1. Junior (4.34 stars, 377 notes)
2. Novice (2.43 stars, 217 notes)
3. Senior (4.95 stars, 732 notes)

AngelHoney wrote:

00:46:766 (1) - end at 00:49:266 ? and 00:49:543 - add a note?
01:53:837 (2) - remove ?

XD

nice map

star~

MoonFragrance wrote:

[Novice]
00:43:156 (1) - align with 00:42:323 (2)? [It's already aligned.]

[Junior]
00:26:492 (4) - align with 00:26:076 (3) [Done!]
00:57:181 (1,2) - align with 00:56:209 (2)? [Done!]
03:00:908 (1) - move this note upper beacuse it's too annoying to click afther spinner [Done!]

[Senior]
01:36:757 (3) - locate this middle of 01:36:479 (1,2) [Done! Wow, good eyes.]
02:17:444 (4,5) - not good-looking notes. they are seems to two sliders are stacked

Great job Star + Pink Star XD [Thanks for modding MF. Thanks for the star! I love you!]

DJPop wrote:

How about changing the slider ball into a bee? [A very good idea. I will try it.]

Offset: 664 [Err, let's see what BAT/MAT will say.]

~Novice~
00:50:099 (1,1,1) - confused, suggest to delete them [Oh, I don't think so.]
03:18:960 (1) - end on 03:20:765 [Yeah done.]

~Junior~
00:51:488 (2) - new combo? [Yay done.]

~Senior~
02:19:388 (5) - remove sliderwhistle [Yes yes.]
02:23:137 (7) - ^ [Of course.]
03:20:904 (5,6) - not fit imo, suggest to delete them [Hell yeah!]


+Star [Wooo thanks DJPop!]

VanMoNky wrote:

1. I want it to flip whenever touch the slider repeat. If it don't flip, it will be so odd, bee flying backward.

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- The offset starts off on the wrong note (look at the stanzas), I'll test your timing when my new earphones arrive.
[It's osuplayer111's timing. Let's wait for BAT's though about this.]
-- Your notes cover the lyrics to the SB sometimes.
[Yes. I tried to make the lyrics not so special in this map.]

Novice:

-- Preview point is different to the others, please change ^^
[Oh yeah done.]

02:04:252 (3,4) - Difficult notes for novice, slider would be easier. [Of course done.]
02:51:188 (1) - Remove new combo? [Yeah!]

Junior:

-- Why is the stacking leniency set to max?
[I'll decrease it to 3.]

00:46:211 (x) - Note? [Yup.]
00:46:766 (x) - Note? [It's fit but I want to make it just the same as the other diff.]
00:47:044 (x) - Start spinner here? (You may ignore these XD) [You are smart. His long vocal is start here. But, the same reason, wanna make it just the same as the other diff.]
02:32:302 (5) - Hard to catch at times because the rest follows the vocal. [Fixed!]

Senior:

00:46:488 (9) - Place under the slider? Or add a return? [Add a repeat.]
02:03:280 (4) - Move up one square? [Yippe~]
02:11:473 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - Slightly confusing, you expect a beat between 4 and 5. [Hmm. Indeed. Done now.]
02:23:137 (7) - Too close, move it left. [Yup. It's good now.]
02:23:415 (8) - This will need moving if you do ^ [Doned.]

I suck at small spacing, but otherwise good
[Oh. Should I increase the spacing? But, well. The only reason why I set the spacing to small is because the notes. The notes like in the middle stream and not stream. Too slow playing with one finger, too fast playing with two fingers. But if you slow down your fingers clicking both the right and left mouse, you can catch all the notes. Let's see what the other's though.]

VanMoNky wrote:

1. I want it to flip whenever touch the slider repeat. If it don't flip, it will be so odd, bee flying backward.

Lol I kinda want to see a backwards flying bee, but go ask in the skinning section?
[Yes I will ask.]

Anyway, great maps once [Thanks for modding Shulin! I like you!]

~ Star + Kudos Star. [Thanks for the kudos star Shulin! I love you!]

Dangaard wrote:

EDIT:
I'm not getting the latest update after downloading, please fullsubmit again.

AngelHoney wrote:

Hi MoNky :3

Some suggestions

Junior
00:17:605 (3) - move 1 grid right ? [Oh, you're right!]
02:23:693 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3531 [Okey donkey!]
02:31:747 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3532 [Oh! You're smart! I will use this trick for my next map!]
03:16:183 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3533 [I think I know what you meant.]


Novice
02:31:747 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3535 [Oh! You're smart! I will use this trick for my next map!]
02:32:858 (1) - ^

XD i really like this song/map [Oh thanks! Next time, add some details beside the SS okay? :p]

Kodosu Star :3 [Yeah! Thanks for the kudos star and thanks for modding! I love you!]

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Having text 1000 pixels wide might be a bit much. Scale it down to 500 instead? Then you won't need to scale your text in the .osb, while also saving some space. [Hmm. Yeah. I agree. But, I have my own reason. I don't want the text become crappy when someone playing with hgih screen resolution.]
I don't really think forcing the default skin is necessary here. [I want all peppy's lifebar element and his spinner. They fit to my skin.]

00:07:329 - Tiny break, might as well remove it. [No, please. I love break. It's not just about take a break for every break you get, but it's about divide one part into some parts.]

[Novice]

00:43:989 (3) - The repeat is concealed behind the hitbursts for a bit too long for this difficulty, consider re-arranging it somehow? [Oh, yeah. You're right!]
00:50:099 (1,1,1) - These notes were pretty hard to follow because of their silence. [The truth is I didn't silence them. I think it's okay to leave them alone.]
02:52:298 (1,1,1,1) - ^, although the slider was okay. [Here too. I use other hitsound so the notes were like silenced. But the sound still could be heard.]

Neat.

[Junior]

Throughout the map, I thought the use of stacks with inconsistent timing was pretty hard to read. That and the sliders with weird numbers of repeats. [For example? I don't really understand what you mean.]

00:52:598 (2,3,1,2) - This section is pretty unreadable, imo. Consider changing it up a bit. [Really? Okay, fixed.]
02:45:355 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section is just so crowded, it's pretty hard to read. [Well done. How about their placement now?]

[Senior]

It's nice, the only concern I have is over the max score of 15m. Seems to high for a map like this. Then again, score inflation is happening all over the place, so I won't touch the proto-bubble. Try lowering it though. Do you know? My first map ranked with 15m score in Insane diff. I think high score is okay.]

Star~ [Yeah! Thanks for modding and for the star Kytoxid! <3]

Lizbeth wrote:

Sry for the delay, i've been really busy >_< Don't worry. It's absolutely not a problem!]

Like Kytoxid said, 15 mil max score, i find it too much @.@ [Oh no. So many people complained it. It's hard to almost remap the all parts of an insane diff.]

Senior
All good.. nice hitsounds ^^ [Wow, thanks! XD]

Junior
all good [You're good too.]

Novice
fine, it would be better if you don't follow the vocals, just the music imo, i find it hard to read for the easiest diff. but i guess is fine, is your choice [But if I just follow the music, then it's not my style. D:]

nice work =D [Thanks for modding and for the star! I love you full!]

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Novice]
00:36:212 (1,2) - Mirror this vertically with 00:31:769 (1,2). [Done.]
00:38:434 (1,2) - Mirror this vertically with 00:33:991 (1,2). [Yes.]
01:42:867 (1,2) - Same suggestion as above. [Ok.]
01:45:089 (1,2) - ^ [Nice.]
02:46:188 (3) - Too far from 4. [Hmm.. There's no (4) there. Did you mean (1)? But nothing wrong with the distance.]

[Senior]
00:13:439 (4) - New combo. [Yeah.]
00:30:658 (6) - ^ [Wow.]

[Thanks for modding mafimaster!]

Shulin wrote:

Did anyone check the bpm? I still think the .02 throws it off...

Arusha Shuna wrote:

UPDATED FINALLY
I'm new at modding so you may ignore this

Novice
01:07:31 (1) - clap at the end of slider? [Hmm.. It doesn't fit IMO ;__;]
03:16:18 (1) - ^ [This one too ;__;]
Junior
01:08:01 (3) - remove finish? [Oops. I think this section has some mistakes. Fixed]
01:08:56 (5) - ^ [Fixed with my opinion.]
02:12:44 (3) - ^ at the end of slider [Fixed with my opinion.]
02:13:00 (4) - ^ [Fixed with my opinion.]
02:17:58 (5) - end the slider at the next white tick [Oh. It fits but I think no.]
02:23:41 (3) - remove finsh, add whistle [Hey. There's a finish in the song. Besides, finish fits to the beat.]
02:54:52 (5) - end the slider at the previous YELLOW tick (1/8 beat) [No 1/8 ;__;]
02:55:07 (x) - add a note [No because I don't follow the above]
02:55:35 (6) - end the slider at the previous YELLOW tick [No 1/8 ;__;]
02:55:77 (x) - add a note [No because I don't follow the above]
02:59:24 (2,3,4) - don't stack? [Hmm. At first I didn't stack them. But someone complained about it. So I stacked them up.]
Senior <- senior diff mods below may not suitable for your tastes though D:
00:53:15 (6) - move to next blue tick [;__;]
00:53:57 (7) - ^ [;__;]
00:53:84 (8) - ^ [;__;]
00:53:98 (10) - delete this and move (9) here [;__;]
01:02:04 (6) - move to next blue tick [;__;]
01:02:31 (7) - ^ [;__;]
01:02:45 (8) - ^ [;__;]
01:02:87 (10) - delete this and move (9) here [;__;]
01:45:08 (1) - move 1 tiny grid left [Yes. This one is yes!]
01:46:20 (1) - move 1 tiny grid right [Yes. This one is yes!]
02:26:47 (7) - move 1 tiny grid up [Yes. This one is yes!]
02:28:69 (7) - ^ [Yes. This one is yes!]
03:05:49 (3) - make the slider shape like 03:06:18 (5)? [Oh? Ok.]

AWESOME MAP!!! [Thanks for modding Ashuna! I love you!]

Mafiamaster wrote:

Yes. 108.00 does sound better. (As long as you get the right offset) Maybe -20ms? I don't know.

James wrote:

hitcircles are too distracting imo, because its smaller than the default one. i tend to press circles really late because of this.
its all good though.
[It's intentional. I want to make the hitcircleoverlay to be kind of clickable. Or should I fix the hitcircle?]

hitsounds... first part of the song i was like "woah cool" and at the chorus... "wtf is this.. sad.."
if youre going to use customs use customs throughout the song, first part sounds good already... dang..
and finish sounds... too loud...
[I want to make the reff become more special than the other part. How could it make you sad? ;__;]

layout... everything is good, nothing that i can find bad about it..
just minor issues that can be ignored/most players wont notice..
[What is that, James?]

glow sb looks bad..distraction points +4..
[Please tell me what should I do to make the last reff to be the most special part.]

not popping the bubble since i did not really pointed out any bad mistakes that needs to be changed.
[I think I need to change something to make you happy. Please tell me.]

good job with the map.
[Thanks for modding. Please come back to help me!]

otakumak wrote:

good song !
star

VanMoNky wrote:

This is the most scariest mod ever. For me. Good job James.

James wrote:

hitcircles are too distracting imo, because its smaller than the default one. i tend to press circles really late because of this.
its all good though.
[It's intentional. I want to make the hitcircleoverlay to be kind of clickable. Or should I fix the hitcircle?]
Size is actually fine, the flower petals just makes the "illusion" that the circle is smaller than usual

hitsounds... first part of the song i was like "woah cool" and at the chorus... "wtf is this.. sad.."
if youre going to use customs use customs throughout the song, first part sounds good already... dang..
and finish sounds... too loud...
[I want to make the reff become more special than the other part. How could it make you sad? ;__;]
use the same sounds you used in the first part/after chorus, imo normal-<inserthitsoundhere> doesnt fit with the song

layout... everything is good, nothing that i can find bad about it..
just minor issues that can be ignored/most players wont notice..
[What is that, James?]
dont mind it, really

glow sb looks bad..distraction points +4..
[Please tell me what should I do to make the last reff to be the most special part.]
i dont do storyboards, and im not creative, so i cannot help you on this.

not popping the bubble since i did not really pointed out any bad mistakes that needs to be changed.
[I think I need to change something to make you happy. Please tell me.]
and im not creative, so i cannot help you on this. i need to listen for about 30-100++ times on a song before i start mapping one.

James wrote:

This is the most scariest mod ever. For me. Good job James.

James wrote:

hitcircles are too distracting imo, because its smaller than the default one. i tend to press circles really late because of this.
its all good though.
Size is actually fine, the flower petals just makes the "illusion" that the circle is smaller than usual
I'm sure I make the hitcircle smaller a bit.

hitsounds... first part of the song i was like "woah cool" and at the chorus... "wtf is this.. sad.."
if youre going to use customs use customs throughout the song, first part sounds good already... dang..
and finish sounds... too loud...
use the same sounds you used in the first part/after chorus, imo normal-<inserthitsoundhere> doesnt fit with the song
I tried listening to the map in edit mode some times. But I can't find out what's wrong with the sound.

layout... everything is good, nothing that i can find bad about it..
just minor issues that can be ignored/most players wont notice..
dont mind it, really
Oh.. ;__;

glow sb looks bad..distraction points +4..
i dont do storyboards, and im not creative, so i cannot help you on this.
Oh, np.

not popping the bubble since i did not really pointed out any bad mistakes that needs to be changed.
and im not creative, so i cannot help you on this. i need to listen for about 30-100++ times on a song before i start mapping one.
That's because you are a pro.

not popping the bubble since i did not really pointed out any bad mistakes that needs to be changed.

James wrote:

not popping the bubble since i did not really pointed out any bad mistakes that needs to be changed.

you dont even need to post that rofl

James wrote:

:)

good job on the map again..