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firetruck (◕‿◕✿)
[Tonari no those]
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- The unicode for Hanazawa Kana's name in kanji has a space between the surname(花澤) and given name (香菜). The space should be removed and should just be "花澤香菜".
- 00:17:847 (2) - I feel a that a soft-hitwhistle or a low volume soft-hitfinish on the slider end sounds nice coming out of it here. Preferably the soft-hitfinish since you already have two soft-hit whistles going on the head and slider kick.
- 00:20:904 (2) - Could probably reuse the slider from 00:15:745 (2) without the repeat and Ctrl+G to match the vocals nicely with where the red slider anchor is positioned to fit the vocals better, but it would kind of ruin the blanket and triangle you had. Up to you.
- 00:26:255 (1) - I feel that adding a third red slider anchor before the slider ends would allow the player to feel that heavy bass drum during that time.
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- 00:01:796 (1) - Personally I prefer bending the slider the other way. I feel that it's flows better coming into the slider from 00:01:414 (4).
- 00:23:580 (2,3,4) - Where the sliders are here feel a little awkward since vocals happen at 00:23:770, and I really feel the need to actually hit that vocal while playing. What about something like this?
- 00:24:535 (1,3) - This stack looks a tiny bit off despite the coordinates being the same.
- 00:12:115 (4) - Stack is a bit off here as well
- 00:19:949 (1) - I think it would be pretty cool if you used a slider to go back into 00:19:758 (6) instead of having it stack on 00:19:376 (4). It seems to match the vocal pitch here and would flow well imo.
You can also move the 3 out a little bit to form a pentagon -> http://puu.sh/8MGxE.jpg - 00:33:325 (1) - NC here to help better identify the stream. It was a little difficult due to the stacking so the player is probably not going to expect it.
- 00:05:904 (3,4) - If you Ctrl+G these two I feel it flows a bit better.
- 00:13:452 (4,5) - Doesn't flow too well for me. Try this maybe?
- 00:16:318 (5,7) - You could probably be a little bit more lenient with the spacing here. Spreading out these two a bit plays slight better.
firetruck (◕‿◕✿)
[Tonari no those]
- 00:09:439 (5) - Whistle with soft additions on the head to match the start of vocals.
- 00:10:967 (1) - Same as above.
- 00:18:229 (3) - Add whistle here to match a similar sound heard in the music
- 00:19:375 (3) - Move down a little bit to form a triangle with the slider heads?
- 00:26:828 (2,3,1) - Why not maintain the same spacing as 00:26:446 (2,3,1)?
- 00:21:477 (1) - Lower this a little bit to avoid the tiny overlap with 00:21:095 (1)
- 00:40:012 (5) - Adding a finish here with soft additions fit quite well entering the spinner
- 00:10:967 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think it would look pretty cool if you do move this triangle pattern to revolve around 00:10:585 (3,4,5).
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