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改了sb
请帮忙我把sakura_flower.png改成 http://puu.sh/7kZ8R.png
sb: http://puu.sh/7kZ9x.osb
感谢wcx的mod
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

lZenxl wrote:

改了sb
请帮忙我把sakura_flower.png改成 http://puu.sh/7kZ8R.png
sb: http://puu.sh/7kZ9x.osb
感谢wcx的mod
OK update
Frostmourne
From my test playing queue~

Overall Insane diff plays good enough. It is a really great one if this one is one of your very first maps you have made in osu!
By the way, there are some works you need to work for as I will list them briefly.
- Check all hitsounds that are probably missing. For example, 00:13:480 (6) - clap on start , 00:14:480 (9) - clap on start and so on.
- New combo wise, I guess you are about to have them around 10+ . I assign you to work something on them by reducing them on where they are appropriate.
For example, here is the list
00:03:230 (7) -
00:06:980 (7) -
00:10:980 (11) -
00:12:980 (5) -
00:14:980 (7) -
00:18:980 (9) -

00:32:480 (11,12,13) - I would move these to somewhere else like this. Having that kind of stack feels a bit unnatural if you ask me.
I think you may get it. This way will be more consistent throughout the whole diff.

Find some more mods for your mapset and adjust new combo and hitsound I mentioned above. After a while, feel free to ask me for a recheck if you think they are fine enough to get it ranked and I will be willing to bubble it :) !

Starred icon for now
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
thank you Frostmourne

i will work harder for my map , if this map is really good enough , then i will tell you , thank you very much ^^/
95648
hi~
clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap

normal
00:07:980 (4) - 可加clap :roll:
00:16:480 (5) - 同上
00:33:480 (2) - 同上
00:34:480 (4) - 同上
01:11:980 (6) - 同上
01:12:230 (6) - 同上
01:16:230 (6) - 同上
02:06:480 (2) - 同上

hard
00:06:480 (5) - clap
00:08:730 (7) - 同上
00:09:230 (2) - 在slider尾部加clap
00:10:230 (4) - 同上
00:45:730 (4) - 加clap
00:50:480 (4) - 加clap
01:23:980 (3) - 在slider尾部加clap :roll:
01:31:980 (5) - 同上
02:30:730 (6) - 加clap

good luck ~~
clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap
smallboat
Quick m4m mod

[General]

None.

[Normal]

00:32:980 (1) - 有一點輕輕的finish聲怎不加finish呢?
01:20:480 (6) - 滑條尾稍微轉一下,跟(3)靠在一起了分開點。
01:33:980 (3) - 感覺這個clap是多加的,刪掉?
02:36:980 (1) - DS

[Hard]

00:06:730 (6) - 這邊加個clap音效蠻突出的,不如換成whistle比較柔和。
01:29:480 (2) - 尾端也歪那麼多不調一下?
01:57:480 (3,4,5) - 我覺得中間的4能轉個角度,可以不用都是同一個方向。
02:35:980 (5) - 開頭怎麼不疊02:34:230 (5) ?
02:43:730 (4) - 或許你也可以stack前面試試

[Insane]

00:12:980 (5,8) - 變速NC阿 後面也是同樣地方 ,另外這個combo太長,可以00:14:980 (11) 加NC
00:34:480 (5) - 這放在 496 244比較好點。
01:43:480 (12) - 跟前面疊看看
00:45:730 (4,5) - 這個5要不要移下來一點好像不太flow
02:16:980 (1) - 這邊的whistle我覺得可以大聲點來凸顯歌曲音效。
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
Frostmourne:

hitsound fix

long Combo NC NC NC

00:32:480 (11,12,13) -I would move these to somewhere else like this. Having that kind of stack feels a bit unnatural if you ask me. ---Nice

95648:

是我的错 我重新划的note滑条都忘记补音效了

(好吧照着NH的把I缺的多的补了

smallboat:

all fix

thanks for modding ^^/
Frostmourne
Recheck as requested ~~

General
01:21:480 (1,2) - stacking pattern like this or 01:19:980 (5,6) - are not recommended for the easiest diff in the mapset (Normal or Easy but the easiest one in your mapset) because they can be a bit confusing to beginners so I hope you will consider them for your future maps :) !

Normal
00:35:480 (6) - clap
01:47:980 (4) - It may be too hard to play as they are both clap. So I think having it simple this way could be much more appropriate. (ending on red tick and followed after by 1/2 beat on the easiest diff on such vague sound may be not good. You don't need to fix if you feel you don't like it.
01:51:980 (6) - similar to above ^
02:29:480 (2,3) - better unstack them and make like this
02:38:980 (3) - clap tail
02:48:480 (6,1) - I suggest you use the spinner this way. It will give more variety of scores. (Like you did in Hard diff)

Hard
00:30:480 (6) - clap start
00:31:480 (3) - clap
00:31:980 (5) - clap end
00:48:230 (6) - you may add both clap and finish here
01:03:980 (4) - clap end
01:25:480 (3) - clap start
02:41:480 (3) - clap
02:47:980 (3) - clap end

Insane
00:13:480 (2) - clap start
00:14:480 (2) - ^
00:16:230 (5) - clap
01:15:480 (3) - ^
01:26:480 (7) - clap start
01:36:230 (4) - clap
02:32:230 (2) - clap
02:40:230 (4) - ^
02:43:480 (1) - clap starts on the start instead of end
02:48:230 (4) - clap
02:48:480 (6,1) - I suggest you use the spinner this way. It will give more variety of scores. same as I mentioned in Normal diff

Call me back :) !
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
Frostmourne:

[General]
01:21:480 (1,2) - stacking pattern like this or 01:19:980 (5,6) - are not recommended for the easiest diff in the mapset (Normal or Easy but the easiest one in your mapset) because they can be a bit confusing to beginners so I hope you will consider them for your future maps :) !
---this i haven't changed it , if must be to change , i will change to no stack

[Normal]
01:47:980 (4) - It may be too hard to play as they are both clap. So I think having it simple this way could be much more appropriate. (ending on red tick and followed after by 1/2 beat on the easiest diff on such vague sound may be not good. You don't need to fix if you feel you don't like it. ---you are right so i haven't changed it

others all fix , thanks for recheck
Frostmourne
Good luck getting it ranked for your first map!
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Frostmourne wrote:

Good luck getting it ranked for your first map!
thank you ^^/
-Teina-
From Teller Anchor wwl's Insane modding M4M/NM( ・´ω・`)

忘了說 這圖之前已經mod過了 所以不需要kds了 (太遲了= =")

IRCMOD
13:34 tellertheworld: 你的圖好了好多呢~
13:35 moonlightleaf: 嗯
13:35 moonlightleaf: 我觉得I还是不够还玩
13:36 moonlightleaf: 已经泡了 如果没什么问题的话
13:40 tellertheworld: 這hd沒問題?
13:40 tellertheworld: 回不了
13:41 moonlightleaf: 什么
13:41 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7r4pg.png
13:42 moonlightleaf: AR7
13:42 moonlightleaf: hard是吧
13:42 tellertheworld: insane
13:42 tellertheworld: 雖然沒關係吧..
13:43 moonlightleaf: insane是AR8
13:43 moonlightleaf: hard才是7
13:43 tellertheworld: 不是說AR
13:43 tellertheworld: HP扣了 很難回
13:44 moonlightleaf: I 797 可以的
13:44 tellertheworld: 嗯
13:44 tellertheworld: 只是問一問~
13:44 moonlightleaf: 我打打看
13:45 moonlightleaf: 额
13:45 moonlightleaf: 有点
13:45 moonlightleaf: 我晚上问下bat
13:45 moonlightleaf: 他现在不在
13:45 moonlightleaf: 哦 刚上线= =
13:45 tellertheworld: 我平時用板子 現在用滑鼠
13:46 moonlightleaf: 我一会问他吧 人家刚上线就问不好
13:46 tellertheworld: 嗯~
13:46 moonlightleaf: 感谢你的细心
13:47 tellertheworld: 00:27:480 (3,4,5) -
13:47 tellertheworld: 00:24:980 (1,2,3) -
13:47 tellertheworld: 這兩組不是對稱?
13:48 moonlightleaf: 不是的 音不同吧
13:48 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7r4Et.png
13:48 moonlightleaf: 先前别人也提到这地方
13:49 tellertheworld: 我知道的~ 問一問 因為有點相似~
13:49 moonlightleaf: 嗯
13:51 tellertheworld: 02:40:730 (6) - 這個感覺很奇怪 但又符合到map 不錯嘛~
13:52 moonlightleaf: ><
13:52 moonlightleaf: 复制了前面的一段的
13:52 moonlightleaf: 然后 还是符合了 就用着了
13:53 tellertheworld: 我就在排版中努力
13:53 tellertheworld: hard 00:19:730 (4) -
13:53 tellertheworld: 距離有點問題/
13:54 moonlightleaf: 这个是的
13:54 moonlightleaf: 这得改
13:54 tellertheworld: 故意的~?
13:54 moonlightleaf: 这倒不是 没注意到应该
13:55 moonlightleaf: 或者当做小小的跳?
13:55 moonlightleaf: 感觉能向右移动一格
13:55 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7r4WF.jpg
13:56 tellertheworld: 你不想大改的話
13:56 tellertheworld: 可以參考一下 00:22:980 (1,2,3,4) -
13:56 tellertheworld: 遞加距離
13:56 moonlightleaf: 这样 6就远了
13:56 moonlightleaf: 然后后面又要改好多
13:57 tellertheworld: 00:31:480 (3) - 這個3字距離都好似有點問題
13:57 tellertheworld: 上面的圖先blanket
13:59 moonlightleaf: 哪
13:59 tellertheworld: 類似的not blanket 地方還有很多..
13:59 tellertheworld: 01:45:855 (3) -
14:00 tellertheworld: 故意的~?
14:00 tellertheworld: 故意的話 會和01:47:480 (2,3,4) - 不同
14:00 tellertheworld: 同節奏的說
14:01 tellertheworld: 在說距離
14:02 moonlightleaf: 01:45:855 (3) - 奇怪怎么会1.0和1.3x
14:02 moonlightleaf: 哦不对 我刚移动了
14:03 tellertheworld: 01:45:855 (3,1,3,5) -
14:03 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7r5es.jpg
14:03 tellertheworld: 1字好似高了一點
14:03 tellertheworld: 好似需要高一點才對
14:03 moonlightleaf: 这哪
14:03 tellertheworld: ...
14:04 tellertheworld: 02:30:980 (1,3,5) -
14:04 tellertheworld: 錯了 抱歉
14:04 moonlightleaf: 1没有高好像
14:04 moonlightleaf: 我这没挨着3
14:04 tellertheworld: 應該是需要低一點呢- -"
14:05 tellertheworld: 你看看我的圖
14:05 moonlightleaf: 好的
14:05 tellertheworld: 3字的圈
14:05 tellertheworld: 是貼住5字的
14:05 tellertheworld: 但和1字的圈 重疊了
14:05 moonlightleaf: 嗯
14:06 tellertheworld: 所以問一問需要改一改嗎?
14:06 moonlightleaf: 可以
14:06 moonlightleaf: 小细节都能改
14:06 moonlightleaf: 你把irc发帖子
14:06 tellertheworld: 還有easy呢..
14:06 moonlightleaf: 我叫bat 重新bubble
14:07 tellertheworld: 沒了..
14:07 tellertheworld: 只有normal
14:07 moonlightleaf: NHII 符合rank
14:07 tellertheworld: normal http://puu.sh/7r5rz.jpg
14:08 tellertheworld: 雖然沒問題 但還是問一問 是要blanket it?
14:09 tellertheworld: 00:51:480 (5,6) - 感覺上這2個好似不需要重疊...
14:10 moonlightleaf: 我网不好 常收不到
14:10 tellertheworld: 這我再打多次吧~
14:11 tellertheworld: 00:51:480 (5,6) - 感覺上這2個好似不需要重疊
14:11 tellertheworld: normal http://puu.sh/7r5rz.jpg
14:11 tellertheworld: 雖然沒問題 但還是問一問 是要blanket it?
14:16 moonlightleaf: 应该无伤大雅 56叠那个
14:16 moonlightleaf: 61那个 可以1移动一点点 blanket了
14:16 tellertheworld: 嗯~
14:17 tellertheworld: 那大致上這樣了~ timing 和 song setup沒什麼需要改了~
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
Frostmourne 没有回复我 暂时不更 , 那些小细节 该是能忽略不计

还有Insane的OD7 Frostmourne直接说了不必改6 就是7 之后没有下文 sad

kd是一个月只能领一次
Akabato
泡了呢,恭喜啊~ 祝rank~
dkun
I'll be around the next day or two to check this.
Zero__wind
看来没我事儿了888888888恭喜rank
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

dkun wrote:

I'll be around the next day or two to check this.
thanks in adv

Zero__wind wrote:

看来没我事儿了888888888恭喜rank
01你昨天打这个 motoo...好萌><
dkun

Zero__wind wrote:

看来没我事儿了888888888恭喜rank
You can mod this if you want. I haven't actually looked (or ranked, mind you) at it yet.
Kairi
\^o^/
dkun
Sorry for taking a while! (I got your PM about it :o )

The only thing I've noticed is that the audioleadin is not on cRyo's diff. For the sake of consistency, would you mind adding the "AudioLeadIn:" line into that diff?
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

dkun wrote:

Sorry for taking a while! (I got your PM about it :o )

The only thing I've noticed is that the audioleadin is not on cRyo's diff. For the sake of consistency, would you mind adding the "AudioLeadIn:" line into that diff?
yep , fix ~ :)
dkun
Okay, after confirming with someone else who speaks Chinese, would you mind capitalizing the L in "la la" in the title?

Submit and please call me back. I'll rank on the spot! :o
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

dkun wrote:

Okay, after confirming with someone else who speaks Chinese, would you mind capitalizing the L in "la la" in the title?

Submit and please call me back. I'll rank on the spot! :o
OK, changed & updated ~
dkun
let's do it!
Frostmourne
cRyo is BACKKKKKKKK
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

dkun wrote:

let's do it!
thank you :)
Fycho
gratz~ 二妹 and cryo :p
Nepu
二妹终于rank了 wwww

Congrats on 1st rank~
Lanturn
I think widescreen support is supposed to be disabled?

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1456291 (check right side)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1456292 (top left of the song? at the very end of the song)
All of the scalings that fade out etc.

Edit: Also congrats! Very cute map
cRyo[iceeicee]

Frostmourne wrote:

cRyo is BACKKKKKKKK
cRyo is FARKKKKKKKKKKK, i forgot to post latest diff aaaaaaaa nvm
grats xD
Zero__wind

Frostmourne wrote:

cRyo is BACKKKKKKKK
I'm jealous
Akabato
rank了!!~ 恭喜啊~
spboxer3
恭喜阿~
Mao
Gratz! :)
Sapphiire_old_1
Gratz ~
10crystalmask01
Yea first rank moonlightleaf, grats! 8-)
Ozato Fumika
gratz~
Pokie
SB的小細節讓人不斷想倒帶回去再看, 要是能夠做大一點就更好了 :D
Sheepsticks
Congrats! :D
CET 6
好萌
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