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CandyWind_old

Mikoniance wrote:

Mikoniance wrote:

Ayo~ Mi here
(red = errors, blue = personal touches, green = good job :L)

[Hard]
The jumps in this are just so surprising I hardly noticed them!
00:21:328 - First example. It just seems too fast :L Perhaps making it a 'tad' closer
And there would be little purpose naming all the examples, but just please make the jumps a little bit easier, this is a hard not insane ;-;
02:12:940 - Snap the end of this I wouldve ended it at 02:11:615
OD and drain a bit generous?
01:41:605 - Slider overlaps note 7 slightly Perhaps make it curve around the note?
02:06:113 - Move the slider onto the downbeat pls ;-;

[Insane]
Jump compilation 2k14! (heh)
Same thing with the spinner.
00:57:582 - The strain on this jump ;-; Try reversing this slider with CTRL-G
Yeah I found insane to be pretty alright. Nothing bad worth mentioning :L

When's preview point? ;-;

And that's all from Mi~ gl
All set mikoniance :) Thanks for you're help \o/
Dashie
i love this map so much :D
Topic Starter
CandyWind_old

Dashie wrote:

i love this map so much :D
Thank you so much dashie <3
NeedsCoffee
[Normal]
00:33:582 (5,1) - This jump is a little large/surprising for a normal map. Maybe try angling the sliders so the jump is a little smaller?
01:55:860 (2,1) - ^
00:34:833 (3) - I'm not sure this long slider seems to make sense musically. Maybe change it so it looks more like this?:

01:21:598 (4,5,6,7,8) - These beats could be a little more evenly spaced.
01:58:361 (3) - Try moving this 3 down a little. With all the stuff going on here, it's a little tricky to spot :P

[Hard]
• You might want to check this, but I didn't see any background for this difficulty. Might just be my computer though :3
00:41:085 (3,4,5) - I think these sliders are so cute :) I think they're just little awkward to play like that though. Could you reverse the second slider so (5) is on the left side?
01:15:346 - I think a beat might be nice here after that run, to keep the energy movin'.
01:53:109 (3) - Ok, now I'm just being OCD, but this 3 could move just slightly down left, so it's more centered.

[Insane]
• These hitsounds are so cool. Why aren't they on the other difficulties?
00:24:826 (8) - This 8 could move over, so it's not right over the slider's end circle.
00:36:328 (3,5) - I think these are neat patterns, but they might benefit from aligning the corners with the slider ticks.
01:09:334 (3,5) - ^
01:39:464 (9) - I think this slider's timing is slightly off.
01:41:839 (7,1,2,3,4) - The run after 7 could move slightly down, since 7 starts the run.
01:41:964 (1) - I might remove the NC here, and then...
01:42:589 (5,1) - Change this NC from 1 to the note right before it. That way, the run there is all one combo, and the next NC starts on the downbeat.

I love the map! Hope it works out. :D
Topic Starter
CandyWind_old

Zafum wrote:

[Normal]
00:33:582 (5,1) - This jump is a little large/surprising for a normal map. Maybe try angling the sliders so the jump is a little smaller? Alright done
01:55:860 (2,1) - ^ ^
00:34:833 (3) - I'm not sure this long slider seems to make sense musically. Maybe change it so it looks more like this?:
Didn't get same form but close, yep
01:21:598 (4,5,6,7,8) - These beats could be a little more evenly spaced.
01:58:361 (3) - Try moving this 3 down a little. With all the stuff going on here, it's a little tricky to spot :P Why you hide there :c stupid note XD

[Hard]
• You might want to check this, but I didn't see any background for this difficulty. Might just be my computer though :3 Yep had problems with that before...
00:41:085 (3,4,5) - I think these sliders are so cute :) I think they're just little awkward to play like that though. Could you reverse the second slider so (5) is on the left side? Good idea
01:15:346 - I think a beat might be nice here after that run, to keep the energy movin'. Yeah i usualy do that, but forgot to do it there >.<
01:53:109 (3) - Ok, now I'm just being OCD, but this 3 could move just slightly down left, so it's more centered. Done .)

[Insane]
• These hitsounds are so cool. Why aren't they on the other difficulties? Have no clue will try fix it though
00:24:826 (8) - This 8 could move over, so it's not right over the slider's end circle. Done, i saw that. I also get oftent confused by it
00:36:328 (3,5) - I think these are neat patterns, but they might benefit from aligning the corners with the slider ticks. This i dont get
01:09:334 (3,5) - ^ ^
01:39:464 (9) - I think this slider's timing is slightly off.Wow good eye!
01:41:839 (7,1,2,3,4) - The run after 7 could move slightly down, since 7 starts the run.
01:41:964 (1) - I might remove the NC here, and then... NC? ...
01:42:589 (5,1) - Change this NC from 1 to the note right before it. That way, the run there is all one combo, and the next NC starts on the downbeat.

I love the map! Hope it works out. :D
Thank you so much, will fix everything <3
Runescape_old_1
Mi returns~
[Insane]
00:39:705 - Move this two Grid Size 2 places to the left?
00:45:580 End this on note 1? http://puu.sh/6X3GF.jpg Like this
01:01:298 ^ note 4 http://puu.sh/6X3NL.jpg ~
01:04:833 - Overlap note 2?
01:02:333 ~ 01:18:085 - This is a repeated section. Please rotate some kind of way (eg horizontal seems nice here)

[Hard]
00:19:826 - This and next note one place to the left.
01:54:591 - New combo~
01:55:847 - Reverse beginning and end?
02:00:092 - New combo~

And that's all for now unless you want to be spammed with personal preference changes.
GL.
Mi out~
NeedsCoffee

CandyWind wrote:

This i dont get
Actually... nvm. I'm not sure what I was trying to say there :3

CandyWind wrote:

NC? ...
NC stands for "New Combo"
Topic Starter
CandyWind_old

Zafum wrote:

CandyWind wrote:

This i dont get
Actually... nvm. I'm not sure what I was trying to say there :3

CandyWind wrote:

NC? ...
NC stands for "New Combo"
I figured it out after XD
MagoichiSaica
Tags: Applejack Ashleigh Ball Apple Bloom Michelle Creber Big McIntosh Peter New Granny Smith Tabita St. Germain Pinkie Pie Shannon Chan-Kent
Don't put "pony" in tags cause its in the source
Topic Starter
CandyWind_old

MagoichiSaica wrote:

Tags: Applejack Ashleigh Ball Apple Bloom Michelle Creber Big McIntosh Peter New Granny Smith Tabita St. Germain Pinkie Pie Shannon Chan-Kent
Don't put "pony" in tags cause its in the source
Done, thanks man, someother mods told me to have the tags i had..
Bara-
If somebody makes a diff for your map, or if you are making a collab, add the names of the people who created them to tags. So: Add Mikoniance
If more people make a diff or do a collab, add their names to the tags IN ALL DIFFS(!!!) so they can be found easier.
Good lcuk!
Topic Starter
CandyWind_old

baraatje123 wrote:

If somebody makes a diff for your map, or if you are making a collab, add the names of the people who created them to tags. So: Add Mikoniance
If more people make a diff or do a collab, add their names to the tags IN ALL DIFFS(!!!) so they can be found easier.
Good lcuk!
thanks i forgot. Got an eye for details
heh
Bara-
Oh, maybe you should post the updatelog in spoilerboxes, because it is a long list, and call them what you have called the heads.
Do it like
[box=date] updatelog[/box]
If you don't understand, because I explained it very weirdly, PM me, and I'll help it, since scrolling the list is not that bad now, but later, it'll be awful.

Edit: what are detspørs? Typo? Autocorrect? Forgot to type it in English? ;)
Edit2: Lol 333th post
Topic Starter
CandyWind_old

baraatje123 wrote:

Oh, maybe you should post the updatelog in spoilerboxes, because it is a long list, and call them what you have called the heads.
Do it like
[box=date] updatelog[/box]
If you don't understand, because I explained it very weirdly, PM me, and I'll help it, since scrolling the list is not that bad now, but later, it'll be awful.
okej,ill do it when i have time. Thanks :)
Xiaolin
Mod from #modhelp c:
[General]
I modded some stuff in-game, and if this map is done, please move it to pending. Also, you should remove the skin (All the elements) cause it doesn't fit, you used different ponies. And also, it says that it have a video, but I don't see the video even when I download it with the video, please fix them all. And if you are adding the video which you set, better not add it, cause its so annoying cause its not HD.
[Collab Normal]
-There's lots of stuff you need to fix, but I can't say them cause I'm pretty busy, and remove ''Collab'' from the diff name.
00:06:573 (3,4) -DS.
00:11:5754 (1,2) -^
00:22:576 (1,2,3,4) -^
00:33:578 -NC.
00:36:578 -Remove spinner.
[Hard]
01:17:835 -Remove break.
[Insane]
-Why you didn't add this hitsound to the other diffs?
00:50:081 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -Remove, it doesn't fit the time.
01:18:335 -Remove break.

GL, and star. :>
Topic Starter
CandyWind_old

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Mod from #modhelp c:
[General]
I modded some stuff in-game, and if this map is done, please move it to pending. Also, you should remove the skin (All the elements) cause it doesn't fit, you used different ponies. And also, it says that it have a video, but I don't see the video even when I download it with the video, please fix them all. And if you are adding the video which you set, better not add it, cause its so annoying cause its not HD.
[Collab Normal]
-There's lots of stuff you need to fix, but I can't say them cause I'm pretty busy, and remove ''Collab'' from the diff name.
00:06:573 (3,4) -DS. Done
00:11:5754 (1,2) -^ ^
00:22:576 (1,2,3,4) -^ ^
00:33:578 -NC. Done
00:36:578 -Remove spinner.Removed and added some slider instead
[Hard]
01:17:835 -Remove break. Sorry not
[Insane]
-Why you didn't add this hitsound to the other diffs? An errror i dont know why it didnt add for the other diffs
00:50:081 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -Remove, it doesn't fit the time. Fixed
01:18:335 -Remove break. sorry no

GL, and star. :>
Aww thanks <3
Runescape_old_1
Updated a bunch off stuff.
Never realized how bad it was... maybe its just me praising myself *Shrugs*
Enjoy the updated normal~
rcmero
You may wanna fix your beatmap skin selection. The folder's name is "Applejack V1.0", not "Applejack V10". I actually though it was weird that it was giving me the missing skin message as I already had it.

EDIT: You might wanna redo Insane. Sounds like a bunch of notes splatted together with absolutely no rhythm whatsoever.
Topic Starter
CandyWind_old

rcmero wrote:

You may wanna fix your beatmap skin selection. The folder's name is "Applejack V1.0", not "Applejack V10". I actually though it was weird that it was giving me the missing skin message as I already had it. Okai, will fix

EDIT: You might wanna redo Insane. Sounds like a bunch of notes splatted together with absolutely no rhythm whatsoever.
It might sound that for you
[ Pinkie Shy ]
This map should be ranked :D
twilightTheunicorn
This is a friend of Candywind
he got banend and told me to give out his skype for those who wanted it
skype: MasterGun123
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