 : easy

00:00:805 (805|0,805|3,805|1) - Retire une note pour la passer sur 00:00:968 (968|3,968|0), vu que tu as batterie seulement sur la premiere, et guitare qui s'ajoute sur la deuxième. Perso, je préfère garder la 1ère note, à la base je l'avais mise pour la batterie, vu qu'il y a la "bass" en meme temps que le "clap"

00:01:457 (1457|3,1946|3) - Même si je comprend ce que tu veux dire, ajouter un 2e layer juste pour les temps forts d'un seul instrument c'est vraiment borderline. fixed

00:03:087 (3087|1) - Cette LN commence à 00:02:924 Y a toujours un son de guitare+drum içi 00:03:087 - >_>

00:03:576 (3576|0,3576|3) - Manque la note de la guitare pareil
00:04:065 (4065|3,4554|3) - Même réflexion fixed

00:05:696 (5696|2) - Pas trop compris pourquoi tu ne continue les LN pour la guitare juste avant. après avoir re écouter, j'ai ralongé

00:06:185 (6185|0,6185|3) - Manque la note de la guitare pareil
00:06:674 (6674|3,7163|3) - Même réflexion fixed

00:09:772 (9772|3,9772|1) - Une seule LN ici vu que tu en avait qu'une seule jusqu'ici et que la guitare n'est pas plus forte ou quoi. je préfère en garder 2, ça me semble un peu vide sinon, avec le drum qui est assez fort à ce moment
00:10:261 (10261|1,10261|3) - Pas de batterie ici donc deux notes ça fait un peu trop. j'en ai delete 1

00:13:848 (13848|2) - move to 2 : on change de note en même temps qu'on change de mesure. fixed

00:17:435 (17435|0) - LN bizarre, quitte à avoir une LN j'aurai démarré d'une des notes de la triple directement, y'a rien dans la musique qui justifie une pression de touche en plus ici. j'ai delete le ln, et rajouté une note sur |2|

00:20:207 (20207|3,20370|3,20533|3,20696|3) - Gaffe aux répétitions dans tes patterns. j'ai changé le pattern, après je sais pas trop si c'est mieux ou pas

00:21:674 (21674|0) - LN en trop imo ye, deleted

00:24:772 (24772|1,25098|1) - Ou qu'elle est passé la guitare d'un coup ? je l'ai mangé, nan, j'avais fais les double notes pour la guitare, après je sais pas si ça passe bien ou si ça ce remarque

00:25:261 (25261|3) - LN approximative~~ perso, j'entends qu'il se fini la >_>

00:28:114 (28114|1) - Y'a pas de roulement ici, remove fixed

00:29:011 (29011|1) - Need une LN ici pour accompagner 00:28:522 (28522|2) fixed

00:29:989 (29989|2,30315|1) - j'aurais mis des LN là fixed

00:30:641 - manque de la note par là j'entends pas vraiment de guitare ou de drum >_>

00:34:799 (34799|0) - note en trop, pas de roulement
00:38:060 (38060|1) - note en trop, pas de roulement fixed les 2

00:38:957 (38957|2,39935|2,40261|3) - wat ? je pige pas ces LN par contre LN deleted

00:49:391 (49391|1) - ^ ^

00:57:544 (57544|0,57707|1,57870|2,58033|3) - vocals ? ugh.... ces LN ne sont pas sur le vocal, mais sur la 2eme guitare ou synthé

Bon toute la fin c'est des trucs que j'ai deja dit, y'a rien d'enorme, et si je me mets à commenter chaque note qui va pas j'en ai pour la nuit, donc je vais plutot finir par une commentaire général.

en gros : T'a vraiment du potentiel dans le sens ou ta map passe crème.
Mais par contre, c'est vraiment le bazar. Y'a plein de LN qui trainent on sait pas trop pourquoi. La layering sur la batterie est à peu près correct tout du long, ce qui est un bon point. Fait gaffe à pas mettre des notes quand y'en a pas, et surtout évite les LN approximatives qui sont censés faire ressortir un bout de guitare qui s'entend à moitié parce qu'au final ta LN a 50% de chances de perdre le joueurs, en plus de commencer/finir parfois au mauvais endroit.

Si tu fait vraiment attention aux note que tu met, que ta map soit clean, y'a moyen que tu fasse des très bon trucs, mais à y regarder de plus près, c'est un peu la foire au freestyle.

Pour moi une map clean c'est une map ou rien n'est laissé au hasard ou à l'approximation. Suis une logique de patterns et change-en le moins possible, ou alors change là mais à intervalle régulières (pour le refrain par exemple, ou toutes les X mesures parce que la musique change un peu aussi). Pareil, quand d'un coup tu a 4 LN pour la voix qui sortent de nulle part, ça fait ghetto.
Si tu sais pas trop comment rendre un instrument de fond, il vaut mieux le laisser de côté.

Donc voilà, mon conseil c'est d'éviter les LN à tout prix, pose une base de layering simple guitare batterie, et rajoute des LN que pour marquer vraiment quelque chose. Ou alors si tu veux en mettre plus, assure toi que ça soit fait de manière consistente : si tu as une LN pour la note de guitare n mais que y'a rien pour la n+1, ça fait ghetto aussi. j'ai essayer de faire plusieurs changement sur la fin au niveau des LNs, après on vera si c'est mieux ou pas

Bref je te conseille de regarder un peu de plancher sur les endroits ou je t'ai dis que qui allait pas trop, mais d'essayer de reporter ça sur l'ensemble de ta map, pour essayer de rendre les choses un peu plus claires !

Hésite pas si tu as des questions toussa, happy mapping !
Merci du mod ! :D
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