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Kayano Ai - Oracion(TV-Size)

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Meg
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Meg
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年7月29日 at 5:35:08

Artist: Kayano Ai
Title: Oracion(TV-Size)
Source: ノーゲーム･ノーライフ
Tags: litoluna chirony kawaiwkyik no game no life shiro 白 ending
BPM: 166
Filesize: 14943kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chirony's Hard (3.29 stars, 236 notes)
  2. Easy (1.49 stars, 92 notes)
  3. Insane (4.63 stars, 327 notes)
  4. litoluna's Insane (4.46 stars, 326 notes)
  5. litoluna's Normal (1.75 stars, 107 notes)
  6. wkyik's Insane (4.43 stars, 270 notes)
Download: Kayano Ai - Oracion(TV-Size)
Download: Kayano Ai - Oracion(TV-Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2
白(茅野愛衣)- オラシオン(TV-Size)
ノーゲーム・ノーライフED song

Easy by me
Normal by litoluna
Hard by Chirony
Insane by me
litoluna's Insane by litoluna
wkyik's Insane by Kawaiwkyik

thank you~ :3
N a s y a
iyasine
CloudSplash16
kiiwa
Umi
K i b i y a -
kaChaShiraKai
hopperhtkn
Tada
Kodora
KSHR
Tari
waxman
keeeeeeko ( thanks special hitsound! )
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1000 fav thanks <3 | 2017.20.Oct
Last edited by Meg , edited 79 times in total.
Chirony
390 posts
Joined June 2012
Chirony
hardできたほー

http://puu.sh/8yB8I

新しい方のmp3でオフセット合わせました（少しずれてるかも）
sionKotori
648 posts
Joined September 2011
sionKotori
もっど ぴよ
Meg
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Meg

Chirony wrote:

hardできたほー

http://puu.sh/8yB8I

新しい方のmp3でオフセット合わせました（少しずれてるかも）
ヨッシャキタ
Meg
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Meg

sionKotori wrote:

もっど ぴよ
ピヨ(･8･)
Meg
1,617 posts
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Meg
all diff揃いました～
ryota1212
60 posts
Joined March 2010
ryota1212
٩(๑＞◡＜๑)۶
Meg
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ryota1212 wrote:

٩(๑＞◡＜๑)۶
hi 999751212!!!!
(ﾟ∀ﾟ　)
Mei
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Mei
ganbatte :D :D
Meg
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Mei wrote:

ganbatte :D :D
thanks Mei~ >w<
N a s y a
510 posts
Joined March 2012
N a s y a
ぬ
mod初心者マンです

[Easy]

00:48:953 (2) - 始端にfinish?
00:50:037 (4) - ^
01:06:844 (2) - finish追加

[litoluna's Normal]

00:28:169 (1) - 始端finish

[Chirony's Hard ]

00:48:410 (1,2,1,2) - whistleよりはclapのほうがあってるかと
01:26:001 (1) - finish追加

[litoluna's Insane]

00:21:483 (4) - ブランケット

[Insane]

00:05:037 (1) - 始端finish
00:06:483 (1) - ^
00:07:025 (2) - ^
00:07:928 (1) - ^
00:09:374 (1) - ^
00:09:736 (2) - 終端finish
00:10:820 (1) - 始端finish
00:12:266 (1,4) - finish
00:14:254 (2,3,2) - finishいれてもいいかもしれません
00:42:627 (1) - remove finish
00:45:519 (1) - ^
00:46:965 (4,5) - このくらい離してもいいかも？
image
00:48:953 (1,2,1,2) - finish
01:06:844 (1,2) - 音取りの提案
image
01:07:386 (2) - 始端finish
01:08:651 (1) - ^
01:12:989 (1) - remove finish
01:27:446 (1,2) - ４つのスライダーの真ん中に置いてみては？
image

イージーとノーマルはslidertickにも音つけたほうがいいかもしれません。
変なmodかもだけど許してね
Meg
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Meg

N a s y a wrote:

ぬ
mod初心者マンです

[Easy]

00:48:953 (2) - 始端にfinish?
00:50:037 (4) - ^
01:06:844 (2) - finish追加

all fixed!

[Insane]

00:05:037 (1) - 始端finish
00:06:483 (1) - ^
00:07:025 (2) - ^
00:07:928 (1) - ^
00:09:374 (1) - ^
00:09:736 (2) - 終端finish
00:10:820 (1) - 始端finish
00:12:266 (1,4) - finish
00:14:254 (2,3,2) - finishいれてもいいかもしれません 強弱つけたいのでkeepで！
00:42:627 (1) - remove finish
00:45:519 (1) - ^
00:46:965 (4,5) - このくらい離してもいいかも？　ｳﾂｸｼｲ・・・goodです！
image
00:48:953 (1,2,1,2) - finish　最初の1,2だけfinishにしておきました。
01:06:844 (1,2) - 音取りの提案　んー、01:07:206 - に明確な音が聞こえなかったのでkeepで。
image
01:07:386 (2) - 始端finish　01:07:928 (4,5,6,7) - の音を強調したいのでwhistleのまま一旦keepさせてもらいます。今後の指摘があれば直すようにします。
01:08:651 (1) - ^　上と同様です。
01:12:989 (1) - remove finish
01:27:446 (1,2) - ４つのスライダーの真ん中に置いてみては？　真ん中に置いたつもりが全然真ん中じゃなくて絶望しました。綺麗になりました！
image

何も書いてないところはfixedです

イージーとノーマルはslidertickにも音つけたほうがいいかもしれません。　little菜さんとまた相談します！
変なmodかもだけど許してね
なしゃさんmodありがとー！
わがまま言っちゃってるけどなしゃさんの意見もすごく参考になったぜ！
また自分でちゃんと見直してみます！
なしゃさん目指せgreat modder
Rizia
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Joined January 2012
Rizia
can i make a insane gd on your map ><?
Meg
1,617 posts
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Topic Starter
Meg

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

can i make a insane gd on your map ><?
GOGO~!
Meg
1,617 posts
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Topic Starter
Meg
add wkyik's Insane!
Chirony
390 posts
Joined June 2012
Chirony

N a s y a wrote:

[Chirony's Hard ]

00:48:410 (1,2,1,2) - whistleよりはclapのほうがあってるかと
01:26:001 (1) - finish追加
All fixed
modありがとうございました(・ω<)

http://puu.sh/8B8MK.zip
iyasine
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Joined January 2012
iyasine
ｵｲｼｭｯ requestありがとう～( ˘◡˘ )

[General]
■ litoluna's Insaneとwkyik's Insaneのwidescreen spportのチェックを外しましょう
■ 全diffのTagsに " kawaiwkyik " を追加しましょう

[Easy]
■ 00:13:712 (1) - finish合うと思います
■ 00:20:218 - add whistle
■ 00:21:302 - clap → whistle
■ 00:23:109 - add whistle
■ 00:31:061 (1) - sliderの中点を x:367 y:223に移動したらさらにブランケット綺麗になると思う :D
■ 00:33:230 (1) - remove NC アクセントで使うにしてもBGMとの組み合わせから考えると不自然だと思う！
■ 00:37:386 - remove whistle 前後の白線でバスドラムが鳴っててこの赤線では鳴ってないから混乱を招く可能性が =ω=
■ 00:40:459 - whistle → clap
■ 00:41:904 - ^
■ 00:46:242 (2) - ^
■ 01:10:097 - clap → whistle
■ 01:12:989 (3) - ^
■ 01:15:880 - ^
■ 01:23:651 - ^

[litoluna's Normal]
■ 00:39:013 (4) - x:255 y:42 ?
■ 00:41:181 - whistle合うと思います。
■ 00:48:410 (1) - もう少し曲げ方を緩やかにしてブランケットを綺麗にできるかもしれません。
■ 00:48:410 - 00:48:953 - この2点にもhit soundがﾎｽｲ！clapとかfinishとか -o-
■ 00:53:471 - sampleset + Drum 合うかもしれません
■ 01:16:603 (4) - 細かいけど、ケツの点を0.5 grid 下げて01:15:157 (2) - ここと角度合わせるとgood ;)
今日もお美しい :oops:

[Chirony's Hard]
■ 00:26:362 - 00:26:724 - 00:27:085 - add whistle ?
■ 01:22:206 - ^
■ 01:23:109 - ^
■ 01:26:181 - ^
とてもいい hard :)

[Insane]
■ 00:27:266 (1,2) - ちろにーさんとりとるなさんのdiffみたいに音つけてみない？
■ 00:33:049 - Drum sampleset + clap ? 00:33:410 (5) - Drum sampleset + finish ? この2点はお好みで :D
■ 00:40:097 - ここのclapは消して、次の00:40:459 - ここのwhistleをclapにしたほうが合うと思う～
■ 00:40:820 - remove clap
■ 00:44:254 (2) - clap
■ 00:44:434 (3) - remove clap
■ 00:44:796 - whistle → clap
■ 00:45:157 - remove clap
■ 00:46:242 - whistle → clap
■ 00:46:603 - remove clap
■ 00:46:784 - add whistle
■ 00:56:362 - remove whistle
■ 00:46:965 (4) - ここでこの音取りはｱｶｰｰｰﾝ！！！これ使いたいなら00:45:157 - ここからだと思うゾ
■ 01:27:446 (1) - finish → clap
おい～～！！！前半のドラム全然聴けてないやないか！！！次同じmissしたら東京湾に沈める 8-)
イントロ～Aメロのwhistle抜けは省いた =ω= もういっかいよく聴いてみて！もしわからなかったら、りとるなさんのinsane見ればわかるっ

[litoluna's Insane]
■ OD+1 ! ３つInsane diffあるのでOD8のdiff 欲しいです 8-)
他はとくになしです、nice insane!!

[wkyik's Insane]
■ 00:05:037 (3) - x:88 y:104 ?
■ 00:27:266 (1,2) - add drum sampleset + clap ?
■ 00:27:446 (3) - add drum sampleset + finish ?
■ 00:30:880 (4) - add clap ?
■ 00:36:483 - remove drum sampleset ?
■ 00:38:832 (2,3) - add whistle , 00:39:013 - add clap ?
■ 01:26:362 (2) - x:279 y:310 ?

good luck!
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia

iyasine wrote:

[wkyik's Insane]
■ 00:05:037 (3) - x:88 y:104 ?
■ 00:27:266 (1,2) - add drum sampleset + clap ?
■ 00:27:446 (3) - add drum sampleset + finish ?
■ 00:30:880 (4) - add clap ?
■ 00:36:483 - remove drum sampleset ?
■ 00:38:832 (2,3) - add whistle , 00:39:013 - add clap ?
■ 01:26:362 (2) - x:279 y:310 ?

good luck!
Fixed all >w<
thanks for mod

code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: oracion.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 46242
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Oracion (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:オラシオン (TV Size)
Artist:Kayano Ai
ArtistUnicode:茅野愛衣
Creator:iMage--
Version:wkyik's Insane
Source:ノーゲーム･ノーライフ
Tags:litoluna chirony no game no life shiro 白 ending kawaiwkyik
BeatmapID:417298
BeatmapSetID:172013

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
@N a s y a

N a s y a wrote:

ぬ
mod初心者マンです

[litoluna's Normal]

00:28:169 (1) - 始端finish

[litoluna's Insane]

00:21:483 (4) - ブランケット
:arrow:(3,4,5)で直線になるように配置したいのでここはkeep it


イージーとノーマルはslidertickにも音つけたほうがいいかもしれません。
変なmodかもだけど許してね
@iyasine

iyasine wrote:

ｵｲｼｭｯ requestありがとう～( ˘◡˘ )

[General]
■ litoluna's Insaneとwkyik's Insaneのwidescreen spportのチェックを外しましょう
■ 全diffのTagsに " kawaiwkyik " を追加しましょう
:arrow:Tagsはimageくんにまかせます。


[litoluna's Normal]
■ 00:39:013 (4) - x:255 y:42 ?
■ 00:41:181 - whistle合うと思います。
■ 00:48:410 (1) - もう少し曲げ方を緩やかにしてブランケットを綺麗にできるかもしれません。
■ 00:48:410 - 00:48:953 - この2点にもhit soundがﾎｽｲ！clapとかfinishとか -o-
■ 00:53:471 - sampleset + Drum 合うかもしれません
■ 01:16:603 (4) - 細かいけど、ケツの点を0.5 grid 下げて01:15:157 (2) - ここと角度合わせるとgood ;)
今日もお美しい :oops: ありがと<3

[litoluna's Insane]
■ OD+1 ! ３つInsane diffあるのでOD8のdiff 欲しいです 8-)
:arrow:changed~
他はとくになしです、nice insane!!




good luck!
記載のないところはすべて直しました :)
なしゃさん いやしねさん Moddingありがとう!!

http://puu.sh/8BpU0.zip
Meg
1,617 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Meg

iyasine wrote:

ｵｲｼｭｯ requestありがとう～( ˘◡˘ )

[General]
■ litoluna's Insaneとwkyik's Insaneのwidescreen spportのチェックを外しましょう
■ 全diffのTagsに " kawaiwkyik " を追加しましょう

[Easy]
■ 00:13:712 (1) - finish合うと思います
■ 00:20:218 - add whistle
■ 00:21:302 - clap → whistle
■ 00:23:109 - add whistle
■ 00:31:061 (1) - sliderの中点を x:367 y:223に移動したらさらにブランケット綺麗になると思う :D
■ 00:33:230 (1) - remove NC アクセントで使うにしてもBGMとの組み合わせから考えると不自然だと思う！
■ 00:37:386 - remove whistle 前後の白線でバスドラムが鳴っててこの赤線では鳴ってないから混乱を招く可能性が =ω=　アクセントじゃないけど前のリズムと一定じゃなくなったからとりあえずNC置いてたんだー。消しました！
■ 00:40:459 - whistle → clap
■ 00:41:904 - ^
■ 00:46:242 (2) - ^
■ 01:10:097 - clap → whistle
■ 01:12:989 (3) - ^
■ 01:15:880 - ^
■ 01:23:651 - ^

all fixed!

[Insane]
■ 00:27:266 (1,2) - ちろにーさんとりとるなさんのdiffみたいに音つけてみない？
■ 00:33:049 - Drum sampleset + clap ? 00:33:410 (5) - Drum sampleset + finish ? この2点はお好みで :D ｶｯｺｲｲ
■ 00:40:097 - ここのclapは消して、次の00:40:459 - ここのwhistleをclapにしたほうが合うと思う～
■ 00:40:820 - remove clap
■ 00:44:254 (2) - clap
■ 00:44:434 (3) - remove clap
■ 00:44:796 - whistle → clap
■ 00:45:157 - remove clap
■ 00:46:242 - whistle → clap
■ 00:46:603 - remove clap
■ 00:46:784 - add whistle
■ 00:56:362 - remove whistle
■ 00:46:965 (4) - ここでこの音取りはｱｶｰｰｰﾝ！！！これ使いたいなら00:45:157 - ここからだと思うゾ
■ 01:27:446 (1) - finish → clap

all fixed
おい～～！！！前半のドラム全然聴けてないやないか！！！次同じmissしたら東京湾に沈める 8-) 　
イントロ～Aメロのwhistle抜けは省いた =ω= もういっかいよく聴いてみて！もしわからなかったら、りとるなさんのinsane見ればわかるっ
果たしておれも先生も東京に行けるかな･･･?じゃなくてごめんなさい。音付けは僕には早かった(白目)　とりあえずそれっぽくしました多分ぶん。

good luck!
先生modありがと～～
う○ちな音付けでごめんなさいあと東京湾は勘弁してください。
参考にします！！
Chirony
390 posts
Joined June 2012
Chirony

iyasine wrote:

ｵｲｼｭｯ requestありがとう～( ˘◡˘ )

[Chirony's Hard]
■ 00:26:362 - 00:26:724 - 00:27:085 - add whistle ?
■ 01:22:206 - ^
■ 01:23:109 - ^
■ 01:26:181 - ^
とてもいい hard :) ありがとう！(つω`*)
All fixed
いやしねさんmodありがとうございました！

http://puu.sh/8Bs9c.zip
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
Hi iMageさん, modding as you requested. I think KSHR is delusional from the fever.
Nice song :3

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in tags. Fix tags in litoluna's Normal and wkyik's Insane to: litoluna chirony kawaiwkyik no game no life shiro 白 ending
  2. BG dimension should be 1366x768? Try this: http://puu.sh/8FQAH.jpg
[Easy]
  1. I think HP2 is more suitable for this map.
  2. The kiai section is a bit disappointing, because the rhythm is too sparse. In the most exciting part of the song, you have the player only clicking once every 4 beats... Please fill the gaps (ie. add circles on the empty white ticks) throughout the kiai section! In my opinion, it's really strange that the rhythms in the verse are more interesting/complex than the chorus. I think the map may be worth remaking... I'd suggest you try to use simpler rhythms in the less exciting parts, and more complex rhythms in the kiai section.
  3. Some of the sliders go across strong beats where there should be hitclaps, and sound very empty. I suggest using slidertick hitsounds to cover those parts, because it sounds really empty without them. For example, parts like 00:29:977 and 00:31:422 and most of the sliders in kiai section would sound better if they had hitclap sounds on them. You could make an SC:2 with silent sliderslide and slidertick that sounds like SC:1 clap to use on these sliderticks.
  4. 00:28:169 (1,2) - Try to make a nicer blanket. http://puu.sh/8FRiY.jpg To do this, move the middle on slider (1) to x:88|y:308 and move the end of (1) to x:48|y:304 It will make a more consistent blanket. You can copy it to 00:27:085 and rotate 180 degrees for shape consistency.
  5. 00:31:061 (1,2,3) - This rhythm doesn't play well imo. I'd suggests just to use the same rhythm as 00:28:169 (1,2,3,4) since the two phrases have the same vocal and drum rhythm, and this will make it more intuitive to play for beginners.
  6. 00:48:953 (2) - End should also be finish? It has cymbal crash in music, just like the head.
  7. 00:58:531 (2,3) - Awkward flow. I suggest this: http://puu.sh/8FSfl.jpg
  8. 01:06:844 (2,1) - This is a bit tricky, as it's hard for the beginners to predict this rhythm. I suggest to eliminate the 3/2 beat spacing, and use a repeat slider instead. It will emphasize the drum figure better too imo. http://puu.sh/8FStm.jpg
  9. 01:08:651 (1) - Add finish on head?
  10. 01:23:109 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like beginner players will not know when to hit (2), so i suggest to make (1) into a 1/2 beat slider, since it matches the song too. http://puu.sh/8FSHM.jpg
  11. Remove useless inheriting sections at 00:39:103 and 00:48:681 and 00:48:953 and 00:49:224 and 00:49:495 and 00:49:766 and 00:50:037 Also, if there's no reason for 00:50:579 then remove it too, along with 00:50:940
    Overall, the technical aspects of the map are fine, but there's the issue with the kiai being too much simpler than the other parts of the map.
[litoluna's Normal]
  1. 00:09:374 (3) - Remove clap for consistency with 00:06:483 and 00:12:266 (2)
  2. 00:12:989 (4) - Remove clap from end for consistency.
  3. 00:16:603 (1) - Hitsounds in this section are too quiet imo. Please increase the volume.
  4. 00:18:049 (3) - I don't understand why you used drum sampleset on the end. Either use soft finish or soft whistle (kick) here.
  5. 00:27:446 (4) - I think it may be better to add clap with finish on the end.
  6. 00:51:302 (1) - The end of this slider is outside the grid (x:-1). Please move the end point inside the grid.
  7. 00:54:193 (4,1) - Swap the NC
  8. 00:55:459 (1,2) - (3,4) if you changed the NC as said above. This part feels really empty in terms of hitsounds, since your beats are all placed on red ticks. Consider adding a circle at 00:56:001 so it isn't so empty.
  9. 00:58:350 - Maybe add a circle here since vocals are on this beat.
  10. 01:00:699 (3) - For players who use 4:3 screen ratio, this overlaps with the hp bar. Would it be possible to move this somewhere else?
  11. 01:18:772 (2,3) - Make a blanket? http://puu.sh/8FVR5.jpg
[Chirony's Hard]
  1. 00:17:687 (3,4,5) - Spacing is a little confusing. Maybe this way will be better: http://puu.sh/8FZLi.jpg
  2. 00:34:495 (2) - I think Ctrl+G flows nicer.
  3. 01:27:989 (3) - I think it's better to remove this, as it feels more final with just the two circles ending on the drum hits.
    Nice map.
[wkyik's Insane]
  1. 00:17:236 (3,4) - I can't hear this 1/4 beat in the music.. is it really there? I suggest to remove the circle (3), which makes it the same rhythm as the other half of the phrase.
  2. 00:24:193 (5) - This slider doesn't seem to fit with the rhythm of the song. I suggest something like this instead: http://puu.sh/8G14O.jpg
  3. 00:29:615 (1,2) - This spacing is too small, and players might hit (2) early. I suggest increasing the spacing between these sliders to prevent confusion. Or you could decrease the spacing more to make a stack-like antijump like 00:32:507 (1,2) Same thing for all the other similar parts. I understand that you're trying to emphasize the guitar pattern, but the awkward spacing doesn't play well.
  4. 00:39:736 - In my opinion, this entire section could use larger spacing to give a heavier feeling. I think there's not enough difference between your spacing for 1/1 and 1/2, and it plays awkwardly. (High AR is not an excuse for bad spacing)
  5. 01:08:290 (4) - Ctrl+G flows better imo.
  6. 01:11:724 (2,4) - I think switching their positions around might play better, making a "star" pattern rather than a "zigzag". (http://puu.sh/8G1EH.png as opposed to http://puu.sh/8G1FC.png) I think the star makes 01:12:266 (1) feel stronger, which is important imo, since it is a strong beat.
    Great rhythmic concept.
[litoluna's Insane]
  1. 00:22:025 (5,1) - This could be confused for 1/2 spacing, since it's the same distance as 00:21:483 (4,5) I suggest to add a circle at 00:22:206 stacked with the head of (4). http://puu.sh/8G4yh.jpg
  2. 00:27:808 (6,1) - Same problem here. Try to increase the distance spacing between (6,1).
  3. 00:33:591 (4,1) - Same here.
  4. 01:06:844 (1) - Ctrl+G might be nicer.
    Good.
[Insane]
  1. In general, I feel like the spacing in a lot of parts in this map is too small, and doesn't feel good to play. Try to use some bigger spacing, especially when moving to a strong beat.
  2. 00:05:579 (3) - This note feels strong in the music, so it would make sense to put a jump to it like this: http://puu.sh/8G2fK.jpg It will play much nicer this way. (If you change this, you may need to adjust the spacing of the notes after it)
  3. 00:07:206 (3,4) - Ctrl+G flows better in my opinion: http://puu.sh/8G2ox.jpg
  4. 00:07:928 (1,2,3,4) - In this jump pattern, I feel like spacing between (1,2) is too big, and ruins the effect of the jump between (3,4) which needs to be bigger since (4) is the strongest beat in this pattern. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/8G2yK.jpg
  5. 00:10:639 (6,1) - Flow here is awkward. You could either curve it the other way http://puu.sh/8G2Ed.jpg or change the jump pattern to flow better like http://puu.sh/8G2Jn.jpg or http://puu.sh/8G2KM.jpg
  6. 00:18:049 (1,2) - Spacing feels too small to me.
  7. 00:24:193 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This kind of jump pattern doesn't feel suitable in such a calm part of the song. Maybe you should use this pattern sometime later in the map, maybe during kiai section.
  8. 00:27:627 (4) - Try to move this so it doesn't touch the hp bar
  9. 00:39:736 (1,2,1) - Spacing is too small. Your 1/1 spacing is almost the same as the 1/2 spacing you used after this.
  10. 00:50:037 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't flow well. I suggest to swap the positions of (2,3) so there's a larger spacing between (3,4). http://puu.sh/8G33f.jpg
  11. 00:52:748 (1,2,3,4) - Since all of your other spacing are really small, this jump is really sudden, and hard to predict. I suggest increasing spacing of the notes before it like this: http://puu.sh/8G39W.jpg so that the spacing change isn't so sudden.
  12. 00:54:555 (2) - Ctrl+G flows better.
  13. 00:57:989 (4,5) - Ctrl+G flows better.
  14. 00:58:892 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - A bit weird to play... and not very interesting. Maybe you can switch this pattern around with 00:24:193 (2,3,4,5,6,7) to make this more exciting and give the earlier part a calmer feeling.
  15. 01:06:302 (4,5) - I think this spacing would play better if it was a little bit bigger, so it's noticeably different from (1,2,3).
  16. 01:14:977 (2,3,4) - Use bigger spacing! Maybe try this: http://puu.sh/8G3ur.jpg
  17. 01:21:663 (1) - I think you should add whistle to the head.
  18. 01:22:748 (5,6) - Maybe swap these positions around for bigger (6,7) spacing?
  19. 01:25:639 (3,4,1) - Waa.. this is awkward to play, because there's a huge jump, and then really small spacing after it. I suggests moving (4) downward to give more space between (4,1) and smoother movement. http://puu.sh/8G3Gc.jpg
Good luck! :)
Meg
1,617 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Meg

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi iMageさん, modding as you requested. I think KSHR is delusional from the fever.
Nice song :3

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in tags. Fix tags in litoluna's Normal and wkyik's Insane to: litoluna chirony kawaiwkyik no game no life shiro 白 ending
  2. BG dimension should be 1366x768? Try this: http://puu.sh/8FQAH.jpg
[Easy]
  1. I think HP2 is more suitable for this map.
  2. The kiai section is a bit disappointing, because the rhythm is too sparse. In the most exciting part of the song, you have the player only clicking once every 4 beats... Please fill the gaps (ie. add circles on the empty white ticks) throughout the kiai section! In my opinion, it's really strange that the rhythms in the verse are more interesting/complex than the chorus. I think the map may be worth remaking... I'd suggest you try to use simpler rhythms in the less exciting parts, and more complex rhythms in the kiai section.
  3. Some of the sliders go across strong beats where there should be hitclaps, and sound very empty. I suggest using slidertick hitsounds to cover those parts, because it sounds really empty without them. For example, parts like 00:29:977 and 00:31:422 and most of the sliders in kiai section would sound better if they had hitclap sounds on them. You could make an SC:2 with silent sliderslide and slidertick that sounds like SC:1 clap to use on these sliderticks.
  4. 00:28:169 (1,2) - Try to make a nicer blanket. http://puu.sh/8FRiY.jpg To do this, move the middle on slider (1) to x:88|y:308 and move the end of (1) to x:48|y:304 It will make a more consistent blanket. You can copy it to 00:27:085 and rotate 180 degrees for shape consistency.
  5. 00:31:061 (1,2,3) - This rhythm doesn't play well imo. I'd suggests just to use the same rhythm as 00:28:169 (1,2,3,4) since the two phrases have the same vocal and drum rhythm, and this will make it more intuitive to play for beginners.
  6. 00:48:953 (2) - End should also be finish? It has cymbal crash in music, just like the head.
  7. 00:58:531 (2,3) - Awkward flow. I suggest this: http://puu.sh/8FSfl.jpg
  8. 01:06:844 (2,1) - This is a bit tricky, as it's hard for the beginners to predict this rhythm. I suggest to eliminate the 3/2 beat spacing, and use a repeat slider instead. It will emphasize the drum figure better too imo. http://puu.sh/8FStm.jpg
  9. 01:08:651 (1) - Add finish on head?
  10. 01:23:109 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like beginner players will not know when to hit (2), so i suggest to make (1) into a 1/2 beat slider, since it matches the song too. http://puu.sh/8FSHM.jpg
  11. Remove useless inheriting sections at 00:39:103 and 00:48:681 and 00:48:953 and 00:49:224 and 00:49:495 and 00:49:766 and 00:50:037 Also, if there's no reason for 00:50:579 then remove it too, along with 00:50:940
    Overall, the technical aspects of the map are fine, but there's the issue with the kiai being too much simpler than the other parts of the map.
remap on kiai time. other all fixed!
[Insane]
  1. In general, I feel like the spacing in a lot of parts in this map is too small, and doesn't feel good to play. Try to use some bigger spacing, especially when moving to a strong beat.
  2. 00:05:579 (3) - This note feels strong in the music, so it would make sense to put a jump to it like this: http://puu.sh/8G2fK.jpg It will play much nicer this way. (If you change this, you may need to adjust the spacing of the notes after it)
  3. 00:07:206 (3,4) - Ctrl+G flows better in my opinion: http://puu.sh/8G2ox.jpg
  4. 00:07:928 (1,2,3,4) - In this jump pattern, I feel like spacing between (1,2) is too big, and ruins the effect of the jump between (3,4) which needs to be bigger since (4) is the strongest beat in this pattern. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/8G2yK.jpg
  5. 00:10:639 (6,1) - Flow here is awkward. You could either curve it the other way http://puu.sh/8G2Ed.jpg or change the jump pattern to flow better like http://puu.sh/8G2Jn.jpg or http://puu.sh/8G2KM.jpg
  6. 00:18:049 (1,2) - Spacing feels too small to me.
  7. 00:24:193 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This kind of jump pattern doesn't feel suitable in such a calm part of the song. Maybe you should use this pattern sometime later in the map, maybe during kiai section.
  8. 00:27:627 (4) - Try to move this so it doesn't touch the hp bar
  9. 00:39:736 (1,2,1) - Spacing is too small. Your 1/1 spacing is almost the same as the 1/2 spacing you used after this.
  10. 00:50:037 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't flow well. I suggest to swap the positions of (2,3) so there's a larger spacing between (3,4). http://puu.sh/8G33f.jpg
  11. 00:52:748 (1,2,3,4) - Since all of your other spacing are really small, this jump is really sudden, and hard to predict. I suggest increasing spacing of the notes before it like this: http://puu.sh/8G39W.jpg so that the spacing change isn't so sudden.
  12. 00:54:555 (2) - Ctrl+G flows better.
  13. 00:57:989 (4,5) - Ctrl+G flows better.
  14. 00:58:892 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - A bit weird to play... and not very interesting. Maybe you can switch this pattern around with 00:24:193 (2,3,4,5,6,7) to make this more exciting and give the earlier part a calmer feeling.
  15. 01:06:302 (4,5) - I think this spacing would play better if it was a little bit bigger, so it's noticeably different from (1,2,3).
  16. 01:14:977 (2,3,4) - Use bigger spacing! Maybe try this: http://puu.sh/8G3ur.jpg
  17. 01:21:663 (1) - I think you should add whistle to the head.
  18. 01:22:748 (5,6) - Maybe swap these positions around for bigger (6,7) spacing?
  19. 01:25:639 (3,4,1) - Waa.. this is awkward to play, because there's a huge jump, and then really small spacing after it. I suggests moving (4) downward to give more space between (4,1) and smoother movement. http://puu.sh/8G3Gc.jpg
all fixed!!

Good luck! :)
thanks Cloud!!
your mod so amazing. maybe Insane better than last version 8-)
Meg
1,617 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Meg
cloudさんのGeneralのmodはこちらで直させてもらいました
updated
Chirony
390 posts
Joined June 2012
Chirony

CloudSplash16 wrote:

[Chirony's Hard]
  1. 00:17:687 (3,4,5) - Spacing is a little confusing. Maybe this way will be better: http://puu.sh/8FZLi.jpg
  2. 00:34:495 (2) - I think Ctrl+G flows nicer.
  3. 01:27:989 (3) - I think it's better to remove this, as it feels more final with just the two circles ending on the drum hits.
    Nice map.
All fixed
Good luck! :)
Thank you for modding!

http://puu.sh/8GqD9.zip
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi iMageさん, modding as you requested. I think KSHR is delusional from the fever.
Nice song :3

[litoluna's Normal]
  1. 00:09:374 (3) - Remove clap for consistency with 00:06:483 and 00:12:266 (2)
  2. 00:12:989 (4) - Remove clap from end for consistency.
  3. 00:16:603 (1) - Hitsounds in this section are too quiet imo. Please increase the volume.
  4. 00:18:049 (3) - I don't understand why you used drum sampleset on the end. Either use soft finish or soft whistle (kick) here.
  5. 00:27:446 (4) - I think it may be better to add clap with finish on the end.
  6. 00:51:302 (1) - The end of this slider is outside the grid (x:-1). Please move the end point inside the grid.
  7. 00:54:193 (4,1) - Swap the NC
  8. 00:55:459 (1,2) - (3,4) if you changed the NC as said above. This part feels really empty in terms of hitsounds, since your beats are all placed on red ticks. Consider adding a circle at 00:56:001 so it isn't so empty.
  9. 00:58:350 - Maybe add a circle here since vocals are on this beat.
  10. 01:00:699 (3) - For players who use 4:3 screen ratio, this overlaps with the hp bar. Would it be possible to move this somewhere else?
    :arrow:umm.keep it. if some problem,I'll fixed this~!
  11. 01:18:772 (2,3) - Make a blanket? http://puu.sh/8FVR5.jpg
[litoluna's Insane]
  1. 00:22:025 (5,1) - This could be confused for 1/2 spacing, since it's the same distance as 00:21:483 (4,5) I suggest to add a circle at 00:22:206 stacked with the head of (4). http://puu.sh/8G4yh.jpg
    :arrow:keep it.sorry
  2. 00:27:808 (6,1) - Same problem here. Try to increase the distance spacing between (6,1).^
  3. 00:33:591 (4,1) - Same here.^
  4. 01:06:844 (1) - Ctrl+G might be nicer.
    Good.
Good luck! :)
almost fixed~!!
thanks Cloud :D
http://www.4sync.com/zip/avTQNbXI/update.html
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia

CloudSplash16 wrote:

[wkyik's Insane]
  1. 00:17:236 (3,4) - I can't hear this 1/4 beat in the music.. is it really there? I suggest to remove the circle (3), which makes it the same rhythm as the other half of the phrase. ok
  2. 00:24:193 (5) - This slider doesn't seem to fit with the rhythm of the song. I suggest something like this instead: http://puu.sh/8G14O.jpg ok
  3. 00:29:615 (1,2) - This spacing is too small, and players might hit (2) early. I suggest increasing the spacing between these sliders to prevent confusion. Or you could decrease the spacing more to make a stack-like antijump like 00:32:507 (1,2) Same thing for all the other similar parts. I understand that you're trying to emphasize the guitar pattern, but the awkward spacing doesn't play well. i don't think so
  4. 00:39:736 - In my opinion, this entire section could use larger spacing to give a heavier feeling. I think there's not enough difference between your spacing for 1/1 and 1/2, and it plays awkwardly. (High AR is not an excuse for bad spacing) stack on last slider
  5. 01:08:290 (4) - Ctrl+G flows better imo. i think it's good for now
  6. 01:11:724 (2,4) - I think switching their positions around might play better, making a "star" pattern rather than a "zigzag". (http://puu.sh/8G1EH.png as opposed to http://puu.sh/8G1FC.png) I think the star makes 01:12:266 (1) feel stronger, which is important imo, since it is a strong beat. I will consider
    Great rhythmic concept.

Good luck! :)
thanks for mod

code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: oracion.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 46242
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 24193
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Oracion (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:オラシオン (TV Size)
Artist:Kayano Ai
ArtistUnicode:茅野愛衣
Creator:iMage--
Version:wkyik's Insane
Source:ノーゲーム･ノーライフ
Tags:litoluna chirony kawaiwkyik no game no life shiro 白 ending kawaiwkyik
BeatmapID:417298
BeatmapSetID:172013

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"vid.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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85459,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
86001,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
87446,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,40,0,0
88440,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,128
Combo2 : 219,126,226
Combo3 : 255,255,117
Combo4 : 255,81,81
Combo5 : 83,83,255

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Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
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[General]
  1. Why is "白" in tags? Just curious... Who will search that?
[litoluna's Insane]
  1. Hardest difficulty in set; why not raise the Health Drain?
  2. 00:42:446 - 00:42:537 (7) - Add whistle to both of these places match song.
  3. 00:50:669 (2,4) - Add hit sounds here sounds cool.
  4. 01:08:651 - Add finish hitsound.
  5. 01:14:073 (4,5,1) - Suggest to make equal spacing since you don't do this anywhere else.
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:121 (4) - Add finish.
  2. 00:07:567 - Add finish.
  3. 00:09:916 - Add finish.
  4. 00:10:459 (5) - Add finish.
  5. 00:12:808 (4) - Add finish.
  6. 00:13:350 (3) - Add finish.
  7. 00:26:362 (4,1) - Suggest to switch new combo between these notes.
  8. 00:38:922 - Add a note here.
  9. 01:08:651 - Add a finish.
  10. 01:25:910 - Add a note.
[wkyik's Insane]
  1. 00:13:712 - Really need a clap here.
  2. 00:16:061 (4) - Add a whistle.
  3. 00:16:242 (5,6,7,8) - Suggest you add hitsounds here.
  4. 00:38:290 - Add a note here to match the song?
  5. 00:57:085 (1,2) - I would say its better as one long 1/1 slider.
  6. 01:00:699 (1) - Add a clap.
[Chirony's Hard]
  1. 01:11:904 (3,4) - Switch these two notes' positions, feels random currently.
[litoluna's Normal]
  1. 00:57:085 - Add finish.
Easy is good!
Good luck~
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