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Shulin

Secretpipe wrote:

Hi Shulin :3

Mod from #modreqs !

Please be gentle with my mod :D

[Easy]
Perfect imo

[Normal]
00:29:302 (2) - Flow is weird with previously slider ! CTRL+ H and move it ! Done
00:48:445 - Add a circle here , it flow better with the rythm ! ( dunno if it's overmap ) Hm, I prefer a gap here tbh.
01:10:731 (3) - Make it symmetrical ( put up 1 grid : nazi :3 ) Okay!

[Hard]
00:16:731 (7) - NC Hm, I think it looks a little odd
00:19:302 (5,6) - Stack them No, I like it how it is! xD
00:37:588 (5,6) - ^
01:21:588 (1,2) - Change that pattern o3o What should I change it too? I have no more ideas for 2 1/1 notes lol

Sorry if my mod was useless !
I love it !
Hope to see it rank asap :D
Good luck !
Thank you for your mod! :D
Zejky
Hello Shulin :X
kazumikos said, she'll translate :D
[Gerenal]
  1. để người chơi taiko cũng có thể cảm thấy thích thú khi choiwi map này, tôi muốn khuyên bạn nên dùng cách thủ công cho hit sound, ngoài ra tôi cũng muốn bạn thêm nhiều hit sound whistle để map có thể sôi động hơn ( nhất là trong map hard ).
[Easy]
  1. 00:28:445 (1) - x136 y99
  2. 00:14:731 (1,2) - 1 and 2 not good. 2 need down 1 gird snap
  3. 00:33:017 (1,2) - use my code will better
    Code
    36,112,33017,2,0,P|72:55|144:31,1,130
    156,159,34159,2,0,P|120:216|48:240,1,130
  4. 00:35:302 (3) - really not balance
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:302 (3) - làm cho nó đẹp hơn với trước đó
  2. 00:18:445 - ở đây không cần thiết, nên đặt nó từ đây 00:18:731 -
  3. 00:20:159 (2) - nên thêm note ở đây
  4. 00:34:159 (3) - nhìn vào cách đặt note, tôi muốn bạn thêm hit sound finish trên đầu note
  5. 00:39:017 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - tôi nghe thấy 1 2 3. 1 2 3. 1 2 3. đây là dãy note mà tôi nghe được
  6. 00:42:445 - 00:43:588 - thêm 1 note nếu bạn sửa trước đó
  7. 01:07:302 (3,4) - chỉ là ý kiến, tôi muốn nó như này, vì nó sẽ đầy đủ âm thanh hơn
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:302 (5,6) - 00:37:588 (5,6) - cuối slider của 5 và đầu slider của 6 tạo âm thanh không hay, cố gắng thêm hit sound hoặc làm slider hay thanh trượt khác
  2. 00:27:445 - thêm 1 note ở đây. nếu bạn đã thêm 1 note ở đây, thì 00:27:159 (7,8,10) - thêm hit sound normal
  3. 00:34:017 - tìm cách thêm note ở đây cho nó khác ở đây 00:29:017 (4,5) - như thế người chơi sẽ thấy thú vị hơn
  4. 01:04:445 (1) - cho hit sound giống như đây 00:55:302 (1) - sẽ hay hơn
  5. 00:50:160 (3) - xóa cái này và thêm vào đó là 3 note với hit sound normal
  6. 00:51:017 (5) - thêm hit sound normal ở đây
thật sự mà nói thì mod tôi hơi lộn xôn về cả ngôn từ lẫn cách thức ( i don't know english ) , vì trong khi mod tôi khá bị xao nhãng.
vì map của bạn thật sự tốt cho nên tất cả ý kiến trên chỉ mang tính chất tham khảm
và tôi muốn cảm ơn bạn về những lời khuyên tình cảm :)
GL
kazumikos
lmao
kazumikos

Zejky wrote:

[Gerenal]
  1. I think you should use custom hitsound so that taiko players can also enjoy the map (using sampleset isnt working for taiko). Besides, please use more whistle, especially in Hard diff
[Easy]
  1. 00:28:445 (1) - x136 y99
  2. 00:14:731 (1,2) - 1 and 2 not good. 2 need down 1 gird snap
  3. 00:33:017 (1,2) - use my code will better
    Code
    36,112,33017,2,0,P|72:55|144:31,1,130
    156,159,34159,2,0,P|120:216|48:240,1,130
  4. 00:35:302 (3) - really not balance
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:302 (3) - ugly
  2. 00:18:445 - start at 00:18:731 -
  3. 00:20:159 (2) - add note
  4. 00:34:159 (3) - finish at start
  5. 00:39:017 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I can hear 1 2 3. 1 2 3. 1 2 3. This is how I hear the beat:
  6. 00:42:445 - 00:43:588 - If you fix the above, add 1 note here
  7. 01:07:302 (3,4) - Just suggestion
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:302 (5,6) - 00:37:588 (5,6) - add more hitsound here, or change it to sliders (honestly I have no idea what he's talking about)
  2. 00:27:445 - add note, If you do then 00:27:159 (7,8,10) - add normal hitsound
  3. 00:34:017 - add note so that it wont repeat 00:29:017 (4,5) - that way it'll be more interesting
  4. 01:04:445 (1) - put hitsound like 00:55:302 (1) - ?
  5. 00:50:160 (3) - delete and add 3 note with normal hitsound instead?l
  6. 00:51:017 (5) - add normal hitsound
Sorry my mod is wordy and messy. Your map is really perfect so these are just suggestions.

And I wanna thank you for the love advices you gave me :)

GL
Topic Starter
Shulin
Thank you Zejky.
Garven
Honestly the only thing I have to suggest is to set tick rate to 2, but I can understand if you don't want to considering the tick sounds.
Also the artist should be set to Nakagawa Ken, right? I always get confused over this rule, but I don't believe he has a preferred order listed.

Did you apply anything from Zejky's mods? If so, just poke me and we'll get this set going.
Topic Starter
Shulin
I want to keep the artist Ken Nakagawa to keep it consistent with the other ranked maps (some of which are my own lol). That, and I only really see his named romanised this way, not sure but I think most composers do it this way. Tick 2 doesn't really fit with the tick sounds and the rhythm I choose but I see where you're coming from.

IIRC I changed some hitsounds and a placement or two from Zejky's mod, I should have done a full reply but I was lazy.

Thanks for looking at this Garven! :D
Garven
I tried doing some searching around for references from the Western side of things as to his name. I only ever see it as "Ken Nakagawa" on fan sites (didn't find anything official to show which was it is preferred), but in Japanese listings it's always surname, firstname. If you can show me some official links where it's Ken first, I'm fine with it.

That said, I did get some input from Melophobia:



Anyway, lemme know what happens~
Topic Starter
Shulin
I only have the scans from the official soundtrack, it should be enough?

http://puu.sh/7g3Po.jpg

These are from the scans from the Rorona soundtrack, also using "Ken Nakagawa":

http://puu.sh/7g3Se.jpg
http://puu.sh/7g3SA.jpg

Either way I think consistency with other maps is important, as long as the Japanese characters are listed under artist I don't see the issue :P
Garven
(Sorry I lost track of the posts)

That'll do, sure. Also I think I found my next avatar.

Sonnyc
Yay~
Topic Starter
Shulin
Thanks Garven :D
LostCrow_old
cute song/map. gogo rank! :)
Aurele
Easy
00:46:159 (3) - You might want to keep the spacing consistency here.

Normal
00:11:302 (3) - This blanket could be improved with the sliderball of the previous slider
01:10:731 (3) - Was this slider suppose to be aligned with the previous one? o.o
01:17:874 (5) - You can easily do a better blanket here (:


call me back, darling c:
Topic Starter
Shulin

Gabe wrote:

Easy
00:46:159 (3) - You might want to keep the spacing consistency here.Fixed

Normal
00:11:302 (3) - This blanket could be improved with the sliderball of the previous slider I've tweaked it slightly but honestly I can't notice the difference xD
01:10:731 (3) - Was this slider suppose to be aligned with the previous one? o.o If you tilt your head it is! But yeah, it's supposed to be like that lol
01:17:874 (5) - You can easily do a better blanket here (: I've improved this one ^^


call me back, darling c:
Thanks Gabe <3
Aurele
meep o3o~
Ozato Fumika
gratz~~
Lissette
Gratz Shulin!
Secretpipe
Yes :D
Gratz~~
Topic Starter
Shulin
Thanks everyone :D
HeatKai
wow wowowo i remember this, congrats chicken ^____^!
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