1. Easy (1.86 stars, 80 notes)
2. Hard (4.67 stars, 180 notes)
3. Insane (4.97 stars, 278 notes)
4. Normal (3.81 stars, 114 notes)

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ey, first mod

[Easy]
00:20:916 (1) - May be hard to read for new players, since the slider ball looks unpredictable. And especially since it's only half a beat away from the next slider, so it adds on even more pressure for the new players to get it right. Consider changing 00:20:916 (1,2) - into 1 single slider? I prefer to the previous one because there is a sound on 00:21:160 - That's why I not use 1 single slider.
Or perhaps go with this rhythm?

If the Ar was higher then 00:28:721 (1,1) - 's overlap wouldn't be a problem. But, since this is is any Easy diff, I'd suggest you either try to blanket the notes better, or re-position them to form a new flow. ok fixed
00:41:403 (3) - This mini slider is good, because it's at least 1 beat apart from the previous and the next note, so it's clear and easy to read
00:52:622 (1,2) - Same suggestion as 00:20:916 (1) -
01:18:475 (2,3) - Nazi mod, these notes can be stacked better. Ignore it if you want. fixed
01:22:377 (2) - Make it a curved slider, for consistent flow?I find it a bit funny how the curved sliders suddenly change into straight ones. fixed

[Normal]
00:22:867 (1) - Can blanket 00:24:087 (2) - better. fixed
00:46:037 (3,2) - Either stack them or move them more apart so they're not touching each other. Either one, it will help get ridof that crowded look in this part.
00:59:939 (2) - First object in Kai time should be NC fixed
01:22:865 (3,1) - Hey! No jumps in a Normal diff. Fix their spacing please fixed

[Hard]
00:59:939 (3) - First object in Kai time should be NC fixed

[Insane]
00:22:135 (6) - Reverse slider, looks kinda odd how it's reverse end is pointed straight towards the previous slider. No

Cute song. Have a star
Good luck!

Kibbleru wrote:

I will mod ur map first cuz ur drawing is amazing! <3 (much favoritism)

[Insane]
00:31:647 (5) - curving this the other way would probably improve flow but it will break the flow between 00:31:403 (4,5) -

SPOILER

00:53:110 (6,1) - why not stack ? ok
00:53:598 (7,2) - ^ ok
00:27:501 (3,3) - not perfectly stacked. why not just copy one then ctrl g fixed
01:11:402 (6) -, 01:11:890 (7) - tbh would flow better if u ctrl h both these
01:15:304 (5,1) - make a better blanket ok

[Hard]
00:04:331 (4,3) - maybe stack? No
00:11:160 (2,3) - why not blanket Do't want to make blanket here
01:20:426 (3,4) - ^ ok
00:15:550 (3) - ctrl g? ok
00:31:647 (5) - ^ ok
00:41:647 (2) - ^ Not here
00:54:086 (1,2,3,1) - this would be confusing since the spacing is consistent but they appear at different times yes I put them on purpose

[Normal]
00:22:867 (1) - move middle slider point 1 grid left fixed
00:24:330 (3) - ^same but right fixed

[Easy]
00:07:258 (1,2,3,4) - too many consecutive circles for easy ok change them to sliders
00:11:160 (1) - probably better flow if u just made this straight i dont think so
00:18:965 (1) - ctrl g for better flow but ull have to do something about the rest ok
00:51:647 (2) - ^ fixed
00:42:379 (1) - try to keep it at 1 reverse max for easy ok
00:46:281 (2) - ^ fixed
00:59:695 (1) - kinda long
01:19:451 (1,2) - ctrl g for better flow fixed

Thats all i got, hope it helped
pink cuz its manly

tellertheworld wrote:

From Teller Anchor's Insane modding M4M/NM( ･´ω･｀)

Insane

1. 00:07:989 (4) - 這個音去到00:08:477 - 才完結,你可以試試將這個slider反彈一次 00:08:477 (5) - 这里不是有个音吗?
2. 00:07:014 (5) - 這個圈你可以整做一個slider至00:07:258 - . 因為00:07:502 (6,7,8) - 是一組音. 前面用slider的話 可以突出這裡的節奏 唔 我不倾向于做红线开头重音结束的slider
3. 00:24:696 (2) - 好似overmap 这个地方其实是00:24:330 (1) - 上鼓点的回声 开25%能听到
4. 00:30:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - 在節奏不變的情況 不應該做一個大jump ( 00:31:647 (5) - ) 唔 有道理
5. 01:22:133 (5) - NC fixed

Hard

1. 00:55:793 (3) - 放去 00:55:549 -(但會overmap) 如果你是跟音 00:55:793 - 你可以考慮一下修改一下排版 現在的話 player會感覺上覺得這幾個是一樣的拍子 使會提早打了這個圈 造成誤讀. 好吧改一下
2. 01:11:646 (1,2,3) - ( 01:12:378 (3,4) - 之間和 01:12:865 (4,1) - 因為01:12:378 (3) - 和01:12:865 (4) - 有叮一聲而可以中間空了. 但
   在前面的01:12:865 (4) - 空了就變得有點奇怪 你可以在01:12:865 (4) - 加個圈 或者 用下面的節奏 應該會比較好) 我在01:12:134 (2) - 这里加了个circle 后面的不想改
   老實說 下面的節奏不太可行. 哦草差点没发现这里有东西
   

Normal

1. Nice map~ (╯°□°)╯彡

Easy

1. 00:20:916 (1) - 對easy難道來說好似有點難 可以轉用圈去代替 fixed
2. 00:52:622 (1) - ^ fixed
3. 01:15:304 (1) - 為什麼在這裡有個spinner. 這個01:15:304 - 和 01:17:499 (1,2) - 是連接的, 而01:17:499 (1,2) - 你用了slider 前面的01:15:304 - 也應該用slider代替現有的spinner. 不想拉个这么长的slider【死

1. 00:04:331 (2) - this slider's shape..well it can be made better imo, so how about making it like this instead? (and it'll follow the next slider very well owo/)
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:08:233 (2) - well this can be made better, how about making it curved instead? like this
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:09:209 (1) - this spinner ends too soon how about switching this spinner into 1 1/1 slider instead? or you can just remove the spinner
4. 00:11:160 (1) - idk why but this slider kinda annoyed me somehow, well you can fix it like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:17:257 (1,2,3) - since this easy diff, i don't suggest you do to something like this, it'll be too hard for some players to hit them, so how about making them one 1/2 slider instead?
6. 00:21:160 (2) - why is this note here, i honestly don't hear anything, i suggest you to remove it
7. 00:22:867 (1) - this slider kinda sounded off, since you making it reverse on blue tick where it's wrong, just rise it by one tick, see if it follows better, i highly suggest you to do that imo
8. 00:54:086 (1) - same as i said here 00:09:209 (1) -
9. 00:59:939 (1) - ^
10. 01:15:548 (1) - ^

1. 00:11:892 (3) - this slider shape is kinda odd, well how about fixing it like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:20:428 (1) - this note don't follow anything, i suggest you to delete it
3. 00:34:086 (3) - i think this slider will play much better if you made it curve, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:11:402 (7,1) - this jump is kinda too high for hard diff imo, how about moving the 7 to x:476 y:100 to reduce the spacing o.o

1. 00:09:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - why are you overmapping here ;w; this stream didn't follow anything in music orz
2. 00:11:892 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
3. 00:14:087 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
4. 00:16:770 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 00:19:453 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
6. 00:23:599 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
7. 00:47:013 (2,3) - remove finish on these notes it didn't follow anything from the music here

Lan wings wrote:

"try to listen carefully with 25% speed"
or buy a better headset

Sharlo wrote:

Lan wings wrote:

"try to listen carefully with 25% speed"
or buy a better headset

西服嘎鹅

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hey Sharlo :3 here's the mod4mod from your queue www


Easy:

1. 00:04:331 (2) - this slider's shape..well it can be made better imo, so how about making it like this instead? (and it'll follow the next slider very well owo/) ok fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:08:233 (2) - well this can be made better, how about making it curved instead? like this ok
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:09:209 (1) - this spinner ends too soon how about switching this spinner into 1 1/1 slider instead? or you can just remove the spinner I changed it to 1 1/1 slider
4. 00:11:160 (1) - idk why but this slider kinda annoyed me somehow, well you can fix it like this? should let you know 00:11:160 (1,1,1) - form a Triangle. So I make them like this.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:17:257 (1,2,3) - since this easy diff, i don't suggest you do to something like this, it'll be too hard for some players to hit them, so how about making them one 1/2 slider instead? fixed
6. 00:21:160 (2) - why is this note here, i honestly don't hear anything, i suggest you to remove it There is a drum here so I think you have to listen carefully or you can't get it. But I still remove it cuz it is a Easy diff.
7. 00:22:867 (1) - this slider kinda sounded off, since you making it reverse on blue tick where it's wrong, just rise it by one tick, see if it follows better, i highly suggest you to do that imo fixed
8. 00:54:086 (1) - same as i said here 00:09:209 (1) - fixed
9. 00:59:939 (1) - ^ I want to keep this spinner
10. 01:15:548 (1) - ^ fixed

Normal:
Fine~


Hard:

1. 00:11:892 (3) - this slider shape is kinda odd, well how about fixing it like this? this slider shape is kinda odd fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:20:428 (1) - this note don't follow anything, i suggest you to delete it There is a obvious drum here
3. 00:34:086 (3) - i think this slider will play much better if you made it curve, like this: fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:11:402 (7,1) - this jump is kinda too high for hard diff imo, how about moving the 7 to x:476 y:100 to reduce the spacing o.o fixed

Insane:

1. 00:09:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - why are you overmapping here ;w; this stream didn't follow anything in music orz
2. 00:11:892 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
3. 00:14:087 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
4. 00:16:770 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 00:19:453 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
6. 00:23:599 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
7. 00:47:013 (2,3) - remove finish on these notes it didn't follow anything from the music here please listen the music more carefully. You will find the reason why I add finish here.

This diff is nice but has so many overmapped and unneeded streams in slow parts, so i suggest to redo those slow part and remove those useless streams. And yes i highly suggest you to do that cus atm it don't follow anything and looks bad too
I don‘t think these streams are overmap. There are not only vocal and piano in a song but also any other drums in the Accompaniment.


that's all i could find :3 nice map <3 and osu need more Nagi no Asukara <333 goodluck wwww

Xinely wrote:

i'm curious what sekai said overmapped and Lan Wings who said no overmapped here so i'm checked it and no found anything, sorry Lan Wings it was my mistake because trying w/o headphone orz yeah i heard a low drum here

So just want to mention :
00:50:183 - need finish because cymbal crash sound
00:03:356 - ^
00:07:258 - ^
fixed all. Thanks for your remind.

No Kudosu please since this is not a mod

Good Luck Sharlo, i love the skin btw <3

AW-sama wrote:

Hello. M4m (Sorry, my english = 0)

[Easy]
00:59:939 (1) - Please map these parts! (Remove spinner)

[Normal]
00:20:916 (1,2) - Replace? (one slider, and one repeat slider) Timeline e.g: http://puu.sh/7hBLZ.jpg don't like this style of beat
00:25:550 (1) - remove circle ? ok
00:41:403 (2,3) - replace 2 slider? Timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7hBUt.jpg
00:52:622 (1,2,3) - Replace 3 slider? http://puu.sh/7hC4k.jpg ok
01:10:670 (3) - remove circle ?

[Hard]
00:28:233 (7) - put circle here ? ok
00:59:451 (2) - remove mini slider,and put circle here I don't want to put circles here because there is a 1/4 beat start with blue tick.

[Insane]
00:09:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unnecessary stream. Replace: 2 circle and 1 slider. Timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7hCFH.jpg
00:11:892 (2,3,4,5,6) - Unnecessary stream! Replace: 1 slider. Timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7hCNo.jpg
00:14:087 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ because too low the background instrument
I totally don't think they are unnecessary.
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00:16:038 (6) - remove repeat slider
00:16:770 (1,2,3,4,1) - remove, unnecessary stream.

and pu t circle here 00:16:038 (6) -
00:16:282 (7) - slider here: start point: 00:16:282 end point: 00:16:770. put circle here: 00:16:770 change another one
-------------------------------------

00:19:453 (4,5,6,7,8) - stream problem.
Remove circles: 00:19:574 (5,6,7,8) - & 00:20:184 (5) -
put slider here: start point: 00:19:696 end point: 00:20:184. timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7hDhN.jpg

00:23:599 (2,3,4,5,6) - stream problem.
00:38:111 (7) - remove circle fixed
00:47:135 (3) - ^ There is a bell sound here
00:52:500 (3) - ^
01:03:719 (8) - ^
Spinner start: 00:57:622 - Spinner end: 00:58:720 fixed

Good luck!

FlawlessTea wrote:

Hi there~
Short random mod

[General]
Maybe toggle kiai time again at 01:15:548 for fountain effect? Sorry I don't like so many fountain effects

[Easy]
00:13:111 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:24:087 - A note should be here. something like: http://puu.sh/7rDAh.jpg fixed
00:55:793 - This note is really hard to hit since it's in red line after a long pause. Maybe put a slider from 00:55:549 to 00:55:793 instead. The beat is so strange
00:58:963 - I think the beat is better like this: fixed

SPOILER

[Normal]
seems ok

[Hard]
00:15:062 - NC starts here fixed
00:36:281 (1) - ^ No
00:44:818 - take out NC. The effect you were going for doesn't really work because of 00:45:549 (5,6,7) ok
01:22:621 (3) - should go at 400,224 to maintain distance No

[Insane]
Seems ok

lightr wrote:

Hi mod4mod
Insane:
00:08:965 (7) - 试试加finish与00:07:989 (4) - 照应 好
00:22:135 (6) - ctrl+g 保留
00:58:963 - 试试这样的节奏？ 好鬼畜的样子 的确跟音乐节奏是这样子没错 但为了好打一点还是XD

img

01:00:671 - 01:01:646 - 建议这两个地方分别加个Circle，因为是高潮kiai部分，不加感觉会很空 fixed
01:10:670 (4) - 我觉得这里把折返换成3连舒服点 不喜欢白线开始的3连w
好图，hitsound好棒w

Hard:
00:35:062 (3,4) - 对于Hard难度来说这个跳是不是大了点啊，而且音乐在这里也没重音，感觉保持间距不变更好 好
00:47:500 (3) - ctrl+g fixed
01:10:670 (4) - 这个note删掉，空一拍感觉挺好的,前后两个唱音hateku摆两个相同的三角形 删掉好奇怪啊QvQ 而且3和4中间空了一拍 摆三角形倒是不错

img

01:22:133 (1,2,3) - 间距不要变 ok

Normal:
fine,找不出问题;w;

Easy:
00:25:550 (1) - 删掉这个note fixed

这是所有我能找出的东西，希望能有用;w;

[Hijiri Byakuren] wrote:

SB不错，感觉好美
[Insane]
00:07:989 (4,5,6,7) - 这四个虽然没啥问题但总感觉还是这样的节奏更好。如果节奏不改的话，后面三个的位置也稍微动一下要不和前面仨一样？这样摆看起来略奇怪;w; 00:08:475 (5,6,7) - 是在音乐上是一组的

SPOILER

00:23:599 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 说实话前面的五连实在是难以读出后面减速的(1,2)，建议这样的节奏

SPOILER

00:25:550 (1,2) - (2)NC，(1)NC去掉
00:26:647 - 这里有节奏。可以和前面的00:26:525 (5) - 组成滑条什么的 so slightly;w;
00:28:233 (5) - 建议x356.y112
00:35:550 (5) - 要不要延长一点？00:37:501 (5) - 这里也可以延长哦。。会是另一种感觉;w; 是很不错但是00:35:548 (5) - 这里尾巴上有个钢琴音 后面那个可以改

SPOILER

00:40:915 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里要不换成这样？ 00:41:157 (4) - 有音

SPOILER

00:50:549 (2,3) - 建议换成二连滑条
00:59:207 (2,3,4,5,6) - 五连换成六连怎样？要不五连摆成二一二？这里的鼓音总感觉做成滑条跳比较好
01:14:329 (4) - 换成俩单点怎样？毕竟前面有减速。。

[HARD]
00:07:014 (5) - 这个位置未免有点尴尬吧。要不去下一个滑条的头上？ 想了一下还是搞个居中的距离
00:26:282 (3) - 建议多拉1/4拍，然后00:26:769 (4) -NC 喔 感觉不错的样子
00:28:721 (3) - 建议多拉1/4拍 fixed

[NORMAL]
看起来不错就行了。其实是根本不会。。

[EASY]
看起来不错就行了。同上;w;

lkx_Shore wrote:

特别的选音效技巧

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

夏萝菊苣的图太dio惹，摸不动_(:з」∠)_
[Easy]
perfect,其实是不会
[Normal]
^
[Hard]
00:21:648 (5) - 感觉这个换个摆法会顺手点，至于怎么摆不知道例如这样？ 保留

SPOILER

[Insane]
感觉开始连打有点多？觉得可以用来回滑条代替比如两个note加来回什么的
00:13:111 (1) - 这里这样如何？

SPOILER

00:18:477 (1) - 这个感觉和前个重合再原路返回怎样？ 3想来个跳

SPOILER

00:28:477 (6,1) - 感觉移下一点会顺手点 OK
00:29:940 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 感觉跳的有点大，这里音乐也不是很激，觉得1.6 1.7左右就够了 改不跳了
00:50:549 (2,3) - 感觉间距有点大，可以左移一点点？ fixed
01:19:451 (1) - 感觉后面的节奏很适合在滑条后加二连

Flower wrote:

Hi~

[Insane]
总体上来说我不是特别喜欢这个diff，尽管它的质量已经够好，完全不需要我的mod。我这里提出一些我的个人见解，请酌情考虑。
00:11:892 - 00:14:087 - etc - 在最安静的开头段放这些note在我看来属于头重脚轻。钢琴在这里完全是装饰性质的，按我的意见，也许使用kick sliders会更加符合氛围 适当减少
00:24:330 (1,2,3) - 这里突然减速，而排列就像1/4 slider一样，我觉得这里不太合理。而且本来也没有必要减速，直接用原速，也就可以了
00:50:183 (1,2,3) - 做好blanket，参考： fixed

SPOILER

kiai的whistle可以试试这个：http://puu.sh/7CeIf.wav 这个是我42377开始的Finish啊

[Hard]
00:10:916 (1) - 可以考虑删去，给玩家一点反应时间 fixed

[Normal]
00:05:307 (1) - 移动到x:212 y:212以blanket fixed

[Easy]
00:22:867 (1,2) - blanket fixed
00:47:257 (2) - 移动到x:396 y:300以blanket fixed
00:57:500 (4) - 放到x:212 y:80？和之前的重叠可能会导致玩家的疑惑，同时可以把00:58:963 (1,2) - 放上一点，这样因为玩家倾向于把鼠标移动到画面中间，这两个note就不会来不及移动

沙耶找不出来……那就这样吧，祝早日rank~