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- 00:01:642 (2) - I'd really suggest you to move this slider 1/2 backwards, as not following the piano there is not a really wise idea... it wouldn't also be that difficult to hit, as it's just a press-go action, it should be pretty much okay doing that. Remember that the same applies for the slider 00:06:695 (2) - , as it is the same pattern as before!
- 00:26:295 - You should really add a note here to follow the strong beat there and make a nice transition with the next pattern, in this way you'll prevent your pattern from being too dull! Also I would suggest you to add some new combos here instead of the last place, as it fits quite better in the instruments!
- 00:31:195 - Same as above, this place is really important because of the cymbals there and not following them makes the map here a little bit boring. You should add a note here as well!
- 00:33:645 - Again, to follow the kicks you should totally add a note here!
- 00:36:095 - Same as above
- 00:41:301 (1,2) - I have a little idea here that will make this pattern just perfect, by using a couple of 1/1 sliders and also some notes. It's not a big deal, but I find it way funnier to play than the actual pattern you are using! Here's what I have done here, for istance: see if you like it!SPOILER
0,156,41301,6,0,P|4:76|84:36,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,88,42220,2,0,P|184:116|277:58,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,16,43139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,52,43445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,116,43751,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,272,44364,2,0,L|312:356,2,79.9999999999999,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: - 00:55:695 - Here's another place where adding a note would be really great to make a nice transition with the next pattern there, considering also how the cymbals repeat from here to 00:56:922 - it's a really wiser choice to follow them (so you should also add a note at 00:56:922 -) and also to emphatize them in some way (with a finish, for example)! See if you like them
- 01:26:320 - Same as above
- 01:36:120 - Starting this pattern from here just doesen't feel right, considering how you've followed the synth up to now... Using this 2/1 gap feels really unnatural and out of place, and I'd rather use a different pattern there. What about using the 2/1 slider at 01:36:120 - instead of the actual place? That'd definitely solve the problem! Here's what I mean:
- 00:23:845 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of using these curved sliders, why don't you use some linear ones? I really don't like how these sliders' oval flow is being continued, it really doesen't go on really well with the next patterns... Some linear sliders instead would go quite smoother overall there! Here's what I have done here: see if you like it!SPOILER
132,84,23845,6,0,L|40:88,1,75
112,200,24152,2,0,L|204:196,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,24458,2,0,L|364:100,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,196,24764,2,0,L|397:199,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,284,25070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,284,25223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,284,25377,1,2,0:0:0:0: - 00:43:139 (7,8) - What would you think about moving these notes to x:348 y:212? I like really much how the returning back works here, seeing how smooth it can play! It would also follow perfectly 00:42:833 (6) - 's oval flow so that it goes on in a pretty cool way
- 00:43:445 (1) - If you have done the point above then you should consider using a CTRL+G here. It works really well with the last pattern, and it also makes a pretty nice rotation movement with 00:43:751 (2) - , making the pattern quite smoother to play. I personally think it works great right in this place! See if you like it
- 00:51:178 (2,3) - Why this triplet? There is no instrument that is clearly played there, and this triplet really sounds unneeded... I would rather use this triplet in another place to emphatize the synth, like for example at 00:51:254 - , since this is the part where there is that 1/4 synth... Here's an example of what I mean:
- 01:07:333 (7) - What would you think about moving this slider at x:440 y:188? In the current position the spacing with 01:07:639 (8,9) - is so small that the flow there is almost broken, making it a not-so-great pattern to play. I'd prefer it a little bit more spaced out like this :3
- 00:10:064 (6) - What would you think about a CTRL+G here? Considering how your pattern is composed here, a couple of opposed sliders would just work great to finish the whole pattern in a good way! It should be quite smoother to play in this way
- 00:29:205 (3) - Same suggestion as above, a CTRL+G here would work just great since the jump with 00:29:511 (1,2) - will make a pretty interesting pattern to play... Imho it's really fun and it goes quite smoother than your current pattern, I really think this plays great! Try it out
- 00:40:842 (4) - After that really big 1/4 jump this spacing really breaks the flow there as it isn't really widely spaced... I would totally recommend you to at least make the spacing there bigger to make a smoother pattern to play here which continues quite good with the next pattern. A possible position to move this note would be x:188 y:60: see if you like it!
- 00:47:426 (8) - By hearing the hold in the background here extending this slider by 1/4 would work really good, as it would totally emphatize it! It works pretty good here, especially as a transition between the hold and the repeated 1/4 notes which are coming after it, following the song really well! See if you like it
- 00:50:183 (5,1) - Why did you start the speedup just on 00:50:489 (1) - ? The notes in the background which represent 00:50:183 (5) - have the same exact intensity, and using a speed up just in one of them feels really strange and out of place. I would totally recommend you to use a speedup to 00:50:183 (5) - as well!
- 00:54:776 (1) - I would totally extend this again 1/4 as it follows the synth held until the next phrase. Also, you've used this 3/4 slider at 00:44:976 (2) - , so why don't you use it here as well? It sounds really good!
- 01:01:820 (1,2) - This is just me, however I find a simple 1/3 repeated slider to work better here instead of the note+1/3 slider, as it's the first time that there is this 1/4 ---> 1/3 switch, so using some notes here is quite unintuitive and not really great to play. A simple repeated 1/3 slider instead would just work perfectly!