m4m with me xD
[General]
BPM and offset are not consistent throough the diffs, make them same
BPM 175 offset 11788
[Easy]
for this diff, you need to change timing, then remap, That way I can mod it further
(And you could possibly map it better)
[Normal]
I recommend CS 3
AR 2 is too slow, I recommend 4 or 5
HP and OD +1
You are using toooooooo close distance snap while the slider velocity is quite fast for this bpm
I recommend using slower slider velocity and wider (higher) distance snap.
Remember to keep distance snap constant on normal and easy
00:52:591 (5,6)- I prefer circle first, then slider.That way you can make symetry patterns with slider-circle-slider later. It plays better
00:52:934 (6)- new combo here
00:58:420 (6)- same^
01:01:163 (1)- you can make this slider looks more symetrical, close to the letter 'w'
This diff is somewhat good for early time mappers, but just like I said , the base slider velocity and base distance snap dont match, should it be match, the map will looks better to play and you can dig more potential patterns and flow from it. However, you did a good hitsounding, not bad
[Hard]
Similar problem with the previous diff, you NEED wider distance snap for this , I highly recommend it
00:21:734- these 1/2 circles dont fit the music maybe you can try the following
00:35:106 (3,4,5,6,7)- didnt fit the music/vocal. Maybe you can try 1/1 repeating slider here
00:42:306 (2,3,4,5)- looks ugly overlap (because the low DS so, yeah...). I recommend making a triangle or a square jump here for epicness \o/
00:44:363- add a note? Seems empty
00:50:191 (6)- New Combo here
00:51:906 (1)- remove New Combo
00:52:934 (5)- same^
00:54:648 (4)- remove New Combo
note: umm as for New Combo, i am too lazy to put everything here,maybe we can do it easier via irc mod some other time
additional comments : As for flow (how the map sounds) you did a good job, nice rhythm and hitsounding If I do say so myself. The pattern (how the map looks) could be improved more by learning how to make sliders more interesting, jump patterns, stacks, streams,blanket, etc etc. And nice skin you have there, I really want to use that followpoint and hitcircle overlay
Thats it hope you like the mod, I hope it is helpful