Chirony wrote:

Hi~
from my modding form!

[Dear you]

1. 00:40:146 (2) - x:252 y:340 に移動
2. 00:51:853 (2) - 00:51:121 (1) のブランケットが綺麗になってないです 特にブランケットをした配置ではないのでこのままで
3. 00:53:317 (1) - yのみ 259 に移動
4. 02:37:082 (1) - HPバーとかぶっちゃってます 始点ははっきり見えているのでBATに言われたら変えようと思います
5. 03:56:655 (4) - ^
6. 03:38:180 (5) - Gtrl+G もいいかも 03:37:997 (4) - からの入りが気になるのでこのままで
7. 04:29:033 (3) - ^ これも前からの入りが気になるので
8. 05:04:338 (2,3) - ここはボーカルに合わせてこの音取りはどうでしょう 個人的に今のままの方がしっくりくるのでこのままで
   
   

オフセットについてですがいまげさんの言うように+にずれてますね。オフセットはあまり得意ではないので詳しく言えなくてごめんなさい(´・ω・｀)
参考になれば幸いです
頑張ってください！ Good luck

modありがとうございました！

halolo~n

[General]

1. 検索用にtagsにmeramipopがあっても良いかも
2. AI-modにやたら　"2 timing points exist!"とありますが大丈夫？
3. APPってfile size >10MB はOKでしたっけ？

[Dear you]

1. 00:19:841 (4) - deleteでもよさそうです
2. 00:21:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - とてもrhythmが読みにくかったです。いっそ00:21:853 (1,2) - をstackしてはどうでしょう？
3. 00:23:865 (4,5) - stackさせない方が良いと思います
4. 00:38:499 (4,5,6,7,8) - やりにくい流れに感じました。５と７の位置を変えるのはどうですか？
5. 01:33:926 (2,3) - ちょっとやりにくい流れかも
6. 02:17:463 (1,2) - この1/2 stackはすごく読みにくかったです（原曲知ってるからかな？） suggetion~
   
7. 03:31:411 (1,2,3) - ここ好き<3

なんの参考にもならないですがtestplay~
遊ばせてもらいました
http://puu.sh/8Ngus.png　(take3)

merami~☆
~Good Luck~

RandomEffect wrote:

halolo~n

[General]

1. 検索用にtagsにmeramipopがあっても良いかも added
2. AI-modにやたら　"2 timing points exist!"とありますが大丈夫？ 最近緑線と赤線一緒に引いてあっても出るようになったみたいです。02:14:902 - だけミスだったので直しました。
3. APPってfile size >10MB はOKでしたっけ？ Appに限らずvideo,SB無しでは10MB超えちゃいけないってガイドラインに書いてあるんですけど、ヒットサウンド使いすぎてこうなりました ガイドラインなので見逃してくれることを祈ります。

[Dear you]

1. 00:19:841 (4) - deleteでもよさそうです 間を開けたくないのでno change
2. 00:21:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - とてもrhythmが読みにくかったです。いっそ00:21:853 (1,2) - をstackしてはどうでしょう？ keepで　もう少しテストプレイやmodもらってから変更するか考えてみます。
3. 00:23:865 (4,5) - stackさせない方が良いと思います fixed
4. 00:38:499 (4,5,6,7,8) - やりにくい流れに感じました。５と７の位置を変えるのはどうですか？ fixed
5. 01:33:926 (2,3) - ちょっとやりにくい流れかも これも上と同様に一旦keep
6. 02:17:463 (1,2) - この1/2 stackはすごく読みにくかったです（原曲知ってるからかな？） suggetion~ ここの一旦keepで ボーカル似あわせてスライダーのばしてみました。
   
7. 03:31:411 (1,2,3) - ここ好き<3

なんの参考にもならないですがtestplay~
遊ばせてもらいました
http://puu.sh/8Ngus.png　(take3)

merami~☆
~Good Luck~

mod & star ありがとうございました！

nice hitsounds
much better than i did i should say \:D/
good luck!

Hi ^^

Dear keeeeeeko

Good Luck

Tari wrote:

Hi ^^

Dear keeeeeeko

• 00:17:819 (2,3) - Little weird, to do stacked slider here, there is an instrument here, no passive beats, how about you convert to a slider instead? http://puu.sh/8PbGK.jpg fixed

1. 00:22:209 (2) - Maybe its a little misplaced its disjointed from the straight line formation that is roaming here? how about you allign it? http://puu.sh/8PbLW.jpg It's fine imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1613802
2. 00:32:453 (3) - Try to make this slider blanket the overlap of this note here? 00:31:721 (5) - Looks little messy, how about try this : http://puu.sh/8PbR5.jpg fixed
3. 00:37:209 (3,4) - It's not symmetrical if you Ctrl+G note 4 the y is :231 while the previous note has y:232 fixed
4. 01:00:807 (2,3) - Slider for this part fits the vocal, maybe replace them with a slider instead? fixed
5. 01:04:099 (3) - Little small minor error, but you really like to stack in this map, how about you do some stacking here and try to stack wtih slider end of 01:02:819 (1) - ? please fixed
6. 01:39:404 (1) - ^ but this time place it at the same place as 01:37:941 (1) - now.I want keep distance 01:39:404 (1,2) -
7. 01:56:050 - Add a note here? there should be less 1/2 here because the music is more intense in this section, feels little empty when you keep doing 1/2 for this section too. fixed
8. 02:12:697 (1,2,3) - Add Whistles here? and 02:14:160 (1,2,3) - and the rest of this piano section, the whistle sound really good for this soft part with just sweet vocals. I have put a piano sound already. And I want keep only piano sound.
9. 02:36:706 (6) - I think it's too much stacking here, try to place it somewhere else so there are not many notes in 1 area? try this : http://puu.sh/8Pe3M.jpg would be better. fixed
10. 02:49:694 (2,3,4) - The movement of direction is a little strange here, how about try this : http://puu.sh/8Pe9A.jpg the direction is more natural to me :3 fixed
11. 03:47:865 (2) - Move the slider somewhere else, probably try this : http://puu.sh/8PegI.jpg fixed & a bit change pattern.
12. 04:15:670 (3) - Don't let the note touch HP Bar please, it will get blocked by it and won't be very easy to see my players, try move this down and move the general pattern down too please. fixed
13. 05:22:363 (1) - Extend spinner end to white tick, vocals don't end till there.fixed

Good Luck

thanks for modding!

EvilElvis wrote:

nice hitsounds
much better than i did i should say \:D/
good luck!

thanks!

hi hi ~
mod as your request via forum-pm

[Dear you]
i think the diff's name should be "Dear You". making a "y" capitalize isn't that hard right?
00:21:843 (1,2,3) - these notes have a same distance while on timeline were placed not on the same delay time. i mean http://puu.sh/8RYqR.jpg. it may confuse for some player. i guess it's better to place 00:21:843 (1) and stack with the slider's tail at 00:20:746 (3). or maybe make it like 02:34:145 (1,2) instead?
00:26:599 (2) - how about making a copy the slider at 00:26:233 (1) then ctrl+h it and stack at 00:25:868 (7)
00:38:307 (3) - such a nazi stuff. move this circle to the right by 1 grid just for the consistency.
00:53:672 (2) - ctrl+g this? imo this slider should be leads upward in result a bigger distance since you are stacking the next two object. also it flows better and makes easier to read
01:12:331 (2,3,1) - i can hear the vocal at 01:12:697 is connected until 01:13:063 so i guess it's better to use 1/1 slider here. try this rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/8RZmA.jpg
01:30:624 (1) - ctrl+g this?
01:33:550 (1) - why not just stack this slider with slider's head at 01:32:087 (1)?
02:23:307 (1) - this slider's shape can be interesting more than just a long curvy one. and also i think this slider should ends at 02:24:587 as the vocal starts fading here
02:37:072 (1) - this slider body overlapped with HP bar. i think you should know what to do right?
02:45:670 (8) - place this notes close each other please. it makes the combo pattern looks beautiful. here's what it looks like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1621675
03:05:609 (3,4) - maybe swap their position? just like your style
03:46:767 (6) - imo this note better to stack it with 03:46:035 (2)
03:56:462 (3,5) - interesting that you not gonna blanket these?
04:07:804 (1,1) - unstack these notes and make it somehow like 02:34:145 (1,2)
04:30:852 (2,1) - stack these notes?

not gonna mention much more since im not good at modding insane.
nice song and have my star ~
good luck

Vhy wrote:

hi hi ~
mod as your request via forum-pm

[Dear you]
i think the diff's name should be "Dear You". making a "y" capitalize isn't that hard right? This song is made based on "Thanks, you". And I referred to these song titles. http://puu.sh/8S6Tt.png
00:21:843 (1,2,3) - these notes have a same distance while on timeline were placed not on the same delay time. i mean http://puu.sh/8RYqR.jpg. it may confuse for some player. i guess it's better to place 00:21:843 (1) and stack with the slider's tail at 00:20:746 (3). or maybe make it like 02:34:145 (1,2) instead? fixed
00:26:599 (2) - how about making a copy the slider at 00:26:233 (1) then ctrl+h it and stack at 00:25:868 (7) no change. I already copy 00:26:233 (1) - ctrl+j,>
00:38:307 (3) - such a nazi stuff. move this circle to the right by 1 grid just for the consistency. fixed
00:53:672 (2) - ctrl+g this? imo this slider should be leads upward in result a bigger distance since you are stacking the next two object. also it flows better and makes easier to read currently is fine imo.
01:12:331 (2,3,1) - i can hear the vocal at 01:12:697 is connected until 01:13:063 so i guess it's better to use 1/1 slider here. try this rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/8RZmA.jpg
01:30:624 (1) - ctrl+g this? no chnage.
01:33:550 (1) - why not just stack this slider with slider's head at 01:32:087 (1)? I think not necessary to stack.
02:23:307 (1) - this slider's shape can be interesting more than just a long curvy one. and also i think this slider should ends at 02:24:587 as the vocal starts fading here Slider shape will change. and end fixed.
02:37:072 (1) - this slider body overlapped with HP bar. i think you should know what to do right? fixed
02:45:670 (8) - place this notes close each other please. it makes the combo pattern looks beautiful. here's what it looks like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1621675 fixed
03:05:609 (3,4) - maybe swap their position? just like your style yes fixed
03:46:767 (6) - imo this note better to stack it with 03:46:035 (2) fixed
03:56:462 (3,5) - interesting that you not gonna blanket these? fixed
04:07:804 (1,1) - unstack these notes and make it somehow like 02:34:145 (1,2) fixed
04:30:852 (2,1) - stack these notes? It's intentionally.

not gonna mention much more since im not good at modding insane.
nice song and have my star ~
good luck

thanks for modding & star!

Cherry Blossom wrote:

From my modding queue.
Meramipop ♥ and Dear You o.o

Dear You

1. I liked how you hitsounded this map, glad to see someone else using a hitsound per note o/ but... song folder looks heavy try to make it lighter. I see this problem. but I want keep this hitsounds. if piano hitsounds is long, I will cut length.
2. 00:19:465 (3,4) - wrong rhythm imo because the clap should be clicked here, try to swap these objects like this fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:52:209 (3) - i dont really agree with you here, you can make this 00:52:392 - played and you don't. try to make something like this as you did here : 00:54:953 (2,1) fixed
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:12:331 (2,3) - this breaks a bit the flow, make this instead ? fixed
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:25:502 (2,3) - try to avoid the overlap here, looks a bit odd. fixed
6. 02:17:453 (1,2) - looks a bit surprising because of the distance you used here, before and after, try to reduce a bit the distance. fixed
7. 03:02:682 (1) - to emphasize the guitar, i suggest you to make a kind of wub slider like this fixed
   SPOILER

   
8. 03:20:609 (7,8,1) - i dont recommend this kind of movement, it's kinda breaking it a bit fixed
9. 03:26:096 (5,6) - I prefer to make this instead but it's up to you
   SPOILER

   
10. 04:05:791 (4,5) - i prefer th star pattern, why don't to swap these objects (ctrl+g) ? fixed
11. 04:07:804 (1,1) - i'd see these both notes stacked, it looks better and neater, but it's up to you. fixed
12. 05:17:499 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - it's not really a good idea, this part is realllllly calm, and i have feelings that this looks a bit overkill, make it more calm... fixed

Nice map but needs more mods.
Good Luck ~

thanks for modding!

General

1. Source is supposed to be ひぐらしのなく頃に解. Artist himself is reffering the album to ひぐらしのなく頃に解, because it is based on album Thanks/You.
2. Regarding the previous issue, after this we also should fix tags. Firstly the game name, it is supposed to be Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai, as I exlpained above. Secondly the album name. It is not "You Thanks". It is supposed to be exactly that: "Thanks/You". You cannot alter album name as you just wish.
3. Difficulty name is unrankable. Maps for approval must have their difficulty name "Marathon" if they contain only one difficulty. Additionally, dear you is not the right name of the song, why do people keep altering it. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset
4. Add "you" to tags after you deleted wrong album name, since it is name of original song. No, original is not "dear you", that is just another version of the song, not the one this is based on.
5. Tags definitely deserve to contain 07th Expansion, since the game was released only thanks to them.
6. Try to find 1024x768 or 1366x768 background as it is recommended and should be compatible with all resolutions.
7. Just mentioning this because a lot of people don't use it. Ask BAT to change title color so it fits better with your background. Just saying it would be nice, but nothing important anyway. But why not, they don't mind changing it, so you might try. But that's just design detail.

Dear you

1. The map is way too easy to SS on first try I think. OD+1 might be fine. This song is supposed to be hard, so I think this change will make it a bit more challenging.
2. 00:11:513 (1,2,3) - You had an awesome idea before on 00:09:899 (1,2,3). The BPM went down so you increased spacing so it plays more naturally. Anyway I think you might apply it also to these 3 notes. So it might look like this. http://puu.sh/8XEzi.jpg
3. 00:45:258 (1,1) - Mute the wav file of the tick on this place. This sounds really off and insensible. Muting wav file completely would be unrankable, because you cannot have muted both tick and slide, so at least do this so it doesn't make sound on place where is no sound. But I think it is much easier to use lower tick rate. I might get that hitsound if you ask me in-game or by PM. But maybe even here, I might check it.
4. 01:20:380 (1,1,1,2) - Use regular spacing between these (1,0x), it feels really boring for such a map. Waiting till slider appears just right under it for years might have disappointing expression.
5. 01:24:770 (1) - Giving a shape to this slider might be a cool gradient between piano part and the lively part. http://puu.sh/8XFvc.jpg
6. 01:24:770 (1) - Hitsounds of this whole map are just... so cool. So I wanted to remind one thing. 01:24:770 (1) - 01:24:770 (1) contains sound similar to sliderslide. What about adding that noisy sliderslide to this part? It's not bad hitsound, definitely not, but is less used, because it just makes noise where we don't want it, but this part is just made for that. Maybe consider this just for this part.
7. 01:53:307 (2,1) - Avoid the overlap by moving it a bit left. You didn't use overlaps before, and this is not even intelligent, so I think it should be just avoided.
8. 02:16:172 - Oh.. yeah, that's it. In previous piano part, you used another slidertick sound. This one is hard to hear, so use this even in previous one, which I mentioned before.
9. 00:11:996 (2) - You made red line for this note, but placed it out. It is supposed to be on 00:11:998, where the timing point is.
10. 00:15:990 - 2 timing points on same place are unrakable. I know you wanted just to activate kiai for a blink, but it is enough to remove green point on 00:15:990 and add kiai on the red point. It is unrankable to use two timing points on one place. Only rankable situation is when you place green and red line to change slider velocity, but you just used it for kiai. Just remove green, put kiai on red. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Timing
11. 02:28:292 - Same applies to this. Remove the green line, set 85% volume to red one and put kiai on that.

Seems like a promising map. I mentioned just the important things. I won't throw detailism on you, it is rankable even without polishing every single thing, honestly it wouldn't need much of it. Good luck, I'll give a star after I have kd.

Wafu wrote:

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

General

1. Source is supposed to be ひぐらしのなく頃に解. Artist himself is reffering the album to ひぐらしのなく頃に解, because it is based on album Thanks/You. fixed
2. Regarding the previous issue, after this we also should fix tags. Firstly the game name, it is supposed to be Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai, as I exlpained above. Secondly the album name. It is not "You Thanks". It is supposed to be exactly that: "Thanks/You". You cannot alter album name as you just wish. fixed
3. Difficulty name is unrankable. Maps for approval must have their difficulty name "Marathon" if they contain only one difficulty. Additionally, dear you is not the right name of the song, why do people keep altering it. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset Not unrankable. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/187555&start=0
4. Add "you" to tags after you deleted wrong album name, since it is name of original song. No, original is not "dear you", that is just another version of the song, not the one this is based on. fixed
5. Tags definitely deserve to contain 07th Expansion, since the game was released only thanks to them. fixed
6. Try to find 1024x768 or 1366x768 background as it is recommended and should be compatible with all resolutions. I already looked for BG. but I couldn't find.
7. Just mentioning this because a lot of people don't use it. Ask BAT to change title color so it fits better with your background. Just saying it would be nice, but nothing important anyway. But why not, they don't mind changing it, so you might try. But that's just design detail. I didn't know it until now. ok I'll ask BAT after get Ranked

Dear you

1. The map is way too easy to SS on first try I think. OD+1 might be fine. This song is supposed to be hard, so I think this change will make it a bit more challenging.
2. 00:11:513 (1,2,3) - You had an awesome idea before on 00:09:899 (1,2,3). The BPM went down so you increased spacing so it plays more naturally. Anyway I think you might apply it also to these 3 notes. So it might look like this. http://puu.sh/8XEzi.jpg fixed
3. 00:45:258 (1,1) - Mute the wav file of the tick on this place. This sounds really off and insensible. Muting wav file completely would be unrankable, because you cannot have muted both tick and slide, so at least do this so it doesn't make sound on place where is no sound. But I think it is much easier to use lower tick rate. I might get that hitsound if you ask me in-game or by PM. But maybe even here, I might check it. I know. cuz I put green lins to vol.5%.
4. 01:20:380 (1,1,1,2) - Use regular spacing between these (1,0x), it feels really boring for such a map. Waiting till slider appears just right under it for years might have disappointing expression. I want stack these. 01:14:526 (1,1,1,1) -
5. 01:24:770 (1) - Giving a shape to this slider might be a cool gradient between piano part and the lively part. http://puu.sh/8XFvc.jpg fixed
6. 01:24:770 (1) - Hitsounds of this whole map are just... so cool. So I wanted to remind one thing. 01:24:770 (1) - 01:24:770 (1) contains sound similar to sliderslide. What about adding that noisy sliderslide to this part? It's not bad hitsound, definitely not, but is less used, because it just makes noise where we don't want it, but this part is just made for that. Maybe consider this just for this part.
7. 01:53:307 (2,1) - Avoid the overlap by moving it a bit left. You didn't use overlaps before, and this is not even intelligent, so I think it should be just avoided. fixed
8. 02:16:172 - Oh.. yeah, that's it. In previous piano part, you used another slidertick sound. This one is hard to hear, so use this even in previous one, which I mentioned before. I don't use tick sound here. Maybe I have misunderstood.
9. 00:11:996 (2) - You made red line for this note, but placed it out. It is supposed to be on 00:11:998, where the timing point is. fixed
10. 00:15:990 - 2 timing points on same place are unrakable. I know you wanted just to activate kiai for a blink, but it is enough to remove green point on 00:15:990 and add kiai on the red point. It is unrankable to use two timing points on one place. Only rankable situation is when you place green and red line to change slider velocity, but you just used it for kiai. Just remove green, put kiai on red. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Timing Not unrankable. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1634732　(sorry in Japanese.)
11. 02:28:292 - Same applies to this. Remove the green line, set 85% volume to red one and put kiai on that. Same above.

Seems like a promising map. I mentioned just the important things. I won't throw detailism on you, it is rankable even without polishing every single thing, honestly it wouldn't need much of it. Good luck, I'll give a star after I have kd.

thanks for modding!

About diff name, you post different rule. Ranked Criteria says maps for approval with one difficulty must be named Marathon.
About the timing points. It is unrankable. It is only rankable only if the inherited point is used just for SV change.

An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

Whatever he said, if he said this ^ isn't right, he said it wrong. And yeah, it glitches in maps, if volume is different, it doesn't know which one to choose and more...
Good luck anyway

Edit: Consulted with KSHR, s/he was just a bit misunderstood, I think s/he'll tell you

Updated!
thanks Wafu & KSHR

Hi

[Dear You]

1. 00:40:868 (1) - tick音が入ってるのはミス？前半同様消したほうがいいかも？
2. 00:45:258 (1) - ^
3. 00:46:721 (1) - ^ 以後指摘なし。
4. 00:53:672 (2) - リバース地点が見づらくなってるのでできればスタックしないほうが好ましいです
5. 01:01:355 (1) - こんな感じでgrid使うと綺麗に作れてblanket等も意識しやすく、見やすくなりますが、どうでしょうか？
   
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6. 01:31:721 (4) - 3からの微妙な距離と次の1へのFlowがあんまり綺麗には見えませんでした、こんな感じはどうですか？
   
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7. 01:39:404 (1,2) - ここは配置するためにDSが大幅に崩れてるような気がしました。01:43:611 (6,1,2) - ここと似たようなDSで配置したほうがユーザーも迷い泣くプレイすることができると思います。
8. 02:00:258 (3,4) - 02:00:989 (3,4) - 3と4だけCtrl+Gしてみませんか？今のままでも十分ですが。
9. 02:32:133 (4) - こういうところのDSの崩れは意図的でしょうか？私はこういった箇所はきっちりDSで配置するべきだと思いました。
10. 02:35:792 (2,3) - Ctrl+Gしたほうが曲調的にも流れ的にも綺麗だと思います、試してみてください。
11. 03:57:926 (3,4,5) - 現状ではあまり綺麗な流れにはおもえませんでした、このようなパターンはどうでしょうか？
    
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12. 04:21:340 (3,4) - 叩きづらいと思います。急に縮こまったような配置に感じました。

APP目指して頑張ってください

Satellite wrote:

Hi

[Dear You]

1. 00:40:868 (1) - tick音が入ってるのはミス？前半同様消したほうがいいかも？ 最初はBPM82だからtick入らなかったんですが、この指摘はBPM164で0.5×のスライダーを使用しているので入ってしまいます。vol5%でも聞こえるのでできるかぎり最小にしてます。
2. 00:45:258 (1) - ^
3. 00:46:721 (1) - ^ 以後指摘なし。
4. 00:53:672 (2) - リバース地点が見づらくなってるのでできればスタックしないほうが好ましいです fixed
5. 01:01:355 (1) - こんな感じでgrid使うと綺麗に作れてblanket等も意識しやすく、見やすくなりますが、どうでしょうか？ fixed
   
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6. 01:31:721 (4) - 3からの微妙な距離と次の1へのFlowがあんまり綺麗には見えませんでした、こんな感じはどうですか？ fixed
   
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7. 01:39:404 (1,2) - ここは配置するためにDSが大幅に崩れてるような気がしました。01:43:611 (6,1,2) - ここと似たようなDSで配置したほうがユーザーも迷い泣くプレイすることができると思います。 fixed
8. 02:00:258 (3,4) - 02:00:989 (3,4) - 3と4だけCtrl+Gしてみませんか？今のままでも十分ですが。 fixed
9. 02:32:133 (4) - こういうところのDSの崩れは意図的でしょうか？私はこういった箇所はきっちりDSで配置するべきだと思いました。 fixed 02:31:950 (3) - を後から配置しなおした時にズレてしまいました
10. 02:35:792 (2,3) - Ctrl+Gしたほうが曲調的にも流れ的にも綺麗だと思います、試してみてください。 fixed
11. 03:57:926 (3,4,5) - 現状ではあまり綺麗な流れにはおもえませんでした、このようなパターンはどうでしょうか？ fixed
    
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12. 04:21:340 (3,4) - 叩きづらいと思います。急に縮こまったような配置に感じました。fixed

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here's your ticket

[General]
fine

[Dear you]
00:45:441 - 00:47:270 - the ticks sound really odd to me in this part, they don't fit the song at all. I suggest to turn the volume to 5% for them
01:20:563 - ^
02:00:989 (3,4) - ctrl+g on them? use the similar pattern as 02:00:258 (3,4) - is better imo
02:29:755 (1) - this slider's reverse arrow is totally hidden but the hitburst of 02:29:389 (5) - , it's really hard to read and play.. you need to fix this
02:39:359 (4,5,6) - this 3 drum hitsounds sound really too loud to me.. they don't fit the song imo. why not turn the volume down a bit here?
02:50:974 (3) - this slider shape can be more smoothly imo, make it more like "S"?
03:34:328 - same as 00:45:441 -
04:41:462 (1) - this slider is nearly out of the screen.. hope you can put it up a bit
05:18:048 - 05:20:974 - 50% for hitnormal in this part is too huge imo. they sound really loud cuz there's the only vocal track playing in this part. consider to turn the volume down a bit?
05:25:107 - I really hope we can use 0% volume for the end, but well, rules are rules

great hitsounding
feel free to call me back

wcx19911123 wrote:

here's your ticket

[General]
fine

[Dear you]
00:45:441 - 00:47:270 - the ticks sound really odd to me in this part, they don't fit the song at all. I suggest to turn the volume to 5% for them I already turn vol.5%
01:20:563 - ^ same above.
02:00:989 (3,4) - ctrl+g on them? use the similar pattern as 02:00:258 (3,4) - is better imo
02:29:755 (1) - this slider's reverse arrow is totally hidden but the hitburst of 02:29:389 (5) - , it's really hard to read and play.. you need to fix this
02:39:359 (4,5,6) - this 3 drum hitsounds sound really too loud to me.. they don't fit the song imo. why not turn the volume down a bit here?
02:50:974 (3) - this slider shape can be more smoothly imo, make it more like "S"?
03:34:328 - same as 00:45:441 - same above.
04:41:462 (1) - this slider is nearly out of the screen.. hope you can put it up a bit
05:18:048 - 05:20:974 - 50% for hitnormal in this part is too huge imo. they sound really loud cuz there's the only vocal track playing in this part. consider to turn the volume down a bit?
05:25:107 - I really hope we can use 0% volume for the end, but well, rules are rules

great hitsounding thanks!
feel free to call me back

All fixed!
thanks for modding

NO KDS~ (I had gotten it after my timing check)

Hey~ keko-san

From Teller's team modding queues ( ･´ω･｀)


[Dear you]

1. 00:22:026 - IMO, this is not separate here. You can try this.
   
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2. 01:03:368 - add note? ^
3. 01:49:282 (1) - remove NC
4. 04:01:584 (1) - remove this slider? because you are space at 04:00:852 - but you did not space at 04:01:584 - . it is strange. It can outstanding 04:01:950 (1) - if you change this.
5. 04:38:535 (1,2) - IMO, they should be near. (You can no change for this)
   
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Not bad~

Good luck

tellertheworld wrote:

NO KDS~ (I had gotten it after my timing check)

Hey~ keko-san

From Teller's team modding queues ( ･´ω･｀)

[Gerenal]

1. You should add one more break time after half as well.

No need imo.

[Dear you]

1. 00:22:026 - IMO, this is not separate here. You can try this. No change. I can't hear clear sound at 00:22:026 - .
   
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2. 01:03:368 - add note? ^ No change. same above.
3. 01:49:282 (1) - remove NC No change. changed SV here.
4. 04:01:584 (1) - remove this slider? because you are space at 04:00:852 - but you did not space at 04:01:584 - . it is strange. It can outstanding 04:01:950 (1) - if you change this. 04:00:852 - is no sound here. 04:01:584 (1) - is lyrics follow.
5. 04:38:535 (1,2) - IMO, they should be near. (You can no change for this) No change. lyrics follow.
   
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Not bad~

Good luck

thanks for modding but all no change.

Your preview time is unsnapped. Other than that, the map seems good to me!
PS: Dem piano hitsounds owo

@wcx19911123
thanks for bubbled!

@BeatofIke
fixed

edit:
I can't update for now

fixed unsnapped preview time!

Bubble #2

Hi.

[Dear you]

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi.

[Dear you]

1. 00:35:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know what you are trying to do, but the flow here doesn't look good, in my opinion. I would suggest changing the pattern with another flow like silder - note -slider or note - note -slider etc.
2. 00:45:258 (1,1) - well, I think the slidetick was already 5% volumn, but it is still quite obvious to listen. I would suggest changing this to notes, but this depends on you.
3. 01:25:868 (3) - How about curving this slider to a certain extent? Some like this: osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699026
4. 03:26:096 (5,6) - hum, I would think that a 1/4 jump here wouldn't be a nice choice, as this is the only one 1/4 jump in this map. How about changing it to triplet notes or slider for consistency? Or at least make the slider like this for the sake of aesthetic? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1699100 . But if you listen to it carefully, this should be 1/3, but 1/4 triplet is still acceptable here. Your choice.
5. 05:04:877 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/169912 Consider this?
6. 05:07:072 (2) - How about making it parallel with 05:06:340 (1) - ?

All fixed!
thanks for modding

edit:03:26:096 (5) changed triplet.

Approved.

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おめでとうございます

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