1. Cute (1,49 stars, 99 notes)
2. Lovely (4,54 stars, 353 notes)
3. Sweet (2,19 stars, 246 notes)

James2250 wrote:

Any source/tags?

cute:
hp drain/overall diff/circle size do not all need to be as low as possible..you can always raise them up by 1 or 2
00:39:066 (2) - move down to align with 1
00:48:066 (1) - end at 00:50:166?
00:50:766 (2) - start at 00:50:466 and end at same place
01:05:766 (5) - new combo
needs hitsounds added

sweet:
00:40:266 (1) - sounds much better ending at same place as spinner in "cute"
end kiai time somewhere?

nice relaxing song/map
*star*

Kytoxid wrote:

Looks nice, here's a few suggestions:

Your comboburst is too big. Please resize it to 700x500 or smaller.

Preview points are not set. They can be set by moving to a place in the song and choosing Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview. The preview point is what the player hears in the song select screen, and needs to be set individually for all difficulties. Make sure to put them at the same place.

You have many notes that look like you wanted to align them, but did not. For example, 01:05:766 (1,2) on Cute. To align the 2 perfectly, turn off Grid Snap, and drag it while holding Ctrl and having distance snap on. This should perfectly snap it above the endpoint. Go through the entire map doing this, and it'll look pristinely snapped.

Cut the MP3 where you stopped mapping, just past the 4-minute mark. Usually we use Audacity here, since it's free and easily downloadable. Note that the offset will change a bit and you'll need to retime it.

On Sweet, 02:30:966 (5,6,7,8) is slightly slanted. Also remember to snap things more cleanly here too, like at 02:33:066 (1,2).

As mentioned in IRC, consider making harder difficulty; most skilled players will otherwise just FC Sweet for the boost in Ranked Score and not come back.

For audio changes, we try to put the inherited offsets BEFORE the notes they affect. Otherwise, if a player hits the note early, it will follow the previous audio settings. I recommend shifting them by 1/2 where possible, and 1/4 where that's not.

Have two stars (or 3 SP) for a well-made first map.

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Overall

1. Eu uso "countdown" de vez em quando mas não acho que essa voz masculina e animada combine com essa música. Eu recomendo ou tirar o countdown, ou pelo menos deixar ele mudo. É mais "soft"~Ok!
2. E outra coisa: apesar de ser bem legal a idéia de uma Miku gigante aparecer na tela inteira, os combobursts, infelizmente, têm tamanho limite. E que, mais infelizmente, é 500 pix, ou seja, a exata metade do tamanho atual. São regras do peppy ;_;Faço depois x.x
   Fixa isso, please.

Cute

1. 00:32:466(5) - New Combo~ Ok!
2. 00:52:866(timing section) - Não posicione timing sections que mudam o volume ou o hit sound em cima de uma nota, pois se o jogar se atrasar só um pouquinho no acompanhamento do slider, o som vai sair do timing anterior, ou seja, soft. recomendo botar esse daqui 1/4 atrás (00:52:716) Ok!
3. 01:20:166(5) - New Combo seria legal aqui... Eu acho

Ok!
Faz mais! Ta muuuito curtinho~ Vou terminar depois xD

Sweet - Você parou de mapear quando a música chegou na parte animada? D: Vou terminar depois xD

1. 00:55:266(spinner) - Acabando muito perto dos hit circles... Termina esse daqui em 00:57:066 e adiciona uma nota em 00:57:666. 00:57:066 e 00:57:666 dão no mesmo lugar aqui
2. 01:18:666(spinner) - Mesma idéia que o de cima ^
3. 01:42:666(4) - Bota New combo aqui e tiro o que ta na nota logo depois. Ok!
4. 01:53:316(5,6) - Não da pra enchergar nada aqui ._. Bota em um local mais visível. Ok!
5. 03:08:166(1) - New Combo desnecessário? Ok!
6. 03:12:066(1~11) - Algum New Combo por aqui seria bom. Talvez no (6) Ok!
7. 03:43:266(Timing Section) -Essa timing section ta muuuito alta. Ta meio feio =/ Ok!
   Timing mod na Normal
   
   SPOILER

   Essa você TEM que fazer ok?~
   Pelo mesmo motivo da Easy, uma timing section que muda volume ou estilo de som não pode ficar em cima de uma nota. Então estas são as timings sections que você deve mover ou 1/2 ou 1/4 para trás na linha de tempo:
   

   • 00:52:866 - move 1/2 para trás Ok!
     01:05:766 - ^ Ok!
     01:50:466 - ^ Ok!
     02:23:766 - Cria uma Timing Section aqui, com som de Normal mas sem Kiai Ok!
     02:33:066 - 1/2 pra trás Ok!
     02:33:666 - 1/4 pra frente Aqui o 02:33:666 dá no mesmo lugar que o 02:33:066
     03:02:466 - 1/2 pra trás Ok!
     03:36:066 - 1/4 pra trás Ok!
     03:43:266 - 1/2 pra trás Ok!

Pra uma música tão calminha, o clap ta fazendo um som bem feinho~
Tipo, nas partes soft, você poderia substituir o clap pelo hit simples do Normal. Faz um som legal, bem calminho.Ok... Aqui eu fiz assim: Peguei o normal-hitnormal, colei na pasta e renomeei pra soft-hitclap, pra todos os claps do soft ficarem como o hit normal do normal =D

Apareceram 4 "666" no meio do mod xD
O musiquinha do diabo

Ae, com certeza ganhou a minha estrela~

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Perai ai... quando eu fix o TIMING MOD, você mudou as notas???!?!?! É pra mudar as timing sections xD Por isso é timing mod >_>

YGOkid8 wrote:

Overall
You'll make another difficulty, right...?

There're a few things I don't like:
1. Maximum Score Difference between Cute and Sweet. Approx. 88 000 ~ 1 000 000? Seriously, that's a HUGE difference. At least make a lot longer.

2. I know it's a slow song, and therefore, low slider velocity. But I find it a biiit too slow. Increase, please.

Otherwise, there's nothing wrong I can find

YGOkid8 wrote:

Overall
You'll make another difficulty, right...?

There're a few things I don't like:
1. Maximum Score Difference between Cute and Sweet. Approx. 88 000 ~ 1 000 000? Seriously, that's a HUGE difference. At least make a lot longer. Maybe make Cute a bit longer so then there's at least 100 000 points or something? Because usually the point difference between levels are around the 500 000 mark. yeah, there are heaps of songs that have score differences bigger than 88 000 ~ 1 000 000, it's just that with such a low score, it just makes it look bigger

2. I know it's a slow song, and therefore, low slider velocity. But I find it a biiit too slow. Increase, please. sure, slow velocity is a-ok. But it needs to be a bit fast. I'm thinking increasing to 0.8? yes, only .1 difference, but there's a difference to the feel. With your current one, my hand hurts to move slowly. With this one, it seems more calming

Otherwise, there's nothing wrong I can find

termerys wrote:

hi
i have some suggestion for u, feel free to fix it.
Cute & Sweet:

it's slow song and it has slow slider velocity, it'll be gerat if u increase it a little.
(why do u create 2 v.slow difficulties = =,(suggestion) make one of them different with other(?))
I hate to say it everytime. u.u I'm lazy and don't wanna increase slider velocity .-.

lovely:

00.33.366: not perfectly stack Ok
00.55.191: (suggestion) remove time brake(?)I did not do that: I put this brake here because i have failed here one time D8
04.46.866: oh so confuse lol (suggestion) change(?)o.õ
other is fine for me
+star

1. You should cut hatsune-miku-wallpaper-4x.jpg, the allowed biggest size is 1024x768 pixels (If it's used for SB, 800x600 pixels is the biggest size)
2. I saw code about cheedar.png, hatsune_miku.png, tsukikuzu.png in osb.file, but they are not in the folder, if you DO have these image, you should do full submit again. Or, you should delete these code in osb.file
3. Like Chacha17 said, move VOCALOID in the source to the tags
4. Offset of [Lovely] is 24066, you should use same offset in a map

1. BPM is fine, Offset : 24098
   Resnap all note and at least make KIAI set timing section right on ticks

1. 01:25:148 (3) - ends at blue tick is werid, ends at 01:25:298 better IMO
2. 02:10:298 (4) - Slider starts here better

1. 04:00:398 (8) - slider ends here better

1. 02:58:748 (6) - no whistle
2. 04:05:798 (s) - After resnapped, here is overlapped
3. 04:46:898 (4) - Hard to tell which side sliderball to go
4. This diff. is too long, and some piano parts still sounds off