Onicorn wrote:

Hello. It's pretty hard to find something to mod here because it's almost perfect. :3 Didn't found much but whatever.

Futsuu

SPOILER

00:31:430 - Cause claps. If it's too hard for futsuu remove (78).
01:06:764 (75) - Fits better in my opinion.

Muzukashii

SPOILER

00:07:597 - Remove? and 00:09:930 - Add d
00:36:097 (157) - k? (clap)

Oni

SPOILER

01:00:764 (102) - k for clap ? That's not really necessary though.

Hope this helped and good luck!

Onicorn

Nofool wrote:

Hi, mod req via pm from you
even if it looks like i wrote a lot, it's all suggestions since your diffs sounded good to me n_n
hope it'll be usefull

[Kantan]
00:20:430 (27,28,29) ddd might be good too here since the vocal sounds are similar (and the instrumental is pretty much the same for the 3 beats too), or maybe just change 00:20:765 (28) to d if you follow the vocal only since the voice’s intensity is a bit different for (29) imo changed that ddk~!
00:54:764 (23) del ? just like you did at 00:44:097 fixed~
That second kiai part is not that much different than the first one (I mean the song), maybe mapping it more or less the same way would’ve been better since that’s only a kantan

[Futsuu]
00:07:764 add d and then del 00:08:097 (17) ? to follow more the melody fixed
00:13:097 ^ fixed
00:20:430 (49,50,51) refer to kantan, I won’t suggest ddk this time tho since there are too much ddk already. The instrumental is really loud here but DDD might be too hard for a futsuu ;_; change that kkk~
00:41:597 (105) change to d ? the vocal is a bit lower than for the previous k, and the instrumental sounds a bit like at 00:40:430 okay~
00:53:430 (31) change to d ? fits better both the vocal/instrumental imo fixed
Nothing else to point on the second kiai part imo, but as for the kantan, it might be too different than the first part when the song is similar for the two part

[Muzukashii]
00:00:431 – 00:05:097 dd kk dd kk… these patterns are too simplistic, something like kd kd kd kd would’ve fited more the song imo, as you prefer fixed
00:11:097 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52) why no kkddkkd like you did earlier :c fixed
00:12:930 (56) del ? and then change 00:13:097 (57) to k ? to keep more consistency with what you did before, as for my previous suggestion fixed~ just make same pattern with previous part.
00:16:097 (71) change to k ? that’s the extension of 00:15:764 (70) fixed~ Thank you~
00:27:097 (120) change to D ? sounds like at 00:27:597 (122) where you could also add a finish fixed~
00:37:764 – 00:39:430 you used kd kd kd kd here, why not at the beginning :c (and the end) so.. fixed beginning~ owo/
00:46:764 (16) change to d ? fixed
00:55:930 (60) change to k ? fixed
01:08:430 – 01:18:430 refer to 00:00:431 – 00:05:097 I mean maybe try to find something that fits more the song for these xx patterns change that all kd pattern. It's all same vocal I think .. so I don't have any idea naymore~

[Oni]
About the beginning and the end, as for the muzu, maybe try to find something that fits more the song :c no need to do something complicated (for example you dk kd kd dk are not really justified imo) changed them all kd like muzu~ I hope It's not boring to play. :3
00:13:764 – 00:14:764 I would’ve kept your kkddk d kkddk here too, fits really well the melody fixed
00:20:430 (114,115,116) as I suggested for the others diff, DDD or KKK would fit better the instrumental imo (and also the vocal) changed to DDD
00:35:430 (196) del ? fixed
00:55:180 (71,72) del and then add a finish at 00:55:097 (70) ? to emphasize the instrumental fixed
00:57:430 (84,85,86) swap colors ? dkkdd fits more the vocal imo fixed

gl'

mingmichael wrote:

hola~!

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Futsuu]

General

☞ noproblem~

Notes Structure

☞ nice~! good job~

Notes

• delete 00:40:764 - . well i know that you wanted to follow the vocal on there right? woho sounds nice~ but consider again with the long notes from 00:37:430 - . even the patterns aren't hard, but at least it needs a little break like you did on the previous parts for every patterns
btw the notes on 00:40:930 - ; 00:41:264 - and 00:41:597 - already follow the vocals well~ and a note on 00:40:764 - that you used is just to emphasize a vocal on 00:40:930 - , and it's not a big problem not to use it

• change 00:45:430 (6,7,8) - to be o o o. it will follow the basic pattern which is o o o o on 1/1 beat snap divisor. ofc, it will keep the consistency of the pattern if you change this
btw, o o o follow the vocals well too because a vocal on 00:45:764 - already drops and it becomes low than the previous notes which have higher pitch sounds

• same on 00:56:097 (38,39,40) - ^

• kat on 00:57:430 - , to keep the consistency of the notes like 00:46:764 - which is kat

• change 01:00:430 - to be don here. to emphasize the vocal with don, like you did on 01:03:097 -

• delete 01:03:764 - . there's not any particular reason to use a note on there and that note doesn't follow any particular sounds too. same like 01:01:097 - which you gave a break, not a note

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[ Muzukashii]

General

☞ noproblem~

Notes Structure

☞ nice kat patterns~! well mapped

Notes

• change 00:23:597 - and 00:23:764 - to be o o. those notes will follow the dropping pitch of vocals well~

• 00:45:597 - and 00:45:764 - same like above ^

• 00:48:764 - and 00:48:930 - ^

• change 00:49:430 - to be kat. it will follow the snare sound from the song on there. much better than you used a don on there

• 00:50:597 - and 00:50:764 - change to be o o. the reason is same like above and it also keeps the consistency pattern like 00:51:930 - ; 00:52:097 -

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[ Oni]

General

☞ okay~!

Notes Structure

☞ basically it's nice~ noproblem for me

Notes

• change 00:07:847 - to be kat, so it'll be ooo-triplet. same like 00:13:097 - ; 00:13:180 - ; 00:13:264 - which you used ooo-triplet too. so just keep the consistency of the patterns. they also have a same part of the song, so why not?

• change 00:16:097 - to be kat, for the snare sound

• move 00:45:847 - to 00:45:680 - and change it to be don, so it'll be ooo-triplet. there's not any reason to use ooo-triplet on 00:45:764 - ; 00:45:847 - ; 00:45:930 - ._. and it annoys too

• move 00:47:180 - to 00:47:347 - and change 00:47:097 - to be don. it'll be much better for the kat patterns there

• change 00:55:097 - to be big don. it will support the low vocal too there

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okay that's all from me. Kantan seems fine for me, and nothing issues that are found
wohoo your mapping skill has improved well~! nice job, akemi

kaykay~! goodluck there :3

toara_fict wrote:

Hi :3 Taiko Mod request from My Queue.

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is Finish don note
4. K is Finish kat note
   
   
5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
6. Green is I would strongly recommend
7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]

1. okay.

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[ Kantan]

1. fine

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[ Futsuu]

1. fine

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[ Muzukashii]

• 
  
  1st play

  HR
  

1. 00:20:764 (89) - Change D ? ( Oni use D :3 ) fixed~
   
   
2. 00:53:597 (48) - Delete this note :3 ? fixed~~~! :3
   
   
3. 00:59:014 (75,76) - move 00:59:681 (78,79) - ? ( 00:48:097 (22,23) - 00:58:764 (73,74) - Pattern ? ) fixed~~

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[ Oni]

• 
  
  1st play

  HR
  

1. 00:53:514 - add d here ? ( 00:54:847 (68) - To resemble this ) fixed~!
   
   
2. 01:04:264 (115) - add d here ? ( follow Vocal :3 ) fixed~

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@Akemi_Homura : Really I like this map. Good map.

I hope Rank. Good Luck & star :3

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is Finish don note
4. K is Finish kat note
   
   
5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
6. Green is I would strongly recommend
7. black is Pointed out that

• 
  ^ omg what's wrong with my diff's name lol xDDD

1. 01:05:930 - 01:06:014 - add d here ? nope. the dons will not follow any sounds on there. it sounds like useless notes there >< sorry i keep mine with breaks
   
   Nice.

Julie wrote:

Don't expect to much from me since I'm a beginner >,<!! Gotta try my best :3

[Muzukashii]
00:07:264 - d I want to make consistency with after part :3
00:43:597 - maybe this? 00:44:430 is finish~ so I want give a break that part.

Suggestion~

[Oni]
00:11:930 (60) - k and 00:12:097 (61) - d Fixed~!

This is so perfect~!! *throw star* GOOD LUCK I love it <3, hope it get rank soon

KanaRin wrote:

Hello.
Sorry for late >~<..

Oni

1. 00:27:430 (155) - kat sounds better here, as 156 based on bass drum, k d will be better here. (if you try to follow the vocal, it's actually the same) okay~ fixed~!
2. 00:30:097 (168,169,170,171) - k ddk. ^ same reason as above fixed~
   so the pattern here should be:
   
3. 00:35:264 (195) - move to 00:35:430 - it sounds odd to use k d here as the vocal stopped at the first note. fixed!
4. 01:00:430 (100) - finish? (same as muzukashii) fixed. so dkkD.

Muzukashii is fine.
As for the easier diffs, it still have some improvements as I see, you can try get some more mods first.
I can Taiko this after that.

1. 00:33:097 (4,1,1,1,2) - d k d k d seems better? i changed something here by myself
2. 00:55:764 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Consider other pattern to make it more interesting? As you know, it's used 3 times on Kiai. owh here. yes i used a same pattern on there >< sorry..
3. Pretty nice. thanks~

mliencheng wrote:

Kantan

Good

Futsuu

00:31:930 remove note
00:46:930 k
00:57:597 k

Muzukashii

00:22:264 k I think d is more follow vocal.
00:44:097 k
01:02:264 k I want make consistency with 01:04:764 (98,99). so no change~

Oni

00:18:014 d
00:18:930 k 00:18:764 is high guitar sound. so no change.
00:19:097 d strong drum sound~ so use k~ :3
00:19:430 k
00:53:430 d I think k is more follow vocal.. ;w;
01:07:014 k

Jerry wrote:

Sorry for the huge delay in responding to your request ;w;

Here's my mod~

• [Kantan & Muzukashii]

1. Nothing can be found, good job Thank you!

• [Futsuu]

1. 01:07:097 (132) - since all the patterns before this were d d k, why not try changing this note to don to get a k k d pattern so it looks more arranged? (the don also makes this part sound more firm) :3 fixed~

• [Oni]

1. 00:30:347 (170) - the ddk here doesn't sound right in it's current position imo @@ Try moving this don to 00:30:514 to get a kdk? fixed~
2. 01:07:097 - how about a don for this note? It flows better with the music in my opinion fixed~

I apologize if it's too short, but that's all I could find ;w;
Hopefully it's helpful for you ><
Good luck!

ts8zs wrote:

[Oni]
01:00:764 (101) - d Fixed~
01:02:097 (106) - d
01:03:430 (112) - d Fixed~
01:05:930 - d
01:06:014 - d
01:06:430 - ddd
01:15:930 (177,178,179,180) - ddk k k Fixed~
wonderful！
[Muzu]
00:24:097 (103,104) - kd Fixed~
00:41:264 (179) - k Fixed~
00:46:930 (17) - k Fixed~
[Fut&Kat]
Nothing found:3

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

1. 01:13:597 (3) - change to d nope it's different from 01:10:930 -

• [m1ng's Inner Oni]
  
  Although there is no actual purpose, you may increase the circle size to 4 so that the whole set has the same CS, thereby making the set more consistent. still keep mine here (well yah a different CS doesn't matter for taikos) and CS 3 is mys style too same like on this map. mine is using 3 and the owner's of the beatmap is using 5

1. 00:12:264 (1,1) - swap these notes to d k ? The music pitch at 00:12:430 (1) - is much higher than that at 00:12:264 (1) - 00:12:430 - should be a don because of the first beat (you can see from the metronome). it will be a perfect timing to emphasize it with a don. same reason like on 00:07:097 - which i used don on
2. 00:12:930 (2,3,1,2,3) - ddkkd seems to follow the music in a better way, as a relatively high-pitched electronic sound occurs at 00:13:097 - keep mine here since ooo on 00:12:930 (2,3,1) - is match with the instrument sounds
3. 00:28:597 (2) - consider removing the finish here ? A bit overemphasized imo.
4. 00:31:264 (2) - same as ^ it's not overmapped btw. keep mine here
5. 00:49:097 (2,3) - consider deleting these notes ? I think a short break works better here as the vocal pauses. nope for the inner one and those notes which make a stream follow the instrument sounds well too so i keep mine here
   
   Good work michael~

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi Akemi and michael, here comes a taiko mod as requested.

• [Kantan]

1. 00:21:764 (34) - consider adding finish here ? As the sound is stressed, it needs more emphasis imo.
2. 00:36:430 (59) - same as ^
3. 00:57:430 (28,29) - swap these notes to k d ? This could follow the vocal pitch better.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:21:764 (56) - same as Kantan
2. 00:27:597 (71) - k could follow the vocal pitch in a way better.
3. 00:30:264 (77) - same as ^
4. 00:40:430 (104) - consider adding finish here ? It needs to be emphasized as well.
5. 00:41:597 (108) - k ? It has the same vocal pitch as the previous 00:41:264 (107) -
6. 00:47:430 (14,15) - swap these notes to k d so that both the music pitch and the snare could be followed ?
7. 00:58:097 (47,48) - same as ^
8. 01:02:264 (61) - k ? It has the same vocal pitch as 01:02:097 (60) -

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:07:597 (29) - move to 00:07:264 - and change to k, then change 00:07:430 (28) - to d ? This could follow the pitch of the electronic sounds more imo.
2. 00:12:430 (53,54,55,56) - same as ^
3. 00:22:264 (95,96,97) - k d k so that both the vocal and the drum beat could be followed in a better way.
4. 00:27:930 (122,123) - adding finish could emphasize the vocal nicely.
5. 00:30:264 (131,132,133) - same as ^
6. 00:36:430 (157) - same as Kantan
7. 00:52:430 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47) - either k k d d k k d or k d k d k k d could fit the vocal pitch well imo.
8. 00:54:097 (49,50,51,52) - d kkk sounds much better to me, as it could fit the high-pitched vocal.
9. 00:57:597 (67,68,69) - k d k ? Similar to 00:22:264 (95,96,97) -
10. 00:59:264 (74,75,76,77,78) - d k ddd could fit the drum beat well. Consider changing this if you change 00:54:097 (49,50,51,52) -
11. 01:00:430 (81) - d would be better as the vocal pitch drops.
12. 01:02:430 (89) - move to 01:02:597 - ? 1/2 kd dk looks nice to me.

• [Oni]

1. 00:19:680 - add k here ? I feel like something is missing.
2. 00:22:597 (126,127) - swapping these notes to d k seems to fit the instrument better.
3. 00:28:597 (162,163) - swap to d k ? This could follow both the vocal pitch and the drum beat.
4. 00:35:097 (194) - It seems that d could fit the drop in vocal pitch more.
5. 00:46:597 (19,21) - swap these notes to d k ? The vocal pitch at 00:46:930 (21) - is higher than that at 00:46:597 (19) -
6. 00:50:264 (42) - adding finish here would be great.
7. 00:51:597 (50) - same as ^
8. 00:54:847 (69) - consider changing it to k for more consistent pattern as 00:44:180 (6) - ?
9. 00:57:264 (82,84) - same as 00:46:597 (19,21) -
10. 00:58:097 (86) - change to k if you change ^
11. 01:02:430 (108) - same as Muzukashii
12. 01:04:430 (117) - k here could fit the vocal pitch well.
13. 01:05:180 (121,122) - kd would fit the music better imo.
14. 01:06:597 (128,129) - d k if you want to follow the vocal.
15. 01:08:264 (141) - d would be better as the vocal pitch drops.

That's all and good luck~

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue:

General:

Nothing, good now

Oni

00:21:430: change to d drum sound here. '-'
00:30:514: Remove this I think It's changed~
00:49:597(37, 38): change to k fixed.
00:59:430: Remove this, I don't hear any structure that's vocal's echo

Stefan wrote:

[Inner Oni]
00:08:097 (1,2,1,2) - I don't feel like these notes should be connected to 00:08:430 (1,1,1,1,1) - . the kdkdk fits well but feels weird to play with the connected kkdd pattern. 00:08:347 (2) - or 00:08:180 (2) - could be removed, ideally both can be removed but I'd tend to say you rather want to go with k ddkdkdk. fixed.
00:09:597 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - wouldn't you do d kkddk? d for consistency with 00:08:930 (1) - and kkddk for the holding sound in the background which is deeper at 00:09:930 - and higher at 00:10:097 - . This is also because 00:11:097 - 00:16:264 - are flipped in the follow so it'd make sense this way. fixed.
00:24:430 (1) - dkddd sounds weird to me.. that's more my view than something objective but I have the idea to change the pattern to dkkdd. It sounds imo by far more intuitive and enjoyable to play. fixed.
00:48:430 (1,2,1,2,1) - With 00:48:264 (1) - as Finisher I find you could remove 00:48:430 (1,2) - and 00:48:680 (2) - and change to 00:48:764 (1) - as Finisher note. this emphasize the song and the usage and connection to 00:48:264 (1) - much better. fixed.
01:15:930 (1,1,1,1,1) - dkdkd isn't really good at this point, at least I don't see why you would use it here. Try dkkkd (preferably) or dkkdd here. fixed.

[Oni]
00:30:264 (170,171,172) - Sounds more like kdd to follow vocals and background music properly. fixed.

[Muzukashii]
Generally, this difficulty doesn't provided many rest times which will be exhausting for players to keep track while playing. Oni uses dozen of 1/2 breaks and isn't too continously mapped - good thing for the Muzukashii so it can use 1/1 breaks.

suggesting removals for following parts:
00:08:097 (31) -
00:13:430 (57) -
00:21:264 (91,92) -
00:29:430 (128) -
00:37:264 (161,162,163,164) -
00:49:264 (27,28) -
00:59:680 (75,76,77) -
01:07:764 (111,112,113) -

These are raw examples, you can make your own and adjust the difficulty so you have breaks but still keeping the flow. your example is best point for break. I agree with your sample. so changed them all.

[Futsuu]
Although the BPM is on 180, I don't find we need to use 1.20x. Just stick with 1.40x (same for Kantan). okay.

00:26:097 (62) - What about a longer break here? After you've adjusted Muzukashii to have more and longer break times you should provide some even longer for Futsuu then. fixed.
00:31:264 (76) - I'd like to see this part as kk, 00:30:264 (73,74,75,76,77,78) - would work as a nice counterpart to 00:27:597 (66,67,68,69,70,71) - . fixed.
00:32:097 (79) - Would remove to shortend the combo lenght to be consistent with the counterpart 00:27:597 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72) - . fixed.
00:37:764 - 00:41:597 - We should have something easier here since it is a big difficulty spike, my idea was to do this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/Nv9H1sbL.png Although it boosts the SR a bit, you should ignore that since SR is pretty garbage and not a good indicator for this case. fixed.
00:49:430 (19) - similar to 00:26:097 (62) - I'd remove this so to have a longer break, do the same for 00:50:764 (23) - and 00:52:097 (27) - too. fixed.
00:59:930 (54) - although the break wouldn't bre really longer I'd say to remove this note as well. fixed.
01:06:097 (74,76,77) - To make this part slightly easier I'd focus on the bgm only and remove 01:06:097 (74) - and 01:06:597 (76,77) - . fixed.

[Kantan]
nearly 3AM.. but whatever, the difficulty itself looks good. I may look closer to it next time. Thank you for your kindness~ :3

Conclusion: Mapset itself is good, I actually like it. However, I wouldn't consider the map to be ready since Inner Oni has some structure problems, and Muzukashii/Futsuu should have some more checks after adding more rest/break times. I am not sure if you're willed to get more mods since this is the first mod after two months. I can get more mod for better quality of this map. and ming is afk for now. idk when he come back. so maybe I can adjust his diff.I don't want to ruin ming's style, but I agree your modding in his diff, so changed them.

xfraczynho wrote:

Hi! Mod requested from my queue t/579972/. I hope this can help you ^^

Nice song <3

[General]

• 
  nice job at the spread

1. Add to tags: cute jpop christmas carol xmas (stolen from Volta's mapset lol) Thank you~ add them. lol
2. 00:16:430 - What about adding a 70% volume here? Then 80% in 00:27:097 - 70% 00:32:430 - and 80% back :3 okay.
   Nothing more to point out

[Kantan]

1. 00:03:097 (4) - what about making this K cause pitch is higher than the first one?
2. 00:04:096 (5) - hmm this depends on you but K could work too I think consecutive K is strange, and I want to express little pitch change in this part.
3. 00:34:430 (50) - you could delete this to make a break on this section cause it's kind of slow and I think there are a lot of circles in a row
4. 00:48:097 (7) - what about moving to 00:48:264 (7) - ? I think the current one doesn't fit at all :c
5. 00:58:764 (24) - ^
6. 01:13:764 (47) - 01:16:430 (50) - you could make them K to don't make this so repetitive (and to mark the different pitches through the section change)

[Futsuu]

1. 00:03:097 (4) - same comment as kantan :p
2. 00:10:097 (20,21,22) - you could make this kdk or kkk (fills better imo) change to kdk~
3. 00:22:097 (53) - This one could be don since you're already using d k k on 00:23:097 (55,56,57) - and pitches are not the same (also to give some dinamicity)
4. 00:29:764 (69) - hmm K to set the difference with last D?
5. 00:55:097 - from here you could let some 2/1 break. I think it's kind of too dense (not bad mapped but dense for futsuu players) add some break. :3
6. 01:00:764 (53,61) - these notes are so high for that place (maybe removing or changing to don could help, try it ^^) remove them. :3
7. 01:13:764 (7) - same comment as kantan lol

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:03:097 (10,11,12,13) - probably make these kat (sorry for being repetitive through the diffs but I think it could be nice). Also I think you could net here cause they're not neccesary to be exactly the same on every diffs I want to make a same this part in muzu & Oni. so no change here~ owo
2. 00:29:764 (124) - K probb?
3. 00:37:097 (155) - unnecesary note imo
4. 00:44:430 - on kiai you could include some triples. I think it's a little strange to use triples out of kiai and only 2 on this :3 add some triplet in kiai. :3
5. 01:13:764 - similar comment (?) same reply. :3 no change for same pattern with Oni diff.

I want to point you're using many quintuples on Oni and just some little triples on Muzu D:

[Oni]
I'm not touching this diff cause objects: 420 blaze it
jk, it's fine

1. 00:19:097 (104) - you could make this don to emphatise next kats
2. 00:21:514 (121) - maybe removing this note?
3. 01:07:597 (135,136,137,138,139) - this pattern is a little strange, I think even kdkkd fills better

[m1ng's Inner Oni]

1. 00:10:264 (1,1,1) - try using d k D instead, fills better imo
2. 00:45:930 (3) - try changing to kat. I think kat fills better and makes something different than 00:56:597 (3) - (they doesn't have the same pitch I think)

Nothing more to point. I think mapset is really good (considering the spread and stuff). I'm sure this will be qualified soon. Best of luck homura!