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Sellenite

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-03-19T09:15:08+00:00

你好，来自Modding Queues M4M

[Kodora's Easy]
Now sliderslide is silence，but you use 5% green line to silence slidertick，is unrankable ，watch out that.

[Gideon5504's Easy]
00:27:087 (2) - move a it to keep the same line with 1
00:45:169 (1) - Sounds like some empty
01:18:046 (3) - move other direction and blanket？
01:42:703 (3) - blanket，use shrink ring to check it
01:49:279 (2) - ^
01:50:923 (3) - overlap

[Normal]
00:28:731 (1,1) - 不要这样放【其实我觉得第二个1后面有个人声怪怪的，改成滑条？
00:59:553 (6) - 人和鼓点一起的重音在尾巴了
01:09:827 (2) - 放平一点
01:11:060 (3,1,2,3) - 这里最好改一改..作为新手这里肯定读不好
01:39:416 这里开始sliderslide和slidertick都同时静音了，这样是不可rank的，注意一下
01:45:991 (1,3) - overlap
01:51:231 (2) - 前面也有这个东西，但我觉得改为note单点会比较好，打击很爽的感觉，变成滑条会削弱这个感觉

[KwaN's Hard]
00:37:566 (2,3) - 2与3比前面距离多了少少，00:38:799 (2,3) - 但这里又不是，看起来怪怪的
00:54:827 (4,1) - 虽然是鼓点声做滑条头，但是我觉得这里跟人声下滑条会比较好：

SPOILER

00:58:320 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏比较密，只是建议与01:04:895 (1,2,3) - 交换一下节奏，因为接近高潮了
01:41:060 (1,2,3) - 我觉得这里是用尾stack的好机会

[AI's Hard]
00:08:183 (3) - 这个也用一下blanket吧..怪别扭的
00:23:388 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 音非常虚
00:27:087 (1) - 滑条拉到00:27:395结束，超赞
00:50:306 (1) - 音太轻，作为单点应该不怎么好
00:53:183 (1) - 重音在滑条尾了
01:02:430 (3) - ^
01:09:621 (4,1,2,3,4) - 说实话这里真的不好看...
有一大部分音效不见了，请补上

[Insane]
00:23:080 我觉得这里加个note变成三连会比较好
00:23:388 - 00:26:882这段为什么要静音啊...超级别扭/w\
00:38:594 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏太空了，比hard空太多
00:56:060 (4) - overmap
01:04:895 (3,4,5) - 也是静音..如果是真的喜欢这样就不要改吧，但其他人听上去应该会觉得奇怪的，以下相同问题不再提
01:08:799 (5,6) - 不好听，第三连落在了一个很轻的音上
01:10:854 (1,2) - overmap
01:18:388 (7,8) - 这两个咋回事..实在放不到1/4线上就换另一种下节奏的方式

good luck~

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-03-19T09:43:38+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
你好，来自Modding Queues M4M

[Kodora's Easy]
Now sliderslide is silence，but you use 5% green line to silence slidertick，is unrankable ，watch out that.

[Gideon5504's Easy]
00:27:087 (2) - move a it to keep the same line with 1
00:45:169 (1) - Sounds like some empty
01:18:046 (3) - move other direction and blanket？
01:42:703 (3) - blanket，use shrink ring to check it
01:49:279 (2) - ^
01:50:923 (3) - overlap

[Normal]
00:28:731 (1,1) - 不要这样放【其实我觉得第二个1后面有个人声怪怪的，改成滑条？
00:59:553 (6) - 人和鼓点一起的重音在尾巴了
01:09:827 (2) - 放平一点fixed
01:11:060 (3,1,2,3) - 这里最好改一改..作为新手这里肯定读不好fixed
01:39:416 这里开始sliderslide和slidertick都同时静音了，这样是不可rank的，注意一下fixed
01:45:991 (1,3) - overlap
01:51:231 (2) - 前面也有这个东西，但我觉得改为note单点会比较好，打击很爽的感觉，变成滑条会削弱这个感觉

[KwaN's Hard]
00:37:566 (2,3) - 2与3比前面距离多了少少，00:38:799 (2,3) - 但这里又不是，看起来怪怪的
00:54:827 (4,1) - 虽然是鼓点声做滑条头，但是我觉得这里跟人声下滑条会比较好：
SPOILER
00:58:320 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏比较密，只是建议与01:04:895 (1,2,3) - 交换一下节奏，因为接近高潮了
01:41:060 (1,2,3) - 我觉得这里是用尾stack的好机会

[AI's Hard]
00:08:183 (3) - 这个也用一下blanket吧..怪别扭的
00:23:388 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 音非常虚
00:27:087 (1) - 滑条拉到00:27:395结束，超赞
00:50:306 (1) - 音太轻，作为单点应该不怎么好
00:53:183 (1) - 重音在滑条尾了
01:02:430 (3) - ^
01:09:621 (4,1,2,3,4) - 说实话这里真的不好看...
有一大部分音效不见了，请补上

[Insane]
00:23:080 我觉得这里加个note变成三连会比较好fixed
00:23:388 - 00:26:882这段为什么要静音啊...超级别扭/w\fixed
00:38:594 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏太空了，比hard空太多
00:56:060 (4) - overmap
01:04:895 (3,4,5) - 也是静音..如果是真的喜欢这样就不要改吧，但其他人听上去应该会觉得奇怪的，以下相同问题不再提
01:08:799 (5,6) - 不好听，第三连落在了一个很轻的音上
01:10:854 (1,2) - overmap
01:18:388 (7,8) - 这两个咋回事..实在放不到1/4线上就换另一种下节奏的方式

good luck~

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-03-19T11:32:32+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
你好，来自Modding Queues M4M

[KwaN's Hard]
00:37:566 (2,3) - 2与3比前面距离多了少少，00:38:799 (2,3) - 但这里又不是，看起来怪怪的 kkk
00:54:827 (4,1) - 虽然是鼓点声做滑条头，但是我觉得这里跟人声下滑条会比较好：欸我整張圖都沒有紅線開1/2滑條的
SPOILER
00:58:320 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏比较密，只是建议与01:04:895 (1,2,3) - 交换一下节奏，因为接近高潮了诶?
01:41:060 (1,2,3) - 我觉得这里是用尾stack的好机会;w;

good luck~謝謝 \:D/

SPOILER

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@Teller, please delete the .osb file since there's no storyboard.

Kodora

Kodora 2014-03-19T12:06:34+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
你好，来自Modding Queues M4M

[Kodora's Easy]
Now sliderslide is silence，but you use 5% green line to silence slidertick，is unrankable ，watch out that. It is not unrankable

_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 2014-03-20T14:11:13+00:00

tellertheworld wrote:
Sellenite wrote:
你好，来自Modding Queues M4M

[AI's Hard]
00:08:183 (3) - 这个也用一下blanket吧..怪别扭的
00:23:388 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 音非常虚
00:27:087 (1) - 滑条拉到00:27:395结束，超赞
00:50:306 (1) - 音太轻，作为单点应该不怎么好
00:53:183 (1) - 重音在滑条尾了
01:02:430 (3) - ^
01:09:621 (4,1,2,3,4) - 说实话这里真的不好看...
有一大部分音效不见了，请补上

good luck~

Fixed everyone

)
TellerTheWorld : http://puu.sh/7CBIW.osu

tkcbahamut

29 posts

Joined January 2014

tkcbahamut 2014-03-22T01:50:51+00:00

Better check the AIMOD...for example Kodora's Easy

[Normal]
00:28:731 (1) - It is too much reverse slider in Normal, better break it in serval parts
01:37:772 (3) - ^

The whole map's cool, nice job!
Short mod

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-03-22T16:36:11+00:00

Kodora wrote:
Sellenite wrote:
你好，来自Modding Queues M4M

[Kodora's Easy]
Now sliderslide is silence，but you use 5% green line to silence slidertick，is unrankable ，watch out that. It is not unrankable

I ask BAT，he said it is allowed
Sorry for my mistake！

Kirin

267 posts

Joined August 2012

Kirin 2014-03-23T19:19:35+00:00

Mod from queue

[Gideon5504's Easy]
00:18:868 (1) x:388 y:72 It would be better there.
00:27:087 (2) Move it up a bit like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1446405
01:15:580 (4) x:200 y:56

[KwaN's Hard]
Maybe streams like these (01:18:868 (1,2,3,4) / 01:32:019 (1,2,3,4) / ) wouldn't be good for an Hard diff.

[Insane]
00:40:238 (3) x:164 y:56

Nothing to say to the other diffs, they are good for me.

Sorry for the short mod and good luck!

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-03-24T08:32:25+00:00

Kirin wrote:
Mod from queue

[KwaN's Hard]
Maybe streams like these (01:18:868 (1,2,3,4) / 01:32:019 (1,2,3,4) / ) wouldn't be good for an Hard diff. If you gonna say something which is not good, then please provide some suggestions!

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-03-24T08:32:47+00:00

Kirin wrote:
Mod from queue

SPOILER
[Gideon5504's Easy]
00:18:868 (1) x:388 y:72 It would be better there.
00:27:087 (2) Move it up a bit like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1446405
01:15:580 (4) x:200 y:56

[KwaN's Hard]
Maybe streams like these (01:18:868 (1,2,3,4) / 01:32:019 (1,2,3,4) / ) wouldn't be good for an Hard diff.

[Insane]
00:40:238 (3) x:164 y:56 fixed

Nothing to say to the other diffs, they are good for me.

Sorry for the short mod and good luck!

Thank your mod~

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2014-03-25T11:02:31+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
[Gideon5504's Easy]
00:27:087 (2) - move a it to keep the same line with 1 ok.
00:45:169 (1) - Sounds like some empty No, followed the drums.
01:18:046 (3) - move other direction and blanket？Blanketed. Confuse players if change direction.
01:42:703 (3) - blanket，use shrink ring to check it Fixed.
01:49:279 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:50:923 (3) - overlapIt's intentional and it's readable.

Tks for modding :3

Kirin wrote:
[Gideon5504's Easy]
00:18:868 (1) x:388 y:72 It would be better there.Doesn't really make a difference and I'm keeping the spacing 1.2x consistently throughout the diff.
00:27:087 (2) Move it up a bit like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1446405 Fixed.
01:15:580 (4) x:200 y:56 The position is intentional as I want players to have a better flow as the mapping goes downwards.

Tks for modding :3

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2014-03-25T11:03:35+00:00

Code for update:

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: fortuna.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 72498
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 79690,79709,83613,93322,94863,120375
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:fortuna on the Sixteenth night
TitleUnicode:fortuna on the Sixteenth night
Artist:fripSide
ArtistUnicode:fripSide
Creator:tellertheworld
Version:Gideon5504's Easy
Source:十六夜のフォルトゥーナ
Tags:mizuki ryo 卯月一葉 opening game 宮坂みゆ Izayoi no fortuna visual novel _AI IamKwaN gideon5504 Kodora
BeatmapID:366708
BeatmapSetID:144202

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Video.avi"
0,0,"owRAJMf.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,30575,42085
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,225,242,255

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3662,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
17224,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
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86265,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
99416,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
120272,-100,4,1,0,5,0,0


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Kirin

267 posts

Joined August 2012

Kirin 2014-03-25T13:58:52+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Kirin wrote:
Mod from queue

[KwaN's Hard]
Maybe streams like these (01:18:868 (1,2,3,4) / 01:32:019 (1,2,3,4) / ) wouldn't be good for an Hard diff. If you gonna say something which is not good, then please provide some suggestions!

nvm
i was wrong

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-03-25T15:51:34+00:00

[Ask for your request]
01:59:964 - 統一這裡完結

[Insane]
00:16:813 (5,6,7,8) - 改成1/8 slider
00:18:046 (5,1,4) - 這幾個clap太奇怪建議改成24clap
00:22:156 (1,2,3) - 放開點
00:28:731 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建議sv x1.2
00:51:334 - Add note
00:55:443 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

00:59:964 (3,4,5) - 試試這個->

01:19:279 (3) - 有點醜
01:20:820 (7) - ^
01:22:464 (7) - ^
01:25:854 (3,4,5,6) - 也是1/8 slider
01:41:060 (3,6) - 這兩個slider中間的錨點倒又看不出大作用
01:43:525 (5) - 疊好可以blanket 01:42:293 (7) -
01:49:484 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 改回1/2

[AI's Hard]
00:04:073 - Finish 之後還有類似的
00:05:717 -
00:07:361 -
00:09:005 -
00:10:649 -
00:12:293 -
00:13:936 -
00:14:758 -
00:15:580 -
00:17:224 (1) -
00:16:505 (4) - x276 y172
00:23:799 (2) - finish
00:27:909 (3) - 可以作為一個參考也不用改太多->

00:30:375 - finish
00:43:525 - ^
hitsound看到這裡因為就根本零hitsound
01:43:936 (3) - x12 y312

[KwaN's Hard]
00:24:621 - whistle
00:26:265 - ^
00:27:909 - ^
00:28:731 (1) - 其實00:28:731 - 跟00:29:039 - 聽上沒太大分別為何不兩個都whistle了?
00:49:690 (4) - finish
00:54:210 - ^
00:55:032 - ^
00:59:964 - 這個finish有點吵

[Normal]
00:27:087 (1,2,3,4) - NM突然來個這樣的有點難
00:31:197 (3) - 尾疊好吧這樣超難看
00:37:772 (3) - Blanket好
01:11:060 (3,1,2) - 這段整體有點難可以把01:11:471 (1,2,3) - 這3個刪掉 01:11:471 - 加一個spinner 01:12:703 - 到這裡完結 01:13:114 - 加回一個note
01:26:676 (4) - NC 到7有點長

其實NM是whistle spam?

[Gideon5504's Easy]
00:30:375 - 我覺得不用break 不Break的話 00:31:197 - 這裡開始加東西現在很空泛
沒大問題有點像normal

[Kodora's Easy ><]
00:44:758 (2) - Missing clap?
01:26:265 (2) - missing finish

OK
mod完訓教
Need more work on insane, normal, 5504's easy
and PLEASE ADD HITSOUND ON AI'S HARD PLZ
and good luck for your map

Kodora

Kodora 2014-03-25T20:01:20+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Kodora's Easy ><]
00:44:758 (2) - Missing clap? Oh yea, my bad.
01:26:265 (2) - missing finish Fixed too
Inherited sections don't have to be snapped unless they trigger kiai.

Thanks for mod!

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-Teina-

529 posts

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Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-03-26T04:59:00+00:00

Thank~
updated

~~~~~~~~~~~~

其實我知道自己排版唔好
但一直沒決心去重新汁過
砍掉再排過....

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-03-26T07:34:29+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[KwaN's Hard]
00:24:621 - whistle kkk
00:26:265 - ^ kkk
00:27:909 - ^ kkk
00:28:731 (1) - 其實00:28:731 - 跟00:29:039 - 聽上沒太大分別為何不兩個都whistle了? 呢到轉左whistle pattern
00:49:690 (4) - finish um.. 00:50:101 (1) 都finish我覺得有點吵
00:54:210 - ^ kkk
00:55:032 - ^ 吵
00:59:964 - 這個finish有點吵 kkk

YA! Thanks

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_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 2014-03-28T05:22:54+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Ask for your request]

[AI's Hard]
00:04:073 - Finish 之後還有類似的
00:05:717 -
00:07:361 -
00:09:005 -
00:10:649 -
00:12:293 -
00:13:936 -
00:14:758 -
00:15:580 -
00:17:224 (1) -
00:16:505 (4) - x276 y172
00:23:799 (2) - finish
00:27:909 (3) - 可以作為一個參考也不用改太多-> okay
00:30:375 - finish
00:43:525 - ^
hitsound看到這裡因為就根本零hitsound
01:43:936 (3) - x12 y312

OK
mod完訓教
Need more work on insane, normal, 5504's easy
and PLEASE ADD HITSOUND ON AI'S HARD PLZ ;D
and good luck for your map

ADDED HITSOUND ~~(wwww~~
Tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7Momr.osu

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-03-28T15:53:22+00:00

_AI wrote:
SPOILER
Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Ask for your request]

[AI's Hard]
00:04:073 - Finish 之後還有類似的
00:05:717 -
00:07:361 -
00:09:005 -
00:10:649 -
00:12:293 -
00:13:936 -
00:14:758 -
00:15:580 -
00:17:224 (1) -
00:16:505 (4) - x276 y172
00:23:799 (2) - finish
00:27:909 (3) - 可以作為一個參考也不用改太多-> okay
00:30:375 - finish
00:43:525 - ^
hitsound看到這裡因為就根本零hitsound
01:43:936 (3) - x12 y312

OK
mod完訓教
Need more work on insane, normal, 5504's easy
and PLEASE ADD HITSOUND ON AI'S HARD PLZ ;D
and good luck for your map

ADDED HITSOUND ~~(wwww~~
Tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7Momr.osu

Thank AI~^o^~

updated

Foreverends

992 posts

Joined July 2011

Foreverends 2014-03-29T05:13:07+00:00

拖左好耐嘅M4M QWQ
here we go \:D/

Insane
00:07:361 (2,3,4) - 我覺得可能排做斜線會好啲?

即係好似錦

00:10:238 (3,4,1) - 試下blanket~會靚啲同整齊啲 ;D~

blanket

00:11:471 (3) - 用ds1.6放,試下令00:11:060 (1,2,3) - 整成好似正方形錦會唔會好啲?

範例

00:25:443 (1,2) - blanket返好
00:29:039 (1,1,1,1) - NC ?
00:44:347 (4,5) - 呢到個rhythm怪怪地;w;試下兩個調轉(slider先circle後)
01:00:786 (1,2,3) - 放做三角形?
後面nice job (y)

AI's Hard
呢個diff好強o.o...
AWESOME diff \:D/
00:27:498 (2) - ctrl g or maybe you can do something like this

try this one~

KwaN's Hard
00:13:936 (1) - 稍嫌blanket不足;w;
00:23:799 (1) - 右移一格,slider中間白點拉低兩格 ;3

神map好難mod ;w;
sorry for渣mod ><
good luck ;D

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-03-29T08:15:51+00:00

@Ends: fix了第二個,第一個我覺得ok,so no fix

SPOILER

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Snow Note

920 posts

Joined January 2011

Snow Note 2014-04-04T07:28:55+00:00

M4M
全個人意見，不改的都不需要給原因了。

[KODORA'S EASY]
01:50:101 (SLIDER TICK) - Silence

[GIDEON5504'S EASY]
00:28:731 (1) - 音量降低

[NORMAL]
00:03:662 (1) - 刪除，在00:04:073加上circle
00:23:388 (1) - 刪除
00:27:087 (6) - finish
00:27:909 (8) - finish
01:13:114 (5) - 加NC,finish
01:13:525 (1) - 刪NC

[KWAN'S HARD]

[AI'S HARD]
01:06:539 (1) - 開始點FINISH
01:50:101 (4) - 開始點FINISH

[INSANE]
00:03:662 (1) - 刪除
00:07:156 (1) - 刪NC
00:07:361 (2) - 加NC
00:10:649 (4) - finish,加NC
00:30:786 (1) - 刪NC
00:42:703 (1,2,3) - 換成單個circle
00:46:402 (1) - 刪NC
00:46:813 (2) - 加NC
00:59:553 (1) - 刪NC
00:59:964 (3) - 加NC
01:04:073 (1) - 刪NC
01:04:895 (3) - 加NC
01:05:923 (1) - 刪NC
01:06:334 (1) - 刪NC
01:06:539 (2) - 加NC (其他相似的不說了,我看不出NC的規律...
01:06:539 (2) - 結束點刪finish
01:15:888 (6) - 結束點移後1/4

Kodora

Kodora 2014-04-04T15:04:03+00:00

Snow Note wrote:
M4M
全個人意見，不改的都不需要給原因了。

[KODORA'S EASY]
01:50:101 (SLIDER TICK) - Silence Oh yea, fixed.

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_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 2014-04-04T16:45:00+00:00

Snow Note wrote:
M4M
全個人意見，不改的都不需要給原因了。

[AI'S HARD]
01:06:539 (1) - 開始點FINISH
01:50:101 (4) - 開始點FINISH

Okay added all the hitsound suggested!

Tellertheworld : http://puu.sh/7VMmQ.osu

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-04-04T17:32:44+00:00

Kodora san and AI san Thank~

Updated

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2014-04-05T13:25:41+00:00

Snow Note wrote:
[GIDEON5504'S EASY]
00:28:731 (1) - 音量降低 FIXED.

Tks~

UPDATE: Also added new tag (My new name)and changed my diff's name. Pls add back to all other diffs my new name tks~

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-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-04-05T13:28:06+00:00

thank~

updated

punikidesu-

78 posts

Joined March 2012

punikidesu- 2014-04-09T05:51:51+00:00

神曲

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-04-09T06:33:41+00:00

Heart-Under-Blade wrote:
神曲

ありがとう～

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2014-04-09T16:01:27+00:00

Hi M4M here

General :

check AImod http://puu.sh/8266s.jpg
Also if you want muted sliderslide http://puu.sh/828oc.wav (righ clic to the link, save as)

Kodora's Easy :
Your spacing look really high, it's not really a problem, but when there's a 2/1 break, notes looks really far for Easy, for example 00:09:005 (4,1) -
00:30:375 - 00:43:320 - on this part, the song is calm, but with the spacing with a lot of 2/1, it loo, harder than the rest

00:46:402 (4) - New combo ? or here 00:46:813 (5) - || the combo is high for easy + the singer start a new sentence
00:53:388 (4,5,6) - make a straight line, I think that make the flow less broken on 6
01:29:142 (5) - you break the flow here, so add NC ? + the combo is kinda high
01:37:772 - 01:38:388 - double flash my eyees dfazidhqzioefdsnh

- G I D Z -'s Easy :
why don't you use the custom hit sound ?

I think it's better if you add NC here 00:17:635 (4) - ; then remove NC there 00:18:868 (1) - ; add NC there 00:20:512 (3) - ; remove NC 00:22:156 (1) - ; add NC 00:23:799 (2) -
00:25:443 (1,2) - why don't you use the new curve for the two sliders ?
00:30:375 - change this green line as Soft ? I think it sound better with the cymbal sound, also if you want to make the finish sound "hearable", you can change the volume to 20~30%
01:16:402 (1,2,3) - here the flow is really broken http://puu.sh/827Ef.jpg, I suggest to move 3 more to the right
01:49:279 (2,3) - I know it's intentional, but don't make a slider end overlap by other slider

Normal :

00:16:813 (3) - don't make a slider end overlapped
00:27:087 (5,6,7) - I think you wanted to follow the piano, but the piano is something like this http://puu.sh/82819.jpg
00:28:731 (1,1) - I suggest you to move this one 00:30:375 (1) - ; just next to the arrow it make really confusing about when the slider will end
00:37:772 (3) - kinda nazi, but you can adjust blanket
00:48:457 (4) - I don't think going back to the slider end is not really instinctive on normal diff
01:27:087 (2) - ^
01:49:279 (5) - NC here and then delete NC here 01:50:101 (1) - ; I don't know how I can explain this but it follow the piano sound

KwaN's Hard :

01:30:375 (5,6,7,8) - If you tried to follow the vocal, it's mainly something like this http://puu.sh/8299l.jpg
01:50:512 (6,1) - We can't see clearly the arrow on 1, because of overlap. I don't remember but I think it's unrankable.

AI's Hard :

01:29:553 (1,2,3,4,5) - on this pattern you make a lil jump between 2,3 and 4,5 ; but they don't have the same spacing, so use the same spacing between them ?

Insane :

00:05:512 - there's a really strong drum bass cymbal sound, it feel kinda empty, add something
00:16:813 (5,6,7,8) - I would suggest to increase a bit the spacing here, because it's not really good to read, but if you done that, you have to increase the spacing to the whole stream
00:36:539 (2) - how about ctrl + g this one ? I like the flow with 1 and 3
01:10:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - use a consistent spacing ?
01:38:080 (1,2,3,4) - try to use a consistent spacing, it feel really strange for these jump
01:59:964 - add green line with 5% volume ?

Kodora

Kodora 2014-04-09T16:29:50+00:00

Kin wrote:
Hi M4M here

Kodora's Easy :
Your spacing look really high, it's not really a problem, but when there's a 2/1 break, notes looks really far for Easy, for example 00:09:005 (4,1) -
00:30:375 - 00:43:320 - on this part, the song is calm, but with the spacing with a lot of 2/1, it loo, harder than the rest That's not hard actually, this is common DS choise to avoid any kind of overlapping. Notes spaced generous enough to allow beginners catch them at first attempt, this is the best choise for 1/1 notes.

00:46:402 (4) - New combo ? or here 00:46:813 (5) - || the combo is high for easy + the singer start a new sentence I don't think that keeping 7 notes at the same combo would be too hard, especially with this AR and OD choise.
00:53:388 (4,5,6) - make a straight line, I think that make the flow less broken on 6 (4) and (6) are both linears and adjusted to each other. I don't get why you think that they broken ._.
01:29:142 (5) - you break the flow here, so add NC ? + the combo is kinda high Why you think that flow here is broken orz ._. Actually there are lots of "long" combos, kinda strange that you mentiored only two of them.
01:37:772 - 01:38:388 - double flash my eyees dfazidhqzioefdsnh it's triple flash!

Thanks for mod but no changes for now.

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-04-09T17:36:20+00:00

Kin wrote:
Hi M4M here

General :

check AImod http://puu.sh/8266s.jpg
Also if you want muted sliderslide http://puu.sh/828oc.wav (righ clic to the link, save as)

Kodora's Easy :
Your spacing look really high, it's not really a problem, but when there's a 2/1 break, notes looks really far for Easy, for example 00:09:005 (4,1) -
00:30:375 - 00:43:320 - on this part, the song is calm, but with the spacing with a lot of 2/1, it loo, harder than the rest

00:46:402 (4) - New combo ? or here 00:46:813 (5) - || the combo is high for easy + the singer start a new sentence
00:53:388 (4,5,6) - make a straight line, I think that make the flow less broken on 6
01:29:142 (5) - you break the flow here, so add NC ? + the combo is kinda high
01:37:772 - 01:38:388 - double flash my eyees dfazidhqzioefdsnh

- G I D Z -'s Easy :
why don't you use the custom hit sound ?

I think it's better if you add NC here 00:17:635 (4) - ; then remove NC there 00:18:868 (1) - ; add NC there 00:20:512 (3) - ; remove NC 00:22:156 (1) - ; add NC 00:23:799 (2) -
00:25:443 (1,2) - why don't you use the new curve for the two sliders ?
00:30:375 - change this green line as Soft ? I think it sound better with the cymbal sound, also if you want to make the finish sound "hearable", you can change the volume to 20~30%
01:16:402 (1,2,3) - here the flow is really broken http://puu.sh/827Ef.jpg, I suggest to move 3 more to the right
01:49:279 (2,3) - I know it's intentional, but don't make a slider end overlap by other slider

Normal :

00:16:813 (3) - don't make a slider end overlapped what? I dont understand
00:27:087 (5,6,7) - I think you wanted to follow the piano, but the piano is something like this http://puu.sh/82819.jpg some change
00:28:731 (1,1) - I suggest you to move this one 00:30:375 (1) - ; just next to the arrow it make really confusing about when the slider will end:arrow: some change
00:37:772 (3) - kinda nazi, but you can adjust blanket okay thank~
00:48:457 (4) - I don't think going back to the slider end is not really instinctive on normal diff okay
01:27:087 (2) - ^ okay
01:49:279 (5) - NC here and then delete NC here 01:50:101 (1) - ; I don't know how I can explain this but it follow the piano sound
okay
KwaN's Hard :

01:30:375 (5,6,7,8) - If you tried to follow the vocal, it's mainly something like this http://puu.sh/8299l.jpg
01:50:512 (6,1) - We can't see clearly the arrow on 1, because of overlap. I don't remember but I think it's unrankable.

AI's Hard :

01:29:553 (1,2,3,4,5) - on this pattern you make a lil jump between 2,3 and 4,5 ; but they don't have the same spacing, so use the same spacing between them ?

Insane :

00:05:512 - there's a really strong drum bass cymbal sound, it feel kinda empty, add something fixed
00:16:813 (5,6,7,8) - I would suggest to increase a bit the spacing here, because it's not really good to read, but if you done that, you have to increase the spacing to the whole stream some change
00:36:539 (2) - how about ctrl + g this one ? I like the flow with 1 and 3 some change
01:10:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - use a consistent spacing ? fixed
01:38:080 (1,2,3,4) - try to use a consistent spacing, it feel really strange for these jump there is average quadrilateral
01:59:964 - add green line with 5% volume ? fixed

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2014-04-10T13:29:08+00:00

Kin wrote:
- G I D Z -'s Easy :
why don't you use the custom hit sound ? I set it to custom but it sounds the same o.o

I think it's better if you add NC here 00:17:635 (4) - ; then remove NC there 00:18:868 (1) - ; add NC there 00:20:512 (3) - ; remove NC 00:22:156 (1) - ; add NC 00:23:799 (2) - Nope, that'll destroy the consistency in combo patterns and a combo up to 5 in Easy is acceptable.
00:25:443 (1,2) - why don't you use the new curve for the two sliders ? Just want to make it symmetrical for easier pattern reading.
00:30:375 - change this green line as Soft ? I think it sound better with the cymbal sound, also if you want to make the finish sound "hearable", you can change the volume to 20~30% Yea, I totally forgot about the finish there FIXED.
01:16:402 (1,2,3) - here the flow is really broken http://puu.sh/827Ef.jpg, I suggest to move 3 more to the right Changed the pattern.
01:49:279 (2,3) - I know it's intentional, but don't make a slider end overlap by other slider FIXED.

Thanks for the mod

Update here:

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364,168,23799,2,0,P|404:176|444:168,2,79.9999999999999,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,78,25032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,72,25443,6,0,B|184:160|216:280|216:280,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,280,27087,2,0,B|120:277|152:157|34:70,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,28731,12,4,30375,0:0:0:0:
56,216,43525,5,4,0:0:0:0:
120,144,43936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,80,44347,2,0,P|232:64|280:80,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,116,45169,6,0,B|336:188|376:244|352:292,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,52,47224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,144,47635,2,0,B|468:176|468:176|444:224|444:232,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,296,48457,6,0,P|316:272|236:280,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,304,49690,1,10,1:1:0:0:
76,240,50101,6,0,P|84:144|52:88,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,40,51334,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,104,51745,2,0,L|216:192,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,208,52566,2,0,L|300:120,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,36,53388,6,0,P|392:60|424:148,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,236,54621,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,304,55032,2,0,P|312:320|268:316,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,224,55854,2,0,L|296:128,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,56676,5,4,0:0:0:0:
132,108,57087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,108,57498,2,0,L|16:200|16:200,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,280,58320,6,0,P|48:328|72:360,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,288,59142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,288,59553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,316,59964,6,0,P|404:308|452:236,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,224,61197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,152,61608,6,0,P|452:128|461:87,2,79.9999999999999,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,71,62840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,75,63251,6,0,B|200:51|136:99|104:75|104:75,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,130,64484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,208,64895,2,0,P|120:224|168:200,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,172,65717,2,0,P|285:155|320:172,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,228,66539,5,4,0:0:0:0:
368,320,66950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,328,67361,2,0,B|216:312|152:336|96:320,1,160
48,252,68594,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,156,69005,2,0,P|68:116|100:84,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,48,69827,6,0,P|212:32|244:32,2,59.9999999999999,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70649,12,8,72703,0:0:0:0:
376,296,73114,6,0,B|408:288|408:288|448:264|448:240,2,79.9999999999999,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,200,74347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,108,74758,2,0,P|316:60|292:52,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,76,75580,2,0,P|156:108|148:132,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,204,76402,6,0,P|44:188|28:156,2,79.9999999999999,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,212,77635,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,308,78046,2,0,P|268:340|344:288,1,160
364,212,79279,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,140,79690,6,0,B|452:108|452:108|452:76|428:60,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,76,80512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,80923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,112,81334,2,0,B|148:88|148:88|108:96|108:96,2,79.9999999999999,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,184,82566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,192,82977,6,0,B|268:208|332:168|380:192,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,280,84210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,348,84621,2,0,B|284:316|236:364|172:332,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,280,85854,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,212,86265,6,0,B|20:164|20:164|28:140|44:124,1,79.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,116,87087,2,0,B|168:132|168:132|216:116,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,87909,5,4,0:0:0:0:
384,112,88320,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,204,88731,2,0,P|372:209|336:193,1,79.9999999999999
240,192,89553,6,0,P|232:232|248:272,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,328,90375,2,0,P|368:352|392:344,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,268,91197,2,0,L|448:92,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,80,92429,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,76,92840,6,0,B|212:52|212:52|156:60|124:84|124:116,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,200,94073,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,296,94484,2,0,B|122:315|154:339|210:347|210:347|258:323,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,268,95717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,200,96128,6,0,P|380:148|352:140,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,80,96950,2,0,P|256:112|256:156,1,79.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,228,97772,2,0,P|97:238|86:120,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,130,99416,5,4,0:0:0:0:
264,95,99827,2,0,P|328:87|352:95,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,164,100649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
415,259,101060,6,0,P|378:293|268:314,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,278,102293,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,336,102703,2,0,P|76:263|128:195,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,123,103936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
266,146,104347,6,0,P|304:138|330:109,2,79.9999999999999,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,50,105580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
351,26,105991,2,0,B|411:46|423:114|423:114|407:162,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,240,107224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,268,107635,6,0,P|164:251|137:138,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,76,109279,2,0,P|162:61|220:176,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,180,110923,2,0,P|343:72|454:77,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112566,12,0,120375,2:2:0:0:

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-04-10T13:44:18+00:00

@Kin: I'm sorry but all no fix.
First of all, I'm not following the vocal but the instruments.
Second, from the standard ranking criteria, we have

All repeat arrows on sliders must be visible. Make sure that hitbursts (100s/300s/etc) from previous notes are not covering the repeat arrows or even the paths/ends of sliders (use the default skin to check if using hitbursts from another skin). This way, all sliders will be easily visible and playable.

However, I have found many people to testplay this diff and no one has a problem to read it. So, I think it's fine.

Trust

1,240 posts

Joined March 2012

Trust 2014-04-11T06:26:07+00:00

Heyy! Made some suggestions IRC, here's the log:

SPOILER

01:29 tellertheworld: hi~
01:29 tellertheworld: Do you have a time to get some map request?
01:30 Trust: unfortunately no, sorry. i'm not modding right now

i can testplay if you want though
01:31 tellertheworld: oh..
01:31 tellertheworld: Thank~ Can you testplay now?
01:31 Trust: sure
01:31 *tellertheworld is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/372713 fripSide - fortuna on the Sixteenth night]
01:35 Trust: 01:50:512 (8,9,10) -
01:35 Trust: not sure what to think about this
01:35 tellertheworld: strange?
01:36 Trust: yeah definitely
01:36 tellertheworld: changed..
01:38 Trust: finish or whistle on head 01:34:484 (2) -
01:38 tellertheworld: okay~
01:39 Trust: also have the NC on this one, makes more sense cause of the downbeat and strong vocal
01:41 Trust: whistle on head ww 00:52:566 (2) -
01:43 tellertheworld: changed~
01:44 Trust: 01:12:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:45 Trust: not sure about this either lol
01:45 Trust: its kind weird to stack circles so densely like this after the previous stream
01:45 Trust: of*
01:46 tellertheworld: pull way it?
01:46 tellertheworld: awy
01:46 tellertheworld: away
01:47 Trust: i would use not so close spacing to make it easier to read http://puu.sh/84coy/7a6b0f860c.jpg
01:48 tellertheworld: [http://puu.sh/84cpd.jpg oh..]
01:48 Trust: but it take some work to fix the placement after
01:48 Trust: might
01:49 Trust: you could try using four 1/4 sliders here too
01:50 Trust: would be nice with how the music builds up
01:50 tellertheworld: 01:12:087 (3) - here is used 1/4 slider so I want to change it.
01:51 Trust: ah
01:52 tellertheworld: but this 01:12:087 (3) - is strange?
01:52 tellertheworld: speed up suddenly
01:53 Trust: the slider isn't strange, what's strange is how slow the stream is after it
01:53 tellertheworld: I see...
01:54 Trust: i think it would be better if you just did another normal spaced stream like 01:10:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:54 Trust: for this part
01:55 Trust: if anything just make sure the cursor is moving fast for this part.
01:57 tellertheworld: changed~
01:57 Trust: \:D/
01:57 Trust: fix the stack lool 01:36:128 (1,2,3) -
01:58 tellertheworld: okay~
01:58 Trust: remove NC 01:43:936 (1) -
02:00 tellertheworld: done~
02:01 Trust: i like the jumps here, but the pattern looks a little messy 01:47:635 (2,3,4) -
02:02 Trust: http://puu.sh/84cYj/4d432d3621.jpg
02:02 Trust: try like that, looks cleaner as has nice flow~
02:04 tellertheworld: okay~
02:05 Trust: i dont really understand the need for 30% volume starting and foward 00:24:313 -
02:05 Trust: the music doesn't get noticably softer
02:06 tellertheworld: the S4 finish is loudly
02:06 Trust: hmm then try 40% or 50% and see if that's ok
02:06 Trust: cause I can barely hear them
02:06 tellertheworld: okay
02:07 Trust: and I use effects volume louder than music lol
02:07 tellertheworld: and I cut volume at 00:24:519 -
02:09 Trust: would fit the music better if you did this for here 00:27:909 (7) -
02:09 Trust: http://puu.sh/84dew/46b9995493.jpg
02:09 Trust: to catch both triplet sounds in the music
02:10 tellertheworld: oh nice~!
02:14 Trust: kind of a strange rhythm with how you've mapped this 01:27:087 (4,5,6) -
02:14 Trust: try swapping 4 and 5 on the timeline
02:16 tellertheworld: okay
02:17 Trust: whistle on head 01:22:977 (1) -
02:18 Trust: or finish actually
02:18 Trust: either is good
02:18 Trust: and finish on the head 01:24:621 (1) -
02:18 Trust: whistle on head 01:34:484 (2) -
02:19 tellertheworld: 01:14:758 (1) - it have whistle and finish in slidertop
02:20 tellertheworld: 01:34:484 (2) - added finish
02:20 Trust: hmm i dont think i said anything about 01:14:758 (1) -
02:21 tellertheworld: ... oh I see error- -"
02:22 tellertheworld: 01:22:977 (1) - changed~
02:22 Trust: weee, alright i think i'll stop there

02:22 tellertheworld: thank a lot~
02:23 Trust: np, do you want me to post log or no?
02:23 tellertheworld: you can post it~
02:23 Trust: kk
02:23 tellertheworld: I get some misstake in the hitsound..>_<

Best of luck teller~

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-04-11T10:31:57+00:00

[General]
-_G_I_D_Z_- 把这个也加进tag，记得加“_”

[Insane]
00:03:662 (1) - 放在x:276 y:96比较有跟flow
00:05:717 (1) - 然后这个 ctrl+j 再移回来

SPOILER

00:17:224 (1) - 向另一边弯怎么样？

SPOILER

00:31:197 (4) - slider start那里，有一个音，加个clap？要不然去找类似的音效
00:32:840 (4) - ^
00:34:484 (5) - ^
00:36:128 (1,2,3) - 三个slider start 加whistle
00:37:361 (1) - NC
00:37:772 (3,3,4) - 加clap，原因与00:31:197 (4) - 一样
01:37:566 (4) - vocal越来越大声，放远一点吧 x:480 y:352，而且slider end 那里又是重音，所以可以与01:38:080 (1) - 来一个适当的jump
01:38:388 (2,3) - Ctrl+g 怎么样，原本的太单调了，而且这里的重音很适合比较大的jump

[AI's Hard]
yo AI XD
00:13:114 (3) - slider start add clap?
00:15:888 (2,3,4,5) - add clap?
00:16:813 (5) - this has a longer tone, how about change it to 1/2 slider?
00:26:265 (3) - why this place you didnt add a note but other place that actually no need a note like 00:32:635 (3) - you added :/
01:03:662 (1,2,3,4) - change the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/84iin.jpg , it's better you change it, this isn't a good idea to start the vocal at slider end
01:11:471 (1) - the spinner add whistle
01:40:649 (4) - slider start add clap (there has an obvious clap sound)
01:42:293 (4) - ^
personally think Hard diff shouldn't add so many duplet with blue tick :/
yea that is intentional i know lel

[KwaN's Hard]
00:10:443 (5) - 移到 x:88 y:120，这样比较跟flow
00:25:443 (1) - slider head 加 finish
00:27:909 (4) - ^
00:49:279 (3) - slider head 加 whistle
00:51:745 (1,1) - 把这两个移远一点？因为vocal慢慢变高音，适合加一点jump
00:55:032 (1) - head 加 finish
00:58:320 (1) - 不太喜欢这个，变成3/4会更好，不换也无所谓
01:36:950 (1,2,3) - 音变高了，比01:36:128 (1,2,3) - 用更高的DS会更好
01:50:923 (1) - 其实前面有很多这个我没有提，因为这里的三个音都是重音，放slider不太好，其他的就算了，最后的换成3个circles怎么样？加一点点jump会不错的

[Normal]
HP-1
00:04:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这梗很好！
00:05:717 (4,5) - 选择这两个，然后移5到00:04:073 (1) - 这里
00:30:375 (1,3) - 啊，我个人也很喜欢这样map，但是Normal好像不可以，unrankable的
00:35:717 (4) - 换成一个circle然后接着一个slider会比较好
01:13:525 (2) - 故意的？ds改变了
01:23:799 (5) - finish
01:43:936 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这梗很好，但貌似没有对齐，我给你这个code，之后的notes你慢慢移好

code

44,332,103936,5,2,0:0:0:0:
64,232,104347,1,4,0:0:0:0:
140,164,104758,1,4,0:0:0:0:
216,232,105169,1,4,0:0:0:0:
236,332,105580,1,12,0:0:0:0:
140,364,105991,6,4,L|140:160,1,200
56,216,107224,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,216,107635,2,6,P|133:260|233:203,1,200

01:47:635 - 这个绿线怎么了？

[- G I D Z -'s Easy]
00:22:156 (1) - 移好来，DS变成 1.15了，移到x:84 y:116
剩下的都很好，good job!

[Kodora's Easy]
00:27:087 (4) - DS become 1.42 :/ and the slider repeat touch the hp bar, please fix this
00:43:525 (1) - intentional? ds change to 2.0, so high o.o
00:46:813 (5) - DS... move to x:288 y:192
00:56:676 (1) - same as 00:43:525 (1) -
01:01:608 (5) - move to x:364 y:300
01:06:539 (4) - same as 00:43:525 (1) -
nice diff also, and i think the DS 2.0 is intentional, it isn't that hard, feel free to ignore it :3
also, the stack like 01:32:429 (1,2) - , i not sure this is acceptable or not, please check with other modder

nice map :3
nice song :3
nice mapper :3
good luck ^^

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-Teina- 2014-04-11T11:21:54+00:00

ffstar0716 wrote:
[General]
-_G_I_D_Z_- 把这个也加进tag，记得加“_”

[Insane]
00:03:662 (1) - 放在x:276 y:96比较有跟flow
00:05:717 (1) - 然后这个 ctrl+j 再移回来
SPOILER

SPOILER
00:17:224 (1) - 向另一边弯怎么样？只有一處很奇怪
SPOILER
00:31:197 (4) - slider start那里，有一个音，加个clap？要不然去找类似的音效改左
00:32:840 (4) - ^:arrow: 改左
00:34:484 (5) - ^:arrow: 改左
00:36:128 (1,2,3) - 三个slider start 加whistle 改變了一些
00:37:361 (1) - NC 好的
00:37:772 (3,3,4) - 加clap，原因与00:31:197 (4) - 一样:arrow: 改變了一些
01:37:566 (4) - vocal越来越大声，放远一点吧 x:480 y:352，而且slider end 那里又是重音，所以可以与01:38:080 (1) - 来一个适当的jump 改了
01:38:388 (2,3) - Ctrl+g 怎么样，原本的太单调了，而且这里的重音很适合比较大的jump 那會和01:50:923 (1,2,3,4,5) - 差不多所以不了

[AI's Hard]
yo AI XD
00:13:114 (3) - slider start add clap?
00:15:888 (2,3,4,5) - add clap?
00:16:813 (5) - this has a longer tone, how about change it to 1/2 slider?
00:26:265 (3) - why this place you didnt add a note but other place that actually no need a note like 00:32:635 (3) - you added :/
01:03:662 (1,2,3,4) - change the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/84iin.jpg , it's better you change it, this isn't a good idea to start the vocal at slider end
01:11:471 (1) - the spinner add whistle
01:40:649 (4) - slider start add clap (there has an obvious clap sound)
01:42:293 (4) - ^
personally think Hard diff shouldn't add so many duplet with blue tick :/
yea that is intentional i know lel

[KwaN's Hard]
00:10:443 (5) - 移到 x:88 y:120，这样比较跟flow
00:25:443 (1) - slider head 加 finish
00:27:909 (4) - ^
00:49:279 (3) - slider head 加 whistle
00:51:745 (1,1) - 把这两个移远一点？因为vocal慢慢变高音，适合加一点jump
00:55:032 (1) - head 加 finish
00:58:320 (1) - 不太喜欢这个，变成3/4会更好，不换也无所谓
01:36:950 (1,2,3) - 音变高了，比01:36:128 (1,2,3) - 用更高的DS会更好
01:50:923 (1) - 其实前面有很多这个我没有提，因为这里的三个音都是重音，放slider不太好，其他的就算了，最后的换成3个circles怎么样？加一点点jump会不错的

[Normal]
HP-1 好的~
00:04:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这梗很好！感謝
00:05:717 (4,5) - 选择这两个，然后移5到00:04:073 (1) - 这里噢沒留意感謝
00:30:375 (1,3) - 啊，我个人也很喜欢这样map，但是Normal好像不可以，unrankable的吓.. 去找BAT問一問... 問過了應該不會
00:35:717 (4) - 换成一个circle然后接着一个slider会比较好改了
01:13:525 (2) - 故意的？ds改变了又沒留意... 改了
01:23:799 (5) - finish 加了
01:43:936 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这梗很好，但貌似没有对齐，我给你这个code，之后的notes你慢慢移好感謝喔感覺很好~
code
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01:47:635 - 这个绿线怎么了？ cut hitsound音的

[- G I D Z -'s Easy]
00:22:156 (1) - 移好来，DS变成 1.15了，移到x:84 y:116
剩下的都很好，good job!

[Kodora's Easy]
00:27:087 (4) - DS become 1.42 :/ and the slider repeat touch the hp bar, please fix this
00:43:525 (1) - intentional? ds change to 2.0, so high o.o
00:46:813 (5) - DS... move to x:288 y:192
00:56:676 (1) - same as 00:43:525 (1) -
01:01:608 (5) - move to x:364 y:300
01:06:539 (4) - same as 00:43:525 (1) -
nice diff also, and i think the DS 2.0 is intentional, it isn't that hard, feel free to ignore it :3
also, the stack like 01:32:429 (1,2) - , i not sure this is acceptable or not, please check with other modder

nice map :3
nice song :3
nice mapper :3
good luck ^^

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-04-11T11:36:28+00:00

ffstar0716 wrote:
[KwaN's Hard]
00:10:443 (5) - 移到 x:88 y:120，这样比较跟flow It is intentionally being put like this.
00:25:443 (1) - slider head 加 finish k
00:27:909 (4) - ^ k
00:49:279 (3) - slider head 加 whistle k
00:51:745 (1,1) - 把这两个移远一点？因为vocal慢慢变高音，适合加一点jump jump would be appeared in kiai
00:55:032 (1) - head 加 finish k
00:58:320 (1) - 不太喜欢这个，变成3/4会更好，不换也无所谓 nope
01:36:950 (1,2,3) - 音变高了，比01:36:128 (1,2,3) - 用更高的DS会更好 wanna make this map easier coz there are two short streams
01:50:923 (1) - 其实前面有很多这个我没有提，因为这里的三个音都是重音，放slider不太好，其他的就算了，最后的换成3个circles怎么样？加一点点jump会不错的 nope :3 consistency is my first concern

good luck ^^ Thanks!

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Last edited by IamKwaN 2014-04-11T12:19:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kodora

Kodora 2014-04-11T11:58:01+00:00

ffstar0716 wrote:
[Kodora's Easy]
00:27:087 (4) - DS become 1.42 :/ and the slider repeat touch the hp bar, please fix this Yeah, fixed
00:43:525 (1) - intentional? ds change to 2.0, so high o.o That's issue of DS calculation. While is shows spacing as 2.0, real spacing here is less than 2 pixels - i respaced them manually to avoid ugly overlapping. It is very easy and perfectly playable.
00:46:813 (5) - DS... move to x:288 y:192 Fixed in other way
00:56:676 (1) - same as 00:43:525 (1) - Same
01:01:608 (5) - move to x:364 y:300 alright
01:06:539 (4) - same as 00:43:525 (1) - same
nice diff also, and i think the DS 2.0 is intentional, it isn't that hard, feel free to ignore it :3
also, the stack like 01:32:429 (1,2) - , i not sure this is acceptable or not, please check with other modder This is consistent 1/1 stacking in a whole diff, it is intuitive and easy to follow - i believe it is fine.

Thanks for mod!

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114,185,81334,2,0,P|84:261|106:346,1,160
211,272,82566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
318,202,82977,22,0,P|393:176|474:201,2,160
200,150,85032,2,0,L|171:75,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,72,85854,5,8,0:0:0:0:
43,72,86265,2,0,P|47:151|103:225,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,292,87498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,340,87909,2,0,B|360:356|392:340|392:340|424:324|472:340,1,160
397,231,89142,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,147,89553,2,0,P|261:88|268:0,2,160
251,265,91608,2,0,P|211:280|160:265,1,79.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,213,92429,5,8,0:0:0:0:
62,213,92840,2,0,L|87:46,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,7,94073,1,8,0:0:0:0:
277,112,94484,2,0,P|364:121|438:76,2,160,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,17,96950,1,4,0:0:0:0:
110,263,97772,6,0,L|98:331,1,59.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,369,98388,2,0,L|253:376,2,59.9999999999999,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,263,99416,6,0,P|101:190|138:105,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,32,100649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
310,134,101060,2,0,L|442:157,2,120,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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338,240,105991,6,0,L|365:75,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,10,107224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
139,64,107635,2,0,P|104:115|100:182,2,120,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,110923,12,4,112566,0:0:0:0:

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