Hi~
Modding because I'm too nice to say no orz (and because Suzuki Konomi).
[General]
Artist should be Suzu... *goes check first post* okay, this is correct.
You may like to wait for the OST/Single to be released so we can have accurate metadata for the Song Title (whether the TV Size goes or not).
Much PAN in tags.
[P A N's Easy]
The diff overall is lacking some hitsounds and feels very bland because it, so most of the suggestions here will be related to that. Don't be afraid of the long post here.
00:00:317 (1,2,1,2) - Put whistle in the beginning of each one.
00:13:378 (1) - This sounds crazy I know but this would fit better the song being a 3/4 slider. Difficulty-wise this is easier as player has more time to do the whole move of release slider, press the next, so don't be too afraid of doing it.
00:16:643 (1) - Either a finish or a whistle would fit here.
00:17:051 (2,3) - I'm not too much in favor of putting 1/2 like this in an Easy, I know the song is a bit hard to simplify but either a 1/1 slider + 3/2 slider or a repeating 3/2 slider would be nice to use here.
00:18:276 (1) - As the first suggestion, a 3/4 slider would fit better
00:18:276 (1,2) - Put the corresponding finishes here, or claps. (This is why I tell you to make the slider 3/4 )
00:20:317 (2,3) - The 1/2 thing I said above applies here too.
00:23:174 (1) - Either a finish or a whistle would fit here.
00:24:806 (1) - Put finish in the start and the reverse, or claps.
00:31:337 (1) - It'd be nice if this has the same shape as 00:36:643 (1).
00:41:133 (3) - Whistle in the beginning.
00:44:398 (3) - Whistle.
00:52:357 (1) - First, the spinner should begin in 00:52:561; second, the next note is 1 beat apart from the spinner, giving players very few time to recover. Changing it for a slider which begins in 00:52:561 would be better, either a 3/2 slider without repeats or a 3/1 slider would work here.
00:55:827 (1) - Whistle in the beginning.
00:57:459 (1) - ^
00:59:092 (3) - ^
01:00:725 (1) - Finish in the beginning.
01:02:357 (3) - Whistle in the beginning.
01:05:623 (2) - Whistle in the end would sound nice.
01:08:888 (3) - Whistle in the beginning.
01:10:521 (1) - ^
01:12:153 (3) - ^
01:15:419 (1) - ^
01:16:031 (2) - Maybe here too.
I'd like to complain about the 1/2 slider-slider here, but song calls for a hardish spread, so I won't do it. Whistles suggestions in the kiai can be replaced with Finishes from the Drum sampleset, like Sekai and Nyquill have in their diffs.
[K.Penguin's Normal]
HP4 AR5 OD4 will fit the whole spread better
Mostly hitsounds suggestions.
00:04:602 (2) - Maybe curve this a bit?
00:07:459 (2) - Finish in the beginning
00:10:112 (1) - ^
00:10:725 (2) - ^
00:16:643 (1) - Whistle in the beginning
00:21:133 (3) - Finish in the end
00:23:174 (1) - Whistle in the beginning
00:25:112 (4) - Clap in the end
00:31:949 (5) - Finish in the beginning?
00:37:868 (3) - Clap in the beginning
00:38:480 (4) - ^
00:52:561 (6) - Finish in all the slider
00:55:827 (3) - Whistle in the beginning
Kiai needs more hitsounds, at least a Soft Whistle or a Drum Finish every 1st and possibly 3rd beat so it doesn't feel too bland while playing
01:25:419 (1) - It'd be nice if you begin this spinner in 01:23:582 as the other difficulties.
[Hard]
Nyquill has HP7 in his Insane so yeah, better reducing HP to 6 here.
AR7?
00:00:317 (1,2,3) - I really suggest you to make this a 3/4 slider with one repeat, the rhythm/speed isn't clear yet so this is very confusing, even more being stacked. This way you introduce this 3/4 rhythm nicely for the next patterns.
00:01:337 (4,1,2,3) - I really suggest you to make the spacing consistent here , we have more 3/4 and the spacing looks like (4,1) has the same timing as (1,2), while they aren't, which is very confusing while playing.
00:03:174 (2,3,4) - Maybe not so needed as the rhythm is already introduced, but consistent spacing here would be nice.
00:04:806 (2,3,4) - Maybe here too.
00:06:643 (9,1) - 2.88x, this jump is too harsh for a Hard, better reducing it, maximum 2x.
00:11:337 (6,1,2) - Make spacing consistent here or use sliders, to make the 3/4 more readable.
00:15:623 (2,3) - Any reason for this jump? It feels completely random, better reducing the spacing here.
00:17:868 (6) - Make this a 1/2 slider and put a circle with NC in 00:18:276, this beat is too strong and it'd play better being hit, remove the NC in 00:18:480 (1) if you do.
00:24:806 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
00:27:255 (4) - Move this 1/4 beat forward, it'd fit better vocals.
00:27:663 (5) - Make this slider 1/2 so it goes better with vocals.
00:28:888 (4) - Move this 1/4 beat backward.
00:30:521 (4) - Move this 1/4 beat forward.
00:35:521 (5) - ^
00:37:051 (5,6) - Remove (6) and move (5) 1/4 beat forward.
00:49:806 (2) - This note feels overmapped better removing it.
00:50:112 (4) - Make it a 1/2 slider so goes better with vocals.
00:54:908 (4) - This note feels overmapped better removing it.
00:55:929 (1) - Make it a 1/2 slider, it'd compliment the music better.
00:57:459 (1) - ^
00:58:684 (6) - ^
01:00:725 (1) - ^
01:07:663 (2) - ^
01:09:296 (4) - ^
01:10:929 (2) - ^
01:12:561 (4) -
01:15:419 (4) - ^
01:23:888 (1) - Shouldn't this spinner being in in 01:23:684 or 01:23:786?
All these rhythm issues *slaps Bakai*
[Nyquill's Insane]
OD8 pls *runs*
00:12:051 (2) - I know this is a cool pattern and plays cool, but maybe making this 1/4 slider would make this sound cooler.
00:18:990 (5) - Remove this one, the stream should begin in 00:18:990, tested a lot of times and feels better.
00:39:296 - This beat feels a bit bad being ignored after you followed vocals for this part, maybe do something with 00:39:092 (5), 1/2 slider with/out repeat, circles, idk, but something should be there
00:43:480 (3) - Similar as the previous stream, remove it.
00:49:602 (2) - 1/2 slider here.
01:15:419 (1,2) - This would compliment better the song being the 1/2 slider first and then the 3/4 due vocals, but it'd break your hitsounding so do whatever you think it's better.
01:23:888 (1) - Shouldn't this spinner being in in 01:23:684 or 01:23:786?
First play I thought it was overmapped, second play I was like omg it isn't (much), third play omg I love it.
That'd be all from my part, good luck \o/
Modding because I'm too nice to say no orz (and because Suzuki Konomi).
[General]
Artist should be Suzu... *goes check first post* okay, this is correct.
You may like to wait for the OST/Single to be released so we can have accurate metadata for the Song Title (whether the TV Size goes or not).
Much PAN in tags.
[P A N's Easy]
The diff overall is lacking some hitsounds and feels very bland because it, so most of the suggestions here will be related to that. Don't be afraid of the long post here.
00:00:317 (1,2,1,2) - Put whistle in the beginning of each one.
00:13:378 (1) - This sounds crazy I know but this would fit better the song being a 3/4 slider. Difficulty-wise this is easier as player has more time to do the whole move of release slider, press the next, so don't be too afraid of doing it.
00:16:643 (1) - Either a finish or a whistle would fit here.
00:17:051 (2,3) - I'm not too much in favor of putting 1/2 like this in an Easy, I know the song is a bit hard to simplify but either a 1/1 slider + 3/2 slider or a repeating 3/2 slider would be nice to use here.
00:18:276 (1) - As the first suggestion, a 3/4 slider would fit better
00:18:276 (1,2) - Put the corresponding finishes here, or claps. (This is why I tell you to make the slider 3/4 )
00:20:317 (2,3) - The 1/2 thing I said above applies here too.
00:23:174 (1) - Either a finish or a whistle would fit here.
00:24:806 (1) - Put finish in the start and the reverse, or claps.
00:31:337 (1) - It'd be nice if this has the same shape as 00:36:643 (1).
00:41:133 (3) - Whistle in the beginning.
00:44:398 (3) - Whistle.
00:52:357 (1) - First, the spinner should begin in 00:52:561; second, the next note is 1 beat apart from the spinner, giving players very few time to recover. Changing it for a slider which begins in 00:52:561 would be better, either a 3/2 slider without repeats or a 3/1 slider would work here.
00:55:827 (1) - Whistle in the beginning.
00:57:459 (1) - ^
00:59:092 (3) - ^
01:00:725 (1) - Finish in the beginning.
01:02:357 (3) - Whistle in the beginning.
01:05:623 (2) - Whistle in the end would sound nice.
01:08:888 (3) - Whistle in the beginning.
01:10:521 (1) - ^
01:12:153 (3) - ^
01:15:419 (1) - ^
01:16:031 (2) - Maybe here too.
I'd like to complain about the 1/2 slider-slider here, but song calls for a hardish spread, so I won't do it. Whistles suggestions in the kiai can be replaced with Finishes from the Drum sampleset, like Sekai and Nyquill have in their diffs.
[K.Penguin's Normal]
HP4 AR5 OD4 will fit the whole spread better
Mostly hitsounds suggestions.
00:04:602 (2) - Maybe curve this a bit?
00:07:459 (2) - Finish in the beginning
00:10:112 (1) - ^
00:10:725 (2) - ^
00:16:643 (1) - Whistle in the beginning
00:21:133 (3) - Finish in the end
00:23:174 (1) - Whistle in the beginning
00:25:112 (4) - Clap in the end
00:31:949 (5) - Finish in the beginning?
00:37:868 (3) - Clap in the beginning
00:38:480 (4) - ^
00:52:561 (6) - Finish in all the slider
00:55:827 (3) - Whistle in the beginning
Kiai needs more hitsounds, at least a Soft Whistle or a Drum Finish every 1st and possibly 3rd beat so it doesn't feel too bland while playing
01:25:419 (1) - It'd be nice if you begin this spinner in 01:23:582 as the other difficulties.
[Hard]
Nyquill has HP7 in his Insane so yeah, better reducing HP to 6 here.
AR7?
00:00:317 (1,2,3) - I really suggest you to make this a 3/4 slider with one repeat, the rhythm/speed isn't clear yet so this is very confusing, even more being stacked. This way you introduce this 3/4 rhythm nicely for the next patterns.
00:01:337 (4,1,2,3) - I really suggest you to make the spacing consistent here , we have more 3/4 and the spacing looks like (4,1) has the same timing as (1,2), while they aren't, which is very confusing while playing.
00:03:174 (2,3,4) - Maybe not so needed as the rhythm is already introduced, but consistent spacing here would be nice.
00:04:806 (2,3,4) - Maybe here too.
00:06:643 (9,1) - 2.88x, this jump is too harsh for a Hard, better reducing it, maximum 2x.
00:11:337 (6,1,2) - Make spacing consistent here or use sliders, to make the 3/4 more readable.
00:15:623 (2,3) - Any reason for this jump? It feels completely random, better reducing the spacing here.
00:17:868 (6) - Make this a 1/2 slider and put a circle with NC in 00:18:276, this beat is too strong and it'd play better being hit, remove the NC in 00:18:480 (1) if you do.
00:24:806 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
00:27:255 (4) - Move this 1/4 beat forward, it'd fit better vocals.
00:27:663 (5) - Make this slider 1/2 so it goes better with vocals.
00:28:888 (4) - Move this 1/4 beat backward.
00:30:521 (4) - Move this 1/4 beat forward.
00:35:521 (5) - ^
00:37:051 (5,6) - Remove (6) and move (5) 1/4 beat forward.
00:49:806 (2) - This note feels overmapped better removing it.
00:50:112 (4) - Make it a 1/2 slider so goes better with vocals.
00:54:908 (4) - This note feels overmapped better removing it.
00:55:929 (1) - Make it a 1/2 slider, it'd compliment the music better.
00:57:459 (1) - ^
00:58:684 (6) - ^
01:00:725 (1) - ^
01:07:663 (2) - ^
01:09:296 (4) - ^
01:10:929 (2) - ^
01:12:561 (4) -
01:15:419 (4) - ^
01:23:888 (1) - Shouldn't this spinner being in in 01:23:684 or 01:23:786?
All these rhythm issues *slaps Bakai*
[Nyquill's Insane]
OD8 pls *runs*
00:12:051 (2) - I know this is a cool pattern and plays cool, but maybe making this 1/4 slider would make this sound cooler.
00:18:990 (5) - Remove this one, the stream should begin in 00:18:990, tested a lot of times and feels better.
00:39:296 - This beat feels a bit bad being ignored after you followed vocals for this part, maybe do something with 00:39:092 (5), 1/2 slider with/out repeat, circles, idk, but something should be there
00:43:480 (3) - Similar as the previous stream, remove it.
00:49:602 (2) - 1/2 slider here.
01:15:419 (1,2) - This would compliment better the song being the 1/2 slider first and then the 3/4 due vocals, but it'd break your hitsounding so do whatever you think it's better.
01:23:888 (1) - Shouldn't this spinner being in in 01:23:684 or 01:23:786?
First play I thought it was overmapped, second play I was like omg it isn't (much), third play omg I love it.
That'd be all from my part, good luck \o/