1. HD - 4Key (3.46 stars, 621 notes)
2. MX - 4Key (4.55 stars, 841 notes)
3. NM - 4Key (2.03 stars, 360 notes)

Special Thanks

Mods :
Sky_Demon(Give me a feedback in game）
yoshilove
arcwinolivirus
Shana Lesus
Taiwan-NAK(give me some feedback in game)
REDYUMiKA
Shinnzan
HOST
Reikosaka
S a k u r a
Uchiha_Shinichi
lordraika X3
lZenxl
Shi-Ra
mike91lau
Chamelo_Th
NaxelCL
hutunohito
aitor98
HinagikuKatsura
Yuutosan
SpiceSoul
Simple_Star
Soldsaga KunG
ichia7x
arcwinolivirus
Rumia-
Playtesting :
Sky_Demon
npc010ab
SGSG]
index222
t1j2n3
Over the Clouds
index22
jannychak1222
lok3913
don11381
samsam1515
Taiwan-NAK
wongfung

yoshilove wrote:

hi~ from queue :3

column : 1 2 3 4

4K

[NM]
00:14:641 (14641|0,14641|1) - remove
00:14:799 - add note to 1 and whistle
00:15:273 - add note to 4 and whistle
00:17:167 (17167|2) - remove
00:17:325 (17325|0) - move to 3 and add whistle
00:17:483 (17483|2) - move to 2
00:22:377 - add note to 3
00:25:377 - add note to 1
00:29:482 (29482|1,29482|2) - move right 1 column
00:30:429 - add note to 1
00:30:745 - add note to 2
00:38:955 - add note
00:39:191 (39191|3,39428|0,39665|3) - remove
00:40:218 (40218|2) - move to 1
00:40:454 (40454|3) - remove
00:40:454 (40454|1) - move to 1
01:23:634 - add note to 2

[HD]
00:12:115 (12115|2) - move to 00:12:194
00:13:378 (13378|2,13378|3) - remove
00:13:536 (13536|1) - move to 3
00:13:536 - add note to 4
00:13:694 (13694|0) - move to 2
00:15:431 (15431|3,15510|2) - remove
00:18:115 (18115|0) - remove
00:18:430 (18430|3) - remove
00:18:588 - add note to 4
00:19:536 (19536|3) - move to 3
00:19:694 (19694|1) - remove
00:19:694 (19694|2) - move to 4
00:43:770 (43770|0,43849|1) - remove
00:47:322 - add note to 2
00:50:006 (50006|1,50085|0) - remove
00:50:322 - add note to 3
01:10:215 (70215|0,70293|1) - remove
01:10:372 - add note to 2

[MX]
00:22:298 (22298|0) - move to 4
00:22:377 (22377|3) - move to 1
00:22:614 (22614|2) - remove
00:22:693 (22693|3) - move to 3
00:22:851 - add note to 4
00:25:535 (25535|3) - move to 2
00:25:693 (25693|3) - move to 00:25:614

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!

Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds). I mostly explain my mods to make it more clear and understandable.

[General]
Audio: 320kbps. It is recommended to convert it into 192kbps. Must fix
BG: It should be: 800x600 / 1024x768 / 1366x768
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem. Just fix the mp3 bitrate.

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[NM]

SPOILER

00:02:485 - add note to 4 for the main melody sound and to fill emptiness in this part
00:02:801 - add note to 3 ^
00:03:116 - add note to 2 ^
00:04:064 - add note to 4 for the strong sound same as 00:03:432 (3432|0,3432|2)
00:04:695 - add note to 1 ^
00:05:327 - add note to 2 ^
00:09:747 - add note to 4 ^
00:10:221 - add note to 3 ^
00:11:168 (11168|3) - move to 3 different pitch than 00:11:010 (11010|3)
00:12:431 (12431|0) - move to 2 ^
00:13:536 - add note to 4 for the strong sound
00:16:062 (16062|1) - move to 1 different pitch
00:18:588 - add note to 4 for the strong sound
00:20:009 (20009|3) - move to 00:19:851 for strong sound
00:20:167 (20167|3) - move to 00:20:325 then..
00:20:167 (20167|2) - move to 2 for hand balance
00:33:745 - add note to 2 for strong sound:cymbals
00:41:165 - add note to 4 for strong finish
00:46:849 (46849|1,46849|2) - move to 1 and 4 different pitch than 00:46:375 (46375|1,46375|2)
00:52:216 (52216|0) - move to 00:52:374 and move to 4. Strong sound and start
00:59:479 (59479|0) - change into short note then add note to 2. Not consistent to be LN.
01:14:161 (74161|3) - change into short note then add note to 3
01:15:424 (75424|1,76056|3,76688|2,77319|0) - should be same as 00:03:432 (3432|0,3432|2) 2-noted notes
01:17:951 (77951|2) - change into short note and add note to 4
01:20:477 (80477|2,81108|0,81740|3) - should be same as 00:03:432 (3432|0,3432|2) 2-noted notes
01:22:213 - add note to 3 for the strong sound.
01:22:845 - add note to 4 ^
01:23:161 (83161|0) - move to 01:23:318 and move to 4
01:26:792 (86792|1) - remove. No final sound occured.

[HD]

SPOILER

00:03:590 (3590|2) - remove as you didnt note the other snares like at this part 00:04:221
00:07:379 and 00:07:537 and 00:07:695 - note for the melody as you note them at 00:06:116 (6116|2,6274|0)
00:08:405 (8405|0) - move to 3
00:08:484 (8484|3) - move to 1
00:12:273 - add note to 2 strong sound just like 00:11:010 (11010|0,11010|3)
00:12:589 - ^
00:15:273 - ^ to 4
00:20:009 (20009|2,20167|3) - remove as its not strong as 00:19:851 (19851|0,19851|1) which vocal + impact/strong sound
00:20:325 - add note to 4 for strong sound
00:47:638 (47638|3,47796|2) - remove as beat sound only and no vocals too
00:47:954 - add note to 1 for snare sound
00:57:426 - add note to 1 for strong sound
01:00:268 (60268|3) - move to 1 for hand balance and to avoid stack ups at 00:59:952 (59952|3,60110|3,60268|3,60426|3)
01:15:582 (75582|1,75898|1) - suggesting to remove these too as you did not note for other parts like 01:16:214 and 01:16:530
01:18:266 (78266|1,78424|1) - move to 3
01:23:950 (83950|2) - move to 1
01:26:792 (86792|1) - remove. no sound.

[MX]
Kinda getting complicated for me. Im just going to point few.

SPOILER

00:04:143 (4143|2,4458|1) - remove as there is no drum roll sound here yet.
00:08:563 (8563|3,8879|2) - ^
00:09:984 (9984|0) - move to 4
00:10:537 (10537|3) - change LN for the whistle
00:11:642 (11642|0,11642|3) - remove. not strong and should be just like 00:12:905 (12905|1,12905|3)
00:25:614 (25614|3) - remove as the roll starts at 00:25:693 (25693|2)
00:25:930 (25930|3) - remove no roll sound here
01:00:110 (60110|3,60110|1,60189|3,60189|1) - rearrange and avoid to jack this since they are different instruments
01:17:556 (77556|3) - move to 1
01:26:792 (86792|1) - remove

[Overall]
Cute song~ and long title too :v Thank you for requesting and Goodluck

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hi Hokin
mod ready

[NM]
00:15:668 - add note to 2
00:15:747 - add note to 3

HD and MX do not have critical problems

Good luck
Star

REDYUMiKA wrote:

Hello guys, I came here to mod by request. (Column:1,2,3,4)
---> Type:SR, Language:

[General]

[Patterns of NM]
00:19:588 (19588|2) - move to 2
00:19:904 (19904|1) - move to 1
00:20:377 - to 00:21:009 - remap like (*1) pattern
00:25:114 - add a note to 3
00:25:745 (25745|3) - remove
00:25:429 - add a LN to 4, end at 00:25:745 -
00:25:903 - add a note to 2
00:26:061 - add a note to 4
00:27:166 - to 00:27:798 - remap like (*2) pattern
00:31:902 - add a note to 2&3
00:32:060 (32060|1,32060|2) - move to 1&4
00:32:692 - add a note to 1&4
00:34:428 - add a note to 3
00:35:376 - add a note to 2
00:35:691 - add a note to 4
00:46:427 - & 00:46:901 - insert LN to optional column, that is suitable than normal note I think
00:48:480 - add a note to 2
00:48:637 - add a note to 3
00:50:058 - ^
00:51:479 - to 00:52:427 - remap like (*3) pattern

*I suggest you follow the main vocal using suitable LNs as the below mod. --
00:14:220 (14220|1,14852|0) - remove
00:14:220 - add a LN to 1, end at 00:14:852 -
00:15:325 (15325|3,15720|1) - remove
00:15:325 - add a LN to 4, end at 00:15:641 -
--


[Patterns of HD]
WIP
[Patterns of MX]
WIP

REDYUMiKA wrote:

Hello guys, I came here to mod by request. (Column:1,2,3,4)
---> Type:SR, Language:

[General]
No problems.

[Patterns of NM]
00:19:588 (19588|2) - move to 2
00:19:904 (19904|1) - move to 1
00:20:377 - to 00:21:009 - remap like (*1) pattern
00:25:114 - add a note to 3
00:25:745 (25745|3) - remove
00:25:429 - add a LN to 4, end at 00:25:745 -
00:25:903 - add a note to 2
00:26:061 - add a note to 4
00:27:166 - to 00:27:798 - remap like (*2) pattern
00:31:902 - add a note to 2&3
00:32:060 (32060|1,32060|2) - move to 1&4
00:32:692 - add a note to 1&4
00:34:428 - add a note to 3
00:35:376 - add a note to 2
00:35:691 - add a note to 4
00:46:427 - & 00:46:901 - insert LN to optional column, that is suitable than normal note I think
00:48:480 - add a note to 2
00:48:637 - add a note to 3
00:50:058 - ^
00:51:479 - to 00:52:427 - remap like (*3) pattern

*I suggest you follow the main vocal using suitable LNs as the below mod. --
00:14:220 (14220|1,14852|0) - remove
00:14:220 - add a LN to 1, end at 00:14:852 -
00:15:325 (15325|3,15720|1) - remove
00:15:325 - add a LN to 4, end at 00:15:641 -
--

[Patterns of HD]
00:06:010 (6010|3,7273|0) - I recommend you remove these LNs, or replace with normal notes
00:10:905 - add a note to 3
00:10:984 - add a note to 2
00:17:299 - add a note to 3
00:17:378 (17378|2,17378|1) - move to 1&4
00:30:955 (30955|2,31034|3) - Ctrl+J, follow the pitch
00:33:165 - to 00:34:113 - remap like (*4) pattern
00:38:533 (38533|2) - shorten this LN end at 00:38:849 -
00:40:507 - add a note to 1
00:40:744 (40744|0) - move to 4
00:49:900 (49900|2) - remove
00:49:900 - to 00:51:953 - remap like (*5) pattern

[Patterns of MX]
00:09:247 - add a note to 3
00:09:326 - add a note to 2
00:09:405 - add a note to 1
00:09:484 (9484|1) - remove
00:09:563 - add a note to 2
00:10:589 (10589|1) - remove, then add a LN to 1, end at 00:10:747 -
00:10:747 - add a LN to 3, end at 00:10:905 -
00:11:931 (11931|2) - remove, there is not emphasized sound to put note properly
00:13:194 (13194|3) - ^
00:25:666 - add a note to 3
00:25:982 - add a note to 3
00:47:164 (47164|1,47243|3,47322|1) - lift down each note to 1/12s measure

[Comment]
I'm very very sorry for I couldn't respond with your request soon.. NM&HD are really nice charts, good work. but for MX,
I can feel the necessity of improvement in regard to several LNs including kinda patterns that was combined some notes.
I recommend you recheck the way of using LNs on the whole, It will be good chart.
Good Luck cutehokin

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|1|2|3|4|

Shinnzan wrote:

Hello!
Mod from queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/199193

Coloumn

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|1|2|3|4|

[NM]

Here ._.

• 00:29:692 - add note to 2
  00:30:955 - add note to 4
  00:40:507 (40507|0) - move to 2
  00:45:033 (45033|2,45112|0) - check, resnap
  00:46:111 - add note to 3
  00:47:374 - add note
  00:51:479 (51479|0) - i think end the LN here 00:51:953 ._.
  00:55:268 - add note to 1
  00:55:584 (55584|1) - delete
  00:55:900 (55900|0) - delete
  00:56:531 (56531|1) - move to 1
  00:57:479 - add note to 2
  00:57:794 - add note to 2
  00:59:373 - add note to 1
  01:00:005 - add note
  01:00:163 - add note
  01:06:320 (66320|3) - move to 2
  01:07:267 - add note to 3

[HD]

Here ._.

• 00:08:379 (8379|1) - move to 4
  00:08:694 ~ 00:08:852 - suggestion http://puu.sh/8xrnj.png
  00:09:484 - add note to 2
  00:12:168 (12168|1) - move to 4
  00:17:220 (17220|3) - delete then 00:17:220 (17220|0) move to 2
  00:20:062 (20062|1,20219|2) - ctrl+J
  00:21:482 (21482|0) - move to 2
  00:22:114 (22114|1) - move to 3
  00:22:430 (22430|2) - move to 2
  00:22:745 (22745|1) - move to 3
  00:23:851 (23851|1) - delete
  00:28:429 - add note to 4
  00:51:321 (51321|1) - move to 3
  01:09:319 (69319|3) - delete
  01:18:003 (78003|0) - end LN here 01:18:792

[MX]

Here ._.

• 00:11:063 (11063|1,11221|2,11379|1) - just suggestion to delete these
  00:27:166 (27166|1) - move to 3
  00:32:692 (32692|2) - move to 2
  00:32:850 (32850|3,32850|1) - move to left by 1 coloumn
  00:34:744 (34744|0) - move to 3
  00:56:057 (56057|3,56057|2,56057|1) - move to left by 1 coloumn
  01:03:794 (63794|1) - delete
  01:23:844 - add note to 2

Good Luck!

HOST wrote:

from [Standard / mania] GD, modding Team (≥∀≤)/

hi hokin~~

osu!edit column = 0 1 2 3
mod column = 1 2 3 4





NM

00:45:085 (45085|2) - move 00:45:046 (45046|2)


HD

01:03:794 (63794|3) - add 4
01:08:214 (68214|1) - add 2


MX

00:12:168 (12168|1) - move 3
00:12:247 (12247|1) - add 2
00:29:061 (29061|3) - add 4
00:29:692 (29692|3) - add 3
00:30:166 (30166|2) - add 3
00:30:324 (30324|3) - add 4
00:31:902 (31902|0) - add 1
00:32:060 (32060|0) - remove
00:33:165 (33165|0) - add 1
00:33:324 (33324|1) - remove
00:33:481 (33481|2) - add 3
00:34:428 (34428|1) - add 2
00:34:744 (34744|0) - add 1
00:36:876 (36876|0) - add 1
00:49:979 (49979|2) - add 3
00:52:427 (52427|3) - add 4
00:54:163 (54163|1,54163|3) - remove
00:55:742 (55742|2) - add 3
00:56:216 (56216|2) - add 3
01:08:372 (68372|3) - add 4





thx for your request hokin!

Reikosaka wrote:

Hi, mod as requested

[NM]

00:03:326 - add note in 4th column, because you added 1/2 note in previous part.

00:07:116 - add note in 2nd column, same reason

00:08:379 - add note in 1st column, same reason

00:12:168 - you should adding note here, put in 2nd column

00:36:954 (36954|0) - extend this hold note until 00:37:428 - beat are still continue

00:38:849 - add note in 2nd column for drum sound

00:45:046 (45046|2) - this note should be placed in 1/2 00:45:006 - not in 1/8

00:58:900 (58900|3) - this hold note doesn't supposed like that, so hold note should be like this. you can try out this pattern http://puu.sh/8LpGO.png

01:12:951 (72951|1) - hold note should end in 01:13:266 - time, and by adding note 01:12:951 - in 4th column

01:14:214 - add hold note in 1st column until 01:14:529 -

01:23:844 - add one more note to make it same pattern and sound like these two 01:22:897 (82897|3,82897|2) - 01:23:371 (83371|2,83371|3) -

[HD]

00:08:536 (8536|0) - move this to 4th column so it won't make repeat note while do different pitch

00:20:456 (20456|1) - delete this note, doesn't have beat that are you followed

add note for triple 1/4 00:13:431 - 00:13:510 -

add note 00:14:773 - 00:14:852 - 00:18:562 -

00:45:011 - add note in 3rd column

From 00:45:800 - to 00:46:432 - this part should be full 1/3 stream

00:41:454 - Set SV to x0.75 , this better for 1/2 note reading pattern.

move SV x0.90 to 00:45:796 - , it's not supposed placed at 1/6

00:46:427 - move x1.0 SV to 00:46:427 - same reason like above

[MX]

you should fix unsnapped note

00:10:589 - set SV with volume 20% and 00:10:905 - as default volume (60%)

00:14:773 - add note in 4th column

00:40:349 (40349|2,40586|2,40822|2,41138|3) - delete this note, it's make nonsense beat

[General]

Check all your note placement, this is unsnapped unsnapped in left column and snapped in right column all note snapped this is example how to make difference between placed properly or not placed properly

BPM should be 190.000 BPM

Columns 
1 | 2 | 3 | 4

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

From Queue
欄 Column: |1|2|3|4|

NM

01:00:327 - 可以加一個音看看 Add a note

HD

00:38:853 - 可以在2欄加個音 Add a note at column 2

MX

00:12:958 - 可以在1或4加個音 Add a note at 1 or 4
00:15:168 (15168|2) - 移到1 Move to 1
00:15:326 (15326|1) - ^
01:12:327 - 加音? Add note
01:24:011 - ^

已經很好了(ˊ● ω ●ˋ)
幫上的不多
Good Luck !

Uchiha_Shinichi wrote:

hi mod from queue

Columns 
1 | 2 | 3 | 4

[General]
.---. http://puu.sh/8OjKU.jpg

mods

[NM] 00:15:643 - add note?
00:15:327 (15327|3) - end this 00:15:800 and add note to 2? or just add note to 2 here 00:15:643
00:36:327 - add note?
00:36:643 - ^
00:36:954 (36954|0) - end this 00:37:116
00:58:906 - add note

[HD]
01:10:425 (70425|3,70425|1,70583|2,70740|1,70740|2,71056|1,71056|3,71214|2,71372|3) - ctrl + g, pitch
01:12:951 (72951|3) - end this 01:13:274
01:14:214 (74214|2) - end this 01:14:537
01:18:003 (78003|0) - end this 01:18:327
01:19:266 (79266|3) - end this 01:19:590
01:23:221 - add 1 or two note at 3 (and 4)

[MX]
00:07:274 (7274|3) - end this 00:07:590
00:09:010 (9010|3,9089|2) - ctrl +g , comfortability? :/
00:58:906 (58906|1) - end this 00:59:064
01:09:003 (69003|3) - end this 01:09:169
01:14:213 (74213|2) - end this 01:14:537
woot i S ed this

hanazawa kana! <3 Good luck, hope this helps owo)b

hokin1995 wrote:

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

From Queue
欄 Column: |1|2|3|4|

NM

01:00:327 - 可以加一個音看看 Add a note

HD

00:38:853 - 可以在2欄加個音 Add a note at column 2

MX

00:12:958 - 可以在1或4加個音 Add a note at 1 or 4
00:15:168 (15168|2) - 移到1 Move to 1
00:15:326 (15326|1) - ^
01:12:327 - 加音? Add note
01:24:011 - ^

已經很好了(ˊ● ω ●ˋ)
幫上的不多
Good Luck !

雖然改的地方不多
而且有的地方可圈可點
不過還是謝謝你吧XD

我最近才開始改的
會苦力練習進步的

lordraika wrote:

Request Mod from Lightning Speed Mania Modding

osuu~
a very blissful and cute song XD

Column |1-4|

Full Mod Inside

[General]
#umm, dont u wnt to put the ending video for these song?

#bpm, XD please set it to 190.00 ,
F3 > timing set up panel > set it 190.00 THEN ctrl + a for all timing, and checked snap objects to new timing
^^

#its a famous suggestion THAT , for each Mania difficulty to set the key number on the difficulty naming.
example : 5K Lunatic , 7K Fever, 6K Extra , @#%SC% Insane (4K)
doesnt matter how u put it as long as it contains the key amount XD

WHY is it necessary while when we search through the beatmap dif, osu write down the dif set as
"MX (4K) (hokin1995)" Yes it is.. but the purpose is for this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/161066
its essential for mania player when they wnt to download a beatmap , to knw the amount of the key on that beatmap XD
notice lots of other mania beatmap have the key amount on their naming?

Special Note :
if u put description to make other ppl know tht this beatmap set is 4K only
then u dont have to change the name of each dif by adding 4K on it.

[MX]
Yes change the name ^^ , "4K MX" will do...
reduce the OD from 9 to 8? for not giving the player too much pressure on acc XD

00:00:958 (958|2) - remove then 00:00:643 (643|2) - convert this into LN is much better than 1 note here XD

00:10:589 (10589|1) - move to 3
00:10:747 (10747|3) - move to 2

00:14:694 (14694|2,14694|0,14694|1,14852|0,14852|2,14852|1,15009|3,15009|2,15009|1,15167|1,15167|3,15167|2,15325|0,15325|1,15325|2) - reduce it into 2 chord only? XD , or add a LN as replacement rather than chord all the way

00:29:061 (29061|2) - turns this into LN tht ends up at 00:29:061 (29061|2)
for matching previous pattern 00:28:429 (28429|1,28429|3,28745|2,28745|0)

00:39:007 - notice this pattern >>> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1637488 , this LN is strongly recommended imo XD the rest is u can add up notes
wherever u see fits between these LN

00:50:374 - add 1 more note somewhere XD , this is for ur pattern for one two one two notes.
00:53:058 (53058|3) - remove this , no particular high sound here, jst the same as previous

01:22:265 (82265|0) - i think its better to extend this LN to connect to the next LN
after that , remove this 01:22:897 (82897|2) - finally 01:22:739 (82739|0) - move this to 3
imo this pattern looks better for the rhythm

also this >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1637502 , for the finishing...
try to place it, and listen to it isnt it better?

[HD]
if u reduce the MX's OD by 1 point, then u should reduce this by 1 point too, same apply as NM

00:00:327 - add 1 LN at 1 or 3?
00:04:747 (4747|0,5379|1) - move 1 column to the right
if u do so, then 00:06:168 (6168|2) - to 2

00:21:798 (21798|2) - move to 1 and turn it into LN?
00:23:061 (23061|3) - this too, convert into LN?
00:26:850 (26850|3,28113|2) - same for this if u do the above
00:49:427 (49427|2) - this too into LN

^^ thts all...

[NM]
00:03:484 - here, notice this pattern u mapped here, its nice
00:08:536 - why not apply similar to the above pattern? they have the same tune

00:39:954 (39954|1) - move to 4 , highly recommended. since 00:40:270 (40270|0) -u can say this a new combo...

01:15:003 - 01:15:161 - u add both 1 notes, there are triple drum sound, since this normal, u might wnt to ignore the one on the blue line
01:15:319 - here to if u add the above

Done ^^
the choosen note for consistent drum note and some bass is great ^^

since mapping vocal should be avoid.

lZenxl wrote:

^ Will mod after you apply his mod owo/

lZenxl wrote:

Alright Mod from quheuhuahs

[MX]

I can't really mod 4k much, I'm just going to give pattern suggestions owo/

00:00:958 - I suggest to have these notes in a pattern like this : http://puu.sh/8Z2ow.png | This is to make your map for unique to the song since the synths' pitch repeats on every note, thus, this pattern is more suitable owo/ | You can apply this pattern to the other sections of the map if you like it
00:18:798 (18798|2,18798|3) - I don't these notes are needed, remove them | They are linking 2 parts of the vocals together, it feels like the mania chart is overriding the music

* Realised that 812 objects are not snapped

00:41:217 (41217|0) - End this on a white line, it is hard to release the LN on a blue line perfectly, it will be better if there is a rigid sound that indicates the release of the LN
00:47:138 (47138|1,47217|3,47295|1) - Move up 1/4 | This is mapped too early
00:50:221 - Have a repeating pattern here so as to match the repeating vocals :


Not really any other problems owo/

[HD]

Unsnapped objects
00:00:958 - Same suggestion as MX, you can use hammers to follow the music
00:44:217 (44217|1) - Wrong hitsound? I think it should be a whistle owo
00:45:164 (45164|3) - ^
00:50:221 - Same as MX, but you can use a simpler version

00:53:064 - TO 00:56:537 - Why do I feel that the hitsounds are messed up? owo

No other problems owo/

[NM]

00:33:797 (33797|0,33797|1) - 2 snares here, I think you didn't intend to have 2 in a chord? owo
00:37:744 (37744|1) - Split this LN at 00:37:906 - into 2 LNs
00:44:217 (44217|3) - I think this should be a whistle owo
00:52:432 - I think you should go with a drum|snare|drum|snare pattern so as to make the hitsounds more organised

Good luck on this owo/

atarashii GEMU o tsukurimashita
sore mou utteru wa yo

lordraika wrote:

osuu~ ^^

ive jst seen this beatmap's updated and i saw tht u fixed everything soon enough ^^
i love that spirit... keep it up.

so as i check the improvement ^^
im here to give some review, no kudosu, since im doing this on my own...

[Advanced]
00:03:011 (3011|3,3090|2,3169|1,3327|2,3406|1) - Ctrl+H
00:03:485 (3485|3) - to 2
00:03:485 (3485|2,4116|3) - switch column
00:04:748 (4748|3,4748|2,5379|2) - ^

00:11:695 (11695|1) - convert this into LN to make it the same as 00:12:958 (12958|1,12958|2,12958|3,12958|0)
OR... u can jst 00:12:958 (12958|2) - convert this into single note

00:41:221 (41221|0) - extend it to red line, to match all the previous LN

notice this 00:41:221 (41221|0,54327|2,55274|2)
why not added another LN at 00:56:221 - at 2 ^^ fits the blank space

01:02:221 (62221|3,62379|1,62537|0,62537|2,62695|1,62853|0)- CTRL + H please~ ^^
then 01:02:221 (62221|2) - to 4


[HD]
00:37:116 (37116|1) - extend it to connect to the next LN

yup thts al...

[NM]
00:37:116 (37116|1,37432|2,37906|1) - dont u think its better to connect this note? its not a must, u decide it

00:57:485 (57485|1) - move this to 4
01:16:116 (76116|1) - move to 3
01:16:748 (76748|1) - move to 1
01:22:274 (82274|2) - move to 1
01:23:853 (83853|0) - move to 4


all done~ ^^

atarashii GEMU o tsukurimashita
sore mou utteru wa yo

ahaha

lordraika wrote:

yup, no problem
but u might wnt to reduce some notes , it looks too crowd XD
make the notes only the rhythm core


" atarashii GEMU o tsukurimashita
sore mou utteru wa yo " XD

Kana's voice keep echoing on my mind, haha
its so funny....

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 for 4K diffs)
HD

Inside :3

HP rate -1 pls

00:03:327 (3327|3,3406|2,3485|1) - I suggest you to reverse this pattern and move notes to 1st>2nd>3rd columns accordingly, it'll be more suitable with your previous stair here

00:05:379 (5379|3) - move to 0 column, according to your previous pattern it'll be mroe balanced position for this note

00:08:537 (8537|3) - move to 0 column too, now it plays uncomfortable a little and goes like half trill

00:16:748 (16748|1,16748|2) - I recommend you to move these notes to 0 and 3rd columns accordingly, opened chord is more comfortable to play here

00:18:169 - add note into 3rd column, here you have suitable beat sound which you can accent with such note

00:26:379 (26379|3) - move this one to 2nd column, you don't have here identical sound like for next going note, so no need to place them both into same column

00:28:116 (28116|3) - move to 0 column, you'll see that it's more suitable with your two next going patterns here, check that

00:41:221 (41221|3) - this LN should ends here 00:41:379 - according to the bg sound which goes here

00:54:958 (54958|1,55116|2) - I suggest you to move these notes to right by one column, it's more suitable chord transition here

01:15:327 (75327|3) - move this note to 1st column, it's well playable here like stair triplet

MX

Inside :3

HP rate -1 too

00:02:221 (2221|2) - I recommend you to remove this note, two notes+LN are anough to accent all sounds here

00:10:906 (10906|3) - and this note you need to move to 0 column, it's more suitable position coz you already have next going note into 3rd column here

00:11:695 (11695|1,12958|1) - consider removing these LNs, you don't have two different long sounds here for them, one LN for such position is enough

00:15:643 (15643|1,15721|0) - remove these notes too, no need to place double notes, they are ruining your patterns, use them only when you have two identical sounds in the song

00:23:853 (23853|3) - overnoting again, previously you used only two notes to accent such sounds, like here 00:23:221 - so no need to add extra notes

00:41:221 (41221|0) - like in previous diff, this LN should ends here 00:41:379 - according to the sound, check it with lower playback

00:56:458 (56458|1) - shield note, I recommend you to move it to another column and remodel your pattern here to aviod such position, it's uncomfortable to play after LN

I saw many three note chords in this diff and pairs of LNs which aren't suitable with the song, I highly recommend you to remove them and re-arrange your patterns to avoid overmapping. One sound - one note pls~

Good luck :3/