10crystalmask01 wrote:

ichivictus wrote:

[Hard]
01:19:867 (3,4) - Ending the slider 1/4 before on the red tick would fit the music better. Not sure what you mean here

ichivictus wrote:

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[Hard]
01:19:867 (3,4) - Ending the slider 1/4 before on the red tick would fit the music better. Not sure what you mean here

Oh I meant ending it at 01:20:102 - sounds like it fits the music a little better. That's all Oh I see. Nah, I want to keep the spacing with 01:19:867 (3,4) - consistent with 01:17:992 (2,3) -

Sephibro wrote:

Hey there!
Mod arrived in the end yay~! \^o^/

[General]
I checked the timing, I found a much better one (offset was VERY off) lol:
BPM: 128,000
Offset: 2545


[Hard]
I would AR+1 and OD+1, but since the song has medium-slow bpm ar6/od5 could fit too Yea, I'm keeping it as it is, cause it'll ruin the consistency between the diffs.
00:10:492 (1,2,3) - how about something like this? http://puu.sh/5alMw.jpg Once I know how to blanket objects properly, maybe I will
00:38:383 - http://puu.sh/5alPm.jpg this is nicer IMO Can't do this, because I'll be skipping the cymbal crash the cymbal crash is one of the msot noticable and hearable rhythm in the music, so players will easily be able to distinguish how the beat goes.
00:47:992 (2,3,4) - you could make something like 00:10:492 (1,2,3) here
01:15:883 - http://puu.sh/5alYI.jpg ^
01:25:492 (2) - http://puu.sh/5am2c.jpg

seems good

[Normal]
00:29:242 (3) - make a better blanket (use approach circles to make perfect blankets) Like? o3o
00:38:149 - i would add a note here before the spinner http://puu.sh/5ambh.jpg No, i don't want to miss the cymbal crash at 00:37:232
01:07:914 (5,1) - I don't find it a good idea to make a slider to follow the background voice, also because it forces two slider to start on red tick. http://puu.sh/5ameA.jpg this is much better imo But, it follows the flutes... ;w;
01:15:649 - same as 00:38:149 ^

[Easy]
00:20:336 (4) - I don't like the rhythm this slider creates, http://puu.sh/5amlL.jpg this is much better here Hmm, I did this so that the rhythm isn't too repetitive. But if more people complains about this, then I guess I will
00:52:680 (2,3) - care for distance snap here! 00:53:149 (3) = 54|157; 00:55:492 (1) = 72|60
01:02:055 (4) - 2|100
01:37:680 (1) - 179|38
01:39:555 (3) - 179|38

All fixed, but the ones replied in red!

Nice mapset!

Tari wrote:

Don't change anything in Happy30's mod because that would lead to unsnap notes orz, and really weird slider end hit

In ichi's mod I only fix the unsymmetrical slider at end, but the other suggestion was refused to keep symmetry,

I fixed everything on SephBro's Mod but 01:27:857 (1,2,3) - because that would ruin flow (the nice cursor movement)

Here is update : http://puu.sh/5bKvi.osu

Tari wrote:

another update

http://puu.sh/5bKvi.osu

CakiP wrote:

lyrics checked

SPOILER

さあさあ父上 お酌は如何(lyrics-1.png) → 『さあさあ父上 お酌は如何 ✔

あの味が忘れられないのです(lyrics-4.png) → あの味が忘れられないのです』✔

白米は最高だ(chorus-1.2.png) → 白米は最高だ! ✔

天晴れだ(chorus-1.3.png) → 天晴れだ! ✔

「礼儀礼節を重んじる つつましやかな私も(lyrics5..png) → 『礼儀礼節を重んじる つつましやかな私も✔

たまには 陽気な歌を歌うのさ」(cooltext1254688220) → たまには 陽気な歌を歌うのさ』✔

ハッとして地球(verse-3.1.png) → はっとして地球 ✔

泣ける お袋の味(chorus-2.1.png) → 泣ける おふくろの味 ✔

「しらたきは細めが良い」(chorus-2.2.png) → 『白滝は細めがよい』 ✔

なあなあ兄上 鮪を頂戴(lyrics-5.png) → なあなあ兄上 鮪(まぐろ)を頂戴

「其方の為にもだ」(lyrics-9.png) → 『其方(そち)の為にもだ✔

春夏秋冬...(lyrics-15.png) → 春夏秋冬 ✔


Quote　http://www.utamap.com/showkasi.php?surl=dk121002_4

good luck!

1. lyrics-5.png is unused. you need to remove that in root folder. not from SB folder
2. I guess you forget to fix.
   
3. some skin-sets are incomplete.
   https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning
   at least, you must add approachcircle.png / reversearrow.png / sliderfollowcircle.png .
4. Maybe sliderb10.png unused as specification of the game
5. Artist : Takahashi Hiroki
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for help.

1. 00:18:013 (1,2,3) - just placement suggestion. I think can be a more cool thing.
   
   
   

   1. 00:18:013 (1) - x224 y136
   2. 00:18:482 (2) - start: x320 y152 ~ x424 y140
   3. 00:19:420 (3) - x460 y228 ~ x370 y238
2. 00:24:107 - I think the volume is too low so I suggest to use 45% here.

1. 00:32:545 (1) - why did you use spinner? I think you can find a better rhythm...
   
   
   1. 00:32:545 (1) - 1/1 slider
   2. 00:33:482 (2,3,4) - circle
   ^like this
2. 01:10:045 (1) - ^
   
   
   1. 01:10:045 (1) - circle
   2. 01:10:279 (2) - 1/1 slider
   3. 01:10:982 (3) - circle
   4. 01:11:451 (4) - ^

1. 00:12:388 (2) - why did not use 3/4 slider? that have same melody as 00:10:513 (2) - , so should change it.
2. 00:19:888 (2) - ^
3. 00:43:091 (3) - fmm... there is a instrument at 00:43:326 and that is bit larger than 00:42:388 - so would be better to follow that sound imo.
4. 01:32:779 (1) - [b]maybe this slider speed confuse players.

1. 00:07:232 (5,1) - missing pattern? replace NC between these notes?
2. 00:15:904 (2) - I feel 00:15:904 (2,3,4) 's flow is not cool so few sugestions here. please choose one if you need
   
   1. 
   2. 00:15:904 (2) - ctrl+G
      
      
   3. 
3. 00:18:365 - add circle? just my feeling. because melody has a changing at 00:17:545 -. so the map would be better to have also a changing imo.
   
   
4. 00:20:240 - ^
5. 00:28:560 (7,1) - should be more cool
   
   how do you feel about this? btw can also use at 00:26:685 (5,1) - .
6. 00:55:865 - same as 00:18:365
7. 00:57:740 - ^
8. 00:59:380 - ^ (maybe not need)
9. 01:04:302 - same as 00:28:560 (7,1)
10. 01:05:826 (6,7) - why did not use 1/2 slider? vocal is extend from 01:05:826 -
11. 01:06:177 - same as 00:28:560 (7,1)
12. 01:39:107 (8) - (nazi) why...why not symmetry?

NewRulerNA wrote:

as your request
red: Unrankable issue.
blue: may be unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.


[General]

1. lyrics-5.png is unused. you need to remove that in root folder. not from SB folder
2. I guess you forget to fix.
   
3. some skin-sets are incomplete.
   https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning
   at least, you must add approachcircle.png / reversearrow.png / sliderfollowcircle.png .
4. Maybe sliderb10.png unused as specification of the game
5. Artist : Takahashi Hiroki
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for help.

Thanks for the notice!

[Easy]

1. 00:18:013 (1,2,3) - just placement suggestion. I think can be a more cool thing.
   
   
   

   1. 00:18:013 (1) - x224 y136
   2. 00:18:482 (2) - start: x320 y152 ~ x424 y140
   3. 00:19:420 (3) - x460 y228 ~ x370 y238
   ✔
2. 00:24:107 - I think the volume is too low so I suggest to use 45% here. Not really, otherwise the hitsound on the tail of 01:00:670 (3) - would also sound to silent. But its not so

awesome Easy <3 Ty <3

[Normal]

1. 00:32:545 (1) - why did you use spinner? I think you can find a better rhythm...
   
   
   1. 00:32:545 (1) - 1/1 slider True.
   2. 00:33:482 (2,3,4) - circle Mmm used another 1/1 slider like above.
   ^like this
2. 01:10:045 (1) - ^
   
   
   1. 01:10:045 (1) - circle
   2. 01:10:279 (2) - 1/1 slider
   3. 01:10:982 (3) - circle
   4. 01:11:451 (4) - ^ Interesting rhythm, thanks!

[Hard]

1. 00:12:388 (2) - why did not use 3/4 slider? that have same melody as 00:10:513 (2) - , so should change it. ✔
2. 00:19:888 (2) - ^ ✔
3. 00:43:091 (3) - fmm... there is a instrument at 00:43:326 and that is bit larger than 00:42:388 - so would be better to follow that sound imo. Ok changed the slider to a 1/2 with reverse
4. 01:32:779 (1) - [b]maybe this slider speed confuse players.

Easy~Hard are awesome, almost nothing to say. Guess I'll have to work on Normal then :[ And finish the lyrics + skin parts[/list]


really bad mod orz... No its not bad
have my star

mod time: 2 hours

good luck

1. Finish your storyboard! Some of the lyrics are missing! D: Also, the storyboard would be more realistic if the rose petals don't fade away as it hits the bottom of the grid. o.o
2. Since you have a skin, don't forget to add "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" under the [Colours] section of each .osu file.

1. 00:30:670 (4,5,1) - It is possible to re-adjust this pattern so 4 fully blankets with 1 for a better visual look. I moved 00:31:138 (4) last anchor point 1 grid to the left and adjust spacing accordingly. The best part is that it does not affect spacing. See if you like it!
   
   Image and Code

   
   

   308,164,30670,2,0,P|262:239|280:328,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   372,360,32076,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   376,260,32545,6,0,L|188:240,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 01:21:295 (1,2,3) - You can make this pattern cleaner! Try this:
   
   Image and Code

   
   

   248,280,81295,6,0,P|329:309|404:264,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
   320,208,82701,1,12,0:0:0:0:
   404,152,83170,2,0,P|332:107|248:136,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:34:420 (1) - I believe you forgot to add soft-finish at the end of this slider (and the start of 01:36:295 (3)). You may have to remove some of the green timing sections to match the hit spound volumes of the soft-finish.

1. 00:33:482 (2) - The end of this slider is not perfectly stacked with the previous hit circle at 00:32:076 (4). To fix, you can either move 4 at 186|354 or you can reverse select this slider, move the stack of the slider with 4, and reverse select again. Either way works fine!
2. 00:34:420 (1,3) - If suggested above, (warning nazi mod) try moving 1 to 256|188 and move 3 to 256|40. It will satisfy spacing consistency and makes the diamond pattern symmentical.
3. 01:34:420 (1,1) - I think it is better to map this part instead of adding spinners as you did in your other difficulties (consistency is key). Also, the note after the 2nd spinner at 01:36:295 (1) appears too sudden for this difficulty, which could cause an inexperienced player to not react fast enough to hit that note, resulting in a miss.

1. 00:45:201 (4,1) - Why not add a spinner between these notes? o.o This part of the map feels and plays empty without it.
2. 00:49:420 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesn't flow well with the vocals and there is no polarity between 2 and 3 (same as 00:56:920 (1,2,3,4)). I suggest to use the same pattern you did at 00:11:920 (1,2,3,4,5) and 00:19:420 (1,2,3,4,5) as it matches the vocals better.
3. 00:56:920 (1,2,3,4) - Copy-pasted of 00:49:420 (1,2,3,4)? Just an observation. If you want to keep it, you can as it doesn't hurt the map either way.
4. 01:29:263 (2,3) - The spacing plays weird here, try adjusting these patterns like this:
   
   Image and Code

   
   

   392,172,89263,2,0,P|368:136|368:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   448,48,89732,2,0,P|368:88|284:52,1,180,4|10,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. Due to the new rule about difficulties, you going to have to change the difficulty name to "Insane".
2. 00:14:029 (2,3,4) - Not sure if intentional, but this mini stream isn't completely straight. It would look cleaner and more polished if you make this pattern straight.
3. 01:00:904 (2,3,4,5) - For this pattern, you can polish this by improving this pentagon/star shape.
4. 01:39:107 (8) - I guess you can make this slider fully symmetrical. Not really an issue though.

BeatofIke wrote:

Okay, Time to clear some mod requests (before I get way too lazy again), starting with your map! ^_^

[General]

1. Finish your storyboard! Some of the lyrics are missing! D: Also, the storyboard would be more realistic if the rose petals don't fade away as it hits the bottom of the grid. o.o I'll just redo the entire animation for the rose petals.
2. Since you have a skin, don't forget to add "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" under the [Colours] section of each .osu file. ✔

[Easy]

1. 00:30:670 (4,5,1) - It is possible to re-adjust this pattern so 4 fully blankets with 1 for a better visual look. I moved 00:31:138 (4) last anchor point 1 grid to the left and adjust spacing accordingly. The best part is that it does not affect spacing. See if you like it!
   
   Image and Code

   
   

   308,164,30670,2,0,P|262:239|280:328,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   372,360,32076,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   376,260,32545,6,0,L|188:240,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   ✔
2. 01:21:295 (1,2,3) - You can make this pattern cleaner! Try this:
   
   Image and Code

   
   

   248,280,81295,6,0,P|329:309|404:264,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
   320,208,82701,1,12,0:0:0:0:
   404,152,83170,2,0,P|332:107|248:136,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:

   ✔
3. 01:34:420 (1) - I believe you forgot to add soft-finish at the end of this slider (and the start of 01:36:295 (3) I used a drum-finish here instead, to match the 'Thud' sound heard here.). You may have to remove some of the green timing sections to match the hit spound volumes of the soft-finish. Added soft-finish hitsound!

[Normal]

1. 00:33:482 (2) - The end of this slider is not perfectly stacked with the previous hit circle at 00:32:076 (4). To fix, you can either move 4 at 186|354 or you can reverse select this slider, move the stack of the slider with 4, and reverse select again. Either way works fine!✔
2. 00:34:420 (1,3) - If suggested above, (warning nazi mod) try moving 1 to 256|188 and move 3 to 256|40. It will satisfy spacing consistency and makes the diamond pattern symmentical. ✔
3. 01:34:420 (1,1) - I think it is better to map this part instead of adding spinners as you did in your other difficulties (consistency is key). Also, the note after the 2nd spinner at 01:36:295 (1) appears too sudden for this difficulty, which could cause an inexperienced player to not react fast enough to hit that note, resulting in a miss. Ok. From 01:33:951 - 01:37:701 I've re-mapped with hit objects now.

[Hard]

1. 00:45:201 (4,1) - Why not add a spinner between these notes? o.o This part of the map feels and plays empty without it. Sure, why not.
2. 00:49:420 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesn't flow well with the vocals and there is no polarity between 2 and 3 (same as 00:56:920 (1,2,3,4)). I suggest to use the same pattern you did at 00:11:920 (1,2,3,4,5) and 00:19:420 (1,2,3,4,5) as it matches the vocals better. Done.
3. 00:56:920 (1,2,3,4) - Copy-pasted of 00:49:420 (1,2,3,4)? Just an observation. If you want to keep it, you can as it doesn't hurt the map either way. ^
4. 01:29:263 (2,3) - The spacing plays weird here, try adjusting these patterns like this:
   
   Image and Code

   
   

   392,172,89263,2,0,P|368:136|368:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   448,48,89732,2,0,P|368:88|284:52,1,180,4|10,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   ✔

MasterKirin wrote:

Mod from my queue

[Easy]
01:20:357 (3) x:236 y:176

[Normal]
Nothing to say here

[Hard]
00:24:576 (4) x:410 y:254
01:29:732 (3) CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by 3

Fixed all.
Good luck with the map

Sieg wrote:

Hello

Hard:
http://puu.sh/6UdhW.osr

SPOILER

sweet <3

Tari:
http://puu.sh/6Udj6.osr

SPOILER

slow streams - bad accuracy :\
diff is also sweet, don't forget to rename according to new rules

Good Luck! Thankyou owo

Pagno wrote:

Hello! Thanks for your past mod!

~ Mod here ~

[Hard]

1. 00:22:943 (1) - Just an idea, maybe make a reverse slider long 1/4 instead No, theres nothing wrong with it, and I like it the way it is now.
   
2. 00:35:834 (2) - You could move this a bit or change a little 00:34:428 (1) 's shape in order to make a blanket! Changed it to something else. But thanks a lot for pointing that out
   
3. 01:30:678 (1) - ahh in my opinion this is quite hard to sightread especially for HD players! Maybe move it a little or stack it better under the slider's end! Stacked.
   
4. 01:32:787 (1,2) - Because of the spacing and the unexpected SV change, it's quite difficult to understand that the hitcircle is one beat away from the slider's end, so maybe make something like
   
   I don't feel like making too much objects here, so i added a slider instead.

[Normal]

1. 00:29:506 (3,1) - Stack the hitcircle better under (3)'s end Fixed.
2. 00:37:240 (2,3) - ^ ^

[Easy]

1. 01:04:428 (4) - (Nazi mod) You could make a better blanket on here! Aww alright, fixed >.>
2. 01:08:178 (3) - ^ ^

Well, that's it! The whole mapset is well made and well balanced! And amazing job with hitsounds! This will get ranked soon for sure - good luck o/
I love you~ <3

Lust wrote:

oh shoot let me get this in before its bubbled

Easy

1. 00:04:428 (1,1) - This blanket is slightly off. The end of the slider tapers off a bit. Use the approach circle to check.
   
   SPOILER

   
   I bolded out the word slightly, so it's no big deal.
2. 00:20:365 (4,1) - This blanket is also a bit off. Use the approach circle to check this! You can move the note back in the timeline and then move it back if you have trouble seeing it. I see it now, and it's very obvious LOL. fixed.
3. 00:26:459 (3,4) - Oh my gosh this blanket too! ^
4. 00:28:803 (2) - I would angle this slider so that its slider body follows after 00:28:334 (1) - . Then adjust the following slider so that it matches the new pattern! Here is a screen shot to give you an idea of what I am talking about. It will provide for some better flow (and look neater as well)
   
   SPOILER

   
   But 00:28:334 (1) - is under 00:26:459 (3) - . And even when I re-position it, then the flow between 00:26:928 (4,1) - will look jagged.
5. 00:49:428 (1,2) - (Nazi) This blanket is also slightly off. Don't see it.
6. 00:55:521 (1,2) - Same slider body suggestion as before, except alter it a bit to fit this different pattern. ?
7. 01:03:959 (3,4,1) - Try something like this! You can adjust the following patterns to adapt to the new change. This will look a bit neater
   
   SPOILER

   
   No thankyou. I don't see much of a difference.
8. 01:21:303 (1,2,3) - The flow here is a bit awkward. You have one slider go one direction, then in to the middle, then back out another direction! I see that alot in many other ranked maps, lol...
9. 01:34:428 (1) - Have this blanket 01:32:553 (1) - 's slider body. It is...
10. 01:36:303 (3) - Move the anchor a little further up so that it blankets 01:35:834 (2) - perfectly. Which one?
11. 01:40:990 (4) - You should have a spinner here instead to end off the difficulty like the rest of the set. No way, I want a different series of ending objects, so that it makes each diff spread unique.

Normal

• 00:03:256 (2) - Check the spacing between this and 00:03:490 (3) - . It may look like a small difference but its very noticeable since its slower bpm and lower difficulty. Fixed.

1. 00:08:178 (1,1) - Because of the low AR, the slider here appears way before the spinner ends! Tha'ts a bit disorientating for sure. No it doesn't. I've already test played it before to be sure.
2. 00:23:646 (1) - Why spinner? You can easily map this out! Meh, don't have to, don't want to.
3. 00:33:490 (2) - Move this to 159:217 so that the slider end is perfectly stacking with 00:32:084 (4) - 's hitburst. Lol, ok.
4. 01:10:287 (2,3) - Not a fan of this overlap. Find a new pattern here please, it looks very unclean D; You can just move the second slider to the end of the first then adjust the following pattern. Nsh, players can still clearly see the sliders head, and (partially) the tail.
5. 01:36:303 (3) - Moving this to 184:350 will make it perfectly symmetrical with 01:34:428 (1) - . Don't believe me? Ctrl+H 01:34:428 (1) - then ctrl+g it and you will see what I mean. Okay, I trust you.

Hard

1. 00:15:678 (1,2) - Wouldn't it be cool if these slider bodies blanketed 00:15:443 (5) - ? They oh wait..no they're not :l fixed.
2. 00:22:240 (3) - Lessen the curve on this slider so that it perfectly blankets 00:22:709 (4) - ^
3. 00:29:740 (3) - 63:24, so that it is perfectly stacked underneath of 00:29:271 (2) - 's slider end Sure, why not.
4. 00:37:709 (4) - 60:231 so that is is perfectly stacked underneath of 00:37:006 (3) - 's slider end^
5. 01:09:115 (3,4,5) - Have the jumps evenly spaced, the last one comes out of nowhere! 01:09:115 (3,4,5) - corresponds with the previous jumps on rhythm at 00:31:615 (3,4,5) -
6. 01:22:709 (4) - 359:140 No.

Good luck!

jonathanlfj wrote:

This really sounds like a christmas song for some reason lol

[General]
all your sb elements are unsnapped with respect to the timeline (25ms early). To fix this, go to Design - Move all elements in time... and shift everything by +25ms. Oh, I see now. Fixed!

[Easy]
00:10:990 (2) - Need a NC here since it follows a spinner Ok.
00:29:740 (3,4) - small spacing inconsistency here Fixed.
00:48:490 (2) - add NC here for same reason as 00:10:990 (2). Ok.you might want to remove the NC on 00:49:428 (1) since it seems accidental. Not this one, since this note hits on the large tick mark.
01:40:990 (4) - feels a bit empty skipping over the sound at 01:41:459, see if you can cover for it. I don't think it's necessary to make a slider tick .wav file just to fill in this 1 spot

[Normal]
00:22:240 (3,4) - i would rotate this CCW a bit so the flow from 00:22:006 (2) is more natural. True.
00:48:021 - add a note here, since you covered for a similar sound at 00:10:521 (1) ^
01:20:599 (4) - like this?

SPOILER

No thank you, I prefer it being straight.

[Hard]
00:31:615 (3,4,5) - make these equal-distant? Re-cheked, they should be now since the jump here is made using 2.0 DS.
00:59:271 (3) - i think positioning it like this makes the flow better:

SPOILER

Hmm good idea :3
01:32:318 (5) - this flows a bit weird and may cause reading confusion under this AR; try putting it at x:224 y:180 Many test players didn't have any trouble with the jump here, but changed anyways.

Just make sure you fix the sb and let me know afterwards. Yep, looks good now. Check each and every SB lyrics because I'm paranoid just in case, and all of them are timed correctly (including the white.png)

Tari wrote:

All fixed in one way or another.


http://puu.sh/7i8e3.osu

jonathanlfj wrote:

well after a long irc check everything should be fine now (too bad crystalmask went to sleep xD). Enjoy ur first rank!

Ranked~