Sorry for the late mod, Anyways:
Hard: Overall, There's too many mistakes and errors in this map to manually tell you to fix (
), so I'll tell you some ways you can improve your editing:
First of all, your
kiai time should end @ 01:25:920, there's a similar part for your kiai time that should be at 00:28:560 - 00:43:680. I also don't think that's a good place to place your kiai, I don't even think this kiai is appropriate for this song.
Next are your
sliders: They should be simple and have constant shapes by copying, pasting, and rotating the sliders. Curves/lines look more better to use.
Next are your
patterns: They should be constant and similar to one another in place of song. Since this song repeats once, 01:10:800 this part and 00:28:560 this part are supposed to use similar techniques and stuff, some other parts too.
Next,
note placements/distance: Make sure they have the same distance apart from one another. People tend to use
0.4x, 0.8x,1.2x,1.6x, 2x snap or
0.5x,1x,1.5x,2x snap. This is so that when you play the song, your mouse will move at a constant speed. For triples/drumrolls, people tend to use a lower snap. Like 01:10:800 (1,2,3,4) - for example, Should be distanced
0.4x or
0.5x because the notes are weirdly distanced, so some people might have a hard time playing along.
Also, for more emphasized parts of the song, add
1.2x or
1.5x, or
2x or
1.6x so that it really goes well with the song.
Next,
difficulty: There's alot of empty spaces that 1 beat have no notes. Changing some of the notes to sliders will really bring the song together (unless if a part is supposed to be emphasized don't change to slider) It's okay to have some spare sounds, as long as if it's not making the song too different.
Next,
hitsounds: Make sure they are constant, and don't over use them. Also, make sure there's only 1 hit sound that's following the beat, and the others are only played at certain parts. You also don't really need whistle
everysingle note. I think it would sound better if you just have a clap going with the bass drum. But if you really want to add whistle for every note, you'll have to add that as the custom hitnormal sound. Just find that whistle sound, copy and paste into the same folder as your song.
viewtopic.php?f=10&t=729 explains what to name your hitsounds (it should be soft-hitnormal) and to hear that sound, go to song setup > audio > enable custom overrides = checked.
Finally,
the gameplay/design itself: I don't even think you need to add a break @ 00:43:920 since your song is short, and it doesn't create that mood. There are also some parts where sliders/notes are appropriate needed for the song like @ 01:04:560 - 01:06:480, And some that are kinda pointless like exampled area. And also, you should try using most of the space available instead of using the same area for the song. you should also use tiny/small grid (press g to change size) so that your map can look better.
Hope this helps
. Good luck.
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