Manuxz Sixx
Manuxz Sixx wrote:
Hola :3 Antes que nada, sentite libre de ignorar mi mod si no te sirve ~w~ No soy muy bueno en esto y recién comienzo xD
General: Bueno la verdad no se si es que soy muy noob en esto o que, pero la verdad a simple vista veo mucha perfección en tu mapa no creo encontrar mucho para decirte pero bueno lo voy a internar.
Salad
00:25:822 (2) - Mové un poquito más a la derecha, para ser exacto (x: 122) Creo que ahí queda mejor. Nah, está bien donde está :3
00:50:243 (3) - Movelo a (x: 304) ^
00:50:426 (1) - Creo que esa quedaría mejor en (x: 368) Para estos 4 objetos 00:49:877 (1,2,3,1) - , usé simetría, por eso no quiero cambiarlos D:
01:01:950 (5) - En (x: 240) quedo mejor XD Necesito una mejor razón para poder hacer el cambio u.u
01:05:243 (4) - Movelo a (x: 156) x:152 sería lo indicado, lo cambié
Platter
00:03:596 (1) - Ese slider debería comenzar en el tick rojo anterior y sacar el circle, se escucha mejor a mi parecer. Hice un cambió total al ritmo de estás partes
00:04:328 (2) - Agregá un silder ahí hasta 00:04:694 (2) - ^
00:04:877 (3) - Agregá un circle ahí. ^
00:21:157 (3) - No estoy del todo seguro si la forma del slider es rankeable, de cualquier forma creo que podrías darle un mejor diseño. (*) sí es rankeable o: si fuera standard no lo sería, pero para ctb sí lo es
00:27:926 (4) - Podrías agregar un circle ahí en (x: 152; y: 160) Para que quede un jump con 00:28:109 (5) - así se destaca más el sonido que hace la guitarra ahí :3 oka
00:32:499 (4) - Dale una mejor forma a ese slider. (*) ñe
00:38:169 (1,2,3) - Hay un lió barbaro ahí XD Como que se te amontonaron mucho las frutas, deberías de mover 00:38:718 (3) - a (x: 376) está bien como está
00:40:182 (1) - Dale una mejor forma a ese slider. (*)
01:07:621 (1) - ^
01:08:718 (3) - ^
Rain
00:03:596 (1) - Creo que ahí no quedaría nada mal un jump :3 Vale
00:06:523 (1) - ^ ^
00:09:084 (10) - Yo agregaría un slider ahí. Tiene un slider o.o
00:12:011 (10) - ^ ^
00:22:255 (6) - Cambiale la forma al slider. LOL, por qué?
00:49:968 (3) - Ponele en (x: 221) Lo correcto era x:244, cambiado
00:50:060 (4) - Ponelo en (x 139) ya cambié el spacing con lo anterior
00:53:169 (7) - Pon un jump ahí >w< No veo la razón
00:56:279 (1) - ^ Si alguien más me lo dice, lo cambiaré
01:02:133 (1) - ^ Oka
01:02:499 (3) - La forma del slider D: Cambiala >_< No veo el porqué
01:09:724 (3) - Veo esa nota muy separada, movelá a (x: 64; y: 168) Está bien para mí
Overdose
00:26:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Creo que podrías darle una mejor forma a ese stream. La forma es divertida para mí, si quieres que la cambié tal vez me hubieras dado una sugerencia xd
00:27:926 (6) - Hace un slider ahí ): Tiene slider o.o creo que tu editor está mal D: y no vez muchos sliders que pongo o tal vez lo borraste intencionalmente
00:38:352 (6,7,8,9,1) - Eso el legal? XD Bueno como sea se más piadoso no? XD Dale otra forma al stream sin tanto jump d.d Es totalmente legal, Deif ya me dijo que es rankeable :3
Eso es todo, perdón por no poner tantas cosas en la Overdose no las entiendo mucho yo la verdad solo las juego y las disfruto (?) Bueno no, es un caño esa diff ;w; De igual manera te felicito por tu map Yue, espero que te lo Rankeen pronto n.n Espero que de algo te sirva este mod.
Muchas gracias por el mod, todo ayuda siempre es bienvenida o3o
Kurokami
Kurokami wrote:
[Salad]
Since this is your easiest diff it should be easy. Lower the AR/OD to 6 at least (I prefer 5) and use circle size 3 since its easier to read a bit and this is Salad after all. I reduced the ar and od to 6, but the CS I did not changed because I would say with CS 3 is harder to read.
00:02:865 (5,6,7) - This should be a stream but using 3 circle here is just sounds really bad. Cover it with a slider please. no, these three circles fit nicely here
00:08:718 (4,5) - Here should be one more circle between them so please use slider or add that circle. ok
00:23:718 (1) - To be honest this slider should start 1/2 earlier at the red tick and have a repeat. There is a stronger drum part. I added a circle
00:24:084 (2,3) - As for these I want to remove (3), make (2) longer then add a circle to 00:24:633. It follows the rhythm a bit better. for me, it sounds better as I did o3o
00:25:730 (1,2,3,4) - I just wonder why you used different rhythm here than before. It should be the same so place change everything after this one to make it consistent. I always like to have variety, that is why I changed the rhythm
01:01:584 (3,4,5,1) - Please make the spacing between notes consistent. This is your easiest diff so there is no need placing which is too hard to read. (This goes on your whole diff.) -__- ok
01:13:657 (3) - I personally don't like sliderends on mainbeat nor on upbeat because those are the points mostly where jumps should be used. And with sliderend it is impossible to emphasize it correctly. I put it that way because that's the rhythm of the song
Not bad but I prefer for this level to only have jumps during kiai. It is just a personal matter but still, its easier to separate the two part of the song this way.
[Platter]
Maybe CS+1? 4 is more common on this level. since in diff Salad I left CS = 2, this seem right that I should leave it in CS = 3 also the Rain and Overdose already have a CS = 4
by the fact that everyone use CS = 4, does not mean you should use it too o3o
00:11:828 - Add a circle? okay
00:15:121 - To be honest this would be best place for HDash and not 00:15:304. fixed
00:18:230 (1,2,3) - The distance is kinda distacting, please you the same one. is fine with me, it is very boring to have the same distance between notes
00:35:243 - Circle? oka
00:52:804 (4) - With this you covered the mainbeat where you HDash should be. Then you added it right after it where it is just not fit 00:52:804 (4,5), please avoid doing this, its not a good choice. I did so for rhythm of the song
01:03:413 (4) - Why no HDash? Ok
Too many HDash. \o/ Yes, you can map here but you need to keep in mind that this level is for casual players. And Platter should be somewhere at the same level as Insane. So just a few, well placed HDash should be used. I suggest you to go trough on the map diff once more and only add Hdashes where you hear strong beat, stronger then the rest of them besides it. I do not think I have too many HDash, have seen Platters a little more difficult than this and many more HDahes
[Rain]
Nice diff I just have a few problem with it.
00:08:718 (8,9,10) - Be careful with this pattern. Its really good but when the distance have difference as in your mapping it becomes really hard to read it with higher AR. Move (9) a bit away and (10) a bit closer. okay
00:26:005 (1,2,3,4) - Hard pattern too. Especially with higher AR. This kind of placement requires a very good timing which makes really hard with AR9+. To avoid this we mostly lowering the distance between each note till it ends. This results less space between them and requires less movement to catch all of them. this is something that I would not change, I really like it as it is now
00:38:352 (5,6,7,8,9) - Move (6,8) a bit closer. ^
00:57:743 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again a farked up distance spacing. ^
01:12:743 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Distance. ^
Even tho this is Rain, you still need to be careful with distance changing. Especially when it is in 1/4 or higher. Step aside from this I think this diff is good, just correct the ones I pointed out and this should be fine.
[Overdose]
00:05:791 (3,4,5) - Equal distance? nop
00:08:901 (6,7,8) - Move (7) in the middle of those two notes? okay
00:11:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The distance between (1,2) is a bit sudden and there is nothing in the song which should be followed by a bigger jump. And I think you should delete (5) since it goes after nothing. you are right about (1,2), but not erased through (5)
00:26:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again some really weird distance changing. is not weird, for me it is fun
00:38:352 (6,7,8,9,1) - Due to your spacing there is two HDash in this pattern. Its just a personal matter but I would like to see them as a normal jump. A bit weird to play it with those dashes on (7) and (9). I will repeat again, never change this!
00:43:749 (3,4,5,6) - You need to be careful with this pattern. Please do not use it just because its fun to watch. Yes, its easier than it looks but I'm not sure whether is it okay here or not. I just don't get the feeling it should be like this here. is not very difficult to do, also so it's a Overdose needs some difficulty
01:19:145 (5,6) - Distance. if someone else tells me, I'll change it
I think the only problem is with some distance. Please correct them.
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I have a feeling that 01:28:291 (1) - this spinner should end at the previous blue tick but this is just a trivial matter.
Not a bad mapset my only problem is with the sudden distances, as I pointed out several times. lol I think you had your reason to do it but still it is not a good idea. For a not experienced player it comes really sudden even after several retry. Thats why I pointed them out. CtB is still needs some consistency both in rhythm and mapping.
I think I said everything what I wanted. Good luck. o/
Thanks for your mod~
Update CtB diff and Skalim diff
¿Aceptas GD Osu!mania 7K MX? me encanta este OP >.<, saludos 
(You even used whistle sound here 01:02:133 (1) - )
(like you did here 01:20:791 (5,6) - )
