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PROGUY

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PROGUY 2014-05-15T03:02:00+00:00

Hi Tear

My reply:

[Normal]

00:13:382 (13382|3,13382|4,13382|6) - A chord of 3 on this diff should fall only on very accented sounds in music while nothing special happens here, reduce to 2 objects. Applies to all other chords in this section Done.
01:05:418 (65418|6,65418|2,65511|1,65604|6,65604|4) - This part is a bit of a difficulty spike, I'd remove 01:05:418 (65418|6,65511|1) or at least 01:05:418 (65418|6) Did something different.
01:07:085 (67085|2,67085|0,67270|4,67455|0,67641|4,67826|0,68011|4,68196|0,68381|4,68567|0,68752|4,68937|0,69123|4,69308|0,69493|4,69678|0,69863|4,70048|6,70233|2,70418|6,70604|2,70789|6,70974|2,71159|6,71344|2,71529|6,71714|2,71899|6,72085|2,72270|6,72641|2) - This section (and its repeat later) are pretty monotonous, try to add a bit of variety Done.

[Hard]

00:01:531 to 00:11:901 - The intro is calm and feels a little overmapped, it's actually harder than the part after it. Reduce the constant 1/2 Made it a little easier now. I will possibly find more ways to make it better.
01:51:344 (111344|6,111344|0) - I can't what what those objects represent and it's strange to hit 3 objects there, and then just 2 on a kick. Remove those two? Note in 4th column represents main rhythm of the song while the other two represent the drum beat + cymbal.
02:53:752 to 03:04:122 - The rest of the diff isn't LN-heavy so this can be a big difficulty spike depending on the player. Consider removing some objects Done.

[Lunatic]

03:05:604 (185604|3) - I this this sound ends at 03:08:381 Nope, it ends where it should be currently.

Many thanks Tear for the awesome mod.

arcwinolivirus

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arcwinolivirus 2014-05-15T06:05:31+00:00

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue! "PM REQUEST"

Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
      _ _ _ _ _ _ _
7K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:11:901 to 00:13:382 - I have two suggestions:
• Put LN in this time range to fill the emptiness feeling or..
• Put notes for the piano sounds since its not that hard for NM level and to fill emptiness feeling at this part (consistent piano sound).

00:34:492 - I suggest to add note for that consistent cymbal sound. If accepted, Apply to all similar sound in this difficulty (since the music is quite repetitive).

00:47:826 (47826|4) - should end at 00:48:567 since that synth sound change pitch there and add note to 3 and 7 for strong cymbals like 00:49:307 (49307|0,49307|4) If accepted, apply to all similar sound in this difficulty.

00:55:233 (55233|0) - move to 3 for hand balance and also not the same instrument as 00:55:048 (55048|0)

01:07:270 (67270|4,67455|1,67641|4,67826|0,68011|4,68196|1,68381|4,68567|0,68752|4) - I suggest to rearrange for spread. It only focus on 3 columns. Atleast 4 columns like these notes: 01:10:048 (70048|4,70233|2,70418|6,70604|1,70789|4,70974|2,71159|6,71344|1)

01:23:381 - add note for cymbals
01:24:122 - ^
01:24:400 - ^

01:31:715 (91715|5,92085|6,92085|2) - suggesting to ctrl H for hand balance~ and to avoid the slow jack there.

01:34:492 to 01:35:233 - feels empty here. I suggest add LN Note to 01:34:492 until 01:34:863 and add another LN note to 01:34:863 until 01:35:233 for drum roll sounds. If accepted, apply to all similar sound in the difficulty.

01:35:974 (95974|4) - ^ change to LN then add another LN to 1/1 line~

01:42:641 (102641|3,105418|3,105604|3,108567|3,109863|3,110048|3,111529|3,112270|3,113011|3) - I suggest to make these notes 2-noted as they are really strong and consistent like 01:54:492 (114492|2,114492|0) (and you made them 3-noted in HD though, so 2-noted for NM here is good~)

02:18:937 - add note here for that click sound.
02:21:900 - ^
02:24:863 - ^
02:27:826 - ^

02:40:418 - add note to 7 for the strong sound:Cymbals+beat like 02:41:900 (161900|6,161900|2)

02:46:344 - add note to 4 ^

02:46:344 (166344|1,166900|5) - extend until 02:47:826

02:53:011 - add note to 1 for cymbals.

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:01:716 - Add note. There's a sound to note there. like 00:10:605 (10605|0)
00:04:679 - ^
00:07:642 - ^
00:12:086 (12086|1) - remove. no sound here o.o listened on 25 %
00:42:826 - add note there's a beat sound to note for.
01:27:363 (87363|4) - move to 1
01:29:029 (89029|1) - move to 3
01:51:344 (111344|3) - I think the note should be on 01:51:529 to be 3-noted cymbals like 01:50:048 (110048|6,110048|2,110048|1)

01:52:270 (112270|0,112270|6) - ^ add note to 4
01:53:011 (113011|0,113011|2) - ^ add note.
02:27:455 (147455|2) - move to 1
02:30:048 to 02:30:604 - note for that synth-like instrument to fill emptiness. apply to all similar sound.

02:43:196 (163196|2) - move to 5
02:44:400 (164400|4) - ^ to 6
03:17:363 (197363|4) - ^ to 6
03:18:659 (198659|0) - ^ to 2

[Lunatic]

SPOILER

00:15:234 - add note to be 3-noted very consistent sound. strong sound+snare+synth melody
00:17:456 - ^
00:19:679 - ^
00:21:901 - ^
00:25:234 - add note for the cymbals. Apply to all similar single-noted cymbals~

00:31:160 (31160|6) - how about changing this to LN until 00:31:530

00:32:363 (32363|3) - I suggest move to 1 or 5 as they are not same instrument as 00:32:363 (32363|3) not like 00:31:900 (31900|0,31992|0) apply to all jacks with the similar sound~

00:58:011 (58011|3) - move to 7

and nothin more~ challenging to play~

[Overall]
Cool map from Sir Proguy >w<)b here take my star~ thank you for requesting

PROGUY

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PROGUY 2014-05-15T10:34:37+00:00

Hi again arcwin

My reply:

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:11:901 to 00:13:382 - I have two suggestions:
• Put LN in this time range to fill the emptiness feeling or..
• Put notes for the piano sounds since its not that hard for NM level and to fill emptiness feeling at this part (consistent piano sound). Did this one.

00:34:492 - I suggest to add note for that consistent cymbal sound. If accepted, Apply to all similar sound in this difficulty (since the music is quite repetitive). No thanks.

00:47:826 (47826|4) - should end at 00:48:567 since that synth sound change pitch there and add note to 3 and 7 for strong cymbals like 00:49:307 (49307|0,49307|4) If accepted, apply to all similar sound in this difficulty. The pitch change was for the lower-pitch violin (not the main one that the long note is based on).

00:55:233 (55233|0) - move to 3 for hand balance and also not the same instrument as 00:55:048 (55048|0) Done.

01:07:270 (67270|4,67455|1,67641|4,67826|0,68011|4,68196|1,68381|4,68567|0,68752|4) - I suggest to rearrange for spread. It only focus on 3 columns. Atleast 4 columns like these notes: 01:10:048 (70048|4,70233|2,70418|6,70604|1,70789|4,70974|2,71159|6,71344|1) Done.

01:23:381 - add note for cymbals Done.
01:24:122 - ^ Done.
01:24:400 - ^ Not necessary here.

01:31:715 (91715|5,92085|6,92085|2) - suggesting to ctrl H for hand balance~ and to avoid the slow jack there. Done.

01:34:492 to 01:35:233 - feels empty here. I suggest add LN Note to 01:34:492 until 01:34:863 and add another LN note to 01:34:863 until 01:35:233 for drum roll sounds. If accepted, apply to all similar sound in the difficulty. Done.

01:35:974 (95974|4) - ^ change to LN then add another LN to 1/1 line~ Done.

01:42:641 (102641|3,105418|3,105604|3,108567|3,109863|3,110048|3,111529|3,112270|3,113011|3) - I suggest to make these notes 2-noted as they are really strong and consistent like 01:54:492 (114492|2,114492|0) (and you made them 3-noted in HD though, so 2-noted for NM here is good~) Done.

02:18:937 - add note here for that click sound. No thanks.
02:21:900 - ^ Nope.
02:24:863 - ^ Nope.
02:27:826 - ^ Nope.

02:40:418 - add note to 7 for the strong sound:Cymbals+beat like 02:41:900 (161900|6,161900|2)

02:46:344 - add note to 4 ^ Done.

02:46:344 (166344|1,166900|5) - extend until 02:47:826 Moved long note ends to 02:47:641 instead.

02:53:011 - add note to 1 for cymbals. Done.

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:01:716 - Add note. There's a sound to note there. like 00:10:605 (10605|0) Done.
00:04:679 - ^ Done.
00:07:642 - ^ Done.
00:12:086 (12086|1) - remove. no sound here o.o listened on 25 % This was based on the soft bass sound from the piano. It's a little hard to hear this one but it's there.
00:42:826 - add note there's a beat sound to note for. No thanks, I want to use this space as a small break.
01:27:363 (87363|4) - move to 1 Done.
01:29:029 (89029|1) - move to 3 Done.
01:51:344 (111344|3) - I think the note should be on 01:51:529 to be 3-noted cymbals like 01:50:048 (110048|6,110048|2,110048|1) No thanks.

01:52:270 (112270|0,112270|6) - ^ add note to 4 Nope.
01:53:011 (113011|0,113011|2) - ^ add note. Nope.
02:27:455 (147455|2) - move to 1 Done.
02:30:048 to 02:30:604 - note for that synth-like instrument to fill emptiness. apply to all similar sound. Done.

02:43:196 (163196|2) - move to 5 Done.
02:44:400 (164400|4) - ^ to 6 Done.
03:17:363 (197363|4) - ^ to 6 No thanks.
03:18:659 (198659|0) - ^ to 2 Done.

[Lunatic]

SPOILER

00:15:234 - add note to be 3-noted very consistent sound. strong sound+snare+synth melody Done.
00:17:456 - ^ Done.
00:19:679 - ^ Done.
00:21:901 - ^ Done.
00:25:234 - add note for the cymbals. Apply to all similar single-noted cymbals~ It's really difficult to do so considering how the current pattern is designed.

00:31:160 (31160|6) - how about changing this to LN until 00:31:530 No thanks.

00:32:363 (32363|3) - I suggest move to 1 or 5 as they are not same instrument as 00:32:363 (32363|3) not like 00:31:900 (31900|0,31992|0) apply to all jacks with the similar sound~ Done.

00:58:011 (58011|3) - move to 7 And done.

and nothin more~ challenging to play~

Many thanks!

ArcherLove

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Joined March 2013

ArcherLove 2014-06-17T15:22:16+00:00

hello~ this map so good ;w;

little sugestion

collumn |1|~|7|

[Normal]
HP 8 ? or no :3

[Hard]

02:07:733 - add note here ?
02:10:604 - and 02:10:696 - too ? in 5-6 ?
02:13:659 - add note ?
02:16:529 - and - 02:16:622 - add note ? 6-5 ?
02:18:937 - add note in 5 ?
02:19:307 - ^
02:19:492 - add note in 3 ?
02:19:585 - ^ in 4
02:20:233 - add note in 2 ?
02:20:418 - add note in 6 ?
02:20:789 - ^
02:21:067 - add note in 2 ?
02:21:715 - add note in 5 ?
02:21:900 - add note in 2 ?
02:22:270 - ^
02:22:455 - add note in 3 ?
02:22:548 - add note in 5 ?
02:23:381 - add note in 2 ?
02:24:863 - add note in 2 ?
02:25:233 - ^
02:25:418 - add note in 6 ?
02:25:511 - add note in 4 ?
02:26:159 - add note in 2 ?
02:26:344 - add note in 1 ?
02:26:715 - add note in 7 ?
02:26:807 - add note in 5 ?
02:26:992 - add note in 1 ?
02:27:641 - add note in 2 ?
02:27:826 - add note in 7 ?
02:28:196 - add note in 6 ?
02:28:381 - add note in 2 ?
02:28:474 - add note in 3 ?
02:29:307 - add note in 3 ?
02:30:233 - add note in 2 ?
02:30:418 - add note in 4 ?
02:30:604 - add note in 6 ?
02:30:789 - add note in 7 ?
02:31:715 ~ 02:32:641 - add note like this ? http://puu.sh/9xBg0/d695e517a0.jpg
02:33:011 ~ 02:34:122 - add note like this ? http://puu.sh/9xBkv/fb5f23db54.jpg
02:46:807 - add note in 7 ?
02:46:992 - add note in 1 or 4 ?

Clean diff =w=)/

PROGUY

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PROGUY 2014-06-19T13:44:17+00:00

Hi ArcherLove

My reply:

little sugestion

collumn |1|~|7|

[Normal]
HP 8 ? or no :3 No thanks, 7 is fine.

[Hard]
(Most of these are rejected due to them being minor additions that I personally find unnecessary.)
02:07:733 - add note here ?
02:10:604 - and 02:10:696 - too ? in 5-6 ?
02:13:659 - add note ?
02:16:529 - and - 02:16:622 - add note ? 6-5 ?
02:18:937 - add note in 5 ?
02:19:307 - ^
02:19:492 - add note in 3 ?
02:19:585 - ^ in 4
02:20:233 - add note in 2 ?
02:20:418 - add note in 6 ?
02:20:789 - ^
02:21:067 - add note in 2 ?
02:21:715 - add note in 5 ?
02:21:900 - add note in 2 ?
02:22:270 - ^
02:22:455 - add note in 3 ?
02:22:548 - add note in 5 ?
02:23:381 - add note in 2 ?
02:24:863 - add note in 2 ?
02:25:233 - ^
02:25:418 - add note in 6 ?
02:25:511 - add note in 4 ?
02:26:159 - add note in 2 ?
02:26:344 - add note in 1 ?
02:26:715 - add note in 7 ?
02:26:807 - add note in 5 ?
02:26:992 - add note in 1 ?
02:27:641 - add note in 2 ?
02:27:826 - add note in 7 ?
02:28:196 - add note in 6 ?
02:28:381 - add note in 2 ?
02:28:474 - add note in 3 ?
02:29:307 - add note in 3 ?
02:30:233 - add note in 2 ?
02:30:418 - add note in 4 ?
02:30:604 - add note in 6 ?
02:30:789 - add note in 7 ?
02:31:715 ~ 02:32:641 - add note like this ? http://puu.sh/9xBg0/d695e517a0.jpg
02:33:011 ~ 02:34:122 - add note like this ? http://puu.sh/9xBkv/fb5f23db54.jpg
02:46:807 - add note in 7 ? Added in 4th column.
02:46:992 - add note in 1 or 4 ? Added in 4th column.

Many thanks!

Sorarei

1,420 posts

Joined August 2012

Sorarei 2014-06-23T16:32:08+00:00

Just leave from jail

[General]

why putting detailed source instead touhou ?

[Normal]

00:15:234 - i'd add note to 7th as double note because they're had different sound like before. it might be cymbal sound

00:17:456 - also same reason like above by putting note to 1st or 3rd.

00:19:679 - still same issue like before

00:33:752 - this may be good http://puu.sh/9wWjN/de9cc64ef1.png

00:42:270 (42270|3,42641|3) - why make notes in same column ? suggest to move them to right and left side

00:48:937 - add hold note until 00:49:307 - i still heard synth sound

00:54:770 (54770|2,54770|4) - move them to left by 1 column ?

01:32:270 (92270|2) - i think is more better if moved to 7th column then move rest normal note to left side.

01:42:270 - i'd add note for making sound here.

01:42:641 - wow this is so empty from this part, there's a "little" drum sound in 01:43:011 - 01:43:567 - 01:44:492 - 01:45:048 - suggested to add single note for this part.

02:18:567 (138567|0) - i would move this to 6th column because the crash sound are different pitch.

02:23:196 (143196|3) - in this part you're focusing on 1/1 , this 02:23:196 (143196|3) - make bother beat/placement i guess. i usually follow main beat every 3/4 if the part is just few instrument used

[Hard]

it would be great if change HP & OD to decimal value (7,)

00:26:716 - i don't really understand in this part which beat are you do follow with these pattern ? you're leave crash sound like before that i think it supposed still placed from this part too

00:42:918 - put note for synth ?

02:00:418 - i don't get the beat this main synth pattern, it more sense-able if adding note to 7th column 02:00:789 - then to 7th column again 02:01:715 - and 1st column 02:01:900 -

02:19:307 - 02:22:270 - 02:25:233 - 02:28:196 - there's whistle sound here.

02:55:604 - add double hold note ? there's violin pads here, same like this 02:56:159 -

[Lunatic]

Better HP 8.5

00:22:086 - i'd make like this, this more better according to beat itself and easy stream

00:28:753 (28753|3,28799|2) - Ctrl + J

PROGUY

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PROGUY 2014-06-24T15:33:25+00:00

Hi Reikosaka

My reply:

[General]

why putting detailed source instead touhou ? Eh, because it was from a specific Touhou game and not just Touhou in general. Changed it anyways.

[Normal]

00:15:234 - i'd add note to 7th as double note because they're had different sound like before. it might be cymbal sound Sure.

00:17:456 - also same reason like above by putting note to 1st or 3rd. Done.

00:19:679 - still same issue like before Okay.

00:33:752 - this may be good http://puu.sh/9wWjN/de9cc64ef1.png Sure.

00:42:270 (42270|3,42641|3) - why make notes in same column ? suggest to move them to right and left side Done.

00:48:937 - add hold note until 00:49:307 - i still heard synth sound Not necessary in Normal.

00:54:770 (54770|2,54770|4) - move them to left by 1 column ? Okay.

01:32:270 (92270|2) - i think is more better if moved to 7th column then move rest normal note to left side. Sure.

01:42:270 - i'd add note for making sound here. Okay.

01:42:641 - wow this is so empty from this part, there's a "little" drum sound in 01:43:011 - 01:43:567 - 01:44:492 - 01:45:048 - suggested to add single note for this part. Again, not necessary.

02:18:567 (138567|0) - i would move this to 6th column because the crash sound are different pitch. No thanks.

02:23:196 (143196|3) - in this part you're focusing on 1/1 , this 02:23:196 (143196|3) - make bother beat/placement i guess. i usually follow main beat every 3/4 if the part is just few instrument used No, it's fine. It's not that difficult.

[Hard]

it would be great if change HP & OD to decimal value (7,) OD is now 7.6. HP Drain remains unchanged at 8.

00:26:716 - i don't really understand in this part which beat are you do follow with these pattern ? you're leave crash sound like before that i think it supposed still placed from this part too I wanted to try to add a variety to that pattern, and thought of having that sort of stream for it.

00:42:918 - put note for synth ? Done.

02:00:418 - i don't get the beat this main synth pattern, it more sense-able if adding note to 7th column 02:00:789 - then to 7th column again 02:01:715 - and 1st column 02:01:900 - Added a few other missing notes.

02:19:307 - 02:22:270 - 02:25:233 - 02:28:196 - there's whistle sound here. Added appropriate notes.

02:55:604 - add double hold note ? there's violin pads here, same like this 02:56:159 - The notes were previously long notes, but were changed to normal notes due to its difficulty.

[Lunatic]

Better HP 8.5 Nope. HP Drain 9 is perfect.

00:22:086 - i'd make like this, this more better according to beat itself and easy stream No thanks. It looks like it's been done by others before.

00:28:753 (28753|3,28799|2) - Ctrl + J Nope.

Many thanks!

Dave-_old

Dave-_old 2014-06-24T15:43:32+00:00

Nice song

I Like this..
Stars for u >.<

Why u not make 4Key diff ?

PROGUY

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PROGUY 2014-07-06T08:44:04+00:00

Updated set due to an IRC mod by ExPew.

16:15 ExPew: PROGUY
16:15 PROGUY: o.o
16:15 ExPew: are you free now?
16:15 PROGUY: Yes
16:15 PROGUY: What's going on?
16:16 ExPew: i guess i take a short irc mod
16:16 *ExPew is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/416517 myon - G Free ~ Final Dream [Lunatic]]
16:16 PROGUY: Okay
16:17 ExPew: okay  we start with hard
16:17 ExPew: normal is fine
16:17 PROGUY: k
16:19 ExPew: 01:01:067 (61067|3) - move LN to 01:01:159 - i think got long sound here and 01:01:067 - add a note on 3
16:20 PROGUY: lol that one
16:20 PROGUY: No thanks, it's fine as it is
16:20 ExPew: kinda bunggin on me...well okay
16:21 ExPew: thats only for hard
16:21 ExPew: lol
16:21 PROGUY: lol
16:22 *ExPew is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/416517 myon - G Free ~ Final Dream [Lunatic]]
16:25 ExPew: 01:43:381 (103381|5) - move this hold on 7th line , 01:44:955 (104955|4) -  move this too on 6th line , and 01:45:048 (105048|5) - move this note on 5th line....so how about it that pattern?
16:26 ExPew: 01:44:492 (104492|5) - forgot ot move this note to 5th line 
16:29 PROGUY: Moved 01:44:492 (104492|5) - , everything else is kept because it follows PR and it is pretty good currently patternwise
16:32 ExPew: alright
16:32 ExPew: i guess nothing to more mods
16:32 PROGUY: Alright