GENERAL:
Add light blue to the combo colour please~~~ would look nice with more colour variations.
Fix tag conflict with hard diff, make all the tags same.
Add Russian song to the tag?
Pjcoo’s EASY
Distance snap 1,3 for easy? Hmm… u should consider that…
The BPM is 130,001 make it to 130,000 instead.?
ADD pjcoo to the tag (lol, you forget again bakari.)
00:03:717 (4) –Place it in x:108 Y:100 to make it tidier and to make the spacing consistent.
00:05:101 (6) – x 380 y 128 make spacing consistent (do you use distance snap?)
00:42:021 (7) –I guess this slider will surprise EASY”” player. I think u should make the pattern consistent by making triplets (slider with 1 reverse, right?) like no.6. And fill 00:42:944 with a hit circle.
00:47:559 (1,1,2) –Like the modders say in my map, too much reverse in easy is bad, and I think so too, because it is surprising for beginner, really! I highly recommend filling them with spinner instead. And it ends at 00:51:251 to give beginner a time to recover.
01:02:327 (4,5,6) - ^^^
Really cant say much its already okay, just remove some slider with too much reverse, not good for beginner, good job!
Rotten’s Normal
Add your name to the tags?
01:47:785 (2,3,4,5,6,7) –I think replace with spinner to make it more tidier, and fits the music, seriously, listen to the repeteadly drum sound.
02:29:090 (4,5) –Delete this rough”” part and make number 4 a triplets (slider with 1 reverse arrow right??), and for the next you can fill it with hitcircles
02:30:013 (5) –And make a slider here if you want to keep up with the beat.
02:35:089 (3) –For a tidier look for a break, place this on x88 72
HARD
Sup man?
Just please tidy up those TAGS!! Argh^_^ I cant stand them!
Here goes, hope useful.
00:01:640 (5) –IMO it looks better on x100 y272
00:05:101 (4,5) –I think the spacing is too messy, out of grid even, tidy it up a bit.
00:05:101 (4) –I think x48 y316 looks good.
00:05:332 (5) –x 16 y 228
00:36:255 (11) –Delete this to make some fresh space and room, really!
I can’t mod much, just…. Your mapping style, yeah you know…. I think you should add some hitsound to make your mapping style more clear, normal clap do a good work in here.
Care for a collab..?
I wanna TASTE one ^_^!
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nice map really but please consider this:
First, the song is nice really, after reading the translation and watch the video... yeah, it is NICE.
but the background, AW c'mon! I think it's bad and make me sad not just because it's not synchron with the video, I think it doesen't draw the lyric of the song too much, it looks so empty, so vain! like nothing to do with the song! (PLEASE) if you wanna make it rank, please change it into a better one, wait, I got this one you should try....
http://www.wallpaperup.com/27818/dark_f ... _moon.html
or
this suit the BEST I THINK
http://www.wallpaperup.com/27214/fantas ... w_elf.html
or that
http://www.wallpaperup.com/32284/mood_s ... orror.html
I highly recomend the second one
good luck
Add light blue to the combo colour please~~~ would look nice with more colour variations.
Fix tag conflict with hard diff, make all the tags same.
Add Russian song to the tag?
Pjcoo’s EASY
Distance snap 1,3 for easy? Hmm… u should consider that…
The BPM is 130,001 make it to 130,000 instead.?
ADD pjcoo to the tag (lol, you forget again bakari.)
00:03:717 (4) –Place it in x:108 Y:100 to make it tidier and to make the spacing consistent.
00:05:101 (6) – x 380 y 128 make spacing consistent (do you use distance snap?)
00:42:021 (7) –I guess this slider will surprise EASY”” player. I think u should make the pattern consistent by making triplets (slider with 1 reverse, right?) like no.6. And fill 00:42:944 with a hit circle.
00:47:559 (1,1,2) –Like the modders say in my map, too much reverse in easy is bad, and I think so too, because it is surprising for beginner, really! I highly recommend filling them with spinner instead. And it ends at 00:51:251 to give beginner a time to recover.
01:02:327 (4,5,6) - ^^^
Really cant say much its already okay, just remove some slider with too much reverse, not good for beginner, good job!
Rotten’s Normal
Add your name to the tags?
01:47:785 (2,3,4,5,6,7) –I think replace with spinner to make it more tidier, and fits the music, seriously, listen to the repeteadly drum sound.
02:29:090 (4,5) –Delete this rough”” part and make number 4 a triplets (slider with 1 reverse arrow right??), and for the next you can fill it with hitcircles
02:30:013 (5) –And make a slider here if you want to keep up with the beat.
02:35:089 (3) –For a tidier look for a break, place this on x88 72
HARD
Sup man?
Just please tidy up those TAGS!! Argh^_^ I cant stand them!
Here goes, hope useful.
00:01:640 (5) –IMO it looks better on x100 y272
00:05:101 (4,5) –I think the spacing is too messy, out of grid even, tidy it up a bit.
00:05:101 (4) –I think x48 y316 looks good.
00:05:332 (5) –x 16 y 228
00:36:255 (11) –Delete this to make some fresh space and room, really!
I can’t mod much, just…. Your mapping style, yeah you know…. I think you should add some hitsound to make your mapping style more clear, normal clap do a good work in here.
Care for a collab..?
I wanna TASTE one ^_^!
~~~~~~~
nice map really but please consider this:
First, the song is nice really, after reading the translation and watch the video... yeah, it is NICE.
but the background, AW c'mon! I think it's bad and make me sad not just because it's not synchron with the video, I think it doesen't draw the lyric of the song too much, it looks so empty, so vain! like nothing to do with the song! (PLEASE) if you wanna make it rank, please change it into a better one, wait, I got this one you should try....
http://www.wallpaperup.com/27818/dark_f ... _moon.html
or
this suit the BEST I THINK
http://www.wallpaperup.com/27214/fantas ... w_elf.html
or that
http://www.wallpaperup.com/32284/mood_s ... orror.html
I highly recomend the second one
good luck