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M4M request

Red mods means must be fixed. Mods with question marks are only suggestion.

here's my mod. I'll wait for yours then

[Arisa]
  1. I think DS 0.7 is too low and might form overlaps, please raise it to at least 0.9 or 1.0
  2. 00:07:406 (1,2,1) - Try to form a blanket here, these placement looks weird
  3. 00:19:145 (2) - Add clap plz
  4. 00:33:493 (1,2,3,4) - Make these a perfect square formation. (move (1) a little bit)
  5. 00:36:971 (5) - NC remember this is Easy
  6. 00:47:406 (1) - Try this instead: http://puu.sh/1vBmm
    code
    392,120,47406,6,0,P|392:288|40:104|40:288,1,400,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  7. 00:59:580 (5,6) - Sliders with 2 reverses should be avoided especially on Easy
  8. 01:18:710 (1) - Remove NC
That's all.

[Ganbei]
  1. 00:09:145 (3) - Split into 2 sliders will works better
  2. 00:42:189 (3) - Try copypaste 00:40:449 (1) - and ctrl+h and ctrl+G
  3. 00:47:406 (1,2) - A slider with one reverse works better here.
  4. 00:59:580 (1,2) - Add clap on end?
  5. 01:09:580 (6,1) - Try make a blanket here
  6. 01:11:319 (2) - x:136 y:224 for better flow
  7. 01:16:102 (4) - Confusing shape, simple curve might work better
  8. 01:18:710 (1) - Remove NC
That's all..

[Arashi]
  1. Kiai sections doesn't have any hitsound mapped on it, why? Rules and Guidelines obligates so.
  2. 00:19:145 (7,8) - Merge please, (8) is too hard to hit
  3. 00:30:884 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 00:34:797 (1) - ^
  5. 01:28:167 (3,4) - It'll be good if you could make blanket here
Nice diff here o.o

[Anastasia]
  1. AR -1
  2. 00:45:449 (4,1) - Overlap
  3. 00:55:232 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Unstack please, just flow them like streams
O.o

[Akiko]
Nothing wrong here o.o)b

Good luck ToGlette! :)
LQA20Ans

inverness wrote:

[Arashi]
  1. Kiai sections doesn't have any hitsound mapped on it, why? Rules and Guidelines obligates so.
    ->It's not finished yet T.T I'll finish it asap
  2. 00:19:145 (7,8) - Merge please, (8) is too hard to hit ->change slider one more repeat.
  3. 00:30:884 (1) - Remove NC -> fixed
  4. 00:34:797 (1) - ^ -> fixed
  5. 01:28:167 (3,4) - It'll be good if you could make blanket here -> fixed...?
file : http://puu.sh/1vNhQ

I'll finish the hitsound asap...
Topic Starter
ToGlette

inverness wrote:

M4M request

Red mods means must be fixed. Mods with question marks are only suggestion.

here's my mod. I'll wait for yours then

[Arisa]
  1. I think DS 0.7 is too low and might form overlaps, please raise it to at least 0.9 or 1.0 I think it fine XP
  2. 00:07:406 (1,2,1) - Try to form a blanket here, these placement looks weird ^
  3. 00:19:145 (2) - Add clap plz thanks!
  4. 00:33:493 (1,2,3,4) - Make these a perfect square formation. (move (1) a little bit) fixed!
  5. 00:36:971 (5) - NC remember this is Easy fixed on last update
  6. 00:47:406 (1) - Try this instead: http://puu.sh/1vBmm Easy fixed on last update
    code
    392,120,47406,6,0,P|392:288|40:104|40:288,1,400,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  7. 00:59:580 (5,6) - Sliders with 2 reverses should be avoided especially on Easy fixed
  8. 01:18:710 (1) - Remove NC thanks!
That's all.

[Ginbei]
  1. 00:09:145 (3) - Split into 2 sliders will works better done
  2. 00:42:189 (3) - Try copypaste 00:40:449 (1) - and ctrl+h and ctrl+G awesome
  3. 00:47:406 (1,2) - A slider with one reverse works better here. I'll keep this for now
  4. 00:59:580 (1,2) - Add clap on end? thanks!
  5. 01:09:580 (6,1) - Try make a blanket here don't get this...
  6. 01:11:319 (2) - x:136 y:224 for better flow oh nice
  7. 01:16:102 (4) - Confusing shape, simple curve might work better I guess it's fixed
  8. 01:18:710 (1) - Remove NC right
That's all..

[Anastasia]
  1. AR -1 nah AR 7 might be too slow imo XP
  2. 00:45:449 (4,1) - Overlap done
  3. 00:55:232 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Unstack please, just flow them like streams oh this is nice XD
O.o

Good luck ToGlette! :)
thanks for your awesome mod inverness!
P o M u T a
hi.

All diff , try (clap) http://puu.sh/1vWBm

Alisa

AudioLeadIn: 1004 → 1000 change please.(note pad)

00:07:406 (1) - Add finish

00:07:406 (1,2,3,4) - try this.
328,72,7406,2,2,P|504:72|504:312|328:312,1,400
256,192,10015,1,0,0:0:0
184,312,10884,2,2,P|8:312|8:72|184:72,1,400
256,192,13493,1,0,0:0:0

00:23:058 (1) - Add finish

00:26:536 (1) - ^
00:56:102 (1) - ^ (head)
01:10:015 (1) - ^ (head)

Ginbei

AudioLeadIn: 993 → 1000 change please.(note pad)

00:07:406 (1) - Add finish
00:18:710 (2) - try this.
00:40:449 (1) - ^ (head)
00:56:102 (1) - ^ (head)
00:58:710 (1,2,3) - fmm , difficult stack note. try this. http://puu.sh/1vWx1
01:10:015 (1) - Add finish

Arashi

AudioLeadIn: 1004 → 1000 change please(note pad)

00:07:406 (2) - Add NC.

Clap... try this . All note. http://puu.sh/1vWBm

Anastasia

AudioLeadIn: 993 → 1000 change please(note pad)

00:07:406 (1) - Add finish.
00:26:536 (1) - ^
01:03:058 (1) - ^
01:04:797 (1) - ^
01:10:015 (1) - ^
01:16:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - tobe style ni wa oni desu xP
01:18:276 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:015 (1) - Remove NC

Akiko

AudioLeadIn: 1004 → 1000 change please (note pad)

00:07:406 (1) - Add Finish
00:23:058 (1) - ^
00:26:536 (1) - remove clap , add finish.
00:56:102 (1) - Add finish (head)
01:10:015 (1) - ^
01:10:776 (3) - remove finish ._.
this diff ... slider end stream ... many many... try this ? http://puu.sh/1vWMh and http://puu.sh/1vWMt

good luck :3
LQA20Ans

P o M u T a wrote:

Arashi

AudioLeadIn: 1004 → 1000 change please(note pad) -> fixed

00:07:406 (2) - Add NC. -> fixed

Clap... try this . All note. http://puu.sh/1vWBm -> I'll try :3
Thanks for mod.
Topic Starter
ToGlette

P o M u T a wrote:

hi.

All diff , try (clap) http://puu.sh/1vWBm

Alisa

AudioLeadIn: 1004 → 1000 change please.(note pad)

00:07:406 (1) - Add finish

00:07:406 (1,2,3,4) - try this.
328,72,7406,2,2,P|504:72|504:312|328:312,1,400
256,192,10015,1,0,0:0:0
184,312,10884,2,2,P|8:312|8:72|184:72,1,400
256,192,13493,1,0,0:0:0

00:23:058 (1) - Add finish

00:26:536 (1) - ^
00:56:102 (1) - ^ (head)
01:10:015 (1) - ^ (head)

Ginbei

AudioLeadIn: 993 → 1000 change please.(note pad)

00:07:406 (1) - Add finish
00:18:710 (2) - try this.
00:40:449 (1) - ^ (head)
00:56:102 (1) - ^ (head)
00:58:710 (1,2,3) - fmm , difficult stack note. try this. http://puu.sh/1vWx1
01:10:015 (1) - Add finish

Anastasia

AudioLeadIn: 993 → 1000 change please(note pad)

00:07:406 (1) - Add finish.
00:26:536 (1) - ^
01:03:058 (1) - ^
01:04:797 (1) - ^
01:10:015 (1) - ^
01:16:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - tobe style ni wa oni desu xP
01:18:276 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:015 (1) - Remove NC

good luck :3
all fixed except for

01:16:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - tobe style ni wa oni desu xP
Thanks P o M u T a!
Star Stream
From my queue

[General]
  1. 모든 BG 이미지 크기 최대 1024*768 로 바꿔주세요
  2. Akiko 난이도 리드 인 1000으로 맞춰주세요
[Arisa]
  1. 00:24:797 - 공백 너무 길어요, 브레이크 넣어주세요
  2. 00:59:580 (1,3) - 너무 단조로워요, 2/1슬라로 만들어보세요
  3. 01:08:276 (3) - 피니시
  4. 01:11:754 (3,4,1) - 이런 노트 정확히 90도로 맞추실때 슬라이더 이용하시면 편해요. 예를들면 3번 슬라이더 복붙해서 ctrl+, 하시고 3번에 스택시키셔서 그 슬라에 정확히 스택돼게 놓으시면 정확히 90도로 돼요
  5. 01:27:841 (4) - 뉴콤보?
[Ginbei]
  1. 00:30:884 (3) - 6번슬라 꼬리에 정확히 스택시켜주세요
  2. 00:38:710 (3,4) - 이런 패턴 찍으실때 00:36:971 (1,2) - 이런 이전 패턴 복붙하시면 완벽하게 찍으실수 있어요
  3. 00:40:449 (1) - 이런식으로 오버랩 피해주세요

[Arashi]
  1. 00:07:406 (1,2,4,5) - 너무 어려워요, 그냥 슬라만으로 찍어주세요 (모든 노트들)
  2. 00:19:145 (7) - 오버랩 피하시고, 서클2개-슬라 한개 로 찍어보세요. 노래랑 더 어울려요
  3. 00:33:493 (1) - 별로 보기 안좋아요, 정확히 스택해주시거나 떼어주세요
  4. 00:39:580 (3,4) - 사이 디스탠스 똑같게 해주세요
  5. 01:01:102 (5,6) - 5번이나 6번에 뉴콤
  6. 01:18:058 (4) - 이전에 5힛 슬라를 너무 많이 쓰셔서 헷갈려요, 01:18:493 (1,2) - 지워주시고 슬라에 화살표 2개 더 넣어주세요
  7. 01:19:797 (5) - ^
[Anastasia]
  1. 00:10:015 (7) - 허전해요, 화살표 하나 넣어주세요
솔직히, 버블받기는 조금 어려울거같아요. 더 깔끔하게 리맵해주세요

[Akiko]
  1. 이것도, 더 낫긴 한데 더 깔끔하게 리맵하시는게 좋을거같네요
이지~하드 난이도는 직접 다시 보셔서 더 깔끔하게 만들어주시고, 인세인 2개는 리맵해주세요

Good luck with rank~
Topic Starter
ToGlette

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[General]
  1. 모든 BG 이미지 크기 최대 1024*768 로 바꿔주세요
  2. Akiko 난이도 리드 인 1000으로 맞춰주세요
[Arisa]
  1. 00:24:797 - 공백 너무 길어요, 브레이크 넣어주세요
  2. 00:59:580 (1,3) - 너무 단조로워요, 2/1슬라로 만들어보세요
  3. 01:08:276 (3) - 피니시
  4. 01:11:754 (3,4,1) - 이런 노트 정확히 90도로 맞추실때 슬라이더 이용하시면 편해요. 예를들면 3번 슬라이더 복붙해서 ctrl+, 하시고 3번에 스택시키셔서 그 슬라에 정확히 스택돼게 놓으시면 정확히 90도로 돼요
  5. 01:27:841 (4) - 뉴콤보?
[Ginbei]
  1. 00:30:884 (3) - 6번슬라 꼬리에 정확히 스택시켜주세요
  2. 00:38:710 (3,4) - 이런 패턴 찍으실때 00:36:971 (1,2) - 이런 이전 패턴 복붙하시면 완벽하게 찍으실수 있어요
  3. 00:40:449 (1) - 이런식으로 오버랩 피해주세요

[Anastasia]
  1. 00:10:015 (7) - 허전해요, 화살표 하나 넣어주세요
솔직히, 버블받기는 조금 어려울거같아요. 더 깔끔하게 리맵해주세요

이지~하드 난이도는 직접 다시 보셔서 더 깔끔하게 만들어주시고, 인세인 2개는 리맵해주세요

Good luck with rank~
일단
00:59:580 (1,3) - 너무 단조로워요, 2/1슬라로 만들어보세요
빼고는 다 고쳤고...

리맵의 경우는 일단 아직 -kevincela-님께서 진행중이신 모드가 남아있기에, 모딩을 받고 난뒤 다시 생각해보겠습니다.

모딩 감사합니다!
LQA20Ans

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[Arashi]
  1. 00:07:406 (1,2,4,5) - 너무 어려워요, 그냥 슬라만으로 찍어주세요 (모든 노트들) -> 몇개 빼고 다 바꿈.
  2. 00:19:145 (7) - 오버랩 피하시고, 서클2개-슬라 한개 로 찍어보세요. 노래랑 더 어울려요 -> 어울리긴 하는데 뭔가 더 어려워져서 안바꿨습니다.
  3. 00:33:493 (1) - 별로 보기 안좋아요, 정확히 스택해주시거나 떼어주세요 -> 수정
  4. 00:39:580 (3,4) - 사이 디스탠스 똑같게 해주세요 -> 수정
  5. 01:01:102 (5,6) - 5번이나 6번에 뉴콤 -> 수정
  6. 01:18:058 (4) - 이전에 5힛 슬라를 너무 많이 쓰셔서 헷갈려요, 01:18:493 (1,2) - 지워주시고 슬라에 화살표 2개 더 넣어주세요 -> 느낌이 좀 이상해서 안고쳤습니다.
  7. 01:19:797 (5) - ^ -> 위와 마찬가지
수정완료. 모딩 감사합니다.
LQA20Ans

-kevincela- wrote:

[Arashi]

  1. 00:00:884 (2,3) - This 3/4 gap feels quite strange,as you haven't kept this unconsistency later... What about instead adding a note at 00:01:210 - to make this a 1/2 gap? This doublet does actually play pretty good within the guitar chords,so why don't you use this setting? The same goes for 00:03:058 (3) - and 00:04:363 (2,3) - ! -> Fixed. It's more rythmical than before. thx
  2. 00:27:841 (4) - This is a really nazi and little thing,just fix if you want: what do you think about adding a whistle at this slider's end? This should follow the high guitar chord which is being played there... Anyways,not really an important thing. -> Not fixed. It's weird to me...
  3. 00:36:102 (4,5) - This pattern does not sound that bad,but anyways what do you think about using a 1/2 ~ 3/4 slider approach to make a nice to play pattern which follows perfectly the vocals being played there? Here I made a pattern which follows this construction and flows pretty good within 00:35:884 (3,1) - ,see if you like it!
    SPOILER
    (no image,puush is being mad at me right now >_>
    292,96,36102,2,0,P|336:89|368:68,1,75
    388,48,36428,2,0,P|408:112|400:164,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    ->Fixed. Nice idea!
  4. 00:39:580 (3) - I guess you missed a soft finish here? There are some cymbals being ignored right there! Add it,as it fits pretty good with his emphasis with these cymbals! -> Fixed.
  5. 00:47:406 (3) - What about adding a New Combo here? It works pretty good to delimitate the SV change and to determinate too the new vocal phrase! However this is a really little thing,just fix if you want. -> Fixed. I fit the timing of vocal phrase and SV change.
  6. 00:52:732 (1) - Wait...What is this spinner's end supposed to follow? I see there's a drum being played there,but this spinner does not really fit with any other instruments. What about instead moving this spinner 1/2 back,until 00:53:928 - ? It makes much more sense rhythmically talking
    -> Fixed. That rhythm... Actually I variate the rhythm like when I transcribe the anime song for piano XD
  7. 01:03:819 (x)- Not really a big deal,but what about adding a note here to make 01:03:710 (2,3) - a triplet? Imho it isn't really hard to catch,and it follows completely the vocals being played there, as it is clearly a 1/4 one. If you do that,the same applies for 01:05:558 - ! -> Fixed
  8. 01:09:145 (3) - I know you wanted to do a jump with 01:09:363 (1) - ,but anyways this stack does not really fit with the song itself,as the song is still progressing this stack is really unneded. What about instread doing a fun to play jump pattern unstacking this note and tweaking a bit the whole pattern? Here's what I have done:
    SPOILER
    60,316,69145,1,4,0:0:0
    20,196,69363,6,0,P|11:175|11:144,5,48.7499977684022
    44,124,70015,6,0,P|96:76|156:108|156:108|192:44,1,194.999991073609,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    272,80,70667,1,0,0:0:0
    344,12,70884,2,0,P|376:100|464:72|464:72|496:104,1,194.999991073609
    ->Fixed. But 1.3x is little bit far for Hard diff. So I change to 1.2x
  9. 01:15:232 (6) - Why don't you use some normal hitsounds on the top of this slider,like before? It will mantain your pattern consistency,other than sounding really well! -> Fixed
  10. From 01:24:145 - to the end of the song, I have some little hitsounds suggestions to make the whole hitsound pattern there fit with the synth,making it more complete: feel free to ignore them!
    SPOILER
    01:24:363 (2) - Soft finish at the beginning to follow the synthesizer's high pitch?
    01:24:797 (3) - Soft finish,same reasons
    01:25:232 (5) - Soft finished at the beginning and ending -> Not fixed. It's not needed in here imo
    01:26:536 (4) - Soft finish just at the beginning
    01:27:406 (1) - ^
    01:28:167 (3) - ^
    -> awesome idea! Thank you :3
    That's pretty good! :O I didn't find really anything major,as you see there were only various rhythm/hitsounds suggestions.
    Sorry for my useless mod here! :U -> It's very useful to me :D
Thanks for your awesome mod!

복붙해주세요
osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: SELF PRODUCER.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 7351
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 396,41053
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:SELF PRODUCER (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:SELF PRODUCER (TV Size)
Artist:Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:Chihara Minori
Creator:ToGlette
Version:Arashi
Source:Onii-chan dakedo Ai Sae Areba Kankeinai yo ne!
Tags:oniiai lena LQA20Ans
BeatmapID:192680
BeatmapSetID:65669

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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228,56,35884,1,0,0:0:0
292,96,36102,2,0,P|336:89|368:68,1,75
388,48,36428,2,0,P|408:112|400:164,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,212,36971,5,0,0:0:0
300,280,37189,2,0,P|364:320,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,340,37841,1,0,0:0:0
212,280,38058,2,0,P|148:320,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
177,210,38710,6,0,P|148:232|104:236,1,75
60,184,39145,2,0,P|89:162|133:158,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,136,39580,1,4,0:0:0
260,92,39797,2,0,P|260:52,4,37.5
276,164,40449,6,0,P|296:228|264:300,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,336,41102,1,0,0:0:0
336,336,41319,2,0,P|381:286|459:278,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,136,42189,6,0,P|456:68,2,75,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,184,42841,1,0,0:0:0
300,140,43058,2,0,P|264:132|224:140,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
244,212,43493,2,0,P|208:220|168:212,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,148,43928,6,0,P|76:168|24:240,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
88,280,44580,1,0,0:0:0
156,312,44797,2,0,P|128:344|96:352,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,236,45449,1,0,0:0:0
152,236,45667,2,0,P|128:216|80:208,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
45,107,46102,2,0,P|69:127|112:136,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,96,46536,1,8,0:0:0
176,96,46754,6,0,P|211:126|260:128,2,97.4999955368044,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,44,47406,2,0,P|335:76|350:177,1,194.999991073609,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
448,196,48058,1,0,0:0:0
448,196,48276,2,0,P|396:264|294:253,1,194.999991073609,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,304,48928,5,0,0:0:0
212,304,49145,2,0,P|124:298|76:212,1,194.999991073609,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
174,206,49797,1,0,0:0:0
196,112,50015,2,0,P|246:135|269:173,2,97.4999955368044,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,140,50667,2,0,P|102:85|127:50,1,97.4999955368044,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,50993,12,4,52623,0:0:0
256,192,52732,12,4,53928,0:0:0
175,202,54580,5,8,0:0:0
200,348,54906,5,8,0:0:0
313,252,55232,5,12,0:0:0
408,244,55449,2,0,P|408:196,5,48.7499977684022
408,144,56102,6,0,P|364:144|364:144|284:88|228:148,1,194.999991073609,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,216,56754,1,0,0:0:0
256,304,56971,2,0,P|160:332|88:280,1,194.999991073609,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,184,57623,1,0,0:0:0
100,88,57841,6,0,P|143:66,1,48.7499977684022
220,124,58167,2,0,P|246:83,1,48.7499977684022,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,80,58493,1,0,0:0:0
344,80,58710,2,0,P|384:80|440:56,2,97.4999955368044
248,84,59363,5,0,0:0:0
248,84,59580,2,0,P|208:120|208:120|144:80|72:120,1,194.999991073609,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,192,60232,1,0,0:0:0
74,265,60449,2,0,P|144:304|208:264|208:264|248:300,1,194.999991073609
344,328,61102,1,0,0:0:0
344,328,61319,6,0,P|404:304|404:304|400:232|476:204,1,194.999991073609,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
436,116,61971,2,0,P|388:116|348:88,1,97.4999955368044
276,152,62406,2,0,P|292:196|268:240,2,97.4999955368044
248,60,63058,6,0,P|196:104|196:104|144:60|76:72,1,194.999991073609,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
60,168,63710,1,0,0:0:0
60,168,63819,1,0,0:0:0
60,168,63928,2,0,P|104:188|128:232,1,97.4999955368044
32,256,64363,2,0,P|16:308,2,48.7499977684022,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,308,64797,6,0,P|144:376|232:340|232:340|284:368,1,194.999991073609,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,268,65449,1,0,0:0:0
296,268,65558,1,0,0:0:0
296,268,65667,2,0,P|296:212|268:180,1,97.4999955368044
184,140,66102,2,0,P|149:176,2,48.7499977684022,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,92,66536,6,0,P|336:56|392:104|392:104|444:60,1,194.999991073609,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,156,67189,1,0,0:0:0
472,156,67406,2,0,P|496:204|488:252,2,97.4999955368044
400,224,68058,1,0,0:0:0
400,224,68276,6,0,P|348:256|264:248,1,146.249993305207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,232,68710,2,0,P|197:274|152:298,1,97.4999955368044
40,312,69145,1,4,0:0:0
20,196,69363,6,0,P|11:175|11:144,5,48.7499977684022
44,124,70015,6,0,P|96:76|156:108|156:108|192:44,1,194.999991073609,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,80,70667,1,0,0:0:0
344,12,70884,2,0,P|376:100|464:72|464:72|496:104,1,194.999991073609
480,200,71536,5,0,0:0:0
480,200,71754,2,0,P|472:252,1,48.7499977684022
376,240,72080,2,0,P|343:281,1,48.7499977684022
256,240,72406,1,0,0:0:0
256,240,72623,2,0,P|212:232|160:260|160:260,2,97.4999955368044
320,168,73276,5,0,0:0:0
320,168,73493,2,0,P|328:80|240:64|240:64|204:32,1,194.999991073609,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
108,44,74145,1,0,0:0:0
32,108,74363,2,0,P|84:176|28:240|28:240|60:280,1,194.999991073609
124,352,75015,1,0,0:0:0
204,296,75232,2,0,P|264:320|312:272|312:272|340:268,1,146.249993305207
384,252,75667,2,0,P|412:292|412:348,2,97.4999955368044
452,176,76319,6,0,P|448:124|420:88,2,97.4999955368044
356,156,76971,2,0,P|288:144|232:88,2,146.249993305207,6|0|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,64,77841,1,0,0:0:0
232,92,78058,2,0,P|184:80,2,48.7499977684022
184,176,78493,5,0,0:0:0
184,176,78602,1,0,0:0:0
184,176,78710,2,0,P|172:244|116:300,2,146.249993305207,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,204,79580,1,0,0:0:0
119,297,79797,2,0,P|120:348,2,48.7499977684022
216,316,80232,5,0,0:0:0
216,316,80341,1,0,0:0:0
216,316,80449,2,0,P|252:272|268:220|268:220|300:200,1,146.249993305207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,232,80884,1,0,0:0:0
396,152,81102,1,0,0:0:0
360,60,81319,1,4,0:0:0
360,60,81428,2,0,P|312:72|264:64,1,97.4999955368044,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,60,81754,2,0,P|216:104,4,48.7499977684022,0|0|0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,82297,12,4,83927,0:0:0
152,104,84145,5,0,0:0:0
228,112,84363,2,0,P|208:160|152:180,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,172,84797,1,0,0:0:0
76,232,85015,1,0,0:0:0
108,300,85232,2,0,P|68:312|44:340,2,75,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,336,85884,5,0,0:0:0
216,272,86102,1,0,0:0:0
216,272,86210,2,0,P|284:240,1,75
320,228,86536,2,0,P|348:256|348:296|348:296,2,75,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,116,87406,6,0,P|256:96|292:116|292:116,2,75,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,132,87949,1,0,0:0:0
204,204,88167,2,0,P|256:160|308:204|308:204,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,260,88710,1,4,0:0:0
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As your req...

Arisa


00:07:406 (1,3) - : 슬라에 휘슬을 넣을 필요는 없을 것 같습니다.

00:14:363 (1) - : 턴에서 휘슬 말고 피니쉬 넣어주세요.

00:16:102 (2) - : 00:14:363 (1) - 과 비슷한 패턴으로 해보시는게 어떨까요? 바꾸셧다면 턴에서 휘슬 말고 피니쉬 넣어주세요. (제안)


00:17:841 (1) - : 시작과 끝에 피니쉬

00:43:928 (3) - : 이지에 이건 좀 부적합한거 같네여, 그리고 00:44:797 (4) - << 이것도 이지에 부적합한 위치에요. (쳐서 점수나오고 가려지기 떄문에)

00:56:102 (1,3) - : 슬라전체에 휘슬을 넣을 필요는 없을 것 같습니다.

01:03:058 (1) - : Finish

01:06:536 (1) - : ^

01:09:145 (4) - : 크랩 제거

01:10:015 (1) - : 앞 휘슬 제거, 슬라 휘슬 제거

01:11:754 (1) - : ^

01:13:493 (3,5) - : 슬라 휘슬 제거

Ginbei


00:14:363 (1,2,1,2) - : 노래 사운드에 맞게 피니쉬 넣는 것을 제안합니다. (제안)

00:28:276 (5,6) - : 끝에 크랩

00:33:493 (1) - : 앞 휘슬 제거하고 피니쉬 추가

00:37:406 (2,3,4) - : 아예 겹치시는게 어떤가요? (제안)

00:38:710 (1) - : 박자가 않 맞는거 같네요..

00:39:579 (2) - : 앞 부분 크랩 제거하고 피니쉬 추가

00:40:884 (2,3,4) - : 아예 겹치시는게 어떤가요? (제안)

00:42:189 (5) - : NC ,하셧으면 00:42:189 (1,2,3) - : ^

00:43:928 (1) - : 앞 부분 휘슬 제거 피니쉬 추가

00:45:667 (1) - : 피니쉬 추가

00:46:971 (4) - : 피니쉬 제거

00:56:102 (1) - : 앞 부분에 피니쉬 추가

01:01:754 (4,5,6) - : 아예 겹치시는게 어떤가요? (제안)

01:03:058 (1) - : 앞 부분에 피니쉬 추가

01:06:536 (1) - : 앞 부분에 휘슬 제거 피니쉬 추가

01:08:276 (1,4) - : 피니쉬 추가

Arashi


00:19:145 (7) - : 위치가 헷갈리네요, 하드 디프인데... x:300 y:268로 옮기시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

00:50:015 (4) - : 턴에 크랩 제거

00:54:580 (1,1) - : 크랩하지 마시고 피니쉬로 해보세요 (제안)

Anastasia


00:17:189 (5) - : 여기에 서클 넣으세요.

00:18:058 (4) - : 앞 부분에 휘슬제거

00:34:363 (2) - : 뒷 부분 크랩제거

00:34:797 (3) - : 앞 부분만 휘슬로 해주세요

00:38:493 (1) - : 전에 나오는 것과 거리가 좁아서 햇갈릴거 같네요... 00:39:145 (3) - 과 위치를 바꿔보세요. (제안)

00:40:449 (1) - : 앞 부분에 휘슬제거하고 피니쉬

00:43:928 (1) - : 앞 부분에 피니쉬

00:44:580 (2) - : 크랩제거하시고 00:44:797 (3) - 앞 부분에 크랩 추가

00:45:667 (1) - : 앞 부분에 휘슬제거하고 피니쉬

00:46:319 (3) - : 크랩제거하시고 00:46:536 (4) - 앞 부분에 휘슬 제거하시고 크랩 추가

00:47:406 (1) - : 앞 부분에 피니쉬

01:06:536 (1) - : 앞 부분에 휘슬제거하고 피니쉬

01:08:276 (1) - : ^

01:28:493 (2,3) - : 피니쉬를 추천합니다! (제안)

예;; 모딩이 끝났습니다.

처음만드신거 같은데... 나쁘지 않게 만들어졌네요 ㅋ

그래도 리매핑이 조금 필요한거 같네요;;

제 뉴비 모딩은 그러면 여기서 마치겠습니다...

GL~
Topic Starter
ToGlette

W h i t e wrote:

As your req...

SPOILER

Arisa


00:07:406 (1,3) - : 슬라에 휘슬을 넣을 필요는 없을 것 같습니다. 오케이

00:14:363 (1) - : 턴에서 휘슬 말고 피니쉬 넣어주세요. 오케이

00:16:102 (2) - : 00:14:363 (1) - 과 비슷한 패턴으로 해보시는게 어떨까요? 바꾸셧다면 턴에서 휘슬 말고 피니쉬 넣어주세요. (제안)


00:17:841 (1) - : 시작과 끝에 피니쉬 오케이

00:43:928 (3) - : 이지에 이건 좀 부적합한거 같네여, 그리고 00:44:797 (4) - << 이것도 이지에 부적합한 위치에요. (쳐서 점수나오고 가려지기 떄문에)
- 3은 보이는데 4는 가려져서 3 약간 비틀고 4 고쳤습니다
00:56:102 (1,3) - : 슬라전체에 휘슬을 넣을 필요는 없을 것 같습니다.

01:03:058 (1) - : Finish 오케이

01:06:536 (1) - : ^ 오케이

01:09:145 (4) - : 크랩 제거 오케이

01:10:015 (1) - : 앞 휘슬 제거, 슬라 휘슬 제거 오케이

01:11:754 (1) - : ^ 오케이

01:13:493 (3,5) - : 슬라 휘슬 제거 오케이

Ginbei


00:14:363 (1,2,1,2) - : 노래 사운드에 맞게 피니쉬 넣는 것을 제안합니다. (제안) 저는 맞는거 같은데...

00:28:276 (5,6) - : 끝에 크랩 오케이

00:33:493 (1) - : 앞 휘슬 제거하고 피니쉬 추가 오케이

00:37:406 (2,3,4) - : 아예 겹치시는게 어떤가요? (제안) 그냥 이대로 할래요.

00:38:710 (1) - : 박자가 않 맞는거 같네요.. 요건 궁리좀 해볼게요.

00:39:579 (2) - : 앞 부분 크랩 제거하고 피니쉬 추가 오케이

00:40:884 (2,3,4) - : 아예 겹치시는게 어떤가요? (제안) 그냥 이대로 할래요.

00:42:189 (5) - : NC ,하셧으면 00:42:189 (1,2,3) - : ^ NC오케이 그냥 이대로 할래요.

00:43:928 (1) - : 앞 부분 휘슬 제거 피니쉬 추가 오케이

00:45:667 (1) - : 피니쉬 추가 오케이

00:46:971 (4) - : 피니쉬 제거 오케이

00:56:102 (1) - : 앞 부분에 피니쉬 추가 오케이

01:01:754 (4,5,6) - : 아예 겹치시는게 어떤가요? (제안) 그냥 이대로 할래요.

01:03:058 (1) - : 앞 부분에 피니쉬 추가 오케이

01:06:536 (1) - : 앞 부분에 휘슬 제거 피니쉬 추가 오케이

01:08:276 (1,4) - : 피니쉬 추가 오케이

Anastasia


00:17:189 (5) - : 여기에 서클 넣으세요.

00:18:058 (4) - : 앞 부분에 휘슬제거

00:34:363 (2) - : 뒷 부분 크랩제거

00:34:797 (3) - : 앞 부분만 휘슬로 해주세요

00:38:493 (1) - : 전에 나오는 것과 거리가 좁아서 햇갈릴거 같네요... 00:39:145 (3) - 과 위치를 바꿔보세요. (제안)

00:40:449 (1) - : 앞 부분에 휘슬제거하고 피니쉬

00:43:928 (1) - : 앞 부분에 피니쉬

00:44:580 (2) - : 크랩제거하시고 00:44:797 (3) - 앞 부분에 크랩 추가

00:45:667 (1) - : 앞 부분에 휘슬제거하고 피니쉬

00:46:319 (3) - : 크랩제거하시고 00:46:536 (4) - 앞 부분에 휘슬 제거하시고 크랩 추가

00:47:406 (1) - : 앞 부분에 피니쉬

01:06:536 (1) - : 앞 부분에 휘슬제거하고 피니쉬

01:08:276 (1) - : ^

01:28:493 (2,3) - : 피니쉬를 추천합니다! (제안)

Anastasia all fixed.

예;; 모딩이 끝났습니다.

처음만드신거 같은데... 나쁘지 않게 만들어졌네요 ㅋ

그래도 리매핑이 조금 필요한거 같네요;;

제 뉴비 모딩은 그러면 여기서 마치겠습니다...

GL~
LQA20Ans

W h i t e wrote:

Arashi


00:19:145 (7) - : 위치가 헷갈리네요, 하드 디프인데... x:300 y:268로 옮기시는게 좋을 것 같습니다. -> 340,284로 옮겼습니다.

00:50:015 (4) - : 턴에 크랩 제거 -> 중간에 클랩 제거하고 끝에 넣음

00:54:580 (1,1) - : 크랩하지 마시고 피니쉬로 해보세요 (제안) -> 수정완료
모딩 감사합니다
Thank you :3
-kevincela-
[General]

  1. All the BGs do not meet the standard 16:9 resolution. Please,resize all the BGs to 1024x768!
    Not really sure if the video is "rankable" or NSFW... I really don't know what to do there,try asking someone else about this.

[Akiko]

  1. 00:00:450 (1,2,3,4) - This transition does not flow well at all,as the flow should go downwards instead of upwards like the current pattern. Here I have this kind of pattern that could follow this kind of flow pretty good: see if you like it!
    SPOILER

    176,344,884,2,0,P|164:324|156:296,1,52.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    244,216,1102,2,0,P|256:236|264:264,1,52.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    336,336,1319,2,0,P|379:267|459:273,2,157.5
  2. 00:06:645 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please,consider splitting this stream into a 1/2 slider/doublet and into a stream beginning from 00:06:971 - to 00:07:406 - . This matches really better the various instruments being played there,avoiding that 1/1 slider that really sounds strange within the synth. Here's an example if you didn't get it!
  3. 00:10:884 (2) - A whistle should be added in the beginning of the slider to follow the vocals increasing their pitch there.
  4. 00:14:580 (1,2,3) - What about deleting all the hitsounds there and instead adding a whistle at 00:14:689 (2) - ? The actual hitsound pattern is really annoying to hear and it sounds really bad... If you done this,add a whistle at 00:15:015 (4) - 's beginning too and at 00:16:102 (3) - to follow the vocals with their pitch once again!
  5. 00:19:797 (1) - Please,switch this instead to a soft finish. It fits way better the synthesizer taking place there,and just using a normal hitsounds sounds bland there imho :\
  6. 00:28:058 (1,2) - What about reversing 00:28:493 (2) - to make a pattern using opposed sliders to make a nice jumpy pattern? Imho,it fits really good there!
    SPOILER

    88,316,28058,6,0,P|56:268|92:204,1,105,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    169,72,28493,2,0,P|192:112|180:168,1,105,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    180,168,28819,1,0,0:0:0
    180,168,28928,1,8,0:0:0
    68,224,29145,1,0,0:0:0
    68,224,29254,1,0,0:0:0
    68,224,29363,1,8,0:0:0
    156,320,29580,2,0,P|192:284|252:264,1,105,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    368,248,30015,5,0,0:0:0
    368,248,30232,2,0,P|417:229|453:193,2,105
  7. 00:33:167 (4,5) - These notes are just overmapped and do not match really any of the instruments. Please delete them,having a 1/1 blank space there fits way better than having a triplet just to fill an empty part.
  8. 00:40:015 - As the drums here are getting more and more silenced,it would be pretty good if you actually added an inherited section to follow these drums. A 60% volume inherited section could fit good there!
  9. 00:46:536 (3,1) - Why this curve -> linear switch here? It doesen't play really good,as there isn't any oval flow here continuing the previous one. One possible choice would be to complete the whole pattern using a curved slider like before,just like in this example:
    SPOILER

    292,28,46971,2,0,P|268:68|200:76,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  10. 00:47:406 (1,2,3) - Uh... Not really the kind of rhythm I expected,as this really does not follow the vocals. Instead I would prefer a 1/2 ~ 3/4 slider combination,as this fits the vocals much better than before. Here's what I have done following this concept,see if you like it!
    SPOILER

    64,116,47406,6,0,P|96:168|80:252,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    76,240,47732,2,0,P|144:204|188:256,1,157.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  11. 00:59:471 (2) - Again,there really is no need for this note,as the rhythm itself is already completed by the vocals. This is just overmapped,so remove it.
  12. 01:04:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Wouldn't it be better if you actually followed the same rhythm used in 01:03:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ? It follows really good the instruments there! That would imply the use of triplets / 3/4 sliders,as shown in here:
  13. 01:13:276 (1,2,3) - The rhythm used here is totally different than it should actually be,as this does sound totally wrong. Please,make this istead a triplet ---> slider pattern,as here:
  14. 01:15:667 (6,7) - CTRL+G to invert the notes' position? Actually that would flow pretty good,as it completely follows the dropoff created by this slider.
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my queue

[Arisa]
00:59:145 (3) - Put it at x:260 y:192 with Grid level 4, I think it's better centred.
01:01:319 (2) - Same here

Tested Ginbei, Arashi and Anastasia without founding probs.

GL for rank ^^
Topic Starter
ToGlette

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Arisa]
00:59:145 (3) - Put it at x:260 y:192 with Grid level 4, I think it's better centred.
01:01:319 (2) - Same here

Tested Ginbei, Arashi and Anastasia without founding probs.

GL for rank ^^

done! all fixed.
HabiHolic
안녕하세여 소미입니다
모딩 늦은점 죄송합니다

Arisa
00:16:102 (2) - 간격 약간만 넓히시는게 좋을것 같아요
00:17:406 (3) - ^
00:19:145 (2) - ^
00:33:058 (3,1) - 간격 확인
00:38:276 (2) - ^
00:39:580 (4) - ^
00:44:797 (4) - 이거 노트랑 겹치면 안되여;; 좀 간격 넓게 잡으세여
00:50:449 - 노트 추가
01:01:319 (2,3,4) - 간격 넓히세요
01:06:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:10:015 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 지우시고 다르게 바꾸세여
01:25:667 (1,2,3,4) - 이부분 박자 이상한것 같은데;; (아닌가?)

Ginbei
00:37:406 (2,3) - 간격확인
00:40:884 (2,3) - ^
00:42:189 (1,2) - ^
00:47:406 (1,2,3,4) - 보기가 좋아보이지 않는 패턴이라고 생각해요 반복슬라로 해주세요

겟난은 제외했습니다 감사합니다^^
Flower
Hi~ sorry for being late I don't mean I am so lazy that I mod this 5 months after I receive the mod request in the queue

[Akiko]
The claps in kiai times are really weird. Maybe you should remap the hitsound.
00:02:623 (2,3) - The shapes are to ugly. How about this?
00:05:667 (1,2) - move slightly away from the slider end as it's hard to read
00:06:645 (1,2,3,4,5) - the shape is not fluent. make a minor adjust:
72,192,6645,5,0,0:0:0:0:
60,244,6754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,296,6863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,340,6971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,358,7080,2,0,P|250:354|310:290,1,157.5
00:08:710 (4) - can't be read in hidden because of stack. you should move it 1 grid left-down

[Anastasia]
I suggest you remap this diff. 4 months after, you must have better idea on this map.
hitsound, especially claps, need improvement.
00:07:406 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetric.
208,107,7406,6,0,P|234:44|293:125,1,195.00000743866,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,8058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,277,8276,2,0,P|234:340|293:259,1,195.00000743866,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,8928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:30:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this is overmapping.
00:38:493 (1,2,3) - not symmetric.
00:59:580 (1,2,3,4) - remap this.
01:03:058 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:07:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this is overmapping.
01:13:493 (1,2,3,4) - the shape is not good imo.

[Ginbei]
00:38:710 (1) - I suggest this following vocal instead.
00:43:928 (1) - rotate this 20 degree clockwise

Other diffs are OK.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
ToGlette

Flower wrote:

Hi~ sorry for being late I don't mean I am so lazy that I mod this 5 months after I receive the mod request in the queue

[Anastasia]
Will remap this.
[Ginbei]
00:38:710 (1) - I suggest this following vocal instead. fixed
00:43:928 (1) - rotate this 20 degree clockwise fixed

Other diffs are OK.

Good luck~
response after a year XD thanks for the mod.
Topic Starter
ToGlette

HabiHolic wrote:

안녕하세여 소미입니다
모딩 늦은점 죄송합니다

Arisa
00:16:102 (2) - 간격 약간만 넓히시는게 좋을것 같아요fixed
00:17:406 (3) - ^fixed
00:19:145 (2) - ^fixed
00:33:058 (3,1) - 간격 확인fixed
00:38:276 (2) - ^fixed
00:39:580 (4) - ^fixed
00:44:797 (4) - 이거 노트랑 겹치면 안되여;; 좀 간격 넓게 잡으세여fixed
00:50:449 - 노트 추가좀 만 더 생각해볼게요.
01:01:319 (2,3,4) - 간격 넓히세요fixed
01:06:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^fixed
01:10:015 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 지우시고 다르게 바꾸세여 끝에 한 노트 지웠어요
01:25:667 (1,2,3,4) - 이부분 박자 이상한것 같은데;; (아닌가?)괜찮은거 같아요.

Ginbei
00:37:406 (2,3) - 간격확인fixed
00:40:884 (2,3) - ^fixed
00:42:189 (1,2) - ^fixed
00:47:406 (1,2,3,4) - 보기가 좋아보이지 않는 패턴이라고 생각해요 반복슬라로 해주세요요건 킵 할게요

겟난은 제외했습니다 감사합니다^^
starvfox
[Ehmmm,Random Mod :)]

Normal
00:32:623 ehmm increase this sliders distance between 6,7 and 1 :)
00:38:710 delete this nc
01:20:449 This Spinners is should be started from 01:22:189
Hard
00:09:145 NC ^^
00:27:406 (4,3) Increase this distance between 4 and 3
01:09:363 this will be good if the sliders changed into streams :)
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