hi, from my queue.
[General]
fine~
[Easy]
00:09:862 (1) - whistle on start.
00:16:534 (4) - remove whistle on repeat.
00:19:871 (3,4) - move to following coordinate. (3) = x:136, y:200. (4) = x:224, y:136
00:45:450 (1,3) - it would be better if you use a different slider shape.
[Normal]
00:02:633 (5,6) - nazi. move to following coorinate. (5) = x:412, y: 124. (6) = x:344, y:76
00:05:969 (2) - remove whistle on slider end
00:07:637 (1,2,3,4) - how about this? (2) to x:127 y:326, (3) to x:56 y:174, (4) to x:212 y:102. and if you do, please move 00:09:584 (5) to x:240 y:24
00:07:637 (1) - this should be whistle.
00:08:193 (2) - this too...for consistency.
00:12:642 (1,1) - make this symmetry.
00:15:422 (2) - whistle should be on start, not end.
00:16:534 (1) - whistle
00:17:091 (2) - remove whistle
00:22:651 (2) - missing whistle on slider end
00:24:319 (2) - how about move this to x:308 y:44. I think it flows better
00:25:432 (1) - if you do ^ move this to x:64 y:140. to make it symmetry.
00:29:324 (2) - remove whistle?
[Cartographer's Hard]
you should copy-paste the timing points on [Normal] or [Easy]. it is definitely make this map better.
00:00:965 (3) - blanket this slider? like 00:18:759 (1)
00:03:189 (1) - fix this slider. move the last point up a bit so it create a space just like (6) to (1) 00:04:301 (2) - if you do, make this symmetry with previous slider. you can use copy and paste.
00:08:749 (3,4) - to be honest, I don't like this jump. looks random. change it?
00:18:759 (1) - not perfect blanket. fix this.
00:27:656 (1) - ^
00:33:217 (3) - seems randomly placed. I can see notes before 3 make a triangle pattern. but (3) ruins the beautiful pattern there. so I suggest you to make a square pattern by moving (3) so you can see a square pattern.
00:36:553 (1) - make this a perfect blanket
00:41:002 (1) - why don't you make it like this? 00:45:450 (1) - almost perfect,
00:47:674 (1) - move the middle point to x:248 y:140. for a perfect blanket slider.
you should use more slider shapes in this map. it's kinda boring to see curved slider again and again.
I find this diff still inconsistent on hitsounding. please review your hitsounding.
and last, there are some random placement that ruins the map.
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you know, I like the song. easy, and normal is fine but there is some problem on hard diff.
ok, that's all.
I hope my mod help you.
if I somehow offend you, I'm sorry. I just being honest here.
thank you.
[General]
fine~
[Easy]
00:09:862 (1) - whistle on start.
00:16:534 (4) - remove whistle on repeat.
00:19:871 (3,4) - move to following coordinate. (3) = x:136, y:200. (4) = x:224, y:136
00:45:450 (1,3) - it would be better if you use a different slider shape.
[Normal]
00:02:633 (5,6) - nazi. move to following coorinate. (5) = x:412, y: 124. (6) = x:344, y:76
00:05:969 (2) - remove whistle on slider end
00:07:637 (1,2,3,4) - how about this? (2) to x:127 y:326, (3) to x:56 y:174, (4) to x:212 y:102. and if you do, please move 00:09:584 (5) to x:240 y:24
00:07:637 (1) - this should be whistle.
00:08:193 (2) - this too...for consistency.
00:12:642 (1,1) - make this symmetry.
00:15:422 (2) - whistle should be on start, not end.
00:16:534 (1) - whistle
00:17:091 (2) - remove whistle
00:22:651 (2) - missing whistle on slider end
00:24:319 (2) - how about move this to x:308 y:44. I think it flows better
00:25:432 (1) - if you do ^ move this to x:64 y:140. to make it symmetry.
00:29:324 (2) - remove whistle?
[Cartographer's Hard]
you should copy-paste the timing points on [Normal] or [Easy]. it is definitely make this map better.
00:00:965 (3) - blanket this slider? like 00:18:759 (1)
00:03:189 (1) - fix this slider. move the last point up a bit so it create a space just like (6) to (1) 00:04:301 (2) - if you do, make this symmetry with previous slider. you can use copy and paste.
00:08:749 (3,4) - to be honest, I don't like this jump. looks random. change it?
00:18:759 (1) - not perfect blanket. fix this.
00:27:656 (1) - ^
00:33:217 (3) - seems randomly placed. I can see notes before 3 make a triangle pattern. but (3) ruins the beautiful pattern there. so I suggest you to make a square pattern by moving (3) so you can see a square pattern.
00:36:553 (1) - make this a perfect blanket
00:41:002 (1) - why don't you make it like this? 00:45:450 (1) - almost perfect,
00:47:674 (1) - move the middle point to x:248 y:140. for a perfect blanket slider.
you should use more slider shapes in this map. it's kinda boring to see curved slider again and again.
I find this diff still inconsistent on hitsounding. please review your hitsounding.
and last, there are some random placement that ruins the map.
[]
you know, I like the song. easy, and normal is fine but there is some problem on hard diff.
ok, that's all.
I hope my mod help you.
if I somehow offend you, I'm sorry. I just being honest here.
thank you.