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Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-07-18T09:46:09+00:00

OniJAM wrote:
Taiko mod request via in-game 好久没摸图了ovo

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d=don　D=big don
k=kat　K=big kat
[ Nardo's Taiko Muzukashii]
Really well-mapped, though maybe a little hard for Muzu
Notes
00:03:828 (12,13) - swap here? no change, as the vocal at 00:04:015 (13) - is higher-pitched than 00:03:828 (12) -
00:04:953 (16,17) - and swap this if you fixed the mod above, I think it sounds better. Since 00:04:765 (15,17) - and 00:04:953 (16,18) - respectively have the same vocal pitch, it'd be better to keep the pattern as k d k d
00:54:828 (220,221) - ^ same as 00:03:828 (12,13) -
00:47:703 (190,191,192) - vocal pitch goes down here, so you can change to kkd. The vocal pitch actually goes up from 00:47:703 to 00:48:078 - , so d k k would be fine imo.
00:52:953 (212,213,214,215,216) - kkddk for same reason as above The reason of not using k at 00:53:703 (218) - is to show a sharper contrast to the next K at 00:54:078 (219) - . As 00:52:953 (214,216,218) - have the same vocal pitch, I prefer mapping 00:53:328 (216) - as k as snare sound is present.
01:04:953 (261,262,263,264,265) - ^ Same as above.
Other taiko diffs looks fine for me.
Star~ Good luck on getting it ranked.

Thanks for your mod and opinion~

Nymph

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Nymph 2014-07-18T17:48:50+00:00

checked and nothing to say, here is your icon.

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-07-18T20:28:39+00:00

Get the permission from cbb to fix his diff.

OnosakiHito wrote:
[ Climbb's Taiko Oni]

SPOILER
HP 5 ? aabc and Nardo's difficulties have HP 4. Maybe talk with aabc about it. He could change HP to 5 as well.
//since aabc wanted to keep his setting, then I would like to keep this for consistency of the other setting.

00:03:822 (7) - Maybe change to don? Not a must. Just a suggestion for variation and consistency with 00:06:822 (13) - .
00:12:353 (43,44) - I like the constellation as it is. Just want to mention deleting 43 and changing 44 to finish might work better to your previous finisher. //Would like to keep this for the drum base. (cbb is a drum based mapper, so I think he would keep this to fit the drum.)
00:21:072 (80,81) - Swap these notes? Previously (but also in upcoming patterns) you used kat when the piano kicks in. k k would be also possible.
00:23:978 - How about this http://puu.sh/adFOw/9bbd1836c4.jpg ? Suggesting this to make the new section be more noticeable. Doesn't sound bad, tool. Not a must of course. //would like to keep his pattern, it fits the music better.

Genocide wrote:
[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
00:01:015 - fill it with don
00:02:328 (4) - don
00:03:640 - fill with mini don //nope to keep it consistent.
00:03:828 (8) - and this kat move to red line
and 00:03:828 (8) - fill with mini don http://puu.sh/aeZdl/f554c24a73.png //Still, I don't think cbb is going to follow the vocal here.
00:04:953 - to 00:05:703 - fill it with ddkkd http://puu.sh/aeZiF/94636a1dcf.png
00:10:953 (38) - k //would like to keep this (he is following the piano here)
00:13:578 (52) - k //would like to keep this (he is following the piano here)
00:20:703 (79) - k //would like to keep this (he is following the piano here)
00:22:203 (89) - k //would like to keep this (he is following the piano here)
01:22:859 (21) - try use this note kkd http://puu.sh/aeZG6/65ae150b00.png //It doesn't fit the music.

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:
Climbb's Inner Oni
01:09:640 (332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340) -
//starting with red line would be much better.

qoot8123 wrote:
[ Climbb's Taiko Oni]

00:23:703 (91,92,93) -consider to add some notes here to make similar pattern as 00:26:703 (101,102,103,104,105,106) - ? //both have different atmosphere.
01:08:421 (326) - move to 01:08:234 - and change 01:08:140 (324) - to k ? it is not affect the drum sound but make the good consistent with 01:06:453 (313,314,315,316) -

No explanation means fixed.

OnosakiHito

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OnosakiHito 2014-07-19T14:11:17+00:00

[

Kana's Inner Oni]

00:22:578 (105) - Suggesting kat. At 00:19:578 (88,97) - Kana used kat as well, so this would probably fit better.
00:46:765 (235,236) - Maybe delete these and add at 00:47:234 a don. Feels some how better. Maybe because of 00:42:453 (207,208,209,210) - and 00:46:390 (232,233,234) - .
00:51:078 - SV change can start here already, so the transition looks smoother. Beside that, how about changing the note at this line to a finisher? because Kana didn't use any at 00:50:328.
01:00:171 (316) - Change do don for a kdd pattern? We have many dons in this section, so having -more or less- suddenly three kats might be too much.
01:06:640 - Change to kdd maybe? Beat following.

That's it. I'm not that much of a fan to shift everything to Onis, but such spread is allowed. Still, would be nice to have also easier Taiko diffs.
@Nardo: Maybe next time have some less consecutive 1/2, 1/1 patterns. In this way you can emphasize certain parts in a abetter way.

Everything else is fine I think. Recall me after this.

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-07-19T14:17:54+00:00

OnosakiHito wrote:
That's it. I'm not that much of a fan to shift everything to Onis, but such spread is allowed. Still, would be nice to have also easier Taiko diffs.
@Nardo: Maybe next time have some less consecutive 1/2, 1/1 patterns. In this way you can emphasize certain parts in a a better way.

Everything else is fine I think. Recall me after this.

I usually make a part sparser if the part is not filled with much vocal or the music is soft. Of course I'll do so next time, thanks for your advice.

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-07-19T19:36:03+00:00

OnosakiHito wrote:
[ Kana's Inner Oni]

00:22:578 (105) - Suggesting kat. At 00:19:578 (88,97) - Kana used kat as well, so this would probably fit better. //changed 00:19:578 (88,97) - to don instead as to fit the drum.
00:46:765 (235,236) - Maybe delete these and add at 00:47:234 a don. Feels some how better. Maybe because of 00:42:453 (207,208,209,210) - and 00:46:390 (232,233,234) - . //ok
00:51:078 - SV change can start here already, so the transition looks smoother. Beside that, how about changing the note at this line to a finisher? because Kana didn't use any at 00:50:328. //ok
01:00:171 (316) - Change do don for a kdd pattern? We have many dons in this section, so having -more or less- suddenly three kats might be too much. //but kdd sounds a little weird here. I still prefer using kkd.
01:06:640 - Change to kdd maybe? Beat following. //ddk sounds better imo.

That's it. I'm not that much of a fan to shift everything to Onis, but such spread is allowed. Still, would be nice to have also easier Taiko diffs. //would like to keep it as it is now.

Thanks~

OnosakiHito

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OnosakiHito 2014-07-19T19:54:23+00:00

Oh. This is already osu-iconed. lol
Well then, have a bubble from me since the Taikos are alright.

To people who might wonder: Spread should be fine. Just shifted into hard fraction.

Bubbled

: p/3246206

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Satellite 2014-07-20T04:34:56+00:00

to Next BAT

[General]

Should be Title change "花ハ躍レヤいろはにほ (TVsize)" → "花ハ踊レヤいろはにほ (TVsize)"

Please check this post p/3247706

and Why only Nardo's Taiko diff different osu? is it fine?

:3

Andrea

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Andrea 2014-07-20T12:44:03+00:00

Loneight wrote:
[Normal]
01:28:203 (7) - how about NC it? because 01:27:078 (3,4) - and 01:27:640 (5,6) - are 1/2 stack, 01:28:203 (7,8,9) - there change to one 1/2 slider and two 1/2 circles of stack, I think would make newbie hard to read in different rhythm which is same color Hmm okay, I like it.

bossandy wrote:
[ Andrea's Normal]
　
00:35:328 (1) - Add an additional clap here? Sounds too loud imo, but I fixed another clap afterwards.

Thanks for modding guys~

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Konei

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Konei 2014-07-20T17:39:49+00:00

The video seems of looking at the part at 01:15:453 - (Where she moves her lips in rhythm of the lyrics)
Also the sound of the Piano at 00:50:328 - .

The code below should fix that.

Video,116,"Hanayamata OP01 (TX 1280x720 x264 AAC).avi"

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-07-20T17:58:02+00:00

fixed and updated.

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2014-07-20T22:07:19+00:00

On Gu's diff, 01:11:890 (4) - slider start is inaudible, pls make it at least 30% ~ or so.. o.o

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-07-21T09:22:28+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
On Gu's diff, 01:11:890 (4) - slider start is inaudible, pls make it at least 30% ~ or so.. o.o

fixed.

Nymph

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Nymph 2014-07-21T10:38:06+00:00

ok checked and rebubbled.

Konei

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Konei 2014-07-21T21:34:14+00:00

Oops, before I forget it, better add an Audio lead in before ranking!

Yuthuil

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Yuthuil 2014-07-23T11:57:38+00:00

From my queue.

Hard:

00:14:703 (2) - Maybe you could shorten this slider and add a triple at 00:15:265 leading upto 00:15:640 (1) - .
00:51:078 (1) - Remove? Suggestion.
00:56:890 (1) - stack with 00:57:078 (2) - ?

Insane:

00:30:453 (1) - This is really annoying - the slider velocity change.

That's all.

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-07-26T16:16:23+00:00

Yuthuil wrote:
From my queue.

Hard:

00:14:703 (2) - Maybe you could shorten this slider and add a triple at 00:15:265 leading upto 00:15:640 (1) - . //Would like to keep this to maintain the flow.
00:51:078 (1) - Remove? Suggestion. //why? There is obviously a drum sound. I don't see a reason to remove it.
00:56:890 (1) - stack with 00:57:078 (2) - ? //nope, making a triangle there.

Insane:

00:30:453 (1) - This is really annoying - the slider velocity change. //Just fitting the music and vocal..

That's all.