謝謝你提供你做的圖AngelHoney wrote:
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团长做的好认真的说XD(期待成品
不過這一整組圖我想自己完成
不過我會參考你的創意的^^
kds~
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Sound Horizon - <Ending>EL no Rakuen(side:A)
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不過這一整組圖我想自己完成
不過我會參考你的創意的^^
kds~
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Topic Starter
jamesleao wrote:
Elysion:
02:39:091 (5) - slider end 02:40:088
02:43:049 (8) - new combo
Fine , nice work and nice storyboard , excellent !
thanks for ur modded
02:39:091 (5)- slider end 02:40:088 i use very short slider on purpose
02:43:049 (8) - new combo the color of note from 2:36:338 to 3:02:588 have it meaning~so no new combo there is on purpose too ^^
I think that "L" or "El" are better than "Eru". (For example, "El's Paradise" "Paradise of the L")
It is unknown how "エル (Eru)" in title is transcribed in the English. but probably it is L or El.
(El of Elysion, El of Elyse. El=L of the Alphabet)
(At track44. Man's daughter's name is "Elyse"(probably this spelling). She is called "エル" from Man)
(At track05. Lyrics of "[E]and[A]" was sung "[エル]and[Abyss]"(="[Elysion]and[Abyss]))
Almost Japanese imagine L if they hear "エル" in the first place.
Because my English is weak, I cannot say the clear thing, but I feel sense of incongruity in Eru of Romaji.
Difficulty name of [Elysion] and [Abyss] are interesting,
but there's slightly sense of incongruity because already contained the word "Side:A(byss)" in the title.
Side:E too.
However, I think that the present names are not bad.
beatmap and storybord are intresting!
It is unknown how "エル (Eru)" in title is transcribed in the English. but probably it is L or El.
(El of Elysion, El of Elyse. El=L of the Alphabet)
(At track44. Man's daughter's name is "Elyse"(probably this spelling). She is called "エル" from Man)
(At track05. Lyrics of "[E]and[A]" was sung "[エル]and[Abyss]"(="[Elysion]and[Abyss]))
Almost Japanese imagine L if they hear "エル" in the first place.
Because my English is weak, I cannot say the clear thing, but I feel sense of incongruity in Eru of Romaji.
Difficulty name of [Elysion] and [Abyss] are interesting,
but there's slightly sense of incongruity because already contained the word "Side:A(byss)" in the title.
Side:E too.
However, I think that the present names are not bad.
beatmap and storybord are intresting!
Topic Starter
ok~ i will change the title after i finish it ^^tfxllvna wrote:
I think that "L" or "El" are better than "Eru". (For example, "El's Paradise" "Paradise of the L")
It is unknown how "エル (Eru)" in title is transcribed in the English. but probably it is L or El.
(El of Elysion, El of Elyse. El=L of the Alphabet)
(At track44. Man's daughter's name is "Elyse"(probably this spelling). She is called "エル" from Man)
(At track05. Lyrics of "[E]and[A]" was sung "[エル]and[Abyss]"(="[Elysion]and[Abyss]))
Almost Japanese imagine L if they hear "エル" in the first place.
Because my English is weak, I cannot say the clear thing, but I feel sense of incongruity in Eru of Romaji.
Difficulty name of [Elysion] and [Abyss] are interesting,
but there's slightly sense of incongruity because already contained the word "Side:A(byss)" in the title.
Side:E too.
beatmap and storybord are intresting!
the intend is for other player re-download for full sb
thanks for ur suggest
Impressive storyboard ^^
Maybe you should add some tags (like Elysion) to the song.
Maybe you should add some tags (like Elysion) to the song.
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前两难度很好，
还有这个SB太华丽了。。必须rank的精品水准啊
还有这个SB太华丽了。。必须rank的精品水准啊
awesooooooooooooooooooooooome SB!!!
团长赛高！SH赛高！> <
不过字幕字体似乎不是统一的字体呢……（请无视这句吧
团长赛高！SH赛高！> <
不过字幕字体似乎不是统一的字体呢……（请无视这句吧
>w< Star~
u show it to me what is storyboard
团长星力量 
SB和Skin都是上乘之作,不过没什么不做hitcircle呢?
map本身note我也没什么说的,有些note会遮挡前面还没消失的note,这点我个人并不是很喜欢,不过也不是什么大问题
SB一点建议:
04:33:952 这里开始的那两排字黑色并不是很清楚,就像前面那种白色的描黑边的感觉会更好
SB和Skin都是上乘之作,不过没什么不做hitcircle呢?
map本身note我也没什么说的,有些note会遮挡前面还没消失的note,这点我个人并不是很喜欢,不过也不是什么大问题
SB一点建议:
04:33:952 这里开始的那两排字黑色并不是很清楚,就像前面那种白色的描黑边的感觉会更好
Topic Starter
我考完試會努力把他完成的@@Breeze wrote:
团长星力量
SB和Skin都是上乘之作,不过没什么不做hitcircle呢?
map本身note我也没什么说的,有些note会遮挡前面还没消失的note,这点我个人并不是很喜欢,不过也不是什么大问题
SB一点建议:
04:33:952 这里开始的那两排字黑色并不是很清楚,就像前面那种白色的描黑边的感觉会更好
屆時也會把自體跟sb重修
排列也會多用點心^^"
thank you it is beautiful
团长还没考完试么o.o
我已经迫不及待的想要看完成品了 XD
考试加油~然后一鼓作气把map完成吧！
我已经迫不及待的想要看完成品了 XD
考试加油~然后一鼓作气把map完成吧！
Storyboard is something so awesome that i'd give you second star if i could..
why graveyard? 
gdeath wrote:
why graveyard?
++++++++gdeath wrote:
why graveyard?
团长继续 加油啊
加油啊its a very beautiful map :3
01:32:587 (1) - 和接下来的note重合吧~
01:29:859 (2) - ^
01:31:905 (5) - ^
02:39:916 (5) - 取音比较怪.可以考虑下用前面白线的"叮"吗?
>.< i love this map~ star~
01:32:587 (1) - 和接下来的note重合吧~
01:29:859 (2) - ^
01:31:905 (5) - ^
02:39:916 (5) - 取音比较怪.可以考虑下用前面白线的"叮"吗?
>.< i love this map~ star~
Out of Graveyard ? GJ
GJ
star~ I like this map...its a shame its in the graveyard 
I hope you might add a higher difficulty? that way it might garner enough attention to get it ranked?
I hope you might add a higher difficulty? that way it might garner enough attention to get it ranked?看到后面总怕下一秒猎奇…心惊肉跳的…………………
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