This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, June 30, 2014 at 8:46:36 AM

Artist: Nao Toyama
Title: Heart Pattern
Source: Nisekoi
BPM: 135.01
Filesize: 4834kb
Play Time: 03:32
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (2.88 stars, 401 notes)
2. Insane (3.48 stars, 627 notes)
3. Normal (1.73 stars, 236 notes)

Download: Nao Toyama - Heart Pattern
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap.
Enjoy

I did a quick look and see that you have AR 7.9. Why not AR 7 ? The song doesn't have a fast feeling and the BPM is not that high. Also, why offset is at 00:02:285 instead of 00:00:507 ?

And your mp3 still has it's source in the filename, you might want to change that . If you do, don't forget to change the AudioFileName in your .osu file as well.

Don't give kudosu since I didn't really do anything.

piruchan wrote:

I did a quick look and see that you have AR 7.9. Why not AR 7 ? The song doesn't have a fast feeling and the BPM is not that high. Also, why offset is at 00:02:285 instead of 00:00:507 ?

And your mp3 still has it's source in the filename, you might want to change that . If you do, don't forget to change the AudioFileName in your .osu file as well.

Don't give kudosu since I didn't really do anything.

Alright. Done.
Thanks

I updated this and it now has all difficulties.

Hi, from Newcomer Queue.

[General]
BPM: 155 Offset: 566

You need to set a Preview Point (Interesting part of your song), you can set on Timing > Set Current Position as Preview Point.

You should remove the slider slide's sound, it's pretty annoying. Find a silent .wav file, or download here. Copy to your Map folder, (If you don't know where, it's on your osu! folder > Songs > Your map name) then rename it.

with: *-sliderslide
Change * with: Normal, Soft, or Drum.

then, on your time Timing Panel check this.

Lower the volumes of all diff to 90 %.

03:14:270 - You need an end for this Kiai time. End it here, 03:32:047

Please use Dinstance Snap when making easy or normal. (Your map is really random, I got too many 100 and miss when testplaying your map) You really need to rework your easy and normal.

[Easy]
In case you don't want to rework your map then... (But you should rework your this diff!)

Why you use 1/8 for easy? You should use 1/1 or 1/2.

00:12:062 (2,3) - Too close!
00:15:172 (2,3) - ^
00:22:727 (2,3) - ^
00:26:949 (7,8) - ^
00:28:949 (1,2) - ^
00:32:060 (4,1,2) - ^
00:38:726 (4,5) - ^
00:39:615 (1,2) - ^
00:40:504 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:44:948 (4) - Avoid using multi-repeat sliders in Easy / Normal diff. Most newbies can only repeat once. And this willlead to combo break.
00:44:948 (4,5) - Too close.
00:47:170 (1,2) - ^
01:00:947 (7,8) - ^
01:06:280 (4) - Avoid multi-repeat sliders.
01:13:390 (5) - ^
01:13:390 (5,1) - Too close.
01:38:500 (1) - Multi-repeat.
01:38:500 (1,2) - Too close.
01:40:499 (2,3) - ^
01:40:944 (3,4) - ^
01:44:277 (2,3) - ^
01:47:166 (4,5) - ^
01:51:165 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:54:276 (1) - Multi-repeat.
01:56:054 (2) - ^
01:56:054 (2,1) - Too close.
02:00:054 (5,6,7) - ^
02:01:831 (1,2) - ^
02:06:720 (4) - Multi-repeat.
02:14:719 (4,5) - Too close.

And many more, too many error on this diff.

[Normal]
You should rework your this diff too. Too many error!

[Hard]
00:07:618 (8) - New Combo.
00:13:395 (9) - ^
00:19:284 (7) - ^
00:41:171 (5) - ^
02:42:941 (9) - ^
02:56:717 (9) - ^

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Okay, Good luck!

ChiLynn wrote:

Hi, from Newcomer Queue.

[General]
BPM: 155 Offset: 566

You need to set a Preview Point (Interesting part of your song), you can set on Timing > Set Current Position as Preview Point.

You should remove the slider slide's sound, it's pretty annoying. Find a silent .wav file, or download here. Copy to your Map folder, (If you don't know where, it's on your osu! folder > Songs > Your map name) then rename it.

with: *-sliderslide
Change * with: Normal, Soft, or Drum.

then, on your time Timing Panel check this.

Lower the volumes of all diff to 90 %.

03:14:270 - You need an end for this Kiai time. End it here, 03:32:047

Please use Dinstance Snap when making easy or normal. (Your map is really random, I got too many 100 and miss when testplaying your map) You really need to rework your easy and normal.

[Easy]
In case you don't want to rework your map then... (But you should rework your this diff!)

Why you use 1/8 for easy? You should use 1/1 or 1/2.

00:12:062 (2,3) - Too close!
00:15:172 (2,3) - ^
00:22:727 (2,3) - ^
00:26:949 (7,8) - ^
00:28:949 (1,2) - ^
00:32:060 (4,1,2) - ^
00:38:726 (4,5) - ^
00:39:615 (1,2) - ^
00:40:504 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:44:948 (4) - Avoid using multi-repeat sliders in Easy / Normal diff. Most newbies can only repeat once. And this willlead to combo break.
00:44:948 (4,5) - Too close.
00:47:170 (1,2) - ^
01:00:947 (7,8) - ^
01:06:280 (4) - Avoid multi-repeat sliders.
01:13:390 (5) - ^
01:13:390 (5,1) - Too close.
01:38:500 (1) - Multi-repeat.
01:38:500 (1,2) - Too close.
01:40:499 (2,3) - ^
01:40:944 (3,4) - ^
01:44:277 (2,3) - ^
01:47:166 (4,5) - ^
01:51:165 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:54:276 (1) - Multi-repeat.
01:56:054 (2) - ^
01:56:054 (2,1) - Too close.
02:00:054 (5,6,7) - ^
02:01:831 (1,2) - ^
02:06:720 (4) - Multi-repeat.
02:14:719 (4,5) - Too close.

And many more, too many error on this diff.

[Normal]
You should rework your this diff too. Too many error!

[Hard]
00:07:618 (8) - New Combo.
00:13:395 (9) - ^
00:19:284 (7) - ^
00:41:171 (5) - ^
02:42:941 (9) - ^
02:56:717 (9) - ^

---------------------------------------------

Okay, Good luck!

I've edit both hard and the normal difficulty. Although I still have a few things I still have to work on.
I'm still reworking easy (damn, easy is a lot harder to map than hard)Done

Thanks

i found this map in the "your thoughts on the user above you thread" while trying to form an opinion about you. And I'll just say...

not bad at all

i dont really know the modding procedures or what im doing, i dont even know how to use the editor, but this is just a small suggestion from someone who played the map.


it's just a small idea, i like the map overall, there might be a little more 'notes at the ends of sliders' than im privy to but I know those are vital to the maps consistent melody and it's just my personal tastes, not an issue.

Hey from modreqs

• = Important
• = Recommend
• = Suggestion


[Hard]

• 00:18:284 (6) - Fix blanket, rotate by -9

I recommend you change beat snap divider back to 1/4 because some of your hitobjects are on the wrong beat

• 00:15:951 (5) - Remove

• 00:19:673 (4) - ^

• 00:24:026 (8) - Move to the white tick on the left

• 00:31:061 (7,8) - Fix stack by disabling distance snap

• 00:19:617 (3) - White tick

• 00:22:950 (4,5) - Disable distance snap and fix stack

• 00:31:838 (10) - Red tick

• 00:32:949 (3) - White tick

• 00:35:838 (13) - Red tick

• 00:57:059 (9) - Remove

• 00:57:059 (9) - Disable distance snap and fix stack

• 01:00:392 (10) - Remove

• 01:09:281 (3,4) - Disable distance snap and fix stack

• 01:12:281 (3) - A slider arc here would be nice

• 01:17:836 (7) - Disable distance snap and fix stack

• 01:19:946 (5,6) - ^

• 01:22:279 (1) - White tick to the right

• 01:23:167 (3) - White tick to the left

• 01:23:390 (4) - Red tick to the right

• 01:23:390 (4) - End kiai time here

• 01:46:949 (5,6) - Disable distance snap and fix stack

• 01:59:836 (2) - This slider should end on a white tick

I hope you take my previous mods and apply them to your other map sets that i didn't modify.

Overall you need to work on using distance snap, placing notes on the correct beats/ticks, and reducing the amount of stacks and streams you have in your hards. Your hit sounding is fine but other than that, eeh.. Keep practicing






Good effort. PM me anytime if you have any questions about my mod or just mapping in general

From xLoupGarou's Modding Queue


1st *Your BG - Link
2nd *Your Preview Time - Set it here 02:18:941
To set it press " Set Current Position as Preview Pont" on Timing Menu




You can ignore this mod if it has a big change on your mapping style >_<
That's All
Good Luck~

Alright that's a lot to take in XD
I'll get right on it. Thanks.

After much consideration and some advice, I have changed the difficulties of the maps from:
Easy
Normal
Hard

to:
Normal
Hard
Insane

I still have to make changes in the normal and hard difficulties, but I'll do that tomorrow.Done

LOL, No Easy Nyanymore? ( >_< ) Call a GD or soo like that

* Gonna Shoot a Star *

xLoupGarou wrote:

LOL, No Easy Nyanymore? ( >_< ) Call a GD or soo like that

* Gonna Shoot a Star *

Wow thanks. Can you GD?

bg mod

I found a higher res version of the image and cleaned it up slightly. There are 2 versions, one with the title of the show and one without it. Here you go:

Oh hey thanks ^_^

Hello~ from my Mod Queue

I only looked at your hard difficulty.

Hard
You're missing a preview point for this difficulty. Make sure it is consistent with your normal and insane difficulty.
Your spacing is very inconsistent. I recommend using distance snap, especially if you are a beginner mapper
00:15:172 (2,3,4,5,6) – something like this looks much more neater when you use distance snap
Please consider remapping the difficulties to fix the spacing with distance snap. The reason is because players might have trouble differentiate ½, ¼, and etc from each other
00:33:171 (4,5) – This is an example of why spacing is important. A player may accidently combo break at this part.

00:18:283 (1) – A good practice as a mapper is to avoid mapping at the edges like this
01:25:612 (1) - You have a spinner on the end of your slider. Move 1/2 tick forward

There are some instances where there is issue with flow. This means that I have to make some really sharp angled turns in order to reach the next note. Try to incorporate more linear, oval, and dropoff flow
00:19:172 (3) – example: bad flow going into 00:19:394 (4) . I recommend flipping 00:19:394 (4) -

There are some instances throughout your map where you use blankets improperly. When creating blankets, press g to use a small grid circle and use the approach circle as a guide to make sure it’s blanketed properly. Examples below:
00:11:173 (1) – blanket http://puu.sh/9FFgw/f7ee5da982.jpg
02:04:720 – blanket - http://puu.sh/9FGkg/4c2cb3a773.jpg
I won’t go through the rest since it needs a lot of work but I think you get the picture.

Fix the spacing and i'll be happy to recheck it for a more thorough mod (just PM me). Good luck with your map.

the mods and stars are increasing


i may as well star it too

O hey man thanks ^_^

Love the dance

truonant wrote:

Hello~ from my Mod Queue

I only looked at your hard difficulty.

Hard
You're missing a preview point for this difficulty. Make sure it is consistent with your normal and insane difficulty.
Your spacing is very inconsistent. I recommend using distance snap, especially if you are a beginner mapper
00:15:172 (2,3,4,5,6) – something like this looks much more neater when you use distance snap
Please consider remapping the difficulties to fix the spacing with distance snap. The reason is because players might have trouble differentiate ½, ¼, and etc from each other
00:33:171 (4,5) – This is an example of why spacing is important. A player may accidently combo break at this part.

00:18:283 (1) – A good practice as a mapper is to avoid mapping at the edges like this
01:25:612 (1) - You have a spinner on the end of your slider. Move 1/2 tick forward

There are some instances where there is issue with flow. This means that I have to make some really sharp angled turns in order to reach the next note. Try to incorporate more linear, oval, and dropoff flow
00:19:172 (3) – example: bad flow going into 00:19:394 (4) . I recommend flipping 00:19:394 (4) -

There are some instances throughout your map where you use blankets improperly. When creating blankets, press g to use a small grid circle and use the approach circle as a guide to make sure it’s blanketed properly. Examples below:
00:11:173 (1) – blanket http://puu.sh/9FFgw/f7ee5da982.jpg
02:04:720 – blanket - http://puu.sh/9FGkg/4c2cb3a773.jpg
I won’t go through the rest since it needs a lot of work but I think you get the picture.

Fix the spacing and i'll be happy to recheck it for a more thorough mod (just PM me). Good luck with your map.

Okay done

Browsing on my phone...

Change bpm from 135.01 to 135.

Mod request from my Queue




The map is pretty good. Almost everything sounds good, but the distance snap ruin your mapset. I guess it's playable, but at many parts it looks too random and it confuse too much. I hope you understand what I mean.

Good luck!