pkmnyab wrote:

From my modding queue~
Nice song~

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  The clap hitsound starting from 00:15:946 - sounds pretty loud to me compared to the normal hitsound, but this might have been intentional. I would have liked the clap hitsound to be ~10-20% quieter. reduced volume of soft-hitclap3.wav a bit

1. 00:24:518 (2) - see if you can stack this with the head of 00:22:821 (5) - . This way the flow from (1) into (2) and from (2) into (3) matches the triangle shape of the slider. No, I think it's fine
2. 00:25:589 (3,4) - you can make this a slider to match 00:24:518 (2) - where the vocal is pretty similar. This change is good if you want the slider to be consistent, but you can leave it if you want to mix things up. I prefer to keep this for the symmetry.
3. 00:50:768 (2) - I think this slider shape (or something like this) matches better No, straight slider matches better for me
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   The lyrics for the part you have this slider at is 'kan-jou', and the ending of the slider matches the 'jou' part.
   
   [Hard]
   
4. 00:02:553 (3) - for a flow improvement, consider curving this No, this flows exactly as I want it to. I don't want it to lead in directly like that.
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   I find that this kind of curve creates synergy with the curved sliders before and after it. If you don't think so, then at least try it out. Yes, I know it connects them, but this is not the feel I was going for.
5. 00:37:910 (4) - I feel that there should be a noticeable difference between this slider and 00:38:982 (1,2) - since the mood is a bit different in these two parts. I think making 00:37:910 (4) - a straight slider should be good, or somehow making 00:38:982 (1,2) - more curved . This will also make 00:38:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - stand out more. The mood is different? How so? Tried this, but I still prefer how it is now.
6. 00:43:268 (1,2) - switch positions on timeline to match vocal No, it's same rhythm pattern as 00:34:696 (1) and I think it matches nicely with both vocal and instrumental as the first note in the vocal phrase is weaker (so I used slider end) and the second is stronger, where I use a circle which also covers the drum hit.
   
   [Insane]
   Fun difficulty! Tried it on DT, I think hp drain might be a bit high so you can consider lowering it by 1 or keeping it the same to make this song harder for DT players. Yeah.. hp drain does seem a bit harsh, for DT maybe, but especially for HR. However, HP6 feels a bit too easy when playing without mods. The problem is that there are a lot of objects in the fast part of the song and not many in the slow part, so HP6 feels really easy in the sections with a lot of objects as the player is able to regain hp really fast. I'll think about this..
   Anyways here is a replay file (DT), maybe it can help you in some way (I did pretty bad, the slider breaks are real) http://puu.sh/7GgCA.osr
   
7. 01:06:839 (1,1,1) - considering you didn't map the parts in between the notes here as well as the part at 01:09:964 (3,1,1,1) - , maybe you can map out one of these sections. I would recommend mapping the first section in between the notes 01:06:839 (1) - and 01:08:625 (1) - . The way you have it now matches the music but not the vocal, but I still feel that it's a bit empty. You can always lower the hitsound volume during that part if you want the vocal to stand out more than the hitsounds. Nah, I like this the way it is. I think it's nice to repeat themes like this when the two parts are similar.

Too well-mapped for me to point out any areas of improvement

Have fun mapping!

Thanks For Modding!

1. add 1500 or 2000 AudioLeadIn, your diffs are starting too suddenly

1. 00:04:607 (6) - mmm I believe you should change the rhythm to 2 circles instead, since the beat at 00:04:696 need a click action, due to the high pitch on it, if you do it add NC in 00:04:696
2. 00:09:785 (3) - yeah same suggestion as above, due to the same sound in tail and head, but this one is not really important, like the previous one
3. 00:18:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this was really fun on DT
4. 00:22:821 (3,4) - this manual stack is on purpose? cuz I feel really confuse when playing, mainly cuz this manual stacks are used for antijumps in generally, that's why I prefer if you stack it properly
5. 00:27:732 (5) - I didn't like how this slider break the vocal line, two circles will fit better there also are consistent with the whole pattern IMO
6. 00:30:946 (3,4) - what about to unstack this? to make the next antijump in 00:31:393 (5,6) - more noticeable
7. 00:33:893 (5) - , 00:38:178 (5) - and 00:36:839 (1) - I think you should try to add 2 circles instead of sliders, following vocals better, since is consistent with 00:37:375 (2,3) - IMO
8. 00:40:053 (5,6,7,8) - consider to rearrange this pattern, since is really confuse to play if you notice in the timeline, this 00:40:232 (6,7) - should have more distance due to the long distance in the timeline but 00:40:589 (7,8) - should have less due to less distance in the timeline
9. cool mapset, pretty nice to play, I like how you represent the music here
   

1. 00:02:553 (3,4) - make 3 like 4? having both sliders curved will improve the cursor movement here, like:
   
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2. 00:14:071 (2,3) - and 00:12:732 (5,1) - both rhythms are the same, but you don't map them consistent, maybe:
   
3. 00:18:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this feel really difficult for a hard diff, try to keep a more consistent distance between the jumps
4. 00:33:089 (2,3,4) - try to use an equal distance here, I know you're placing 00:33:625 (3) - for a stack with 00:32:018 (5) - , just do somethink like:
   
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5. 01:23:446 (5,1,2,3) - same as 00:14:071
6. clean diff~
   

1. Reduce HP by 1, to balance the settings
2. 00:02:553 (3,4) - I'll prefer if you don't overlap this object's (since the spacing is like that cuz the sv change there, probably using distance snap in 1.80 in the first section can solve this)
3. 00:14:875 (3) - the tail of this slider need a click action <:, try this:
   
4. cool diff too
   

GL , hope this help you a bit, I think you should look for a BAT already

Natsu wrote:

Hi hi hi ~ Hi



[General]

1. add 1500 or 2000 AudioLeadIn, your diffs are starting too suddenly Added 1500ms audio lead-in

[Insane]

1. 00:04:607 (6) - mmm I believe you should change the rhythm to 2 circles instead, since the beat at 00:04:696 need a click action, due to the high pitch on it, if you do it add NC in 00:04:696 No, I think it's fine this way. I don't think a circle is necessary for this beat, and the slider is part of a pattern with (5), which represents this part of the music with the paired upward motion.
2. 00:09:785 (3) - yeah same suggestion as above, due to the same sound in tail and head, but this one is not really important, like the previous one I prefer not to change this because I'm trying to use the (3,4) flow for an effect which matches the music.
3. 00:18:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this was really fun on DT hehe thanks
4. 00:22:821 (3,4) - this manual stack is on purpose? cuz I feel really confuse when playing, mainly cuz this manual stacks are used for antijumps in generally, that's why I prefer if you stack it properly oh, i see. Fixed.
5. 00:27:732 (5) - I didn't like how this slider break the vocal line, two circles will fit better there also are consistent with the whole pattern IMO Slider fits better for me.
6. 00:30:946 (3,4) - what about to unstack this? to make the next antijump in 00:31:393 (5,6) - more noticeable I prefer to keep this stacked. Instead, added a new combo at (6) for antijump readability.
7. 00:33:893 (5) - , 00:38:178 (5) - and 00:36:839 (1) - I think you should try to add 2 circles instead of sliders, following vocals better, since is consistent with 00:37:375 (2,3) - IMO No, I prefer this the way it is. I don't think it's necessary to consistently follow vocals. I choose to follow whichever part stands out most or is more interesting to me.
8. 00:40:053 (5,6,7,8) - consider to rearrange this pattern, since is really confuse to play if you notice in the timeline, this 00:40:232 (6,7) - should have more distance due to the long distance in the timeline but 00:40:589 (7,8) - should have less due to less distance in the timeline I didn't think it would be confusing since AR should be high enough for players to read the timing. I'll try to get more testplays to see if this is an issue.
9. cool mapset, pretty nice to play, I like how you represent the music here Thanks :3
   

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1. 00:02:553 (3,4) - make 3 like 4? having both sliders curved will improve the cursor movement here, like: No, I prefer it this way.
   
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2. 00:14:071 (2,3) - and 00:12:732 (5,1) - both rhythms are the same, but you don't map them consistent, maybe: They're not the same. for (5,1), the end is clipped, but for (2,3), the instrument note is held through (3).
   
3. 00:18:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this feel really difficult for a hard diff, try to keep a more consistent distance between the jumps I don't think it's too hard. Larger spacing for onbeats, smaller spacing for offbeats.
4. 00:33:089 (2,3,4) - try to use an equal distance here, I know you're placing 00:33:625 (3) - for a stack with 00:32:018 (5) - , just do somethink like: Moved (2) instead.
   
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5. 01:23:446 (5,1,2,3) - same as 00:14:071 same.
6. clean diff~
   

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1. Reduce HP by 1, to balance the settings HP3 is too easy imo. I would have normally used OD4, but in this case, I used OD3 because combined 1/3 and 1/4 rhythms in the music could be hard for beginners.
2. 00:02:553 (3,4) - I'll prefer if you don't overlap this object's (since the spacing is like that cuz the sv change there, probably using distance snap in 1.80 in the first section can solve this) ok. changed.
3. 00:14:875 (3) - the tail of this slider need a click action <:, try this: I don't think it's necessary.
   
4. cool diff too
   

GL , hope this help you a bit, I think you should look for a BAT already

Thanks For Modding!

1. Settings are kinda too high for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, reduce everything by 1 tick please. Circle Size is fine already, I mean only OD HP and AR.

1. 00:09:428 (2) - This slider shape looks really weird if you ask me, I'd prefer if you simply make it straight instead.
2. 01:20:143 (2) - Same as above, since it's copy-pasted.

1. 00:14:875 (6) - This slider sounds really loud, please lower the volume of it by 20% at least.
2. 00:40:232 (6,7,8) - I know that you wanted to follow the previous circle here, but spacing is wrong. Please fix it properly.
3. 00:51:839 (1,2,3) - Why the anti-jump here? This is an intense part so it should be jumpy instead.
4. 01:13:803 (2) - Again, volume is too loud, please lower it.
5. 01:15:209 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda unexpected, better changing this pattern into some slider or a single slider.
6. 01:25:589 (6) - Try to guess? Volume issue once again.

Andrea wrote:

~Normal~

1. Settings are kinda too high for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, reduce everything by 1 tick please. Circle Size is fine already, I mean only OD HP and AR. I really don't think it's too hard for a Normal diff, and lowering them would put a large gap between Normal and Hard. I think the difficulty settings are reasonable, considering that the rhythms are very simple and the object density is low.

~Hard~

1. 00:09:428 (2) - This slider shape looks really weird if you ask me, I'd prefer if you simply make it straight instead. I prefer not to make it straight, but changed the shape a bit.. I hope this is less weird.
2. 01:20:143 (2) - Same as above, since it's copy-pasted. ^

~Insane~

1. 00:14:875 (6) - This slider sounds really loud, please lower the volume of it by 20% at least. Fixed
2. 00:40:232 (6,7,8) - I know that you wanted to follow the previous circle here, but spacing is wrong. Please fix it properly. Moved (7,8)
3. 00:51:839 (1,2,3) - Why the anti-jump here? This is an intense part so it should be jumpy instead. I think antijump is appropriate here because I want to have a more detached feeling in (1,2) to contrast (3). Antijump just feels better with my interpretation of the music.
4. 01:13:803 (2) - Again, volume is too loud, please lower it. Fixed.
5. 01:15:209 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda unexpected, better changing this pattern into some slider or a single slider. Fixed
6. 01:25:589 (6) - Try to guess? Volume issue once again. Fixed.

Let me know once you've checked my mod.

Thanks For Modding!

Umi wrote:

Gratz cloud, onodera <3