Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)

Marie - Clover Day's

posted
Total Posts
129
show more
kintyan
150 posts
Joined September 2010
kintyan
hi~
[General]
BG sizeを1024*768に
mp3の日本語のプロパティ情報を削除
widescreen supportを全てのdiffで外して下さい
tagにALcot 10th Anniversary visual novel これらを追加してください

offsetですが、1606ではなくて1590じゃないですか？
1606じゃ遅すぎると思います
Lecana
253 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lecana

Sheryl wrote:

hi~
[General]
BG sizeを1024*768に
mp3の日本語のプロパティ情報を削除
widescreen supportを全てのdiffで外して下さい
tagにALcot 10th Anniversary visual novel これらを追加してください

offsetですが、1606ではなくて1590じゃないですか？
1606じゃ遅すぎると思います
:arrow: 了解しました!
ありがとうございました。変更させていただきました。
terametis
1,140 posts
Joined April 2009
terametis
request by satellite

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Insane]

Hitsound
  1. 00:14:695 (2) - パターン的にリバースアローじゃなくてスライダーの終わりのとこにwhistleです。
General
  1. 00:20:221 (5) - なんかこう、パートの節目の最後のfinishだから、00:19:274 (1) - と00:19:747 (3) - 00:20:221 (5) - のfinishついてる3つ全部飛ばしたいです
    具体的にいうとx256,y316あたりとかどうですか！！！
  2. 00:36:168 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - ここらへんちょっと綺麗さよりもフローの悪さが目立つような感じがしたので、適当に変えてみたらどうでしょうか。

    順番かえたり。10は6にstackする感じ
    がっつりかえたり

    188,108,36168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    96,192,36326,6,0,P|132:200|176:200,1,63.7500024318696,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    320,48,36642,2,0,P|288:49|257:57,1,63.7500024318696,0|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    400,220,36958,6,0,P|412:157|400:95,1,127.500004863739,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    304,304,37432,2,0,P|362:327|426:326,1,127.500004863739,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    276,176,37905,1,2,0:1:0:0:
  3. 00:39:642 (2) - おそらく00:39:800 (3,4,5,6,7) - がこだわりの配置だとおもうのですが、ならいっそのことこのnote消しちゃったらどうでしょう。引き立つと思います！
  4. 00:47:063 (1,2) - このnoteをクルって感じにしたらクルクルッてかんじになって気持ちよさそう(あいまい)
    SPOILER
  5. 00:52:432 (2,3,4,5) - フロー悪いと思います。
  6. 01:08:537 (1,2) - 　01:07:747 (2,3)のhitsoundで とどくってvocalを強調しちゃってるので、この音取りだと01:09:011 (2) - これがすっごい浮いて聞こえます。
  7. 01:25:747 (2,3,1,2) - 完全に好みですがこんなのどうですか！！　このままでもぜんぜん問題ないと思います
    SPOILER

    344,168,85274,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    191,28,85432,6,0,L|214:124,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    200,260,85747,1,8,3:0:0:0:
    344,168,85905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,260,86063,6,0,P|109:227|106:153,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    344,168,86537,2,0,L|428:177,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
stackとか見た目の綺麗さにこだわって(私にとって)flowが若干悪い場所がいくつかあるように感じます。
上の指摘には書きませんでしたが、ン・・・？って思ったところだけあげておきます。
  1. 01:10:116 (6,7,1) -
  2. 01:20:221 (2,3,4,5,6) -
  3. 01:21:800 (3,4,5,6,1) -
  4. 01:30:958 (4,1,2,3,4) -
[Hard]

Hitsound
  1. 00:19:590 (2) - パターン的にはwhistle
  2. 00:20:063 (4) - ^
  3. 01:16:432 (1) - 後ろの音的には終わりにclap追加のようなきがするけどはたしてどっちのほうがプレイしやすいのどろうか
  4. 01:20:853 (3) - clap
  5. 01:45:484 (2) - 01:42:958 (2) - とか01:48:011 (2) - はclapになってるけど好み
General
  1. 00:23:379 (5) - 音取りちょっと余計かなあってかんじます。00:32:537 (2,3,1) - みたいにボーカルでバシッてとめたほうがカッコいいきがする
  2. 01:47:063 (4) - 後ろの連打が1/3だからちょっと変に聞こえるかなあ・・・　いろいろ音取り検討してみてほしいです。　配置も音取りもこのままにするんであったら、01:47:379 (5) - のtickのclap削除したほうがもうちょっとマトモにきこえる気はする
[Normal]

General
  1. 00:18:642 (3) - 音取りもフローも曲にあっていますが、Normalという難易度として許容できる音取りではないと感じます。修正するかはもちろんmapperの裁量ですが、おそらく今後も同じ指摘が出てくると思うので、一意見として、修正を押したということを覚えておいてもらいたいです。
  2. 00:37:432 (2,3) - ピアノの音をフォローしているのだと思いますが、全体的に1/1のリズムか、vocalに従って配置しているので、ここでピアノの音に従った1/2の配置をするのは低難易度としてオススメしません。
  3. 01:47:063 (4) - 00:18:642 (3)と同じ指摘
[Easy]
awesome diff
Hitsound
  1. 00:52:116 (1) - リバースアローの音外れてます

good luck<3
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

terametis wrote:

request by satellite

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Hard]

Hitsound
  1. 00:19:590 (2) - パターン的にはwhistle
  2. 00:20:063 (4) - ^
  3. 01:16:432 (1) - 後ろの音的には終わりにclap追加のようなきがするけどはたしてどっちのほうがプレイしやすいのどろうか
  4. 01:20:853 (3) - clap
  5. 01:45:484 (2) - 01:42:958 (2) - とか01:48:011 (2) - はclapになってるけど好み
All Fixed

General
  1. 00:23:379 (5) - 音取りちょっと余計かなあってかんじます。00:32:537 (2,3,1) - みたいにボーカルでバシッてとめたほうがカッコいいきがする
    :arrow: たしかに、次指摘頂いたら変えます！
  2. 01:47:063 (4) - 後ろの連打が1/3だからちょっと変に聞こえるかなあ・・・　いろいろ音取り検討してみてほしいです。　配置も音取りもこのままにするんであったら、01:47:379 (5) - のtickのclap削除したほうがもうちょっとマトモにきこえる気はする
    :arrow: 上と同じです！
good luck<3
thanks for modding~~
litoluna
1,074 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
@terametis

terametis wrote:

request by satellite

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Easy]
awesome diff
Hitsound
  1. 00:52:116 (1) - リバースアローの音外れてます
:arrow:付けました!

good luck<3
terametisさんありがとうございました! ;)
Lecana
253 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lecana

terametis wrote:

request by satellite

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Insane]

Hitsound
  1. 00:14:695 (2) - パターン的にリバースアローじゃなくてスライダーの終わりのとこにwhistleです。
:arrow: 了解です｡
General
  1. 00:20:221 (5) - なんかこう、パートの節目の最後のfinishだから、00:19:274 (1) - と00:19:747 (3) - 00:20:221 (5) - のfinishついてる3つ全部飛ばしたいです
    具体的にいうとx256,y316あたりとかどうですか！！！
    :arrow: 了解です｡
  2. 00:36:168 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - ここらへんちょっと綺麗さよりもフローの悪さが目立つような感じがしたので、適当に変えてみたらどうでしょうか。

    順番かえたり。10は6にstackする感じ
    :arrow: おお！ぜひ！
    がっつりかえたり

    188,108,36168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    96,192,36326,6,0,P|132:200|176:200,1,63.7500024318696,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    320,48,36642,2,0,P|288:49|257:57,1,63.7500024318696,0|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    400,220,36958,6,0,P|412:157|400:95,1,127.500004863739,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    304,304,37432,2,0,P|362:327|426:326,1,127.500004863739,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    276,176,37905,1,2,0:1:0:0:
    :arrow: codeまで用意していただいて申し訳ないですが
    順番変えのほうの配置がとても気に入ったのでそちらを使わせていただきました。
  3. 00:39:642 (2) - おそらく00:39:800 (3,4,5,6,7) - がこだわりの配置だとおもうのですが、ならいっそのことこのnote消しちゃったらどうでしょう。引き立つと思います！
    :arrow: 了解です。
  4. 00:47:063 (1,2) - このnoteをクルって感じにしたらクルクルッてかんじになって気持ちよさそう(あいまい)
    SPOILER
    :arrow: 了解です。
  5. 00:52:432 (2,3,4,5) - フロー悪いと思います。
    :arrow: 変更しました。
  6. 01:08:537 (1,2) - 　01:07:747 (2,3)のhitsoundで とどくってvocalを強調しちゃってるので、この音取りだと01:09:011 (2) - これがすっごい浮いて聞こえます。
    :arrow: 変更しました。
  7. 01:25:747 (2,3,1,2) - 完全に好みですがこんなのどうですか！！　このままでもぜんぜん問題ないと思います
    SPOILER

    344,168,85274,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    191,28,85432,6,0,L|214:124,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    200,260,85747,1,8,3:0:0:0:
    344,168,85905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,260,86063,6,0,P|109:227|106:153,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    344,168,86537,2,0,L|428:177,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
:arrow: 提案を元にいろいろ修正させていただきました！
ありがとうございます。

stackとか見た目の綺麗さにこだわって(私にとって)flowが若干悪い場所がいくつかあるように感じます。
上の指摘には書きませんでしたが、ン・・・？って思ったところだけあげておきます。
  1. 01:10:116 (6,7,1) -
    :arrow: keepで..
  2. 01:20:221 (2,3,4,5,6) -
  3. 01:21:800 (3,4,5,6,1) -
    :arrow: 上記2つは全体的に修正しました。
  4. 01:30:958 (4,1,2,3,4) -
    :arrow: keepで..


good luck<3
modありがとうございました！
改善点が多く見つかって
よりよくできたように感じます。
Erisan
375 posts
Joined August 2011
Erisan
神譜面！
支援！

目指せRanked!
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

eLy wrote:

神譜面！
支援！

目指せRanked!
thanks for star support :3
Lecana
253 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lecana

eLy wrote:

神譜面！
支援！

目指せRanked!
thanks~ :D
Sylith
722 posts
Joined September 2012
Sylith
done!

sorry I'm realllllllllllly late ;-;

http://puu.sh/7pAC5.zip http://puu.sh/7q27E.zip

I'll modify some hitsounds on weekends... no time to do it now :( sry
Last edited by Sylith , edited 2 times in total.
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga

terametis wrote:

request by satellite

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Normal]

General
  1. 00:18:642 (3) - 音取りもフローも曲にあっていますが、Normalという難易度として許容できる音取りではないと感じます。修正するかはもちろんmapperの裁量ですが、おそらく今後も同じ指摘が出てくると思うので、一意見として、修正を押したということを覚えておいてもらいたいです。 - やはりリズムを重視させたいので、今後ほかの人に同じことを言われるまでいったんそのままにさせていただきます。
  2. 00:37:432 (2,3) - ピアノの音をフォローしているのだと思いますが、全体的に1/1のリズムか、vocalに従って配置しているので、ここでピアノの音に従った1/2の配置をするのは低難易度としてオススメしません。　- なるほど... もっと単純にremapしました
  3. 01:47:063 (4) - 00:18:642 (3)と同じ指摘

good luck<3
Thanks <3
http://puu.sh/7pDmH.osu
11t
Elite Storyboarder
299 posts
Joined November 2012
11t

[Insane]
Hitsounds: I think they're too loud, especially from 00:21:800 to 01:17:379. The soft-hitnormal really sounds too loud here, compared to the softness of the music. Try reducing hitsound volume by 10% in these sections.
  1. 00:18:642 (4) - Increase hitsound volume by 10% on the slider start. The drum-hitclap isn't very noticeable at the moment.

  2. 00:20:300 (1) - Having just a loud soft-hitnormal on the end of this spinner sounds really weird. A regular soft-hitnormal isn't really a good hitsound to use to close out a section. Either reduce volume to 5% here, or add a Finish. I think this will work better.

  3. 00:41:695 (3) - drum-hitfinish fits the bass here, I think. Also consider drum-hitwhistle for the open hihat.

  4. 00:42:011 - Even though you're using a custom soft-hitwhistle, I think that you should continue to use default soft-hitwhistles in this section to emphasize the vocals, like in the previous sections. I think this would work especially well for the last notes of your triples. Default soft-hitwhistles would sound great on things like 00:50:853 (1) and 00:51:326 (2) and 00:56:853 (6) and 00:57:484 (2) etc.

  5. 01:18:326 (5,1) - This is okay, but there is a really really strong accent at 01:18:484 that a slider end doesn't properly emphasize, I think. How about something like this?

    This skips over 01:18:642 which is fine because there's really nothing going on in the music at that time anyway. I think that this could work extremely well if you exaggerate the spacing between (5) and (6) in the image, and then stack pink (1) on top of manila (6).
    Possible arrangement

  6. 01:22:432 (1,2) - I'm not sure I like this. The gap at 01:22:432 (1,2) feels out-of-place, mostly because the music at 01:23:063 (2) isn't strong enough for the end of a 1/1 gap. How about changing 01:22:432 (1) to 3/4, and adding a 1/2 slider afterwards, like this?

    I think that this arrangement of sliders here fits the strings notes at 01:22:432 and 01:22:747 in the music.

  7. 01:52:905 (1) - Use default soft-hitwhistle for the end of this spinner (your custom normal-hitwhistle).
Overall, this is a fun map! It reminds me a bit of cRyo's maps~
[Sylith's Insane]
Sylithhhhhhhhh hi~
  1. 01:14:537 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - wow ♥

  2. 01:22:432 (1,2,3) - Sort of like with Lecana's Insane, I don't like how the 1/1 gap feels here. See my mod of Insane above (second to last bullet point) for a possible suggestion.

  3. 01:32:221 (1,2) - Consider adding Claps on the starts of these two sliders. Better feedback for the player, I think.

  4. 01:37:432 (3) - drum-hitfinish might fit better here, instead of the custom soft-hitwhistle.

  5. 01:38:063 - I think this would work better if there was a note here. The vocals start here and the gap sort of feels weird because of that.

  6. 01:51:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - You totally knew modders would get angry about this w
    It's sort of... a bit hard to read, isn't it? Why not just space this out as usual?

  7. 01:52:826 (1) - Geez, (:3[_____]
    Silence the spinner end properly! 5% volume, and use a default soft-hitwhistle for it too.
This is a great map. How do you make maps like this, and then have no ranked maps? ;_;
[Gazel's Hard]
omg these greenlines
  1. 00:16:116 (5,6,1) - Wow, you don't see this every day in a Hard. This is risky, but I think it's really amazing here.

  2. 00:42:011 - I love your pause stacks throughout this section. They really help to keep the rhythm interesting.

  3. 00:48:800 (3) - Whistle on slider start. This gives better audio feedback to the player (which is important because of the jump), and it does fit the bass note here.

  4. 01:52:826 (1) - Default soft-hitwhistle works well on the end of this spinner.
I so wish I could make Hards like this ;_;

A lot of Hard difficulties nowadays are just distance-snapped versions of Insanes, but this one doesn't feel like that at all. You use jumps in a way that keep the patterns interesting to play through, but still fit the difficulty. Somehow you've made this map as fun as an Insane, while keeping the overall difficulty of the map appropriate for the Hard level. This is just an amazing map, great job!
[Naryuga's Normal]
  1. 01:16:432 (3) - New combo?

  2. 01:52:905 (1) - Yay you used a whistle. Though maybe you should also decrease the volume here to 5% as well?
No real issues here; this looks like a solid Normal, good job!
[litoluna's Easy]
Tick Rate: Decrease to 1. Right now every slider has like, 3 ticks and it's sort of weird. Plus the slidertick sounds become a bit distracting.
  1. 00:09:168 (1) - Decrease the volume on the spinner end. It's too loud at the moment.

  2. 00:56:221 (1,2) - Maybe fix this blanket? I can't tell if this is on purpose though, since you were so neat with your other blankets before.

  3. 01:51:168 (2,3) - eeeeeeeee
    After all of those neat blankets in this map, this sort of feels... disturbing. Just slightly. It's probably just me though.
No real issues here; this Easy plays fine and without problems, good job!
[Closing]
Nice set! You had a guest mapper for every difficulty so there's a lot of diversity in style here. Every map is well-designed and there aren't any major flaws with anything. Overall they're all playable and fun.
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga

11t wrote:


[Naryuga's Normal]
  1. 01:16:432 (3) - New combo? - ok!
  2. 01:52:905 (1) - Yay you used a whistle. Though maybe you should also decrease the volume here to 5% as well? - nice idea, adjusted volume for this spinner.
No real issues here; this looks like a solid Normal, good job! - >w< I managed to make this diff solid, so I am happy to hear that :) :)

[Closing]
Nice set! You had a guest mapper for every difficulty so there's a lot of diversity in style here. Every map is well-designed and there aren't any major flaws with anything. Overall they're all playable and fun.
Thanks a lot ;)

Update: http://puu.sh/7r8VS.osu
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
今日は～ ゲイマッパー

[General]
* End kiai at 01:37:590.... because the chrous is end here?

[litoluna's Easy]
01:16:432 - I was expecting note here since the next slider was following vocal...

[Naryuga's Normal]
00:50:853 (3) - Remove whistle at tail slider? Finish+clap is loud enough imo
01:51:800 (3) - Because there a snare sound at music itself, add 2 repeating slider and snap the tail slider to blue tick? Like you do at 00:18:642 (3)?

[Gazel's Hard]
* More like Insane diff, but maybe just me....

01:30:958 (5,1,2) - Arrange the pattern like this to make circular flow? Your current one seems uncomfortable due to flow broken, but maybe just me.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1407043
01:32:221 (1) - Why new combo? Just question?
01:48:168 (3) - Remove whistle at repeating slider?

[Sylith's Insane]
00:18:326 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:18:642 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:18:958 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:40:116 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody? It feels useless to me
01:52:826 (1) - Silence this spinner or do cresendo sound (high volume -> low volume) for this spinner? This spinner isn't good if the sound is too loud for ending....

頑張って！
Sylith
722 posts
Joined September 2012
Sylith

11t wrote:


[Sylith's Insane]
Sylithhhhhhhhh hi~ - hey \o/
  1. 01:14:537 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - wow ♥ - <3 one of my favorite pattern in this map!

  2. 01:22:432 (1,2,3) - Sort of like with Lecana's Insane, I don't like how the 1/1 gap feels here. See my mod of Insane above (second to last bullet point) for a possible suggestion. - um I'll consider this during weekdays ;-; too hard to fix and I don't have enough time to do it now

  3. 01:32:221 (1,2) - Consider adding Claps on the starts of these two sliders. Better feedback for the player, I think. - <3

  4. 01:37:432 (3) - drum-hitfinish might fit better here, instead of the custom soft-hitwhistle. - great!

  5. 01:38:063 - I think this would work better if there was a note here. The vocals start here and the gap sort of feels weird because of that. - Done!

  6. 01:51:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - You totally knew modders would get angry about this w
    It's sort of... a bit hard to read, isn't it? Why not just space this out as usual? wanna kill 'em all duhuhuhuhu ヾ(´∀`*)ノ ;-; I tried to make suitable pattern on here, but I failed ><; looking for better suggestion for here


  7. 01:52:826 (1) - Geez, (:3[_____]
    Silence the spinner end properly! 5% volume, and use a default soft-hitwhistle for it too. - lazy (:3[_____] sorry lol
This is a great map. How do you make maps like this, and then have no ranked maps? ;_; - ;_; I am a troll mapper(super lazy yay)

[Closing]
Nice set! You had a guest mapper for every difficulty so there's a lot of diversity in style here. Every map is well-designed and there aren't any major flaws with anything. Overall they're all playable and fun.
thanks for your mod! :>


Leorda wrote:

今日は～ ゲイマッパー

[Sylith's Insane]
00:18:326 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:18:642 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:18:958 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:40:116 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody? It feels useless to me - very nice! done :>
01:52:826 (1) - Silence this spinner or do cresendo sound (high volume -> low volume) for this spinner? This spinner isn't good if the sound is too loud for ending.... - Dx fixed

頑張って！
thanks for your mod! : ' )

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Marie.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76271
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.399998

[Metadata]
Title:Clover Day's
TitleUnicode:Clover Day's
Artist:Marie
ArtistUnicode:真理絵
Creator:Lecana
Version:Sylith's Insane
Source:Clover Days
Tags:Sylith Satellite Naryuga Dagger-Gazel litoluna sKZy eroge ALcot 10th Anniversary visual novel
BeatmapID:371178
BeatmapSetID:150422

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,62421,66516
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1590,315.789473684211,4,2,1,60,1,0
13590,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
13747,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
20695,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
21011,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
21326,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
21800,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
22116,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
29300,-125,4,2,0,60,0,0
29379,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
39405,-125,4,2,0,60,0,0
39484,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
42011,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
43274,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
43432,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
45800,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
45958,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
47063,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
47379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
50221,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
50379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
51168,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
51326,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
51800,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
51958,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
53221,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
53379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
55905,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
56063,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
58274,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
58432,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
58747,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
58905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
67116,-125,4,2,1,20,0,0
67274,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
69800,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
73432,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
73590,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
74774,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
74853,-125,4,2,0,60,0,0
74932,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
76432,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
77063,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
77379,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
78011,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
78168,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
80221,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,50,0,1
80379,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
80537,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
80695,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
82747,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
82905,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
84642,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
84800,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
87168,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
87326,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
88590,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
88747,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
89379,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
89537,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
90642,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
90800,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
97590,-125,4,2,0,50,0,0
99484,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107168,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
107274,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
107379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
107484,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
107590,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
107695,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
109747,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
109826,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
109905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
113379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
114168,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
115274,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
115905,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
116537,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
117168,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
117958,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 208,255,255
Combo2 : 206,255,206
Combo3 : 255,255,210
Combo4 : 252,203,210

[HitObjects]
256,192,9168,12,0,11221,0:0:0:0:
460,144,11379,6,0,P|464:129|471:116,5,30
460,228,11695,6,0,B|416:216|416:216|332:212,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,12011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
260,192,12168,2,0,P|256:140|252:92,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,12484,1,0,3:0:0:0:
100,32,12642,2,0,P|112:112|108:216,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
56,368,13116,5,8,0:3:0:0:
16,208,13274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,272,13432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,272,13511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,13590,2,0,P|240:268|304:248,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,124,13905,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,13984,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,14063,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,14142,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,14221,6,0,L|408:232,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,14537,1,0,3:0:0:0:
496,332,14695,2,0,P|456:324|400:292,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,124,15011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
508,164,15168,2,0,P|440:216|340:184,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,15642,5,2,0:0:0:0:
280,92,15800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,196,15958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,180,16116,1,8,3:2:0:0:
164,199,16195,1,0,3:0:0:0:
145,218,16274,1,2,3:0:0:0:
127,238,16353,1,0,3:0:0:0:
107,257,16432,2,0,L|74:131,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,340,16747,6,0,L|224:356,1,180,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
344,236,17221,6,0,L|252:244,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,344,17537,1,0,3:0:0:0:
436,284,17695,2,0,P|440:180|494:93,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,18247,5,0,3:0:0:0:
256,136,18326,2,0,L|309:155,2,56.6666666666667,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
368,76,18642,2,0,L|358:20,2,56.6666666666667,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
256,8,18958,2,0,L|199:54,2,56.6666666666667,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
148,132,19274,6,0,P|136:192|148:292,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,19590,1,0,3:0:0:0:
296,344,19747,2,0,P|304:296|300:248,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,368,20063,1,0,3:0:0:0:
384,368,20221,2,0,P|384:268|368:176,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,189,20695,5,8,0:3:0:0:
232,284,21011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,88,21326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,88,21484,2,0,B|184:68|136:104|36:72,1,180,8|4,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,88,22116,6,0,P|62:127|60:184,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,228,22432,2,0,P|160:192|163:156,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,22747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,304,22905,2,0,P|136:316|194:317,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,228,23221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,324,23379,2,0,P|292:320|235:249,2,144,2|2|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,240,24168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
460,240,24326,2,0,P|444:308|460:384,2,144,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,140,25116,2,0,P|420:148|388:168,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,25432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,172,25590,6,0,L|316:192,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,55,25905,2,0,L|280:75,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,104,26221,2,0,P|120:172|164:256,2,144,2|0|4,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,320,27168,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,320,27326,2,0,B|144:332|180:320|180:320|220:308|256:328,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,316,27800,2,0,P|376:268|380:232,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,136,28116,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,232,28274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,228,28432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,84,28590,6,0,P|349:124|360:176,1,72,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
260,16,28905,2,0,L|236:100,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,240,29221,5,2,0:0:0:0:
148,240,29300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,240,29379,2,0,P|120:164|148:92,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,164,29853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,305,30011,2,0,L|244:397,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,260,30326,2,0,L|335:188,1,72
488,276,30642,6,0,P|448:256|427:237,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,120,30958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,48,31116,2,0,P|508:120|484:204,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,120,31590,2,0,L|292:112,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,236,31905,6,0,P|276:240|336:200,2,144,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,161,32695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,256,32853,2,0,L|92:344,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,216,33168,6,0,P|42:171|129:163,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,244,33642,2,0,L|171:234,1,72,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
336,168,33958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,332,34116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,244,34274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,244,34432,6,0,P|440:160|416:104,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,44,34905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,35063,2,0,P|244:108|252:164,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,35379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,112,35537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,35695,5,6,0:0:0:0:
340,180,36011,2,0,L|344:268,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,340,36326,2,0,L|456:252,1,72,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,100,36642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
511,171,36800,6,0,P|471:175|431:170,1,72,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,88,37116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,37274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,176,37432,2,0,P|236:244|228:352,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,376,37905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,196,38063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,284,38221,6,0,P|92:300|168:268,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,38695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,176,38853,2,0,P|275:227|280:298,1,144,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,236,39326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,236,39405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,236,39484,6,0,L|381:249,1,72,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,348,39800,2,0,L|438:334,1,72
488,136,40116,2,0,L|312:168,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,310,40590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,310,40668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,310,40747,6,0,P|205:234|233:170,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,244,41221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,316,41379,2,0,P|184:312|124:316,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,216,41695,2,0,P|64:228|119:222,1,108,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,223,42011,6,0,L|122:123,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,36,42326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,128,42484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,156,42642,2,0,P|252:156|300:148,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,68,42958,5,2,0:0:0:0:
376,216,43116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,64,43274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,164,43432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,304,43590,2,0,P|332:300|276:228,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
120,320,44063,2,0,P|164:316|220:324,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,380,44379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,232,44537,6,0,P|184:184|188:136,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,64,44853,2,0,P|348:112|344:160,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,248,45168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,45326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,156,45484,2,0,P|421:201|388:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,253,45800,6,0,P|245:242|305:252,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,336,46116,2,8,P|404:347|343:336,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,254,46432,2,0,P|196:295|185:363,1,90,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,222,46747,2,0,P|104:125|93:14,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,328,47379,5,0,0:0:0:0:
63,328,47537,2,0,P|156:316|215:238,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,352,48011,2,0,P|316:348|272:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,256,48326,5,8,0:0:0:0:
488,209,48484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,356,48642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,256,48800,2,0,L|354:158,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
465,148,49116,2,0,L|459:59,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,52,49432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,52,49511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,52,49590,6,0,P|240:100|132:80,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,31,50063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,149,50221,2,0,L|58:239,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,369,50537,2,0,L|164:280,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,168,50853,5,8,0:0:0:0:
164,281,51011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
334,257,51168,1,12,0:0:0:0:
255,328,51326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,188,51484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,328,51642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
278,168,51800,2,0,L|290:55,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,30,52116,6,0,P|405:126|406:214,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,328,52590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,380,52747,2,0,P|344:304|352:268,1,90
405,208,53063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,248,53221,6,0,L|140:232,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,360,53537,2,0,L|176:344,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,180,53853,2,0,P|76:232|84:284,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,32,54326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,192,54484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,104,54642,6,0,B|94:84|134:104|134:104|178:124|222:104,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,55116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,48,55274,2,0,P|340:112|336:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,232,55590,2,0,P|435:196|450:154,1,90
492,312,55905,2,0,P|400:340|300:292,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,56379,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,112,56537,2,0,P|300:160|292:240,1,90,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,56853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
228,320,56932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,57011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
228,320,57090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,57168,6,0,P|176:328|124:316,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,224,57484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,132,57642,2,0,P|72:112|0:172,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,58116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,58274,6,0,L|256:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,58590,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,24,58747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,172,58905,2,0,P|396:184|460:176,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
461,329,59221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,268,59379,2,0,P|304:264|228:284,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,336,59695,6,0,P|232:264|228:148,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,292,60168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,292,60326,2,8,P|60:340|72:400,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,60642,2,0,P|152:160|140:100,1,90,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
146,119,60879,1,0,3:0:0:0:
146,119,60958,5,4,3:0:0:0:
56,168,61116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,60,61274,2,0,L|272:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
266,148,61511,1,0,3:0:0:0:
266,148,61590,5,8,0:3:0:0:
324,264,61747,1,8,0:3:0:0:
504,188,61905,2,0,L|356:168,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,166,62221,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,264,67116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,264,67195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,264,67274,2,0,P|148:248|216:264,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,260,67747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,164,67905,2,0,P|144:120|152:72,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,52,68221,2,0,P|264:96|256:144,1,72
280,160,68458,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,68537,2,0,L|356:152,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,256,68853,2,0,L|308:271,2,144,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,69642,5,0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,69721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,69800,2,0,P|456:160|420:164,1,72,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,70116,2,0,P|315:109|349:96,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,20,70432,2,0,P|452:108|432:188,1,144,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,71063,6,0,P|268:220|352:276,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,336,71537,2,0,L|444:252,1,72,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,179,71853,2,0,L|335:250,1,72
249,323,72168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
237,336,72247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,350,72326,2,0,L|128:327,1,72,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,360,72642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,72800,2,0,L|188:144,1,72,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,72,73116,2,0,L|92:143,1,72
104,252,73432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,152,73590,6,0,P|251:154|328:132,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,134,74063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,52,74221,2,0,P|334:40|295:40,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,224,74537,2,0,P|404:196|422:159,1,72
425,153,74774,5,2,0:0:0:0:
425,153,74853,2,0,L|414:311,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,296,75326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,236,75484,2,0,L|273:142,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,76,75800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
171,271,75958,1,12,0:0:0:0:
171,271,76432,6,0,L|267:247,1,90
258,250,76668,1,0,3:0:0:0:
258,250,76747,1,8,3:0:0:0:
460,284,76905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,352,77063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,315,77142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,273,77221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,233,77300,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,203,77379,6,0,P|400:140|392:72,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,77695,2,0,P|246:156|198:168,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,59,78011,2,0,P|111:70|160:74,1,99.0000030212403,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,78326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,160,78484,6,0,P|92:248|116:352,1,198.000006042481,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,312,78958,2,0,P|300:260|288:200,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,79274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,256,79432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,352,79590,2,0,P|460:312|520:200,1,198.000006042481,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,66,80063,6,0,P|407:122|415:190,1,99.0000030212403,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
512,240,80379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,80537,2,0,P|252:184|196:144,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,128,80853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,28,81011,6,0,P|180:136|152:252,1,198.000006042481,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,304,81484,2,0,P|68:300|124:312,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,356,81800,2,0,P|240:336|208:288,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,82116,2,0,L|296:280,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,384,82432,6,0,L|437:186,1,198.000006042481,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,82905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,44,83221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,83379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,156,83537,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,83695,6,0,P|204:40|140:48,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,216,84011,2,0,P|148:212|200:116,1,198.000006042481,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,116,84484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,304,84642,2,0,P|136:300|200:268,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,348,84958,6,0,P|320:296|328:236,1,99.0000030212403,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,85274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,352,85432,2,0,P|444:236|428:144,1,198.000006042481,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,85905,1,8,0:3:0:0:
142,105,86063,6,0,P|206:165|310:146,1,198.000006042481,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,60,86537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,86695,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,256,86774,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,256,86853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
496,144,87011,2,0,L|376:132,1,99.0000030212403,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,87326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,352,87484,6,0,P|456:308|444:236,1,99.0000030212403,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,87800,2,0,P|304:128|316:200,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,344,88116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,168,88274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,256,88432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,256,88590,6,0,P|88:224|36:112,1,198.000006042481,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,136,89063,2,2,P|152:88|160:28,1,99.0000030212403
256,196,89379,2,0,P|280:152|344:120,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,89695,2,0,B|336:284|384:328|448:292,1,148.50000453186,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,296,90011,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,212,90168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,80,90326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
510,171,90484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,212,90642,2,0,L|238:194,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,88,90958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,144,91116,6,0,P|116:184|156:300,1,198.000006042481,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,368,91590,2,0,L|36:248,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,348,91905,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,91984,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,92063,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,92142,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,92221,6,0,L|204:284,1,49.5000015106202,8|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
264,200,92379,2,0,L|278:247,1,49.5000015106202,8|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
292,344,92537,6,0,P|342:336|396:312,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,252,92853,2,0,P|493:295|488:364,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,196,93168,2,0,P|383:146|372:98,1,99.0000030212403,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,36,93484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,200,93642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,136,93800,6,0,P|128:140|188:124,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,323,94116,2,0,P|191:279|147:235,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,112,94432,2,0,P|280:151|264:211,1,99.0000030212403,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,316,94747,2,0,P|395:276|411:216,1,99.0000030212403,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,116,95063,6,0,B|136:152|112:84|22:115,2,198.000006042481,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,95853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,296,96011,2,0,P|64:248|72:197,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,96326,6,0,P|280:352|360:268,2,198.000006042481,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,168,97116,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,296,97274,1,8,0:3:0:0:
180,252,97432,1,4,0:3:0:0:
200,128,97590,6,0,P|268:112|348:160,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,308,98063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,308,98221,2,0,P|376:324|296:276,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,220,98695,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,220,98853,2,0,P|168:236|124:308,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,376,99326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,288,99484,2,0,L|8:168,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,200,99800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,108,100116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
260,313,100432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,192,100747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,80,101063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,24,101221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,80,101379,6,0,P|315:160|332:280,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,344,101853,1,0,0:3:0:0:
492,344,101932,1,0,0:3:0:0:
492,344,102011,2,0,P|440:324|384:320,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,312,102326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,380,102484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,228,102642,6,0,P|216:180|212:120,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,60,102958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,176,103116,2,0,P|64:172|120:148,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,103432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,88,103590,2,0,P|292:180|304:284,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,266,104063,5,2,0:0:0:0:
488,220,104221,2,0,P|440:212|388:212,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,352,104537,1,2,3:2:0:0:
290,365,104616,1,0,3:2:0:0:
334,360,104695,1,2,3:2:0:0:
371,335,104774,1,0,3:2:0:0:
394,297,104853,1,4,3:2:0:0:
204,252,105011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,252,105168,6,0,L|92:232,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,292,105484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,152,105642,2,0,L|316:132,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,200,105958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,64,106116,6,0,P|100:144|136:272,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,236,106590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,263,106747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,352,106905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,183,107063,2,0,L|238:107,2,60,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,324,107379,2,0,L|218:381,2,60,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,236,107695,5,4,0:0:0:0:
284,263,107853,2,0,P|337:262|401:239,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,324,108168,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,168,108326,2,0,P|372:128|396:64,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,108642,2,0,B|144:76|96:112|29:88,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,256,109116,6,0,P|176:208|168:156,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,208,109432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,360,109590,2,0,P|212:348|252:308,1,90,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,168,109905,2,0,P|332:224|336:264,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,360,110221,6,0,P|443:270|437:180,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,48,110695,2,0,P|227:100|210:197,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,111168,2,0,P|292:288|248:260,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,292,111484,5,8,0:0:0:0:
92,292,111590,1,0,3:0:0:0:
92,292,111695,1,2,3:0:0:0:
92,292,111800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,292,111905,1,0,3:0:0:0:
92,292,112011,1,2,3:0:0:0:
92,292,112116,6,0,L|112:216,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,149,112432,2,0,L|207:207,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,315,112747,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112826,12,2,117958,0:0:0:0:

@lecana : plz add sylith on tag plz ><
iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
れかなさん、guestのみなさんこんにちは～！mod requestありがとうございます :D

[litoluna's Easy]
■ 00:31:274 - 手前の赤線でピアノが鳴っているので、ここはwhistleからclapにしてRightから聴こえるスネアのリムショットに合わせたほうがいいと思います。
パターンも統一できるかと！

■ 00:56:221 (1) - ここもちょっとしたブランケットを作ってみてはいかがでしょうか？
img & code
300,140,56221,6,0,P|299:99|276:66,2,80,0|8|2,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
■ 01:11:063 - ピアノ音強いのでsoftのwhistleが欲しいです！
良いリズム！良いデザイン！

[Naryuga's Normal]
■ 00:21:800 - slider中間のジーっていう音が気になるので、S → S:C3にしてみてはいかがでしょう？
■ 00:39:484 - ^
■ 01:52:905 (1) - BGMに合わせてVolumeをデクレッシェンドしてみませんか？Easy , Hard , Insaneを参考に！
素晴らしいhit sound =ω=

[Gazel's Hard]
■ 00:09:168 - ここの S を S:3に変えて、00:09:958 (3) - と00:10:274 (4) - のsliderのジーっていう音を消してみてはいかがでしょう？
■ 00:18:011 - クラッシュっぽい音に合わせてadd finish ?
■ 00:43:905 - add whistle ? 00:23:695 - ここと合わせる感じです。Drum sample set + whistleとかで表情を変えてあげてもいいかもしれませんね :)
■ 00:54:011 - ここもS:3 whistle (Vol50%くらい) 追加 ？
難しいけど表現豊かで楽しい新感覚Hard :D

[Insane]
■ 01:08:853 - Normal sample set をAutoに変えて、additionのほうをNormalにチェンジ？おそらくミスだと思われます！
■ 01:38:537 (3) - ピアノに合わせて addition Normal + whistle を追加？
■ 01:39:168 - ^
■ 01:51:642 (1) - ^
■ 01:39:642 - add whistle ?
良いアレンジ!!

[Sylith's Insane]
■ 01:39:484 - remove whistle
■ 01:39:642 - add whistle
■ 01:39:800 (4) - add clap
■ 01:41:063 (4) - whistle →　clap ?
■ 01:41:221 (5) - add Drum sample set + finish ?
■ 01:48:958 - add clap
■ 01:49:590 - ^
■ 01:50:537 - ^
■ 01:51:011 - add whistle
nice work Sylith ! o3o

以上です。全diff通してプレイしてみて目立ってなぞりにくかったり叩きにくかったりといった箇所がなかったので配置にはあまり触れませんでした！
これいい曲ですね、これからの季節にぴったりだと思います！桜が咲く頃くらいにrankedできるといいですね、応援しています！good luck ₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

11t wrote:



[Gazel's Hard]
omg these greenlines
  1. 00:16:116 (5,6,1) - Wow, you don't see this every day in a Hard. This is risky, but I think it's really amazing here.

  2. 00:42:011 - I love your pause stacks throughout this section. They really help to keep the rhythm interesting.

  3. 00:48:800 (3) - Whistle on slider start. This gives better audio feedback to the player (which is important because of the jump), and it does fit the bass note here. Nice idea fixed

  4. 01:52:826 (1) - Default soft-hitwhistle works well on the end of this spinner.
I so wish I could make Hards like this ;_; OK add~

A lot of Hard difficulties nowadays are just distance-snapped versions of Insanes, but this one doesn't feel like that at all. You use jumps in a way that keep the patterns interesting to play through, but still fit the difficulty. Somehow you've made this map as fun as an Insane, while keeping the overall difficulty of the map appropriate for the Hard level. This is just an amazing map, great job!

[Closing]
Nice set! You had a guest mapper for every difficulty so there's a lot of diversity in style here. Every map is well-designed and there aren't any major flaws with anything. Overall they're all playable and fun.

Leorda wrote:

今日は～ ゲイマッパー

[General]
* End kiai at 01:37:590.... because the chrous is end here?

[Gazel's Hard]
* More like Insane diff, but maybe just me....

01:30:958 (5,1,2) - Arrange the pattern like this to make circular flow? Your current one seems uncomfortable due to flow broken, but maybe just me.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1407043
01:32:221 (1) - Why new combo? Just question? For recovery :P
01:48:168 (3) - Remove whistle at repeating slider?

頑張って！

iyasine wrote:

れかなさん、guestのみなさんこんにちは～！mod requestありがとうございます :D

[Gazel's Hard]
■ 00:09:168 - ここの S を S:3に変えて、00:09:958 (3) - と00:10:274 (4) - のsliderのジーっていう音を消してみてはいかがでしょう？
■ 00:18:011 - クラッシュっぽい音に合わせてadd finish ?
■ 00:43:905 - add whistle ? 00:23:695 - ここと合わせる感じです。Drum sample set + whistleとかで表情を変えてあげてもいいかもしれませんね :)
■ 00:54:011 - ここもS:3 whistle (Vol50%くらい) 追加 ？
難しいけど表現豊かで楽しい新感覚Hard :D
All fixed

以上です。全diff通してプレイしてみて目立ってなぞりにくかったり叩きにくかったりといった箇所がなかったので配置にはあまり触れませんでした！
これいい曲ですね、これからの季節にぴったりだと思います！桜が咲く頃くらいにrankedできるといいですね、応援しています！good luck ₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾
thanks for modding ! really helpful <3

code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Marie.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76271
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 8850,62376,67113
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Clover Day's
TitleUnicode:Clover Day's
Artist:Marie
ArtistUnicode:真理絵
Creator:Lecana
Version:Gazel's Hard
Source:Clover Days
Tags:Sylith Satellite Naryuga Dagger-Gazel litoluna sKZy eroge ALcot 10th Anniversary visual novel
BeatmapID:371175
BeatmapSetID:150422

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,62421,66524
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1590,315.789473684211,4,2,1,60,1,0
9168,-133.333333333333,4,2,3,50,0,0
10353,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
10748,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
11379,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,40,0,0
11458,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
11537,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
11616,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
11695,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
13116,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
14221,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
15642,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
16432,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
16748,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
18642,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
18958,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
19274,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
20537,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
21484,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
21800,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,40,0,0
22116,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
22432,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
22905,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
23695,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
24642,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
25274,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
25432,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
25590,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
25748,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
26853,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
27800,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
29221,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
29379,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
30958,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
31590,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
31905,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
32537,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
33011,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
34274,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
34432,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
35379,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
35537,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
36011,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
36169,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
36642,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
36800,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
37274,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
37905,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
38063,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
38221,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
38695,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
39327,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
39484,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
40116,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
40748,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
41379,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
41695,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,10,0,0
42011,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
42484,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
42642,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
43905,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
44221,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
44379,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
44537,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
44853,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
45011,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
45169,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
45642,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
45800,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
46432,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
46590,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
46748,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
46905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
47063,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
47379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
47537,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
47853,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
48011,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
48327,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
48642,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
49432,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
49590,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
49905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
50063,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
50221,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
50853,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
51011,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
51169,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
51484,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
51642,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
51800,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
51958,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
52116,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
52748,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
52905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
53537,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
53695,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
54011,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
54168,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
54484,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
54642,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
54800,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
55116,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
55274,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
56221,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
56379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
56853,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
57011,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
57169,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
57484,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
57642,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
57958,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
58274,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
58432,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
58905,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
59063,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
59379,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
59537,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
59695,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
60169,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
60327,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
60484,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
60642,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
60800,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
60958,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
61274,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
61432,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
61590,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61748,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
61905,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
62221,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
67274,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
67905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
68063,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
68537,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
68695,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
69169,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
69484,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
69642,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
69800,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
70274,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
71063,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
71221,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
71537,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
71695,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
72327,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
72642,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
73432,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
73590,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
73905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
74853,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
75169,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
75800,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
75958,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
76432,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
76590,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
76668,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
76748,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
76905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
77063,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
77379,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
77537,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
78011,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
78169,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
78327,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
78484,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
78958,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
79905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
80063,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
80537,-100,4,2,0,80,0,1
80853,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
81800,-100,4,2,0,80,0,1
81958,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
82432,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
82590,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
83063,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
83221,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
83695,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
83853,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
84326,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
84484,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
85274,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
85432,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
85747,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
85905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
86063,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
86537,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
86853,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
87011,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
87168,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
87326,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
87484,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
87642,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
88116,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
88274,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
88432,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
88590,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
88747,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
88905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
89063,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
89379,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
89537,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
90011,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
90326,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
90484,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
90642,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
90958,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
91116,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
91274,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
91432,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91590,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
91905,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
92063,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
92221,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
92300,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
92379,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
92458,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
92537,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
92695,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
92853,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
93011,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
93168,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
93326,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
93484,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
93642,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
93800,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
93958,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
94116,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
94274,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
94432,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
94590,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
94747,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
95379,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
96326,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
96484,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
96800,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
96958,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
97116,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
97274,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
97590,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
98221,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,1
98241,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
98853,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,1
98872,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
99484,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,1
99642,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
99800,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,1
100116,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
101063,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
101221,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
102326,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
102642,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
102958,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
103116,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
103432,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
103590,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
103905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
104063,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
104379,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
104537,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
104616,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
104695,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
104774,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
104853,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
104932,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
105011,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
105090,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
105168,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
105326,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
105642,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
105800,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
105958,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
106116,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
106590,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
106747,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
106905,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
107063,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
107221,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
107379,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
107537,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
107616,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
107695,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
107853,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
108168,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
108326,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
108484,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
108642,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
108958,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
109116,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
109274,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
109590,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
109747,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
109905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
110221,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
110379,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
110537,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
110695,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
110853,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
111168,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
111326,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
111642,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
111800,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
111958,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
112116,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
112274,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
112432,-200,4,2,1,70,0,0
112747,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
114011,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
114326,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
114642,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
114958,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
115274,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
115590,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 208,255,255
Combo2 : 206,255,206
Combo3 : 255,255,210
Combo4 : 252,203,210

[HitObjects]
36,148,9168,5,2,0:0:0:0:
36,148,9800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,216,9958,2,0,L|144:212,1,48.750001859665,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,172,10274,2,0,B|256:244|200:244|224:316,1,146.250005578995,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,368,11379,2,0,L|328:360,3,24.3750009298325
360,372,11695,6,0,L|368:240,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,208,12168,2,0,L|444:337,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,312,12642,2,0,L|292:180,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,116,13116,2,0,L|224:48,2,65,0|2|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
144,148,13590,2,0,L|140:80,1,65,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,116,13905,2,0,L|59:180,1,65,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,240,14221,6,0,P|168:256|208:360,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,332,14695,2,0,P|325:273|380:240,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,120,15168,2,0,B|448:120|428:108|428:108|400:116|400:116|376:108|352:108,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,15642,2,0,L|284:228,2,65,0|8|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
272,68,16116,2,0,P|232:80|196:120,1,97.5,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,164,16432,2,0,L|192:268,1,97.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,296,16747,6,4,L|352:276,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,348,17221,2,0,L|280:368,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,212,17695,2,0,L|384:192,1,130,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
436,116,18168,2,0,P|444:88|444:52,2,65,0|8|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
352,76,18642,2,0,B|328:88|328:88|304:76|304:76|272:88|232:64,1,130,10|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,200,19274,6,0,P|112:236|112:264,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,344,19590,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,308,19747,2,0,P|196:275|204:244,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,180,20063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,264,20221,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,264,20537,5,2,3:0:0:0:
432,200,20695,1,0,3:0:0:0:
372,28,21011,1,8,3:0:0:0:
372,28,21326,1,0,3:0:0:0:
308,92,21484,2,0,B|264:96|264:96|224:80|224:80|180:84,1,130,8|4,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,192,22116,6,0,L|36:244,2,48.750001859665,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,336,22747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,276,22905,2,0,L|200:228,1,48.750001859665,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,176,23221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,192,23379,2,0,L|356:244,2,48.750001859665,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,336,24326,6,0,P|312:328|272:284,1,97.50000371933,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,108,24958,2,0,P|256:136|248:164,1,48.750001859665,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,212,25274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,156,25432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,212,25590,6,0,P|48:260|64:308,3,97.50000371933,2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,364,26695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,26853,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,316,27800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,364,27958,2,0,P|344:336|300:236,1,146.250005578995,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,236,29221,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,316,29379,2,0,P|284:327|383:281,1,146.250005578995,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,196,30011,2,0,P|327:152|257:163,1,146.250005578995,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,236,30642,5,2,0:0:0:0:
210,236,30958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,284,31116,2,0,P|124:256|168:156,1,146.250005578995,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,31905,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,316,32537,2,0,L|308:304,2,48.750001859665,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,236,33011,2,0,L|308:212,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,33484,5,2,0:0:0:0:
392,192,34274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,128,34432,2,0,L|237:151,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,324,35063,2,0,L|302:300,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,256,35695,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,348,36011,2,0,P|396:304|384:252,1,97.50000371933,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,168,36642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,188,36800,2,0,P|364:184|404:104,1,146.250005578995,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,64,37905,2,0,L|60:116,1,48.750001859665,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,192,38221,6,0,L|59:225,1,48.750001859665,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,304,38537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,284,38695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,284,39326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,260,39484,6,0,P|304:260|340:292,1,97.50000371933,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,158,40116,2,0,P|173:199|127:214,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,158,40747,2,0,P|290:116|300:69,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,48,41379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
476,48,41537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,120,41695,2,0,L|432:176,1,48.750001859665,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,272,42011,5,4,0:0:0:0:
288,352,42326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,264,42484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,288,42642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,288,42958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,328,43116,2,0,P|184:296|176:264,2,65
84,296,43590,2,0,P|80:248|132:180,1,130,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,212,44221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,288,44379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,232,44537,6,0,P|420:200|420:168,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,88,44853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,45011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,132,45484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,84,45642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,36,45800,6,0,P|176:68|176:100,1,65
88,116,46116,2,0,P|102:147|124:169,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,244,46432,2,0,P|104:256|136:256,1,65,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,344,46747,2,0,P|187:329|209:307,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,216,47063,5,4,0:0:0:0:
220,216,47379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,352,47537,2,0,L|424:344,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,260,48011,2,0,L|388:264,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,196,48326,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,196,48642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,124,48800,2,0,L|327:117,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,160,49274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,56,49432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,56,49590,6,0,L|164:120,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,148,49905,2,0,L|115:198,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,280,50221,2,0,L|204:288,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,352,50853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,284,51011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,248,51168,2,0,L|448:184,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,88,51484,2,0,L|364:152,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,51800,1,4,0:0:0:0:
292,208,51958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,172,52116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,172,52590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,228,52747,2,0,L|92:292,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,360,53063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,316,53221,2,0,B|284:320|284:320|316:312|316:312|364:316,1,130
436,260,53695,2,0,B|440:212|440:212|432:180|432:180|436:132,2,130,0|2|2,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,54484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,112,54642,6,0,L|271:47,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,196,54958,2,0,L|236:264,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,332,55274,2,0,B|128:328|128:328|96:336|96:336|48:332,2,130,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,368,56221,2,0,P|360:336|356:304,1,65
272,203,56537,2,0,P|268:235|272:268,1,65,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,168,56853,2,0,P|360:136|356:104,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,40,57168,6,0,B|240:44|240:44|208:36|208:36|160:40,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,52,57642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,52,58116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,128,58274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,164,58432,6,0,L|88:228,1,65
272,156,58747,2,0,L|264:92,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,256,59063,2,0,B|252:260|252:260|284:252|284:252|332:256,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,308,59537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,172,59695,6,0,L|340:168,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,148,60011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,100,60168,2,0,L|272:36,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,120,60484,2,0,L|108:184,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,276,60800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,348,60958,6,0,B|184:324|188:296|188:296|220:304|256:296,1,130,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,248,61432,2,0,L|364:264,2,32.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
252,204,61747,1,8,3:0:0:0:
380,160,61905,1,4,3:0:0:0:
380,160,62221,5,6,0:0:0:0:
380,160,67274,6,0,P|312:160|256:132,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,60,67747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,67905,2,0,P|120:144|120:176,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,264,68221,2,0,P|107:263|76:256,1,65
220,220,68537,6,0,P|228:252|228:284,1,65
308,328,68853,2,0,P|308:295|316:264,1,65
364,188,69168,2,0,P|332:188|256:132,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,69642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,100,69800,6,0,P|116:164|124:228,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,314,70432,2,0,P|371:252|364:188,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,70905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,152,71063,6,0,P|216:120|220:88,2,65,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,71537,2,0,P|296:240|292:272,2,65,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,244,72011,1,2,0:1:0:0:
208,244,72168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,372,72326,6,0,L|388:356,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,228,72800,2,0,L|448:292,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,268,73116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,73274,2,0,L|280:144,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,73590,6,0,L|124:72,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,232,74221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,144,74537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,372,74853,6,0,L|388:356,2,130,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,328,75642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,280,75800,2,0,P|312:248|312:216,1,65,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,260,76432,6,0,P|92:260|136:244,1,97.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,212,76747,2,0,L|176:148,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,88,77063,1,4,0:0:0:0:
372,20,77379,6,0,L|380:156,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,232,77853,2,0,P|456:232|488:228,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,78168,2,0,P|264:184|232:188,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,78484,6,0,L|340:260,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,360,78800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,296,78958,2,0,L|256:232,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,180,79274,2,0,L|84:244,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,272,79590,2,0,L|172:208,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,116,79905,6,0,B|204:116|240:88|240:88|276:104,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,144,80379,2,0,L|424:132,2,65,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,144,80853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,236,81011,6,0,L|332:224,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,272,81484,2,0,L|260:264,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,351,81800,2,0,L|288:340,1,130,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,364,82432,5,4,0:0:0:0:
64,364,82747,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,268,83063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,208,83221,2,0,L|87:213,2,65,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,133,83695,6,0,L|104:128,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,84011,2,0,L|296:178,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,52,84326,1,4,0:0:0:0:
436,48,84642,2,0,B|424:84|436:112|436:112|432:148,1,97.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,84958,6,0,L|404:240,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,296,85274,1,4,3:0:0:0:
284,224,85432,2,0,L|280:160,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,85747,1,2,3:0:0:0:
112,64,85905,1,4,3:0:0:0:
160,140,86063,6,0,L|164:204,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,84,86379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,160,86537,2,0,L|284:224,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,328,86853,2,0,L|380:296,3,32.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,248,87168,2,0,L|444:216,3,32.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,144,87484,6,0,B|440:144|404:116|404:116|364:132,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,70,87958,2,0,L|358:46,2,65,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,88432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,24,88590,6,0,L|172:156,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,304,89063,2,0,L|96:212,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,240,89379,2,0,L|168:228,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,318,89853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,90011,5,4,0:0:0:0:
280,160,90326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,252,90484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,200,90642,2,0,L|460:136,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,59,90958,1,8,0:0:0:0:
375,98,91116,6,0,L|368:228,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,352,91590,2,0,L|245:282,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,144,91905,2,0,L|232:152,1,97.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,124,92221,6,0,L|248:92,3,32.5,12|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,92537,6,0,L|320:52,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,92853,2,0,L|308:200,2,130,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,93800,2,0,L|192:332,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,94116,2,0,L|204:184,2,130,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,95063,6,0,L|260:112,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,80,95379,2,0,L|348:144,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,108,95695,2,0,L|436:172,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,264,96011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,272,96326,6,0,P|388:272|316:240,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,96800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,241,96958,2,0,P|136:269|72:272,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,75,97590,6,0,P|264:124|256:172,1,97.50000371933,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,168,98221,2,0,P|126:140|172:124,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,271,98853,2,0,P|209:251|172:220,2,97.50000371933,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,232,99642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
426,324,99800,1,4,3:0:0:0:
426,324,100116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,28,101063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,28,101379,1,4,0:0:0:0:
86,324,102326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
86,324,102642,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,256,102958,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,296,103116,2,0,L|332:360,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,103432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,216,103590,2,0,L|180:152,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,103905,6,0,L|256:40,2,65,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,148,104379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,180,104537,2,0,L|312:216,3,32.5
384,256,104853,2,0,L|380:292,3,32.5,12|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,105168,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,352,105484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,304,105642,2,0,L|192:240,1,65,4|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
256,172,105958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,192,106116,2,0,L|100:256,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,216,106432,6,0,L|24:152,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,100,106747,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,100,106905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,52,107063,2,0,L|172:20,2,32.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,144,107379,2,0,B|212:140|236:120|236:120|272:128,1,97.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,164,107695,6,0,L|308:228,1,65,4|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
244,292,108011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,272,108168,2,0,L|400:208,2,65,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,76,108642,1,12,0:0:0:0:
416,68,108958,6,0,P|384:68|352:60,1,65,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,60,109274,2,0,P|228:60|196:68,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,112,109590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,20,109747,1,0,3:0:0:0:
200,168,109905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,176,110221,6,0,L|336:164,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,316,110695,2,0,L|304:304,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,352,111168,1,12,0:0:0:0:
76,356,111484,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,284,111642,2,0,L|188:252,2,32.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,196,111958,2,0,L|328:260,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,164,112274,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,40,112432,6,0,L|352:104,1,65,2|4,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112826,12,2,116537,0:1:0:0:
litoluna
1,074 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
@11t
SPOILER

11t wrote:


[litoluna's Easy]
Tick Rate: Decrease to 1. Right now every slider has like, 3 ticks and it's sort of weird. Plus the slidertick sounds become a bit distracting.
:arrow:keep it
  1. 00:09:168 (1) - Decrease the volume on the spinner end. It's too loud at the moment.
    :arrow:nice!fixed
  2. 00:56:221 (1,2) - Maybe fix this blanket? I can't tell if this is on purpose though, since you were so neat with your other blankets before.
    :arrow:ok!
  3. 01:51:168 (2,3) - eeeeeeeee
    After all of those neat blankets in this map, this sort of feels... disturbing. Just slightly. It's probably just me though.
    :arrow:keep it.
No real issues here; this Easy plays fine and without problems, good job!
[Closing]
Nice set! You had a guest mapper for every difficulty so there's a lot of diversity in style here. Every map is well-designed and there aren't any major flaws with anything. Overall they're all playable and fun.
@Leorda
SPOILER

Leorda wrote:

今日は～ ゲイマッパー
Gay~~~

[General]
* End kiai at 01:37:590.... because the chrous is end here?

[litoluna's Easy]
01:16:432 - I was expecting note here since the next slider was following vocal...
:arrow:I want to blank here

頑張って！
@iyasine
SPOILER

iyasine wrote:

れかなさん、guestのみなさんこんにちは～！mod requestありがとうございます :D

[litoluna's Easy]
■ 00:31:274 - 手前の赤線でピアノが鳴っているので、ここはwhistleからclapにしてRightから聴こえるスネアのリムショットに合わせたほうがいいと思います。
パターンも統一できるかと！
:arrow:確かに!!fixed!

■ 00:56:221 (1) - ここもちょっとしたブランケットを作ってみてはいかがでしょうか？
img & code
300,140,56221,6,0,P|299:99|276:66,2,80,0|8|2,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
:arrow:codeありがとととととなおしました！
■ 01:11:063 - ピアノ音強いのでsoftのwhistleが欲しいです！
:arrow:いれました！
良いリズム！良いデザイン！


以上です。全diff通してプレイしてみて目立ってなぞりにくかったり叩きにくかったりといった箇所がなかったので配置にはあまり触れませんでした！
これいい曲ですね、これからの季節にぴったりだと思います！桜が咲く頃くらいにrankedできるといいですね、応援しています！good luck ₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾

thanks modding!!!!!!!
i was helpful :) :)

http://puu.sh/7rpxQ.zip
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
m4m with satellite. he was request your map.

[Easy]
00:16:747 (1) - you can blanket here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1408916
00:20:537 (3) - 344/172

[Normal]
01:09:168 (4,1,2) - you can more clean triangle

[Hard]
00:11:379 (5) - 1/6 is fit to music imo. you can try it.
00:34:432 (3) - try to end at 00:34:905 and 00:35:063 (4) - this slider end at 00:35:537
01:16:432 (1,2,3) - i like triplets. but you don't have to fix it.
01:24:326 (3,4) - i want to increase spacing. 420/60 is looks like good imo.
01:36:011 (4,1) - ^
01:41:853 i want triplets !! ex http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1408995
01:44:853 (4) - finish and clap are noisy a little. remove finish imo.
01:48:642 (4,1) - same as 01:24:326 (3,4) -
01:49:905 (5,1) - ^
01:52:432 (1) - hard to see lol i like it.

[insane]
00:11:379 (1) - same as 00:11:379 (5) - in Hard. 1/6 is fit to music imo~
00:13:905 - why did you use 1/2 slider? 00:16:432 (8,9,10,11,1) - is five stream. you can try set to stream ~
00:22:432 (1) - don't need NC
00:35:695 (5) - add NC because here is downbeat.
01:01:432 (2) - i want to follow the drum~ http://puu.sh/7rMOy.jpg
01:08:537 (1) - i don't need sample-set normal. is sounds like weird.
01:47:063 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - why don't follow 1/3 rhythm?

[Sylith]
00:17:221 (1) - remove NC
00:22:747 (3) - sounds like good that remove whistle.
00:28:590 (1) - remove NC

:D
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

Rare wrote:

m4m with satellite. he was request your map.

[Hard]
00:11:379 (5) - 1/6 is fit to music imo. you can try it. 他のdiffが変えたらあわせます~
00:34:432 (3) - try to end at 00:34:905 and 00:35:063 (4) - this slider end at 00:35:537　配置思い浮かんだらで！
01:16:432 (1,2,3) - i like triplets. but you don't have to fix it.　 :)
01:24:326 (3,4) - i want to increase spacing. 420/60 is looks like good imo.　基本DS1.4でジャンプはその倍数の2.1と2.8で合わせてるのでココはkeep!
01:36:011 (4,1) - ^ シンメトリー重視させてもらいます＞＜
01:41:853 i want triplets !! ex http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1408995　Nice Idea Fixed
01:44:853 (4) - finish and clap are noisy a little. remove finish imo. OK
01:48:642 (4,1) - same as 01:24:326 (3,4) - 考え中です
01:49:905 (5,1) - ^
01:52:432 (1) - hard to see lol i like it. :P

:D
modありがとうございました~

code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Marie.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76271
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 8850,62376,67113
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Clover Day's
TitleUnicode:Clover Day's
Artist:Marie
ArtistUnicode:真理絵
Creator:Lecana
Version:Gazel's Hard
Source:Clover Days
Tags:Sylith Satellite Naryuga Dagger-Gazel litoluna sKZy eroge ALcot 10th Anniversary visual novel
BeatmapID:371175
BeatmapSetID:150422

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,62421,66524
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1590,315.789473684211,4,2,1,60,1,0
9168,-133.333333333333,4,2,3,50,0,0
10353,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
10748,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
11379,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,40,0,0
11458,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
11537,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
11616,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
11695,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
13116,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
14221,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
15642,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
16432,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
16748,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
18642,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
18958,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
19274,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
20537,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
21484,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
21800,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,40,0,0
22116,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
22432,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
22905,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
23695,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
24642,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
25274,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
25432,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
25590,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
25748,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
26853,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
27800,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
29221,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
29379,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
30958,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
31590,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
31905,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
32537,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
33011,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
34274,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
34432,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
35379,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
35537,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
36011,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
36169,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
36642,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
36800,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
37274,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
37905,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
38063,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
38221,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
38695,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
39327,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
39484,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
40116,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
40748,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
41379,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
41695,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,10,0,0
42011,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
42484,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
42642,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
43905,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
44221,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
44379,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
44537,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
44853,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
45011,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
45169,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
45642,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
45800,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
46432,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
46590,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
46748,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
46905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
47063,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
47379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
47537,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
47853,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
48011,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
48327,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
48642,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
49432,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
49590,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
49905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
50063,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
50221,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
50853,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
51011,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
51169,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
51484,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
51642,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
51800,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
51958,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
52116,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
52748,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
52905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
53537,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
53695,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
54011,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
54168,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
54484,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
54642,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
54800,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
55116,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
55274,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
56221,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
56379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
56853,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
57011,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
57169,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
57484,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
57642,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
57958,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
58274,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
58432,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
58905,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
59063,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
59379,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
59537,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
59695,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
60169,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
60327,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
60484,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
60642,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
60800,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
60958,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
61274,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
61432,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
61590,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61748,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
61905,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
62221,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
67274,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
67905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
68063,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
68537,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
68695,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
69169,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
69484,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
69642,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
69800,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
70274,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
71063,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
71221,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
71537,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
71695,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
72327,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
72642,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
73432,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
73590,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
73905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
74853,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
75169,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
75800,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
75958,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
76432,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
76590,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
76668,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
76748,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
76905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
77063,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
77379,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
77537,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
78011,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
78169,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
78327,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
78484,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
78958,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
79905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
80063,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
80537,-100,4,2,0,80,0,1
80853,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
81800,-100,4,2,0,80,0,1
81958,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
82432,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
82590,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
83063,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
83221,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
83695,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
83853,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
84326,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
84484,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
85274,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
85432,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
85747,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
85905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
86063,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
86537,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
86853,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
87011,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
87168,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
87326,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
87484,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
87642,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
88116,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
88274,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
88432,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
88590,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
88747,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
88905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
89063,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
89379,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
89537,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
90011,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
90326,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
90484,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
90642,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
90958,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
91116,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
91274,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
91432,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
91590,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
91905,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
92063,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
92221,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
92300,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
92379,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
92458,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
92537,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
92695,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
92853,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
93011,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
93168,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
93326,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
93484,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
93642,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
93800,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
93958,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
94116,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
94274,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
94432,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
94590,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
94747,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
95379,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
96326,-100,4,2,1,90,0,1
96484,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
96800,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
96958,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
97116,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
97274,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
97590,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
98221,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,1
98241,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
98853,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,1
98872,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
99484,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,1
99642,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
99800,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,1
100116,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
101063,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
101221,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
102326,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
102642,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
102958,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
103116,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
103432,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
103590,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
103905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
104063,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
104379,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
104537,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
104616,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
104695,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
104774,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
104853,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
104932,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
105011,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
105090,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
105168,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
105326,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
105642,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
105800,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
105958,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
106116,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
106590,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
106747,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
106905,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
107063,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
107221,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
107379,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
107537,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
107616,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
107695,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
107853,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
108168,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
108326,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
108484,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
108642,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
108958,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
109116,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
109274,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
109590,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
109747,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
109905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
110221,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
110379,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
110537,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
110695,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
110853,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
111168,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
111326,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
111642,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
111800,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
111958,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
112116,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
112274,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
112432,-200,4,2,1,70,0,0
112747,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
114011,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
114326,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
114642,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
114958,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
115274,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
115590,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 208,255,255
Combo2 : 206,255,206
Combo3 : 255,255,210
Combo4 : 252,203,210

[HitObjects]
36,148,9168,5,2,0:0:0:0:
36,148,9800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,216,9958,2,0,L|144:212,1,48.750001859665,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,172,10274,2,0,B|256:244|200:244|224:316,1,146.250005578995,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,368,11379,2,0,L|328:360,3,24.3750009298325
360,372,11695,6,0,L|368:240,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,208,12168,2,0,L|444:337,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,312,12642,2,0,L|292:180,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,116,13116,2,0,L|224:48,2,65,0|2|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
144,148,13590,2,0,L|140:80,1,65,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,116,13905,2,0,L|59:180,1,65,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,240,14221,6,0,P|168:256|208:360,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,332,14695,2,0,P|325:273|380:240,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,120,15168,2,0,B|448:120|428:108|428:108|400:116|400:116|376:108|352:108,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,15642,2,0,L|284:228,2,65,0|8|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
272,68,16116,2,0,P|232:80|196:120,1,97.5,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,164,16432,2,0,L|192:268,1,97.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,296,16747,6,4,L|352:276,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,348,17221,2,0,L|280:368,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,212,17695,2,0,L|384:192,1,130,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
436,116,18168,2,0,P|444:88|444:52,2,65,0|8|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
352,76,18642,2,0,B|328:88|328:88|304:76|304:76|272:88|232:64,1,130,10|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,200,19274,6,0,P|112:236|112:264,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,344,19590,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,308,19747,2,0,P|196:275|204:244,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,180,20063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,264,20221,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,264,20537,5,2,3:0:0:0:
432,200,20695,1,0,3:0:0:0:
372,28,21011,1,8,3:0:0:0:
372,28,21326,1,0,3:0:0:0:
308,92,21484,2,0,B|264:96|264:96|224:80|224:80|180:84,1,130,8|4,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,192,22116,6,0,L|36:244,2,48.750001859665,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,336,22747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,276,22905,2,0,L|200:228,1,48.750001859665,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,176,23221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,192,23379,2,0,L|356:244,2,48.750001859665,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,336,24326,6,0,P|312:328|272:284,1,97.50000371933,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,108,24958,2,0,P|256:136|248:164,1,48.750001859665,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,212,25274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,156,25432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,212,25590,6,0,P|48:260|64:308,3,97.50000371933,2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,364,26695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,26853,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,316,27800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,364,27958,2,0,P|344:336|300:236,1,146.250005578995,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,236,29221,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,316,29379,2,0,P|284:327|383:281,1,146.250005578995,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,196,30011,2,0,P|327:152|257:163,1,146.250005578995,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,236,30642,5,2,0:0:0:0:
210,236,30958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,284,31116,2,0,P|124:256|168:156,1,146.250005578995,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,31905,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,316,32537,2,0,L|308:304,2,48.750001859665,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,236,33011,2,0,L|308:212,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,33484,5,2,0:0:0:0:
392,192,34274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,128,34432,2,0,L|237:151,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,324,35063,2,0,L|302:300,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,256,35695,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,348,36011,2,0,P|396:304|384:252,1,97.50000371933,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,168,36642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,188,36800,2,0,P|364:184|404:104,1,146.250005578995,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,64,37905,2,0,L|60:116,1,48.750001859665,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,192,38221,6,0,L|59:225,1,48.750001859665,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,304,38537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,284,38695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,284,39326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,260,39484,6,0,P|304:260|340:292,1,97.50000371933,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,158,40116,2,0,P|173:199|127:214,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,158,40747,2,0,P|290:116|300:69,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,48,41379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
476,48,41537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,120,41695,2,0,L|432:176,1,48.750001859665,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,272,42011,5,4,0:0:0:0:
288,352,42326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,264,42484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,288,42642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,288,42958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,328,43116,2,0,P|184:296|176:264,2,65
84,296,43590,2,0,P|80:248|132:180,1,130,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,212,44221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,288,44379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,232,44537,6,0,P|420:200|420:168,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,88,44853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,45011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,132,45484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,84,45642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,36,45800,6,0,P|176:68|176:100,1,65
88,116,46116,2,0,P|102:147|124:169,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,244,46432,2,0,P|104:256|136:256,1,65,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,344,46747,2,0,P|187:329|209:307,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,216,47063,5,4,0:0:0:0:
220,216,47379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,352,47537,2,0,L|424:344,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,260,48011,2,0,L|388:264,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,196,48326,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,196,48642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,124,48800,2,0,L|327:117,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,160,49274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,56,49432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,56,49590,6,0,L|164:120,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,148,49905,2,0,L|115:198,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,280,50221,2,0,L|204:288,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,352,50853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,284,51011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,248,51168,2,0,L|448:184,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,88,51484,2,0,L|364:152,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,51800,1,4,0:0:0:0:
292,208,51958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,172,52116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,172,52590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,228,52747,2,0,L|92:292,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,360,53063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,316,53221,2,0,B|284:320|284:320|316:312|316:312|364:316,1,130
436,260,53695,2,0,B|440:212|440:212|432:180|432:180|436:132,2,130,0|2|2,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,54484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,112,54642,6,0,L|271:47,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,196,54958,2,0,L|236:264,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,332,55274,2,0,B|128:328|128:328|96:336|96:336|48:332,2,130,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,368,56221,2,0,P|360:336|356:304,1,65
272,203,56537,2,0,P|268:235|272:268,1,65,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,168,56853,2,0,P|360:136|356:104,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,40,57168,6,0,B|240:44|240:44|208:36|208:36|160:40,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,52,57642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,52,58116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,128,58274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,164,58432,6,0,L|88:228,1,65
272,156,58747,2,0,L|264:92,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,256,59063,2,0,B|252:260|252:260|284:252|284:252|332:256,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,308,59537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,172,59695,6,0,L|340:168,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,148,60011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,100,60168,2,0,L|272:36,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,120,60484,2,0,L|108:184,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,276,60800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,348,60958,6,0,B|184:324|188:296|188:296|220:304|256:296,1,130,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,248,61432,2,0,L|364:264,2,32.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
252,204,61747,1,8,3:0:0:0:
380,160,61905,1,4,3:0:0:0:
380,160,62221,5,6,0:0:0:0:
380,160,67274,6,0,P|312:160|256:132,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,60,67747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,67905,2,0,P|120:144|120:176,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,264,68221,2,0,P|107:263|76:256,1,65
220,220,68537,6,0,P|228:252|228:284,1,65
308,328,68853,2,0,P|308:295|316:264,1,65
364,188,69168,2,0,P|332:188|256:132,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,69642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,100,69800,6,0,P|116:164|124:228,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,314,70432,2,0,P|371:252|364:188,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,70905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,152,71063,6,0,P|216:120|220:88,2,65,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,71537,2,0,P|296:240|292:272,2,65,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,244,72011,1,2,0:1:0:0:
208,244,72168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,372,72326,6,0,L|388:356,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,228,72800,2,0,L|448:292,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,268,73116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,73274,2,0,L|280:144,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,73590,6,0,L|124:72,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,232,74221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,144,74537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,372,74853,6,0,L|388:356,2,130,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,328,75642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,280,75800,2,0,P|312:248|312:216,1,65,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,260,76432,6,0,P|92:260|136:244,1,97.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,212,76747,2,0,L|176:148,1,65,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,88,77063,1,4,0:0:0:0:
372,20,77379,6,0,L|380:156,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,232,77853,2,0,P|456:232|488:228,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,78168,2,0,P|264:184|232:188,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,78484,6,0,L|340:260,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,360,78800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,296,78958,2,0,L|256:232,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,180,79274,2,0,L|84:244,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,272,79590,2,0,L|172:208,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,116,79905,6,0,B|204:116|240:88|240:88|276:104,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,144,80379,2,0,L|424:132,2,65,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,144,80853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,236,81011,6,0,L|332:224,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,272,81484,2,0,L|260:264,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,351,81800,2,0,L|288:340,1,130,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,364,82432,5,4,0:0:0:0:
64,364,82747,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,268,83063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,208,83221,2,0,L|87:213,2,65,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,133,83695,6,0,L|104:128,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,184,84011,2,0,L|296:178,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,52,84326,1,4,0:0:0:0:
436,48,84642,2,0,B|424:84|436:112|436:112|432:148,1,97.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,84958,6,0,L|404:240,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,296,85274,1,4,3:0:0:0:
284,224,85432,2,0,L|280:160,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,85747,1,2,3:0:0:0:
112,64,85905,1,4,3:0:0:0:
160,140,86063,6,0,L|164:204,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,84,86379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,160,86537,2,0,L|284:224,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,328,86853,2,0,L|380:296,3,32.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,248,87168,2,0,L|444:216,3,32.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,144,87484,6,0,B|440:144|404:116|404:116|364:132,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,70,87958,2,0,L|358:46,2,65,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,88432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,24,88590,6,0,L|172:156,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,304,89063,2,0,L|96:212,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,240,89379,2,0,L|168:228,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,318,89853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,90011,5,4,0:0:0:0:
280,160,90326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,252,90484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,200,90642,2,0,L|460:136,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,59,90958,1,8,0:0:0:0:
375,98,91116,6,0,L|368:228,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,352,91590,2,0,L|245:282,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,144,91905,2,0,L|232:152,1,97.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,124,92221,6,0,L|248:92,3,32.5,12|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,92537,6,0,L|320:52,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,92853,2,0,L|308:200,2,130,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,93800,2,0,L|192:332,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,94116,2,0,L|204:184,2,130,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,95063,6,0,L|260:112,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,80,95379,2,0,L|348:144,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,108,95695,2,0,L|436:172,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,264,96011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,272,96326,6,0,P|388:272|316:240,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,96800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,241,96958,2,0,P|136:269|72:272,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,75,97590,6,0,P|264:124|256:172,1,97.50000371933,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,168,98221,2,0,P|126:140|172:124,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,271,98853,2,0,P|209:251|172:220,2,97.50000371933,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,232,99642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
426,324,99800,1,4,3:0:0:0:
426,324,100116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,28,101063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,28,101379,1,4,0:0:0:0:
168,288,101853,2,0,L|172:248,2,32.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,364,102168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,324,102326,1,4,3:0:0:0:
84,324,102642,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,256,102958,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,296,103116,2,0,L|332:360,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,103432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,216,103590,2,0,L|180:152,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,103905,6,0,L|256:40,2,65,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,148,104379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,180,104537,2,0,L|312:216,3,32.5
384,256,104853,2,0,L|380:292,3,32.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,105168,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,352,105484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,304,105642,2,0,L|192:240,1,65,4|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
256,172,105958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,192,106116,2,0,L|100:256,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,216,106432,6,0,L|24:152,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,100,106747,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,100,106905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,52,107063,2,0,L|172:20,2,32.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,144,107379,2,0,B|212:140|236:120|236:120|272:128,1,97.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,164,107695,6,0,L|308:228,1,65,4|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
244,292,108011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,272,108168,2,0,L|400:208,2,65,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,76,108642,1,12,0:0:0:0:
416,68,108958,6,0,P|384:68|352:60,1,65,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,60,109274,2,0,P|228:60|196:68,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,112,109590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,20,109747,1,0,3:0:0:0:
200,168,109905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,176,110221,6,0,L|336:164,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,316,110695,2,0,L|304:304,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,352,111168,1,12,0:0:0:0:
76,356,111484,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,284,111642,2,0,L|188:252,2,32.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,196,111958,2,0,L|328:260,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,164,112274,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,40,112432,6,0,L|352:104,1,65,2|4,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112826,12,2,116537,0:1:0:0:
kintyan
150 posts
Joined September 2010
kintyan
hi~ twitterで完成したと聞いたので来ました

[General]
Insane, Sylith's Insane 両方ODが一緒なのでSylith's InsaneをOD8にしませんか？


[Easy]
01:00:958 (1) - sliderの折り返しが多い？のでこんな感じにしませんか？
SPOILER

[Normal]
00:11:695 - 緑線のunsnap
00:21:800 - ここからslider-bodyの音が入っちゃってます
00:29:379 (1,2) - 2/1sliderにしませんか？
00:47:063 (1,2,3,4) - 音には合ってるんですが、サビ,KIAIタイムでもないのでもう少し簡単にしませんか？
こんな感じとか
SPOILER
01:39:484 (4) - ちょっと傾けたほうが僕は好きです
SPOILER
01:42:642 (1) - ctrl+G
01:44:537 (4) - 同じ流れを作ってみるとか
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:22:116 - ここからslider-bodyの音を入れてるのは意図的ですか？
01:27:958 (2) - slider-bodyの音入ってます。01:28:116 この辺
01:32:221 (1) - remove nc
01:35:379 (2) - ctrl+Gした方が好きです
01:49:905 (5) - volume50%くらいの default Soft-whistle入れませんか？
01:52:432 (1) - このslider速度の変化はちょっと凶悪な気がします

[Insane]
00:09:168 (1) - 曲調が変わるわけでもないので緑線は不要だと思います
00:12:168 (3,4,5) - ピアノのタタンって感じの音があるのでこの連打は少し違和感
00:13:905 (7) - Insaneなのでここはドラムの音を拾って5連打にしちゃって良いと思います
00:19:747 (3) - ここはstackさせるより 00:19:274 (1) - とブランケットを取ったほうが見栄えがいいように感じます
00:20:300 (1) - 音量を一気に変えるより1/1拍ごとに下げていったほうがマッチしてると思います
僕なら 00:20:537 - 00:21:011 - 00:21:484 - に緑線を置いて下げていきます :3
00:22:116 (1,2) - 00:22:905 (2,3) - ここも重ねて置いてるのでもったいないかなーと思います
00:24:800 (2) - ブランケット作りませんか？
SPOILER
00:25:590 (5) - 上のをctrl+Vでちょっとしたジャンプとか
SPOILER
00:29:379 (1) - (周辺) せっかく他の場所と簡単に区別を作れる曲調なのでここは1/1sliderにしておきませんか？
ピアノの音を拾ってるみたいですが、曲調に対してcircleが多いような印象を受けました。
00:33:168 (3) - 上と同じで1/1sliderを
00:46:432 (3) - volumeを50%くらいに,　少し大きすぎると思います
00:46:590 (4) - x392 y208あたりにおいてもう少し綺麗にブランケットを
00:46:747 (5) - ついでにDSを2.0くらいに
00:54:326 (4) - まっすぐに？
00:55:116 (2,3,4) - 2のDS1.2, 3をCtrl+G, 4も同じくctrl+Gの方が僕は好きです
SPOILER
01:08:537 (1) - ctrlG
01:09:800 (4) - finishもあるし何かしらの楽器の音も強いのでnc
01:11:063 (3) - ピアノの音に合わせてnc
01:11:695 (3) - remove nc
01:14:853 (1,2,3,4) - ちょっとoverlapな気がするのでこんな感じに
SPOILER
01:17:063 (3,4,5,6) - volume40%くらいのdefaultのsoft-whitstleいれませんか？
01:18:168 (4) - これを 01:18:326 (5) - とブランケットを取れる箇所に移動
SPOILER
01:21:011 (5) - nc

[Sylith's Insane]
00:18:247 (1,2,3,4) - not match a sound, how about 1/2slider ?
00:20:221 (5) - make the same flow
00:56:853 (3,4,5,6,1) - overlap
00:57:642 (3) - ctrl+G

思ったんですけど、spinnerに対する緑線の置き方全て揃えませんか？
どれに合わせるかはおまかせします :3
good luck!!
litoluna
1,074 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
@Rare

Rare wrote:

m4m with satellite. he was request your map.

[Easy]
00:16:747 (1) - you can blanket here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1408916
:arrow:違う形ですがblanketしました！
00:20:537 (3) - 344/172
:arrow:00:19:274 (1) - とあわせたいのでkeep it.


:D
@Sheryl

Sheryl wrote:

hi~ twitterで完成したと聞いたので来ました

[General]
Insane, Sylith's Insane 両方ODが一緒なのでSylith's InsaneをOD8にしませんか？


[Easy]
01:00:958 (1) - sliderの折り返しが多い？のでこんな感じにしませんか？
SPOILER
:arrow:ここのpartの音取り気に入っているのでこのままで!


思ったんですけど、spinnerに対する緑線の置き方全て揃えませんか？
どれに合わせるかはおまかせします :3
good luck!!
RareさんSherylさんありがとうございました~! :D
http://puu.sh/7scO2.zip
Kyubey
osu! Alumni
3,097 posts
Joined December 2012
Kyubey
Hello! Mod because Satellite asked for it for m4m.
[litoluna's Easy]
00:16:747 (1) - try to move it 1 grid left, because it's too close to 00:15:168 (2) -
00:20:537 (3) - maybe stack it with 00:23:063 (3) tail?
00:25:590 (1,2,1) - looks pretty hard for easy imo, but don't know what i can suggest
01:46:116 (2) - move tail 2 grids left for perfect blanket
[Naryuga's Normal]
00:14:221 (1) - move 1 grid right and 1 grid down for better triangle
00:20:221 (3,2) - overlap looks bad
00:48:168 (3,4) - how about something like this?
SPOILER
01:09:168 (4,1,2) - maybe make perfect triangle here?
[Gazel's Hard]
00:14:695 (2,4) - fix this little overlap pls
00:43:116 (6) - maybe transform it like this?
SPOILER
01:30:484 (3) - try to move it up and 01:30:642 (4) - ctrl+G here for better flow
01:49:747 (4,5) - swap it for better flow
[Sylith's Insane]
00:16:116 (4,5,6,7) - maybe stack it like this for better flow?
SPOILER
00:28:590 (1) - maybe rotate it like this?
SPOILER
00:44:063 (6,1) - how about blanket here?
00:46:432 (3,4) - and here
00:49:116 (5) - 1-2 grids up for fixing this overlap
00:55:590 (4) - i think blanket with 00:55:905 (5) - will be better
00:58:274 (1) - try to make a blanket with 00:58:905 (4) -
01:42:642 (1) - try to move head 3 grids left for better blanket
[Insane]
00:15:484 (4) - move tail to right side, will look better
00:18:326 (3,4) - maybe make them rounded? like this
SPOILER
00:23:379 (1) - NC?
00:30:958 (2,3) - blanket?
00:48:800 (2) - move it 1 grid down or few grids up, as you like
00:55:274 (3) - and 00:55:590 (4) - maybe ctrl+G?
01:03:168 (3,4) - swap?
01:08:221 (3) - ctrl+G?
01:13:116 (3) - ^
01:20:379 (2,3) - blanket them?

Good mapset, good luck with rank!
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

Sheryl wrote:

hi~ twitterで完成したと聞いたので来ました

[Hard]
00:22:116 - ここからslider-bodyの音を入れてるのは意図的ですか？ 意図的です！
01:27:958 (2) - slider-bodyの音入ってます。01:28:116 この辺　なおしました！
01:32:221 (1) - remove nc　HPDrain回復のためにいれてるので、keep
01:35:379 (2) - ctrl+Gした方が好きです　no changeで！
01:49:905 (5) - volume50%くらいの default Soft-whistle入れませんか？　デフォルトじゃないけどいれました
01:52:432 (1) - このslider速度の変化はちょっと凶悪な気がします　わかる・・・わかる。

good luck!!

Kyubey wrote:

Hello! Mod because Satellite asked for it for m4m.

[Gazel's Hard]
00:14:695 (2,4) - fix this little overlap pls mmmm
00:43:116 (6) - maybe transform it like this?
SPOILER
follow before 3
01:30:484 (3) - try to move it up and 01:30:642 (4) - ctrl+G here for better flow keep please
01:49:747 (4,5) - swap it for better flow hold point ...

Good mapset, good luck with rank!


thanks for modding!
litoluna
1,074 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
@Kyubey

Kyubey wrote:

Hello! Mod because Satellite asked for it for m4m.
[litoluna's Easy]
00:16:747 (1) - try to move it 1 grid left, because it's too close to 00:15:168 (2) -
:arrow:ok.fixed!
00:20:537 (3) - maybe stack it with 00:23:063 (3) tail?
:arrow:keep it.
00:25:590 (1,2,1) - looks pretty hard for easy imo, but don't know what i can suggest
:arrow:I think no problem.
01:46:116 (2) - move tail 2 grids left for perfect blanket
:arrow:fixed!
Good mapset, good luck with rank!
thanks modding!!
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga
Sorry for the late reply.

Fixed almost everything for the many mods (yay), but I'm sorry about not answering which part was fixed or not from the mods. When I was writing it, my PC's buttery went 0% and I didn't save the log in the draft... omg lol... I'm too lazy to write replies again.

for 01:09:168 (4,1,2) - , I won't make a perfect equilateral triangle here, I just want a curve here, not a perfect triangle. The symmetry is already perfect so I'll keep this.

Thanks very much!

Update: http://puu.sh/7ttDA.osu
Sylith
722 posts
Joined September 2012
Sylith

iyasine wrote:

れかなさん、guestのみなさんこんにちは～！mod requestありがとうございます :D

[Sylith's Insane]
■ 01:39:484 - remove whistle
■ 01:39:642 - add whistle
■ 01:39:800 (4) - add clap
■ 01:41:063 (4) - whistle →　clap ?
■ 01:41:221 (5) - add Drum sample set + finish ?
■ 01:48:958 - add clap
■ 01:49:590 - ^
■ 01:50:537 - ^
■ 01:51:011 - add whistle
nice work Sylith ! o3o

以上です。全diff通してプレイしてみて目立ってなぞりにくかったり叩きにくかったりといった箇所がなかったので配置にはあまり触れませんでした！
これいい曲ですね、これからの季節にぴったりだと思います！桜が咲く頃くらいにrankedできるといいですね、応援しています！good luck ₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾
all fixed!! iyasine<3


Rare wrote:

m4m with satellite. he was request your map.

[Sylith]
00:17:221 (1) - remove NC
00:22:747 (3) - sounds like good that remove whistle.
00:28:590 (1) - remove NC

:D
all done! thank you! :>

Sheryl wrote:

hi~ twitterで完成したと聞いたので来ました

[General]
Insane, Sylith's Insane 両方ODが一緒なのでSylith's InsaneをOD8にしませんか？ - okay! if lecana says okay for it :>

[Sylith's Insane]
00:18:247 (1,2,3,4) - not match a sound, how about 1/2slider ? - um sorry.. but 1/3 here
00:20:221 (5) - make the same flow - sorry ;-; wanna keep here
00:56:853 (3,4,5,6,1) - overlap - Dx I can't understand what are you saying ;-; what should I fix?
00:57:642 (3) - ctrl+G -;-; I love current flow more sorry

思ったんですけど、spinnerに対する緑線の置き方全て揃えませんか？
どれに合わせるかはおまかせします :3
good luck!!
thanks for your mod!


Kyubey wrote:

Hello! Mod because Satellite asked for it for m4m.

[Sylith's Insane]
00:16:116 (4,5,6,7) - maybe stack it like this for better flow?
SPOILER
- done!
00:28:590 (1) - maybe rotate it like this?
SPOILER
- sorry I prefer current flow
00:44:063 (6,1) - how about blanket here? - ^
00:46:432 (3,4) - and here - ummm I tried something else
00:49:116 (5) - 1-2 grids up for fixing this overlap - done!
00:55:590 (4) - i think blanket with 00:55:905 (5) - will be better - ;-; I love this placement sorry
00:58:274 (1) - try to make a blanket with 00:58:905 (4) - - ^
01:42:642 (1) - try to move head 3 grids left for better blanket - done!
Good mapset, good luck with rank!
thanks for your mod!! :D


SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Marie.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76271
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.399998

[Metadata]
Title:Clover Day's
TitleUnicode:Clover Day's
Artist:Marie
ArtistUnicode:真理絵
Creator:Lecana
Version:Sylith's Insane
Source:Clover Days
Tags:Sylith Satellite Naryuga Dagger-Gazel litoluna sKZy eroge ALcot 10th Anniversary visual novel
BeatmapID:371178
BeatmapSetID:150422

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,62421,66516
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1590,315.789473684211,4,2,1,60,1,0
13590,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
13747,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
20695,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
21011,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
21326,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
21800,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
22116,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
29300,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
29379,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
39405,-125,4,2,0,60,0,0
39484,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
42011,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
43274,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
43432,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
45800,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
45958,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
47063,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
47379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
50221,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
50379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
51168,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
51326,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
51800,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
51958,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
53221,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
53379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
55905,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
56063,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
58274,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
58432,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
58747,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
58905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
67116,-125,4,2,1,20,0,0
67274,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
69800,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
73432,-125,4,2,1,40,0,0
73590,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
74774,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
74853,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
74932,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
76432,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
77063,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
77142,-100,4,2,0,35,0,0
77221,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
77300,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0
77379,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
78011,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
78168,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
80221,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,50,0,1
80379,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,70,0,1
80537,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
80695,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
82747,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
82905,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
84642,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
84800,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
87168,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
87326,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
88590,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
88747,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
89379,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
89537,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
90642,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
90800,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
97590,-125,4,2,0,50,0,0
99484,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107168,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
107274,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
107379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
107484,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
107590,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
107695,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
109747,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
109826,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
109905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
113379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
114168,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
115274,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
115905,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
116537,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
117168,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
117958,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 208,255,255
Combo2 : 206,255,206
Combo3 : 255,255,210
Combo4 : 252,203,210

[HitObjects]
256,192,9168,12,0,11221,0:0:0:0:
460,144,11379,6,0,P|464:129|471:116,5,30
460,228,11695,6,0,B|416:216|416:216|332:212,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,12011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
260,192,12168,2,0,P|256:140|252:92,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,12484,1,0,3:0:0:0:
100,32,12642,2,0,P|112:112|108:216,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
56,368,13116,5,8,0:3:0:0:
16,208,13274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,272,13432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,272,13511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,13590,2,0,P|240:268|304:248,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,124,13905,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,13984,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,14063,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,14142,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,14221,6,0,L|408:232,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,14537,1,0,3:0:0:0:
496,332,14695,2,0,P|456:324|400:292,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,124,15011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
508,164,15168,2,0,P|440:216|340:184,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,15642,5,2,0:0:0:0:
280,92,15800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,196,15958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,220,16116,1,8,3:2:0:0:
160,224,16195,1,0,3:0:0:0:
144,228,16274,1,2,3:0:0:0:
128,232,16353,1,0,3:0:0:0:
112,236,16432,2,0,L|79:110,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,340,16747,6,0,L|224:356,1,180,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
344,236,17221,2,0,L|252:244,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,344,17537,1,0,3:0:0:0:
436,284,17695,2,0,P|440:180|494:93,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,18247,5,0,3:0:0:0:
256,136,18326,2,0,L|309:155,2,56.6666666666667,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
368,76,18642,2,0,L|358:20,2,56.6666666666667,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
256,8,18958,2,0,L|199:54,2,56.6666666666667,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
148,132,19274,6,0,P|136:192|148:292,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,19590,1,0,3:0:0:0:
296,344,19747,2,0,P|304:296|300:248,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,368,20063,1,0,3:0:0:0:
384,368,20221,2,0,P|384:268|368:176,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,189,20695,5,8,0:3:0:0:
232,284,21011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,88,21326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,88,21484,2,0,B|184:68|136:104|36:72,1,180,8|4,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,88,22116,6,0,P|62:127|60:184,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,228,22432,2,0,P|160:192|163:156,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,22747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,22905,2,0,P|136:316|194:317,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,228,23221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,324,23379,2,0,P|292:320|235:249,2,144,2|2|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,240,24168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
460,240,24326,2,0,P|444:308|460:384,2,144,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,140,25116,2,0,P|420:148|388:168,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,25432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,172,25590,6,0,L|316:192,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,55,25905,2,0,L|280:75,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,104,26221,2,0,P|120:172|164:256,2,144,2|0|4,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,320,27168,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,320,27326,2,0,B|144:332|180:320|180:320|220:308|256:328,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,316,27800,2,0,P|376:268|380:232,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,136,28116,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,232,28274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,228,28432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,84,28590,2,0,P|349:124|360:176,1,72,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
260,16,28905,2,0,L|236:100,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,240,29221,5,2,0:0:0:0:
148,240,29300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,240,29379,2,0,P|120:164|148:92,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,164,29853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,305,30011,2,0,L|244:397,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,260,30326,2,0,L|335:188,1,72
488,276,30642,6,0,P|448:256|427:237,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,120,30958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,48,31116,2,0,P|508:120|484:204,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,120,31590,2,0,L|292:112,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,236,31905,6,0,P|276:240|336:200,2,144,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,161,32695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,256,32853,2,0,L|92:344,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,216,33168,6,0,P|42:171|129:163,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,244,33642,2,0,L|171:234,1,72,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
336,168,33958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,332,34116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,244,34274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,244,34432,6,0,P|440:160|416:104,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,44,34905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,35063,2,0,P|244:108|252:164,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,35379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,112,35537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,35695,5,6,0:0:0:0:
340,180,36011,2,0,L|344:268,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,340,36326,2,0,L|456:252,1,72,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,100,36642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
511,171,36800,6,0,P|471:175|431:170,1,72,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,88,37116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,37274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,176,37432,2,0,P|236:244|228:352,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,376,37905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,196,38063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,284,38221,6,0,P|92:300|168:268,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,38695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,176,38853,2,0,P|275:227|280:298,1,144,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,236,39326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,236,39405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,236,39484,6,0,L|381:249,1,72,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,348,39800,2,0,L|438:334,1,72
488,136,40116,2,0,L|312:168,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,310,40590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,310,40668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,310,40747,6,0,P|205:234|233:170,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,244,41221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,316,41379,2,0,P|184:312|124:316,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,216,41695,2,0,P|64:228|119:222,1,108,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,223,42011,6,0,L|122:123,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,36,42326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,128,42484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,156,42642,2,0,P|252:156|300:148,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,68,42958,5,2,0:0:0:0:
376,216,43116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,64,43274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,164,43432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,304,43590,2,0,P|332:300|276:228,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
120,320,44063,2,0,P|164:316|220:324,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,380,44379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,232,44537,6,0,P|184:184|188:136,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,64,44853,2,0,P|348:112|344:160,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,248,45168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,45326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,156,45484,2,0,P|421:201|388:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,253,45800,6,0,P|245:242|305:252,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,336,46116,2,8,P|404:347|343:336,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,254,46432,2,0,P|204:296|185:363,1,90,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,222,46747,2,0,P|104:125|93:14,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,328,47379,5,0,0:0:0:0:
63,328,47537,2,0,P|156:316|215:238,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,352,48011,2,0,P|316:348|272:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,256,48326,5,8,0:0:0:0:
488,209,48484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,356,48642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,256,48800,2,0,L|354:158,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
464,136,49116,2,0,L|458:47,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,52,49432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,52,49511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,52,49590,6,0,P|240:100|132:80,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,31,50063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,149,50221,2,0,L|58:239,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,369,50537,2,0,L|164:280,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,168,50853,5,8,0:0:0:0:
164,281,51011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
334,257,51168,1,12,0:0:0:0:
255,328,51326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,188,51484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,328,51642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
278,168,51800,2,0,L|290:55,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,30,52116,6,0,P|405:126|406:214,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,328,52590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,380,52747,2,0,P|344:304|352:268,1,90
405,208,53063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,248,53221,6,0,L|140:232,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,360,53537,2,0,L|176:344,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,180,53853,2,0,P|76:232|84:284,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,32,54326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,192,54484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,104,54642,6,0,B|94:84|134:104|134:104|178:124|222:104,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,55116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,48,55274,2,0,P|340:112|336:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,232,55590,2,0,P|435:196|450:154,1,90
492,312,55905,2,0,P|400:340|300:292,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,56379,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,112,56537,2,0,P|300:160|292:240,1,90,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,56853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
228,320,56932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,57011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
228,320,57090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,57168,6,0,P|176:328|124:316,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,224,57484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,132,57642,2,0,P|72:112|0:172,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,58116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,58274,6,0,L|256:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,58590,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,24,58747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,172,58905,2,0,P|396:184|460:176,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
461,329,59221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,268,59379,2,0,P|304:264|228:284,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,336,59695,6,0,P|232:264|228:148,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,292,60168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,292,60326,2,8,P|60:340|72:400,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,60642,2,0,P|152:160|140:100,1,90,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
146,119,60879,1,0,3:0:0:0:
146,119,60958,5,4,3:0:0:0:
56,168,61116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,60,61274,2,0,L|272:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
266,148,61511,1,0,3:0:0:0:
266,148,61590,5,8,0:3:0:0:
324,264,61747,1,8,0:3:0:0:
504,188,61905,2,0,L|356:168,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,166,62221,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,264,67116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,264,67195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,264,67274,2,0,P|148:248|216:264,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,260,67747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,164,67905,2,0,P|144:120|152:72,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,52,68221,2,0,P|264:96|256:144,1,72
280,160,68458,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,68537,2,0,L|356:152,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,256,68853,2,0,L|308:271,2,144,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,69642,5,0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,69721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,69800,2,0,P|456:160|420:164,1,72,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,70116,2,0,P|315:109|349:96,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,20,70432,2,0,P|452:108|432:188,1,144,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,71063,6,0,P|268:220|352:276,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,336,71537,2,0,L|444:252,1,72,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,179,71853,2,0,L|335:250,1,72
249,323,72168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
237,336,72247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,350,72326,2,0,L|128:327,1,72,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,360,72642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,72800,2,0,L|188:144,1,72,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,72,73116,2,0,L|92:143,1,72
104,252,73432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,152,73590,6,0,P|251:154|328:132,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,134,74063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,52,74221,2,0,P|334:40|295:40,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,224,74537,2,0,P|404:196|422:159,1,72
425,153,74774,5,2,0:0:0:0:
425,153,74853,2,0,L|414:311,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,296,75326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,236,75484,2,0,L|273:142,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,76,75800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
171,271,75958,1,12,0:0:0:0:
171,271,76432,6,0,L|267:247,1,90
258,250,76668,1,0,3:0:0:0:
258,250,76747,1,8,3:0:0:0:
460,284,76905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,352,77063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,315,77142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,273,77221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,233,77300,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,203,77379,6,0,P|400:140|392:72,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,77695,2,0,P|246:156|198:168,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,60,78011,2,0,P|112:71|161:75,1,99.0000030212403,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,78326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,160,78484,6,0,P|92:248|116:352,1,198.000006042481,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,312,78958,2,0,P|300:260|288:200,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,79274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,256,79432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,352,79590,2,0,P|460:312|520:200,1,198.000006042481,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,66,80063,6,0,P|407:122|415:190,1,99.0000030212403,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
512,240,80379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,80537,2,0,P|252:184|196:144,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,128,80853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,28,81011,6,0,P|180:136|152:252,1,198.000006042481,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,304,81484,2,0,P|68:300|124:312,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,356,81800,2,0,P|240:336|208:288,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,82116,2,0,L|296:280,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,384,82432,6,0,L|437:186,1,198.000006042481,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,82905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,44,83221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,83379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,156,83537,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,83695,6,0,P|204:40|140:48,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,216,84011,2,0,P|148:212|200:116,1,198.000006042481,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,116,84484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,304,84642,2,0,P|136:300|200:268,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,348,84958,6,0,P|320:296|328:236,1,99.0000030212403,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,85274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,352,85432,2,0,P|444:236|428:144,1,198.000006042481,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,85905,1,8,0:3:0:0:
142,105,86063,6,0,P|206:165|310:146,1,198.000006042481,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,60,86537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,86695,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,256,86774,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,256,86853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
496,144,87011,2,0,L|376:132,1,99.0000030212403,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,87326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,352,87484,6,0,P|456:308|444:236,1,99.0000030212403,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,87800,2,0,P|304:128|316:200,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,344,88116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,168,88274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,256,88432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,256,88590,6,0,P|88:224|36:112,1,198.000006042481,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,136,89063,2,2,P|152:88|160:28,1,99.0000030212403
256,196,89379,2,0,P|280:152|344:120,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,89695,2,0,B|336:284|384:328|448:292,1,148.50000453186,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,296,90011,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,212,90168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,80,90326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
510,171,90484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,212,90642,2,0,L|238:194,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,88,90958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,144,91116,6,0,P|116:184|156:300,1,198.000006042481,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,368,91590,2,0,L|36:248,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,348,91905,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,91984,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,92063,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,92142,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,92221,6,0,L|204:284,1,49.5000015106202,8|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
264,200,92379,2,0,L|278:247,1,49.5000015106202,8|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
292,344,92537,6,0,P|342:336|396:312,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,252,92853,2,0,P|493:295|488:364,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,196,93168,2,0,P|383:146|372:98,1,99.0000030212403,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,36,93484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,200,93642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,136,93800,6,0,P|128:140|188:124,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,323,94116,2,0,P|191:279|147:235,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,112,94432,2,0,P|280:151|264:211,1,99.0000030212403,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,316,94747,2,0,P|395:276|411:216,1,99.0000030212403,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,116,95063,6,0,B|136:152|112:84|22:115,2,198.000006042481,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,95853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,296,96011,2,0,P|64:248|72:197,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,96326,6,0,P|280:352|360:268,2,198.000006042481,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,168,97116,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,296,97274,1,8,0:3:0:0:
180,252,97432,1,4,0:3:0:0:
200,128,97590,6,0,P|268:112|348:160,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,308,98063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,308,98221,2,0,P|376:324|296:276,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,220,98695,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,220,98853,2,0,P|168:236|124:308,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,376,99326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,288,99484,2,0,L|8:168,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,200,99800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,108,100116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
260,313,100432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,192,100747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,80,101063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,24,101221,1,4,3:0:0:0:
328,80,101379,6,0,P|315:160|332:280,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,344,101853,1,0,0:3:0:0:
492,344,101932,1,0,0:3:0:0:
492,344,102011,2,0,P|440:324|384:320,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,312,102326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,380,102484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,228,102642,6,0,P|204:180|200:120,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,56,102958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,176,103116,2,0,P|64:172|120:148,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,103432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,88,103590,2,0,P|292:180|304:284,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,266,104063,5,2,0:0:0:0:
488,220,104221,2,0,P|440:212|388:212,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,352,104537,1,2,3:2:0:0:
290,365,104616,1,0,3:2:0:0:
334,360,104695,1,2,3:2:0:0:
371,335,104774,1,0,3:2:0:0:
396,298,104853,1,4,3:2:0:0:
204,252,105011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,252,105168,6,0,L|92:232,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,292,105484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,152,105642,2,0,L|316:132,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,200,105958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,64,106116,6,0,P|100:144|136:272,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,236,106590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,263,106747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,352,106905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,183,107063,2,0,L|238:107,2,60,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,324,107379,2,0,L|218:381,2,60,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,236,107695,5,4,0:0:0:0:
284,263,107853,2,0,P|337:262|401:239,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,324,108168,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,168,108326,2,0,P|372:128|396:64,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,108642,2,0,B|144:76|96:112|29:88,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,256,109116,6,0,P|176:208|168:156,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,208,109432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,360,109590,2,0,P|212:348|252:308,1,90,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,168,109905,2,0,P|332:224|336:264,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,360,110221,6,0,P|443:270|437:180,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,48,110695,2,0,P|227:100|210:197,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,111168,2,0,P|292:288|248:260,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,292,111484,5,8,0:0:0:0:
92,292,111590,1,0,3:0:0:0:
92,292,111695,1,2,3:0:0:0:
92,292,111800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,292,111905,1,0,3:0:0:0:
92,292,112011,1,2,3:0:0:0:
92,292,112116,6,0,L|112:216,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,149,112432,2,0,L|207:207,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,315,112747,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112826,12,2,117958,0:0:0:0:
Lecana
253 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lecana

11t wrote:

[ce[quote="11t"]

[Insane]
Hitsounds: I think they're too loud, especially from 00:21:800 to 01:17:379. The soft-hitnormal really sounds too loud here, compared to the softness of the music. Try reducing hitsound volume by 10% in these sections.
  1. 00:18:642 (4) - Increase hitsound volume by 10% on the slider start. The drum-hitclap isn't very noticeable at the moment.
    :arrow: ok~

  2. 00:20:300 (1) - Having just a loud soft-hitnormal on the end of this spinner sounds really weird. A regular soft-hitnormal isn't really a good hitsound to use to close out a section. Either reduce volume to 5% here, or add a Finish. I think this will work better.
    :arrow: add finish

  3. 00:41:695 (3) - drum-hitfinish fits the bass here, I think. Also consider drum-hitwhistle for the open hihat.
    :arrow: good advice!!

  4. 00:42:011 - Even though you're using a custom soft-hitwhistle, I think that you should continue to use default soft-hitwhistles in this section to emphasize the vocals, like in the previous sections. I think this would work especially well for the last notes of your triples. Default soft-hitwhistles would sound great on things like 00:50:853 (1) and 00:51:326 (2) and 00:56:853 (6) and 00:57:484 (2) etc.
    :arrow: ok

  5. 01:18:326 (5,1) - This is okay, but there is a really really strong accent at 01:18:484 that a slider end doesn't properly emphasize, I think. How about something like this?

    This skips over 01:18:642 which is fine because there's really nothing going on in the music at that time anyway. I think that this could work extremely well if you exaggerate the spacing between (5) and (6) in the image, and then stack pink (1) on top of manila (6).
    Possible arrangement
    :arrow: awesome :3
  6. 01:22:432 (1,2) - I'm not sure I like this. The gap at 01:22:432 (1,2) feels out-of-place, mostly because the music at 01:23:063 (2) isn't strong enough for the end of a 1/1 gap. How about changing 01:22:432 (1) to 3/4, and adding a 1/2 slider afterwards, like this?

    I think that this arrangement of sliders here fits the strings notes at 01:22:432 and 01:22:747 in the music.
    :arrow: sorry..

  7. 01:52:905 (1) - Use default soft-hitwhistle for the end of this spinner (your custom normal-hitwhistle).
    :arrow: ok~
Overall, this is a fun map! It reminds me a bit of cRyo's maps~

[Closing]
Nice set! You had a guest mapper for every difficulty so there's a lot of diversity in style here. Every map is well-designed and there aren't any major flaws with anything. Overall they're all playable and fun.
Thanks mod and,great advice :3

iyasine wrote:

れかなさん、guestのみなさんこんにちは～！mod requestありがとうございます :D

[Insane]
■ 01:08:853 - Normal sample set をAutoに変えて、additionのほうをNormalにチェンジ？おそらくミスだと思われます！
:arrow: okです!
■ 01:38:537 (3) - ピアノに合わせて addition Normal + whistle を追加？
:arrow: okです!
■ 01:39:168 - ^
:arrow: okです!
■ 01:51:642 (1) - ^
:arrow: okです!
■ 01:39:642 - add whistle ?
:arrow: okです!
良いアレンジ!!


以上です。全diff通してプレイしてみて目立ってなぞりにくかったり叩きにくかったりといった箇所がなかったので配置にはあまり触れませんでした！
これいい曲ですね、これからの季節にぴったりだと思います！桜が咲く頃くらいにrankedできるといいですね、応援しています！good luck ₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾
modありがとうございます！
がんばりやまっしゅ！

Rare wrote:

m4m with satellite. he was request your map.

[insane]
00:11:379 (1) - same as 00:11:379 (5) - in Hard. 1/6 is fit to music imo~
:arrow: 了解です!
00:13:905 - why did you use 1/2 slider? 00:16:432 (8,9,10,11,1) - is five stream. you can try set to stream ~
:arrow: すいません。最初に5連打を置くのを避けて一旦
スライダーにしてます。
00:22:432 (1) - don't need NC
:arrow: 了解です!
00:35:695 (5) - add NC because here is downbeat.
:arrow: 了解です!
01:01:432 (2) - i want to follow the drum~ http://puu.sh/7rMOy.jpg
:arrow: 了解です!
01:08:537 (1) - i don't need sample-set normal. is sounds like weird.
:arrow: ほかの方からも要望があってたので同じく修正を
01:47:063 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - why don't follow 1/3 rhythm?
:arrow: すいません。そのままで...
:D
modありがとうございました！
修正しなかった場所もあり本当に申し訳ないです..

Sheryl wrote:

hi~ twitterで完成したと聞いたので来ました

[General]
Insane, Sylith's Insane 両方ODが一緒なのでSylith's InsaneをOD8にしませんか？
:arrow: 相談してみます。

[Insane]
00:09:168 (1) - 曲調が変わるわけでもないので緑線は不要だと思います
:arrow: okです!
00:12:168 (3,4,5) - ピアノのタタンって感じの音があるのでこの連打は少し違和感
:arrow: keepで...
00:13:905 (7) - Insaneなのでここはドラムの音を拾って5連打にしちゃって良いと思います
:arrow: すいません。最初に5連打を置くのを避けて一旦
スライダーにしてます。
00:19:747 (3) - ここはstackさせるより 00:19:274 (1) - とブランケットを取ったほうが見栄えがいいように感じます
:arrow: okです
00:20:300 (1) - 音量を一気に変えるより1/1拍ごとに下げていったほうがマッチしてると思います
僕なら 00:20:537 - 00:21:011 - 00:21:484 - に緑線を置いて下げていきます :3
:arrow: 変更しました。
00:22:116 (1,2) - 00:22:905 (2,3) - ここも重ねて置いてるのでもったいないかなーと思います
:arrow: すいません...
00:24:800 (2) - ブランケット作りませんか？
SPOILER
:arrow: okです!
00:25:590 (5) - 上のをctrl+Vでちょっとしたジャンプとか
SPOILER
:arrow: okです!
00:29:379 (1) - (周辺) せっかく他の場所と簡単に区別を作れる曲調なのでここは1/1sliderにしておきませんか？
ピアノの音を拾ってるみたいですが、曲調に対してcircleが多いような印象を受けました。
:arrow: okです!
00:33:168 (3) - 上と同じで1/1sliderを
:arrow: okです!
00:46:432 (3) - volumeを50%くらいに,　少し大きすぎると思います
:arrow: okです!
00:46:590 (4) - x392 y208あたりにおいてもう少し綺麗にブランケットを
:arrow: okです!
00:46:747 (5) - ついでにDSを2.0くらいに
:arrow: okです!
00:54:326 (4) - まっすぐに？
:arrow: okです!
00:55:116 (2,3,4) - 2のDS1.2, 3をCtrl+G, 4も同じくctrl+Gの方が僕は好きです
SPOILER
:arrow: okです!
01:08:537 (1) - ctrlG
keepで..
01:09:800 (4) - finishもあるし何かしらの楽器の音も強いのでnc
:arrow: okです!
01:11:063 (3) - ピアノの音に合わせてnc
:arrow: okです!
01:11:695 (3) - remove nc
:arrow: okです!
01:14:853 (1,2,3,4) - ちょっとoverlapな気がするのでこんな感じに
SPOILER
:arrow: keepで｡
01:17:063 (3,4,5,6) - volume40%くらいのdefaultのsoft-whitstleいれませんか？
:arrow: okです!
01:18:168 (4) - これを 01:18:326 (5) - とブランケットを取れる箇所に移動
SPOILER
:arrow: 全体的に修正を
01:21:011 (5) - nc
:arrow: okです!

思ったんですけど、spinnerに対する緑線の置き方全て揃えませんか？
どれに合わせるかはおまかせします :3
good luck!!
modありがとうございました!
修正できない箇所があり、すいません・・
あと数箇所検討してみます！

Kyubey wrote:

Hello! Mod because Satellite asked for it for m4m.

[Insane]
00:15:484 (4) - move tail to right side, will look better
:arrow: ok!
00:18:326 (3,4) - maybe make them rounded? like this
SPOILER
:arrow: ok!
00:23:379 (1) - NC?
:arrow: ok!
00:30:958 (2,3) - blanket?
:arrow: ok!
00:48:800 (2) - move it 1 grid down or few grids up, as you like
:arrow: ok!
00:55:274 (3) - and 00:55:590 (4) - maybe ctrl+G?
:arrow: ok!
01:03:168 (3,4) - swap?
:arrow: ok!
01:08:221 (3) - ctrl+G?
:arrow: sorry...
01:13:116 (3) - ^
:arrow: ok!
01:20:379 (2,3) - blanket them?
:arrow: ok!

Good mapset, good luck with rank!
thanks mod~ :3
and,Great advice thank you!!
Delis
1,433 posts
Joined May 2012
Delis
satesate san ni odosareta ;w;

[General]
  1. よくわかりませんが、sourceは曲名と同じでClover Day's　になると思うんですが、公式等を見る限り。この ' はsourceに入れちゃダメ～っていうアレがあるんでしたら無視してください :roll:
  2. EasyとNormalで、soft-slidertick2をclapとして使われてますが、実際殆ど聞こえませんし必要あるんでしょうか！自分の耳が弱いだけでしたらスイマセン、でもmusic:0で聞いても圧倒的に通常のclapと比べて小さいので、wavの音量を上げるとかして調節してみてください。
  3. just a suggestion, I suggest to consistent the kiai time as other diffs in Sylith's Insane.
[Sylith's Insane]
00:18:326 (2,3,4) - these sliders doesn't unsnapped, you must fix to 1/3 repeats.
00:41:379 (3) - move more bottom left, it looks almost stacked, and it uncomfortable to play for me.
SPOILER
01:01:905 (3,1) - As the song will be quiet since a break time, I dont think fit the song with the slider end on blue tick. I recommend to change the slider as 1/1 slider.
01:20:379 (2) - I would rather move to right side of 01:20:063 (1) - than stack on tail of 01:19:590 (5) - , also just an opinion as a player, the stack was hard to read with Hidden :\
SPOILER
01:24:958 (1) - hmm, here is kinda huge sound (hitsound as well), if I mapped this song, I would make a huge jump here. anyway look at under screenshot, 01:25:274 (2,3) - these weren't bad flow for me.
SPOILER
01:39:800 (5) - Is not issue, though you should not stack on tail of 01:39:484 (4) - imo, oh I have no reason for that, just I want to do it orz.

[Insane]
00:13:116 (2,3) - この2と3を入れ替えて、折り返しのジャンプ作ってあげたほうがここの音的にはフィットしてると個人的に思います。00:13:116 (2) - にdrum clap 付けてるのに、何もつけてない00:12:958 (1) - の下にスタックさせておくのは合わないんじゃないかと！そして00:13:432 (4,5,6,7) - これ全部選択して、00:13:432 (4,5,6) - これらを00:12:168 (3,4,5) - のところにスタックさせればいい感じに・・・！
00:42:011 - ここの緑線、2msズレちゃってるので直しましょう！
01:01:432 (2) - ここの頭のSampleset:Drum は何の意味があるんでしょう、どちらかというと01:00:958 (1) - これの尻尾に付けるような気がします。それと、01:01:432 - ここから3連打作ってあげませんか！強いはっきりとした音があるわけではないですが、微かに鳴ってますしフィットするんじゃないでしょうか。
01:16:432 (1) - ここの時点でスライダーの速度を1.0に戻しちゃっていいと思います。もう既に曲調が変わってますし（そう感じたのが自分だけだったらゴメンナサイｗ）実際プレイしてみてこうしたほうが流れが良くなると思ったので！
01:26:853 (3,4,5,6,7) - 後半の連打部分をスライダーでフォローしてますが、個人的には9連打分のstreamにしてほしかったです。両方のInsane diffでそれらしいstreamはありませんし、Short verの曲だからこそ面白くなるんじゃないかな、と思います。
01:36:958 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ここも..
01:29:063 (3) - 頭にclap~
01:35:695 - ここにclap付けてあげるための音取りにするのもいいんじゃないでしょうか、01:35:537 - ここにサークル追加、01:35:695 - から 01:35:853 までスライダーみたいな感じで！配置の一例も置いときます。
SPOILER
01:36:958 (3) - clap削除、01:37:116 - 01:37:274 - 01:37:432 - にタッタッタッという感じの音がありますしそこにclap追加してみてはいかがでしょう！2個は既に付いてますが。
01:49:590 (8) - ここの尻尾にも01:49:116 (5) - と同じヒットサウンド追加だとおもいまする

[Satellite's Hard]
  1. Gazelさん結構soft-sliderslideとか気にすると思ったけど、00:22:116 - この辺のパートはデフォルトのままでいいのかな・・・、ここは他と比べて大分静かなパートだからその分スライダーの音がうるさく聞こえます、個人的に。
01:02:221 (1) - プレイしてて思ったのが、finish付けれるくらいの音があるのになんでここにスタックさせてるんでしょう。曲的にも、多少飛ばしてあげたほうがいいですしプレイ時にやりやすくなるかと！01:00:958 (1) - の頭らへんにでも・・・
01:23:063 (3) - 恐らくですが01:22:747 (2) - から01:23:063 (3) - のspacingが狭すぎて1/2のジャンプだと勘違いする人も結構いるんじゃないでしょうか、実際に自分はやられました :| 。実際このくらいのspacingの1/2ジャンプはこのサビで結構な頻度で配置されてますし、01:22:432 (1,2) - がスタックされてるおかげでAIMに多少余裕が出来るので1/2ジャンプだと勘違いするっていうケースもあるんじゃないかと(自分はコレ)。01:23:221 (4) - このスライダーの少し右上のところに移動してみてはどうでしょう。
SPOILER
01:40:116 (1) - 01:02:221 (1) - これと同じ理由で。 x188 y352 あたりにでも！
01:42:642 (1) - ここも^と同じで少し気になったけど、上記2つとは少し違くて、うまく説明できませんが流れ的に問題無いと個人的には思うので指摘しないでおきます~_~
01:52:432 (1) - スライダーの速度を0.75くらいにしておきませんか、いきなり0.50に変えてジャンプを作っちゃうと割と初見殺しなパターンが出来上がっちゃうので...！

perfect blankets pls thank you

[Naryuga's Normal]
00:11:695 (1) - 頭のwhistleの代わりにfinishじゃないでしょうか・・！
00:16:747 (1) - ^ここも！
00:56:537 (4) - 00:54:642 (1) - ここのスライダーの後ろとかで使ってるclapと同じ音を00:56:537 (4) - の頭でも使ってますが、明らか音が違いますし区別するためにAdditions:Drumに変更しませんか！それと、00:46:747 (3) - の尻尾の音は00:56:537 (4) - と同じだと思うので似たように音を付けてみては。
00:58:432 (2) - 頭のwhistle削除？あと、00:57:168 (1) - と00:58:432 (2) - のreverseしてる部分のwhistleは無いほうが良いと個人的に思います！
01:12:642 (2) - スライダーの後ろにadd whistle!

[litoluna's Easy]
00:42:484 - 00:51:484 - 00:52:590 - 01:00:168 - ここはSampleset:Normalになってますが、Autoに戻してclapのほうが良い感じに聞こえると思います。この元々clap付いてる場所とNormalになってる場所で大した音の変化があるわけでもないし統一したほうがいいかと！
01:24:958 (1,2) - このdiffでココだけ1/2だ・・！
Sylith
722 posts
Joined September 2012
Sylith

Delis wrote:

satesate san ni odosareta ;w;

[General]
  1. よくわかりませんが、sourceは曲名と同じでClover Day's　になると思うんですが、公式等を見る限り。この ' はsourceに入れちゃダメ～っていうアレがあるんでしたら無視してください :roll:
  2. EasyとNormalで、soft-slidertick2をclapとして使われてますが、実際殆ど聞こえませんし必要あるんでしょうか！自分の耳が弱いだけでしたらスイマセン、でもmusic:0で聞いても圧倒的に通常のclapと比べて小さいので、wavの音量を上げるとかして調節してみてください。
  3. just a suggestion, I suggest to consistent the kiai time as other diffs in Sylith's Insane. - I think so too... but imo my kiai time is much better than others D: I'll discuss with lecana later
[Sylith's Insane]
00:18:326 (2,3,4) - these sliders doesn't unsnapped, you must fix to 1/3 repeats. - omg I forgot to fix this one! thx :>
00:41:379 (3) - move more bottom left, it looks almost stacked, and it uncomfortable to play for me. - aaaaaa ;-; I love this bit-unstacked placement... sorry
SPOILER
01:01:905 (3,1) - As the song will be quiet since a break time, I dont think fit the song with the slider end on blue tick. I recommend to change the slider as 1/1 slider. - I want to emphasize that finish sound D: decreased volume instead! (I'll see what other modders say)
01:20:379 (2) - I would rather move to right side of 01:20:063 (1) - than stack on tail of 01:19:590 (5) - , also just an opinion as a player, the stack was hard to read with Hidden :\ - nice! done :>
SPOILER
01:24:958 (1) - hmm, here is kinda huge sound (hitsound as well), if I mapped this song, I would make a huge jump here. anyway look at under screenshot, 01:25:274 (2,3) - these weren't bad flow for me. - I really love this part and... I think the place where should I really need to emphasize is 01:25:274 (2,3) - here. sorry D: wanna keep here
SPOILER
01:39:800 (5) - Is not issue, though you should not stack on tail of 01:39:484 (4) - imo, oh I have no reason for that, just I want to do it orz. - fixed! :>
Thanks for your mod!!! :]

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Marie.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76271
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.399998

[Metadata]
Title:Clover Day's
TitleUnicode:Clover Day's
Artist:Marie
ArtistUnicode:真理絵
Creator:Lecana
Version:Sylith's Insane
Source:Clover Days
Tags:Sylith Satellite Naryuga Dagger-Gazel litoluna sKZy eroge ALcot 10th Anniversary visual novel
BeatmapID:371178
BeatmapSetID:150422

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,62421,66516
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1590,315.789473684211,4,2,1,60,1,0
13590,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
13747,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
20695,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
21011,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
21326,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
21800,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
22116,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
29300,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
29379,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
39405,-125,4,2,0,60,0,0
39484,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
42011,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
43274,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
43432,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
45800,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
45958,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
47063,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
47379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
50221,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
50379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
51168,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
51326,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
51800,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
51958,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
53221,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
53379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
55905,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
56063,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
58274,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
58432,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
58747,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
58905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
62142,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
62221,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
67116,-125,4,2,1,20,0,0
67274,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
69800,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
73432,-125,4,2,1,40,0,0
73590,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
74774,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
74853,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
74932,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
76432,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
77063,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
77142,-100,4,2,0,35,0,0
77221,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
77300,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0
77379,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
78011,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
78168,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
80221,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,50,0,1
80379,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,70,0,1
80537,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
80695,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
82747,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
82905,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
84642,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
84800,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
87168,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
87326,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
88590,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
88747,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
89379,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
89537,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
90642,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
90800,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
97590,-125,4,2,0,50,0,0
99484,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107168,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
107274,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
107379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
107484,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
107590,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
107695,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
109747,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
109826,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
109905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
113379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
114168,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
115274,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
115905,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
116537,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
117168,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
117958,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 208,255,255
Combo2 : 206,255,206
Combo3 : 255,255,210
Combo4 : 252,203,210

[HitObjects]
256,192,9168,12,0,11221,0:0:0:0:
460,144,11379,6,0,P|464:129|471:116,5,30
460,228,11695,6,0,B|416:216|416:216|332:212,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,12011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
260,192,12168,2,0,P|256:140|252:92,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,12484,1,0,3:0:0:0:
100,32,12642,2,0,P|112:112|108:216,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
56,368,13116,5,8,0:3:0:0:
16,208,13274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,272,13432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,272,13511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,13590,2,0,P|240:268|304:248,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,124,13905,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,13984,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,14063,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,14142,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,14221,6,0,L|408:232,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,14537,1,0,3:0:0:0:
496,332,14695,2,0,P|456:324|400:292,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,124,15011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
508,164,15168,2,0,P|440:216|340:184,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,15642,5,2,0:0:0:0:
280,92,15800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,196,15958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,220,16116,1,8,3:2:0:0:
160,224,16195,1,0,3:0:0:0:
144,228,16274,1,2,3:0:0:0:
128,232,16353,1,0,3:0:0:0:
112,236,16432,2,0,L|79:110,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,340,16747,6,0,L|224:356,1,180,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
344,236,17221,2,0,L|252:244,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,344,17537,1,0,3:0:0:0:
436,284,17695,2,0,P|440:180|494:93,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,18247,5,0,3:0:0:0:
256,136,18326,2,0,L|312:156,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
372,88,18642,2,0,L|360:28,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
264,8,18958,2,0,L|205:58,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
148,132,19274,6,0,P|136:192|148:292,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,19590,1,0,3:0:0:0:
296,344,19747,2,0,P|304:296|300:248,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,368,20063,1,0,3:0:0:0:
384,368,20221,2,0,P|384:268|368:176,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,189,20695,5,8,0:3:0:0:
232,284,21011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,88,21326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,88,21484,2,0,B|184:68|136:104|36:72,1,180,8|4,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,88,22116,6,0,P|62:127|60:184,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,228,22432,2,0,P|160:192|163:156,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,22747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,22905,2,0,P|136:316|194:317,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,228,23221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,324,23379,2,0,P|292:320|235:249,2,144,2|2|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,240,24168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
460,240,24326,2,0,P|444:308|460:384,2,144,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,140,25116,2,0,P|420:148|388:168,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,25432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,172,25590,6,0,L|316:192,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,55,25905,2,0,L|280:75,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,104,26221,2,0,P|120:172|164:256,2,144,2|0|4,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,320,27168,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,320,27326,2,0,B|144:332|180:320|180:320|220:308|256:328,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,316,27800,2,0,P|376:268|380:232,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,136,28116,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,232,28274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,228,28432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,84,28590,2,0,P|349:124|360:176,1,72,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
260,16,28905,2,0,L|236:100,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,240,29221,5,2,0:0:0:0:
148,240,29300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,240,29379,2,0,P|120:164|148:92,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,164,29853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,305,30011,2,0,L|244:397,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,260,30326,2,0,L|335:188,1,72
488,276,30642,6,0,P|448:256|427:237,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,120,30958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,48,31116,2,0,P|508:120|484:204,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,120,31590,2,0,L|292:112,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,236,31905,6,0,P|276:240|336:200,2,144,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,161,32695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,256,32853,2,0,L|92:344,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,216,33168,6,0,P|42:171|129:163,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,244,33642,2,0,L|171:234,1,72,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
336,168,33958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,332,34116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,244,34274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,244,34432,6,0,P|440:160|416:104,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,44,34905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,35063,2,0,P|244:108|252:164,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,35379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,112,35537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,35695,5,6,0:0:0:0:
340,180,36011,2,0,L|344:268,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,340,36326,2,0,L|456:252,1,72,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,100,36642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
511,171,36800,6,0,P|471:175|431:170,1,72,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,88,37116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,37274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,176,37432,2,0,P|236:244|228:352,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,376,37905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,196,38063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,284,38221,6,0,P|92:300|168:268,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,38695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,176,38853,2,0,P|275:227|280:298,1,144,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,236,39326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,236,39405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,236,39484,6,0,L|381:249,1,72,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,348,39800,2,0,L|438:334,1,72
488,136,40116,2,0,L|312:168,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,310,40590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,310,40668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,310,40747,6,0,P|205:234|233:170,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,244,41221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,316,41379,2,0,P|184:312|124:316,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,216,41695,2,0,P|64:228|119:222,1,108,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,223,42011,6,0,L|122:123,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,36,42326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,128,42484,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,156,42642,2,0,P|252:156|300:148,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,68,42958,5,2,0:0:0:0:
376,216,43116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,64,43274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,164,43432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,304,43590,2,0,P|332:300|276:228,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
120,320,44063,2,0,P|164:316|220:324,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,380,44379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,232,44537,6,0,P|184:184|188:136,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,64,44853,2,0,P|348:112|344:160,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,248,45168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,45326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,156,45484,2,0,P|421:201|388:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,253,45800,6,0,P|245:242|305:252,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,336,46116,2,8,P|404:347|343:336,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,254,46432,2,0,P|204:296|185:363,1,90,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,222,46747,2,0,P|104:125|93:14,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,328,47379,5,0,0:0:0:0:
63,328,47537,2,0,P|156:316|215:238,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,352,48011,2,0,P|316:348|272:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,256,48326,5,8,0:0:0:0:
488,209,48484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,356,48642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,256,48800,2,0,L|354:158,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
464,136,49116,2,0,L|458:47,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,52,49432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,52,49511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,52,49590,6,0,P|240:100|132:80,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,31,50063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,149,50221,2,0,L|58:239,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,369,50537,2,0,L|164:280,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,168,50853,5,8,0:0:0:0:
164,281,51011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
334,257,51168,1,12,0:0:0:0:
255,328,51326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,188,51484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,328,51642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
278,168,51800,2,0,L|290:55,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,30,52116,6,0,P|405:126|406:214,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,328,52590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,380,52747,2,0,P|344:304|352:268,1,90
405,208,53063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,248,53221,6,0,L|140:232,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,360,53537,2,0,L|176:344,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,180,53853,2,0,P|76:232|84:284,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,32,54326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,192,54484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,104,54642,6,0,B|94:84|134:104|134:104|178:124|222:104,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,55116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,48,55274,2,0,P|340:112|336:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,232,55590,2,0,P|435:196|450:154,1,90
492,312,55905,2,0,P|400:340|300:292,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,56379,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,112,56537,2,0,P|300:160|292:240,1,90,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,56853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
228,320,56932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,57011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
228,320,57090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,57168,6,0,P|176:328|124:316,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,224,57484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,132,57642,2,0,P|72:112|0:172,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,58116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,58274,6,0,L|256:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,58590,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,24,58747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,172,58905,2,0,P|396:184|460:176,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
461,329,59221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,268,59379,2,0,P|304:264|228:284,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,336,59695,6,0,P|232:264|228:148,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,292,60168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,292,60326,2,8,P|60:340|72:400,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,60642,2,0,P|152:160|140:100,1,90,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
146,119,60879,1,0,3:0:0:0:
146,119,60958,5,4,3:0:0:0:
56,168,61116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,60,61274,2,0,L|272:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
266,148,61511,1,0,3:0:0:0:
266,148,61590,5,8,0:3:0:0:
324,264,61747,1,8,0:3:0:0:
504,188,61905,2,0,L|356:168,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,166,62221,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,264,67116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,264,67195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,264,67274,2,0,P|148:248|216:264,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,260,67747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,164,67905,2,0,P|144:120|152:72,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,52,68221,2,0,P|264:96|256:144,1,72
280,160,68458,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,68537,2,0,L|356:152,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,256,68853,2,0,L|308:271,2,144,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,69642,5,0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,69721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,69800,2,0,P|456:160|420:164,1,72,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,70116,2,0,P|315:109|349:96,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,20,70432,2,0,P|452:108|432:188,1,144,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,71063,6,0,P|268:220|352:276,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,336,71537,2,0,L|444:252,1,72,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,179,71853,2,0,L|335:250,1,72
249,323,72168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
237,336,72247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,350,72326,2,0,L|128:327,1,72,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,360,72642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,72800,2,0,L|188:144,1,72,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,72,73116,2,0,L|92:143,1,72
104,252,73432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,152,73590,6,0,P|251:154|328:132,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,134,74063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,52,74221,2,0,P|334:40|295:40,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,224,74537,2,0,P|404:196|422:159,1,72
425,153,74774,5,2,0:0:0:0:
425,153,74853,2,0,L|414:311,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,296,75326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,236,75484,2,0,L|273:142,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,76,75800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
171,271,75958,1,12,0:0:0:0:
171,271,76432,6,0,L|267:247,1,90
258,250,76668,1,0,3:0:0:0:
258,250,76747,1,8,3:0:0:0:
460,284,76905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,352,77063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,315,77142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,273,77221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,233,77300,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,203,77379,6,0,P|400:140|392:72,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,77695,2,0,P|246:156|198:168,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,60,78011,2,0,P|112:71|161:75,1,99.0000030212403,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,78326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,160,78484,6,0,P|92:248|116:352,1,198.000006042481,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,312,78958,2,0,P|300:260|288:200,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,79274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,256,79432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,352,79590,2,0,P|460:312|520:200,1,198.000006042481,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,66,80063,6,0,P|407:122|415:190,1,99.0000030212403,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
512,104,80379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,196,80537,2,0,P|276:192|220:152,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,128,80853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,28,81011,6,0,P|180:136|152:252,1,198.000006042481,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,304,81484,2,0,P|68:300|124:312,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,356,81800,2,0,P|240:336|208:288,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,82116,2,0,L|296:280,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,384,82432,6,0,L|437:186,1,198.000006042481,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,82905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,44,83221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,83379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,156,83537,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,83695,6,0,P|204:40|140:48,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,216,84011,2,0,P|148:212|200:116,1,198.000006042481,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,116,84484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,304,84642,2,0,P|136:300|200:268,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,348,84958,6,0,P|320:296|328:236,1,99.0000030212403,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,85274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,352,85432,2,0,P|444:236|428:144,1,198.000006042481,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,85905,1,8,0:3:0:0:
142,105,86063,6,0,P|206:165|310:146,1,198.000006042481,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,60,86537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,86695,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,256,86774,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,256,86853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
496,144,87011,2,0,L|376:132,1,99.0000030212403,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,87326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,352,87484,6,0,P|456:308|444:236,1,99.0000030212403,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,87800,2,0,P|304:128|316:200,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,344,88116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,168,88274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,256,88432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,256,88590,6,0,P|88:224|36:112,1,198.000006042481,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,136,89063,2,2,P|152:88|160:28,1,99.0000030212403
256,196,89379,2,0,P|280:152|344:120,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,89695,2,0,B|336:284|384:328|448:292,1,148.50000453186,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,296,90011,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,212,90168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,80,90326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
510,171,90484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,212,90642,2,0,L|238:194,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,88,90958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,144,91116,6,0,P|116:184|156:300,1,198.000006042481,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,368,91590,2,0,L|36:248,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,348,91905,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,91984,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,92063,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,92142,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,92221,6,0,L|204:284,1,49.5000015106202,8|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
264,200,92379,2,0,L|278:247,1,49.5000015106202,8|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
292,344,92537,6,0,P|342:336|396:312,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,252,92853,2,0,P|493:295|488:364,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,196,93168,2,0,P|383:146|372:98,1,99.0000030212403,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,36,93484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,200,93642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,136,93800,6,0,P|128:140|188:124,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,323,94116,2,0,P|191:279|147:235,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,112,94432,2,0,P|280:151|264:211,1,99.0000030212403,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,316,94747,2,0,P|395:276|411:216,1,99.0000030212403,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,116,95063,6,0,B|136:152|112:84|22:115,2,198.000006042481,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,95853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,296,96011,2,0,P|64:248|72:197,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,96326,6,0,P|280:352|360:268,2,198.000006042481,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,168,97116,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,296,97274,1,8,0:3:0:0:
180,252,97432,1,4,0:3:0:0:
200,128,97590,6,0,P|268:112|348:160,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,308,98063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,308,98221,2,0,P|376:324|296:276,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,220,98695,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,220,98853,2,0,P|168:236|124:308,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,376,99326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,288,99484,2,0,L|8:168,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,176,99800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,108,100116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
260,313,100432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,192,100747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,80,101063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,24,101221,1,4,3:0:0:0:
328,80,101379,6,0,P|315:160|332:280,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,344,101853,1,0,0:3:0:0:
492,344,101932,1,0,0:3:0:0:
492,344,102011,2,0,P|440:324|384:320,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,312,102326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,380,102484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,228,102642,6,0,P|204:180|200:120,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,56,102958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,176,103116,2,0,P|64:172|120:148,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,103432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,88,103590,2,0,P|292:180|304:284,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,266,104063,5,2,0:0:0:0:
488,220,104221,2,0,P|440:212|388:212,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,352,104537,1,2,3:2:0:0:
290,365,104616,1,0,3:2:0:0:
334,360,104695,1,2,3:2:0:0:
371,335,104774,1,0,3:2:0:0:
396,298,104853,1,4,3:2:0:0:
204,252,105011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,252,105168,6,0,L|92:232,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,292,105484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,152,105642,2,0,L|316:132,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,200,105958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,64,106116,6,0,P|100:144|136:272,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,236,106590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,263,106747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,352,106905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,183,107063,2,0,L|238:107,2,60,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,324,107379,2,0,L|218:381,2,60,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,236,107695,5,4,0:0:0:0:
284,263,107853,2,0,P|337:262|401:239,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,324,108168,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,168,108326,2,0,P|372:128|396:64,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,108642,2,0,B|144:76|96:112|29:88,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,256,109116,6,0,P|176:208|168:156,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,208,109432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,360,109590,2,0,P|212:348|252:308,1,90,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,168,109905,2,0,P|332:224|336:264,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,360,110221,6,0,P|443:270|437:180,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,48,110695,2,0,P|227:100|210:197,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,111168,2,0,P|292:288|248:260,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,292,111484,5,8,0:0:0:0:
92,292,111590,1,0,3:0:0:0:
92,292,111695,1,2,3:0:0:0:
92,292,111800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,292,111905,1,0,3:0:0:0:
92,292,112011,1,2,3:0:0:0:
92,292,112116,6,0,L|112:216,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,149,112432,2,0,L|207:207,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,315,112747,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112826,12,2,117958,0:0:0:0:
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

Delis wrote:

satesate san ni odosareta ;w;

[General]
  1. よくわかりませんが、sourceは曲名と同じでClover Day's　になると思うんですが、公式等を見る限り。この ' はsourceに入れちゃダメ～っていうアレがあるんでしたら無視してください :roll:
  2. EasyとNormalで、soft-slidertick2をclapとして使われてますが、実際殆ど聞こえませんし必要あるんでしょうか！自分の耳が弱いだけでしたらスイマセン、でもmusic:0で聞いても圧倒的に通常のclapと比べて小さいので、wavの音量を上げるとかして調節してみてください。
  3. just a suggestion, I suggest to consistent the kiai time as other diffs in Sylith's Insane.

[Satellite's Hard]
  1. Gazelさん結構soft-sliderslideとか気にすると思ったけど、00:22:116 - この辺のパートはデフォルトのままでいいのかな・・・、ここは他と比べて大分静かなパートだからその分スライダーの音がうるさく聞こえます、個人的に。
なおした
01:02:221 (1) - プレイしてて思ったのが、finish付けれるくらいの音があるのになんでここにスタックさせてるんでしょう。曲的にも、多少飛ばしてあげたほうがいいですしプレイ時にやりやすくなるかと！01:00:958 (1) - の頭らへんにでも・・・　これはこのみです
01:23:063 (3) - 恐らくですが01:22:747 (2) - から01:23:063 (3) - のspacingが狭すぎて1/2のジャンプだと勘違いする人も結構いるんじゃないでしょうか、実際に自分はやられました :| 。実際このくらいのspacingの1/2ジャンプはこのサビで結構な頻度で配置されてますし、01:22:432 (1,2) - がスタックされてるおかげでAIMに多少余裕が出来るので1/2ジャンプだと勘違いするっていうケースもあるんじゃないかと(自分はコレ)。01:23:221 (4) - このスライダーの少し右上のところに移動してみてはどうでしょう。　大丈夫だと思うの
SPOILER
　
01:40:116 (1) - 01:02:221 (1) - これと同じ理由で。 x188 y352 あたりにでも！　これもあえてこういうところにおいてます！
01:42:642 (1) - ここも^と同じで少し気になったけど、上記2つとは少し違くて、うまく説明できませんが流れ的に問題無いと個人的には思うので指摘しないでおきます~_~　~_~
01:52:432 (1) - スライダーの速度を0.75くらいにしておきませんか、いきなり0.50に変えてジャンプを作っちゃうと割と初見殺しなパターンが出来上がっちゃうので...！
ここはさすがにひどいから0.75でとりあえずかえてみました

perfect blankets pls thank you
thanks pro mod you should be BAT
litoluna
1,074 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna

Delis wrote:

satesate san ni odosareta ;w;

[General]
  1. よくわかりませんが、sourceは曲名と同じでClover Day's　になると思うんですが、公式等を見る限り。この ' はsourceに入れちゃダメ～っていうアレがあるんでしたら無視してください :roll:
  2. EasyとNormalで、soft-slidertick2をclapとして使われてますが、実際殆ど聞こえませんし必要あるんでしょうか！自分の耳が弱いだけでしたらスイマセン、でもmusic:0で聞いても圧倒的に通常のclapと比べて小さいので、wavの音量を上げるとかして調節してみてください。
    :arrow:いつかのアプデで全く聞こえなくなってる・・・10%程上げておきました。
  3. just a suggestion, I suggest to consistent the kiai time as other diffs in Sylith's Insane.
[litoluna's Easy]
00:42:484 - 00:51:484 - 00:52:590 - 01:00:168 - ここはSampleset:Normalになってますが、Autoに戻してclapのほうが良い感じに聞こえると思います。この元々clap付いてる場所とNormalになってる場所で大した音の変化があるわけでもないし統一したほうがいいかと！
:arrow:okです！
01:24:958 (1,2) - このdiffでココだけ1/2だ・・！ dadadadadada
DelisさんありがとうございMashita!!!!!!
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga

Delis wrote:

satesate san ni odosareta ;w; - nani sore kowai yanki-kayo ;;;

[General]
  1. よくわかりませんが、sourceは曲名と同じでClover Day's　になると思うんですが、公式等を見る限り。この ' はsourceに入れちゃダメ～っていうアレがあるんでしたら無視してください :roll: - 丸投げします
  2. EasyとNormalで、soft-slidertick2をclapとして使われてますが、実際殆ど聞こえませんし必要あるんでしょうか！自分の耳が弱いだけでしたらスイマセン、でもmusic:0で聞いても圧倒的に通常のclapと比べて小さいので、wavの音量を上げるとかして調節してみてください。 - 最近のアップデートでslidertickの音がどのmapでもまったくといっていいほど聞こえなくなったのがバグ説信じてこのままにしておきます...
  3. just a suggestion, I suggest to consistent the kiai time as other diffs in Sylith's Insane. - done
[Naryuga's Normal]
00:11:695 (1) - 頭のwhistleの代わりにfinishじゃないでしょうか・・！　- よくよく聞いてみたらなんでfinish置かなかったのかわからなくなってきました。
00:16:747 (1) - ^ここも！　- ok
00:56:537 (4) - 00:54:642 (1) - ここのスライダーの後ろとかで使ってるclapと同じ音を00:56:537 (4) - の頭でも使ってますが、明らか音が違いますし区別するためにAdditions:Drumに変更しませんか！それと、00:46:747 (3) - の尻尾の音は00:56:537 (4) - と同じだと思うので似たように音を付けてみては。- このﾊﾟﾝｯともなんともいえない音何でしょうかね……　00:56:537 (4) - はDrum + Finisher にしました。 ただ00:46:747 (3) - はサークルなので尻尾も何も……って感じでちょっとよくわからなかったのでそのままです
00:58:432 (2) - 頭のwhistle削除？あと、00:57:168 (1) - と00:58:432 (2) - のreverseしてる部分のwhistleは無いほうが良いと個人的に思います！ - both done
01:12:642 (2) - スライダーの後ろにadd whistle! - ok
Thank ゅ

Update: http://puu.sh/7wNJL.osu
Sylith
722 posts
Joined September 2012
Sylith
please update mine together ;_; sorry


SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Marie.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76271
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.399998

[Metadata]
Title:Clover Day's
TitleUnicode:Clover Day's
Artist:Marie
ArtistUnicode:真理絵
Creator:Lecana
Version:Sylith's Insane
Source:Clover Days
Tags:Sylith Satellite Naryuga Dagger-Gazel litoluna sKZy eroge ALcot 10th Anniversary visual novel
BeatmapID:371178
BeatmapSetID:150422

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,62421,66516
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1590,315.789473684211,4,2,1,60,1,0
13590,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
13747,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
20695,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
21011,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
21326,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
21800,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
22116,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
29300,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
29379,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
39405,-125,4,2,0,60,0,0
39484,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
42011,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
43274,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
43432,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
45800,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
45958,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
47063,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
47379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
50221,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
50379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
51168,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
51326,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
51800,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
51958,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
53221,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
53379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
55905,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
56063,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
58274,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
58432,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
58747,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
58905,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
62142,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
62221,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
67116,-125,4,2,1,20,0,0
67274,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
69800,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
72168,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
72326,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
73432,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
73590,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
74695,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
74853,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
76432,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
77063,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
77142,-100,4,2,0,35,0,0
77221,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
77300,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0
77379,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
78011,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
78168,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
80221,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,50,0,1
80379,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,70,0,1
80537,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
80695,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
82747,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
82905,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
84642,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
84800,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
87168,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
87326,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
88590,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
88747,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
89379,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
89537,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
90642,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,60,0,1
90800,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
97590,-125,4,2,0,50,0,0
99484,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
107168,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
107274,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
107379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
107484,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
107590,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
107695,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
109747,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
109826,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
109905,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
113379,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
114168,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
115274,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
115905,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
116537,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
117168,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
117958,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 208,255,255
Combo2 : 206,255,206
Combo3 : 255,255,210
Combo4 : 252,203,210

[HitObjects]
256,192,9168,12,0,11221,0:0:0:0:
460,144,11379,6,0,P|464:129|471:116,5,30
460,228,11695,6,0,B|416:216|416:216|332:212,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,12011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
260,192,12168,2,0,P|256:140|252:92,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,12484,1,0,3:0:0:0:
100,32,12642,2,0,P|112:112|108:216,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
56,368,13116,5,8,0:3:0:0:
16,208,13274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,272,13432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,272,13511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,13590,2,0,P|240:268|304:248,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,124,13905,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,13984,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,14063,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,14142,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,124,14221,6,0,L|408:232,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,14537,1,0,3:0:0:0:
496,332,14695,2,0,P|456:324|400:292,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,124,15011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
508,164,15168,2,0,P|440:216|340:184,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,15642,5,2,0:0:0:0:
280,92,15800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,196,15958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,220,16116,1,8,3:2:0:0:
160,224,16195,1,0,3:0:0:0:
144,228,16274,1,2,3:0:0:0:
128,232,16353,1,0,3:0:0:0:
112,236,16432,2,0,L|79:110,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,340,16747,6,0,L|224:356,1,180,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
344,236,17221,2,0,L|252:244,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,344,17537,1,0,3:0:0:0:
436,284,17695,2,0,P|440:180|494:93,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,18168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,18247,1,0,3:0:0:0:
256,136,18326,2,0,L|312:156,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
372,88,18642,2,0,L|360:28,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
264,8,18958,2,0,L|205:58,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
148,132,19274,6,0,P|136:192|148:292,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,296,19590,1,0,3:0:0:0:
296,344,19747,2,0,P|304:296|300:248,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,368,20063,1,0,3:0:0:0:
384,368,20221,2,0,P|384:268|368:176,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,189,20695,5,8,0:3:0:0:
232,284,21011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,88,21326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,88,21484,2,0,B|184:68|136:104|36:72,1,180,8|4,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,88,22116,6,0,P|62:127|60:184,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,228,22432,2,0,P|160:192|163:156,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,22747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,22905,2,0,P|136:316|194:317,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,228,23221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,324,23379,2,0,P|292:320|235:249,2,144,2|2|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,240,24168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
460,240,24326,2,0,P|444:308|460:384,2,144,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,140,25116,2,0,P|420:148|388:168,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,25432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,172,25590,6,0,L|316:192,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,55,25905,2,0,L|280:75,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,104,26221,2,0,P|120:172|164:256,2,144,2|0|4,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,320,27168,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,320,27326,2,0,B|144:332|180:320|180:320|220:308|256:328,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,316,27800,2,0,P|376:268|380:232,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,136,28116,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,232,28274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,228,28432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,84,28590,2,0,P|349:124|360:176,1,72,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
260,16,28905,2,0,L|236:100,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,240,29221,5,2,0:0:0:0:
148,240,29300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,240,29379,2,0,P|120:164|148:92,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,164,29853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,305,30011,2,0,L|244:397,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,260,30326,2,0,L|335:188,1,72
488,276,30642,6,0,P|448:256|427:237,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,120,30958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,48,31116,2,0,P|508:120|484:204,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,120,31590,2,0,L|292:112,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,236,31905,6,0,P|276:240|336:200,2,144,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,161,32695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,256,32853,2,0,L|92:344,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,216,33168,6,0,P|42:171|129:163,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,244,33642,2,0,L|171:234,1,72,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
336,168,33958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,332,34116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,244,34274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,244,34432,6,0,P|440:160|416:104,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,44,34905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,35063,2,0,P|244:108|252:164,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,35379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,112,35537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,35695,5,6,0:0:0:0:
340,180,36011,2,0,L|344:268,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,340,36326,2,0,L|456:252,1,72,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,100,36642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
511,171,36800,6,0,P|471:175|431:170,1,72,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,88,37116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,37274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,176,37432,2,0,P|236:244|228:352,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,376,37905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,196,38063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,284,38221,6,0,P|92:300|168:268,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,38695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,176,38853,2,0,P|275:227|280:298,1,144,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,236,39326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,236,39405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,236,39484,6,0,L|381:249,1,72,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,348,39800,2,0,L|438:334,1,72
488,136,40116,2,0,L|312:168,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,310,40590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,310,40668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,310,40747,6,0,P|205:234|233:170,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,244,41221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,316,41379,2,0,P|184:312|124:316,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,216,41695,2,0,P|64:228|119:222,1,108,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,223,42011,6,0,L|122:123,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,36,42326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,128,42484,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,156,42642,2,0,P|252:156|300:148,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,68,42958,5,2,0:0:0:0:
376,216,43116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,64,43274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,164,43432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,304,43590,2,0,P|332:300|276:228,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
120,320,44063,2,0,P|164:316|220:324,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,380,44379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,232,44537,6,0,P|184:184|188:136,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,64,44853,2,0,P|348:112|344:160,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,248,45168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,45326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,156,45484,2,0,P|421:201|388:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,253,45800,6,0,P|245:242|305:252,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,336,46116,2,8,P|404:347|343:336,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,254,46432,2,0,P|204:296|185:363,1,90,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,222,46747,2,0,P|104:125|93:14,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,328,47379,5,0,0:0:0:0:
63,328,47537,2,0,P|156:316|215:238,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,352,48011,2,0,P|316:348|272:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,256,48326,5,8,0:0:0:0:
488,209,48484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,356,48642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,256,48800,2,0,L|354:158,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
464,136,49116,2,0,L|458:47,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,52,49432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,52,49511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,52,49590,6,0,P|240:100|132:80,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,31,50063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,149,50221,2,0,L|58:239,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,369,50537,2,0,L|164:280,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,168,50853,5,8,0:0:0:0:
164,281,51011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,256,51168,1,12,0:0:0:0:
255,328,51326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,188,51484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,328,51642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,168,51800,2,0,L|288:55,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,30,52116,6,0,P|405:126|406:214,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,328,52590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,380,52747,2,0,P|344:304|352:268,1,90
405,208,53063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,248,53221,6,0,L|140:232,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,360,53537,2,0,L|176:344,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,180,53853,2,0,P|76:232|84:284,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,32,54326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,192,54484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,104,54642,6,0,B|94:84|134:104|134:104|178:124|222:104,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,55116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,48,55274,2,0,P|340:112|336:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,232,55590,2,0,P|435:196|450:154,1,90
492,312,55905,2,0,P|400:340|300:292,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,56379,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,112,56537,2,0,P|300:160|292:240,1,90,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,56853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
228,320,56932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,57011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
228,320,57090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,57168,6,0,P|176:328|124:316,1,90,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,224,57484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,132,57642,2,0,P|72:112|0:172,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,58116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,58274,6,0,L|256:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,58590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,24,58747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,172,58905,2,0,P|396:184|460:176,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
461,329,59221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,268,59379,2,0,P|304:264|228:284,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,336,59695,6,0,P|232:264|228:148,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,292,60168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,292,60326,2,8,P|60:340|72:400,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,60642,2,0,P|152:160|140:100,1,90,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
146,119,60879,1,0,3:0:0:0:
146,119,60958,5,4,3:0:0:0:
56,168,61116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,60,61274,2,0,L|272:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
266,148,61511,1,0,3:0:0:0:
266,148,61590,5,8,0:3:0:0:
324,264,61747,1,8,0:3:0:0:
504,188,61905,2,0,L|356:168,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,166,62221,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,264,67116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,264,67195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,264,67274,2,0,P|148:248|216:264,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,260,67747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,164,67905,2,0,P|144:120|152:72,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,52,68221,2,0,P|264:96|256:144,1,72
280,160,68458,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,68537,2,0,L|356:152,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,256,68853,2,0,L|308:271,2,144,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,69642,5,0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,69721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,69800,2,0,P|456:160|420:164,1,72,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,112,70116,2,0,P|315:109|349:96,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,20,70432,2,0,P|452:108|432:188,1,144,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,71063,6,0,P|268:220|352:276,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,336,71537,2,0,L|444:252,1,72,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,179,71853,2,0,L|335:250,1,72
249,323,72168,5,2,0:0:0:0:
237,336,72247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,350,72326,2,0,L|128:327,1,72,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,360,72642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,72800,2,0,L|188:144,1,72,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,72,73116,2,0,L|92:143,1,72
104,252,73432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,148,73590,6,0,P|255:150|332:128,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,130,74063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,48,74221,2,0,P|338:36|299:36,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,220,74537,2,0,P|408:192|426:155,1,72
429,149,74774,5,2,0:0:0:0:
429,149,74853,2,0,L|418:307,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,292,75326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,236,75484,2,0,L|273:142,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,76,75800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
171,271,75958,1,12,0:0:0:0:
171,271,76432,6,0,L|267:247,1,90
258,250,76668,1,0,3:0:0:0:
258,250,76747,1,8,3:0:0:0:
460,284,76905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,352,77063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,315,77142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,273,77221,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,233,77300,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,203,77379,6,0,P|400:140|392:72,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,77695,2,0,P|246:156|198:168,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,60,78011,2,0,P|112:71|161:75,1,99.0000030212403,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,78326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,160,78484,6,0,P|92:248|116:352,1,198.000006042481,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,312,78958,2,0,P|300:260|288:200,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,79274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,256,79432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,352,79590,2,0,P|460:312|520:200,1,198.000006042481,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,66,80063,6,0,P|407:122|415:190,1,99.0000030212403,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
512,104,80379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,196,80537,2,0,P|276:192|220:152,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,128,80853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,28,81011,6,0,P|180:136|152:252,1,198.000006042481,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,304,81484,2,0,P|68:300|124:312,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,356,81800,2,0,P|240:336|208:288,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,82116,2,0,L|296:280,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,384,82432,6,0,L|437:186,1,198.000006042481,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,82905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,44,83221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,83379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,156,83537,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,83695,6,0,P|204:40|140:48,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,216,84011,2,0,P|148:212|200:116,1,198.000006042481,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,116,84484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,304,84642,2,0,P|136:300|200:268,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,348,84958,6,0,P|320:296|328:236,1,99.0000030212403,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,85274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,352,85432,2,0,P|444:236|428:144,1,198.000006042481,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,85905,1,8,0:3:0:0:
142,105,86063,6,0,P|206:165|310:146,1,198.000006042481,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,60,86537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,86695,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,256,86774,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,256,86853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
496,144,87011,2,0,L|376:132,1,99.0000030212403,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,87326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,352,87484,6,0,P|456:308|444:236,1,99.0000030212403,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,87800,2,0,P|304:128|316:200,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,344,88116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,168,88274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,256,88432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,256,88590,6,0,P|88:224|36:112,1,198.000006042481,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,136,89063,2,2,P|152:88|160:28,1,99.0000030212403
256,196,89379,2,0,P|280:152|344:120,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,89695,2,0,B|336:284|384:328|448:292,1,148.50000453186,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,296,90011,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,212,90168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,80,90326,1,8,0:0:0:0:
510,171,90484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,212,90642,2,0,L|238:194,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,88,90958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,144,91116,6,0,P|116:184|156:300,1,198.000006042481,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,368,91590,2,0,L|36:248,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,348,91905,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,91984,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,92063,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,92142,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,348,92221,6,0,L|204:284,1,49.5000015106202,8|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
264,200,92379,2,0,L|278:247,1,49.5000015106202,8|0,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
292,344,92537,6,0,P|342:336|396:312,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,252,92853,2,0,P|493:295|488:364,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,196,93168,2,0,P|383:146|372:98,1,99.0000030212403,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,36,93484,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,200,93642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,136,93800,6,0,P|128:140|188:124,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,323,94116,2,0,P|191:279|147:235,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,112,94432,2,0,P|280:151|264:211,1,99.0000030212403,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,316,94747,2,0,P|395:276|411:216,1,99.0000030212403,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,116,95063,6,0,B|136:152|112:84|22:115,2,198.000006042481,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,95853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,296,96011,2,0,P|64:248|72:197,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,96326,6,0,P|280:352|360:268,2,198.000006042481,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,168,97116,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,296,97274,1,8,0:3:0:0:
180,252,97432,1,4,0:3:0:0:
200,128,97590,6,0,P|268:112|348:160,1,144,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,308,98063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,308,98221,2,0,P|376:324|296:276,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,220,98695,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,220,98853,2,0,P|168:236|124:308,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,376,99326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,288,99484,2,0,L|8:168,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,176,99800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,108,100116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
260,313,100432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,192,100747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,80,101063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,24,101221,1,4,3:0:0:0:
328,80,101379,6,0,P|315:160|332:280,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,344,101853,1,0,0:3:0:0:
492,344,101932,1,0,0:3:0:0:
492,344,102011,2,0,P|440:324|384:320,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,312,102326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,380,102484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,228,102642,6,0,P|204:180|200:120,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,56,102958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,176,103116,2,0,P|64:172|120:148,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,103432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,88,103590,2,0,P|292:180|304:284,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,266,104063,5,2,0:0:0:0:
488,220,104221,2,0,P|440:212|388:212,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,352,104537,1,2,3:2:0:0:
290,365,104616,1,0,3:2:0:0:
334,360,104695,1,2,3:2:0:0:
371,335,104774,1,0,3:2:0:0:
396,298,104853,1,4,3:2:0:0:
204,252,105011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,252,105168,6,0,L|92:232,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,292,105484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,152,105642,2,0,L|316:132,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,200,105958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,64,106116,6,0,P|100:144|136:272,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,236,106590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,263,106747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,352,106905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,183,107063,2,0,L|238:107,2,60,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,324,107379,2,0,L|218:381,2,60,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,236,107695,5,4,0:0:0:0:
284,263,107853,2,0,P|337:262|401:239,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,324,108168,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,168,108326,2,0,P|372:128|396:64,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,108642,2,0,B|144:76|96:112|29:88,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,256,109116,6,0,P|176:208|168:156,1,90,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,208,109432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,360,109590,2,0,P|212:348|252:308,1,90,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,168,109905,2,0,P|332:224|336:264,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,360,110221,6,0,P|443:270|437:180,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,48,110695,2,0,P|227:100|210:197,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,111168,2,0,P|292:288|248:260,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,292,111484,5,8,0:0:0:0:
92,292,111590,1,0,3:0:0:0:
92,292,111695,1,2,3:0:0:0:
92,292,111800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,292,111905,1,0,3:0:0:0:
92,292,112011,1,2,3:0:0:0:
92,292,112116,6,0,L|112:216,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,149,112432,2,0,L|207:207,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,315,112747,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,112826,12,2,117958,0:0:0:0:
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
P o M u T a
こんにちは。(m;_ _)mﾍﾟｺ　

[litoluna's Easy]
  1. 01:50:932 (3) - (x:38 y:298)に移動。もう少し(2)を綺麗に囲むような場所に移動させてあげると良いと思いました。
[Naryuga's Normal]
  1. 00:09:168 (1) - Endを00:10:747にしてみませんか。個人的に今の状態ではあまり曲に合ってないように感じたので、確実なpianoの音に合わせたいところです。更に00:11:379 - add noteでも良いかもしれません。
  2. 00:18:642　(3) - normalで1/4を2回reverseさせるというこのような音取りは少し難しい印象にも思えました。それが十分簡単だと断言できるならそれまでです。
  3. 00:50:537 (1) - add whistleとかどうでしょう。音聴く限りfitするdrum音が鳴ってます。
  4. 01:47:063 (4) - さっきのと同じ。
  5. 01:47:695 (1) - add finish slider head.曲中にもシンバルが鳴ってますし、(2)でもfinishが追加されておりより良く聴こえると思います。
  6. 01:51:800 (3) - さっきのと同じ。
[Gazel's Hard]
  1. 01:44:537 (3) - sliderheadをSampleset Normalかadd clap。音楽聴くとdrumの音が印象にあるパートで、(4)のslider headにも付いてるんで、より良いsoundになります。
[Insane]
  1. 00:42:011 - unsnapper green lineです。00:42:009となっていました。
  2. 01:37:590 - volume50%まで落としてみませんか？雰囲気的にも合うと思うし緑線結構使ってるみたいだけど、ここだけ音量の変化が無いってのも少しきになりました。
litoluna
1,074 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna

P o M u T a wrote:

こんにちは。(m;_ _)mﾍﾟｺ　

[litoluna's Easy]
  1. 01:50:932 (3) - (x:38 y:298)に移動。もう少し(2)を綺麗に囲むような場所に移動させてあげると良いと思いました。
    :arrow:okです！
thanks modding!!!!
tickの音量直ったみたいなので戻しました...
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

P o M u T a wrote:

こんにちは。(m;_ _)mﾍﾟｺ　


[Gazel's Hard]
  1. 01:44:537 (3) - sliderheadをSampleset Normalかadd clap。音楽聴くとdrumの音が印象にあるパートで、(4)のslider headにも付いてるんで、より良いsoundになります。 OK
Lecana
253 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lecana

Delis wrote:

satesate san ni odosareta ;w;
hiiiiii ;w;

[General]
  1. よくわかりませんが、sourceは曲名と同じでClover Day's　になると思うんですが、公式等を見る限り。この ' はsourceに入れちゃダメ～っていうアレがあるんでしたら無視してください :roll:
    :arrow: ロゴ？が'ついてなかったのですが公式見たら
    ついていたので変更しました
  2. EasyとNormalで、soft-slidertick2をclapとして使われてますが、実際殆ど聞こえませんし必要あるんでしょうか！自分の耳が弱いだけでしたらスイマセン、でもmusic:0で聞いても圧倒的に通常のclapと比べて小さいので、wavの音量を上げるとかして調節してみてください。
    :arrow: そこの判断はlitolunaさんとNaryugaさんに任せます。
  3. just a suggestion, I suggest to consistent the kiai time as other diffs in Sylith's Insane.

[Insane]
00:13:116 (2,3) - この2と3を入れ替えて、折り返しのジャンプ作ってあげたほうがここの音的にはフィットしてると個人的に思います。00:13:116 (2) - にdrum clap 付けてるのに、何もつけてない00:12:958 (1) - の下にスタックさせておくのは合わないんじゃないかと！そして00:13:432 (4,5,6,7) - これ全部選択して、00:13:432 (4,5,6) - これらを00:12:168 (3,4,5) - のところにスタックさせればいい感じに・・・！
:arrow: okです～
00:42:011 - ここの緑線、2msズレちゃってるので直しましょう！
:arrow: okです～
01:01:432 (2) - ここの頭のSampleset:Drum は何の意味があるんでしょう、どちらかというと01:00:958 (1) - これの尻尾に付けるような気がします。それと、01:01:432 - ここから3連打作ってあげませんか！強いはっきりとした音があるわけではないですが、微かに鳴ってますしフィットするんじゃないでしょうか。
:arrow: 音のほうは変更を。3連打のほうは現状keepで...
01:16:432 (1) - ここの時点でスライダーの速度を1.0に戻しちゃっていいと思います。もう既に曲調が変わってますし（そう感じたのが自分だけだったらゴメンナサイｗ）実際プレイしてみてこうしたほうが流れが良くなると思ったので！
:arrow: okです～
01:26:853 (3,4,5,6,7) - 後半の連打部分をスライダーでフォローしてますが、個人的には9連打分のstreamにしてほしかったです。両方のInsane diffでそれらしいstreamはありませんし、Short verの曲だからこそ面白くなるんじゃないかな、と思います。
:arrow: 形を配慮してこの流れなのでごめんなさい＞＜
01:36:958 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ここも..
:arrow: ^
01:29:063 (3) - 頭にclap~
01:35:695 - ここにclap付けてあげるための音取りにするのもいいんじゃないでしょうか、01:35:537 - ここにサークル追加、01:35:695 - から 01:35:853 までスライダーみたいな感じで！配置の一例も置いときます。
SPOILER
:arrow: 音聞いたらすごい爽快感ある音になりました！
配置のほうはすいませんが、tickを使わせていただきました・・・
01:36:958 (3) - clap削除、01:37:116 - 01:37:274 - 01:37:432 - にタッタッタッという感じの音がありますしそこにclap追加してみてはいかがでしょう！2個は既に付いてますが。
:arrow: okです～
01:49:590 (8) - ここの尻尾にも01:49:116 (5) - と同じヒットサウンド追加だとおもいまする
:arrow: okです～
modありがとうございました！
画像まで上げていただいてわかりやすいmodでした！
いろいろと参考になりました！

P o M u T a wrote:

こんにちは。(m;_ _)mﾍﾟｺ　
こんにちは(∩´∀｀)∩


[Insane]
  1. 00:42:011 - unsnapper green lineです。00:42:009となっていました。
    :arrow: okです～
  2. 01:37:590 - volume50%まで落としてみませんか？雰囲気的にも合うと思うし緑線結構使ってるみたいだけど、ここだけ音量の変化が無いってのも少しきになりました。
    :arrow: okです～
modありがとうございました！
確かにvolume下げたらぴったりでした(*´∀｀*)
DeletedUser_1574070
DeletedUser_1574070
sylith tsuyosugi
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
soon...
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
31 / 129