1. Easy (1.81 stars, 211 notes)
2. Flying! (4.59 stars, 711 notes)
3. Hard (3.6 stars, 433 notes)
4. Normal (2.16 stars, 325 notes)

[TimingPoints]
11161,343.053173241852,4,2,0,60,1,0
11847,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,0
52327,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
55071,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
79771,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
156615,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
200526,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0

1. The second kiai time is too long, it should begin at 02:58:583 (the last chorus).
2. There are two identical combo colors, remove one of them.

1. Consider lowering slider velocity, it's too high and hard to follow for beginners.
2. As this is Normal, use more 1 and 2-beat sliders and reduce note density, the amount of circles as well as 1/2 sliders to make it easier.
3. 00:13:631 (5,6) - Convert these into a slider
4. 00:16:203 (4) - Make it end at 00:17:061
5. 00:20:833 (9) - Try to adjust (8) somehow to make (9) overlap (6)
6. 00:26:492 (3,4,5,6) - Make them flow in a different order, not the same as the last combo
7. 00:29:408 (3) - Maybe mirror it with (1) and make (4) overlap its end
8. 00:31:294 (8) - Should end at 00:31:808 and no repeat
9. 00:33:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Try converting some of these into sliders
10. 01:09:191 (1) - Extend the duration to 1 beat for each repeat and make it start at 01:08:848
11. 01:14:164 , 01:03:189 , 02:22:757 , 02:44:701 , 02:55:669 , 03:06:637 , 03:17:606 - A circle can be added at these
12. 01:17:079 - Don't make a new combo too close to the spinner as this is only Normal difficulty
13. 01:20:166 (3) - NC
14. 01:27:540 (5,1) - Kinda awkward placement
15. 01:29:426 (6,7,8) - These make a good repeating slider
16. 01:36:971 (1,2) - Move these somewhere to the right, they don't look good if they're too low
17. 01:58:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO the angle transition is somehow awkward
18. 02:03:722 (6) - NC
19. 02:17:955 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Try switching (5) and (6) and change into this: http://puu.sh/8eY6E.jpg
20. 02:34:246 (1) - Begin a little earlier at 02:34:075

1. 00:44:498 (1,2,3,4) - It doesn't look very nice...
2. 00:55:473 (2) - Turning this into a 1-beat slider would be fine
3. 00:58:731 - Remove (3) (4) and make a 1/2 beat slider here, same with 01:00:103, to create variation
4. 01:08:334 - I don't think a gap should be here
5. 01:24:625 (8) - Make this a 1-beat slider?
6. 01:27:025 (3) - It's off, should begin at 01:26:854
7. 01:35:428 (4) - Too far away in the corner
8. 02:03:722 (3) - Spacing minor problem. It might be confusing, especially in a middle of a stream
9. 02:06:638 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Try to create variation by replacing some with repeat sliders
10. 03:15:035 (9) - NC?
11. 03:16:920 (3,4) - They don't look good as circles, change into a slider

1. Many streams, I like it
2. In between streams, you should alternate the pattern a little bit, such as using zig-zag instead of a curve for 1/4 circles
3. Try to curve the straight sliders, they don't fit in a curving pattern
4. 00:16:546 (6) - Blend this into the pattern as well
5. 02:33:732 (5) - Make it overlap (2)
6. 02:42:131 (7) - Work on its shape a little bit..

Kerocchi wrote:

Hi, this is my mod

General

1. The second kiai time is too long, it should begin at 02:58:583 (the last chorus).
2. There are two identical combo colors, remove one of them.

Will fix these later. Friend is over.

Hitsounds are monotonous at many parts of the maps Edit: just updated your map, this is fixed

Normal

1. Consider lowering slider velocity, it's too high and hard to follow for beginners.No, it's fine as is, I've had people playtest it without any problem.
2. As this is Normal, use more 1 and 2-beat sliders and reduce note density, the amount of circles as well as 1/2 sliders to make it easier. Looking into that as we speak.
3. 00:13:631 (5,6) - Convert these into a slider Done
4. 00:16:203 (4) - Make it end at 00:17:061 Done.
5. 00:20:833 (9) - Try to adjust (8) somehow to make (9) overlap (6) I feel like this flows nicely.
6. 00:26:492 (3,4,5,6) - Make them flow in a different order, not the same as the last combo Mirrored.
7. 00:29:408 (3) - Maybe mirror it with (1) and make (4) overlap its end I like the perpindicular flow it has right now. I feel like stacked notes on the end of sliders are too hard for a normal difficulty.
8. 00:31:294 (8) - Should end at 00:31:808 and no repeat There is no repeat here. I disagree on the ending point, the hitsounds are nicely on the syllables now.
9. 00:33:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Try converting some of these into sliders Done.
10. 01:09:191 (1) - Extend the duration to 1 beat for each repeat and make it start at 01:08:848 This fits the music, I am following the music here.
11. 01:14:164 , 01:03:189 , 02:22:757 , 02:44:701 , 02:55:669 , 03:06:637 , 03:17:606 - A circle can be added at these Done
12. 01:17:079 - Don't make a new combo too close to the spinner as this is only Normal difficulty Removed first note. Sounds good. Fixed.
13. 01:20:166 (3) - NC Fixed.
14. 01:27:540 (5,1) - Kinda awkward placement Fixed.
15. 01:29:426 (6,7,8) - These make a good repeating slider Fixed.
16. 01:36:971 (1,2) - Move these somewhere to the right, they don't look good if they're too low Fixed.
17. 01:58:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO the angle transition is somehow awkward Looks fine to me!
18. 02:03:722 (6) - NC Wow, can't believe I missed that!
19. 02:17:955 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Try switching (5) and (6) and change into this: http://puu.sh/8eY6E.jpg Breaks distance spacing but plays well. Thanks.
20. 02:34:246 (1) - Begin a little earlier at 02:34:075 Fixed.

Hard

1. 00:44:498 (1,2,3,4) - It doesn't look very nice...Fixed!
2. 00:55:473 (2) - Turning this into a 1-beat slider would be fine I'm following the DnB pattern here.
3. 00:58:731 - Remove (3) (4) and make a 1/2 beat slider here, same with 01:00:103, to create variation Fixed.
4. 01:08:334 - I don't think a gap should be here Disagreed. I'm following the trumpet and there's nothign happening at the moment
5. 01:24:625 (8) - Make this a 1-beat slider? No, I'm following the vocals here. The vocals don't fit with a 1 beat slider.
6. 01:27:025 (3) - It's off, should begin at 01:26:854 Fuxed, thanks.
7. 01:35:428 (4) - Too far away in the corner Thanks, now a triple stack
8. 02:03:722 (3) - Spacing minor problem. It might be confusing, especially in a middle of a stream Spacing was intentional but to make it better readable I added NC.
9. 02:06:638 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Try to create variation by replacing some with repeat sliders I think it's fine as is.
10. 03:15:035 (9) - NC? No, combo would be too short.
11. 03:16:920 (3,4) - They don't look good as circles, change into a slider They look good I feel, vocal wise.

Insane
Since this is meant to be challenging I won't comment much on the placement and stuff I see the map is already good as-is

1. Many streams, I like it Aww, thank you!
2. In between streams, you should alternate the pattern a little bit, such as using zig-zag instead of a curve for 1/4 circles I feel like that doesn't flow well.
3. Try to curve the straight sliders, they don't fit in a curving pattern I like the contrast straight sliders give. They also add more velocity to the streams.
4. 00:16:546 (6) - Blend this into the pattern as well Fixed!
5. 02:33:732 (5) - Make it overlap (2) Fixed!
6. 02:42:131 (7) - Work on its shape a little bit.. I feel this one is okay as is.

Hope you find this useful

1. Insane has a third kiai time. I suggest to remove the kiai time.
2. Resize the image's dimension at 1366 x 768.

sheela901 wrote:

Hey. M4M Request

General

1. Insane has a third kiai time. I suggest to remove the kiai time. Fixed.
2. Resize the image's dimension at 1366 x 768. Fixed.

Normal

1. Approach Rate -1 Disagreed. The velocity of this map I feel calls for AR5.
2. 00:12:259 (2,4,5) - I personally think that pattern is a bit weird for a normal difficulty. I suggest to make another pattern. No suggestions though. I like it, I'll keep it.
3. 00:17:575 (1) - This is too far away from 00:16:203 (4) . Make them closer. Fixed.
4. 00:17:918 (2,3,4) - Replace them by a 1/2 repeat slider? Nope, it feels okay to me.
5. 00:25:635 (1) - This is too close to the previous note. Move it further. Because of the slight nothingness the player has enough time to resnap.
6. 00:25:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels like a repeat pattern. Try to make another pattern. The music sounds alike and it's mirrored, so slightly different. I like this.
7. 00:30:436 (5) - Add a new combo here, since there's a space between this, and the previous note. Fixed.
8. 00:40:554 (5) - It could be a simple curve slider: Fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:41:754 (1) - This spinner should be started early, at 00:41:583 . Fixed.
10. 00:57:873 (4) - Add a new combo. Fixed.
11. 01:08:162 to 01:08:848 - It should contains notes. No, I'm mapping the trumpets and the trumpets aren't doing anything.
12. 01:33:542 (1) - Ctrl+H, Ctrl+J, and Ctrl+G, and move it to x:395 y:358 for a better flow. Fine as is.
13. 01:39:029 (5) - Add a new combo. Also, move the second point to x:337 y:279, and the fourth point to x:178 y:279 for a better curve. And Ctrl+J. Fixed.
14. 02:00:979 (1) - Move this to x:355 y:296, and blanket with 01:59:950 (6) . Fixed.
15. 02:12:639 (2) - This is too close to the previous note. Fixed.
16. 02:25:501 (2) - Make a simple, better curve. Fixed.
17. 02:29:616 (5) - ^, and the curve is too outside of the playfield.Fixed.
18. 02:44:701 - Add a note.Fixed.
19. 02:58:583 (3) - Since the kiai time starts here, add a new combo. Fixed.
20. 03:02:182 (3) - This is too close to 03:01:667 (2) . Move it far. Fixed.
21. 03:03:553 (6) - Be careful at the distance. Fixed.
22. 03:04:067 (7) - Blanket with 03:03:038 (5) . No, issue isn't existant because of a remap.
23. 03:09:551 (3) - Add a new combo. It makes sense. Fixed.
24. 03:15:035 (7) - Make the blanket better. Blanket is perfect.
25. You should use the distance snap for this difficulty. The difficulty is snapped, however, made some mistakes while deleting notes.

Hard

1. Approach Rate -1? Fine as is.
2. 00:17:575 (1) - Make the curve simple. Fixed.
3. 00:28:893 (3) - ^ No, I like this.
4. 00:37:296 (3,4) - Move them to x:360 y:245 for a better flow. And move 00:37:810 (5) to x:267 y:354. Fine as is
5. 00:41:411 to 00:44:155 - Use this space to add notes that follows the beats. Added a spinner.
6. 00:46:384 (7) - Blanket with 00:45:698 (5) . No, this is fine as is.
7. 00:51:014 (3) - Make the blanket better, that the curve envelops 00:51:014 (3) . I feel like this is fine as is.
8. 00:52:386 (1) - Make a bird slider pattern. No, this is easily readable and is logical because of the "BOOOOOM" sound in the backgorund.
9. 00:54:444 - Add here a slider that ends at 00:54:958 .This feels fine. I'm following the beat, not the vocals, and switching would be confusing.
10. 01:01:989 (4) - Add a new combo. Fixed.
11. 01:08:162 to 01:09:020 - Needs notes. No, I'm following the trumpets. They're mute here.
12. 01:12:964 (4) - Add a new combo. And try this: I'm following the vocals here. That doesn't fit.
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:29:255 (1,2) - Move them to x:429 y:329 for a better triangle with 01:29:769 (3,4) . Done.
14. 01:39:029 (6) - Add a new combo. Fixed.
15. 02:00:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is too hard for a hard difficulty. Replace them by 1/2 sliders. Done.
16. 02:03:208 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Too hard. Make another pattern. This is fine.
17. 02:05:266 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ I feel this is fine.
18. 02:52:927 (5) - Make a random slider, but not too random. I feel like this is fine.
19. 02:59:440 (3) - Consider to add a new combo. I'm not going to for consistency's sake, it doesn't feel nice because the slider doesn't start on kiai
20. 03:04:067 (9) - ^^

Insane

1. 00:30:951 (7) - Blanket with 00:30:436 (6) . Fixed.
2. 00:46:384 (6) - Ctrl+J. I don't want to go too far outside of the playing field. Besides, some "anti-flow" is nice, I feel.
3. 01:58:235 (5) - Add a new combo. Fixed.
4. 02:46:244 (1) - This spinner is too short. Lengthen it, or replace it with a slider. Good enough for me, auto gets 1000 points.

Around the three difficulties, you skip some beats. You shouldn't let a big space empty.
Some sliders with curves are ugly. Make them simple.

You can ask me questions if you want. Good Luck on ranking this map.

Frostings wrote:

Hi Don!
I'm here on behalf of Kibbleru from his M4M queue. You'll be getting a mod from me instead of him (I hope this is OK)

[General]
Hmm.. For some reason osu does not give an option to download your beatmap with no video. I think it may be due to its file type.
Try to convert your video into .avi or .flv --- also you should really try to reduce the size of this video .. it's fairly large It does so in the beatmap thread. Video size is as high as possible while staying under the beatmap's size limit.

Also there might be a problem with your timing points. I'm not good with timing but another timing check might be ideal
I want to say it's 175.000 bpm throughout but it's better to get an opinion from someone else

[Normal]
00:17:575 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm is a little bit difficult. You're following the vocals here a little too precisely making it hard to map
Following the soft drum here instead might be more ideal It was a design choice

00:19:633 - Slider should start here 00:19:805 - . there is nothing here 00:19:633 - to need a slider start Fixed.

01:05:933 (2) - slider should end here 01:06:448 - to follow vocals No! I want to make the transition of vocals > trumpet as smooth as possible

01:09:191 (1) - not ideal for Normal. you should break it up into two sliders: http://puu.sh/8hVS8.jpg -- note that the slider starts 01:08:848 - instead of 01:09:191 - Made it into two sliders

01:41:773 - you should map all the way to this point, because the song changes pace at this point onwards Fixed.

02:03:722 (2) - NC should start here instead. it's the downbeat of the song Fixed.


[Hard]
01:06:105 (1) - slider is 1/2 tick too long (should end here 01:06:448 - ) to match the song better (also i recommend you map the gap afterwards) Nope! The hitsound fits perfectly with the song now.

01:08:505 - why not map this part here? You're missing a lot of good drums/vocals here It would be confusing to switch instruments.

01:41:773 - either map all the way to here, or start the break from here, because the song changes pace here, not where you mapped last Fixed.

02:58:583 - Your kiai starts here, but your slider start is one tick early! You should map the drums here instead of the vocals, because you really want to match the start of a slider or hitcircle with this beat, instead of having this beat play during the middle of a slider

03:04:067 (9) - NC here and remove NC here 03:05:438 - to match your NC pattern Fixed

03:15:035 (9,1) - same here Looks fine.

[Insane]
02:28:587 (1,2,3,4) - You start with mapping the (bass? what is that instrument orz) but then you suddenly change to mapping the vocals once it kicks in. This isn't really good for rhythm. In this case, you should stick to mapping the instrumentals here instead of the vocals. Playtests have shown that this is not confusing. I have done my best to make the transition go fluid. However, if more people agree with you. I will change it.



General comments about this map:

You seem to map the vocals a little too much and perhaps a little too precisely. This sometimes makes the rhythm really awkward to play
For example, in Insane, you have 00:33:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - where the objects mostly start at the half-beats (red ticks) instead of the main beats (white ticks) which isn't very good for rhythm Fair criticism, but I feel like that is fun to play.
also mapping the vocals too much creates awkward pauses that you don't really want, such as 00:38:325 - and 00:49:299 - in Insane. I wholeheartedly agree on this. If more modders feel like this is a problem, I will fix it.
I would advise you try to follow the drums and other instruments rather than the vocals; it will make the rhythm much better and more fun to play

Also this mapset is a little old-fashioned, meaning it resembles a map from a few years ago rather than the contemporary maps we have now.
I recommend you look at recently ranked maps to get an idea for more modern patterns. This will make you a better mapper in the future.
For example you use very linear sliders and geometric patterns in all of your difficulties which makes playing your map a little predictable and ultimately boring Linear sliders bring more velocity to them. I don't dislike the use of curved ones but I myself, especially with a song like this, feel more comfortable using straight sliders.
Be a little creative !

Also experiment more with hitsounds, as they will make your map much better. I recommend following a steady rhythmic hitsound pattern that matches the drums in this song. Working on that. I still haven't found a set of hitsounds that I feel can compliment the map though.

That's all, hope it helps

Please note: any complaints you have with this mod should go straight to Kibbleru. I have nothing to do with this not really

Star Seraph wrote:

Hey!! M4M~

NORMAL

General: try to add a bit more sliders

00:13:631 (5,1,2) - awkward flow Fixed!
00:16:203 (4) - divide into two at large white tick Fixed!
00:17:575 (1,2,3) - coincide these with beats not lyrics That would be inconsistent.
00:17:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part is sorta weird (imo)...maybe combine 3-7 into a slider(o: maybe a heart or something cool O:)? [color=#00FF00I changed it so it flows better. Kind of following the vocals here.[/color]
00:20:833 (9) - slider to catch vocals Fixed!
00:23:234 (2) - extend to white tick I feel like it's okay, the hitsounds coincide with the vocals.
00:24:778 (6) - slider Fixed!
00:27:521 (6) - slider Fixed.
00:28:893 (2) - also slider? Fixed.
00:31:294 (4) - split I feel like this is fine as is.
http://puu.sh/8jwxP.jpg
00:33:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - slider? or make these circles coincide with prominent beats This is fine as is.
00:35:409 (6) - wut What do you mean? I don't think I get it.
http://puu.sh/8jwGN.jpg
00:41:583 (1) - don't think there needs to be a spinner I feel like the spinner fits with the building beat. I will reconsider it if other people agree with you though
00:48:785 (5) - slider Fixed.
00:48:271 (4,5) - awkwaard (for some reason whenever i say awkward, i want to aardvarkkkk) - slider/coincide with beat I really do not want to switch tracks.
00:50:843 (2,3,4) - eh? remove #2 This coincides with the vocals
00:52:386 (1) - start at 00:52:729 I follow the BOOM in the background.
01:07:991 (6,1) - why are you ignoring this space? D: Because I'm following the trumpets here. If you have some suggestions of things I can do here, please do so.
01:14:164 (4) - kiai ends here Let me sleep on it.
01:19:652 (9) - repeater plox Fixed.
01:29:426 (6) - readjust I'll consider this, however, I'm following vocals here. This fits nicely with the beat but not with what I'm doing, and can be confusing, especially for a normal player.
http://puu.sh/8jxHb.jpg
01:52:748 (1,2,3) - slider Fixed.
01:55:491 (1,2,3) - slider Fixed.
02:05:266 (4) - nein Fixed
http://puu.sh/8jxWZ.jpg
02:06:638 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:09:210 (1,2) - combine #2 with #1 Fixed.
02:10:753 (4) - see above puush link Fixed.
02:12:125 (1) - ^ Fixed.
02:22:928 (1) - not enough vocal for spinner Fixed.
02:34:075 (1) - no spinner Fixed.
02:55:841 (1) - no spinner (btw this would be "break time" if you want; same with above) Fixed.
Second kiai should be wayyy ahead .o. Let me consider that.
03:06:809 (1) - idk...about all these spinners; doesn't feel like they should be here; well up to you I like them here.
03:17:777 (1) - maybe shorten this spinner - up to you where I feel like spinner length is correct.

HARD

General: this is sort of boring; too many pentagonal hit circles...try some new patterns + fun jumps here and there
Above spinner comments apply here
I am not going to go on about spacing; but check spacing for accuracy

00:16:546 (6) - slider Fixed.
00:17:575 (1,2) - blanket; blanket some other objects too here and there I see nothign wrong here.
00:20:833 (7) - slider Fixed.
00:31:637 (5) - slider Fixed.
00:48:785 (6) - slider; okay BASICALLY please add sliders where it seems appropriate (but use good judgment as well) Fixed.
02:03:722 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this could be better style wise Fixed
02:47:443 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - try something new here; excite me~ :3 Done! Hope you like it :3
Again, Kiai is in wrong spot-so slow for kiai with so much gap...i think it was ahead of this (the actual second kiai that is; or maybe there isn't another kiai?)

INSANE

00:16:203 (5,6) - if you're going for that pattern, keep it nice and symmetrical o:
Okay...soo, i am going to just stop here and say follow the advice gave for Hard. Also, the insane isn't that challenging...it's boring with simple patterns...try to mix it up a bit and be creative!

Hope this came handy!

Good luck with this map! Nice song btw~

Rad- wrote:

Hello! Finally doing my part of the m4m, sorry i took so long :p

General: Make the first kiai times on all diffs end at 01:17:079 instead

Normal and Hard will get remaps.

Insane

Well, this is certainly the best map of the set, though needs more work as well:

- Well. slider velocity is alright,but because you only set to one number, the map feels the same, as in there are no changes to it, its always that 1.0x spacing, and slower parts of the song is the same speed as the kiai part, as i will say later here. See later in the mod.
- You could fill the map with more stuff in the first part,like add a circle here 00:33:180 (1) - or make more after this slider as well 00:31:637 (8) - remember its an insane so you can go a little mad with it :p Not in the intro!
- 00:52:386 (1) - Instead of this slider, why not make a stream? and then add a small spinner that ends at 00:55:130 - to it just to fill that space. Doesn't fit, this slider fills the BOOOM in the background
- 00:55:216 (2) - Delete is fine
- I have to say that the whole first kiai time felt like a whole rotation of my hand and mouse, as its just a clockwise pattern, you could perhaps make it move somewhere else to break the cycle? Then the next pattern is everything anti-clockwise. i know you went for a map with better flow, but perhaps changing it would make the map less repetitive. If you're not the only one OTHER MODDERS READ THIS i'll change
- I noticed how there are alot of straight sliders as well... not sure its good for me... I like them straight sliders.
- 02:35:275 - From here to 02:36:647 - , add somre circles, and a triple there to follow the song a bit, just dont let it be so silent. Fixed.
- 02:47:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Dont copy paste this pattern and flip, please...
- 02:57:212 (1) - Like before, make spinner end at 02:58:583 - and remove the 02:58:668 (2) -
- 01:52:062 - till 02:14:697 - Reduce slider velocity here as its a more quiet part of the song and it shouldnt be as fast as kiai time, and from 02:14:697 - till 02:36:647 - , make it a little higher but not as high as the rest of the map, so its sort of the middle in speed. Fixed, however partially. I like 2:14-2:36 myself.

New combo colors:
01:29:255 (6) -
01:30:284 (3) -
01:34:914 (9) -
01:36:114 (1) - Remove this NC
01:36:285 (3) -
01:37:657 (4) -
01:38:172 (6) - Remove NC
02:01:665 (3) -
02:02:351 (5) -
02:03:722 (4) -
02:03:894 (1) - Remove Nc
02:08:009 (6) -
02:12:125 (6) -
02:27:044 (4) -
02:27:558 (1) - Remove NC
02:38:018 (5) -
02:42:131 (7) -
All done

Hope it helps :p

Celizavia wrote:

hi!
thanks for using my queue

here's my mod (in my personal opinion, please understand)

GENERAL

need more HD video. its kinda blur it's 720p bitcrushed so the size is just under the maximum

Normal

[*]need to improve the hits sounds Minor changes.
for example: 02:03:722 u should make the audio soft instead of normal Fine.
[*]at 02:29:959 the beat isnt really right, not really match with the rhythm This is fine.

Hard

[*] is it the AR too much? i guess 5-6 is better AR7 is fine, the song has a lot of velocity
[*]i think u need the change the place of the circles at 01:01:989 until 01:03:19 . never play several notes at the same time or any condition that cannot be played
[*]00:52:214 The object is too far fr the prev object That object is fine, it only moans because I changed the slider velocity

Flying

[*]lots of the object in the map are either too close/too far from the previous object. make sure to check it again This is fine.
[*] the timing points is different from the normal Red ones are the same. This is fine.

Make every notes snapped! You can check it in the AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A). Distance snap is fine.

u must make all the timing/ preview point the same in order to make your map ranked Red ones are the same. This is fine.

well thats all my mods, im sorry if there is some mistakes on my mod. hope this will help your map

Ae_x3 wrote:

Hey!

I tested your normal map and i have a few suggestions:

02:36:647 (1) - should be changed to a single note. Fix
02:36:989 - should contain the following 2 (on the white line). Fix
02:39:731 (1) - and 02:41:102 slider could be be 1 line longer ending on the white,
you should flip the slider and drag it closer it to make it easier. Sliders are nice.

It feels more natural to play it like this , for me atleast.

Also:
Open the Aimod, you should resnap the missing ones.Doine.
About the timing, start 00:11:230 - (i think, not sure) change to 175 instead of that 174,946. I'll check that later. Is fine now.
The timing starting at 02:36:647 - check the inherit previous timing settings. BPM changes here. I don't know why but it works like this. I'll check that later.

Generally

1. The preview point is different in Flying! difficulty so that makes your map unrankable!
2. I reccomend to ask a Modder who is good at timing and BPM things. I am not able to be good at this thing anymore because of my slow low quality PC, but even I can feel the rhytm is getting really worse as the song goes further and further. :<

Normal

1. I don't think something should be changed here.

Hard

1. There's some unsnapped objects what makes the mapset unrankable at the moment. Please, move it in time and get it back then.
2. 00:59:916 (5,6) - Please, hide these objects under the previous objects. They look messy now. :<
3. 01:01:973 (5) - Maybe NC? It is really long combo, even for Hard difficulty...
4. 01:18:431 (5) - NC again?
5. 01:23:916 (7) - And NC again + maybe a soft whistle as addition here?
6. 01:28:716 (5,3) - In this case NC would be reasonable to use here.
7. 02:43:459 (5) - Again NC.
8. 02:53:059 (5) - And here...
9. 03:03:215 (4) - Move it to X=274 Y=220 to hide it perfectly.
10. 03:03:387 (5) - And move this one to X=332 Y=164 to hide it too.
11. 03:05:444 (5) - NC and a soft whistle?
12. 03:13:673 (7) - NC?

Flying!

1. 00:16:716 (1) - Maybe a finish hitsound or whistle at least? I think that would fit here.
2. 00:30:773 (2) - Move this object to X=200 position. There'd be no bad overlap then.
3. 00:53:916 - 00:54:773 - I think this emptiness isn't a good thing in this Insane difficulty. Maybe you could fill it with a spinner?
4. 01:03:516 (1) - Could you extend this spinner a little bit? Till 01:05:059 maybe?
5. 01:05:745 (1,1) - I feel what you want to do here, but now in 2014 I think people would get it as overusing NC. Could you delete NCs here then? I am really sad that I am saying it, because I like things like that. :<
6. 02:42:088 (5) - Maybe move it to X=352 Y=136 to make it more blanket-like, because it looks like it was meant to be a blanket but is not. xD
7. 02:48:602 (6) - Move it to X=357 Y=162. Neat look.
8. 02:49:288 (3) - Move that to X=358 Y=245.
9. 02:49:973 (6) - And please move it to X=284 Y=282
10. 02:50:316 (1) - And that to X=196 Y=276.
11. 02:57:173 (1) - Please extend this spinner to 02:58:202 . It sounds better.
12. 03:06:988 (1,1,1) - As it's copy&paste - please, here are the same advices as above: 03:08:530 - Extend the spinner till this point. 03:09:216 (1,1) - And those two cute NCs are unnecessary. ;_;

Krfawy wrote:

Hello! It's Krfawy from the 'Bleeding Queue', witch! Sorry if my mod won't change anything, but I am a poor modder. ;_; Thanks a lot for your mod!

Generally

1. The preview point is different in Flying! difficulty so that makes your map unrankable! Fixed.
2. I reccomend to ask a Modder who is good at timing and BPM things. I am not able to be good at this thing anymore because of my slow low quality PC, but even I can feel the rhytm is getting really worse as the song goes further and further. :< Will look into that.

Normal

1. I don't think something should be changed here. This makes me a happy mapper!

Hard

1. There's some unsnapped objects what makes the mapset unrankable at the moment. Please, move it in time and get it back then. All objects are snapped.
2. 00:59:916 (5,6) - Please, hide these objects under the previous objects. They look messy now. :< Fixed.
3. 01:01:973 (5) - Maybe NC? It is really long combo, even for Hard difficulty...Fixed.
4. 01:18:431 (5) - NC again?Fixed.
5. 01:23:916 (7) - And NC again + maybe a soft whistle as addition here?Fixed.
6. 01:28:716 (5,3) - In this case NC would be reasonable to use here.Fixed.
7. 02:43:459 (5) - Again NC.Fixed.
8. 02:53:059 (5) - And here...Fixed.
9. 03:03:215 (4) - Move it to X=274 Y=220 to hide it perfectly.Fixed.
10. 03:03:387 (5) - And move this one to X=332 Y=164 to hide it too. Fixed.
11. 03:05:444 (5) - NC and a soft whistle?Fixed.
12. 03:13:673 (7) - NC?Fixed.

Flying!

1. 00:16:716 (1) - Maybe a finish hitsound or whistle at least? I think that would fit here. Fixed.
2. 00:30:773 (2) - Move this object to X=200 position. There'd be no bad overlap then. Fixed.
3. 00:53:916 - 00:54:773 - I think this emptiness isn't a good thing in this Insane difficulty. Maybe you could fill it with a spinner? This is fine
4. 01:03:516 (1) - Could you extend this spinner a little bit? Till 01:05:059 maybe? Fixed.
5. 01:05:745 (1,1) - I feel what you want to do here, but now in 2014 I think people would get it as overusing NC. Could you delete NCs here then? I am really sad that I am saying it, because I like things like that. :<Fixed.
6. 02:42:088 (5) - Maybe move it to X=352 Y=136 to make it more blanket-like, because it looks like it was meant to be a blanket but is not. xDFixed.
7. 02:48:602 (6) - Move it to X=357 Y=162. Neat look.
8. 02:49:288 (3) - Move that to X=358 Y=245.
9. 02:49:973 (6) - And please move it to X=284 Y=282
10. 02:50:316 (1) - And that to X=196 Y=276. I am overlapping the objects perfectly here. This si fine.
11. 02:57:173 (1) - Please extend this spinner to 02:58:202 . It sounds better. Fixed.
12. 03:06:988 (1,1,1) - As it's copy&paste - please, here are the same advices as above: 03:08:530 - Extend the spinner till this point. 03:09:216 (1,1) - And those two cute NCs are unnecessary. ;_; Fixed.

Simple, but nice mapping style. Good luck and hugs! Thank you very much!

LVU Bluddy! O3O

CDFA wrote:

download my mixtape

Overall:
Somewhere there's an offset change. Somewhere around 02:03:687 everything just feels off. Fixed.
I'm sort of sad in certain parts that there's not a lot more hitsounding. For softer sections, try utilizing hitsoft hitsounds with creative whistle placement to give it more flavor than just "BEAT BEAT BEAT BEAT". For bigger sections, you seem to have a good grasp on where claps should be, but just put them into the less filled sections. Hitsounding is hard. I might just look around other maps a bit more.

Insane:
Stylistic general thing here, but a lot of people find overlaps sort of confusing, so a lot of your patterns that may look nice when looking at the map might actually be confusing to read while playing. It'd be more of a question to ask someone who actually plays the game, lol Feels fine to me. Might play over it later.
Also, general statement, but when there's really empty sections (See after the first actual break, beginning of the map, etc), when you have really empty sections like that, it's a good idea to use big sliders there rather than just having blank space in between each note. Especially for insane maps, your goal is for consistent action. Meh, I agree, but I feel like it's fine. If there's any other modders that seem to think this is an issue, I'll fix it.
00:11:230 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These spaced streams are kind of bothersome because there hasn't really been an established sense of distance yet, and I'm sort of offput. Fixed. Gave it a nice .8 spacing.
00:14:573 - aaa theres stuff here This break is cool here, I feel.
00:22:202 (1,2,3) - oh hey look there's actual content yay this is like my dream
00:52:373 (1) - Probably just leave this at 1.0x with a repeat Repeats leave a hitsound. I feel like this is fine, but if someone else thinks this is an issue, I'll fix.
02:02:316 (1) - Multiple repeats like this on not short sliders are sort of weird to play, especially for an insane diff Next person to complain gets a free change!
02:44:831 (7) - ^
02:46:202 (1) - Like here there could be a totally cool hitsound. Fix.
02:55:802 (7) - Same as before
02:57:173 (1) - And as before

Hard:
00:58:887 (4) - aaaa clap on beginning of slider Fix
01:40:030 (4,5) - Because (2) is onscreen when (4) and (5) appear, it looks like they should be equally apart, and it's kind of weird to see that they arent. Fixed.
02:50:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is just kind of messy. I know what you're going for, but it doesn't translate very well the way it is now. Also, the hitsounding style changed, which is super weird o-o. Fixed.
02:58:588 - aaa the copypaste. Like it's not a huge deal I guess but I personally prefer to not copy-paste the final chorus of a song, but if a song has 3 choruses, I'll copy-paste the first one into the second one. Will fix later
03:02:359 (4) - Missing clap here agian Fixed

Normal:
Nothing much specific to point out. The diff gap between this and hard is pretty big, but I think its moreso on the hard's part creating the gap rather than the normal Might look into this.

Easy:
yay

It's definitely a good start, and with more hitsounding, more creativity in the beginning, and just retrying design choices, good things can happenThanks

also did you learn to map in like 2012 because like omg (which is a compliment yay i like 2012 that's when my mapping was actually relevant lol) no although to be honest i enjoy your style

Sniqht wrote:

From your M4M queue. I just modded 2 diff because I have 2 diff on my map.

[Flying!]

Look to the AiMod. There are so many spinner.

1. 00:37:973 (3,4,1,2) - Blanket better. These blankets looks very ugly. Fix
2. 00:42:088 (5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/9lxJf/25d24df9db.jpg -> http://puu.sh/9lxKS/c6c80177bc.jpg. If you do this, you must fix 4. Fix
3. 00:48:259 (1,2,3,4) - Blanket better... Fix
4. 00:49:288 (8,1) - ^ Fix
5. 00:51:345 (2,3) - ^ Fix
6. 00:56:145 (5,1,2,3) - I think this is not blanket but if you create blanket, this will be better. Not going to break distance snap for this
7. 00:58:202 (3,5,6) - Blanket better again. There are so many blanket mistake. I don't wanna say more ''Blanket, blanket..'' again. You can find these. Fix
8. 01:10:202 (1,2,3,4) - This is so ugly. You can do this here http://puu.sh/9lyc8/cba04a09a5.jpg This is cool. Keeping this.
9. 01:12:259 (6,7,8,9,10) - I think this stream isn't fits here. I think it does.
10. 02:14:659 (1,2) - Not equal. Fixed.
11. 02:17:059 (3) - Move this to x256 y348 Rather keep distance consistent
12. 02:30:859 (3) - Move this to 02:30:773 on the timeline. Fixed.
13. 02:32:488 (1) - Make same. No
14. 02:36:601 (1) - These hitsounds are bad.You will make normal, clap, normal, normal, normal, clap, normal, normal, clap.... I lik ehtis
15. 02:39:345 (1,2,3) - Looks bad. Look to this picture http://puu.sh/9lyIl/5371897be7.jpg Fine.
16. 02:44:831 (7) - Pic http://puu.sh/9lyKC/9f5b8cebd5.jpg Fixed.
17. 02:55:802 (1) - ^ Fixed.
18. 02:58:544 (1) - Don't be lazy. Use Ctrl + C for patterns and sliders. Was planning on remapping this.

[Easy]

1. 00:25:973 (3,4) - 3 touches 4. Is fine.
2. 00:26:316 (4,1) - Blanket better. Fixed
3. 00:30:087 (2,1) - ^ Fixed
4. 00:44:144 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Blanket better again... I don't wanna say more ''Blanket..'' You can find these. Fixed
5. 01:28:030 (1) - http://puu.sh/9lzcc/84814818ab.jpg Fixed
6. 01:36:259 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Stacked. Looks ugly. Fine as is.
7. 02:03:901 (1) - Really? Left, just 1 tick. This is fine.

Good lucks..Thanks for your mod!

pishifat wrote:

i would have modded earlier but i noticed your cat picture was gone. RIP meow

from your queue of course

General

1. timing is slightly off -- if you look at the last spinner, you can see that it starts/ends about 1/8 beat before the actual song. the best bpm i could find was 174.96 (while keeping your current offset). that's what happens when you don't have electronically timed songs i guess. the first four bars of piano are still slightly off, so there's the possibility you'll need a new timing point there. the rest of this mod is based off of your current timing, so if you do plan on changing it, do it last. fix
2. combo colors? according to some other mod you said you were in the process of fixing them but that was 2 months ago -.- there's no combo colors
3. first kiai time should end at 01:17:059 since the section ends at 16 bars (as most would in a 4/4 timing song). the 2 bars following the spinner are part of a transitional phrase sort of thing and i'd say shouldn't be included in the same section as the kiai time fixed, thanks

Insanesomething

anything i mention on one section that is copy/pasted later applies later. for example, if i said something about 01:00:602 (1,2,3,4) - it would apply to 03:04:030 (1,2,3,4) - as well

1. 00:28:031 (3) - considering the way you flow sliders at 00:30:431 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:32:145 (4,5,6) - it would make sense to ctrl+G this good call
2. 00:30:773 (2,4) - should be properly stacked on each other considering how precise everything else is first of many fixes
3. 00:31:459 (4) - and 00:32:145 (4) - should be copy/paste since symmetrical. would help with creating a blanket of equal distance between circles/sliders
   
   current blanket badness

   
   fix
4. 00:45:173 (6,4) - le stack. same reason as earlierfix
5. 00:51:688 (3,4,5,6) - the way these are arranged is kind of odd. i'd say keep 3/5 and 4/6 on the same horizontal plane and their distances to each other equal. in the screenshot, both lines are the same length. red area is overlap of 6 and line.fix
   
   eww

   
6. 00:55:288 (2,3) - imperfect blanketfix
7. 00:58:202 (3,6) - should be copy/pasted more evenly so that the blanket with 2,3,4 is equal on both slidersfix
8. 01:01:288 (3) - i don't usually have a problem with 3/4 sliders, but when they are ignoring a beat in the middle of the slider it should just be changed to 1/2. for this slider, the red tick in the middle has a drum something on it, while 01:00:602 (1) - does not. tldr make its length 1/2fix
9. 01:03:516 (1,1) - polarity between these is kind of weird. it would play better if there were an object on the white tick at 01:05:401. my suggestion would be just to stack it with the head of 01:06:088 (1) - it's fine
10. 01:12:259 (6,7,8,9,10) - should probably make these symmetrical on the x axis since the next section is a symmetrical patternfix
11. 01:12:773 (11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - should move all of these up (328|192) so that the patternr symmetrical with the upcoming spinner. 8 is kind of off as it is now and it doesn't look quite rightfix
12. 01:30:773 (9,1) - may want to swap the NCs here since 9 is on the large white tickfix
13. 01:39:345 (3,4,5,6) - imperfect shape makes me sad. applies to 01:41:231 (6,7,8,9) - as well because stacksfix
14. 02:01:631 (1,3) - NCs should be swapped since 3 is on the large white tick
15. 02:08:831 (3) - should be spaced more evenly between 02:08:316 (2) - and 02:09:173 (1) - like you did at 02:19:802 (3) - . reading it is unnatural otherwise since it's a different rhythmic pattern than the other parts in this areafix
    02:21:516 (1,3) - tail of the slider and 3 should be perpendicular to 02:22:031 (2,4) - lines in image self explanatory:
    
    +

    
    fix
16. 02:32:145 (6) - should probably just make this a circle as you did at 02:21:173 (6) - (or the other way around -- just keep it consistent. i prefer the circle tho)fix
17. 02:36:944 (2,5) - imperfect stacksfix
18. 02:37:630 (5,3) - ^fix
19. 02:38:316 (3,6) - ^fix
20. 02:40:716 (1,2,3,4,5) - imperfect blanketsfix
21. 02:42:088 (5) - may want to put a NC on here since this combo takes up two bars instead of the usual 1fix
22. 02:44:831 (7) - ^fix
23. 03:17:744 (1) - aibot says to make this a NC... for some reason. so do that. yeahfix

Hard

same thing about copy/paste

1. 00:22:202 (10) - assuming you want a 2 bar comboing pattern (which is what you have prior to here, you should make this a NC. this combo is 3 bars long and makes all others before 00:30:431 (1) - placed incorrectly, so you'll have to change those too. fix
2. 00:37:973 (6) - the tail of this slider goes outside of the grid. you don't want thatfix
3. 00:44:488 (1) - the jump between this and previous spinner is too large. if you were to place a circle at the center of the grid, you'd see that the jump is 1.6x while you've got the rest of this section at 1xfix. very helpful! =)
4. 00:52:373 (5) - should NC here for the velocity change and to follow the 2 bar patternfix
5. 01:01:630 (3,5) - the stack doefix
6. 01:05:401 - should place an object here. same reasoning as in insane meh
7. 02:03:687 - ^ (except this wasn't a problem on insane) spacing between this note and spinner will be bad, so pay attention to thatfix
8. 02:06:602 (1,2) - these should not be the same object representing different rhythms in the music. make them anything but the samefix
9. 02:18:088 (2,3) - most unimportant stacks yetfix
10. 02:21:516 (1,2) - when testplaying these felt kind of awkward, but i really don't have much reasoning for it. i think it plays better wtih a 1/2 slider though.fix
11. 02:43:288 (4,1) - spacing inconsistencyfix
12. 03:00:087 (6,7) - ^fix
13. 03:08:830 - thing about polarity spinner put note k coolfix

Normal

copypasteblah

1. 00:13:973 (1,2) - imperfect blanketfix
2. 00:18:088 (3,4) - i'd just copy/rotate 00:16:716 (1,2) - instead of creating these new objects since this is the best blanket out of any for this pattern thing. i'd say apply it to all of the times you do this, but that would be work so do what you wantfix
3. 00:38:659 (1,2) - le blanketfix
4. 00:44:144 - should place an object here for reasons stated too many timesfix
5. 00:47:573 (3,5) - le stack fix
6. 00:59:231 (1) - NC should be removed. breaks the 2 bar pattern fix
7. 01:07:973 (5) - this slider... umm.. just use one point, two makes it not symmetrical (unless you really try to position them properly... which you don't need to do ever)fix
8. 01:10:202 (4,6) - stackzorfix
9. 01:11:573 (6,1) - ^ (these two notes should also swap NCs because 2 bars consistency wasdfsafdafdf)fix
10. 01:30:773 (7,1) - may want to switch the NCs here because barline thingsfix
11. 01:41:059 (6,7) - do i need to say itfix
12. 02:03:345 (8,9) - i feel that a better way to transition here would be by using a 1/2 slider instead of a double like this. adding a note on the large white tick would be preferrable thoughfix
13. 02:35:231 (1,5) - should swap NCsfix
14. 02:36:945 (6,7) - there really shouldn't be a gap like this here. there's nothing to indicate silence and the other two difficulties had objects here.fix
15. 02:52:887 - feels like there should be an object here. there's nothing to indicate removing a note in the song herefix
16. 02:55:631 (4) - slider end outside fo the gridfix
17. 02:59:230 (3) - slider itself isn't out of the grid, but the anchor is. i'm not really sure if that's a problem, but i'd move it back in for safetyfix
18. 01:14:659 (1) - and 03:17:915 (1) - start/end both of these at the same time. the first starts on a white tick while the second starts on a red tick even though they're both supposed to represent the same point in the songfix

kbai

1. Many objects during and after the variable BPM section appear to be unsnapped due to the timing changes on Easy and Normal. Make sure to resnap all notes after applying this mod. It's worth considering remapping the section between 02:03:716 and 02:16:076 for the reason as captin1 mentioned in his post above.
2. The current spread of your difficulty settings are questionable. I'll mention under the respective difficulties how you can get an ideal spread.
3. Here is a JPG conversion of your current background I would prefer you use. Reducing file size wherever possible is always a plus.
   
   Image

   
4. Because there are no storyboard elements are in use, you can disable Widescreen Support on all difficulties.
5. You should use some custom combo colours that compliment your background. Default colours aren't much of a pleasure to look at. Something like below I find fits very well. Make sure these or any other combination you may use are applied to all difficulties if implemented.
   
   Example

   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 245,241,165
   Combo2 : 255,128,128
   Combo3 : 114,235,165

1. 00:25:977 (3,4) - In general try to avoid these "slightly touching" overlaps, they look bad. In this case you can avoid the touching by applying more curvature to (4). Should be an easy fix but here's a coded example if you would like to use it:
   
   Example

   
   

   320,120,25291,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   453,236,25977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   392,304,26320,2,2,B|324:184|452:164|376:48,1,270

2. 00:46:897 (3) - I highly recommend shortening this slider by one repeat and adding a note on 00:47:925 will play most intuitively for a beginner. A second repeat will feel unexpected unless the slider is pretty long which makes them seamless to predict. This applies to all cases where this occurs. Refer to g0010726's mod below as he points out each time this occurs. Also, following how you've used NCs on objects so far I feel the use of one here is appropriate.
3. 00:58:900 (1) - Remove NC
4. 01:11:589 (3) - NC here to follow your pattern.
5. 01:12:617 (1) - Remove NC
6. 01:12:960 (2) - NC
7. 01:14:332 (1,1) - This is very much stressful for a beginner player. You'll notice that (1) begins to appear a decent amount of time before the spinner even ends. I highly recommend leaving more time between the end of the spinner and the next object to allow players enough time to recover. Two suggestions for this. You can rearrange your rhythm to create a 2/1 gap between the spinner end and proceeding slider like in the image below. Another idea would be to delete 01:17:419 (1,2), insert break time here and resume with a note on 01:19:819.
   
8. 01:36:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I see what you're trying to do here, but can't say I agree with it. For an Easy difficulty is almost all cases you want to make the path for players to follow perfectly clear which implies avoiding partial overlaps as much as possible. It's also worth noting that a spacing error is created between 01:37:310 (4,1). You can try something like the below:
   
   Example

   

   288,184,97653,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   350,124,97995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   419,184,98338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   350,245,98681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   262,266,99024,6,2,P|178:254|151:151,1,180
   313,109,100396,2,2,P|395:137|427:218,1,180
   280,323,101768,1,4,0:0:0:0:

9. 02:02:345 (1) - Remove NC.
10. 02:08:034 (1) - Remove NC to avoid unnecessary combo spam.
11. 02:28:408 (6) - NC here to be consistent with its usage on 02:17:434 (1) and to shorten this long combo.
12. 02:58:588 - Snap this green line to 02:58:601 for consistency with 2nd kiai starts of the mapset.
13. 03:02:360 (1) - Remove NC.
14. 03:04:075 (3) - NC for consistency.
15. 03:09:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Whoa now you might want to break up this considerably large combo.
16. 03:17:793 (1) - Add a finish to this spinner to compliment the cymbal as you had for Insane.
17. 03:20:536 - Snap this green line to 03:20:549 for consistency with 2nd kiai endings of the mapset.

1. 00:41:409 (1) - Remove the finish from this spinner. The music doesn't warrant one here.
2. 00:18:089 (1) - Check you spacing here. You can try a placement like this if you want to maintain the blanket with (2):
   
   Example

   
3. 00:34:551 (5) - Spacing inconsistency here.
4. 00:55:127 (1) - Adding a finish sounds cool here and accentuates the beginning of the kiai.
5. 01:04:387 (3) - Did you mean to have this at x:236 y:166? It would make a nice triangle and correct the spacing.
6. 01:04:730 (4) - Missed a clap on the tail.
7. 01:07:130 (3) - Clap on the head.
8. 02:34:937 (3) - You can add a whistle to emphasize the sound here as you had for the following objects.
9. 02:36:652 (1) - Missed a finish.
10. 02:47:626 (1) - From this point until 02:55:686 your comboing is all borked.
11. 02:58:601 (1) - Add a finish here as well for the same reason as 00:55:127 (1).
12. 03:07:860 (3) - Same as 01:04:387 (3).
13. 03:08:203 (4) - Clap on the tail.
14. 03:10:604 (3) - Clap on the head.
15. 03:16:948 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with its absence on 01:13:475 (6).
16. 03:18:149 (1) - Add a finish to this spinner to compliment the cymbal as you had for Insane.

1. 00:37:980 (6) - Adjustments need to be made here so this slider is not overlapping with the life bar: screenshot
2. 00:55:127 (2) - This should have a NC for the kiai start, musically it has no reason to be in the same combo as (1).
3. 01:09:702 (5,7) - The rhythm of this combo feels ambiguous, these 1/1 sliders in particular because they skip over some really heavy beats. I suggest using a rhythm like below to fill those strong beats while still allowing the 1/1 sliders to follow vocal holds.
   
4. 01:13:646 (1) - Remove NC as it's unnecessary and doesn't follow your pattern.
5. 01:13:303 (7,1,2) - I find the consecutive use of 1/2 sliders a bit plain with how prominent the vocal is here, it would be neat if you could incorporate following it into your patterning. Try using a circle, 1/1 slider followed by two circles or a 1/2 slider like below:
   
6. 01:23:935 (5) - This slider is not reversing to anything in the music and should be extended to reverse on the white tick. Make sure to delete (6) and add a note on 01:24:792.
7. 01:40:053 (4) - Remove the clap on the tail, the music doesn't warrant it.
8. 01:41:768 (10) - Move this up a few grids to about x:352 y:188 so you can get a triangle formation with 01:41:082 (8,9,10).
9. 01:52:742 (1,2) - Not so much of a big deal here but if you CTRL-J either of these you'll notice they're not perfectly symmetrical.
10. 01:55:486 (1,2) - Similar case like above, using CTRL-H.
11. 02:27:221 (7) - Your new combos of this section seem to appear every measure so using a NC would be consistent with that idea.
12. 02:48:998 (5) - NC here as the combos of this section occur every measure.
13. 02:55:686 (1) - I would remove the NC here, this note feels like it belongs with 02:55:000 (1,2) following the vocal. Also the 1 circle combo is strange.
14. 02:56:886 (3) - I'm confused with what you're following here. After the 1/1 gap between 02:56:372 (1,2) it would be better to have this on 02:57:057 to follow how 02:55:000 (1,2,1) played.
15. 03:13:176 (5,7) - Same suggestion as 01:09:702 (5,7).
16. 03:16:777 (7,1,2) - Same suggestion as 01:13:303 (7,1,2).
17. 03:17:120 (1) - Remove NC as it's unnecessary and doesn't follow your pattern.
18. 03:17:806 (1) - Swap the whistle for a finish on this spinner to compliment the cymbal as you had for Insane.
    
    Not bad, I feel you could do something more special with the rhythm between 02:47:626 - and 02:54:142 - which is entirely 1/2 sliders.

1. 00:27:520 (9) - Spacing is a little cramped here, this circle is touching noticeably closer to (3) than the other surrounding circles.
2. 00:55:127 (1) - Finish sounds cool here, also brings out the kiai starting.
3. 01:01:643 (4) - Missed a clap on the head.
4. 01:21:791 (5) - The spacing in this stream is a little messy around this note, try to have equal spacing here.
5. 02:34:252 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/1 and have it start on 02:33:909 so there isn't a big gap and for consistency with 02:22:934 (1).
6. 02:47:626 (1) - Finish on the head for the cymbal.
7. 02:57:229 (1) - Remove the finish from this spinner, the music doesn't warrant one here.
8. 02:58:601 (1) - Add a finish for the cymbal and to accentuate the beginning of the kiai.

Estellia- wrote:

Ok GO!

Easy

00:19:461 (1,3) - You can make them blanket the hitcircles betterk
01:10:217 (1) - Same^k
01:11:589 (1) - This note seems to be jutting into this note^. Rotate it more maybe?k
02:13:492 (2) - Copy the note before?fine

Perfect distance snapping and a rather easy-to-mod Easy. Nice one!

Normal

00:31:464 (2) - Make this note blanket the front of the note before no, this is fine

That's it. This song is pretty plain, so there's nothing much you can do (I know how you feel ><) So its rather boring, but acceptable. Beat placement can be rather off at times; it doesn't follow the flow of the song, or more of you following the vocals less. i don't see what you mean, i feel like it's fine

Hard

00:20:833 (4,5,6) - Triplets start to get boring after a while this is fine
00:31:807 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - I don't get why at some points your sliders are one beat behind and sometimes they aren't. Its kinda confusing following the previous piano pattern here, keeping it there, switching it over when the song changes it would be even more confusing

I couldn't find any more mistakes, for the sole reason that your mapping style is very consistent, but it can become a bore eventually. Its very ordinary, and not very eye-catching. Your straight sliders can go for a makeover, use less of those. Curvy sliders are what appeals to the public now. i like straight sliders if used correctly

Flying

00:51:012 (1,2) - Make note 1 lead into note 2 better meh this is fine

Now I really kinda feel bad that I don't spot any mistake. Its not necessarily because your map is good, (sorry ><) but more of being consistent. It could also be due to the fact that you copy your own patterns a lot. I like the hitcircle spams though. I'm sorry, but if you don't like certain patterning, please give me advice on it instead of saying I don't like it.

Generally a map I'd consider to be okay-ish. Pretty normal, so normal it kinda scares me a little (haha). Maybe come up with a unique style of your own?~

1. Use some custom combo colors and some custom hitsounds?.

1. Okay well im just going to tell u right now the rhythm is VERY boring and plain... it's just 1/2 all over the place.
2. 02:21:906 - why leave these out?
   02:22:249 -
   02:22:591 -
3. 02:44:883 (1) - plz
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:37:294 (1,2) - blah these blankets just bother me lol. they don't rly look nice imo. not perfect/ even enough
   00:55:299 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:11:230 (1,2,3) - err how bout not overlap them?
   00:12:602 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
6. There aren't really any technical issues with this map but the rhythm... is just.. so plain and boring...
   well maybe if you want to keep the rhythm make some interesting patterns like jumps and stuff rather than DSing it out the whole way

1. 00:58:557 (3,5) - erm stack?
2. 01:19:476 (5,3) - ^
3. 01:24:278 - missing clap
   01:24:964 - ^
4. 02:46:083 - put something here anything.
5. well i think i mentioned about the rhythm already in the insane diff...