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yanaginagi - Tokohana (TV Size)

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Mint
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on vrijdag 16 mei 2014 at 20:47:16

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Tokohana (TV Size)
Source: ブラック・ブレット
Tags: BLACK BULLET 黒の銃弾 ending
BPM: 75
Filesize: 13365kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,4 stars, 69 notes)
  2. Hard (4,71 stars, 205 notes)
  3. Insane (4,92 stars, 310 notes)
  4. Normal (3,69 stars, 112 notes)
Download: yanaginagi - Tokohana (TV Size)
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Maruyu
Hey~ From modding queue.

Normal
1- 00:11:180 (1) - start spinner on white tick, and add a circle where the spinner was starting.
2- 00:19:557 (2) - This kinda breaks flow. Think of something else.
3- 00:36:243 (1) - DS is gone here. Don't do this.

It's an OK diff, just fix what's above and it's good imo.

Hard
1- 00:00:380 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - A bit of NC spam imo. Fix it
2- 00:28:077 (3,1) - I feel like this is a bit too much for a jump. Not because of the distance, but because of the flow. Come up with something else if you can
3- overall you're just spamming NC a bit.

Also OK diff, should be good to go soon.

Good job. Now, I would give you a star, but I gave a star to another map with the same song. Just kidding, have a sparkling star~
Topic Starter
Mint
SPOILER

Yuzu- wrote:

Hey~ From modding queue.

Normal
1- 00:11:180 (1) - start spinner on white tick, and add a circle where the spinner was starting.
2- 00:19:557 (2) - This kinda breaks flow. Think of something else.
3- 00:36:243 (1) - DS is gone here. Don't do this.

It's an OK diff, just fix what's above and it's good imo.

Hard
1- 00:00:380 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - A bit of NC spam imo. Fix it
2- 00:28:077 (3,1) - I feel like this is a bit too much for a jump. Not because of the distance, but because of the flow. Come up with something else if you can
3- overall you're just spamming NC a bit.

Also OK diff, should be good to go soon.

Good job. Now, I would give you a star, but I gave a star to another map with the same song. Just kidding, have a sparkling star~
All fixed, thanks for modding and star ^^
Asagi
Hello :3
random mod

[General]
  1. You need Easy diff or 3 star Normal to make this mapset rankable
  2. Your current BG size is 1024 x 576. Recommended BG size must be 1024x768

[Insane]
  1. 00:06:780 (1,2,3,4) - kinda odd to see that they overlapped, scatter them a bit
  2. 00:09:980 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - dont put a long jump on slow part, reduce spacing here
  3. 00:21:687 (4,1,2) - the overlap here is bad , try to move slider somewhere so it can avoid the overlap
  4. 00:41:923 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - you just overmapping it, dont make your own rhythm because this sliders doesnt fit well, change it into something
  5. 01:09:793 (2,3,4) - this is kinda confusing, try to use distance spacing here
  6. 01:11:213 (2,3,4) - ^
  7. 01:23:551 - add note here, the gap is kinda awkward

[Hard]
  1. 00:24:349 (1,2,3) - change this into repeat slider, raw triples on hard is quite hard, and the stacking make it worse
  2. 00:30:030 (1,2,3) - change to repeat slider, im not gonna mention them all
  3. 00:51:509 (7) - ctrl+G this, for better circular flow
  4. 01:15:296 (1,2,3,4) - remove this stream and change it into something, this is not recommended on hard
  5. 01:17:959 (1) - remove NC, dont overuse it
  6. 01:24:172 (4,5,6,7,8) - make this into repeat slider as you did on the previous note

I skipped normal, im not sure if you gonna remap it to make it 3 star
so... good luck :3
Topic Starter
Mint
SPOILER

-Asagi wrote:

Hello :3
random mod

[General]
  1. You need Easy diff or 3 star Normal to make this mapset rankable ill do it later
  2. Your current BG size is 1024 x 576. Recommended BG size must be 1024x768 ok

[Insane]
  1. 00:06:780 (1,2,3,4) - kinda odd to see that they overlapped, scatter them a bit did something else
  2. 00:09:980 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - dont put a long jump on slow part, reduce spacing here fixed
  3. 00:21:687 (4,1,2) - the overlap here is bad , try to move slider somewhere so it can avoid the overlap fixed
  4. 00:41:923 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - you just overmapping it, dont make your own rhythm because this sliders doesnt fit well, change it into something fixed
  5. 01:09:793 (2,3,4) - this is kinda confusing, try to use distance spacing here hmm, i'll think about this
  6. 01:11:213 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
  7. 01:23:551 - add note here, the gap is kinda awkward fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:24:349 (1,2,3) - change this into repeat slider, raw triples on hard is quite hard, and the stacking make it worse fixed
  2. 00:30:030 (1,2,3) - change to repeat slider, im not gonna mention them all fixed some
  3. 00:51:509 (7) - ctrl+G this, for better circular flow fixed
  4. 01:15:296 (1,2,3,4) - remove this stream and change it into something, this is not recommended on hard
  5. 01:17:959 (1) - remove NC, dont overuse it fixed
  6. 01:24:172 (4,5,6,7,8) - make this into repeat slider as you did on the previous note fixed

I skipped normal, im not sure if you gonna remap it to make it 3 star
so... good luck :3

Thanks for modding! :)
Angelo
Hello appleeaterx !

Because you ask in #modreqs (http://puu.sh/8JBa2.jpg)
Here is my mod (it's my 5th mod :D) :

[ Easy]
  • Perfect imo :D
[ Normal]
  1. 01:24:704 (3) - The spacing is not correct here, please fix it :? ?
  2. 01:21:154 (6) - Try to do something like this with the slider ;)
[ Hard]
  • Nice diff too :)
[ Insane]
  1. 00:47:604 (1,3,5) - Why did you put drum claps here ? Replace it with Normal claps maybe ?
  2. 01:21:332 - From here to 01:25:326 - here, try to redo the corners of the stream, do it more circular (something like this instead of this)

[General opinion]
  • They are many spacings problems, i don't write them because it's too long to write ...
    So please fix them :?
    Except this, it's perfect for me :D GJ

That was my mod, i hope it will be helpful !

Good luck ! :)

+sorry for my bad english :/
Topic Starter
Mint

Angelo wrote:

Hello appleeaterx !

Because you ask in #modreqs (http://puu.sh/8JBa2.jpg)
Here is my mod (it's my 5th mod :D) :

[ Easy]
  • Perfect imo :D
[ Normal]
  1. 01:24:704 (3) - The spacing is not correct here, please fix it :? ? fixed
  2. 01:21:154 (6) - Try to do something like this with the slider ;) fixed
[ Hard]
  • Nice diff :) too
[ Insane]
  1. 00:47:604 (1,3,5) - Why did you put drum claps here ? Replace it with Normal claps maybe ? hmm they are normal in the timing section, maybe its bugged? fixed it though by copying the same hitsounds for the drum
  2. 01:21:332 - From here to 01:25:326 - here, try to redo the corners of the stream, do it more circular (something like this instead of this fixed

General opinion
They are many spacings problems, i don't write them because it's too long to write ...
So please fix them :?
Except this, it's perfect for me :D GJ

That was my mod, i hope it will be helpful !

Good luck ! :)

+sorry for my bad english :/

Thanks for modding :)
Perfection
[Easy]
    1. 01:05:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to use more sliders than circles
    everything else in this diff is alright[Normal]
      1. 00:30:030 (4,5) - delete these two circles, instead do it like this
      2. 00:52:929 (1,2,3) - delete these 3 circles, insert break time instead
      3. 01:12:278 (1,2,3) - place these circles this way
Topic Starter
Mint

Kurapika wrote:

[Easy]
    1. 01:05:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to use more sliders than circles i made it a little bit like the hard diffs suggestion
    everything else in this diff is alright[Normal]
      1. 00:30:030 (4,5) - delete these two circles, instead do it like this done
      2. 00:52:929 (1,2,3) - delete these 3 circles, insert break time instead hm.. i like them that way i guess
      3. 01:12:278 (1,2,3) - place these circles this way fixed

Thanks for modding! :)
Ujimatsu Chiya
Random #modreqs


[General]
  1. Change Source ' ブラック・ブレット '
  2. hit sound is so high :? cheak please.
  • [Easy]
  1. Earlier would be better to fill the empty space below.
  2. There are too many spaces. Note, it might be good to include a little more filling.
  3. 01:26:657 (4) - chagne slider or spinner , and End time >> 01:27:367 <<
[normal]
  1. slider tick rate 1.80..? what that..?
  2. 01:26:657 (3) - chagne slider or spinner , and End time >> 01:27:367 <<
[hard]
  1. 01:21:154 (1,2,3,4) - change this part
  2. 01:26:657 (3) - chagne slider or spinner , and End time >> 01:27:367 <<
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:202 (3,1) - change slider
  2. 00:42:633 (5,6,1,2) - ^ (two slider)
  3. 00:43:699 (5,1) - ^
  4. 00:45:829 (4,1,2,3) - ^ change like this http://puu.sh/8Njju.jpg
  5. 00:52:929 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - Add a little more in this section shall be the object rolls. HP compromised
  6. 01:21:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,1) - This is not Expert diff... :?
    And Rhythm is not match for stream. It looks like the first stream to change the look. Like this http://puu.sh/8NjNt.jpg

GL
Topic Starter
Mint

K i b i y a - wrote:

Random #modreqs


[General]
  1. Change Source ' ブラック・ブレット ' done
  2. hit sound is so high :? cheak please. i also thought so , ill change it later
  • [Easy]
  1. Earlier would be better to fill the empty space below. i did this because there are no breaks in the map and i thought since it's a slow song the easy would be suitable for beginners - so i didnt map the beginning
  2. There are too many spaces. Note, it might be good to include a little more filling. i added some notes - but i actually wanted to keep the website SR under 1 xD
  3. 01:26:657 (4) - chagne slider or spinner , and End time >> 01:27:367 << hmm... i think a single note is ok - i might change it later though
[normal]
  1. slider tick rate 1.80..? what that..? xD - i also thought the SV is a little too high, but it's still playable i guess :/ if it turns out to be too fast ill just remap the diff
  2. 01:26:657 (3) - chagne slider or spinner , and End time >> 01:27:367 << same as easy
[hard]
  1. 01:21:154 (1,2,3,4) - change this part ?
  2. 01:26:657 (3) - chagne slider or spinner , and End time >> 01:27:367 << same as easy
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:202 (3,1) - change slider tried to change it, but sounds a little off :?
  2. 00:42:633 (5,6,1,2) - ^ (two slider) ill save this suggestion for later
  3. 00:43:699 (5,1) - ^ nah
  4. 00:45:829 (4,1,2,3) - ^ change like this http://puu.sh/8Njju.jpg done
  5. 00:52:929 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - Add a little more in this section shall be the object rolls. HP compromised i tried it multiple times, and should be ok
  6. 01:21:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,1) - This is not Expert diff... :?
    And Rhythm is not match for stream. It looks like the first stream to change the look. Like this http://puu.sh/8NjNt.jpg the stream fits ok imo

GL

Thanks for modding! :)
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