1. Easy (2.3 stars, 108 notes)
2. Hard (4.94 stars, 269 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 378 notes)
4. Normal (3.93 stars, 141 notes)

Verlaren wrote:

Hi~ From Aincrad's Modding queue.

General:
deselect letterbox during breaks, because you haven't a storyboard. =>fix.
resolution yours backgroung - 1024x640, please change on 1024x768(4:3) or 1366x768(16:9) =>chenged BG.


Easy:
00:03:054 (1) - pretty difficult for easy diff; maybe change on slider? IMO is better. =>fix
00:08:329 (1) - ^ =>^
01:41:625 (1) - add finish on slider's start? =>There have been already finish.
01:42:944 (3) - remove finish from slider's start =>remove finish at 01:43:933
01:49:537 - add inherit point with 10% volume =>no, I like this sound.


Normal:
AR +1 => I feel a little fast... I'll consider it with other opininon.
00:40:966 (1) - reduce slider on one tick(1/2 snap) =>fix
01:02:065 (1) - remove all finish from slider's middle =>I think these are necessary finish considering other difs. sorry.
01:03:383 (2,3,4) - hmm...too hard for this diff. maybe change on spinner? IMO is not bad => I don't think this pattern is too difficult. Sorry, no.
01:49:537 - add inherit point with 10% volume =>no ._.


Hard:
AR -1 =>fix
01:04:043 (5,6) - not good idea; remove 01:04:373(6), then rduce 01:04:043(5) on one tick, and finaly add on 01:04:290 1/2 slider with 3 repeat, he must ended on 01:04:357 IMO this is good idea =>Hmm... I don't feel this is very good idea. sorry.
01:25:142 (3) - remove note
01:24:977 (3) - add 1/2 slider =>no. I want to rest at 01:24:977 because there're not any sounds.
01:49:537 - add inherit point with 10% volume


Insane:
00:41:955 - add note. Sounds is really good. =>no, there're not any sounds.
01:12:944 - add note. Sounds is really good. =>fix
01:49:537 - add inherit point with 10% volume


Sorry for small mod. Your map is really good. Good luck

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hello. Just some suggestions here:

[General]
Is this song has ranked version? If not, (Short Ver.) would be needless. =>This map has (Short Ver.). I don't know the rule enough about it. I'll ask to BAT.

[Easy]
00:54:152 (1,2) - Little issue: http://puu.sh/31mpE.jpg =>fix
01:17:889 (1,2) - Similar to ^ this. =>fix
01:49:537 - Hitsound 5%. =>Hmm...I don't like it but it's second time to be suggested. ok, fix.

[Normal]
01:03:383 (2,3) - Let (2) reverse 1 more time then remove (3)? So it will be easier to new players. =>nice idea. fix.
01:19:372 - Add a note? =>no. (considering 01:16:735 - and difficulty)
01:49:537 - Same to Easy.

[Hard]
00:21:351 (2) - Hitsounds too loud. =>These are same sound as Insane, and I can't find any alternative solutions. retention.
00:29:592 (2) - Move to 00:29:427? =>no, this is dipicting strings.
00:55:801 (4) - Ctrl+G? =>like it, fix
01:06:351 (2) - It's better to make the reverse arrow clear to see. =>fix
01:49:537 - Same to Easy.

[Insane]
00:13:768 (2,3,4) - Better to make the spacing larger. =>These are depicting the base, and I don't want to change it very much. no.
01:49:537 - Same to Easy.

Nice map! Why you need modding?
Good luck~ :3

Laurier wrote:

mod4mod

General
mp3が128kbpsなのが少し気になりました
よかったら192ver　作ったので使ってみてください　http://puu.sh/355Bf.mp3 =>差し替えました、Thanks！
audio lead-in が2secありますが、少々長すぎるように感じます。0.5か１ぐらいで試してみては？ =>1にしました

Easy
00:03:218 - ここからのbreakは消してもいいと思います。この難易度のドレインなら、プレイに支障がでるような減り方はしませんし、必要性が感じられないです
00:08:493 - ここからも同様に =>このbreakは好きだったので気は進まないですが全てのdifで外しました、とりあえず今後のmodで反応を見ます。
00:17:559 (3) - リズムをキープするためにここにnoteをおきましょう =>fix
00:25:141 (1) - ここは、00:23:823 (2) - のend部分の円を覆うように曲げるのがbetter http://puu.sh/355NW.jpg =>fix
00:26:460 (2) - ↑を直した場合は形を合わせましょう =>fix
00:33:054 (1) - ここは直前のパターンに合わせてこんな感じの音取りにしましょう http://puu.sh/355QW.jpg =>fix
00:39:482 (2) - vocal取るならこんなかんじに。 http://puu.sh/355SE.jpg =>fix
01:00:746 (2) - もう少し右下に移動したほうが流れがよくなります　試してみてください =>どのくらい移動すればいいのかわからなかったのですが、00:58:108 (2,1) - と正三角形を作るくらいに移動してみました。
01:07:999 (1,2) - brancketを作成　http://puu.sh/355V2.jpg =>fix
01:17:889 (1) - better brancket =>fix

前半部分がbgmでとってるのか歌でとってるのかごちゃごちゃに感じました。easyなのでどちらかに統一したほうがいいと思います。
配置は綺麗に思いましたが、細かい部分をもう少し直せばより綺麗に見えると思います。grid snapを外して整えてみてください。

Nromal
00:04:207 - この難易度もbreakいらないと思います
00:08:493 - ^
00:11:955 (1,2,3) - 微妙だけど位置取りの提案 http://puu.sh/3564C.jpg =>fix
00:16:570 (4) - 前後と比べてここだけ音の取り方が変わってて浮いてるように感じます。ほかと同じようなシンプルな音取りでよいのでは？　=>No. 00:17:065 - の音がどうしても欲しくてわざと浮かせてます。
00:23:823 (2) - startを00:23:658 - からにしたほうが自然なおと取りになると思います　今のままだとちょっと違和感が大きいかな？ =>やり方は違いますが、00:23:658 - に音が来るようにしました。
01:03:383 (2) - リバースの数を１個減らしましょう。01:04:043 - には取るべき音がないと思います =>No. タムがありますし、何よりリズムのキープを重視したいです
01:06:680 (3) - (1)のendと重ねてみては？ =>fix
01:23:823 (2) - このsliderの開始位置も何のおと取ってるのか微妙かなぁ　http://puu.sh/356fD.jpg こんなかんじがまだましかもしれないです =>fix

Hard
うーんやっぱりbreakいらないかなぁと思います playに支障がでるような減り方はしないし、skinとか入れないならあまり意味がないように思います
00:18:548 (1,2) - こういうところも綺麗に見えるように調整して欲しいかなぁ・・・と思います。めんどくさいけど、ちょっと変えるだけで譜面の評価が全然変わってくるとおもいます =>fix
00:27:779 (1,2,3) - こんな感じの配置のほうが流れがよさそう　http://puu.sh/356lG.jpg =>fix
00:29:427 - add note =>対称性を無理に崩したくないので……保留。
00:30:416 - ここからncのパターンが変わってるのがちょっと気になります。ここ以前ももう少しコンボを長くとっていいのではないでしょうか =>fix
00:41:460 (2,3) - sliderと単発の位置を逆に。そして00:41:955 - にもnote追加 =>sliderと単発の入れ替えはfix、note追加は何の音もここにないのでno
01:03:384 (1,2,3,4) - 盛り上がっていくところなので、同じ場所でstackさせるのはもったいないと思います。何か配置考えて置きなおしたほうがいいです=>今まで使ってないstackを使うからこそ盛り上がるという考え方です、ここはどうしてものところなので保留。
01:03:878 (4) - あと、このnoteを1/1sliderにしたほうが音に適してると思います　さび前のこういう場所はがっつりvocalで音取ったほうが遊んでて楽しいのではないでしょうか =>fix
01:23:164 (1,2,3,4) - ここも配置考えたほうがｒｙ =>上に同じです、すみません。
01:24:812 (2,3,4) - vocalで取ったほうがbetter =>01:20:526 - 辺りから伴奏の流れを意図的に作っているので、保留。

Insane
もうここまで来たら全難易度break消しましょう！！！
00:02:229 (1) - delete nc =>fix
00:07:504 (1) - ^ =>^
00:13:768 (2,3,4) - 2からの流れを考えると3.4はもう少しspacingとったほうがbetter =>fix
00:17:065 (5) - ここは強い音なので、3,4より飛ばしてあげましょう =>雰囲気を考えて意図的だったので保留。
00:32:394 (3,4) - ctr+g? ３を飛ばしてあげたほうが音にあってます =>Ctrl+Gではないですが3を飛ばすパターンに変更
00:41:460 (4,5) - sliderと単発逆にしてそのあとの赤tickにもnote追加 =>Hardに同じ
01:06:680 (1,2) - CTR+G =>Ctrl+Gではないですが1を飛ばすようにしました

以上です
　

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Since there's no break time in your map, I'd suggest that you remove all hit circles/sliders at 00:23:163 - 00:30:087, and voila! there's your break time!

Even if its a small amount, its good as it'll give time for the players to recover!

Hope this helps~!

Fycho wrote:

Hi~as thanks for you modding and help

sorry for my poor mod

Black: just suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
None

[Insane]

• 
  00:42:119 (1) –away from00:41:625 (5) or youcan add a note on 00:41:955 =>fix
  01:30:581 (3) –add whistle on head of the slider =>fix (and add some more whistles)

[Hard]

• 
  00:31:570 (4) –change this into two notes on 00:31:570 and 00:31:900 =>no
  00:35:691 (3) –change this into two notes on 00:35:691 and 00:36:021 =>no
  00:38:329 (1,2) –make a better blanket? =>no
  00:42:119 (4) – be away from 00:41:625 (3) =>stacked these.
  01:24:318 (1,2) –replace NC =>like it, fix.
  
  rhythm advice

  
  =>Where!!

[Normal]

• 
  00:03:136 (1) –I think thi spinner is too short to play for a normal player
  00:08:411 (1) -^ These are barely safe... retention.
  00:35:361 (4,2) –had better not overlap =>no
  01:06:680 (3) –make it a little upright =>fix
  01:23:988 (2,3) –make a better blanket =>no. I'd like to keep flow to 01:25:141 (4) -
  01:37:669 (4,1) -^ =>fix
  01:42:284 (2,5) - had better not overlap =>retention

[Easy]

• 
  00:48:218 (3,1) –make a better blanket =>fix
  00:57:449 (1) –take it to left and blanket will be bettet =>no~

Good luck and star to the awesome Insane

Cah-m wrote:

Fycho wrote:

Hi~as thanks for you modding and help

[Hard]

rhythm advice

=>Where!!=>01:24:812 -

YOURS wrote:

Well, you map is amazing but I have a few suggestions.

Easy

00:16:240 I think it would be a little better with a circle here. I think the rhythm would be better that way. =>good
00:21:515 ^ And another one here too. =>I don't want to add circle so many because it'll be Normal when I do it imo
00:22:834 Add a circle here. =>^
00:26:130 ^ =>^
00:51:845 ^ =>^
01:07:669 ^ =>^
01:25:141 (4) Extend slider to 01:25:471 =>(This mod is for Normal I guess,) This slider following the symbal. no.
Normal

00:29:275 (3) Delete this circle. It sounded a little off of to me. =>I want to keep this circle, but removed whistle.
01:03:383 (2) Delete 2 reverse arrows from this slider. Extend the remaining of it so it ends at 01:04:043 =>good

I couldn't find anything wrong with Hard and Insane diffs. Please respect my suggestions.

Pizza Kun wrote:

M4M from your queue please check my post ^^


[Insane]

00:02:065 (4) - Move to 156||192 ? i think is better a zig zag c: =>I want to make curved flow because here's a calm part. no.
00:06:515 (1,2) - Like this: http://d.pr/i/sTEj+/ =>^
00:03:136 (1,1) - Finish =>no
00:09:400 - Add spinner, it finish in: 00:10:471 =>no
00:14:097 (3,4) - Ctrl+G =>no
00:16:735 (3,4,5) - swap in this way: 5 -> 3 -> 4 =>good
00:23:658 (1,3) - Stack better =>fix
00:28:933 (1,1) - Stack =>no
00:34:949 (3,4) - Add clap for more rithm ^^
00:35:526 (1,2) - ^
00:40:801 (1,2) - ^ =>no
00:41:625 (5) - Leave Whistle at start =>no
01:08:328 (1) - Move in 120||108 =>fix
01:09:647 (5,6,7,8) - all clap =>no
01:09:977 (1) - Finish at start =>fix
01:45:416 (1,1) - Stack? =>no

[Hard]

00:03:136 (1,1) - Same for insane and ad spin like insane =>no
00:12:944 (6,7) - Fix blanket =>fix
00:14:922 (2,3) - ^ =>fix
00:18:548 (4,5) - ^ =>fix
00:46:076 (1,2,3) - Kile this: http://d.pr/i/PENY+/ =>no
01:16:900 (2) - Fix blanket, move in 92||176 =>retention

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi from queue~

[Hard]
00:03:136 (1) - remove spinner =>no
00:21:351 (2) - clap at the end =>fix
00:32:395 (6,7) - sepeeate them, =>no
00:33:548 (2,3,4) - try this =>take same changes.

00:41:955 (4) - add circle =>no

01:07:175 (3) - place here =>fix

01:23:988 (5) - make like this =>no

01:30:252 (4,5) - not a same shape =>no
01:45:416 (4) - remove NC
01:45:746 (2) - NC =>no

[Insane]
00:21:762 (6) - clap as the song sounds =>fix
00:41:955 - need circle here. how about this pattern? =>There're not any sounds. no.

00:42:119 (2) - remove NC
01:04:289 (3) - remove =>no
00:19:043 (2) - make a reverse =>retention
00:27:779 (9) - change direction beacause of flow =>no

Done.

Good luck!

ac585318 wrote:

Any chance of a resurrection? D: