Yeah~~~ I've been waiting for this map's rank so long~~
REALLY LIKE YOUR STYLE!!
Well, here are some advice for ar10
First think about change the color for combo2? Maybe some other in BG is better
Some sliders are overlaped.Better fix them
00:05:266 (2) - make it a little lower to y260, with 00:04:816 (1) - together in a line is fine
00:21:016 (4) - maybe move it down is better? that should be nice in mine
00:27:241 (4,5) - these two think about change them into a line after 00:27:016 (3) - is better than to hide behind 00:27:016 (3) -
00:35:716 (6) - an opposite arc is more smooth
00:48:616 (3,4) - consider add a note between these two?
00:53:641 (5,6) - move it down a little
01:03:016 (4,5) - these two seemed not so beautiful but they don't influence play. consider change a shape?
01:40:216 (5,6,7,8,9) - is not a perfect arc.replace01:40:441 (8,9) - to make them smooth
02:10:816 (1) - lower down to y126 looks better
02:58:516 (7) - move to x256 y188
03:43:441 (2) - a little abrupt. really difficult
That's all~ Well IT'S JUST MY OPINION.
HOPE YOUR MAP RANKED ~~~~XD