Yo, as requested.
[General]
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Best of luck!
[General]
- How about adding more tags? Names of the main characters, maybe? Use more tags, so players will be able to find your map faster!
- 00:15:653 (2,3,4) - it looks awesome but (4) and (3)'s tail are really close, so newbies may mistakenly hit the wrong object. How about making your flow a bit more understtandable and simple?
- 00:22:827 (1) - to fi with the vocals and music better, you can try to replace this slider by 1/1 slider and a circle. Take alook at my example and see if it feels beter or not
- 00:51:522 (1,2) - the 3/2 gap between these two breaks your consistent rhythm and feels kinda confusing/unpleasant. Why don't you try to use something like this here.
Note: 01:00:653 (4,5) and 01:11:088 (4,5) - - pretty much the same happens here. It may not sound as good, as your pattern, but it is much more playable!
Looks really great! Flow and patterns are pretty nice, good job!
- 00:11:903 - there's a beat, it's quite loud and sounds really nice, so I'd ask you to map it. It'll fit with your rhythm and it makes your diff a bit more interesting.
- 00:23:479 (1) - 00:31:957 (1) - the comboing during this part feels a little bit weird and inconsistent. Personally, i can't see any reasons to place NCs so often, try to remove some of the new combos to make your map look neater and more understandable.
The diff looks a bit messy, imo. Apart from this, the diff is quite cool.
- Increasing your OD and HP by one tick would make the diff a bit more challenging and interesting for players. Also, it makes the mapset a bit more balanced.
- 00:52:827 (1,2,3) - try to place a jump here to emphasize the strong beats.
- 01:22:745 (1) - I'd recommend you o start the spinner on 01:22:827 - just like you did it with Normal and like it's done on the Easy. Anyway, it's not a big deal.
Nice diff. Like your flow and rhythm here.
- 00:08:479 (1,2,1) - the 1/4 jumps here are a bit confusing. I'd recommend you to keep spacing consistent here, this part doesn'tfeels jumpy at all.
Note: 00:09:783 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - but jumps here are awesome, don't change them, please! - 00:35:544 (5,1,2) - nazi - the diff itself is really neat, that's why these sliders appear a bit messy. Try to improve blankets here!
- 00:43:207 (1,1,1,1) - n need to overuse New Combos, please remove NCs from these circles / just ONE new Combo at 00:43:044 (1) - will be enough!
- 01:22:745 (1) - I'd recommend you o start the spinner on 01:22:827 - just like you did it with Normal and like it's done on the Easy. Anyway, it's not a big deal.
That's a great diff!
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Best of luck!