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Shindou Kei - Hatsudou!! Love Beam (TV Size)

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Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 11 de febrero de 2010 at 16:43:20

Artist: Shindou Kei
Title: Hatsudou!! Love Beam (TV Size)
Source: Hanamaru Youchien
Tags: anzu kawaii
BPM: 134
Filesize: 10472kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,96 stars, 95 notes)
  2. Hard (4,89 stars, 283 notes)
  3. Normal (4,25 stars, 184 notes)
  4. orion's Insane (5 stars, 315 notes)
Download: Shindou Kei - Hatsudou!! Love Beam (TV Size)
Download: Shindou Kei - Hatsudou!! Love Beam (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hanamaru Youchien ED4 :3
Hatsudou!! Love Beam

Thanks orioncomet for the Insane Diff :3

Finish! :3
Last edited by Vicho , edited 22 times in total.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
(*^^*)

Download: Shindou Kei - Hatsudou!! Love Beam (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [orion's Insane].rar
Last edited by orioncomet , edited 1 time in total.
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
BPM: 134
Offset: -160


[Easy]

Nothing, Looks great.
(Optional) put down the drain a tick. After all it's easy. :-/ New players should be able to survive it.


[Normal]

Also looks fine, no problems found.

[Hard]

00:40:324-00:40:772

Can you move those 3 notes a little part so it doesn't confuse people? Just in case.
Rest looks great.
Also, you could go up one tick on Drain rate. Way too easy to survive it..

[Orion's Insane]

Perfect ~



Starred
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

Teras wrote:

BPM: 134
Offset: -160
No... sounds bad :o


[Easy]

Nothing, Looks great.
(Optional) put down the drain a tick. After all it's easy. :-/ New players should be able to survive it.
Fixed


[Normal]

Also looks fine, no problems found.

[Hard]

00:40:324-00:40:772

Can you move those 3 notes a little part so it doesn't confuse people? Just in case.
Rest looks great.
Also, you could go up one tick on Drain rate. Way too easy to survive it..
Fixed

[Orion's Insane]

Perfect ~



Starred
thankyou~ :D
3ly_S
188 posts
Joined March 2008
3ly_S
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
KIA
1,754 posts
Joined February 2009
KIA
:O
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
no problems found

[Hard]
00:01:369 (4,5) - move 1 grid to the left(level 3)~nazi~
00:17:936 (1,2) - spacing.set the same spacing as 00:18:160 (2,3)
00:23:533 (8,9) - ^
00:36:742 (1) - remove new combo

[orion's Insane]
Great
no kiai lol

i love ED 2 more : )

nice map
Star
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

gdeath wrote:

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
no problems found

[Hard]
00:01:369 (4,5) - move 1 grid to the left(level 3)~nazi~
00:17:936 (1,2) - spacing.set the same spacing as 00:18:160 (2,3)
00:23:533 (8,9) - ^
00:36:742 (1) - remove new combo
Fixed

[orion's Insane]
Great
no kiai lol

i love ED 2 more : )
¬__¬'' xd

nice map
Star
thankyou! :P
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
lol cute song and video and nice map <3

stared :D
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
vivere
Hi~

Normal
00:23:981(6,7,8)-down a bit (it has to be so):

Hard
00:46:369-leave a little space as 11 and 12
00:53:974-up in just the slider
01:00:026-leave a little space
01:05:623-^
01:19:279-^
--------------------------
other difficulties are well

+star
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Easy~
Fine imo.

~Normal~
See onion's Insane how the claps were used.
01:23:085 (1) - move 1/2 right

~Hard~
See onion's Insane how the claps were used.
00:08:757 (8,9) - too close
00:09:205 (1,2) - ^
00:10:996 (3) - new combo
00:16:369 (9) - ^
00:19:951 (6) - ^
00:22:638 (5,6) - too close
00:23:533 (8) - new combo
00:26:220 (3,4) - too close
00:27:115 (6,7) - ^
00:30:026 (7) - new combo
00:34:055 (7) - ^
00:37:638 (5) - ^
00:39:652 (1,2) - too far
00:40:548 (6) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:44:354 (4,5) - too far
01:02:712 (7) - new combo
01:02:936 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:966 (7) - new combo
01:17:936 (7) - ^
01:18:048 (1) - remove new combo
01:20:175 (1,2) - too close
01:23:757 (2,3) - too far

~onion's Insane~
00:14:802 (1) - add clap at last note
00:20:399 (4) - add clap
00:31:145 (7) - ^
00:32:041 (2) - ^
00:39:205 (5) - ^
00:46:817 (1,2,3,4,5) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:54:429 (4) - add clap
01:08:757 (3) - ^
01:23:981 (4) - ^


+Star
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet

DJPop wrote:

~onion's Insane~
00:14:802 (1) - add clap at last note
00:20:399 (4) - add clap
00:31:145 (7) - ^
00:32:041 (2) - ^
00:39:205 (5) - ^
00:46:817 (1,2,3,4,5) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:54:429 (4) - add clap
01:08:757 (3) - ^
01:23:981 (4) - ^
All done :3
thankyou~ bakapop X<

Download: Shindou Kei - Hatsudou!! Love Beam (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [orion's Insane].osu
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
[General]
  1. osb.file didn't used, please delete it then full submit
  2. turn off all difficulties' countdown please (orion's insane already done)
[Easy]
  1. 00:58:011 (4) - 3 grid right to make it looked aline whit front (1,2,3) better imo
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:384 (5) - I prefer to use finish sound here
  2. 00:10:100 (4) - 1 grid down, and if you do so, remember to fixall notes' spacing after this one (the same below)
  3. 00:14:802 (1) - 1 grid up
  4. 01:23:309 (1) - spinner starts here
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:220 (1) - 1 grid left
  2. 00:38:533 (9) - spacing wrong
    There are some other spacing issues, but they are tolerable, what I point out is someone that can't tolerable >:
[orion's insane]
  1. 00:13:906 (x) - add a note maybe, it's OK for the present, add one played more smooth
That's all, nice map
You're already good at putting notes, just knock yourself out on putting hitsound, some of your hitsound used not so good
Anyway, you are supposed to be a great mapper : )
star'd
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet

Breeze wrote:

[orion's insane]
  1. 00:13:906 (x) - add a note maybe, it's OK for the present, add one played more smooth < No, hear it with your ears :3
:P
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

vivere wrote:

Hi~

Normal
00:23:981(6,7,8)-down a bit (it has to be so):
Fixed

Hard
00:46:369-leave a little space as 11 and 12
00:53:974-up in just the slider
01:00:026-leave a little space
01:05:623-^
01:19:279-^
No, sorry :o
--------------------------
other difficulties are well

+star
thankyou!


DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
Fine imo.

~Normal~
See onion's Insane how the claps were used.
01:23:085 (1) - move 1/2 right
Fixed

~Hard~
See onion's Insane how the claps were used.
00:08:757 (8,9) - too close
00:09:205 (1,2) - ^
00:10:996 (3) - new combo
00:16:369 (9) - ^
00:19:951 (6) - ^
00:22:638 (5,6) - too close
00:23:533 (8) - new combo
00:26:220 (3,4) - too close
00:27:115 (6,7) - ^
00:30:026 (7) - new combo
00:34:055 (7) - ^
00:37:638 (5) - ^
00:39:652 (1,2) - too far
00:40:548 (6) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:44:354 (4,5) - too far
01:02:712 (7) - new combo
01:02:936 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:966 (7) - new combo
01:17:936 (7) - ^
01:18:048 (1) - remove new combo
01:20:175 (1,2) - too close
01:23:757 (2,3) - too far
Fixed

+Star
thanks ^^


Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. osb.file didn't used, please delete it then full submit
  2. turn off all difficulties' countdown please (orion's insane already done)
Fixed

[Easy]
  1. 00:58:011 (4) - 3 grid right to make it looked aline whit front (1,2,3) better imo
Fixed

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:384 (5) - I prefer to use finish sound here
  2. 00:10:100 (4) - 1 grid down, and if you do so, remember to fixall notes' spacing after this one (the same below)
  3. 00:14:802 (1) - 1 grid up
  4. 01:23:309 (1) - spinner starts here
Fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:26:220 (1) - 1 grid left
  2. 00:38:533 (9) - spacing wrong
    There are some other spacing issues, but they are tolerable, what I point out is someone that can't tolerable >:
Fixed

That's all, nice map
You're already good at putting notes, just knock yourself out on putting hitsound, some of your hitsound used not so good
Anyway, you are supposed to be a great mapper : )
star'd
thankyou :P
Dangaard
osu! Alumni
1,232 posts
Joined July 2008
Dangaard
I think you should lower the HP drain of easy a bit, it is taking quite a while to regenerate after some missed notes.
You should remove yourself from Tags since you are the mapper^^.
Remove the first green line in Easy and make the red line half the bpm.

No real errors though. fumoffu star :3
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

Dangaard wrote:

I think you should lower the HP drain of easy a bit, it is taking quite a while to regenerate after some missed notes.
You should remove yourself from Tags since you are the mapper^^.
Remove the first green line in Easy and make the red line half the bpm.
Fixed

No real errors though. fumoffu star :3
thankyou *-*
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
4,058 posts
Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
- General:
  • KIAI should start at 00:57:563
- Easy:
  • .Opinions:
    Fine
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    Fine
- Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    Fine
- orion's Insane:
  • .Opinions:
    No KIAI?
Ok, the map is fine, but i'd really like if you change KIAI starting time.
Ask me after you fix that ^^
Shinkuu
231 posts
Joined June 2009
Shinkuu
stat >3<
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- orion's Insane:
  • .Opinions:
    No KIAI? < Nooo
:oops: :oops:
Dangaard
osu! Alumni
1,232 posts
Joined July 2008
Dangaard
then here a fumoffu pubble :3
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
[Hard]
00:39:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing.

Fix and I'll bubble.

EDIT: Bubbled.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Oh dear
Vicho, i will not mod your map, because it's bubble............
BTW, nice song
STAR

(PM me, if the bubble is popped)
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
4,058 posts
Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE

Dangaard wrote:

then here a fumoffu pubble :3
Yay ninja'd xD
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
[Hard]'s distance spacing seems to fluctuate. Imo, it could have been spaced a lot better throughout the song.

Examples:
00:08:757 (8,9,1) - Notes are touching each other while 00:07:638 (2,3,4) are not even though they are on 1/4 ticks.
Then we have this big 1/4 jump right here: 00:15:250 (3) and 00:22:414 (3). It's still a 1/4 tick.
Also ALL of these 1/4 notes are touching each other: 00:39:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) while the rest of the combos aren't spaced like this.

I won't pop your bubble since it's not a rankability issue. It would just make the difficulty look a LOT better i.e. quality.
But if you do happen to fix this, PM me and I'll rebubble.

Also OMG BABIES!
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Ok, now it's way better than before, so rebubbled!
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
KIA
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Joined February 2009
KIA
yeah! :333
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