Eddycted:
00:02:38 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - All this feels too crowded in the top left, even though it gradually and barely moves out. Maybe map this a bit more out of this corner?
00:16:65 (7) - Maybe reverse this, feels a bit better.
00:18:85 (4) - ^
01:22:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is kidna messy and confusing :s
01:23:79 (7) - Straighten this out? (on grid 3)
Hard:
Did you forget to resnap this diff? I don't see any notes on any ticks correctly.
00:05:71 (2,3,4,5) - kinda a pointless stream :s
00:16:96 (8,9,10) - Spacing, make them a bit more apart, ex. 00:16:23 (5,6,7) -
Map a bit more during the part with all the breaks... maybe some slider or somethings.
Resnap all notes please.
This diff could use a bit more work, specially at the end. Too many random double long spinners.
Normal:
00:26:16 (1) - Remove this note? Her voice doesn't start till 00:26:34 - . or subsequently you can move 00:26:16 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - to the red tick and shorten the slider at the end back to the white; sounds better. Refer to 01:19:00 - if you're confused, you did it correctly here.
Maybe instead of BLACK you can use more of a grey? The black is really horrible.
Star though ^^ eww twilight ._.